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Harada Hitomi - Anicca

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年3月4日 at 0:33:22

Artist: Harada Hitomi
Title: Anicca
Source: 機巧少女は傷つかない
Tags: Opening OP Unbreakable Machine-Doll Machine Doll wa Kizutsukanai 赤羽 雷真 Raishin Akabane 夜々 Yaya kikou shoujo IamKwan smallboat Awaken NightNine
BPM: 175
Filesize: 12987kb
Play Time: 03:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Anicca (4.75 stars, 815 notes)
  2. Awaken's Normal (2.11 stars, 299 notes)
  3. Hard (2.81 stars, 527 notes)
  4. KwaN & S.Boat's Easy (1.49 stars, 247 notes)
  5. N9 & yf's Hard (3.58 stars, 620 notes)
Download: Harada Hitomi - Anicca
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~ 機巧少女は傷つかない Opening ~
Mapset:
Here is Chordzi's version
Collab Easy by IamKwaN & smallboat
Normal by Awaken
Collab Hard by NightNine & me
Anicca by me

Skin by examination

the TV size ver I have ever done: download here
Really sorry to [_Crystal] YoshinoSakura and Awaken.
YoshinoSakura
带感
动次打次动次打次
Chordzi
音质太好 不能多书
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adistyle wrote:

音质太好 不能多书
自己从320K fullver里截的
FastBoy
I hope you like and use it!
Code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 01. Anicca.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52748
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 2742
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Anicca (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Anicca (TV size)
Artist:Harada Hitomi
ArtistUnicode:原田 ひとみ
Creator:yf_bmp
Version:helpfulgod's Oni
Source:Machine Doll wa Kizutsukanai
Tags:opening 機巧少女は傷つかない 赤羽 雷真 Raishin Akabane 夜々 Yaya yf_bmp ts8zs
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:8
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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smallboat
Hi,yf_bpm,In-game PM req.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.combo顏色,百姐跟ins diff 不一樣,改回去。
2.Letterbox有些可取消,因為沒breaktime。
3.Stack Leniency 怎麼百姐的diff跟ins都是調4? 改回來吧?
4.整體音效略為小聲,有點表達不太出來,我提供一個音效,看你要不要,感覺蠻適合:http://puu.sh/5I5sq.wav

[Awaken's Easy]

00:41:948 (1) - 感覺這邊finish太小聲了,加個10%?

[Normal] NM不是都同距的? 有些間距感覺怪怪..指出一些就好。

00:01:491 (2,3) - 這兩個節奏對調一下比較適合,ctrl+G + 微調一下。
00:05:605 (4) - 間距
00:06:805 (2,3) - 試試全都 + whistle看看?
00:06:805 (2) - 間距
00:08:176 (4) - 前兩個 +whistle
00:09:034 (1) - 間距,後面確定這樣放? 感覺有點空呢。
00:41:262 (5) - 開頭+個whistle,跟前面相對應。
00:52:062 (3) - 移到前面白線比較適合節奏,試試。

[Hard]

00:01:148 (2) - 白線不放嗎? 這邊也有人聲呢。
00:09:719 (2) - 要不要疊在3上與00:10:405 (4,5) 一樣? 似乎比較有趣點。
00:21:205 (4) - 大白線應該要在滑條頭,而不是尾。
00:41:605 (5) - 開頭finish?
01:14:348 (7) - 很明顯的與(1)比較,這速度慢了些,所以這邊變速要用NC。
01:27:376 (1) - 有點蠻坑的感覺和有莫名的停頓感,放到(440|44)試試?

[Insane] Aimod這邊一大排都錯誤,修正吧 http://puu.sh/5I5kJ.jpg

00:44:355 (5) - 變速NC?
01:14:360 (7) - ^

這難度反而沒什可挑..

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
Awaken

smallboat wrote:

Hi,yf_bpm,In-game PM req.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.combo顏色,百姐跟ins diff 不一樣,改回去。
2.Letterbox有些可取消,因為沒breaktime。
3.Stack Leniency 怎麼百姐的diff跟ins都是調4? 改回來吧?
4.整體音效略為小聲,有點表達不太出來,我提供一個音效,看你要不要,感覺蠻適合:http://puu.sh/5I5sq.wav

[Awaken's Easy]

00:41:948 (1) - 感覺這邊finish太小聲了,加個10%? 搞了搞好像差不多
general你改了的话帮我也一起改了吧
Topic Starter
yf_bmp

smallboat wrote:

Hi,yf_bpm,In-game PM req.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.combo顏色,百姐跟ins diff 不一樣,改回去。
2.Letterbox有些可取消,因為沒breaktime。
3.Stack Leniency 怎麼百姐的diff跟ins都是調4? 改回來吧?
4.整體音效略為小聲,有點表達不太出來,我提供一個音效,看你要不要,感覺蠻適合:http://puu.sh/5I5sq.wav

[Awaken's Easy]

00:41:948 (1) - 感覺這邊finish太小聲了,加個10%?

[Normal] NM不是都同距的? 有些間距感覺怪怪..指出一些就好。

00:01:491 (2,3) - 這兩個節奏對調一下比較適合,ctrl+G + 微調一下。 Fixed
00:05:605 (4) - 間距 故意的
00:06:805 (2,3) - 試試全都 + whistle看看? Fixed
00:06:805 (2) - 間距 故意的
00:08:176 (4) - 前兩個 +whistle Fixed
00:09:034 (1) - 間距,後面確定這樣放? 感覺有點空呢。 后面Fixed
00:41:262 (5) - 開頭+個whistle,跟前面相對應。 Fixed
00:52:062 (3) - 移到前面白線比較適合節奏,試試。 Fixed

[Hard]

00:01:148 (2) - 白線不放嗎? 這邊也有人聲呢。 Fixed
00:09:719 (2) - 要不要疊在3上與00:10:405 (4,5) 一樣? 似乎比較有趣點。 不..
00:21:205 (4) - 大白線應該要在滑條頭,而不是尾。 关系不大
00:41:605 (5) - 開頭finish? 不..
01:14:348 (7) - 很明顯的與(1)比較,這速度慢了些,所以這邊變速要用NC。 Fixed
01:27:376 (1) - 有點蠻坑的感覺和有莫名的停頓感,放到(440|44)試試? Fixed

[Insane] Aimod這邊一大排都錯誤,修正吧 http://puu.sh/5I5kJ.jpg Fixed

00:44:355 (5) - 變速NC? 小变速 算了..
01:14:360 (7) - ^ 小变速 算了..

這難度反而沒什可挑..

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
YoshinoSakura
bubbled
能带我个i 吗
Crystal
;w;

[Awaken's Easy]
00:39:205 (1) - 不怎么好看 有点挤
01:10:748 (2) - 对歪了吧

百姐姐的ez不能多书

[Normal]
00:04:405 - 加个circle
00:12:462 (2,3,4,5) - 不好看 听起来也比较奇怪 在00:13:662加一个circle或者slider
00:21:548 (4) - 被2遮住了
00:29:605 (1,2,3,4) - 就用 00:28:234 (1,2) 的节奏就可以
00:33:205 (6) - 试试这样
00:35:605 (4,5,1) - 排列有点乱
01:15:376 (1) - 如果要这么下音的话 和6分开一点
01:17:776 (1) - 结束在 01:20:605

柑橘这个normal需要大改一下;w;

[Hard]
00:01:662 (5) - 为什么在这里开始?听起来很怪
00:08:176 (3,4,5,6) - 看起来像一个团..不好看
00:32:176 (1) - 跳的有点远?
01:03:548 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 这种串对于Hard是不是有点难了?
01:06:376 (5) - ;w;.. 不管是形状还是压音都比较莫名..
01:09:034 (3) - 删掉这个 然后调整一下前面的排列

[Insane]
00:01:662 (5) - 同Hard
00:08:691 (5) - 平一点吧?
01:24:462 (1,2,3,4) - 有点杂, 建议改成2分
01:28:148 (1) - 结束在 01:29:646 ?

这个ins太赞


另外这里是我的Hard 考试前用了3天做的给加上吧;w;

Crystal's Hard
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52748
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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Title:Anicca (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Anicca (TV size)
Artist:Harada Hitomi
ArtistUnicode:原田ひとみ
Creator:yf_bmp
Version:Crystal's Hard
Source:Machine Doll wa Kizutsukanai
Tags:機巧少女は傷つかない 赤羽 雷真 Raishin Akabane 夜々 Yaya Awaken
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kamisamaaa
mod来的有点晚额 都是一些小意见
[insane]
00:01:834 无论是鼓点还是歌声这里感觉都不应该空啊 感觉改成一个单点和一个短滑条节奏更合适
00:05:091 从这里开始和后面连着的三声是四个一组吧 这里是第一声 感觉用滑条尾部带过去不是很合适额
00:39:205 (3) - 感觉这里这个音放个反向梗更合适一些 并且00:39:548 (4) - 这个感觉应该和3用对称的两个短滑条 然后结尾那个强音用一个note 主要是从打击感的方面考虑感觉更好一些额
00:48:634 (5) - 同样 这么强的两个音 两个距离远一些的note比一个滑条合适
[hard]
00:01:319 (4) - 这个一开始节奏就感觉很奇怪
00:50:176 (1,2) - 这两个感觉flow不太好额
[normal]
遮挡和重叠好多。。。会不会有点太难了额 别的倒是没啥问题
00:20:519 (2,4) - 像这种遮挡感觉有点难额


中间你可能有更新我不太清楚额 家里网有问题 基本啥都打不开 非常抱歉额。。。
Topic Starter
yf_bmp

[_Crystal] wrote:

;w;

[Awaken's Easy]
00:39:205 (1) - 不怎么好看 有点挤
01:10:748 (2) - 对歪了吧

百姐姐的ez不能多书

[Normal]
00:04:405 - 加个circle X
00:12:462 (2,3,4,5) - 不好看 听起来也比较奇怪 在00:13:662加一个circle或者slider 稍微改了下
00:21:548 (4) - 被2遮住了 fixed
00:29:605 (1,2,3,4) - 就用 00:28:234 (1,2) 的节奏就可以 X
00:33:205 (6) - 试试这样 fixed
00:35:605 (4,5,1) - 排列有点乱 fixed
01:15:376 (1) - 如果要这么下音的话 和6分开一点 X
01:17:776 (1) - 结束在 01:20:605 fixed

柑橘这个normal需要大改一下;w;

[Hard]
00:01:662 (5) - 为什么在这里开始?听起来很怪 BGM
00:08:176 (3,4,5,6) - 看起来像一个团..不好看 X
00:32:176 (1) - 跳的有点远? X
01:03:548 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 这种串对于Hard是不是有点难了? fixed
01:06:376 (5) - ;w;.. 不管是形状还是压音都比较莫名.. X 还好
01:09:034 (3) - 删掉这个 然后调整一下前面的排列 X

[Insane]
00:01:662 (5) - 同Hard X
00:08:691 (5) - 平一点吧? fixed
01:24:462 (1,2,3,4) - 有点杂, 建议改成2分 X
01:28:148 (1) - 结束在 01:29:646 ? 延后了点

这个ins太赞

另外这里是我的Hard 考试前用了3天做的给加上吧;w; 已加

kamisamaaa wrote:

mod来的有点晚额 都是一些小意见
[insane]
00:01:834 无论是鼓点还是歌声这里感觉都不应该空啊 感觉改成一个单点和一个短滑条节奏更合适 先保留
00:05:091 从这里开始和后面连着的三声是四个一组吧 这里是第一声 感觉用滑条尾部带过去不是很合适额 X
00:39:205 (3) - 感觉这里这个音放个反向梗更合适一些 并且00:39:548 (4) - 这个感觉应该和3用对称的两个短滑条 然后结尾那个强音用一个note 主要是从打击感的方面考虑感觉更好一些额 这部分改了下
00:48:634 (5) - 同样 这么强的两个音 两个距离远一些的note比一个滑条合适 X
[hard]
00:01:319 (4) - 这个一开始节奏就感觉很奇怪 跟bgm
00:50:176 (1,2) - 这两个感觉flow不太好额 还好
[normal]
遮挡和重叠好多。。。会不会有点太难了额 别的倒是没啥问题 改了一些
00:20:519 (2,4) - 像这种遮挡感觉有点难额 上面改了


中间你可能有更新我不太清楚额 家里网有问题 基本啥都打不开 非常抱歉额。。。 没事 上周不在家
Narcissu
没看过机巧少女……游戏王倒是用过某个卡组叫机巧XD

黑头发的看上去挺萌的~~

[insane]


变速太坑惹……所有的0.5*都用同一个颜色吧,然后其他的部分都跳过那个颜色,虽然我打图从来不看颜色XD……话说很多跳过了粉色是为什么?

这个排版风格和我……相差甚远不好多说%……&……

01:08:005 (2) - 感觉放五角中间舒服点……

01:06:291 (1) - 读成ctrl+g的版本然后断了……是不是我奇葩?……(捂脸

mod不出什么额……

[Crystal's Hard]


虽然打的很舒服……

看得出你想保持整洁的版面……不过貌似做的不太好……很多地方可以换个走向,比如00:02:005 (4) - ……完全可以放右边然后上去然后去左边……不过走向问题要改就基本remap了还是算了……用AR=0排版是保持整洁的利器

那个叫啥?包起来的那个梗的英文是啥?算了……如果不是故意不包好的话我觉得00:36:976 (3,4) - 是可以包的好一点的

00:12:634 (2,4) - 这个覆盖要么多出现几次……要么一次也不要出现……

00:30:891 (7) - 估计会被有强迫症的人指出来说距离不一样……咦?好像我已经指出来了XD

01:14:348 - 变速改0.85……缓冲一下……幸好下一个物件近不然我的SS就美丽

01:25:148 (5) - 全图最难的地方……设置的无法理解……我可以说断在这里的人心里都不好受

目测这个难度需要更多的mod……

[hard]


个人感觉是因为先打的insane已经适应这个版面风格的结果……

我觉得00:01:319 (4,5) - 这样的微小覆盖都可以取缔……

00:57:719 (4) - 直接按滑条中间貌似是可以的?

01:15:376 (1,2,3,4,5) - 肉眼可见的不标准……↓↓↓……


[normal]

normal用叠的话貌似不太适合?4.5的normal大概没关系吧……

好像有全局DS固定的规定……我不知道00:16:405 (4) - 的prev1.1还有那些0.7的滑条接滑条行不行……

[easy]

DS用1.2看上去比较舒服

排列……可以的话easy减少使用00:29:948 (2) - 一类的掉头……好像有点多

祝早日rank……
Crystal

zengdaen wrote:

[Crystal's Hard]


虽然打的很舒服…… o.o

看得出你想保持整洁的版面……不过貌似做的不太好……很多地方可以换个走向,比如00:02:005 (4) - ……完全可以放右边然后上去然后去左边……不过走向问题要改就基本remap了还是算了……用AR=0排版是保持整洁的利器 ;w;我还是不够有经验 以后就用AR0来作图
那个叫啥?包起来的那个梗的英文是啥?叫blanket算了……如果不是故意不包好的话我觉得00:36:976 (3,4) - 是可以包的好一点的 fixed

00:12:634 (2,4) - 这个覆盖要么多出现几次……要么一次也不要出现…… 嗯..

00:30:891 (7) - 估计会被有强迫症的人指出来说距离不一样……咦?好像我已经指出来了XD QAQ窝太粗心了

01:14:348 - 变速改0.85……缓冲一下……幸好下一个物件近不然我的SS就美丽 嗯..间距改了

01:25:148 (5) - 全图最难的地方……设置的无法理解……我可以说断在这里的人心里都不好受 圈圈改了位置

目测这个难度需要更多的mod…… 谢谢
谢谢你xD
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188,240,20691,2,0,P|147:233|110:220,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,132,21034,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,212,21205,2,0,P|48:280|124:312,1,140
200,340,21719,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,312,21891,2,0,P|355:278|369:211,1,140
436,140,22405,2,0,L|424:56,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,52,22748,6,0,L|340:136,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,164,23091,2,0,L|236:80,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,23434,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,100,23605,2,0,B|144:144|40:176|104:224,1,140
184,276,24119,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,252,24291,2,0,P|352:240|384:168,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,104,24805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,44,24976,2,0,L|196:44,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,112,25491,6,0,P|144:160|152:188,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,220,25834,2,0,P|246:185|241:151,2,70,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,296,26348,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,348,26519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,296,26691,2,0,P|120:280|32:312,1,140
124,164,27205,2,0,L|28:176,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,80,27548,2,0,L|312:68,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,104,27891,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,288,28234,22,0,P|380:312|316:288,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,36,28919,2,0,B|108:100|108:100|128:108|128:108|124:188,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,162,29605,2,0,B|384:108|384:108|404:100|404:100|400:36,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,64,30119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,40,30291,2,0,B|220:104|220:104|240:112|240:112|236:192,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,248,30805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
221,271,30891,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,294,30976,6,0,P|174:306|130:278,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,248,31319,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,152,31491,2,0,B|56:84|56:84|72:80|72:80|84:24,1,140
164,84,32005,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,44,32176,2,2,P|312:40|408:48,1,140
448,232,32862,2,0,P|388:236|292:228,1,140
216,196,33376,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,196,33719,6,0,P|204:252|192:276,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,200,34062,2,0,P|112:144|100:120,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,64,34405,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,28,34576,2,0,P|328:32|380:88,1,140
404,184,35091,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,276,35262,2,0,B|316:276|316:276|300:288|300:288|232:288,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,272,35776,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,208,35948,2,0,P|56:148|80:60,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,32,36462,5,2,0:0:0:0:
224,108,36634,2,0,P|264:156|292:172,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,184,36976,2,0,P|428:156|488:192,1,140
424,240,37491,2,0,L|424:316,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,328,37834,2,0,L|300:256,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,220,38176,2,0,L|156:272,2,70,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,92,38862,5,8,0:0:0:0:
136,36,39034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,84,39205,2,2,P|280:96|364:64,1,140
456,240,39891,2,2,B|456:288|476:308|476:308|432:296|408:328,1,140
216,316,40576,2,2,B|197:290|153:302|153:302|173:282|173:234,1,140
164,136,41091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,44,41262,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,44,41605,21,8,0:0:0:0:
320,100,41948,6,0,P|368:108|460:76,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
453,80,42462,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,248,42805,2,0,P|304:240|212:272,1,140
148,332,43319,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,292,43491,2,0,L|48:140,1,140
92,64,44005,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,116,44176,2,0,P|244:132|312:116,1,140
336,100,44605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,80,44691,6,0,L|400:156,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,236,45034,2,0,P|400:292|384:320,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,364,45376,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,308,45548,2,0,L|224:236,2,70
60,220,46234,2,0,B|44:188|44:188|56:152,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,80,46576,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,36,46748,2,0,P|276:24|372:48,2,140,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,128,47605,6,0,P|280:124|312:132,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,224,47948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,324,48291,2,2,B|96:276|68:264|68:264|104:240|84:192,1,140
64,112,48805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,140,48976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,64,49319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,110,49491,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,160,49662,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,160,50176,6,0,P|372:216|360:252,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,300,50519,2,0,P|276:256|288:216,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,156,50862,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,236,51034,2,0,P|168:280|156:320,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,356,51376,2,0,B|68:304|88:272|88:272|64:228|80:176|128:160,1,210
304,124,52234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,124,52576,6,0,P|320:208|284:256,1,146.999995513916,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,268,52919,5,4,0:0:0:0:
164,296,53091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,256,53262,2,0,P|56:316|64:340,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,172,53605,2,2,L|148:32,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,88,54119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,48,54291,2,0,P|380:36|424:44,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,108,54634,2,2,B|460:172|460:172|452:184|452:184|456:252,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,344,55148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,316,55319,2,0,P|328:308|296:316,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,332,55662,5,2,0:0:0:0:
120,300,55834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,220,56005,2,0,B|48:180|48:180|60:128,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,76,56348,2,2,P|160:64|264:84,1,140,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,168,56862,2,0,B|368:176|368:176|352:168|352:168|284:180,1,140
196,168,57376,2,2,P|200:228|292:264,2,140,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,80,58234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,44,58405,5,2,0:0:0:0:
420,72,58576,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,164,58748,2,0,P|464:212|456:248,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,312,59091,2,2,P|352:324|292:264,1,140,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,208,59605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,232,59776,2,0,L|76:372,2,140,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,136,60634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,56,60805,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,56,61148,5,2,0:0:0:0:
236,104,61319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,56,61491,2,0,P|392:48|420:52,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,112,61834,1,2,0:0:0:0:
343,96,62006,2,0,P|409:111|434:125,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,62348,2,0,B|448:272|448:272|424:240|380:268,1,140
300,284,62862,2,0,L|256:292,3,35
216,296,63205,2,2,L|168:304,3,35
144,296,63548,22,0,P|112:240|124:128,1,146.999995513916,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,132,63891,5,4,0:0:0:0:
184,56,64062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,88,64234,2,0,P|300:140|324:164,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,180,64576,2,2,P|456:168|460:72,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,24,65091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,296,65434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,296,65605,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,268,65948,2,0,P|84:240|72:184,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,66291,6,0,P|150:154|163:186,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,240,66634,2,2,B|304:208|304:208|312:188|312:188|380:152,1,140
440,136,67148,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,332,67491,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,256,67834,2,2,B|112:228|116:200|140:176|140:176|132:124,1,140
160,36,68348,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,76,68519,2,0,L|264:148,1,70
380,332,69034,6,0,P|324:336|304:324,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,276,69376,2,0,B|220:216|220:216|224:200|224:200|212:132,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,68,69891,2,2,P|96:48|56:48,1,70
44,136,70234,2,0,P|75:151|109:157,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,148,70576,2,2,P|380:132|436:48,1,140
427,78,71091,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,272,71434,6,0,L|416:360,1,70
300,228,71776,2,0,L|308:308,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,72119,2,0,P|196:228|124:220,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,160,72634,2,0,B|60:92|60:92|84:80|84:80|92:24,1,140
188,52,73148,2,0,P|232:60|260:56,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,36,73491,5,2,0:0:0:0:
444,68,73662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,68,74005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,148,74176,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,236,74348,6,0,B|432:272|432:272|444:280|444:280|452:312,1,83.9999974365235
360,348,74862,2,0,P|312:344|272:328,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,272,75376,2,0,P|192:316|156:348,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,284,76062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,208,76405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,184,76748,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,112,77091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,112,77605,5,4,0:0:0:0:
248,88,77776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,152,77948,2,0,P|424:196|384:272,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,336,78462,2,2,B|260:332|260:332|248:344|248:344|184:340,1,140
100,296,78976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,204,79148,6,2,P|64:140|104:56,1,140
152,148,79662,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,72,79834,2,2,P|243:135|239:205,1,140
180,284,80348,2,0,L|96:296,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,340,80691,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,340,81034,5,8,0:0:0:0:
344,292,81205,2,2,L|364:120,1,140
424,80,81719,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,40,81891,2,2,P|272:32|248:40,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,132,82234,2,2,P|184:145|165:160,1,70
204,244,82576,2,2,P|152:276|139:297,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,356,82919,2,0,P|48:308|68:228,1,140
124,156,83434,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,156,83776,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,108,83948,2,2,B|280:92|280:92|348:108,1,140
408,180,84462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,248,84634,2,2,P|320:292|392:340,1,140
384,341,85148,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,344,85319,2,2,B|192:320|144:360|84:324,1,140
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224,152,86519,21,8,0:0:0:0:
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252,324,87891,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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ts8zs
偶尔手贱一下为啥会有我名字……需要我给你diff么@大召唤术= =b
remove ts8zs in tag,kd please
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yf_bmp

ts8zs wrote:

偶尔手贱一下为啥会有我名字……需要我给你diff么@大召唤术= =b
remove ts8zs in tag,kd please
shouchoule
ts8zs

yf_bmp wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

偶尔手贱一下为啥会有我名字……需要我给你diff么@大召唤术= =b
remove ts8zs in tag,kd please
shouchoule
切~~( ﹁ ﹁ ) ~~~这算被拒了么
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yf_bmp

ts8zs wrote:

切~~( ﹁ ﹁ ) ~~~这算被拒了么
Diff满了……除非collab hard有可能
IamKwaN
來支持我的後宮 \:D/
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yf_bmp

IamKwaN wrote:

來支持我的後宮 \:D/
\:D/
ZZHBOY
你好久没更新了啊
我看了看ez
则呢音效没加好
简单说说吧
00:51:380 (2,3) - 没blanket好
02:09:723 (5) - 应该在这里nc吧
02:14:866 (1) - 不如在缩短到长白线停还好一些
02:33:209 (4,5,1,2,3,1,2) - 为什么不把ez弄简单清爽点还搞这么一大坨 都要赶上normal啦
02:45:380 (5) - 忘nc了?
03:07:323 (5) - 应该这里nc吧
03:15:551 (1) - 这谁的part啊偷懒?
美丽 爱抚哥哥快快rank啊 我都即可难耐了啊
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yf_bmp
ZZH:忘记wip了 hard还没完成 等G♂D....
FastBoy
N9's Hard:

01:54:465 (1) - 好像弄短了1個16分音,聽下去怪怪的OAO

這是我第一次mod人家的beatmap OAO,我只發現這個問題,mod錯了請見諒OAO

啊!還有你介不介意我幫你弄1個difficulty?我想幫幫忙OAO
Sellenite
ZZHBOY
什么时候带我rank啊
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Chloe
one diff requested

00:01:151 (3) - 你这里没有五角就算了 至少 00:01:151 (3,1,2) - 这3个组成正三角如何 不过NAZI 无所谓了
00:01:151 (3,1,2) - FLOW不太好 http://puu.sh/8PUub.jpg 建议这样放
00:08:523 (1,2,3) - 丑 不要OVERLAP吧 http://puu.sh/8PUxC.jpg
00:09:894 (1,3,5) - 这3个可以根据音乐逐渐加速
00:13:494 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个应该是一组梗 而你做成3+1 3+1就算了 你这个3角还不是很好看 也不好打 直线1/4 SLIDER一般都用来走位 而你这个显然是用来FLOW 弯了以后显然好看 比如http://puu.sh/8PUIX.jpg 当然具体这边怎么处理还是看你
00:14:523 (1,2) - 有点远 容易断 建议近点http://puu.sh/8PUPb.jpg 并且滑条可以适当的朝上弯一点
00:23:951 (1,1,1,1) - 不要SPAM啊 OVERLAP都是可读 要是烤老板像你这样用NC 他的图就爆了 而且你这里节奏应该和00:21:209 (5,1,2,3,1,2) - 保持一致 建议以后作图想同节奏的地方每两小节保持一致
00:30:809 (3,4) - add 既和前面保持了用梗的相似 又成功的走位增加了节奏的丰满和全图的可玩性
00:36:294 - 没看到不下节奏的理由 典型的空拍不当
00:41:609 (1) - 间距啊啥的都没变 为何4个NOTE就NC 毫无意义
00:43:151 (2) - 应该这个NC而不是后面那个 00:43:837 (3) - 这个同
00:43:151 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这2组排列的整齐一点啊 详见泡泡的图 而且这2组应该用完全一致的排列啊
00:59:609 (3) - 这个是FLOW流 建议包住下面那个滑条 说起FLOW和走位的1/4 该如何分辨 我觉得是这样的 走位的间距一般不会太远 FLOW流就可能每组之间比较远 而且一般1/4都是对准了方向
01:02:180 (1) - 这个是FLOW流 建议弯一点 现在这样 十分之丑http://puu.sh/8PVk9.jpg
01:08:694 (1,2) - ^01:10:923 (2) - ^
01:03:209 (1,2,3,4) - 和前面说的一样 不要OVERLAP吧
01:06:637 (1,1) - 这俩NC不需要 01:11:780 (1) - yiyang

新人图痕迹明显 想法好像不错 不过质量好像不怎么行 需要一些MOD 加油吧
Cardigan Corgi
00.41.951 滑条加速想法很好,似乎是想要模仿PULTO?前奏的加减速完美,不知道这个连打是迷惑的作用还是,或者滑条加速倍数减小或者连打间距增大打着会舒服一些?
01.44.351 折返必要?此图最大爽点就是直线小滑条加大跳急速快感,折返会让人戛然而止,反正我感觉蹩脚。
02.55.323 这几个NC?另外还有很多地方一个一个的NC。个人而言不是很喜欢,NC是帮助分组读图,过多可能会带来困扰?

总之,此图巨爽,希望能够RANK,排列不拘小节,但无伤大雅!

另外星星得了KD再给。。
:) :)
Sellenite

Chloe wrote:

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00:01:151 (3) - 你这里没有五角就算了 至少 00:01:151 (3,1,2) - 这3个组成正三角如何 不过NAZI 无所谓了 重摆
00:01:151 (3,1,2) - FLOW不太好 http://puu.sh/8PUub.jpg 建议这样放 ^
00:08:523 (1,2,3) - 丑 不要OVERLAP吧 http://puu.sh/8PUxC.jpg
00:09:894 (1,3,5) - 这3个可以根据音乐逐渐加速 后面加速就算了,这个长滑条加速有点太长
00:13:494 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个应该是一组梗 而你做成3+1 3+1就算了 你这个3角还不是很好看 也不好打 直线1/4 SLIDER一般都用来走位 而你这个显然是用来FLOW 弯了以后显然好看 比如http://puu.sh/8PUIX.jpg 当然具体这边怎么处理还是看你 重摆
00:14:523 (1,2) - 有点远 容易断 建议近点http://puu.sh/8PUPb.jpg 并且滑条可以适当的朝上弯一点 ^
00:23:951 (1,1,1,1) - 不要SPAM啊 OVERLAP都是可读 要是烤老板像你这样用NC 他的图就爆了 而且你这里节奏应该和 spam是啥?不明白这句什么意思...O.O 00:21:209 (5,1,2,3,1,2) - 保持一致 建议以后作图想同节奏的地方每两小节保持一致
00:30:809 (3,4) - add 既和前面保持了用梗的相似 又成功的走位增加了节奏的丰满和全图的可玩性 也是不知道什么意思...
00:36:294 - 没看到不下节奏的理由 典型的空拍不当 前面我没有空拍,后面打算空拍休息一下
00:41:609 (1) - 间距啊啥的都没变 为何4个NOTE就NC 毫无意义 这里换了音效和降音,所以四个NC
00:43:151 (2) - 应该这个NC而不是后面那个 00:43:837 (3) - 这个同 fix
00:43:151 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这2组排列的整齐一点啊 详见泡泡的图 而且这2组应该用完全一致的排列啊 怎么整齐..我没抄泡泡的啊O.O
00:59:609 (3) - 这个是FLOW流 建议包住下面那个滑条 说起FLOW和走位的1/4 该如何分辨 我觉得是这样的 走位的间距一般不会太远 FLOW流就可能每组之间比较远 而且一般1/4都是对准了方向 唔其实我这里是overmap..那个滑条实在太短了所以一弯之后老跳大直线滑条会很怪
01:02:180 (1) - 这个是FLOW流 建议弯一点 现在这样 十分之丑http://puu.sh/8PVk9.jpg 改了一下
01:08:694 (1,2) - ^01:10:923 (2) - ^ 重摆了一下,但好像都是直的
01:03:209 (1,2,3,4) - 和前面说的一样 不要OVERLAP吧 这个我想保持这样试试
01:06:637 (1,1) - 这俩NC不需要 01:11:780 (1) - yiyang fix

新人图痕迹明显 想法好像不错 不过质量好像不怎么行 需要一些MOD 加油吧 好,应该是需要很多篇论文 :(
Sellenite

pupil zone wrote:

00.41.951 滑条加速想法很好,似乎是想要模仿PULTO?前奏的加减速完美,不知道这个连打是迷惑的作用还是,或者滑条加速倍数减小或者连打间距增大打着会舒服一些?间距增大会比较难,不想再提高难度了...
01.44.351 折返必要?此图最大爽点就是直线小滑条加大跳急速快感,折返会让人戛然而止,反正我感觉蹩脚。换成连个滑条
02.55.323 这几个NC?另外还有很多地方一个一个的NC。个人而言不是很喜欢,NC是帮助分组读图,过多可能会带来困扰?这个想保持一下
Thanks :)

Yaya
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lgdry15
Hi, 来自m4m queue, 爱抚! :)

你的图实在是好赞啊,果然是我的前辈……

嗯……开始吧!

[General]

虽然不知道为什么,但是 Natsu 曾对我说过,每个难度的combo color如果没有特殊目的应该是完全相同的……
(额……如果你觉得这条很没用就无视掉好了……)

[Insane]

HP7 OD7 我觉会更好……
图中有很多滑条突然变速了,也许是为了增加挑战性?但至少对我来说降低了游戏体验…… :lol:
00:27:551 (7,1) - 两个滑条重合啦!我觉得这有点坑爹…… 让我们分清这是两个滑条就好……
01:03:551 (1) - NC了…… 我觉得一串连击是一个整体,最好不要出现NC,除非有什么特殊目的……
01:18:466 (2,3) - 重合的滑条……
01:28:580 ~ 01:39:209 - 我觉得这段节奏也很好啊,可以不用加Break Time,可以做得简单一点让玩家放松放松。
02:03:894 (10) - 可换成连击,就像这样:http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJ6Xhft
02:12:123 (1) - NC……
02:20:009 (8) - 这个音有点多余,可以删掉……
03:52:409 (5,1) - 之间加连击! :) http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jGFUOQE

啊,整体上来说,还是超级赞的,加油! :)

[N9 & yf's Hard]

整体来讲很符合我的水平,非常喜欢! :)

02:14:866 (4,5) - 反应不过来,像是Insane…… 换成两个圈圈就更好了
03:28:580 (5,6) - 稍微有点坑爹……5和6之间再加个圈圈就不坑爹了…… :lol:



水平有限,只能mod出这么多了……
还请前辈指教哈~ :)
lgdry15
嗨,爱抚!
给你射了一颗星哦~ :D

加油,前辈!
Topic Starter
yf_bmp
谢谢star & mod~
周末改摸
Nymph
some suggestions

[YAYA]
你自己都说overmap啦 那我就毫不犹豫的说勒

00:04:837 (2) - 像这种完全没有音啊 加2连很奇怪的

00:05:266 (1,1,1) - 其实这里虽然能玩。。但是还是很overmap啊 话说还不如把前面弄的简单点 然后再衬托中间

00:06:294 (3) - 像这种开头不如跟音乐用clap hitsound 用whistle不怎么好

00:13:494 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里急缺hitsound啊

00:15:380 (1) - 这几个还是推荐向前面一样用长slider吧 更适合一些

00:41:266 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这种连打最好摆个好看点的弧线造型 现在看着有点强迫症

00:59:609 (3) - 节奏怪怪的

大概看一下第一段啊 首先开头有点overmap太严重 到中间和kiai倒正常了...
hitsound我觉得需要更充实一些 现在还是有点略空虚了
排列梗新人感确实还很严重 最好找个时间看能不能remap下?现在的梗比较散乱 缺乏整体性
Sellenite

Nymph wrote:

some suggestions

[YAYA]
你自己都说overmap啦 那我就毫不犹豫的说勒

00:04:837 (2) - 像这种完全没有音啊 加2连很奇怪的 为后面那个准备的

00:05:266 (1,1,1) - 其实这里虽然能玩。。但是还是很overmap啊 话说还不如把前面弄的简单点 然后再衬托中间 这里其实是有音的

00:06:294 (3) - 像这种开头不如跟音乐用clap hitsound 用whistle不怎么好

00:13:494 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里急缺hitsound啊

00:15:380 (1) - 这几个还是推荐向前面一样用长slider吧 更适合一些 不想有重复的节奏

00:41:266 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 这种连打最好摆个好看点的弧线造型 现在看着有点强迫症

00:59:609 (3) - 节奏怪怪的 o

大概看一下第一段啊 首先开头有点overmap太严重 到中间和kiai倒正常了...
hitsound我觉得需要更充实一些 现在还是有点略空虚了
排列梗新人感确实还很严重 最好找个时间看能不能remap下?现在的梗比较散乱 缺乏整体性
由于这难度是我看了insane了以后,觉得有很多地方都能下物件,节奏能更加丰富,所以才这么弄。虽然已经删了一部分了,但应该还是救不了这diff,大量的overmap和抄了一个图的创意,可能会造成这个图很offensive,从而rank不了,而且这个ins已经足够好了,而我的被别人喷shit map了,想了想我还是在这里放弃这diff

有些地方我会remap和hitsound重新下一遍,虽然我排列的确不好,但我个人来说还是挺喜欢我做出来这个的,我不会放弃对这图的修改,但rank不rank就是另一回事了。在这里谢谢爱抚和摸这图的人了,我喜欢这首歌,希望这个能rank

Yaya is beautiful
-[Hikari]-
m4m

[N9 & yf's Hard]

  • 00:30:294 (5,6,7) - 三角形不漂亮,7往外拉点
    00:38:866 (4,5,6) - stack试试,现在的6感觉有点怪
    01:36:123 (7) - 间距太大,试试stack 4的末尾
    01:45:037 (1,5) - 往上拉点,现在碰到2和4有点丑
    01:50:523 (1,2,3,4) - 2和3间距加大地太突然
    02:02:694 (1) - 不好看
    02:05:437 (1) - ^
    02:28:237 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这串是跟的颤音吧?再加两个note到红线吧,那里才是颤音结束的地方
    02:39:551 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 4和2 stack,3做个blanket,试试这样
    02:41:951 (3) - 这个间距有点大
    02:43:666 (5) - blanket 4的尾,试试这样
    02:52:237 - 02:53:523 - 加个转盘,之前一个在前一根蓝线结束
    02:54:980 - 02:57:723 - ^
    03:10:409 (3,4) - 向右移大约30像素点试试
    03:14:866 (5,6) - 在时间轴上这样改一下
    03:40:580 (2) - 摆歪了
    03:51:894 (3) - stack 1的尾
    03:52:923 (2) - Ctrl+G
渣摸……柑橘会不会一半以上都是没用的呢;w;
Mafumafu
Hi, yf! :)
------------------------------

[ZZH]
00:22:237 (5,1) - 5的方向,新手会按反的
00:24:294 (3) - 这个间距怎么回事
00:40:580 (3) - 这个间距怎么回事
00:32:351 (3,4) - blanket再修一下
00:47:437 (1,2,3) - 00:48:809 (4,5,6) - 这地方的1/2违和感较大,只有这里没跟vocal啊,为什么不跟呢。
01:23:094 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这里的1/2也是
01:44:351 (5,6,1) - 5→6→1的角度太小,Normal的话破坏flow,建议做成正三角形。
01:50:180 (1) - 为啥NC了,Normal别单独搞NC啊
02:07:666 (2,3,4) - 包一下
03:28:923 (6,1) - 包好
[Hard]
http://puu.sh/aeFTz/1c33ccfc05.png
00:06:294 (2,6) - 不包上?
00:33:723 (10,11,1) - 这个三连打起来好蛋疼,存在感有点低啊
00:35:951 (7) - 前面空或者后面空,两头都空感觉不太好
01:05:094 (1) - 上一段都没NC,这里NC了,建议保持一致【其实我建议把前面的NC加上因为前面NC略长
02:34:237 (4,5,6,1) - 稍微包一下?
02:43:666 (5) - 弯的感觉有点大
======================
美丽~
Good Luck!~ :)
ts8zs
23颜色换一下?现在的颜色是为了表示啥……?
[Hard]
00:09:894 - NC
00:33:723 (10,1) - swap NC
00:52:923 (1,2) - not same
01:07:837 (5,6,7,8) - 这啥
02:34:580 (1) - 有点挤
03:11:094 (6,1) - 不顺手
03:56:009 (3) - Ctrl+G
感觉怪怪的-________-''
OblivioN
来晚啦对不起;w;
[YAYA]
od可以+1,因为这图并不难

00:05:523 (5) - 这里我觉得还是空着吧
00:06:809 (3,4,1,2) - 这几个slider开头压红线打起来感觉挺奇怪的……
00:12:123 (2) - 个人觉得这里是重音,拉远一些比较带感,可以尝试放在x328 y80,如果这样改了记得连同00:12:466 (1) - 一起移动噢w【我自己这样换了以后感觉好多了】,不过你这样的话就有蛮多地方要改的;w;比如00:09:380 (2,1) - 这里00:14:866 (2) - 00:17:609 (2) - 00:19:494 (2) -
01:06:294 (4,5,6,7) - hmmm……感觉挺卡手的……因为要是01:05:951 (3) - 是起指,就算偶数连打了……试试把01:06:294 (4,5,6,7) - 换成两个1/4slider(是1/4么?;w;基础没学好orz)呢,又配合bgm也跟了vocal:01:09:209-觉得还是加个note好,x20 y372
02:00:466 (6) - 个人觉得和02:00:809 (1) - //挺好02:27:037 (6) - 这个……为什么要延长到02:27:294 呢?;w;在02:27:209就挺好呀
02:53:609 (1) - hw既视感/w\
03:20:351 (7) - 可以给个加速
03:56:009 (4) - 最后的这个打了几次感觉都很微妙……尝试换个方向或者直接用两个note?;w;

[NM]
01:18:294 (2,3,4) - 我觉得这样的节奏更好……:
后面的01:23:609到01:27:723也一样
01:59:951 (3) - 太奇怪了……:
02:02:694 (3) - 02:03:123这个折返音在这里太显眼了……
03:13:666 加个note吧

[EZ]
good job!

[Hard]
也漂亮得挑不出什么……qwq我没有做过hard所以……

折腾了半天就写出了这么一点对不起!!><
Edit:AudioLeadIn: 2000吧 ;w; YAYA开始的有点快了
ZZHBOY

OblivioN wrote:

[NM]
01:18:294 (2,3,4) - 我觉得这样的节奏更好……:
后面的01:23:609到01:27:723也一样
01:59:951 (3) - 太奇怪了……:
02:02:694 (3) - 02:03:123这个折返音在这里太显眼了……
03:13:666 加个note吧
哦草我那时候做的都是什么aji
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448,168,157151,38,0,L|428:300,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,300,157837,2,0,L|272:352,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,180,158523,2,0,L|332:132,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,272,159209,2,0,P|108:280|56:264,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,196,159894,5,0,0:0:0:0:
132,164,160237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,44,160580,2,0,P|208:72|244:132,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,140,161094,2,0,P|272:192|376:240,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,164,161951,2,0,P|456:112|352:64,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,48,162466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,32,162637,38,0,P|240:32|160:48,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,64,163151,2,0,P|132:136|116:256,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,320,164009,2,0,P|176:332|144:352,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,328,164694,2,0,P|400:296|456:280,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,164,165380,6,0,P|408:92|260:60,1,240,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,176,166409,2,0,P|188:192|112:312,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,192,167437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,80,167780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,28,168123,38,0,P|252:80|320:100,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,100,168637,2,0,P|432:136|488:216,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,292,169494,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,208,169837,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,316,170180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,288,170523,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,170866,12,0,177723,0:0:0:0:
432,268,190066,22,0,P|380:208|328:176,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,68,190751,2,0,P|356:28|344:4,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,139,191437,2,0,P|250:195|278:263,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,343,192123,2,0,P|247:332|206:340,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,330,192637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,298,192809,38,0,P|104:198|144:128,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,148,193666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,194009,12,0,195209,0:0:0:0:
118,55,195551,6,0,P|188:82|297:97,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,99,196409,2,0,P|336:155|323:193,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,293,197094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,309,197437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,192,197780,2,0,L|74:213,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,178,198294,22,0,P|280:127|328:50,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,42,198809,2,0,P|417:51|473:98,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,158,199494,2,0,P|307:229|299:268,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,314,200009,2,0,L|367:366,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,269,200694,21,8,0:0:0:0:
65,270,201037,22,0,P|111:179|171:148,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
54,70,201723,2,0,P|155:56|209:75,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,93,202237,2,0,P|294:135|406:147,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,91,203094,2,0,P|495:199|469:252,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,262,203609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
415,296,203780,6,0,P|332:322|266:367,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,218,204466,2,0,P|204:244|138:289,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,297,204980,2,0,P|87:227|3:164,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,117,205837,38,0,P|74:81|15:61,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,215,206866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
150,328,207209,2,0,P|254:311|292:278,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,247,207723,2,0,P|338:155|428:108,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,64,208580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,135,208923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
73,149,209266,6,0,P|92:211|164:248,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,362,209951,2,0,P|220:324|258:260,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,245,210466,2,0,P|300:204|357:185,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,184,210980,6,0,P|464:207|493:233,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,82,211666,2,0,L|266:91,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,75,212009,6,0,P|153:71|72:83,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,68,212523,2,0,L|86:151,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,229,213037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
247,259,213380,2,0,P|221:338|228:383,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,337,214409,6,0,L|399:315,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,297,214751,2,0,P|462:210|428:146,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,127,215266,2,0,P|430:91|348:63,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,188,215951,2,0,P|265:198|110:71,1,300,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,64,217151,22,0,L|291:106,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,84,217494,2,0,P|415:90|458:135,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,232,218180,2,0,P|398:278|402:306,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,164,218866,2,0,P|232:168|157:138,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,90,219551,2,0,P|111:174|98:220,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,260,220066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,303,220237,22,0,P|147:347|174:347,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,302,220751,2,0,P|243:315|294:345,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,287,221437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
390,167,221780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,75,222123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,222466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,129,222980,6,0,P|97:146|152:106,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,150,223494,2,0,P|241:191|313:272,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,346,224180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,289,224523,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,270,224866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
99,151,225209,2,0,B|135:69|135:69|243:69,1,180,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Curisu
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Collab的话sb可以写上ID?

[YAYA]
大方向
变速overuse 比起前面妮妮说的overmap我觉着这个更严重点原来是你的我唔知啊
连贯性缺乏 并且走这种图风的话blanket的精细程度还不太够
hitsound整体是略偏大声的 特别是大量的soft-hit在有些安静的段落有突兀感

细节点
00:03:037 - 空的很违和
00:05:523 (5) - remove 如果是跟那乐器的话
00:08:609 (1,2) - 这里既然sv上去了音效就要跟上 特别是后面那个缺点高打击感的hitsound
00:13:494 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这加速有点虾仁 我是觉得并没有必要
00:18:980 (7,1,2) - 从节奏上讲前面两点slider后面用两个circle会合适点 btw我觉着这开头的加速留下这个就够了 其他略overuse
00:22:237 (1) - ...这里又是为什么加速 下同
00:29:609 (1,2) - ^
00:43:494 (5,1,2) - 5放上去(slider开头)后面的note上下位置相应顺延 这里显得有停滞感
00:52:237 (1,2) - 前面remove NC;后面+NC 突出后面那个circle
00:58:066 (4,5) - vol-5~7%
01:02:866 (2) - 也觉得加速有点违和
01:11:780 (5,6,1) - 从曲子的节奏上来说6还是放中点位不放在1开头好些
01:11:951 - remove whis
01:24:294 (8,9,10) - 考虑blanket可以这样: http://puu.sh/anrZr/118afbc5c3.jpg
01:27:037 (7,8,9) - 这里和01:26:351 (3,4,5)叠在一起并不好看
02:09:380 (4,5,1) - 突然来个这样的1/4 jump不太好
02:40:409 (2,3,4) - 难读 并且不那么好看 02:40:751 (4)考虑一下换个位置
02:41:094 (1,2) - 进减速段突然来两个高sv也是虾仁
02:50:866 (1) - 球滚到红点的时间稍微有点没合上拍子
02:53:609 (1) - 好看 但是不合节奏 和上面一样
03:34:409 (4,5) - 略吵

ganbatte ;)
Topic Starter
yf_bmp
之前的yaya diff不是我的 现在去掉了后把insane改名成yaya了
mod checking
Topic Starter
yf_bmp
改了挺多的 毕竟这图也挺久了....最近想拿出来rank 但觉得有挺多地方要改的...被你一说下了决心

大改还没完 目前改到第一段kiai结束

谢谢尼惹 :)

Edit:已经上传了改完的部分
Topic Starter
yf_bmp
Yaya done.
Normal diff still need more working.
IamKwaN
EZ小船的部份太難了 弄得整個難度不平衡 能叫他改容易一點?
Topic Starter
yf_bmp
/w\ 我看看 到时候找他啦 君喵抱 最近都感觉你一直瞎跑挺久不见你了..
IamKwaN
抱抱 <3
我30號就回到家啦!
不要想念我 *w*
F D Flourite
Sorry that I come here so late~

[General]
  1. The timing in ZZH's Normal is different from other diffs according to the AIMod. Plz fix it.
[EZ]
  1. 00:09:038 (1) - 00:06:295 (1) - 00:11:780 (1) - 其实我觉得这几个开头都可以加Finish
  2. 00:24:295 (2,1) - Blanket没做好
  3. 00:25:495 (1) - 弧度比较诡异。红点前的部分过于平缓,不像弧形;后面就是弯曲过度。中间也没有明显的音乐变化导致这一弧度转折,建议把红点往下移,前后的弧度修的正常点。
  4. 00:28:238 (1) - 其实把这里Ctrl+G的话flow会好一些,但是后面就要跟着一起动。看着办吧。
  5. 00:54:123 (2) - 这个头是vocal重音,可以加whistle
  6. 01:09:380 (1) - 这个头是鼓点重音,感觉什么音效也没有显得有点空,我觉得加Finish没问题啊。
  7. 02:09:723 (5,1) - 交换NC
  8. 02:41:438 - 这个音比02:41:609 - 要重很多啊,尝试把spinner结尾提前1/2?
  9. 02:45:380 (5) - NC
  10. 02:49:666 (1,2) - 这里节奏有问题。1的slidertick音效是clap却落在红线上了。2没压到音。
  11. 03:07:323 (5) - 延长1/2拍对准音?
  12. 03:15:552 (1) - 直接用spinner盖过去?先不说这里本来音挺多的,在EZ里面转长转盘后没有休息并不友好。
  13. 03:51:209 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - 这一段压的节奏不明显OTZ,我replay了好几遍才听出来。建议换一条音轨。
  14. 03:56:180 (1) - 结尾静音。
[NM]
  1. 00:14:523 (3) - NC ?
  2. 00:28:237 (1) - 00:29:608 (2) - 能把这个Z修的前后平行么?
  3. Kiai的音效声音太小了,至少要70%吧
  4. 01:23:094 (4) - NC
  5. 01:38:180 - 把break的结束时间拉到这里
  6. 01:50:180 (1) - 去掉NC
  7. 02:59:094 - Break开始时间拉到这里
  8. Umm,整个diff的flow我不太喜欢OTZ(比如这种玩意:01:13:323 (4,5,6,7) - )
[Hard]
  1. 00:11:952 (3) - 大跳+NC
  2. 00:54:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个五边形不修修?
  3. 01:12:980 (4,1) - 距离不对劲。难读。
  4. 01:04:409 (3,1) - 修修overlap
  5. 01:52:066 (2) - 把红点往右移一点好看一些?
  6. 02:15:209 (1,2) - nazi,没包好
  7. 02:28:238 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这里的节奏不好。红线停连打本身就别扭,何况这还是overmap出来的。
  8. 02:36:809 (3,4,5) - 这里节奏不好。白线起三连打适合的情况较少,然后滑条尾部落在长白线上也不大好。重音的打击感体现不出来。
  9. 03:11:780 (2) - nazi,和03:11:266 (1) - 包好(和03:10:752 (5) - 尾部叠好)
  10. 03:27:723 (1,2,3) - 这里的白线起三连打就不好听
  11. 整个diff的flow还有可改进的地方。比如02:39:895 (3,4,5) - 看起来距离大丈夫,但是从3->4和4->5的角度就太小了,把5放在02:40:580 (6) - 的尾部打起来就要舒服一些。不过后面就要跟着改了。看着办吧。
[Yaya]
这也是个collab diff吧?
  1. 00:53:438 (3) -和00:56:009 (2) - 可以叠啊
  2. 01:04:238 (2,3,4,5) - 这个随机跳的flow不好,每次转的弯都太尖了
  3. 02:03:209 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  4. 02:09:723 (5,1) - swap NC
  5. 02:43:323 (4) - 减速NC
  6. 01:03:466 (6,1,2,3,4) - 修修弧度?
  7. 01:22:752 (6,6,8,9,10) - 移动8910干脆把10和6叠在一起做完全遮挡好看一些
  8. 01:25:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个flow也比较尴尬
  9. 02:10:752 (5,1) - 看起来没问题,打起来还是flow不舒服
  10. 03:56:009 (3) - 我以为你最后会加速……这里可以加
Good luck~ 抱歉晚来了,star~
FastBoy
[KwaN & S.Boat's Easy]

03:29:266 (5) - 為什麼不把這再延長一個8分音呢=A=
這個我不清楚,我只是聽到03:29:952處有鼓聲才這樣想

其實樓上已經mod得七七八八了
我的出現根本可以無視...
其實我真正要的是M4M...
不如就在這裡放了
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/201880
感謝~
Topic Starter
yf_bmp

F D Flourite wrote:

Sorry that I come here so late~

[General]
  1. The timing in ZZH's Normal is different from other diffs according to the AIMod. Plz fix it. OK!
[Hard]
  1. 00:11:952 (3) - 大跳+NC 算惹 一改就乱了
  2. 00:54:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个五边形不修修? 换了个方式
  3. 01:12:980 (4,1) - 距离不对劲。难读。 OK!
  4. 01:04:409 (3,1) - 修修overlap OK!
  5. 01:52:066 (2) - 把红点往右移一点好看一些?umh.. 算了
  6. 02:15:209 (1,2) - nazi,没包好 OK!
  7. 02:28:238 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这里的节奏不好。红线停连打本身就别扭,何况这还是overmap出来的。还好应该 后面接的是转盘
  8. 02:36:809 (3,4,5) - 这里节奏不好。白线起三连打适合的情况较少,然后滑条尾部落在长白线上也不大好。重音的打击感体现不出来。 OK!
  9. 03:11:780 (2) - nazi,和03:11:266 (1) - 包好(和03:10:752 (5) - 尾部叠好) OK!
  10. 03:27:723 (1,2,3) - 这里的白线起三连打就不好听 OK!
  11. 整个diff的flow还有可改进的地方。比如02:39:895 (3,4,5) - 看起来距离大丈夫,但是从3->4和4->5的角度就太小了,把5放在02:40:580 (6) - 的尾部打起来就要舒服一些。不过后面就要跟着改了。看着办吧。 大体没啥影响..要改的话基本就算是remap了吧...
[Yaya]
这也是个collab diff吧? 不是hh
  1. 00:53:438 (3) -和00:56:009 (2) - 可以叠啊 时间隔得挺长的 没必要
  2. 01:04:238 (2,3,4,5) - 这个随机跳的flow不好,每次转的弯都太尖了 钝角跳才难受啦
  3. 02:03:209 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  4. 02:09:723 (5,1) - swap NC sure
  5. 02:43:323 (4) - 减速NC 前面也减速了
  6. 01:03:466 (6,1,2,3,4) - 修修弧度?改了个方式
  7. 01:22:752 (6,6,8,9,10) - 移动8910干脆把10和6叠在一起做完全遮挡好看一些 这个..算了
  8. 01:25:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个flow也比较尴尬 还好啊qwq
  9. 02:10:752 (5,1) - 看起来没问题,打起来还是flow不舒服 ....先这样好了
  10. 03:56:009 (3) - 我以为你最后会加速……这里可以加这里换了些花样
Good luck~ 抱歉晚来了,star~ thx!
edit:
[NM]
  1. 00:14:523 (3) - NC ?
  2. 00:28:237 (1) - 00:29:608 (2) - 能把这个Z修的前后平行么? OK
  3. Kiai的音效声音太小了,至少要70%吧 kiai有所提升
  4. 01:23:094 (4) - NC OK
  5. 01:38:180 - 把break的结束时间拉到这里 OK
  6. 01:50:180 (1) - 去掉NC OK
  7. 02:59:094 - Break开始时间拉到这里 OK
  8. Umm,整个diff的flow我不太喜欢OTZ(比如这种玩意:01:13:323 (4,5,6,7) - )打包zzh
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