1. Easy (2,36 stars, 88 notes)
2. Hard (4,79 stars, 221 notes)
3. Lexia's Insane (5 stars, 236 notes)
4. Normal (3,84 stars, 114 notes)

LexiaLovesU wrote:

[Easy]

> DS set to 0,8
> HD -1
> AR -2

Major Issues
Major Issues are things that are wrong. And thus i recommend to not ignore but you still can
00:08:353 (5) - I find this too long because you have the middle white tick that hit strong and you end the slider on the next white tick that basically starts new verse and wasted the slider. > Shortened + added one circle
00:10:289 (2) - Unrankable it is under the slider > Fixed
00:23:837 (5) - more then 50% of the slider is covered by another note > Fixed
00:35:934 (2) - this is too hidden for people. when you play people wont be able to find it at first. and they will hit it too early. > Fixed
00:36:418 (3) - let 3 blanket 2 its a bit ugly as of now > Done
00:44:644 (2,3) - DS is Inconsistent in Easy DS should be consistent. > Whoops, how did this even happen? Anyway, fixed. :3
00:54:805 (5) - No hidden notes in easy > Fixed
01:03:273 - kiai time should end here > Personally, I think so, too. But that would be over 30 secs of kiai time, which is almost half the song... D:
01:07:628 (1,2,3) - no red ticks in easy. Beginners cant hit that fast yet and No stacking in Easy as well Beginners arent able to tell how fast to hit when they are stacked. > Fixed
01:10:289 (5) - DS is Inconsistent in Easy DS should be consistent. > Fixed
01:11:257 (1,2,3) - No red ticks in easy. Beginners cant hit that fast yet and No stacking in Easy as well Beginners arent able to tell how fast to hit when they are stacked. > Fixed
01:13:676 (6) - Unrankable it is under the slider > Fixed
01:15:128 (1) - There is no reason for you to go into timing section and multiple the SV not only does that sudden change in speed confuse beginners but it is also incorrect because the song emotion doesnt increase.you cant just multiple the speed of sliders for no reason. when the song like gets more strong like the song sounds like it gets louder faster that is when you increase SV. > Actually, I made that slider in normal difficulty and pasted it into the easy one, but the difference in SV ruined the timing so I thought I'd just keep the normal's SV for that. Anyway, fixed by editing the slider to match easy's SV.
01:15:128 - no kiai time here > Fixed

Suggestions
Now im gonna start to suggest things to you these can be ignored btw all of these should be applied with 0.8 DS
00:02:547 (2) - let 1 blanket this it looks better that way > Done
00:03:515 (3) - let 4 blanket this it looks better > Done
00:05:450 (6) - end this at 00:06:418 it sounds weird the way you ended it > Done
00:06:902 - if you followed above then add a circle here if you dont it would sound empty > Done
00:09:321 - if you applied to what i said in Major Issues then Add a 1/1 slider here > Done
00:10:289 (2) - if you applied above then let 2 blanket 1's tail looks great > Done
00:11:257 (3) - please tell me why this slider is so long try this instead > I thought it'd be a good idea to have some extended sliders... xD Anyway, shortened and made into a wave instead.

SPOILER

00:18:031 (2) - this is how you do wavy sliders > Thanks. :>

SPOILER

00:19:966 (4) - this is how you do twist sliders > Thanks again. :>

SPOILER

00:21:902 (3) - i find this slider a bit ugly no gameplay issues just ugly > Stretched it a bit so it looks decent now imo.
00:25:773 (3) - why is the slider like that just make it how you usually do curve sliders. it would look so much better > Actually, I have no idea. xD I think I got it now, though.
00:28:676 (1) - try this instead > Done, though I changed it a little.

SPOILER

00:33:031 - start mapping here it sounds so empty > I thought a small pause after the spinner would be appropriate for an easy diff. Added a circle there now, I guess it's okay.
00:33:515 (1,2) - try this way of blanketing > Done

SPOILER

00:39:805 (1) - try to find a different way to make that slider. right now it does not suit with the mood of the song > Done
00:44:644 (2) - this is how you do this slider properly > Thanks!

SPOILER

00:50:934 (1) - love this slider nice job >w<
00:56:741 (3,4) - first make the slider like a normal curved slider then blanket 4 this would look very pretty > Done, though I blanketed 2 instead.
00:58:192 (5) - do this instead it would look more like and expert slider > Done

SPOILER

01:06:418 (5) - make this more like a normal curved slider and blanket 4 > Done
01:12:224 (4) - why did you do a curve slider like that curved slider are made with three point so much better. dont put such an excess amount of points > Yeah, I think I got how it's done now. :3
01:13:676 (6) - same as above ^

I cut you some slack because your just a beginner so the mod isnt the full easy mod i would have gave if you werent a beginner
Test Play for Easy

Result

Comments: The flow is fine but not great in certain spot its odd. you hd is too high this ar is way to high. i did not struggle with the song because im a good player but a beginner will have troulbe with the hidden notes i suggest revise this map a little bit. Btw this map is amazing for a beginner most beginners make timing mistakes and tons of not much sense notes but this wasnt that bad for a beginner great job. i will give a star at end of mod. im taking a break for now
the Actual level of difficulty that this can be under : Easy

ill make a insane for you if you want ill do rest of the mod tommorow

osu file format v12

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AudioFilename: 29 - Skip Skip dayo, Lucky Star.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 32426
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
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[Metadata]
Title:Skip Skip dayo, Lucky Star
TitleUnicode:Skip Skip dayo, Lucky Star
Artist:Kousaki Satoru
ArtistUnicode:神前 暁
Creator:Sanbyoururu
Version:Lexia's dayo
Source:Lucky Star
Tags:Lucky Star, Original Soundtrack, Skip dayo, Kousaki Satoru
BeatmapID:0
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
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SliderTickRate:2

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364,252,63999,2,0,P|336:204|332:144,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,124,64482,2,0,L|248:212,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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196,48,65329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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396,132,66781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,124,66902,2,0,P|472:84|480:24,1,95
320,56,67386,5,8,0:0:0:0:
160,76,67628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,196,67870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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268,196,68837,2,0,B|280:148|280:148|352:140,1,95
448,248,69321,6,0,P|404:212|396:168,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,272,69805,2,0,P|216:252|192:188,1,95
36,180,70289,2,0,B|48:112|48:112|136:84|156:20,1,190,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,60,71257,6,0,L|396:136,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,60,71741,2,0,L|168:140,1,95
172,168,72103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,156,72950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,276,73192,6,0,L|404:180,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,84,73676,2,0,P|240:132|240:180,1,95
92,236,74160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,276,74281,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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444,188,74886,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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312,52,76095,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,180,76337,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,300,76579,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,284,76821,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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316,228,78757,1,2,0:0:0:0:

LexiaLovesU wrote:

[Normal]

> DS set to 1,0

Advice: In normal dont go crazy with red ticks. it is only the diff between easy and hard
Major Issues
Major Issues are things that are wrong. And thus i recommend to not ignore but you still can
00:01:579 (1) - make this with three points it would look so much better > Done. Same with all other weird sliders. :3
00:02:305 (2) - this sounds so out of place only put red ticks when the music is loud on it > Removed.
00:02:547 (3) - same as above > Changed the pattern, fixed this in the process.
00:03:999 (5) - too hidden under 3. it will confuse newbies ^
00:05:450 (1) - okay try this in the timing part it sounds so much better > Done.

SPOILER

00:05:450 (1) - make this with three points.
00:07:386 (6) - way to many point for a simple 1/1 slider make with three point it turns out so much better
00:08:353 (7) - ^^ same as above
00:09:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this whole thing is way to hidden and and unrankable for have note under sliders. I got confused just looking at it in edit mode. so newbies wont even know where to go. revise this into a better pattern > Done.
00:10:773 (2) - try this timing pattern it sounds better > Thanks, tried something else though. :3

SPOILER

00:11:257 (4) - you know what im gonna say
00:12:224 (6) - ^^(any sliders like this pls change to 3 points)
00:13:192 (1,2,3,4) - this overlap is so ugly pls fix it > No overlaps anymore. :3
00:15:128 (1,2,3) - this is way too hidden and complicated. the player will get really confused when playing this because they wont have a clue where to go. > Now it's hopefully a bit less confusing. :>
00:18:999 (5) - 5 hidden under 4 is a nono in my book especially in normal dont put hidden notes. players get so confused and sometimes miss the notes pls edit this. > No hidden notes anymore.
00:19:966 (7) - i think this way to long end it on the white it sounds so much better > Changed the pattern.
00:24:805 (1,2,3) - NO JUMPS IN NORMAL THIS WOULD DEFFINTLY BE UNRANKABLE THERE IS NO EMPHASIS IN ON 2 AT ALL SO THERE IS NO NEED TO PLACE A JUMP. > Whoops. No jumps anymore. :3
00:26:982 (6) - not needed so out of place
00:29:160 (2,3,4) - this is just confusing and hard for newbies > Should be less confusing now.
00:32:547 - inconsistent kiai time Unrankable > Fixed.
00:33:273 (2) - this i out of place remove it sounds weird
00:33:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is so tightly compacted that it is confusing. revise this > Done.
00:37:144 (4) - remove this it sounds so out of place > Changed the pattern, should be okay now.
00:39:321 (6) - putting the circle here hits my ear so wrong i should be put on the red tick before it ^
00:39:805 (1) - ugly weird placement under the sliders end pls revise it is a bit a weird at the moment ^
00:42:950 (6) - i sounds way better if you put alider there that ends on the red tick > Done.
00:45:128 (3) - sounds so weird now. try putting the circle on the red tick before. > Changed the pattern, should be okay now.
00:47:063 (1) - way to many repeats begginers get easily confused when there are alot of repeats on a slider ^
00:53:837 (6) - remove this circle sounds so out of place ^
01:09:321 (1,2,3,4) - OMG that i so confusing. people wont know where to got while playing pls revise Done.
01:18:031 (1,2) - Unrankable Under a slider > Fixed. :3

5eania wrote:

[Insane]the strem
00:59:644 (1,2,3) - Suggest sorry i dont agree with that

Asperger wrote:

dont you use japanese in title?

japanese title:スキップスキップだよ、らき☆すた

5eania wrote:

[General]
Firstly, you must be fix the bpm, and offset.
BPM: 123.971

> Uh, are you sure? Seems fine to me, actually. Can anyone confirm this? o.o

[Easy]
01:15:128 (1) - move to back 1/2 snap. > Oh, you're right, it fits way better that way. Done. :>

[Normal]
00:12:708 (5) - remove and 00:11:015 (4) - move to back 1/2 snap. > Not so sure about this one... Why? It's basically the same pattern as before. o.o
01:15:370 (1) - move to back 1/2 snap. > Done.
01:20:208 (3) - remove. > What the heck, how did it even get there? Removed. :'3

[Hard]
00:35:571 (2) - remove. > I tried to make a new pattern for using the blue ticks, in the process this was removed.
00:41:136 (2) - remove. ^
00:46:942 (4) - remove. ^
00:47:426 - add circle. > Wasn't added in the process.
00:58:313 (7) - remove. > Removed.
01:15:128 (1) - move to back 1/2 snap. (also you should be remove to the 01:17:789 (1) ) > Done.

[Insane]
00:59:644 (1,2,3) - Suggest


> LexiaLovesU doesn't think this is a good idea, so since it's her diff, this won't be changed. :3

tellertheworld wrote:

[Hard]
00:11:499 - 00:11:741 - circle here (not important) > Is there some problem with the current pattern or do you just suggest for some more variety? Actually, I'd like to keep it as it is if there's nothing wrong with it. o.o
00:40:047 (2) - move to X:404 Y:49 > Done. ~
00:47:547 - slider 2/4 here (match the rhythm) > Yeah, you're right, that's probably better.
01:17:305 - 01:17:547 - 01:17:789 - if you can circle as well~ > Done. As much as I actually liked it, I got rid of the star-shaped slider now since I just cannot get it to fit into any of the diffs. :/

sheela901 wrote:

The BPM (124.00) is okay, but I suggest that the offset should be 608 (-7). Don't forget to snap all the notes.

1. remove "lucky star", "skip dayo, ""Kousaki Satoru" from tags. there are already in airtist ,title, and source
2. if no reason, it is better to make BG size 1366*768
3. I prefer to add normal(soft)-sliderslide.wav of silence

1. For beginner, I recommend CS-1 and increase DS
2. 00:05:450 (1,3) - avoid overlap
3. 00:35:449 (1,3) - ^
4. 00:38:354 (5,2) - ^
5. 01:10:771 (4,2) - ^

1. 00:42:950 (5) - move to x:335 y:310 (stack correctly)
2. 00:58:434 (17) - move to x:365 y:176 (^)
3. 01:01:821 (2,4) - avoid overlap
4. 01:15:370 (1,2,3,4,5) - the position of 01:16:821 (5) - is not good. I suggest to stack 01:16:821 (5) - on 01:15:370 (1) - fin order to conform DS and avoid overlap
5. 01:17:305 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

1. it is better to add NC more frequently
2. 00:07:628 (8,10,11) - avoid overlap
3. 00:23:353 (10,13) - stack correctly
4. 00:28:434 (15) - move to x:335 y:177 (stack correctly)
5. 00:43:918 (8) - move to x:338 y:283 (^)
6. 00:49:241 (4) - move to x:23 y:114 (^)
7. 01:12:950 (7,11) - how about adjusting to the same potision?

1. 00:42:224 (8) - I prefer the following
   
2. 01:05:934 (2,3) - I prefer to make parallel
   
   SPOILER

   

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. remove "lucky star", "skip dayo, ""Kousaki Satoru" from tags. there are already in airtist ,title, and source > Oh, that's true. Done. :>
2. if no reason, it is better to make BG size 1366*768 > Huh, osu! scales it down to that size from 1600x900. No idea why it's 1365 instead of 1366, but I corrected it manually now. o.o
3. I prefer to add normal(soft)-sliderslide.wav of silence > Hitsounds are still giving me a hard time, but I'll look into it. Thanks. :3

[Easy]

1. For beginner, I recommend CS-1 and increase DS > Really? I had a look at other easy diffs and thought the current settings were pretty appropriate... do you really think I should make it more difficult?
2. 00:05:450 (1,3) - avoid overlap > Ah, didn't really pay attention to this. Fixed it, thanks! :3
3. 00:35:449 (1,3) - ^ > Fixed.
4. 00:38:354 (5,2) - ^ > Fixed.
5. 01:10:771 (4,2) - ^ > Fixed.

[Normal]

1. 00:42:950 (5) - move to x:335 y:310 (stack correctly) > Wow, I didn't even know you could enter the coordinates manually. Great, thanks. :>
2. 00:58:434 (17) - move to x:365 y:176 (^) > Done.
3. 01:01:821 (2,4) - avoid overlap > Fixed.
4. 01:15:370 (1,2,3,4,5) - the position of 01:16:821 (5) - is not good. I suggest to stack 01:16:821 (5) - on 01:15:370 (1) - fin order to conform DS and avoid overlap > Since I can't seem to make a fitting circle out of the previous notes, I've just made it as you said now. It's ok too, I guess. :3
5. 01:17:305 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^

[Hard]

1. it is better to add NC more frequently > Sorry for the stupid question, but NC = new combo? If so, yeah, it kind of bothers me too, but melody-wise I simply can't see where to add some. .- .
2. 00:07:628 (8,10,11) - avoid overlap > I have rearranged that part a little, now there should be no overlaps anymore. :3
3. 00:23:353 (10,13) - stack correctly > Done.
4. 00:28:434 (15) - move to x:335 y:177 (stack correctly) > Done.
5. 00:43:918 (8) - move to x:338 y:283 (^) > Done.
6. 00:49:241 (4) - move to x:23 y:114 (^) > Done.
7. 01:12:950 (7,11) - how about adjusting to the same potision? > I guess originally that was the idea, I messed up though. Fixed it now. :>

[Lexia's dayo] > I'll ask Lexia to look into it. :3

1. 00:42:224 (8) - I prefer the following
   
2. 01:05:934 (2,3) - I prefer to make parallel
   
   SPOILER

   

how cute skinning <3 You think so? Thanks! >w<
~Good Luck~

1. 00:24:805 (1,2,3) - switch position maybe? put repeat slider on (1).
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:30:612 (1) - remove finish? I didn't hear any cymbal sound here. if you want to add finish, add here 00:32:547 (1) instead. it should be better.
3. 00:36:418 (3,5) - remove finish on both slider? well, same reason with ^
4. 00:41:741 (4) - I think this slider is better if changed to a repeat slider. if you do this I have pattern suggestion.
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:54:805 (5) - no, not here. finish is supposed to be here 00:55:289 (1) *slider end
6. 01:15:370 (6) - new combo? it's hard to explain, I hope you understand why I suggest that.
7. 01:17:305 (7) - ^

1. 00:51:656 (3,6) - where is the whitsle??
2. 00:58:430 (5) - try ctrl + g. I think it flows better.
3. 01:07:624 (2) - clap on slider end.

1. 00:11:012 (7,8,9,10) - no....it's too close. doesn't look good. make them further and have same distance space.
2. 00:32:544 (1) - remove whistle on slider end. if you want to use whistle, use here 00:33:028 (2) instead. *slider head.
3. 00:48:512 (2) - this too, here 00:48:996 (3) instead.
4. 00:54:802 (10) - why not new combo?

1. 00:47:301 (1,2) - why don't you make this same as 00:46:817 (1,2,3) ?
2. 00:50:082 (8,9) - well, I personally think this notes are overmapped. delete them?

raheta_adi wrote:

hello there~
request from my queue.
[General]
remove tags "anime" from all diff because "anime" will appear on genre when your map is bubbled.
add tags "Lexia" on all diff. > Oh, I haven't even thought about that at all... thanks! ._ .

[Easy]

1. 00:24:805 (1,2,3) - switch position maybe? put repeat slider on (1). > You're right, it fits better that way. Done. :>
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:30:612 (1) - remove finish? I didn't hear any cymbal sound here. if you want to add finish, add here 00:32:547 (1) instead. it should be better. > Whoops. Originally that spinner ended where the circle is now, but I seem to have forgotten about the finish. Thanks, probably I would never have noticed. ._ .
3. 00:36:418 (3,5) - remove finish on both slider? well, same reason with ^ > Uh... I have no explanation for this one, removed. Thanks for pointing t out. :'3
4. 00:41:741 (4) - I think this slider is better if changed to a repeat slider. if you do this I have pattern suggestion. > I think so, too. Changed it. :3 For no real reason, I ended up using a different pattern though. Might as well have used your suggestion. ._ .'
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:54:805 (5) - no, not here. finish is supposed to be here 00:55:289 (1) *slider end > Ugh, you're right. Changed it.
6. 01:15:370 (6) - new combo? it's hard to explain, I hope you understand why I suggest that. > Whoops, must have forgotten about that the last time I edited that part... Fixed it again. :3
7. 01:17:305 (7) - ^ ^

that's it for easy.
this is a good map indeed. I enjoy playing it.

[Normal]

1. 00:51:656 (3,6) - where is the whitsle?? > Uh... now it's there! :>
2. 00:58:430 (5) - try ctrl + g. I think it flows better. > Hm. Personally don't think there's a noticeable change of the flow, but if you say so... since it doesn't hurt to change it, I did. o.o
3. 01:07:624 (2) - clap on slider end. > Whoops, added.

[Hard]

1. 00:11:012 (7,8,9,10) - no....it's too close. doesn't look good. make them further and have same distance space. > I thought it'd be nice to have them together that closely, but after comparing that with your suggestion I have to admit that was somewhat stupid. Changed it. ._ .'
2. 00:32:544 (1) - remove whistle on slider end. if you want to use whistle, use here 00:33:028 (2) instead. *slider head.> Removed.
3. 00:48:512 (2) - this too, here 00:48:996 (3) instead. > Removed.
4. 00:54:802 (10) - why not new combo? > Good question. I meant to start the new combo there, but I seem to have screwed it up sometime without noticing. Changed it. :3

awesome! just some hitsound problem.

[Lexia's dayo] > I'll ask Lexia to look into it. :3

1. 00:47:301 (1,2) - why don't you make this same as 00:46:817 (1,2,3) ?
2. 00:50:082 (8,9) - well, I personally think this notes are overmapped. delete them?

[]
phew, that's all. I hope my mod can help you.
good mapset, and good song, and good skin. I think you need some works on hitsound.
take my star~

if you have any question, contact me in-game or by forum PM

615915887 wrote:

From my queue
Nice mapset

[General]
Seperate tags with spaces > Hm, I guess the commas aren't needed... Done. :3
Disable countdown since this is an soft song > I thought I had already done that last time, but obviously I didn't... Thanks. ~
Lots of soundeffects on the slider body,check it yourself > You mean the whistles? Uh, that's intentional, I guess... Though I know my use of hitsounds probably sucks, I just can't seem to get the hang of it and improve it. I'll delete them and try something different. .- .

[Easy]
cs-1? cs4 is too small in Easy,and probably unrankable > You're the second one to point that out, so I've changed it now. Hence I made lots of minor changes throughout the map to avoid ugly overlaps and such, but the map shouldn't flow any different from before. :3
00:13:672 (5) - nc > I've changed the pattern slightly to be able to start the combo at 00:13:188 (1) .
00:24:801 (1) - remove finish on the tail > Whoops, done.
01:15:366 (1,1) - nice :>

[Normal]
Are you sure SV=1.4? Huge spread with easy > Actually, I've been a bit worried about that as well, but now that someone else pointed it out, I reduced it to 1,3. I don't want to go any further down since that would mean tons of overlapping notes, though. Due to that I had to rearrange almost everything, but I used the opportunity to "improve" (as far as I'm concerned, that is xp ) the flow which I wasn't content with before.
00:04:478 maybe a note here > Hm, why exactly? There's no sound at all, and since it's a normal diff, I want to keep it simple. :3
00:17:059 (1) - stack with 5 > Doesn't matter anymore due to the rearrangements. ~
00:19:237 (4,5) - oh damn puush reverse 00:19:237 (4) and put 5 at 00:20:446 > About the first one, see above. About the second one, I can see why you'd suggest that. But personally I think it also fits as it is, plus the pattern is similar to what is used before so I guess it won't confuse the player. o.o
00:30:366 (4) - replace this or players will fill a note at 00:30:124 > Rearranged it, shouldn't be a problem anymore. :3
00:44:156 (6) - nc > Added one on 00:41:978, I think it's fitting and I already did the same in the hard diff anyway. :3

[Hard]
ar-1? ar8 is too cruel for hard and no spread with Insanealthough i play it nice > Hm, I know it's kind of unusual for a hard map, but do have really have the overall impression that it's too difficult? I tried to avoid unexpected turns or jumps so you can mostly just go with the flow, and the SV and DS aren't that scary either. I thought it'd be appropriate to have a AR that high, but if there are other people who'd prefer it at 7, I'll change it. :3

Edit: lol, someone from #modreqs just suggested the same, so I'll change it to 7 now. :'3
00:08:350 (4) - you miss clap on the tail > Whoops, you're right. Added. :>
00:24:318 (7) - ctrl g would look better > Guess you're right. Done. :3
others are nice

[Lexia's dayo] > Lexia will look into it. ~
00:08:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why whistle the middle one
01:16:817 (5) - not flat

[others]
Why not do a main diff yourself? > By "main diff", do you mean an insane? That's simply because I'm a pretty mediocre/bad osu! player who can't even beat most insane maps (yet? hopefully... ;_ ; ) and has no idea what a fun insane map could look like. I guess I can't really map what I can't play myself. .- .

Quite a nice map and GL

eironeia wrote:

Hello! From my queue. Being modded many times already I doubt I will be of much help now, but here goes:

General

It may be just me and my input, but...

^Me playing Hard.

^Me playing Lexia's dayo.
I think the offset should be increased by 3. > Hm, then it'd be mor like it was before the timing check... I can't really make out any difference myself, so I'm not sure what to do now. Guess I'll leave it for and see if other modders point out the same. Thanks. :3

Easy

O_O Very nice map. I couldn't find anything wrong with this. >w<

Normal

00:28:672 (1) - Clap I think should be on the tail and not on the head. > I'd like to keep the three clap sequence, but I've added a clap on the tail anyway. Sounds pretty ok to me. :>
00:36:172 (3) - Suggest remove clap, this slider's beginning is on a quarter beat, so a clap would be a bit going against the flow of the music imo. > Hm, yeah, I know what you mean... I thought it was a good idea at first, but I guess it's not. Removed them. 3:
00:48:027 (1) - Use finish? Yep. :>
00:49:720 (4) - Suggest remove clap, this slider's beginning is on a quarter beat. > Removed.
00:51:656 (3) - ^ ^
00:53:591 (6) - ^ ^
00:57:462 (1) - ^ ^
00:58:430 (2) - ^ ^
01:07:382 (1) - Hitsound preferably finish only. > Your'e right, seems more fitting. :3
I like your sliders on this diff and easy very much btw :3 >w<

Hard

00:20:205 (6) to 00:20:689 (8) - (Just barely) inconsistent spacing throughout constant beats, move 8 a little bit up, like this:
> Haha, good job noticing that. :'3 Fixed.

Other than this it's hard to correct this map any further.

Lexia's dayo

O_O I couldn't find anything I would critique with this.

Well there you go! This is a good mapset, very, very rankable. Would star if I had one D:
Well done, and good luck! >w<

Backstep wrote:

From my queue..

General

- Relaxing music, but need someone check your offset I feel early a bit. :/ > Again? And there I thought it'd be okay after the the timing check I got recently... Anyway, thanks, I'll have someone else look into it. .- .

Easy

00:21:414 (2) - You forget clap here. > Actually, that's intentional. I like it, but if other players find it confusing, I have to change it, I guess.
00:24:801 (1) - Same above but put in repeat slider. ^
00:28:672 (1) - You can change to spinner here. > Hm. Why exactly do you find it hard for beginners? Simply due to the lack of breaks or is there some other reason? I'm aware beginners need more breaks than advanced players, but seeing how short the song is I figured this would be okay... So if you deem it really important, I'll change it, otherwise I'd like to keep it. .- .
00:30:608 (1) - I think it hard for new player, I suggest you remove it for make a little break for player ^
00:59:640 (1,1,1) - Just only my opinion you can try these notes to repeat slider. > I'd like to have some emphasis on these, and personally I think separate circles serve that purpose better.
01:15:366 (1,1) - You can add whistle at end slider to follow rhythm music. > Yep, done. :3

Normal

00:28:672 (1) - Remove clap please I feel weird, I think only whistle sound it fine here D: > Shoot, I had already fixed all that since eironeia also pointed it out, but I seem to have failed to upload it in time... Sorry I had you go through all that trouble too for no reason. ;_ ;
00:34:237 (4) - Same above reason, remove clap at start slider. ^
00:36:172 (3) - ^ ^
00:38:107 (6) - ^ ^
00:41:978 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:44:882 (5) - ^ ^
00:48:027 (1) - Change clap to finish ^
00:49:720 (4) - Like first suggestion in this diff reason :/ ^
00:51:656 (3) - ^ ^
00:53:591 (6) - ^ ^
00:57:462 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:07:382 (1) - Only finish sound would be fine here. ^
01:10:285 (6) - You can add clap here. > Done. :3
01:17:543 (2) - Start slider you can add whistle here to follow rhythm. > Also done.
01:18:269 (4) - End slider you can add whistle. ^
01:18:027 (3,5) - You can add whistle these notes too. ^

Hard

00:36:173 (4) - Add whistle all slider. (like it before?) > Yep, added.
00:37:383 (1) - Whistle here. ^
00:37:866 (3) - Remove whistle and add to (4) instead. > Done.
00:38:350 (1,1,1) - I suggest remove all whistles orz ._. > Yep, I wasn't really happy with that either, but I like your suggestion. Done. :3
00:51:657 (4) - Whistle all slider ? > Done.
01:17:543 (2,4,6,7) - Add whistle ? > Yep. :>

Lexia > She will look into it. :3

- Wrong clap pattern, it should start at 00:02:059 to the kiai D:
- Same above reason with second wrong clap pattern, it should start 00:48:511 here.

Other thing I think it's fine, Good luck.

No Dap wrote:

Hello~
Mod from #modhelp

[Easy]
00:05:930 Slider tick hit sound (hit clap) > o.o Never even thought of that before, I'll look into it! I have to figure out first how to to keep certain sliders without these slider tick claps without disabling custom hitsounds, since every slider is supposed to have the custom silent slider slide. D:
00:11:737 ^
00:18:511 ^
00:22:382 ^
00:29:156 ^
00:30:124 ^
00:36:898 ^
00:38:833 ^
00:51:414 ^
01:08:833 ^

[Normal]
00:01:575 (1) - Hit clap on the tail > Actually, I'd like to leave it out here and "intensify" the use of hitsounds as the song picks up. Is it confusing? o.o
00:03:995 Slider tick hit sound (hit clap)
00:05:446 (1) - Hit clap on the tail ^
00:07:866 Slider tick hit sound (hit clap)
00:09:317 (1) - Hit clap on the tail^
00:11:737 Slider tick hit sound (hit clap)
00:23:349 ^
00:32:543 ^
00:38:833 ^
01:05:930 ^
01:09:801 ^

[Hard]
00:36:898 (5) - 400,88 seems more fitting to me > I've rearranged it so that 5 stacks with 3 now (no idea why I haven't done that before. o.o ) and changed 4's curve a bit, so it should look a bit better now. Thanks. :>


[Insane]> Whee, even more for Lexia to look at. :>
00:36:172 (3) - Is this not symmetrical on purpose?
00:42:220 (8,1) - If you decide to do this place 00:42:946 (1) on the head of 00:43:188 (2)

01:06:414 (3) - first point to 304,216



Nice map! Good luck!

dennischan wrote:

Nice background, good song, excellent mapset and totally adorable skin.
You have very nice slider-blankets and note placement. Your use of spinners is also nice.
Couldn't resist the temptation to give it a star.
Totally rankable and it would be better than many ranked maps (at least better than this https://osu.ppy.sh/s/7381)
and considering it's better than a lot of famous ranked maps, I think this should definitely be ranked.
Blue

Easy

It's already very very good for me. All I have here are minor suggestions.
00:08:350 (4) - clap sound? > Doesn't really work with the hotsound pattern I used for the beginning imo. o.o
00:11:253 (3) - finish? The finish definitely has to be at 00:13:188 . :3
00:15:124 (3) - I like the finish sounds~~~
00:17:059 - You can rise the hitsound volume a little here > Yeah, I will consider raising the volume a bit. I'd like to keep the hitsounds gentle though. :3
00:28:672 (1) - This is rather major. I think you can combine this with the spinner 00:30:608 (1) - and make a longer spinner. I think its rather disorientating for an easy to have such a short spinner and it's hard to hit notes right after the spinner, as there's only one beat between the spinner and the next note and it's hard to hit notes so fast in easy. I think you can lengthen the spinner so that people have time to get some bonus and stop in the middle of the spinner to readjust their aim. > Yep, Backstep said the same... I don't think it fits the music to just merge it to a big slider though. I changed the slider part a bit and left out the spinner completely now, since I couldn't fit it in anywhere without it being too short for a beginner.
00:32:543 - you need louder hitsounds in kiai time > Yep, considering that. :3
00:41:253 (3,4) - delete the "3" note and extend the slider 4 with 00:41:253 - as start and 00:42:704 - as end. this fits the music better as there's one note between 3 and 4, and a slider would cover that better. > I see what you mean. Personally, I think the current pattern is okay too, but if possible, I will change it. Currently struggling to do so without changing the flow and having to rearrange everything that comes after. D:
00:59:640 (1,1,1) - larger distance spacing. (I recommend 1.0 DS at least) > Yeah, some more emphasis would be cool here (just as in the other diffs), but I won't change the DS in easy. :3
01:15:124 - maybe you can start slider here, I find it very awkward to start after 1.5 beats and it might be hard for newbies. But your way of doing it now fits the music, but is hard to play. You should decide yourself to change it or not > Hm, yeah, some might be confused if they haven't heard the song before. It's basically the only "difficulty" I'm allowing myself to have in this easy diff, so I'd really like to keep it fitting to the music here. :>

Generally, this is a very nice diff which has very beautifully crafted sliders

Normal

It's already very very good for me. All I have here are minor suggestions.
All of your blankets (slider note blankets, note sliderhead blankets) work very well
00:20:688 - I'm positive that the music suggests a circle here > Personally, I think there could be added several more notes on various places, but I want a balance between the easy and hard diffs so I tried to only put the most "important" notes for normal. :3
00:32:543 - Increase the volume of the kiai time > Yep, considering that~
00:46:333 (1,2,3) - Nice use of descending sliders to fit the music
00:59:640 (1,1,1) - increase your DS please~~~ (DS at least 1.3x) > Ok, can't hurt if I increase it once... done. :3
01:01:817 (2) - NC > Whoops, forgot about that. Added. :>

Hard

Really way too easy for a hard. This is more like a normal. > Nah, I don't think so. It's definitely one of the easier hards, but that's okay imo since it's a gentle song anyway. :3
having said that, I still have to congratulate you on making such a tidy and beautiful map.
00:59:641 (1,1,1) - try to increase the DS even further (if you can) > Managed to increase it by 0,1, there's no space to increase it further. .- .
00:30:607 - clap here? > Uh, wrong time maybe? There's not even a note there (and I don't indend to add one). :'3
00:38:350 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - the music does not have those notes, you better explain what you're doing here. > I know. :3 The most obvious choice would be to put another slider there I guess, but I really want to avoid that to have some diversity. So instead I tried putting a simple, consistent pattern with no claps there, and although each circle has no sound it "belongs" to, the pattern as a whole works well as a slider substitute imo. If other people disagree, I might have to change it though. :3
01:15:367 (1) - clap > On a red line? That would pretty much go against the rhythm imo... But I'd like to keep the two circles at the end free of hitsounds anyway, apart from the quiet whistles on the second one.
01:17:302 (1) - clap ^

Nothing to say for Insane, as insane is quite good
(actually ran out of time, too much diffs) cough... cough,nothing...........

Gave a kudosu star~~~ Good luck for ranking~
(actually, you don't need good luck, as I think any BAT who looks at it will recognize its value and rank it)

Piyoko_9796 wrote:

M4M
((sry for late modding;w;

i'm not good at modding EZ and NM....

[General]
it is not in a correct timing or offset
00:59:610 - add time section
01:11:253 - add time section

(if u try to listen to Lexia's dayo 01:01:787 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - is not match to the music)

> See BeatofIke's timing check. Offset set to 1565. ~

[EZ]
nice slider >V<
some of them match to the music

um....don't u feel it is too heavy at the right hand side? OAO
almost all the note at the right _(:3JL)_ > o.o Didn't even notice that, but you're right. Mirrored one part to the left, it should be more equal now. :3
00:11:253 (3) - prefer a softer slider~as like as 00:18:027 (2) - > Me too, changed. :>

[NM]
DS 1.00x the note maybe to near each other = messy~ .... try DS 1.30x~ > I know it's rather cramped, but I made sure there's a minimum of space between the notes so there are no overlaps. It's ok imo. o.o

00:27:946 (6,1) - suggestion~

> Looking good, done. :>
00:29:640 (2,3) - try change to a slider OAO?? > Done.

01:08:349 (3,4,5) - suggestion~

> Also done. :>

[HD]
prefer a Hard diff have a little bit jumps...ur Hard diff movement are little too small > It's supposed to be an easier Hard, but I added a few jumps and further made them bigger compared to before. It's still not that hard though. xp
ur circle almost all are going a straight way to a slider > Made everything a bit curvier, but to a certain extant that's intentional.

for example

00:56:496 (1,2,3,4,5) - u may try it >V<

[img]00:56:496%20(1,2,3,4,5)%20-[/img]

> Err, I suppose you screwed up a bit. :'3

00:59:641 (1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - this will be better~

> Not exactly the same as you suggested, but I changed that part a bit. :3
01:09:076 (1) - end at 01:09:559 - .....01:09:560 (2) - remove > Nah, I want to keep that pattern. ~
01:10:286 (6) - end at 01:10:769 - ^

01:11:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is it better?

> I prefer it as it is. :3
[Lexia's dayo]
00:32:906 (2) - remove

00:33:511 (1) -

00:49:961 (7) - remove
00:53:833 (4) - maybe match to the music
00:59:640 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - as i say at General

Good luck~

yurunneram wrote:

I loved the flower you drew me OAO You got a ticket on my queue for future maps (or second mod) >w<

EASY

00:24:801 (1) - You can stack the tail on 00:23:350 (4) by rotating the object (ignore flow) > Good idea, done. :>

00:59:640 (1,1,1) - firstly, wouldn't recommend spam NC. Second, I would combine these 3 notes into a repeat slider > I really want to keep them separate, but I've removed the NCs. :3

01:07:382 (1) - I would put this at x328 y312 so that it isn't covered by the previous ugly notes (then of course reshape the curve) > Those overlaps should only be visible in the editor, it's not a problem when actually playing the map. :3

NORMAL

00:41:253 (3) - Make it bend in the center > Whoops, how did I screw that up? Fixed. :'3

00:56:737 (3) - ^ ^

Oops I can't mod hard onwards gomen ((_ _))

No kudos thx

You have my star

LexiaLovesU wrote:

okay i have found time so ill start checking tommorow sorry sanny
really not that much to look at though so it will be done soon. well i did have a BAT look at it before
I am surprised that no one said anything about the diff name. pls sanny change it to Lexia's Insane since Lexia's Dayo is Unrankable

BeatofIke wrote:

Timing Request!

BPM: 124.000 (correct)
Offset: 1,565 (Your current offset is off measure)

Yes, the music does goes off sync with the other instruments, but the offset itself is okay.

I hope this helps, good luck with your map! :3

LexiaLovesU wrote:

okay i have found time so ill start checking tommorow sorry sanny
really not that much to look at though so it will be done soon. well i did have a BAT look at it before
I am surprised that no one said anything about the diff name. pls sanny change it to Lexia's Insane since Lexia's Dayo is Unrankable

raheta_adi wrote:

LexiaLovesU wrote:

okay i have found time so ill start checking tommorow sorry sanny
really not that much to look at though so it will be done soon. well i did have a BAT look at it before
I am surprised that no one said anything about the diff name. pls sanny change it to Lexia's Insane since Lexia's Dayo is Unrankable

really? I don't think "Lexia's Dayo" is unrankable. look at this diff name https://osu.ppy.sh/s/85812
this is a ranked map and it used "sadness" instead of insane.
but still it is up to you to change or not.

Momochikun wrote:

Hi.. pls look at t/169960&start=0
The "sadness" was acceptable because that map was ranked before this new rule added.

Good Luck with this map !