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Toyosaki Aki - Sunday Siesta

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Topic Starter
Sleepman
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年12月4日 at 17:33:51

Artist: Toyosaki Aki
Title: Sunday Siesta
Source: K-ON!
Tags: anime toyosaki aki hirasawa yui k-on keion character song series
BPM: 90
Filesize: 4451kb
Play Time: 02:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.73 stars, 116 notes)
  2. Hard (4.67 stars, 294 notes)
  3. Normal (3.66 stars, 177 notes)
  4. taka's Hard (4.9 stars, 366 notes)
Download: Toyosaki Aki - Sunday Siesta
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my first map!

advice please!
please mod

11/6
I'm sorry many times
Hard remake complete!

11/9
Normal remake complete

11/10
Easy remake complete

11/17
Remove mico's diff
failed to remake this map ><
miccoliasms
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Toyosaki aki - Sunday siesta (kud) [miccoli's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Sleepman
>>miccoliasms
kami map 提供 thx!
taka1235
hokkori~
Topic Starter
Sleepman
>>taka1235
matamata kami map thx!
miccoliasms
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.



Topic Starter
Sleepman
skin thx!
very cute!
miccoliasms
moittyo!!
taka1235
もっかいお願いします!

Download: Toyosaki aki - Sunday siesta (kud) [taka's hard].osu
Topic Starter
Sleepman
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
miccoliasms
Topic Starter
Sleepman
>>miccoli
反映しました!
thx!
avira0922
distance snap とグリッドレベルを3で設定して配置をしてみてください
section-pass.png が少し大きめかな?って思います

サイズ調整とsection-fail.pngを作ってみました
初心者が口出してすみません!(゜口゜;)

distance snapについては 
「こちら」に書かせていただいたのがあるので参考に

Please use distance snap and Grid Level3, arrange it again.
I feel size section-pass.png very large.

I corrected it and add section-fail.png
sorry,I am a MOD beginner. TAT

SPOILER


section-pass.png



section-fail.png
Topic Starter
Sleepman
>>avira
nice MOD thx!
ありがとうございます!早速section-fail、section-passアップさせていただきました!
gridとdistance snapのことなんですが、
始めの設定でしか適応されないんですかね?;
自分のEDIT開くと常にgridが1なんです;
taNa

kud wrote:

gridとdistance snapのことなんですが、
始めの設定でしか適応されないんですかね?;
自分のEDIT開くと常にgridが1なんです;
gridはedit画面の上にあるmenuのView→Grid Levelから変更できます。
ちなみにaviraさんが言ってた3は一番小さいサイズかな?
で、edit開始時にgridのサイズが違ってたら毎回手動で変更してください。
Ctrl+1,2,3,4でも変更できるらしいですo.o

distance snapはaviraさんが貼ってたリンク先に詳しく書いてあるけども一応書いておきます。
distance snapの倍率はAlt+マウスホイール操作で変えられます。
まあ僕も初心者なので詳しくはaviraさんが貼ってたリンク先を見てみると良いと思います!
画像付きで丁寧に書いてあるので。

すでに解決してたらごめんなさい☆ミ
Topic Starter
Sleepman
>>taNa
アドバイスthxです!
gridはどうも始めの設定でやらなきゃいけなかったみたいですね;
イージー、ノーマル修正しました
次回からgrid気をつけます;
Cyril Scarlet
ダウンロードさせてもらいました。
まったりリラックス出来る譜面でしたよ。

kud さんの HARD バージョン とかは作られないんですか? (*´∇`*)
もちろん takaさんの譜面、miccoさんの譜面も試させていただきました。

Grid は皆さんが説明していた通り CTRL+1~4 で選択できますが
Gを押しても Grid サイズの変更も可能ですよ

ただ、順番に変更されるので CTRL の方が便利ですよね。☆^(o≧▽゚)o
Topic Starter
Sleepman
>>S i R i R u
コメント、星ありがとうございます
初めてだらけでgridとかdistance snapとかわー!ってなっちゃいました;
ハード実は始めに作ったんですが
takaさんとmiccoliさんの譜面を見てあまりの恥ずかしさにゴミ箱へ・・・
おそらくあまりいい譜面は作れないとは思うんですががんばってみます!
DJPop
  1. PreviewTime: 49343
  2. Title:Sunday Siesta <<< Capitalize S
  3. Artist:Toyosaki Aki <<< Capitalize A
  4. Source:K-ON!
  5. Tags:anime toyosaki aki hirasawa yui k-on keion character song series

~Easy~
01:05:34 (7) - new combo
01:07:34 (1) - remove new combo
01:54:67 (1) - ^
02:14:01 (1) - ^
02:14:67 (2) - new combo

~Normal~
00:20:34 (5) - move left to blue tick
00:21:84 (9) - new combo
00:25:67 (1) - move left to blue tick
00:31:34 (1) - new combo
00:43:00 (6) - ^
00:43:67 (8,9) - too far
01:42:67 (9) - new combo
01:45:34 (14) - ^
01:49:67 (6,7) - too far
01:51:34 (8) - new combo
02:21:01 (1,2,3,1,2) - turn sliders into shapes are much better ;)
02:36:01 (2) - end on white tick
02:39:34 (1) - ^
03:01:34 (6) - new combo
03:21:67 (9) - ^

~miccoli's Hard~
00:36:01 (3) - new combo
01:00:50 (2) - invisible, don't overlap with previous slider
01:07:34 (4) - new combo
01:48:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - too close, hard to guess the rhythm
01:57:51 (1) - snap on red tick
02:06:67 (9) - new combo
02:06:67 (9,10,1,2,1,2,1) - too far and too difficult to play D:
02:09:34 (3) - new combo
02:09:67 (4,5) - make them closer
02:38:34 (1) - remove new combo
02:38:67 (3) - new combo
02:48:67 (4) - invisible, don't overlap with previous slider
02:55:34 (9) - ^
03:09:010 - add break time here
03:13:50 (4) - new combo
03:18:84 (4) - ^
03:19:67 (6,7,8) - don't make them overlapped

~Hard~
00:24:34 (8,9) - too far
00:24:51 (9) - move right, snap on the next tick
00:40:84 (1) - remove new combo
00:44:01 (6) - new combo
00:46:17 (14) - ^
00:52:01 (10) - ^
00:57:34 (7) - ^
01:00:01 (4) - ^
01:05:676 - add some notes or add break time
01:07:01 (1) - suggest to remove this note
01:08:34 (1) - remove new combo
01:46:34 (4,5,6) - suggest to move left 1/4 beat
01:50:51 (12) - new combo
02:12:01 (10) - ^
02:18:67 (1) - offscreen
02:41:343 - remove timing sections and afterward

~taka's hard~
00:41:17 (10) - new combo
00:43:00 (1) - remove new combo
00:44:00 (4) - new combo
01:50:51 (12) - ^
01:52:34 (1) - remove new combo
01:53:34 (4) - new combo
02:02:34 (10) - ^
02:02:51 (1) - remove new combo


Gambaru! +Star
Polaris03_old
Please change artist:
Toyosaki Aki
(and title: Sunday Siesta, if you want)
Cyril Scarlet
To DJPop อันนี้ผมแปลให้เขานะครับ เขา บอกผมว่าอ่านไม่ออก พูด ENG ไม่เป็น ^^"

*Notice This MOD is not mine.

Translate from DJPop for kud. plz don't give kudos to me ^^

クドスは押さないでください。
これはDJPOPからのMODの翻訳であって僕のアドバイスは一切含んでいませんので。


From DJPop

DJPop wrote:

  1. PreviewTime: 49343
  2. Title:Sunday Siesta <<< Capitalize S
  3. Artist:Toyosaki Aki <<< Capitalize A
  4. Source:K-ON!
  5. Tags:anime toyosaki aki hirasawa yui k-on keion character song series
上のは必須です。
詳細はいれないといけません。

~Easy~
01:05:34 (7) - 新しいコンボ
01:07:34 (1) - 新しいコンボ削除
01:54:67 (1) - ^
02:14:01 (1) - ^
02:14:67 (2) - 新しいコンボ

~Normal~
00:20:34 (5) - 左に移動してリズムを青線の所へ
00:21:84 (9) - 新しいコンボ
00:25:67 (1) - 左移動して青線の所へ
00:31:34 (1) - 新しいコンボ
00:43:00 (6) - ^
00:43:67 (8,9) - 距離が遠いです
01:42:67 (9) - 新しいコンボ
01:45:34 (14) - ^
01:49:67 (6,7) - 距離が遠いです
01:51:34 (8) - 新しいコンボ
02:21:01 (1,2,3,1,2) - スライダーの形をもう少し綺麗にまとめたらより良くなりますよ ;)
02:36:01 (2) - 白線で終了
02:39:34 (1) - ^
03:01:34 (6) - 新しいコンボ
03:21:67 (9) - ^

~Hard~
00:24:34 (8,9) - 距離が遠いです
00:24:51 (9) - 右に移動し次の線の位置に置いてください
00:40:84 (1) - 新しいコンボ削除
00:44:01 (6) - 新しいコンボ
00:46:17 (14) - ^
00:52:01 (10) - ^
00:57:34 (7) - ^
01:00:01 (4) - ^
01:05:676 - ノートを入れるか、ブレーキタイムを入れてください。
01:07:01 (1) - 多分ここのノートは無いほうがいいかも。
01:08:34 (1) - 新しいコンボ削除
01:46:34 (4,5,6) - 左に 1/4 beat 動かしてください
01:50:51 (12) - 新しいコンボ
02:12:01 (10) - ^
02:18:67 (1) - 画面から外れてます
02:41:343 - この後のタイミングセクションを削除してください

Gambaru! +Star
Topic Starter
Sleepman
>>DJPop
advice and star thx!
Gambaru!

DJPop wrote:

  1. PreviewTime: 49343 Done
  2. Title:Sunday Siesta <<< Capitalize S Done
  3. Artist:Toyosaki Aki <<< Capitalize A Done
  4. Source:K-ON! Done
  5. Tags:anime toyosaki aki hirasawa yui k-on keion character song series
Done


~Easy~
01:05:34 (7) - new combo Done
01:07:34 (1) - remove new combo Done
01:54:67 (1) - ^ Done
02:14:01 (1) - ^ Done
02:14:67 (2) - new combo Done

~Normal~
00:20:34 (5) - move left to blue tick Done
00:21:84 (9) - new combo Done
00:25:67 (1) - move left to blue tick Done
00:31:34 (1) - new combo Done
00:43:00 (6) - ^ Done
00:43:67 (8,9) - too far Done
01:42:67 (9) - new combo Done
01:45:34 (14) - ^ Done
01:49:67 (6,7) - too far Done
01:51:34 (8) - new combo Done
02:21:01 (1,2,3,1,2) - turn sliders into shapes are much better ;) Done
02:36:01 (2) - end on white tick Done
02:39:34 (1) - ^ Done
03:01:34 (6) - new combo Done
03:21:67 (9) - ^ Done

~miccoli's Hard~
00:36:01 (3) - new combo Done
01:00:50 (2) - invisible, don't overlap with previous slider Done
01:07:34 (4) - new combo Done
01:48:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - too close, hard to guess the rhythm Done
01:57:51 (1) - snap on red tick Done
02:06:67 (9) - new combo Done
02:06:67 (9,10,1,2,1,2,1) - too far and too difficult to play D: Done
02:09:34 (3) - new combo Done
02:09:67 (4,5) - make them closer Done
02:38:34 (1) - remove new combo Done
02:38:67 (3) - new combo Done
02:48:67 (4) - invisible, don't overlap with previous slider Done
02:55:34 (9) - ^ Done
03:09:010 - add break time here Done
03:13:50 (4) - new combo Done
03:18:84 (4) - ^ Done
03:19:67 (6,7,8) - don't make them overlapped Done

~Hard~
00:24:34 (8,9) - too far Done
00:24:51 (9) - move right, snap on the next tick no~ I love it sorry;;
00:40:84 (1) - remove new combo Done
00:44:01 (6) - new combo Done
00:46:17 (14) - ^ Done
00:52:01 (10) - ^ Done
00:57:34 (7) - ^ Done
01:00:01 (4) - ^ Done
01:05:676 - add some notes or add break time Done
01:07:01 (1) - suggest to remove this note Done
01:08:34 (1) - remove new combo Done
01:46:34 (4,5,6) - suggest to move left 1/4 beat Done
01:50:51 (12) - new combo Done
02:12:01 (10) - ^ Done
02:18:67 (1) - offscreen Done
02:41:343 - remove timing sections and afterward Done

~taka's hard~
00:41:17 (10) - new combo     Done
00:43:00 (1) - remove new combo     Done
00:44:00 (4) - new combo     Done
01:50:51 (12) - ^     Done
01:52:34 (1) - remove new combo     Done
01:53:34 (4) - new combo     Done
02:02:34 (10) - ^     Done
02:02:51 (1) - remove new combo     Done


Gambaru! +Star
Topic Starter
Sleepman
>>Polaris03
advice thx

Polaris03 wrote:

Please change artist:
Toyosaki Aki
(and title: Sunday Siesta, if you want) Done
Topic Starter
Sleepman
>>S i R i R u
翻訳ありです!
助かりました;;
taka1235
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Toyosaki Aki - Sunday Siesta (kud) [taka's hard].osu
Topic Starter
Sleepman
>>taka1235
早いw
修正ありがとうございます!
DeadAlready
nice song and nice map <3
stared :D

oh,and here are some advices 0.0

[Easy] and [Normal]
only 01:12:01, The 2 break time maybe reset will be fine. XD (start too late and end too early lol.)

[Normal]
02:39:67 (1) - This spinner maybe a little short for normal diff...
I think you can make 02:36:01 (2) - this slider end on 02:39:01
and put this spinner start on 02:39:34 and end on 02:40:68. XD

then,these are only advices. XD if you don't want to change them,that's fine. :)

this map is still nice :D

final, great work for the mappers make this map. <3
Nerv_Mario
I can not even understand that this beautiful map is not yet rated >.>
I liked the map and all its difficulties ^^

Star ;3
Topic Starter
Sleepman
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Topic Starter
Sleepman

Nerv_Mario wrote:

I can not even understand that this beautiful map is not yet rated >.>
I liked the map and all its difficulties ^^

Star ;3
Thank you for the star!!
ponsaku
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Topic Starter
Sleepman

ponsaku wrote:

スキン可愛い~! :oops:
☆ミ :)

skin is cute,and star!!
thx!
Cyril Scarlet
あら、いつのまにかHARDが登場してるではないか!ww
Topic Starter
Sleepman

S i R i R u wrote:

あら、いつのまにかHARDが登場してるではないか!ww
けっこう前からw
Echona
Pretty map~!
Normal
00:28:676(3.4.5.6.7)-1grid 上がいいかもしれない

自分にはそれくらいしかみつかりませんでした
Topic Starter
Sleepman

Echona wrote:

Pretty map~!
Normal
00:28:676(3.4.5.6.7)-1grid 上がいいかもしれない

自分にはそれくらいしかみつかりませんでした
かなり見落としてました!
thx!
PicoLo
~Star. ;)
Topic Starter
Sleepman
>>PicoLo
star thx!
racosan
nice map !!

Nomal
00:41:176のスライダーもう4分の1拍長いほうがりずみーかも?
01:28:510と01:50:010のスライダーが急に速くてびっくりするかも?

Hard
00:13:843のスライダーの開始位置が離れちゃってるかな?


頑張ってください><
Topic Starter
Sleepman

RACO wrote:

nice map !!

Nomal
00:41:176のスライダーもう4分の1拍長いほうがりずみーかも? 修正しました
01:28:510と01:50:010のスライダーが急に速くてびっくりするかも? 修正しました

Hard
00:13:843のスライダーの開始位置が離れちゃってるかな? 修正しました


頑張ってください><
ありです!
Mafiamaster
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Topic Starter
Sleepman

Mafiamaster wrote:

K-ON!

Easy~
02:17:34 (2) - Suggestion: Make this a new combo.
Overall this difficulty sounds like a metronome throughout the whole song which makes it very boring.Done I changed some rhythm generally
01:42:67 (1) was the only interesting part.
Not saying this whole map was boring, but you should avoid making an all white tick difficulty.

Normal~
00:19:17 (4) - Shorten this 1/4 of a tick.Done
03:07:34 (1) - Make this a silent spinner. Also shorten to the white tick at 03:08:67Done

Miccoli's~
02:29:34 - Redo break. It'll lengthen. Done
02:41:51 - ^ Done

Hard~
Fine.

Taka's~
Fine.

Overall~
I recommend adding a "hitcircleoverlay.png" to the folder for a better looking hitcircle.
Remove "anime" as the source and put "K-ON!" on all difficulties.Done
advice thanks!
hitcircleoverlay.png intends to make it from now on
Mafiamaster
Hard and Taka's still has "anime" as the source
>A<
Topic Starter
Sleepman

Mafiamaster wrote:

Hard and Taka's still has "anime" as the source
>A<
oh sorry><
Thank you for the indication that I completely overlooked!
blissfulyoshi
Easy:
SPOILER
Add a preview point.

Normal mod:
00:28:01 (1,2,3) - I would shift all of these over 1 grid(3) left to make 1 stack on 7 and 2 stack on 8

Combo mod:
01:47:34 (1,2) - I would personally put the new combo on 2 instead since 1 is the eighth whole note, but that decision is up to you
02:17:34 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:08:00 (4)

Normal:
SPOILER
I advise you lower the drain because the long slider section drains of lot of the hp bar
Also, I would recommend to cut this to the same length as your hard and easy diff since this diff felt very long with a not so fun ending.

Combo mod:
I really did not get how you added new combos at times. Sometimes you followed two lines of lyrics, sometimes one, and sometimes you counted the beats. My advice is to make them all consistent. (Easy is a good example to follow)

miccoli's Hard:
SPOILER
Add a preview point.

Combo mod:
00:30:84 (4) - new combo
01:21:34 (1) - from here to the next chorus, you changed your comboing style from one line of lyrics, the style you used in the beginning, to two line of lyrics, so I advise you make this section and the beginning consistent

Hard:
SPOILER
Combo mod:
I really did not get how you added new combos at times. This difficulty is better than normal, but it needs quite a bit of work at parts. The part right after the first chorus made the most sense, so I advise you copy that. If you need more help, try looking at the other mapper's maps and use their comboing style.

taka's hard:
SPOILER
normal mod:
00:48:67 (2) - the repeat is virtually invisible under the 4's 300
01:58:01 (2) - ^

Combo mod:
00:22:17 (1) - since you did not put a new combo for instruments before, I would remove this combo
00:36:01 (1) - ^

Nice map. Star.
Topic Starter
Sleepman

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Easy:
SPOILER
Add a preview point.

Normal mod:
00:28:01 (1,2,3) - I would shift all of these over 1 grid(3) left to make 1 stack on 7 and 2 stack on 8

Combo mod:
01:47:34 (1,2) - I would personally put the new combo on 2 instead since 1 is the eighth whole note, but that decision is up to you
02:17:34 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:08:00 (4)

Normal:
SPOILER
I advise you lower the drain because the long slider section drains of lot of the hp bar
Also, I would recommend to cut this to the same length as your hard and easy diff since this diff felt very long with a not so fun ending.

Combo mod:
I really did not get how you added new combos at times. Sometimes you followed two lines of lyrics, sometimes one, and sometimes you counted the beats. My advice is to make them all consistent. (Easy is a good example to follow)

miccoli's Hard:
SPOILER
Add a preview point.

Combo mod:
00:30:84 (4) - new combo
01:21:34 (1) - from here to the next chorus, you changed your comboing style from one line of lyrics, the style you used in the beginning, to two line of lyrics, so I advise you make this section and the beginning consistent

Hard:
SPOILER
Combo mod:
I really did not get how you added new combos at times. This difficulty is better than normal, but it needs quite a bit of work at parts. The part right after the first chorus made the most sense, so I advise you copy that. If you need more help, try looking at the other mapper's maps and use their comboing style.

taka's hard:
SPOILER
normal mod:
00:48:67 (2) - the repeat is virtually invisible under the 4's 300
01:58:01 (2) - ^

Combo mod:
00:22:17 (1) - since you did not put a new combo for instruments before, I would remove this combo
00:36:01 (1) - ^
I revised it entirely

MOD thanks~><
Lissette
Hi!

Hard
00:13:84 (9) - end point at 00:14:67 like here 00:24:51 (9) n.n
00:54:51 - add note?
01:56:67 (5) - move to the next blue tick
02:03:84 - add note?

taka's hard
very nice!
00:26:17 (2) - remove?
00:45:67 (6) - move to the prev blue tick
00:46:17 (8) - move to the prev white tick

Star!
taka1235
Topic Starter
Sleepman

Lissette wrote:

Hi!

Hard
00:13:84 (9) - end point at 00:14:67 like here 00:24:51 (9) n.nDone
00:54:51 - add note?Done
01:56:67 (5) - move to the next blue tickDone
02:03:84 - add note?Done

taka's hard
very nice!
00:26:17 (2) - remove?Done
00:45:67 (6) - move to the prev blue tickDone
00:46:17 (8) - move to the prev white tickDone

Star!
MOD thanks!
Azure_Kite
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