1. Insane (5 stars, 757 notes)
2. kajiyatta's Normal (2.84 stars, 217 notes)
3. Mera's Hard (4.9 stars, 576 notes)

kajiyatta wrote:

リクエストされたものです。
http://puu.sh/5rD3B.zip
slider-tickも入っているので、一緒に中に入れておいてください。

-Gamu- wrote:

神曲でいい譜面なので、ランクド期待しています。

がんばってください：３

あ、Hard diffのアーティスト名が日本語になっていないのでなおすといいかもです。

Harpie wrote:

This map doesn't have any problem! Good work!

Normal

Hard

Insane

Very nice map, i'm hurry to see it ranked

Dusicyon wrote:

Insane

03:11:772 (1) - this slider over lap my screen left border (4:3 Size), you should move it a little bit more to the down.
03:56:681 (4) - Add a hit circle, it's making a nice beat.

>Fixed

Very nice map, i'm hurry to see it ranked

Dusicyon wrote:

Normal

00:27:408 (1) - this slider over lap my screen left border (4:3 Size), you should move it a little bit more to the left.
03:37:590 (2) - ^ you should move it a little bit mode to the right.
No, it's not off-screen.

Dusicyon wrote:

Hard

00:57:590 (4) - move it to x:72 y:252 it make a cool effect. >Fixed
01:02:681 (2) - Remove the reverse and add a slider to 01:03:227 (3) - http://puu.sh/63Q93.jpg it sound better. >Fixed
03:40:317 (6) - Make this slider a bit curvy, to make a patern that will fit with the next circulare slider. >Fixed
03:56:681 (6) - Add a hit circle, it's making a nice beat. >Isn't it already added...?

Frostmourne wrote:

<333

Ariadim wrote:

Hi =)

I think your map is really good. But i see a little problem the same in all levels.

It's a timing error, and it generates a message.

[1:21:681] Kiai time is toggled on less than 15 second.
[2:32:499] ^
[3:45:227] ^

>No change

Maybe you should make only 3 kiai sections instead 6 =)

But i told you, perfect. It should be ranked soon

kintyan wrote:

moddingしてたけど全部消えた＼(^o^)／
是非 ranked してください！
Good luck :3

Simon -M - wrote:

insane
03:38:681 (1,2,3,4) - i think maybe misreading.;w;

> i like this, sorry no change

that all
nice map~

Insane

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suraimu_su_ wrote:

mod初めてですがなんとかがんばりました！

InsaneだけでいいとのことなのでInsaneだけやってみました。

Insane

02:43:045 (1,2) -

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ざっくりですがこんな感じにするといいと思います。
> SSを参考に少し変えました
03:01:590 (1) - remove clap add finish
03:01:772 (1) - ^
03:03:045 (1) - ^
03:04:499 (1) - ^
> スピナーの部分はうるさいと感じたので No change.
03:07:408 (1) - スライダーのはじまりにadd finish
03:30:681 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - clapをwhistleに変更して、03:32:863 (4) - と03:33:227 (6,7) - にfinishを入れるといいと思います。

やっぱりLortusさんの譜面おもしろい！

Rankedがんばって！

Frostmourne wrote:

General
kajiyatta's Normal
01:11:045 (1) - finish start here as well as 02:20:863 (1) - has 　fixed and minor updated.

Frostmourne wrote:

General
Offset is better at 1223 (-4), don't forget to resnap all notes and preview time.

Lunatic
02:43:590 (2) - maybe you can use 3 circles instead. Stream at the beat where it's heavy is nice! like 01:33:590 (3,4,5,6,7) -
03:56:317 (3) - ^

Sorry for late mod. Please call me back when you are done

Thanks for modding~

Frostmourne wrote:

Mera's Hard
02:47:227 (2,3,4) - you may change to something like 02:45:772 (1) - . Because having a stream in Hard diff could be too hard in this case. >Fixed
02:53:045 (2,3,4) - ^ >Fixed
03:56:317 (5,1) - It's almost the end and maybe the intensity of the map can make players feel anxious. You may unstack these notes to make it more easily clear to read. >Fixed

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Frostmourne wrote:

Good luck for your first map !

iyasine wrote:

go rank!!

1. You must remove "soft-hitclap3" file in your folder. as you can see all diffs, it seems to me that you don't use this file.
2. is this tag necessary "reitaisai 10" ? i guess this is festival name. therefore this has nothing to do with this map. so you should consider removing it to tag.
3. Please remove "Widescreen Support" to all diffs. that doesn't work properly since this map does not have storyboard.

1. 02:17:985 - Please snap white line by way of caution.
2. 03:01:223 (4) - add a finish here to follow the background music same as your next part 03:05:950 - .
3. 03:22:677 - ,03:24:132 - I have a sense of discomfort with this slidertick. so you should consider adding a green section (soft-custom 2) for silence.
   nice diff :>

1. Approach Rate - 1. i don't agree that rate for this mapset because it is too fast to play hard diff.
2. 00:23:041 (1,1) - The sliders appear too early considering the level of this difficulty. so i hope you remove it and have 1/1 rhythm distance for playing.
3. 00:36:495 (2,3) - Why did you make a big jump ? o.o please reduce the distance since this part is calmer than other parts. so it would fit well with this kind of music.
4. 01:48:495 (1,1) - I feel this repeat slider kind of hard for this difficulty. it is better to use ctrl + g command to this slider for player.
5. 03:49:404 (1,3) - I'm worry about hidden this note. Please check this just a reminder. : http://puu.sh/6LYWF.png
   
   Personally, i think this diff is a bit hard for this difficulty (many jumps , many 3/4 sliders) but it is enough for rank. If you can, try to think about it. I'm sure that it would be better to do.

1. 00:24:495 (1) - missing a new combo after a spinner.
2. 00:30:313 (1,2) - Rhythm suggestion: i recommend you to make 3 hits to the tail of the slider here. it would fit with this background music as well.
   
3. 00:49:041 (5,1) - Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end ~ from Official Ranking Submission Rules. i feel this sliders could confuse players here. so you should consider moving second slider like your other part 03:53:950 (1,2) - . Fix this one, so it prevents the player from misreading. : http://puu.sh/6LYWF.png
4. 01:16:313 (2,3,1) - Design suggestion: how about having a small distance between (3) and (1) ? so it would look better imo.
   
   img

   
5. 01:19:768 (1,2) - ^ Same as above.
6. 01:33:586 (3,4,6) - these consecutive claps do not match. Please remove it here.
7. 01:56:132 (1,2,3,4) - a bit nazi mod, why don't you make the spacing of these notes consistent since the combo is still going ? so it would look better imo.
8. 02:31:223 (2) - i feel kind of empty here, i hope you put some hitsounds. In this case, i recommend you to put a clap here.
9. 02:39:950 (2) - remove a finish from this note since it follows nothing.
10. 03:06:313 - missing a clap
11. 03:30:677 - i feel this part is a bit noisy because of sliderslide. If it is possible, Please add this file " soft-sliderslide3 " of silence.

alacat wrote:

Hi

[kajiyatta's Normal]

1. 02:17:985 - Please snap white line by way of caution.
2. 03:01:223 (4) - add a finish here to follow the background music same as your next part 03:05:950 - .
3. 03:22:677 - ,03:24:132 - I have a sense of discomfort with this slidertick. so you should consider adding a green section (soft-custom 2) for silence.
   nice diff :>

alacat wrote:

Hi

[General]

1. You must remove "soft-hitclap3" file in your folder. as you can see all diffs, it seems to me that you don't use this file.
2. is this tag necessary "reitaisai 10" ? i guess this is festival name. therefore this has nothing to do with this map. so you should consider removing it to tag.
3. Please remove "Widescreen Support" to all diffs. that doesn't work properly since this map does not have storyboard.

[Insane]

1. 00:24:495 (1) - missing a new combo after a spinner.
2. 00:30:313 (1,2) - Rhythm suggestion: i recommend you to make 3 hits to the tail of the slider here. it would fit with this background music as well.
   
3. 00:49:041 (5,1) - Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end ~ from Official Ranking Submission Rules. i feel this sliders could confuse players here. so you should consider moving second slider like your other part 03:53:950 (1,2) - . Fix this one, so it prevents the player from misreading. : http://puu.sh/6LYWF.png
4. 01:16:313 (2,3,1) - Design suggestion: how about having a small distance between (3) and (1) ? so it would look better imo.
   
   img

   
5. 01:19:768 (1,2) - ^ Same as above.
6. 01:33:586 (3,4,6) - these consecutive claps do not match. Please remove it here.
7. 01:56:132 (1,2,3,4) - a bit nazi mod, why don't you make the spacing of these notes consistent since the combo is still going ? so it would look better imo.
8. 02:31:223 (2) - i feel kind of empty here, i hope you put some hitsounds. In this case, i recommend you to put a clap here.
9. 02:39:950 (2) - remove a finish from this note since it follows nothing.
10. 03:06:313 - missing a clap
11. 03:30:677 - i feel this part is a bit noisy because of sliderslide. If it is possible, Please add this file " soft-sliderslide3 " of silence.

That's all for now. Let me know whenever you're ready :3

Thanks for modding!!

alacat wrote:

[Mera's Hard]

1. Approach Rate - 1. i don't agree that rate for this mapset because it is too fast to play hard diff. >Fixed
2. 00:23:041 (1,1) - The sliders appear too early considering the level of this difficulty. so i hope you remove it and have 1/1 rhythm distance for playing. >Fixed
3. 00:36:495 (2,3) - Why did you make a big jump ? o.o please reduce the distance since this part is calmer than other parts. so it would fit well with this kind of music. >Fixed
4. 01:48:495 (1,1) - I feel this repeat slider kind of hard for this difficulty. it is better to use ctrl + g command to this slider for player. >Fixed
5. 03:49:404 (1,3) - I'm worry about hidden this note. Please check this just a reminder. : http://puu.sh/6LYWF.png >Fixed
   
   Personally, i think this diff is a bit hard for this difficulty (many jumps , many 3/4 sliders) but it is enough for rank. If you can, try to think about it. I'm sure that it would be better to do. >Fixed them as much as possible.

BeatofIke wrote:

Congratulations on you 1st map! :3

iyasine wrote:

るーたすさん、めらみんさん初rankedおめでとう！かじやったさんナイスサポート！

litoluna wrote:

1st ranked おめでとうございます！

Laurier wrote:

congrats!!!

btw I remembered orion's map.

Satellite wrote:

おめでとうございます！