1. Beatrice (4.76 stars, 213 notes)
2. Bernkastel (4.81 stars, 254 notes)
3. Maria (3.83 stars, 148 notes)

heartnetkung wrote:

What a great beatmap!
maria diff is really creative.
It would be the best normal/ easy I've ever see!

The other two are also in an excellent quality and the hit sound is great.

btw love the skin too~

Have my star!

Lybydose wrote:

Bernkastel:

00:15:32 (3,4) - I don't have a problem with it, but some people might have an issue with the spacing between these
00:23:50 (3,3) - spacing
00:55:11 - insert a break or map something here. Lots of unavoidable life drain from the slow slider and the spinner (auto barely gains life during the spinner, most players will lose life)
01:10:69 (4,5) - spacing (just switch the positions of the 2 and 4)
01:12:87 (4,5) - same

Beatrice:

00:07:96 (3,4) - unexpected jump I wanna keep
00:09:59 (6,1) - jump is a bit far compared to the rest of the map. Try reversing the (6) slider (ctrl + R) flipped
00:58:28 (2) - I have no idea what this is supposed to be mapped to. Delete the three notes, you'll hear a 1,2,3 from the drums. 2 is sort of faint though. Gunna keep.

Maria:

00:37:41 (6) - Jumps like this in the lowest difficulty are bad. Reverse the (6) slider and then move the (1) after it somewhere else. (or do something else entirely, I dunno).Fixed, thanks.

tieff wrote:

It song was ranked 5 days ago.
I have no objection, but... Maybe you can map full size?

tieff wrote:

It song was ranked 5 days ago.
I have no objection, but... Maybe you can map full size?

Ekaru wrote:

tieff wrote:

It song was ranked 5 days ago.
I have no objection, but... Maybe you can map full size?

Hell no.

'Sides, no offense, but most people don't give a flying *beep* about multiple maps of the same song. No one really cares any more.

I mean, it's becoming more and more frequent. Nah, don't do full size. It's recommended to do a TV Size for openings and endings if it exists (says so in the Ranking Guidelines), so keep it as it is.

tieff wrote:

Lol, I alredy have map with same BG.
But I don't think that it's a big problem.

I'll mod it later. I hope I bubble it.

Lybydose wrote:

Bernkastel:

00:15:32 (3,4) - I don't have a problem with it, but some people might have an issue with the spacing between these Hmm, changed.
00:23:50 (3,3) - spacing In purpose...
00:55:11 - insert a break or map something here. Lots of unavoidable life drain from the slow slider and the spinner (auto barely gains life during the spinner, most players will lose life) I didn't put a break, because it's meant that way. The part after spinner is easy, and life recovers pretty fast.
01:10:69 (4,5) - spacing (just switch the positions of the 2 and 4) It's a jump.
01:12:87 (4,5) - same Also a jump. u.u

minyeob wrote:

[Maria]
01:12:60 (3) - For unknownable reason, this slider isn't snapped. And also it's un-snapable orz. Delete and redo this slider, please.

[Beatrice]
01:12:60 (3) - Same as [Maria]

That's all! for me.

1. 00:59:50 (4) - Stack manually on (3)s end and ignore if you want ^^.

1. 00:42:32 (3) - Maybe align with (1)s end?,
2. 00:45:60 (3) - Maybe align with (1)s end?.

• Seems fine.

Symbolic wrote:

[Bernkastel]

00:01:69 (2,3,1) - Unintuitive jumps, remove it.
00:03:32 (2,3,1) - ^
00:05:23 (3,1) - ^
00:06:05 (3,1) - ^
00:06:87 (3,1) - ^
00:08:50 (3,1) - ^
00:10:14 (3,1) - ^
00:11:78 (3,1) - ^
00:23:23 (2,3,1) - ^
00:24:05 (2,3,1) - ^
00:24:87 (3,4,1) - Unintuitive jumps, remove it.
00:25:69 (3,1) - ^
Completely rspace the map, almost all of the jumps are unintuitive, unreadable.

SteRRuM wrote:

Hi!
[Maria]

1. 00:59:50 (4) - Stack manually on (3)s end and ignore if you want ^^.

[Beatrice]

1. 00:42:32 (3) - Maybe align with (1)s end?,
2. 00:45:60 (3) - Maybe align with (1)s end?.

a little bit nazi eh? ;P Yeah sure I'll fix it.

Yay, really good.

Symbolic wrote:

[Maria]

00:07:96 (2) - Space this correct.
00:09:59 (2) - ^
00:11:23 (2) - ^
they're fine

[Beatrice]

00:38:23 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:38:50 (2) - New combo.
00:39:32 (6) - ^
01:07:41 (4) - New combo.
I don't see a point in any of these combos

Mafiamaster wrote:

Possibly add a hitcircle overlay in the folder? The skin that I'm using kind of shows a crescent moon (I think?) type whiteness around the hit circle
Only happens on sliders.

SPOILER

Also, teach me how to encode videos like that >A<, seriously~

alvisto wrote:

Mod : Sorry if it doesn't mean anything, it's just some feeling mod and suggestions on how to maximize your map's FUN factor. =D

General :
Add sources and tags. Add Inozuma's name into the tag as well.

Maria :
Very well done Normal. Best difficulty IMO.
Suggestions :
1. At song setup there, put the stack leniency to rarely stack, cause to me it looks ugly when hitcircles overlap like that. For exmaple, 00:01:96 (1,2,1,2) - okkkkkkkk
2. Why a spinner at the end of the song ? T_T That part is so epic that I STRONGLY suggest (no, I STRONGLY beg) you to remove the spinner and map that part. Plus, spinner hides the video... *.* ok, ill try to think of something for you sicne you gab me pink star
3. If you do decide to remap the end part, you could add a whole new kiai fountain here with the hit circle in the middle of the map... (I think that's epic)

Beatrice:
Feeling mod :
00:29:78 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part design is not well done.I think it's fine
00:46:690, 00:48:327- Why left these parts empty ? It sounds to me it's very mappable. cause it follows the lyrics
01:28:96 (16) - Look at Maria suggestion 3.
01:02:78 (6,5) - Long slider like these ruins the feelings. Like I said to you last time. It goes with the lyrics again. She holds the note. I want to avoid as much overmapping as I can and two notes would leave a lame gap.
P.S. : After seeing the awesomeness of Maria, I kinda feel this difficulty could use more improvements. (And it's not as wow as the 1st time I saw this. ) awww

I love this beach. Kudo star.

Feelings contibuted by :

whymeman wrote:

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding Go~

[Maria] (Done)

SPOILER

01:07:69 (2,3) - Not evenly linked.
01:13:41 (8) - Not even under the slider end.
01:23:23 (10,1) - There is some extra spacing in between here.
01:25:41 (3) - Looks slightly uneven under the slider end.
All of the above are a bit nazi and/or I don't see them. Just going to leave them how they are, t hey won't effect gameplay D:
Notes: Just small stuff to look into. Cleanly mapped as well. Good Job. thanks

[Beatrice] (Done)

SPOILER

00:12:05 (6,7,8) - There's some increase in spacing here after 00:11:23 (3,4,5,6). Make sure the spacing is stable here.
00:56:78 (1,2,3,4,1) - (3) looks a bit more spaced out...
01:03:87 (7) - Not even under the slider end.

Notes: Seems good so far, though it feels like the spacing goes a bit unstable at certain points. Make sure to double check the spacing since distance snape can be about 80% friendly at times.... Again most is nazi and won't effect gameplay. I've went over spacing with Inozuma plenty of times and I can assure that if there seems to be some increased spacing, it is intentional.

Overall: The map is nicely done overall, though there is one thing that is kinda making me worry about it. The combo colors blend in with the video about 60% at times and it gets really hard to see. Maybe you can try finding colors that can stand out, but still match? Well, i'll drop my star in then.Thanks for dropping by ^^

Mystearica wrote:

Wow, nice hitcircle skin, really like it. Difficulty names are also fine for me, I like what you did with them.

Overall for all 3 difficulties: I feel that using 100% volume at the start was a tad loud, perhaps you would be willing to try 90%?

You had some parts with excellent volume control but there are more parts of the song that could use volume control, if you don't mind the trouble you should look through and add those as well to make your map even better.

For storyboarded lyrics, why not use the same font for both English and Romaji? I'm only nazing this because I am a karaoke stylist/typesetter/font designer for a couple fansubbing groups, and we tend to keep these the same and only choose a Japanese font for the Kanji. But anyway all that aside your English translation font was a bit hard to read compared to the Romaji.

Now, particulars.

[Maria]

00:56:78 (1,2,3,4,1) - I like the volume control here, great.
01:09:87 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could add similar volume control here. Hmm, I don't think it would fit that well because of the background. It works at 00:56 because of the background coming in.
01:24:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Could definitively add volume control here as well, would sound better.

[Beatirce]

00:38:23 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Nice. ty
00:53:10 (1) - Fade out on this spinner?

[Bernkastel]

Sounds good when Auto plays it but...throws me off terribly. I think you should re-arrange this difficulty if you can. I honestly don't see what's so unreadable and everything about this diff Inozuma made like everyone says. I can S it perfectly fine and everything if perfectly readable *sighs*

Just suggestions, keep what you like and change what you like ^_^

Star.ty