1. Easy (2.32 stars, 206 notes)
2. hutka's Hard (4.81 stars, 496 notes)
3. Insane (4.85 stars, 434 notes)

mao130 wrote:

great map just have to practice for the hard jumps :p

naruti wrote:

its worth a star
i can learn things from you 0_o

minyeob wrote:

안녕하세요~[드디어.....]

[Overall]
훗카 하드의 별점이 인센보다 높다는게 좀 이상하지만 뭐 ㅋ 인센이 별점 더 높았으면 좋겠네요(인센-> 4.85, 훗카 하드-> 4.86

[Easy]
01:33:80 (1,2,3,4)-> 이지에서 점프는 힘들 것 같네요
01:39:80 (1,2,3,4)-> 위와 동일합니다.
03:11:30 (1,2,3,4)-> 위와 동일.
03:17:30 (1,2,3,4)-> `
// reduced spacing

[hutka's hard]
00:48:76(kiai) -> 타이세츠"니" 할때 kiai 시작해주세요 (00:48:800)
01:22:36 (6) - 다른 사람들이 이거 뭐라고 할지 모르겠네요
03:10:36 (8) - U턴 한번 더 하는게 어떨까염? (훗카님의 의견 필요?)
// fixed

[Insane]
잘 하셨네요. 저로서 찾을 문제점은 없는 것 같습니다.

행운을 빌겠습니다 ~_~ (8SP.)

taka1235 wrote:

good job XD

Mafiamaster wrote:

Some things in Easy that doesn't make it an Easy~
01:33:80 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps doesn't equal easy imo.
01:39:80 (1,2,3,4) -
03:11:30 (1,2,3,4) -
03:17:30 (1,2,3,4) -
// fixed! no more jump now.

Some things in Hard that could look better on the outside~
I would have to say take 1 tick off of HP Drain on hutka's Hard.
^ This is so that Insane can be at the bottom instead of in the middle of the song select screen.
Also a suggestion: Capitalize the H in hard? I mean since you're name doesn't have it's h capitalized, it could work I guess.
Add hutka's name in the tag of his difficulty.
// fixed


Some things in Insane that might be unrankable~
01:41:30 (1,1) - These spinners are too short. (They don't go over 2k on auto) But I really like them.
03:18:80 (1,1) - Maybe you can get away with these short spinners. Good luck!
// removed 2st spinner and extended 1st spinner's length to when 2nd spinner's end

Very, very nice!

Yes wrote:

oo cool song! here's just some suggestions that i have while looking through. none of them are necessary at all but just my opinion of what would sound good so do what you will n_n

insane
00:54:80 (x) - noteee here? // added
01:04:92 (7) - finish at the end of this slider // unchanged
01:06:80 (x) - // added
01:13:36 (4) - new combo // fixed
01:17:30 (5) - whistle // ^
01:26:67 (6,7,8) - add some hitsound here. maybe clap? // changed a little bit different way
01:29:30 (5) - whistle // fixed
02:03:80 (4) - finish // I considered hitsound of 02:07:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11), so unchanged
02:06:80 (4) - finish // ^
02:30:42 (7) - finish at end of slider? // fixed
02:35:30 (9) - new combo // ^
02:42:42 (7) - instead of whistle at end of slider maybe a finish // unchanged
02:54:80 (5) - whistle // fixed
02:57:80 (5) - ^ // ^
03:04:17 (6,7,8) - claps? // changed a little bit different way
03:06:80 (5) - whistle // fixed
03:09:80 (5) - ^ // ^

easy
00:24:80 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern is kinda boring ._. // fixed
00:44:30 (1) - clap at 00:45:05 // fixed
01:35:30 (1) - clap at end of slider? // unchanged
01:36:05 (2) - ^ // ^
01:41:30 (1) - ^ // ^
01:42:05 (2) - ^ // ^
01:47:30 (3) - new combo for jumps? also, might be a little hard for an easy mode so put them closer together?
// changed to new combo.But spacing unchanged. I think it is quite easy.
02:10:55 (4,5) - clap // unchanged
02:32:30 (1,2,3) - ^ // unchanged. Here is quiet part.
02:35:30 (5,6) - finish at beginning of slider? // ^
02:48:80 (7) - i think it would sound nice if you put clap at 02:49:17 too // unchanged
03:12:80 (1,2) - clap at end of slider? // ^

hard
00:23:76 - for this timing section maybe lower the volume a little until it gets to the part when the drums start? (around 00:36:61)
01:18:23 (x) - maybe add a note here with a clap?
02:34:36 (x) - note
02:55:92 (x) - ^
02:58:36 (x) - ^
03:06:05 (6) - remove clap
03:06:05 (6) - clap
03:06:80 (2) - finish
// It's up to hutka

star for a great map (:

haruhiteamsos wrote:

wow~ a fun map ^^

star!

hvick225 wrote:

Good

quintitem wrote:

really nice map

stared <3

Larto wrote:

Overall:
I really suggest removing the countdown on all difficulties. It sounds.. weird. // fixed

Kiai:
Imho, the only parts where there should be Kiai is at the first chorus and at the second chorus. The Kiai on hutka's diff is very very weird. // fixed to same kiai time as Insane

hutka's Hard:
03:13:54 (1,1) - remove new combos, the way you did the FIRST time this pattern appeared.
The last spinner is shorter than the ones on Insane and Easy. Change? // fixed both

EEeee wrote:

In addition to larto's post, this map looks good, , , , , just fix all ur breaks in both diffs not including insane, all of them end early, just re-add em // fixed!

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Timing:
Sounds fine

- Easy:
Great, but i have a suggestion for this Kiai section:
Inherited offset 95800 - If you used this only to remove kiai, don't you think it's better to move it at 95050? It will remove the "pulse" effect better imho
EDIT: i fail, it was 105800 xD, so move to 105050 xD // fixed XD

- Hutka's Hard:
02:59:30 (1) - This one almost fooled me. It should be ok, but i'd move it a bit farther // fixed

- Insane:
Good, but imho circles are too big. // I considered high overall and jumps. so I'll not change circle size.

Great map, star ^^

Lissette wrote:

Easy
i found this to hard for an easy diff, that's my opinion, you should be mercy with combo here, idk :p
// oops. Think 'this is a little bit hard Easy diff' please. not for just beginner.

hutka's Hard
01:01:55 - add note?
01:05:11 (1) - end point at 01:06:05
I found this harder than the Insane xD
// because so tricky XD. hutka will edit these things.

Insane
00:47:48 (1) - start point next white tick // current is right. listen carefully with playback rate 25% *1
00:57:80 (5) - new combo? // fixed
01:41:30 (1) - end point of the spinner at 01:41:30 with sound, if you do.....
01:42:80 (1) - move the start point one tick later, end point just where it is
// 01:41:30 (1) was separated 2 spinners when I made it first. but it didn't go over 2000 bonus point by auto. so I made it to 1 spinner. also 01:42:80 (1) is no problem. It is same to anyother diffs. *2
01:47:30 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - if i were you I'll put this in one combo n.n, but i'm not you lol, so can let it like that
// sorry, this is intentional.
02:13:36 (1) - start point next white tick // *1
03:18:80 (1,1) - same suggestion of 01:41:30 (1) n.n // *2
I love how you map the chorus parts >.<

Star!! Very nice map!

v2b wrote:

easy:
00:33:80 (7) - make it end at 00:35:300 // fixed


hard:
00:59:48 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - really confusing spacing,I can only catch on it in editor.maybe change it?
02:55:92 (1) - remove new combo
02:56:30 (2) - new combo


insane:
02:38:86 - maybe add a finish hitsound note here? // fixed

star

ignorethis wrote:

Offset is off. Apply +15~+20 to all difficulties. // fixed to +15ms

<Easy>
01:50:300 - Add a note? // denied
03:20:30 (1) - Make this spinner silence at the end. // fixed

<Hard>
00:35:86 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make gradual volume change plz. Soft hitsounds changing directly into normal ones sounds horrible. // fixed
00:59:48 (1,2) - A bit unreadable. // ^
03:20:30 (1) - silence. // ^

<Insane>
00:47:48 (1) - This one looks ridiculous. // I don't think so. Nobody said that until now.
01:50:300 - A note here. // denied
02:13:36 (1) - ^ // ^
02:45:80 (11) - New combo. // Intentional
03:20:30 (1) - silence. // fixed