haruhiteamsos wrote:

wow~ a fun map ^^

star!

hvick225 wrote:

Good

quintitem wrote:

really nice map

stared <3

Larto wrote:

Overall:
I really suggest removing the countdown on all difficulties. It sounds.. weird. // fixed

Kiai:
Imho, the only parts where there should be Kiai is at the first chorus and at the second chorus. The Kiai on hutka's diff is very very weird. // fixed to same kiai time as Insane

hutka's Hard:
03:13:54 (1,1) - remove new combos, the way you did the FIRST time this pattern appeared.
The last spinner is shorter than the ones on Insane and Easy. Change? // fixed both

EEeee wrote:

In addition to larto's post, this map looks good, , , , , just fix all ur breaks in both diffs not including insane, all of them end early, just re-add em // fixed!

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Timing:
Sounds fine

- Easy:
Great, but i have a suggestion for this Kiai section:
Inherited offset 95800 - If you used this only to remove kiai, don't you think it's better to move it at 95050? It will remove the "pulse" effect better imho
EDIT: i fail, it was 105800 xD, so move to 105050 xD // fixed XD

- Hutka's Hard:
02:59:30 (1) - This one almost fooled me. It should be ok, but i'd move it a bit farther // fixed

- Insane:
Good, but imho circles are too big. // I considered high overall and jumps. so I'll not change circle size.

Great map, star ^^

Lissette wrote:

Easy
i found this to hard for an easy diff, that's my opinion, you should be mercy with combo here, idk :p
// oops. Think 'this is a little bit hard Easy diff' please. not for just beginner.

hutka's Hard
01:01:55 - add note?
01:05:11 (1) - end point at 01:06:05
I found this harder than the Insane xD
// because so tricky XD. hutka will edit these things.

Insane
00:47:48 (1) - start point next white tick // current is right. listen carefully with playback rate 25% *1
00:57:80 (5) - new combo? // fixed
01:41:30 (1) - end point of the spinner at 01:41:30 with sound, if you do.....
01:42:80 (1) - move the start point one tick later, end point just where it is
// 01:41:30 (1) was separated 2 spinners when I made it first. but it didn't go over 2000 bonus point by auto. so I made it to 1 spinner. also 01:42:80 (1) is no problem. It is same to anyother diffs. *2
01:47:30 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - if i were you I'll put this in one combo n.n, but i'm not you lol, so can let it like that
// sorry, this is intentional.
02:13:36 (1) - start point next white tick // *1
03:18:80 (1,1) - same suggestion of 01:41:30 (1) n.n // *2
I love how you map the chorus parts >.<

Star!! Very nice map!

v2b wrote:

easy:
00:33:80 (7) - make it end at 00:35:300 // fixed


hard:
00:59:48 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - really confusing spacing,I can only catch on it in editor.maybe change it?
02:55:92 (1) - remove new combo
02:56:30 (2) - new combo


insane:
02:38:86 - maybe add a finish hitsound note here? // fixed

star

ignorethis wrote:

Offset is off. Apply +15~+20 to all difficulties. // fixed to +15ms

<Easy>
01:50:300 - Add a note? // denied
03:20:30 (1) - Make this spinner silence at the end. // fixed

<Hard>
00:35:86 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make gradual volume change plz. Soft hitsounds changing directly into normal ones sounds horrible. // fixed
00:59:48 (1,2) - A bit unreadable. // ^
03:20:30 (1) - silence. // ^

<Insane>
00:47:48 (1) - This one looks ridiculous. // I don't think so. Nobody said that until now.
01:50:300 - A note here. // denied
02:13:36 (1) - ^ // ^
02:45:80 (11) - New combo. // Intentional
03:20:30 (1) - silence. // fixed

Tanmak wrote:

Good Job~~~

Lizbeth wrote:

nice jumps n_n

suggestions

Insane
02:14:31 (1,2,3) - after a few retry finally hit those under the repeating slid.. @.@ is confusiong imo. you decid if you keep it // Yes, it's confusing at first time. But I'll keep it. BTW I found wrong position of repeat slider. Thanks.
02:34:94 - add a note // denied. bcuz I made this part as fit at vocal.

hutka's Hard
01:42:81 (1) - move the start of spinner and add note here... // fixed

Easy
this is hard. why not rename it to normal?
01:47:31 (1,2,3,4) - no jumps on easy or normal // no jumps now. Keep the name Easy.

good map
Star

Lissette wrote:

hope you can get it rank soon

Armin wrote:

-Easy
00:52:940 Add also a finish to the start
01:16:190(2,4) Add claps
01:17:315 Add a clap to the end
01:19:190(2,4) Add claps
01:20:315 Add a clap to the end
01:22:190 (2) Add a clap to the start; remove the clap at the end
01:23:315 Add a clap
Add hitsounds as above in the second part of the song (obv if you like it)
// added almost claps. a part of claps excluded.

-hutka's Hard
00:48:440 add a clap?
02:25:940 add a clap to the start?

-Insane
All fine n_n

Starred, I liked the last difficulty

mrtn wrote:

set a preview time in all difficulties
// Do you mean countdown? It was weird. so I removed it.

[hutka's hard]
the 1/4 triples sound really weird
// hutka's style

mrtn wrote:

set a preview time in all difficulties

1. Something weird I noticed... Does the artist really needs to be "AKINO from bless4"? What does that "bless4" mean? You should remove that, to keep consistency with the other ranked maps.
2. Also, cut the mp3 if you can.

Gens wrote:

[General]

1. Something weird I noticed... Does the artist really needs to be "AKINO from bless4"? What does that "bless4" mean? You should remove that, to keep consistency with the other ranked maps.
2. Also, cut the mp3 if you can.

Everything else checks out for me. I will admit the song was kind of catchy~

orioncomet wrote:

^^~

Gothic wrote:

스타

Yes wrote:

yaaaay!! congrats on 1st ranked map n_n