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Beat Crusaders - Tonight Tonight Tonight [Osu|OsuMania|Taiko

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Pappy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2 lipca 2014 at 13:20:28

Artist: Beat Crusaders
Title: Tonight Tonight Tonight
Source: Bleach
Tags: Krfawy lZenxl KK Kuo Kyoka Kurokami KerryShenSA Rukia Ichigo Kurosaki shonen opening
BPM: 178
Filesize: 14368kb
Play Time: 01:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Beginner (1,29 stars, 47 notes)
  2. Easy (1,82 stars, 93 notes)
  3. Hard (3,27 stars, 156 notes)
  4. Hollow (5,65 stars, 382 notes)
  5. KK's 7K Easy - 7Key (1,22 stars, 223 notes)
  6. KK's 7K Normal - 7Key (1,73 stars, 325 notes)
  7. Krfawy's Insane (4,46 stars, 262 notes)
  8. KSSA's Futsuu (1,85 stars, 161 notes)
  9. KSSA's Kantan (1,33 stars, 102 notes)
  10. Kurokami's Rain (6,04 stars, 267 notes)
  11. Kurokami's Salad (4,7 stars, 135 notes)
  12. lZenxl's 7K Hard - 7Key (3,27 stars, 698 notes)
  13. lZenxl's 7K Insane - 7Key (3,58 stars, 801 notes)
  14. Muzukashii (2,46 stars, 235 notes)
  15. Normal (2,18 stars, 136 notes)
  16. qoot8123's Oni (3,85 stars, 448 notes)
Download: Beat Crusaders - Tonight Tonight Tonight
Download: Beat Crusaders - Tonight Tonight Tonight (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st Beatmap for rank of course!
IT'S TV SIZE SONG
Redownload before 09.05.2014 new mp3 plz

Mapset
Standard - Done!
Beginner - WiP!
Easy+ - Done!
Normal - Done!
Hard - WiP! o3o
Krfawy's Insane - By Krfawy - Done!
Hollow - Lalalala done! XD
Mania - Done
KK's 7K Easy - By Kuo Kyoka - Done!
KK's 7K Normal - By Kuo Kyoka - Done!
lZenxl's 7K Hard - By lZenxl - Done!
lZenxl's 7K Insane - By lZenxl - Done!
Taiko - Done!
KSSA's Kantan - By KerryShenSA - Done!
KSSA's Futsuu - By KerryShenSA - Done!
Muzukashii - Done
qoot8123's Oni - By qoot8123 - Done!
Catch The Beat - Done!
Kurokami's Salad - By Kurokami - Done!
Kurokami's Rain - By Kurokami - Done!
Thanks to:
•Krfawy for mod, timing check, diff and big help, love <3

•Winek for mod& star

•Kaken1 for mod

•lZenxl for mod & osu!mania diffs

•Dainesl for mod

•Dariano for mod

•qoot8123 for taiko diff

•absflg for mod

•Kibbleru for mod & star

•ConanCloud for testing

•richardfeder for mod

•YunoFanatic for mod

•Kuo Kyoka for osu!mania diffs

•Kurokami for CtB diffs

•AW-sama for mod

•Love for mod

•eeezzzeee for mod

•KerryShenSA for taiko diffs

•Lapis Aoki for mod & star

•Konpaku Sariel for mod

•Sey for mod

•Shana Lesus for star


•Knotts for mod

•Yue for mod

•Natsu for mod

•moonlightleaf for mod

•-S c a r l e t- for mod

•Kurodragon for mod

OnosakiHito for mod

•No Dap for mod

•Kazuya-sama for mod

•CLSW for mod

Shi-Ra for mania icon <3

•10crystalmask01 for mod

•Hollow Wings for mod

•Genocide for mod

•Tagre for mod

•Serena- for mod

•OniJAM for mod

•neonat for mod

•mingmichael for mod

Kaken1
easy;

00:32:520 put something here.
00:54:093 Althought it goes with the rythm it was really ackward for me this

normal:

00:43:306 stop the slider here and put a circle here 00:43:643
01:11:958 I don't like this spin

Krfawy's Bounto mix :3
00:35:722 this 2 are strange to play
01:12:969 the change in the slider here should be fixed. Or by slowing down putting a little more notes before

Bankai

00:07:576 is strange...
Complains about the slider speed in general. Try to make it a little more forseenable. The whole level should have more or less (more or less) the same speed.
Winek
Yo dude, wazzup. PM request are nice :D

[Kuro Shikai]
00:16:340 - Place some note there dude
00:18:025 (2) - I tihnk there is a DS problem there dude
00:19:374 (4) - New combo Dude
00:21:733 - Don't leave here a blank space full of nithing dude, it doesn't feel at all.
00:32:857 (2) - Seriously the whistle don't feel it dude
00:41:621 (3) - This sllider should finish at 00:41:958 dude, and place a note at 00:42:295
00:42:632 (1,3) - Consider changing these two. These are awkward dude
00:46:677 (4) - New combo + Dat distance snap Dude
00:53:756 (5) - New Combo due to the DS change, dude
01:18:025 (3,4,5,6,7) - These don't feel with Normal hitsound use soft dude

[Shikai]
00:10:947 (1,2) - These overlaps are not really good for Normal dude
00:13:643 (1) - Remove NC dude
00:27:464 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nazi dude, they overlap.
00:31:509 (2,1) - Overlaps no good dude
00:35:553 (1,2,3,4) - No good DS dude

[Bankai]
00:10:947 (1,4) - Dude stack well
00:42:295 (1) - Just replace that with a circle dude
00:44:992 (5) - Dude drum? Seriously it feel horrible
01:01:509 (3) - Same X axis as previous note dude

Bounto Mix is fine I guess dude

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Yeah i warned you don't open the box dude :P

Hopes i helped you.
Topic Starter
Pappy

Winek wrote:

Yo dude, wazzup. PM request are nice :D

[Kuro Shikai]
ALL FIXED XD
00:16:340 - Place some note there dude
00:18:025 (2) - I tihnk there is a DS problem there dude
00:19:374 (4) - New combo Dude
00:21:733 - Don't leave here a blank space full of nithing dude, it doesn't feel at all.
00:32:857 (2) - Seriously the whistle don't feel it dude
00:41:621 (3) - This sllider should finish at 00:41:958 dude, and place a note at 00:42:295
00:42:632 (1,3) - Consider changing these two. These are awkward dude
00:46:677 (4) - New combo + Dat distance snap Dude
00:53:756 (5) - New Combo due to the DS change, dude
01:18:025 (3,4,5,6,7) - These don't feel with Normal hitsound use soft dude

[Shikai]
00:10:947 (1,2) - These overlaps are not really good for Normal dude FIXED
00:13:643 (1) - Remove NC dude WAT ;_;
00:27:464 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nazi dude, they overlap. FIXED
00:31:509 (2,1) - Overlaps no good dude FIXED
00:35:553 (1,2,3,4) - No good DS dude FIXED

[Bankai]
00:10:947 (1,4) - Dude stack well FIXED
00:42:295 (1) - Just replace that with a circle dude FIXED
00:44:992 (5) - Dude drum? Seriously it feel horrible FIXED
01:01:509 (3) - Same X axis as previous note dude wat ;_;

Bounto Mix is fine I guess dude NO IT'S VERY BAD XDDDDDDDDDD

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Yeah i warned you don't open the box dude :P Sorry, i oppened dude X.x

Hopes i helped you.

Kaken1 wrote:

easy;

00:32:520 put something here. FIXED
00:54:093 Althought it goes with the rythm it was really ackward for me this FIXED

normal:

00:43:306 stop the slider here and put a circle here 00:43:643 FIXED
01:11:958 I don't like this spin FIXED

Krfawy's Bounto mix :3
00:35:722 this 2 are strange to play I don't know how to change :c
01:12:969 the change in the slider here should be fixed. Or by slowing down putting a little more notes before ^

Bankai

00:07:576 is strange... FIXED
Complains about the slider speed in general. Try to make it a little more forseenable. The whole level should have more or less (more or less) the same speed.
Thanks Winek for star O.o
Very thanks to Winek and Kaken1 i love you <333333333333333333333333333333333333333 And sorry Kaken1 for lately reply XD
Kaken1
Ok after this edit i downloaded it again and here is my review:

Easy:

No complains

Normal:

No complains

Bankai:

No complains except this : 00:21:733 place this somewhere else. It goes with the rythm but it's difficult to see.

00:22:070 You would never guess this has a star shape...

Tha's all

Insane: Don't have enought level for this... :(

If you liked it try to mod this please.... https://osu.ppy.sh/s/141259
Topic Starter
Pappy

Kaken1 wrote:

Ok after this edit i downloaded it again and here is my review:

Easy:

No complains

Normal:

No complains

Bankai:

No complains except this : 00:21:733 place this somewhere else. It goes with the rythm but it's difficult to see. FIXED

00:22:070 You would never guess this has a star shape... Changed pattern XD

Tha's all

Insane: Don't have enought level for this... :(

If you liked it try to mod this please.... https://osu.ppy.sh/s/141259 Okay, wait... XD
Evening
Please DON'T kudosu

hmm rarely mapped MX and HD, will nerf the diff.s' patterns if they're too hard

I added 2 hitsounds for those diffs

7K MX and HD
Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/ot67yntz9iu8b ... IZE%5D.rar
Dariano
IRC mod
19:13 Dariano: Hi
19:13 Papcio: Hi
19:13 Papcio: :3
19:13 Dariano: ;)
19:13 Dariano: Uhm
19:14 Dariano: Can I IRC mod your map?
19:15 Papcio: What is IRC? ;_;
19:15 Dariano: Like modding through chat
19:16 Papcio: Aa, okay XD
19:16 Dariano: Then I post the log of our chat in the threads
19:16 Dariano: Okay ready to start?
19:16 Papcio: Okay, ready.
19:17 Dariano: Preview Time in easy
19:17 Dariano: differs from others
19:17 Dariano: But anyways
19:18 Dariano: Whats with that time preview
19:18 Dariano: It is supposed to be the best part of the song
19:18 Dariano: so when you click the map on the menu, it encourages you to play it
19:19 Papcio: Okay, changed
19:20 Dariano: Make sure to do that in every difficult
19:22 Dariano: the countdown
19:22 Papcio: Okay, in all diffs changed
19:22 Dariano: Since the 2 mania difficulties
19:22 Dariano: have no countdown
19:22 Dariano: yours shouldn't have
19:23 Dariano: wait, let me ask someone
19:23 Dariano: to be 100% sure first
19:23 Dariano: Meanwhile
19:23 Dariano: The map's name
19:24 Dariano: It shouldn't be [TV SIZE]
19:24 Dariano: It's suppose to be (TV Size)
19:25 Papcio: How to change name in all diffs at once?
19:26 Dariano: You can't
19:26 Dariano: I think
19:26 Dariano: do it with one, then copy the name
19:26 Dariano: and paste it in the others
19:28 Papcio: Okay, done ^^
19:28 Dariano: :)
19:28 *Dariano is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/345416 Beat Crusaders - Tonight Tonight Tonight [TV SIZE] [Easy]]
19:28 Dariano: go to Easy
19:29 *Papcio is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/345416 Beat Crusaders - Tonight Tonight Tonight (TV Size) [Easy]]
19:29 Dariano: okey
19:29 Dariano: go to timing > panel
19:29 Dariano: delete this
19:29 Papcio: Okay
19:29 Dariano: http://puu.sh/6NEjZ.png
19:30 Dariano: and the one after it
19:30 Dariano: no wait
19:30 Dariano: dont erase the last one
19:30 Dariano: type this on the last one's offset 82745
19:31 Dariano: In easy difficults you cannot put a spinner right before a note
19:31 Dariano: That's too hard!
19:31 Dariano: so I sugest you to replace this with a slider
19:31 Dariano: 00:15:497 (1) -
19:32 Papcio: Replaced :D
19:32 Dariano: 00:36:565 (1) - Make this spinner end
19:33 Dariano: 00:38:587 -
19:33 Dariano: here
19:33 Dariano: And add a hit circle here
19:33 Dariano: 00:39:261 -
19:34 Dariano: 01:11:789 (1) -
19:34 Dariano: replace that
19:35 Dariano: In easy difficulties you cannot disable the distance snap thing
19:35 Dariano: Beginners cannot jump, they will fnd the map very hard to play
19:35 Dariano: And I've noticed that you didn't use it in some parts
19:36 Dariano: so I recommend you to, with the Distance snap button activated, start moving the notes
19:37 Dariano: The thing that I told you about the timing points in the panel, do it again in normal difficult
19:37 Dariano: And Try to start the map here
19:37 Dariano: 00:05:553 -
19:37 Dariano: in the easy difficult
19:37 Dariano: because all the other difficulties starts there
19:37 Dariano: except for the easy
19:38 Dariano: Well I gtg for now, I hope this helped in anything
19:38 Papcio: It helped a lot :D
19:39 Dariano: When you're done mapping, press CTRL + SHIFT + A to check if the difficult has some errors
19:39 Dariano: that can help a bit
19:39 Dariano: :)
absflg
General
- I don't like preview. I suggest 00:16:677 .
- The video must have removed audio.
- Video has terrible quality.
I send you better video on pm.
Topic Starter
Pappy

absflg wrote:

General
- I don't like preview. I suggest 00:16:677 .
- The video must have removed audio.
- Video has terrible quality.
I send you better video on pm.
Oh my god, BIG thanks or video! *0*
I will change preview in next uptade! :) Ehh, i think mine preview show title of the song so mine is good :3
Kibbleru
m4m
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/144367

[General]
use grid level 4 for blanket adjustments

also i would try to keep the distance snapping to around 1x... its just that sometimes, the sliders go alot faster than the beats and it just catches people off guard

also the slider velocity multipliers you used on the hard and insane difficulties are about the same or sometimes even lower than the ones you used in easy. if you want your map to be harder, increase the slider velocity multipliers (i mean the ones on the timeline). then you have that 1.5 slider velocity multiplier in your easy that should not be there lol imo.

[Insane]

ur spacing keeps on changing it might be a bit confusing

00:19:373 (1) - fix blanket

00:13:643 (3) - try not to reverse a 1/1 slider more than once. i suggest putting more sliders here or something

00:14:655 (4) - i don't like the looks of this slider lol. you can probably map this out a little more, since this IS insane i mean

00:15:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why is the spacing here so different?

00:18:868 (9) - this one is slightly out of place

00:22:070 (1) - blanket 00:21:733 (6)?

00:24:430 (1,2) - these 2 don't look good together. if you want to do something like this try using a blanket
00:25:441 (3,4) - also how bout blanketing these with 00:25:104 (2) -

00:27:463 (1,3) - fix this blanket up a little

00:30:160 (1,2) - how bout something like this? http://gyazo.com/15f548777e151668f4c0995d6a2387cb
00:31:509 (3,4) - same here http://gyazo.com/78f804b92c8d5dbb330d88f8a5fc935b

00:39:767 (2) - how bout a blanket at the end so it fits better with 00:40:610 (3)?

00:45:160 (2,3,4,5) - this looks a bit weird

01:13:475 (4) - this slider caught me off guard since all of a sudden i had to move so fast after the slow circles here 01:12:969 (1,2,3). My suggestion would be increase the spacing here 01:12:969 (1,2,3).

01:18:362 (5,6,7,8) - try limiting to 1 repeat. add a circle like this for a simple fix. http://gyazo.com/2332372582a576b20a3675afbd01f4c9
http://gyazo.com/8e1e6bbaf0f523228af98ed0df8aac5f

01:22:407 (2) - this slider velocity change will catch people off. you can simply map this out with circles or something

also, imho, 4.5 stars is a little too easy for an insane



[Hard]

00:05:553 (1,2,3) - space these out a little more. they overlap each other just barely and it looks bad

00:12:295 (5,7) - not too much of a fan for this overlap :I, looks kinda bad
just a suggestion here, you can replace (7) with 2 circles and have the timeline look like this http://gyazo.com/1c7ade148ea7a1aa9f7e7b3378ec06ca
so basically i moved the new combo to the end of the old (7) and you can have 2 stacks of 3 circles http://gyazo.com/a788533cf120d40cd23139ec00266727

00:24:093 (3,5) - this overlap looks bad again :I

00:30:160 (4) - again, limit to 1 repeat. put a circle elsewhere or something

00:30:834 - 00:33:531 - take out some of your finishes.

00:40:273 (3) - fix blanket

00:58:980 (2,3,4,5) - fix blanket, i suggest just repositioning (6)

01:08:250 - 01:08:250 - insert a break here, people gunna die from hp drain otherwise



[Normal]

remove some of those awkward breaks

00:13:643 (1,1) - how bout making sliders here, newbies are going to get confused here because of how the previous 00:10:947 (1,1) are spaced out in the timeline

00:21:733 - 00:25:778 - this break is kinda random
00:44:992 - 00:48:700 - again, random break lol

00:43:306 (1) - fix blanket

00:57:801 (3,4,5,6) - this WILL confuse some newer players

01:23:756 (1,1) - space out the sliders more. i'd say put at least 1/1 between them

01:18:362 (5) - errg feels weird. i think it should end at 01:18:700
01:19:037 (6) - and this should start at 01:18:868

01:19:711 (1) - should end 1/2 earlier
01:20:385 (2) - same here



[Easy]

00:09:598 (5) - whats with this spacing change??

00:13:643 (7,8,1) - this spacing will confuse people. don't stack beats that are so far apart on the timeline

00:40:947 (4,1) - this overlap looks bad

00:41:958 (1,4) - these also MIGHT overlap and would look bad if they did

00:55:104 (2,4) - gunna be bold here, they look ugly lol

01:13:053 - 1.5 slider velocity??? r u sure you should be using that in an easy difficulty? also why does it start at such a random spot lol xD
also another problem is with u using 0.5x distance snapping, and you change ur slider velocity to 1.5, people will be having huge spacing jumps during the sliders. and that is definitely something you want to avoid

01:22:745 (1) - move this 1/2 earlier
Topic Starter
Pappy

Kibbleru wrote:

m4m
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/144367

[General]
use grid level 4 for blanket adjustments

also i would try to keep the distance snapping to around 1x... its just that sometimes, the sliders go alot faster than the beats and it just catches people off guard

also the slider velocity multipliers you used on the hard and insane difficulties are about the same or sometimes even lower than the ones you used in easy. if you want your map to be harder, increase the slider velocity multipliers (i mean the ones on the timeline). then you have that 1.5 slider velocity multiplier in your easy that should not be there lol imo.

[Insane]

ur spacing keeps on changing it might be a bit confusing

00:19:373 (1) - fix blanket

00:13:643 (3) - try not to reverse a 1/1 slider more than once. i suggest putting more sliders here or something

00:14:655 (4) - i don't like the looks of this slider lol. you can probably map this out a little more, since this IS insane i mean

00:15:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why is the spacing here so different?

00:18:868 (9) - this one is slightly out of place

00:22:070 (1) - blanket 00:21:733 (6)?

00:24:430 (1,2) - these 2 don't look good together. if you want to do something like this try using a blanket
00:25:441 (3,4) - also how bout blanketing these with 00:25:104 (2) -

00:27:463 (1,3) - fix this blanket up a little

00:30:160 (1,2) - how bout something like this? http://gyazo.com/15f548777e151668f4c0995d6a2387cb
00:31:509 (3,4) - same here http://gyazo.com/78f804b92c8d5dbb330d88f8a5fc935b

00:39:767 (2) - how bout a blanket at the end so it fits better with 00:40:610 (3)?

00:45:160 (2,3,4,5) - this looks a bit weird

01:13:475 (4) - this slider caught me off guard since all of a sudden i had to move so fast after the slow circles here 01:12:969 (1,2,3). My suggestion would be increase the spacing here 01:12:969 (1,2,3).

01:18:362 (5,6,7,8) - try limiting to 1 repeat. add a circle like this for a simple fix. http://gyazo.com/2332372582a576b20a3675afbd01f4c9
http://gyazo.com/8e1e6bbaf0f523228af98ed0df8aac5f

01:22:407 (2) - this slider velocity change will catch people off. you can simply map this out with circles or something

also, imho, 4.5 stars is a little too easy for an insane



[Hard]

00:05:553 (1,2,3) - space these out a little more. they overlap each other just barely and it looks bad

00:12:295 (5,7) - not too much of a fan for this overlap :I, looks kinda bad
just a suggestion here, you can replace (7) with 2 circles and have the timeline look like this http://gyazo.com/1c7ade148ea7a1aa9f7e7b3378ec06ca
so basically i moved the new combo to the end of the old (7) and you can have 2 stacks of 3 circles http://gyazo.com/a788533cf120d40cd23139ec00266727

00:24:093 (3,5) - this overlap looks bad again :I

00:30:160 (4) - again, limit to 1 repeat. put a circle elsewhere or something

00:30:834 - 00:33:531 - take out some of your finishes.

00:40:273 (3) - fix blanket

00:58:980 (2,3,4,5) - fix blanket, i suggest just repositioning (6)

01:08:250 - 01:08:250 - insert a break here, people gunna die from hp drain otherwise



[Normal]

remove some of those awkward breaks

00:13:643 (1,1) - how bout making sliders here, newbies are going to get confused here because of how the previous 00:10:947 (1,1) are spaced out in the timeline

00:21:733 - 00:25:778 - this break is kinda random
00:44:992 - 00:48:700 - again, random break lol

00:43:306 (1) - fix blanket

00:57:801 (3,4,5,6) - this WILL confuse some newer players

01:23:756 (1,1) - space out the sliders more. i'd say put at least 1/1 between them

01:18:362 (5) - errg feels weird. i think it should end at 01:18:700
01:19:037 (6) - and this should start at 01:18:868

01:19:711 (1) - should end 1/2 earlier
01:20:385 (2) - same here



[Easy]

00:09:598 (5) - whats with this spacing change??

00:13:643 (7,8,1) - this spacing will confuse people. don't stack beats that are so far apart on the timeline

00:40:947 (4,1) - this overlap looks bad

00:41:958 (1,4) - these also MIGHT overlap and would look bad if they did

00:55:104 (2,4) - gunna be bold here, they look ugly lol

01:13:053 - 1.5 slider velocity??? r u sure you should be using that in an easy difficulty? also why does it start at such a random spot lol xD
also another problem is with u using 0.5x distance snapping, and you change ur slider velocity to 1.5, people will be having huge spacing jumps during the sliders. and that is definitely something you want to avoid

01:22:745 (1) - move this 1/2 earlier
FIXED ALL

I'm going to change it all tomorrow becaouse my dad stolen my laptop, m4m too tomorrow, sorry >.< Now i'm going to mod your map ^^
Evening
Don't KUDOSU

I think your video should be (Around)~ -516 offset
Topic Starter
Pappy

lZenxl wrote:

Don't KUDOSU

I think your video should be (Around)~ -516 offset
Changed to -506, thanks! ^^
Kibbleru
tbh some of ur patterns look ugly/boring. here are some suggestions <-- suggestions so you dont have to take them

[Insane]

00:15:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think this looks would look nice http://gyazo.com/831d5a6830f72ade2a375438020b9cef

00:14:655 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this like 00:13:643 (3,4,5) http://gyazo.com/2afd99ea9f671d64c36e625bb4ed7753
(doesnt have to be like this, i just thought it looked nice :P)

00:24:430 (1) - i think it'd be better if it was like this or something, because as of now it's kind of.. idk.. this just looks better for me
http://gyazo.com/d580ca2fba650dbbe76b1a6aa0c62a11

00:25:104 (2,3,4) - this is what it should look like; http://gyazo.com/b428c4a8dd25328ee7f586663814f5ca

00:28:475 (3) - this blanket still needs adjusting .-. use grid level 4!! use the warning circles from (2) as shown
http://gyazo.com/40b284fde0fd16ee2484baca59bfc289

00:29:317 (4,5,6,7) - you can probably blanket these in with (2) as well http://gyazo.com/4b6ef7bbd612bcdfaf0c26cbb7302018

00:39:767 (2) - try something like this; http://gyazo.com/c48210bcd9ce5c19b6730de2605cba02

the general idea is try to keep the amount of slider points low to make them look simpler but nicer. 00:42:464 (2) this one is a nice one :P

00:43:307 (3,4,5,6,7) - curve looks a bit bumpy :P
00:45:160 (2,3,4,5) - ^

00:53:418 (3,4) - how bout a blanket here; http://gyazo.com/fa694d67aac390c3284dd20efd423121
00:54:093 (4,5) - same here
00:55:778 (6) - you'll have to move this one a bit if you did the above

01:04:205 (2,3,4) - this triangle looks.. meh i'd move (4) to x320 y148

01:05:890 (1) - hmm if i were you i'd make this slider start at 01:06:228 and add a circle at 01:05:890
also if you want a curve, just use 3 slider points, not 9
http://gyazo.com/105b096f2fcbe407874094a14dbed5f2
notice that (5) and (6) are stacked

01:13:475 (4) - ugly.. sry eue like this maybe? http://gyazo.com/19db8064a21443e6c7a3696f9e5de283
bleh that looks pretty bad too lol

the thing about sliders is that you want them to fit in with its surroundings, which is why blankets look so nice

01:18:362 (1,3,5,2,3) - you can probably curve these slightly
here's an idea... i cant take them all in one pic so ill send 2 lol xD
http://gyazo.com/da640236e16e289094545b8f05486caf
http://gyazo.com/9704882d8b0c2a516086993d3394f4bc
i hope u get the idea tho

01:21:564 (1,2) - make a blanket with these http://gyazo.com/5247aa617c3eb14e4b45453a46f47665




[Hard]

00:05:553 (1,3) - make these 2 look more like 1 slider; http://gyazo.com/3c3743d3eabdb7e786497f3923e02693 (turn of grid snap if needed, but definitely use grid level 4!)

00:07:576 (4) - i think would flow better if it curved the other way

00:11:284 (2,5) - blanket?

00:12:295 (5,7,8) - not stacked properly (turn of grid snap if needed)

00:24:093 (3,4,5) - have (3) blanket (4) and flip (5) around; http://gyazo.com/931d1305108d5870b51ca810606caa1c
also have (4) stack with the end of (2); http://gyazo.com/dd730ca218e6d4b211abea18c68e6f9b

00:34:205 (3,1) - make these 2 look better together by curving (3) a bit; http://gyazo.com/07ee27f8ddaaa3bcf6496ae2b4c81ad7

[Normal]

00:05:553 - 00:12:969 - more curved sliders ><

00:43:306 (1) - this blanket needs fixing

00:46:003 (4) - something like this :o http://gyazo.com/e0f6683344e280abf7e583f7a69bcdf3



k im gunna stop before this seems like my own map lol

that was longer than i expected :I
absflg
Easy
Most spinners feel too hard for easy.
00:46:340 (1,1,1) - maybe replace these with one spinner?

Normal
00:48:700 (1) - add cymbal sound and
00:50:048 (2) - NC

00:13:643 (1) - remove NC?
00:41:958 (3) - NC

Hard
01:00:834 (1,3) - why are these sliders faster? There is similar part in 00:50:048 and sliders are slower. It confuse a bit no matter how many times I play it.

Insane
00:08:250 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - I know it look prettier in that way. But spacing confuse.
00:15:498 (1) - try remove NC and add finish sound on that note.
Topic Starter
Pappy
Big thanks mods!~
Sorry, i didn't do insane fixes becaouse Krfawy is remapping this XD
Kibbleru
hmm.

tell ur insane GD guy to fix up his blankets and watch out for ugly/unintentional overlaps; i see some already
Krfawy
http://puu.sh/6Sl3U.txt - 55,7% mapy zrobione XDDD
YunoFanatic
Hi! From modding queue!

[Zen's HD]
00:06:115 (6115|2) - this note is 1/6 i doubt.
00:15:834 (15834|3) - move to 3 much more fitting for the pattern because. the pattern previous has open chords.
00:39:430 (39430|2,41115|2) - both move 2 its very uncomfortable to play in this way.
00:44:149 (44149|4) - somehow this is ugly to look at suggest to be moved on 4 or 6 cause either way completes the pattern.
00:50:048 - 00:50:385 im a bit worried about this kiai times.

[Zen's MX]
00:08:587 (8587|4) - move to 6 instead?
00:21:649 (21649|1,21649|2) - delete one of them.

Nice diff zen! I like repeating patterns moar :o
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