1. Easy (2.26 stars, 107 notes)
2. Hard (5 stars, 296 notes)
3. Insane (4.9 stars, 377 notes)
4. Normal (4.32 stars, 148 notes)

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

From my queue of Normal Mod

[General]

1. Remove the countdown in Normal and add audioleadin 1500 to Normal diff plz. fixed
2. Generally saying, the volume of hitsounds is too low. fixed

[Easy]

1. Feel weird about the hitsounds. 00:13:209 (3,3) - these use 2,4clap; and 00:14:209 (2,2) - clap on 3; and 00:17:876 (3,4) - 2,3clap……I suggest to use the same way to add clap. 2,4clap is better imo. fixed
2. And I suggest to add soft-slidertick2.wav which is same as the clap, so you can add claps on such like this: 00:38:543 - fixed
3. Others are quite good.

[Normal]

1. 00:58:209 (3) - separate them into a 1/1 slider and a circle. fixed
2. Pretty nice.

[Hard]

1. 00:31:876 (4) - add a clap fixed
2. 00:41:543 (1) - change to 1/2 slider because you haven't use 3/4 slider before fixed
3. 00:57:543 (1,2) - as the kiai will begin, I suggest to move out from the hitcircle 00:57:209 (4) - .

[Insane]

1. 00:08:376 (2,3) - ctrl+g
2. 00:20:209 (1,2,3,4) - well, suggest to place 4 at (466,176) and make a stream in a curve. fixed
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:21:376 (9) - maybe ctrl+g is better imo, only suggestions you can ignore it (/・ω・＼) fixed
4. 00:39:876 (4) - suggest to make it in a curve. fixed
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:41:543 (1) - change to 1/2 fixed
6. 00:50:376 (3,4,5,1) - how about this? fixed
   SPOILER

   3 on the end of 00:51:209 (2) - , and 00:51:209 (2) - blanket 5
7. 00:58:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the stream is ugly <_< fixed
8. 01:02:209 (3,1) - suggest to blanket

WOW are you really a new mapper?
The map is nice!
Good luck with your map I think it deserves to be ranked!

1. Please disable widescreen support because you're not using SB
2. I'm not great at tags at all, but please add some more! Here's the ranked mapset, you could add some tags from there to yours I assume? http://osu.ppy.sh/s/68399

1. Consider +1 HP and +1 OD
2. 00:12:043 (1) - When playing this difficulty, this slider didn't feel right atleast for me, some part of me wanted to click a circle here 00:12:376 - so how about trying a rhythm like this?
   See if it works for you, it played better for me atleast.
3. 00:14:709 (1) - Same as above
4. 00:18:543 (4) - Felt too close tbh :s Maybe space it out just a bit more? Whatever works for you :3
5. 00:26:209 (3) - Felt way too curved while playing, maybe something like this will do better?
   
   Example

   
6. 00:29:543 (1,3) - Unnecessary overlap here
7. 00:46:543 (4) - Felt too close again, see what's best for you!
8. 01:35:876 (5,1) - Blanket

1. +1 HP, 5 is far too low
2. 01:02:543 (3,2) - Unnecessary overlap imo, doesn't look good

Asphyxia wrote:

Hello there! You requested a mod with forum-pm!

[General thoughts]

1. Please disable widescreen support because you're not using SB fixed
2. I'm not great at tags at all, but please add some more! Here's the ranked mapset, you could add some tags from there to yours I assume? fixed http://osu.ppy.sh/s/68399

Please take the time to answer ALL of my suggestions, thank you!

[Insane]

1. Consider +1 HP and +1 OD
2. 00:12:043 (1) - When playing this difficulty, this slider didn't feel right atleast for me, some part of me wanted to click a circle here 00:12:376 - so how about trying a rhythm like this?
   See if it works for you, it played better for me atleast.
3. 00:14:709 (1) - Same as above
4. 00:18:543 (4) - Felt too close tbh :s Maybe space it out just a bit more? Whatever works for you :3 fixed
5. 00:26:209 (3) - Felt way too curved while playing, maybe something like this will do better? fixed
   
   Example

   
6. 00:29:543 (1,3) - Unnecessary overlap here hmm...I don't know what this means,,,,
7. 00:46:543 (4) - Felt too close again, see what's best for you!
8. 01:35:876 (5,1) - Blanket fixed

[Hard]

1. +1 HP, 5 is far too low
2. 01:02:543 (3,2) - Unnecessary overlap imo, doesn't look good fixed

Other diffs are nice, didn't catch anything, great work!

Asphyxia wrote:

00:29:543 (1,3) -



As you can see, (1)'s end overlaps with (3), so that's what I meant

kamisamaaa wrote:

from my queue, this is a NM
you dont read my rules in my queue, but I like this song so I come here and mod your map haha..thanks
maybe not useful, but try my best to do it

normal

00:00:210 (1) - why not use a blanket
really good normal diff

hard

00:20:209 (1,2) - suggest to blanket~
01:02:543 (3) - here miss a clap Oh, fixed
01:13:043 (5) - this long slider make you miss a clap, but I dont know how to do yes,,I'm considering this..
01:31:709 (4) - change to a reserve slider and add a clap will better~ fixed on myself

insane

00:10:209 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe make all them to same small slider? only suggestions you can ignore this
00:09:209 (1,2) - exchange these two maybe better in flow~ fixed
00:12:543 (2,3) - not good blanket , you can make it without girl snap
00:24:709 (2,3,4,5,1) - I think your placing is not so good here, maybe you can try this fixed and some change

SPOILER

and change 00:24:709 (1) - to this make a blanket~

SPOILER

I think it will be more interest~
00:27:876 (5) - move this to (485,217) will better to begin the next slider~ fixed ( 496|184 )
00:30:876 (1,2) - these two slider is a little diffcult for me =L= change them to four 1/8 slider?
00:34:876 (1,2,3) - a little ugly maybe try this? Good. fixed

SPOILER

really good map if you are a new mapper~
hope you can ranked

Losertic wrote:

Hello!

From Modding Queue.

Modding

General

1. 패스.

Easy

1. 패스.

Normal

1. 00:11:543 (2,3) - 이렇게 해보시는건?? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1098437 2번 슬라이더는 (141,87)로 이동, 3번노트는 (353,58)로 이동. 음..이건 00:14:876 (3,4) - 이것들이랑 맞춰서 겹친거라..ㅎㅎ
2. 00:57:543 (1,2) - 이거 슬라이더 하나로 대체 해보시는건? 개인적으로 00:56:209 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 이 부분은 다 노트로 처리하고 싶어서...일단 지적 더 들어어면 고칠게요 ㅎㅎ
3. 01:12:876 (2) - 이거랑, 01:15:543 (2) - 이거 둘이 완벽하게 겹쳐주세요 fixed
4. 01:26:876 (2,3) - 슬라이더 하나로 대체 해보시는건? fixed

Hard

1. AR-1? fixed

Insane

1. HP+1? 1을 더올리면 하드락유저들이 좀 힘들듯하네요,,,

제가 보기엔 큰 문제가 없는 맵이네요. 보기에도 깔끔하고...

스타 날립니다

kamisamaaa wrote:

something forget to say in my mod~
I think you use too many NC in your song..
almost every combo is 4 or 5...its too short
maybe you can use NC every 2 long white line~

bmin11 wrote:

[General]
베이스로 써도 좋을지도 모르는 mp3 (실제론 안해봄) 음..한번 생각해볼게요 ㅎㅎ
기존의 커스텀 박수 외에도 노말이나 드럼 히트를 써도 괜찮을꺼에요

[Insane]
00:12:043 (1,2,3) - 이렇게는 어떨까요? http://puu.sh/5iSAd.jpg
00:14:709 (1,2,3) - 만약 위를 고친다면 여기도 이렇게 http://puu.sh/5iSD3.jpg
00:20:043 (3,1,2) - 슬라이더 2개로 교체
01:07:543 (3,4,5) - 이렇게 고치시면 이전 슬라이더랑 잘 어울릴겁니다 (둘 다 동일한 패턴으로 보컬을 커버) http://puu.sh/5iSJg.jpg
01:29:043 (4,5,1) - 아실껍니다 http://puu.sh/5iSMW.jpg
01:31:709 (4,1) - 아실꺼에요 http://puu.sh/5iSPU.jpg
01:32:876 (4,5) - 연타로 만들어주세요. 이전에도 연타로 처리하셨으니 여기도 연타로 처리ㄱㄱ
01:34:709 (5,1,2,3) - 똑같은데 만약 계속 1/2로 처리하는게 싫으시다면 1/1 유턴 슬라이더로 처리하는것도 방법이긴 합니다. 이 경우 박수를 슬라이더 틱으로 처리해야한다는게 큰 단점... 01:37:043 (4) - 여기처럼 말이죠... http://puu.sh/5iST1.jpg


[Hard]
00:12:209 (1) - 1/2선 (빨간선) 으로 당겨와주시고 빈자리에 노트 추가 http://puu.sh/5iSYV.jpg
00:14:376 (4,1) - 위를 고쳤다면 여기도 위처럼 수정 http://puu.sh/5iT0T.jpg (2번 노트 이후로 1/2 슬라이더도, 그냥 노트 2개도 좋습니다)
00:17:209 (3,1) - 아실껍니다
00:19:876 (4,1) - 아실꺼에요. 그리고 1번 슬라이더가 끝날때쯤부터 연타 시작하니 이전처럼 1/4 연속 슬라이더 추천드립니다.
00:22:543 (4,1) - 노트 이후 1/1 슬라이더? http://puu.sh/5iT9v.jpg
00:25:376 (4,1,2) - 이렇게는 어떤가요? http://puu.sh/5iTbX.jpg
00:28:043 (4,1,2) - 위를 고쳤다면 위랑 동일하게 http://puu.sh/5iTeY.jpg
01:06:043 (1) - 뉴콤보 풀고
01:06:209 (6) - 뉴콤보 추가 일단 했는데 01:06:209 (1,2) - 이부분이 좀 짧게 느껴지네요.. 01:06:876 (1) - 이걸 뉴콤풀수는 없고.,,
01:29:209 (4) - 이 이후로는 대체로 위 모딩들과 비슷합니다


[Normal]
01:04:209 (1) - 차라리 이게 2/1 슬라이더인게 더 어울리지 않을까요? http://puu.sh/5iTmr.jpg
훌륭합니다


[Easy]
00:11:543 (2) - 차라리 이전 하얀선으로 당기셔서 박수를 넣는게 좋을 것 같아요. 이렇게하면 슬라이더틱 소리를 없애야겠지만 적어도 박수가 끊기진 않을꺼에요. http://puu.sh/5iTw9.jpg
00:14:209 (2) - 위와 똑같습니다
00:16:876 (2) - 하얀선으로 당겨오세요
00:19:543 (1) - 하얀선으로 당겨오세요
00:37:543 (1,2) - 이렇게는 어떤가요? http://puu.sh/5iTCP.jpg
00:40:543 (2) - 노트 추가
00:42:876 (1,2,3,4) - 그냥 여기를 이렇게 처리하는것도 방법이라면 방법(...) http://puu.sh/5iTGV.jpg 음..개인적으로 이런 슬라에 리버스 많이 쓰는건 안좋아해서..
00:58:876 (2) - 뉴콤보
01:06:209 (4) - 이렇게는 어떤가요? http://puu.sh/5iTMS.jpg ^
01:08:543 (5) - 위처럼 고쳤다면 이 노트 제거 (적어도 이전에 빈곳을 어쩔수 없다면 그냥 일관성 있게 비어버릴려구요)
01:28:209 (1) - 이 이후로 모딩은 이전과 비슷합니다

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, random mod o̿ ̭ o̿

Easy

00:00:210 (1) - Try adding a whistle to the head. Having no hitsound makes the start of the music a bit dull imo. fixed
00:02:876 (1) - ^ fixed
00:42:876 (1) - Add finish on the head. fixed
00:56:209 (4) - Add finish on the tail. fixed
01:22:876 (1) - Switch clap on the head to a finish. Well...other diffs are clap on here...

Normal

00:00:210 (1) - Add whistle on the head? fixed
00:02:876 (1) - ^ fixed
00:23:543 (4) - Add whistle on the tail. fixed
00:26:209 (4) - ^ fixed
00:29:209 (4) - Add whistle? fixed
00:36:209 (3) - Add whistle on the head. fixed
00:38:876 (3) - ^ fixed
00:58:876 (1) - Add finish fixed

Hard

00:00:210 (1) - Add whistle no the head? fixed
00:02:876 (1) - ^ fixed
00:10:543 (3,1) - Sorry for being nazi, but could you please stack them? It'll make the flow look much neater, and less crowded.
00:40:876 (3) - Change the tail hitsound to a finish,and change the head of 00:41:876 (2) - 's hitsound to a finish as well, to match the cymbal crashes heard in the music. fixed

Insane

00:26:209 (3) - Doesn't match the vocals. 00:25:376 - 00:26:876 Try this rhythm instead? hmm...here is no problem I think,,

Hope this helps!

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Hi, ty for m4m ^^

[insane]
00:27:043 (1,2,3,4,5) - feels weird, do consistently this combo (spasing to 1.4x). fixed
01:40:709 (1) - move a bit to right for better flow: http://puu.sh/5lD7b.jpg fixed

[Hard]
00:22:876 (1,3) - Personally, two straight sliders so close, I look ugly. You could try doing a bit curved: http://puu.sh/5lDrE.jpg fixed

[Normal]
Fine

[Easy]
It is generally good, although I think you flow pattern not a good idea for an Easy. ok, some fixed

example

00:21:543 (1,2,3) -

Knotts wrote:

This is pretty much personal preference. Ignore anything you'd like.

[Easy]
00:38:876 - Add a circle here maybe?
01:07:209 (1,2) - Kinda boring to play. You could move it like this http://puu.sh/5lGkA.jpg
01:13:543 (3) - Looks a bit off http://puu.sh/5lGnb.jpg. Squish the last tick a little down?

[Hard]
00:24:209 (1) - Ctrl+G might work here. fixed

Yeah sorry i cant find much.

quantum-rose wrote:

Sorry I'm late.
from PM.
[General]
Is it an OP or ED theme?If so,you'd better add the video. I found a this video, but not fit my beatmap..
I can't imagine someone who has only 4kpc and 32 posts could make such a pro map haha..
[Easy]
00:48:209 (1,2,3) - Very misleading to beginners. fixed

[Normal]
Great

[Hard]
00:00:210 (1,2) - I'd prefer that http://puu.sh/5m0QL.jpg fixed
00:01:876 (4,5) - ^ fixed
01:34:709 (1) - have a try http://puu.sh/5m0V6.jpg

[Insane]
00:00:210 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:02:876 (1,2,3,4,5) - try something like this?http://puu.sh/5m0sz.jpg fixed on myself
btw,intro shouldn't be that jumping imo
00:36:043 (1,2) - how do you think of this?http://puu.sh/5m0K4.jpg
00:42:876 (1,2) - 00:46:209 (3,4) - I don't think these antiflows fit the music very well hmm...I'll think about it

Vhy wrote:

Hello Karia ~

here's mod from my queue

[General]
Tags: yui hirasawa mio akiyama ritsu tainaka "tsu"mugi kotobuki azusa nakano Keion HTT fixed
i highly suggest you not using white as combo colour. change it into another colour hmm....ok, fixed

[Easy]
00:52:543 (2,3) - i think this rhythm fits better if you swap these notes at timeline. should be like this http://puu.sh/5nCci.jpg. about the pattern maybe you can try this http://puu.sh/5nCmU.jpg http://puu.sh/5nCo1.jpg fixed
00:58:209 (1) - add finish here?
01:25:543 (3) - this slider feels empty here. how about make this 3/2 slider here? like this http://puu.sh/5nD0c.jpg. also add clap on head, reverse and tail. if you apply this, add more greenline to disable sliderslide sound http://puu.sh/5nD7X.png fixed and add finish

[Normal]
00:42:209 (3) - the sound a bit rushing here. remove clap on reverse fixed
00:56:209 (1,2,3,4) - should add clap on every note here instead of finish Here? Hard and Insane are all finish..
01:13:543 (3) - remove finish on head fixed
01:22:209 (3) - add clap instead of finish
01:25:543 (1) - ^. same as easy too if you apply this, add more greenline
01:32:876 (3) - this slider end is touching the hp bar. can you move it down a bit? It doesn't touch hp bar...


[Hard]
01:25:543 (1,2,3) - add clap instead of finish?

[Insane]
00:42:876 (1,2) - this pattern lows better http://puu.sh/5nEj1.jpg fixed
00:46:543 (4) - ctrl+g this and move to x:428 y:32? fixed and move to (436|88)
01:08:043 (4,1,2,3,4) - maybe try this pattern? http://puu.sh/5nEMV.jpg fixed on myself

SPOILER

140,312,68043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,208,68209,5,2,0:0:0:0:
176,172,68376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,136,68543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,36,68709,1,0,0:0:0:0:

01:13:043 (3) - add clap on head, reverse and tail
01:14:209 (3) - add clap on tail fixed
01:15:543 (3) - ^ fixed
01:19:209 (2) - add clap on reverse
01:21:876 (2) - add clap on reverse instead of finish
01:25:543 (1,2,3) - same as hard

really nice map for a new mapper
hope this help ~

good luck

smallboat wrote:

Hi,Karia.Random mod req.(Bad English)

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
   
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

I suggest add "soft-sliderslide" or "normal-sliderslide" to mute the sliderslide sound.

Misc.toggles can cancel the "letterbox",because no breaktime. fixed

[Easy]

00:40:543 (2,3) - If is me,I think the notes change a slider,because 00:40:209 (1,2,3,4) - at easy diff,feel a bit lot continuous notes. changed two sliders

00:50:876 (1) - Try this :

SPOILER

(If use, you may need to adjust the next hitobjects a bit!) fixed

01:26:876 (2) - Delete note,add slider ,end is 01:27:876,and add green line in slider head. Last,hitsound set "S", no " S:C1".
01:35:876 (3) - (232|120). fixed
01:36:543 (2) - (324|244).(If use, you may need to adjust the next hitobjects a bit!) fixed

[Normal]

01:16:209 (3,4) - Continuous finish hitsound is a bit noise,all change whitsle?
01:40:709 (3) - Try this: fixed

SPOILER

[Hard]

00:00:709 (2) - Recommended ctrl+g,better flow.(If use, you may need to adjust the next hitobjects a bit!) fixed
00:02:376 (2) - ^ fixed
01:19:543 (3) - Try add clap in slider head?
01:21:876 (2) - The middle add clap.

[Insane]

00:20:043 (3,1) - Feel hitsound a bit loud and strange,imo. fixed
00:55:543 (3) - (40|112). fixed
01:08:709 (4) - Feel move to (116|42) is more suitable. Keep (01:08:209 (1,2,3,4) ) in the same DS. fixed on myself
01:19:209 (2) - The middle add clap.
01:21:876 (2) - ^
01:25:209 (3) - Stack 01:24:376 (2) . fixed
01:35:376 (2) - Stack 01:35:876 (4) slider end . fixed

Add continuous note at 01:27:543 (5) ~ 01:28:126 (6),try it?

Overall so good.

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.