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Nakagawa Shouko - Sora-iro Days

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Topic Starter
beat4you

happy30 wrote:

[Normal]

Rename to hard? :\ you may rename hard to insane as well xD
but if you do you will need to make a new easy / normal.

remove countdown?

00:48:27 (1) - let this note have lower volume then 00:48:61 (2) - ?

[Hard]

also here remove countdown?

00:45:86 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - i like this ^^


nothing else.
Is the normal difficulty too hard? :?
As a new player,I think it's suitable
whymeman
(Do not kudosu this post)


From what happy30 is trying to say is that the overall difficulty is too high for its "title"

If you check on the main post, you'll see this V

Hard (4.9 stars, 229 notes)
Normal (4.69 stars, 156 notes)


You're going to end up having complaints about making easier difficulties for the map as well. Just something to let you know of now before someone starts leaving complains. Remember, even if you can pass the map as it is now, it doesn't mean others can easily do the same...
anonymous_old
normal
SPOILER

00:15:774 - 00:23:705 : The beats here are too soft, you might want to make them louder.
00:35:343 : Give this beat the whistle effect, so that it matches with 00:33:274.
00:58:101 : Maybe this beat should be a slider? If you're trying to match the vocals, it should be a slider.z

hard
SPOILER

no visible faults.
You might want to rename the difficulty, however. There's "hard" and then there's "Insane" and this is the latter.
minyeob
3rd Offset: Use 15,535 please~
Don't forget to use "Resnap all notes"

Other than that,
Your map looks fine~

Here's a star. Good luck
P.S: Sorry I was so late orz
ignorethis
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
MegaManEXE
My favorite anime :D

This map might need an easier diff imo but get some more opinions on that

For now I'll treat normal as the easiest diff so...

Normal
00:56:74 (1,1,2,3) - This is pretty cruel for the easiest diff

Nothing I could find in Hard and Insane.

Also, you only use like 30% of the mp3, maybe you can cut it down to save on file size?

That's all I've got, it's a good map. Have a star~
Lissette
Hi, nice map, just one thing....

Normal, Hard and Insane
01:11:05 (1) - remove new combo?

Star! :)
al2e10
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
yaya
看得懂中文吧。不好意思mod的有點晚
[Normal] [Hard]都沒什麼問題
[Insane]一點建議
00:40:01 - 這可以加一個note。看起來會緊湊一點
00:58:29 - 這可以加一個spinnder,00:58:98 這裡結束
01:14:67 - 這個改為一個長slider。1倍速,半速都可以,在01:15:19停,因為這裡在拖長音。

好圖。star.
Topic Starter
beat4you
to happy30:
00:48:27 (1) - let this note have lower volume then 00:48:61 (2)<<<I only change this one.

to Loogiesquared:
changed.

to minyeob:
changed.

to MegaManEXE:
I place a 0.5x slider instead of the spinner.It will be easier.

to Lissette:
changed.

to osu_CN_yaya:
00:40:01 - 這可以加一個note。看起來會緊湊一點<<太緊湊了....暫不考慮
00:58:29 - 這可以加一個spinnder,00:58:98 這裡結束<<changed
01:14:67 - 這個改為一個長slider。1倍速,半速都可以,在01:15:19停,因為這裡在拖長音。<<changed

Thanks for you guys' suggestions :)
MetaSlash
*O* rank this U__U
al2e10
Mod~

[Insane]
00:17:431 (6) wistle?
00:47:603 (11,12) remove wistle
00:49:155 (3, Start and back) Wistle
00:49:845 (6, Start and back) also
01:00:879 (6..) also
01:07:948 (5) wistle

[Hard]
00:49:845 (5) wistle
00:59:672 (2, start) finish
01:07:259 (2,3,4) wistle ??

[Normal]
01:13:466 (2,start) finish
01:14:672 (5) finish

[All]
Please use some clap
這首歌有指定的節奏~
用clap來看看~
Topic Starter
beat4you

al2e10 wrote:

Mod~

[Insane]
00:17:431 (6) wistle?
00:47:603 (11,12) remove wistle
00:49:155 (3, Start and back) Wistle
00:49:845 (6, Start and back) also
01:00:879 (6..) also
01:07:948 (5) wistle

[Hard]
00:49:845 (5) wistle
00:59:672 (2, start) finish
01:07:259 (2,3,4) wistle ??

[Normal]
01:13:466 (2,start) finish
01:14:672 (5) finish

[All]
Please use some clap
這首歌有指定的節奏~
用clap來看看~
I don't want to add too many wistle sound.It is too noisy.
Anyway,thx for modding.
I have already tried to add clap sound before.However the effect is not good
I think I am poor at hitsound......
kino77
Sorry for the late mod

[Normal]
01:38:81(x)-Add a note here?
00:38:98(6)-Move to 00:39:16?


[Hard]
00:13:28(3)-Add a finish in the end?
01:02:43(2)-Finish?

[Insane]
Great~

So star~
Symbolic
[Normal]

00:07:93 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:07:93 (1) - New combo.
00:11:37 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:12:58 (1) - ^
00:48:638 (x) - Put a Timing Section with Kiai Time here.
01:09:328 (x) - Put a Timing Section and let Kiai Time stop here.
01:16:224 (x) - Put a spinner from 01:16:224 to 01:18:293.


[Hard]

00:10:68 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:48:638 (x) - Put a Timing Section with Kiai Time here.
01:09:328 (x) - Put a Timing Section and let Kiai Time stop here.


[Insane]

00:48:638 (x) - Put a Timing Section with Kiai Time here.
00:56:13 (5) - Remove this note, this doesn't fit well here.
01:09:328 (x) - Put a Timing Section and let Kiai Time stop here.


Awesome map, I really like [Insane]
Starred * + Kudosu Starred *
Topic Starter
beat4you
to kino77 and Symbolic:
thanks for modding and star :)
whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~


[Normal]

This map is missing a preview point.

00:43:46 (3) - Just a suggestion, but maybe you can adjust the angle of this to line it up with (2)?
00:47:60 (6,1) - Double check the spacing here. It looks a bit too close together.
01:04:50 (1,2,3) - ^
01:10:36 (1,2) - ^

Make sure to double check the spacing through this whole map.

[Hard]

This map is missing a preview point.

00:38:81 (6,7) - Too close together.
00:45:87 (3,4) - Too far apart.

Make sure to double check the spacing through this whole map.

[Insane]

This map is missing a preview point.

00:55:87 (3,4,5,6) - The spacing doesn't seem equal here.
01:00:87 (6,7) - Too far apart.

Make sure to double check the spacing through this whole map.

Overall: Just some touchups needed for the map. But also, you need to get the .mp3 cut if you're only going to map up to 01:16:22 of 04:11:37. Make sure to check into this and to add a preview point for all difficulties as well.
Topic Starter
beat4you
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
whymeman
The spacing seems to be better now...

[Normal]

00:13:36 (1) - This spinner is not snapped in the timeline. Even if it is snapped before the offset change, it doesn't mean its snapped after. The offset at 00:13:27 sounds and feels out of place. Maybe adjusting it to where the spinner starts should fix it or even just removing that extra offset since its not really being used. But make sure to check the other notes as well to make sure they are snapped in place in the timeline.

This map still needs an audio preview point.

[Hard]

00:13:36 (3) - Same problem like [Normal] had. Try setting the offset at were the slider starts.

Make sure to go to Timing -> Resnap All Notes. You have a large amount of unsnapped notes in this difficulty.

This map still needs an audio preview point.

[Insane]

00:13:36 (5) - Same problem like [Normal] had. Try setting the offset at were the slider starts

This map still needs an audio preview point.


Also, I need you to take a look at this:

[Normal] Timing

1. Offset: 431ms BPM: 174.00
2. Offset: 13,275ms BPM: 43.50 <- Try 13,362 ms or delete this one out.
3. Offset: 15,448ms BPM: 174.00 <- Try 15,620 ms

[Hard] Timing

1. Offset: 431ms BPM: 174.00
2. Offset: 13,275ms BPM: 43.50 <- Try 13,362 ms
3. Offset: 15,448ms BPM: 174.00 <- Try 15,620 ms

[Insane] Timing

1. Offset: 431ms BPM: 174.00
2. Offset: 13,275ms BPM: 43.50 <- Try 13,362 ms
3. Offset: 15,448ms BPM: 174.00 <- Try 15,620 ms

Its best to also get the setup of the timing checked as well. Plus you need to have some fade out for the end of the .mp3. It ends abruptly.
Topic Starter
beat4you

whymeman wrote:

The spacing seems to be better now...

[Normal]

00:13:36 (1) - This spinner is not snapped in the timeline. Even if it is snapped before the offset change, it doesn't mean its snapped after. The offset at 00:13:27 sounds and feels out of place. Maybe adjusting it to where the spinner starts should fix it or even just removing that extra offset since its not really being used. But make sure to check the other notes as well to make sure they are snapped in place in the timeline.

This map still needs an audio preview point.

[Hard]

00:13:36 (3) - Same problem like [Normal] had. Try setting the offset at were the slider starts.

Make sure to go to Timing -> Resnap All Notes. You have a large amount of unsnapped notes in this difficulty.

This map still needs an audio preview point.

[Insane]

00:13:36 (5) - Same problem like [Normal] had. Try setting the offset at were the slider starts

This map still needs an audio preview point.


Also, I need you to take a look at this:

[Normal] Timing

1. Offset: 431ms BPM: 174.00
2. Offset: 13,275ms BPM: 43.50 <- Try 13,362 ms or delete this one out.
3. Offset: 15,448ms BPM: 174.00 <- Try 15,620 ms

[Hard] Timing

1. Offset: 431ms BPM: 174.00
2. Offset: 13,275ms BPM: 43.50 <- Try 13,362 ms
3. Offset: 15,448ms BPM: 174.00 <- Try 15,620 ms

[Insane] Timing

1. Offset: 431ms BPM: 174.00
2. Offset: 13,275ms BPM: 43.50 <- Try 13,362 ms
3. Offset: 15,448ms BPM: 174.00 <- Try 15,620 ms

Its best to also get the setup of the timing checked as well. Plus you need to have some fade out for the end of the .mp3. It ends abruptly.
All timing fixed.Also I make a fade out for the end of the mp3.
How can I improve the audio?Can you give me some hints?
DJPop
~Normal~
00:29:06 (1) - move left a bit
00:41:48 (1) - start on red tick
01:08:20 (1) - start on white tick

~Hard~
00:13:36 (3) - silence the slidertick
00:25:96 (1) - move 1/2 right
00:41:48 (1) - start on red tick
01:08:20 (1) - start on white tick

~Insane~
00:13:36 (5) - silence the slidertick
00:37:68 (3) - new combo
00:41:48 (1) - start on red tick
00:51:13 (2) - move start point up a bit to align with (1)


+Star
kenkenman_old
good map !!
Armin
[Normal]

00:31:826 Finish
00:50:964 whistle at the start+whistle at the end
00:53:551 (1,2) Whistles
00:59:413 Whistle
01:00:275 (3,5) Whistles
01:01:999 whistle at the start+whistle at the end
01:04:585 (1,2) Whistle
01:10:447 ^

[Hard]

00:40:275 Clap
00:40:964 Clap at the start
00:43:033 Clap
00:48:378 Whistle+clap
00:53:551 Clap
00:53:895 Whistle
00:56:826 Finish
00:57:861 (1,3) Finish
00:59:413 Clap
01:04:585 Clap
01:04:930 Whistle
01:07:344 (2,4) Finish
01:10:447 Clap
01:10:792 Add also a whistle
01:13:206 Clap
01:13:551 Add also a whistle at the start
01:14:068 Clap

[Insane]

00:40:447 (2,3) Claps at the start
00:43:033 Clap
00:48:378 Whistle
00:48:723 Whistle at the start
00:50:964 Whistle
00:51:482 Whistle at the start+whistle at the end
00:53:551 (1,2) Claps at the start
00:54:240 Clap
00:56:137 Clap at the end
00:56:826 Finish
00:57:861 (1,3) Finish
00:59:413 Clap
00:59:757 Whistle at the start
01:03:206 (5,6) Whistles
01:04:585 (1,2) Claps at the start
01:08:033 Finish
01:08:206 Finish
01:10:447 Whistle
01:13:206 Clap
01:13:551 (2,4) Whistles at the start
01:14:585 Whistle
Topic Starter
beat4you

Armin wrote:

[Normal]

00:31:826 Finish
00:50:964 whistle at the start+whistle at the end
00:53:551 (1,2) Whistles
00:59:413 Whistle
01:00:275 (3,5) Whistles
01:01:999 whistle at the start+whistle at the end
01:04:585 (1,2) Whistle
01:10:447 ^

[Hard]

00:40:275 Clap
00:40:964 Clap at the start
00:43:033 Clap
00:48:378 Whistle+clap
00:53:551 Clap
00:53:895 Whistle
00:56:826 Finish
00:57:861 (1,3) Finish
00:59:413 Clap
01:04:585 Clap
01:04:930 Whistle
01:07:344 (2,4) Finish
01:10:447 Clap
01:10:792 Add also a whistle
01:13:206 Clap
01:13:551 Add also a whistle at the start
01:14:068 Clap

[Insane]

00:40:447 (2,3) Claps at the start
00:43:033 Clap
00:48:378 Whistle
00:48:723 Whistle at the start
00:50:964 Whistle
00:51:482 Whistle at the start+whistle at the end
00:53:551 (1,2) Claps at the start
00:54:240 Clap
00:56:137 Clap at the end
00:56:826 Finish
00:57:861 (1,3) Finish
00:59:413 Clap
00:59:757 Whistle at the start
01:03:206 (5,6) Whistles
01:04:585 (1,2) Claps at the start
01:08:033 Finish
01:08:206 Finish
01:10:447 Whistle
01:13:206 Clap
01:13:551 (2,4) Whistles at the start
01:14:585 Whistle
Your modding inclubes too many whistle sound.I may be too noisy.
However,some of your ideas are good,Thanks for modding :)

Also,Thanks DJpop for modding :)
naruti
i dont have to explain why i give this map a star
its all clear when you play your map
Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

- Set a preview point on all difficulties.

BPM: 174,00
First offset: 445 (Remember to resnap all notes.)
Second offset: Fine.


[Normal]

00:15:062 (1) - A note after the spinner is too hard for the most easier difficulty.
00:41:065 (1) - Spinner too hard for a normal.
00:56:082 (5) - New combo for understand the bpm change.
00:57:086 (1) - Remove new combo.

01:08:037 (1) - Spinner too hard for a normal.

[Hard]

Fine~

[Insane]

00:12:084 (2,3) - Offscreen.
Topic Starter
beat4you

osuplayer111 wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

- Set a preview point on all difficulties.

BPM: 174,00
First offset: 445 (Remember to resnap all notes.)
Second offset: Fine.


[Normal]

00:15:062 (1) - A note after the spinner is too hard for the most easier difficulty.
00:41:065 (1) - Spinner too hard for a normal.
00:56:082 (5) - New combo for understand the bpm change.
00:57:086 (1) - Remove new combo.

01:08:037 (1) - Spinner too hard for a normal.

[Hard]

Fine~

[Insane]

00:12:084 (2,3) - Offscreen.
All fixed
jericho2442
heres the op video for this in great quality only for 7.8mb ;) if you want it a lil smaller just say
Download Link http://www.megaupload.com/?d=LAM2WKEW

could i make a diff too? :P

EDIT; srry i kinda got going and could not stop so ended up making a diff anyway :P, so if you dont mind added this diff it would be great :)

100% done now :)
Download: Nakagawa Shouko - Sora-iro Days (beat4you) [Jericho2442's Core Drill].osu

also epic maps and great job, star

oh also if you do input my diff i'll be feeding this thing 2 kudo stars ;)

EDIT 2:
heres the mod

[Insane]
00:22:034 (4,5) - i dont like the way these 2 cross, a different pattern could look much better

except from that i see no probs :)
Topic Starter
beat4you

jericho2442 wrote:

heres the op video for this in great quality only for 7.8mb ;) if you want it a lil smaller just say
Download Link http://www.megaupload.com/?d=LAM2WKEW

could i make a diff too? :P

EDIT; srry i kinda got going and could not stop so ended up making a diff anyway :P, so if you dont mind added this diff it would be great :)

100% done now :)
[attachment=0:ea7fc]Nakagawa Shouko - Sora-iro Days (beat4you) [Jericho2442's Core Drill].osu[/attachment:ea7fc]

also epic maps and great job, star

oh also if you do input my diff i'll be feeding this thing 2 kudo stars ;)

EDIT 2:
heres the mod

[Insane]
00:22:034 (4,5) - i dont like the way these 2 cross, a different pattern could look much better

except from that i see no probs :)
Sorry I dont want to add video in my map because I hate background video.It affect my game.
You difficulty is not bad but I think 3 difficulties is enough.
Anyway,thinks for modding.
Teara
No problems found.

I like the use of hitsounds, and its a very well made beatmap.!

Only thing you forgot to add is a Preview point.



^ Just in case you didn't know what I mean.

I suggest adding on at for all the diffs.

00:48:723
Topic Starter
beat4you

Teara wrote:

No problems found.

I like the use of hitsounds, and its a very well made beatmap.!

Only thing you forgot to add is a Preview point.



^ Just in case you didn't know what I mean.

I suggest adding on at for all the diffs.

00:48:723
What is the junction of the preview point?
Teara


As the picture says. Clicking on the pictures plays a small preview, this is what this does.
bmin11
[Insane]
00:52:051 (1) - Auto has to get unlease 2k to be rankable.
00:56:082 (1) - ^
00:58:037 (1) - ^

I feel really bad only picking up spinner issues.....
Anyway, I love this map <3 I think it is ready for BATs or better modders
Sure
[General]
Remove countdown. Its sound is a little bit weird.


[Normal]
01:07:068 (6) - new combo


[Hard]
01:15:062 (1) - I think making same length likes normal's one be better.


[Insane]
00:26:065 (6) - new combo
00:52:051 (1) - unrankable. spin bonus should be 2000 or over by autoplay.
00:56:082 (1) - ^
00:58:037 (1) - ^
01:08:020 (1) - ^
01:15:062 (1) - ^ also, I think making same length likes normal's one be better.

Solution of short spinners : I suggest value of overall diff 1 tick decrease. And increase value of HP drain 1 tick.
Topic Starter
beat4you
To bmin11 and ykcarrot:
I think the spinner is suitable in insane difficulty.
I need more modding to ensure if the spinner needs to remove or not.
Anyway,thanks for modding.
Dusty
[Insane]
00:52:051 (1) - No, really. This is ridiculous. Take these spinners and turn them into sliders.

*starred
Topic Starter
beat4you

Dusty wrote:

[Insane]
00:52:051 (1) - No, really. This is ridiculous. Take these spinners and turn them into sliders.

*starred
Fixed!
jockeytiyan
I'd just like to comment on the map.

I think the map isn't that much fitting with the song, or rather, this isn't how the map should look for the feeling of the song.
The beat placements looks quite stiff, in contrast to the song which has a very jolly feeling, which is supposed to have a lot of movements. I find it getting mapped by the vocals inappropriate and it breaks the flow of the song because the beat sounds very continuous, and the straight sliders aren't even fit for the song.

That is all, and good luck on getting it ranked.
Leorda
NI HAU!!!!

[Hard]
00:10:789 (3,4) - Allign with 2 (end of slider)

[Insane]
00:35:447 (8) - A little offscreen

Not too bad
Takuma
This song/map is quite delicious. Have a bubble.
Topic Starter
beat4you
Sorry for breaking the bubble
I have made some changes.
DuoDynamo
Why the hell is this map not ranked? D:

I don't know about you guys, but this map is pretty much perfect IMO. It should definitely get ranked.
Kytoxid
You have Gurren Lagann OP as the tag, move the anime name to the source.

The second red timing point seems very unnecessary on Normal.

Star~
minyeob
The map improved a lot >A<

[Insane]
00:58:378 (1) - Spinner too short :<
01:08:206 (1) - Spinner too short :<


After you fixed, PM me I'll bubble this~
minyeob
[Background]
1024x768 is max.
You used 1024x819
Please resize it >_>

Sorry MY FAULT.
Topic Starter
beat4you

minyeob wrote:

[Background]
1024x768 is max.
You used 1024x819
Please resize it >_>

Sorry MY FAULT.
Size changed.Please redownload the map and check it.
Lilac
Due to complaints from my friend, please change the source and tag to "Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann OP"

Thank you.
Topic Starter
beat4you

MarioBros777 wrote:

Due to complaints from my friend, please change the source and tag to "Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann OP"

Thank you.
Changed!
minyeob
Good luck.
Sabath_old
Awesome :D
whymeman
Well done. Ranked.
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