This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on donderdag 22 oktober 2009 at 19:27:56

Artist: Beautiful Day
Title: Bride in Dream
Tags: bride dream o2jam o2mania o2
BPM: 116
Filesize: 3989kb
Play Time: 02:28
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4,78 stars, 354 notes)
2. Normal (3,3 stars, 192 notes)

Download: Beautiful Day - Bride in Dream
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Beatmapped Succesfull!

Edit: Changed some sliders.
Edit: Changed some minor bugs.
Edit: Added Blissfulyoshi's changes | Check backpost for info
Edit: Added more hitsounds
Edit: Changed some sliders and added more hitsounds
Edit: Changed the storyboard
Edit: Added Lokamp's changes | Check backpost for info
Edit: Added Zekira's changes
Edit: Added More Storyboard! | Yeah!
Edit: Changed storyboard issues | and so on
Edit: Added Symbolic's changes | Check backpost
Edit: Changed some hitsounds | Specially in the beginning
Edit: Added Tags
Edit: Added Symbolic's error changes ( no hitsounds yet ). Changed allot of hitsounds.
Edit: Added Symbolic's Sounds improvements | Kick Ass!
Edit: Added EEeee's changes | Pls ppl stop asking to redo my breaks. Nothing changes!
Edit: Took a look at Loogiesquared's changes | did not add them
Edit: Changed Timing | Almost perfect now!
Edit: Added MaxwellDemon's change | slider speed up!

!!! For the people who've already downloaded this map, pls remove the version (Entire folder) you have now. !!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Redownload for the changes to make effect.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

AHHH Stop making good maps that I can't mod, I need kudo for my maps!

I hope now you learned not to underestimate my skills, kthx.

Emma approves of this map.

Normal:

Hard:

Nice map. Star.

The only problem i can see with this map is that the changing slider speed on hard!

*star*

Xgor wrote:

The only problem i can see with this map is that the changing slider speed on hard!

*star*

Lol?
Thats no problem . It's what makes it harder

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Normal:

SPOILER

Combo mod:
00:54:85 (5) - new combo?
01:24:07 (1) - remove new combo for consistency
02:03:13 (1) - this and the next combo have a comboing pattern very different than the previous 4 combos. I would probably make the combos in this area similar. ~ See it as a sort of Lead In for the next part.

Hard:

SPOILER

Combo mod:
01:24:59 (5) - new combo? eeuh, why?
02:11:40 (1) - y do these combos where the lyrics repeat forgive me are of different lengths. It feels weird ~ Its not really the "forgive me" part i'm mapping on,, it are the twinkly sounds :P

Nice map. Star.

Thx for the Mod man ^^ verry pleased =D

There isn't a lot of work to do...

[General] GREAT sound placing! But the song covers it... try to lower the mp3's volume or to rise a little bit the hitsounds's volume...

Normal

[00:19:160] (6) end the slider with whistle and finish

Hard
[00:53:820] (3) make this beat a little further from the sliders...

This map is the demonstration on about how past maps can be improved...
Keep up the GREAT work! Starry.

O2Jam's old song , but i like it

Normal:
Perfect

Hard:
00:50:975 - 00:54:208 (look first photo)
01:48:648 - 01:50:587 (look second photo)
01:51:880 (2) , remove it
01:52:139 (4) ,^
01:52:398 (6) ,^
01:52:656 (8) ,^

I'm so sorry , my english is too poor =_= , i hope you can understand .

And Starred , nice map !

tada a gay grey star for you XD

Offset: 1056

[Hard]
There are some 0.5x sliders that are undetectable the first time, get some expert comment on this or something.

For your 8th star~

01:45:53 - How the storyboard just goes back to the bg image directly was really dull, make it more interesting please!

Normal- Theres lots of hitsounds that can go directly onto the music... (like add clap when you hear clap in music), but thats just my opinion...
I don't like the hitsounds as they are, it seems like they're there... just for the sake of being there.. Hard sounds better
Redo Breaks~

Hard-Again, like normal, there are hitsounds can go along with music
Nothing technical, pretty nicely done~

Good job~

offset 1.068


fumoffu ><

Isn't this song already mapped?

[Normal]

01:15:28 (8) - New combo.
01:19:67 (1) - Shorten 1/8, sounds way better.
01:56:91 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:57:69 (3) - New combo here.
01:58:98 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:59:76 (3) - New combo.


[Hard]

00:11:91 (1) - Clap here.
00:12:95 (3) - ^
00:13:98 (5) - ^
00:15:02 (7) - ^
00:48:38 (7) - New combo.
00:50:96 (2) - ^
01:01:573 (x) - Add Timing Section with Normal hitsounds here.
01:11:40 (1) - Extend 1/4, sounds better.
02:28:34 (1) - Extend 1/8, sounds better.


Nice map,
Starred *

Isn't this song already mapped?

Yeah, but he can map it again.


Can I create a diff?

Who cares if it's mapped already lol. It's mapped better

Ulty don't you dare change those slowed down sliders!

tieff wrote:

Isn't this song already mapped?

Yeah, but he can map it again. ~ and the one that is ranked already,, well,, sux ass


Can I create a diff? ~ not really excepting diffs for this song xD

thx for teh star man ^^!!

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Yo. This map is flawless.I really have no corrections to even... share. Goodness.

Hope this gets ranked. @_@

Staaaaar.

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed Modding Go~

Osz. File Check (Done)


[Normal] (Done)


[Hard] (Done)


Overall: The map seems fine so far, but just like the other two, make sure to check into the flashes so that it doesn't blind the players in normal monitor settings. I'll drop my star in then.

BPM seems correct.
Offset is off.

Currently i'm at my job and my internet is slow, so there is no "giving you a perfect offset"
Even though, in order to approach to the perfect one even more, i asked blissfulyoshi to check it with me.

Try using 9.347 as an offset for now. Once i reach home, i will recheck it and give you the perfect one IF needed.



[Normal]

Some of your timing sections in this difficulty don't do anything. Example: 00:33:91 -
They do have a meaning in your Hard difficulty, but here they just make me lose time checking what they do.
Consider deleting the timing sections that are not being used in order to save modders time when modding your maps.

00:27:96 - Avoid placing your timing sections right on top of the beat. If i someone clicks too early, they might get the previous timing section sound. In this case, soft.
02:11:41 - ^
02:27:96 (1) - ^
00:36:76 (1) - Because its placed at the white tick, it makes me think that the following beat will take longer to click.
It is not wrong when spacing talking, but you could consider placing it at the previous blue tick maybe.



Aesthetics:

01:48:91 (1,2) - Notice the spacing between these and the rest.
01:59:00 (4) - align this slider's end with following (1)



Awsome hitsound suggestions (I couldn't resist :3)

01:01:32 (6) - clap the end, clap the following two: 01:02:62 - 01:02:88 - , take out clap here: 01:03:14 - and delete timing section so the last note sounds with a "soft" finish sound. Afterward apply the new timing section here: 01:03:39 -
01:17:62 - whistle, 01:18:14 (1) - whistle, 01:18:65 (2) - whistle and 01:19:69 (1) - finish sound.
01:25:64 (2) - clap the end?
01:27:96 (1) - ^
01:29:77 (6) - ^
01:31:84 (1) - clap the end, then take out this clap here: 01:33:14 (2) -
01:34:17 (4) - Take out the finish sound. You have two upcoming ones. I'd say leave it blank.
01:36:24 (1) - whistle only, 01:38:31 (5) - whistle only.
01:40:38 (1) - You want it to sound softly at the end? I'd move that timing section to the next red tick and the slowly increase the volume here 01:42:96 (2) - ;d
02:00:81 - Was this volume increase intentional? The song remains the same, there is no voice tone change.
02:13:48 (3) - Add a finish sound?
02:15:55 (3) - ^
02:18:65 (5) - finish sound the end?
02:21:76 (3) - add a finish sound?
02:23:82 (3) - i think you should remove the whistle here considering the tone / song change.



[Hard]

Increasing by 1 tick the overall difficulty at Song Setup wouldn't hurt.

00:55:38 (2,3,4,5) - Personally i think that after the previous fast stacked sliders, and the slow slider speed change, applying these 1/2 beats feels like overdoing it. I expected to relax at least for 2 beast. Not wrong though, you can always restart the map hehe.


Awsome hitsound suggestions (I couldn't resist either ><)

01:20:20 (3) - clap
01:21:24 (7) - ^
01:22:27 (1) - clap the beginning
01:23:31 (2) - clap
01:24:34 (4) - ^
01:25:12 (8) - clap the end
01:26:41 (2) - clap, 01:26:67 (3) - whistle, 01:26:93 (4,5) - finish sound, and then take out whistle here from the beginning and the middle: 01:27:45 (6) - , and then replace those for a clap at the beginning and keep the ending whistle.
01:28:22 (1) - Whistle beginning + end
01:33:39 (1) - clap the end
01:36:24 (1) - remove whistle
01:37:53 (1) - ^
01:38:31 (1) - ^
01:39:60 (1) - ^
01:44:51 (2) - From here on the volume should increase. Listen to the song.


As a personal opinion i would disable countdown of this song.
The beginning of the song relaxes me while i get to see your sb. The countdown kinda breaks that relaxing moment i feel.

I really liked the map, I'm starring this one.

Since the offset was moved to an earlier location:
Offset: 1072 (consistent with the one in Sir Minelli's post)

Normal
02:27:44 (6) - this is a bit far, maybe u can space it closer to 5 or just make 5 a bit straighter to 6, I'm just saying this cause it's a bit tricky for how normal this map is\
Fix all ur breaks

Hard
00:27:44 (4) - New combo, spacing changes crucially
01:19:17 (4) - ^
Fix ur breaks

well I did some some more spacing stuff, but nazi , nice remake of this Bride in Dream map, it's really good

Hard
01:44:51 (2) - New Combo

...yep that's pretty much it. Don't bother kudo-ing Solid map

*

Normal
nice and swell

Hard
00:54:34 (1) - this is the only slow slider I don't like. Can't you make that a regular one?

Overall
Nice and toned hitsound use, beautiful blanket sliders

Star for Uncle Ulty.

Hard is so good. tho i failed 3 times before clearing it

Anyways, hope this gets ranked soon

just nice ^^ starred

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

really successful map nice ultimate way to go :>

Starred

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]
00:37:01 (2) - This feels wierd to me. To me it sounds better if reversed on every red tick up to 00:38:57, however, since this will force you to move other beats, and it's not necessary I'll mark it as a suggestion
No Problems Found

[Hard]
No Problems Found

An awesome beatmap as always, Ultimate ^^ Starred

normal
hard

Star for my m8 Sjoerd

Nice map ,

[Normal]

Good stuff, no issues.

[Hard]
00:33:90 (1) - This is the ONLY slider that bugs me out of all those speed up and slow downs in this map. It feels like it should be as quick as the others. I can see WHY you slowed for that part, but it wasn't slow enough for a slow slider, IMO.

Beautifully done, I have no issues with the offset personally as I think the map plays out really well. For now though, until that slider has been addressed (whether you change it or not), I'll give it a star, once Ultimate decides what to do with that slider, I will gladly bubble this map. :3

Ultimate fixed it. So. BUBBLE!

SEKAI DE

Grats man.. no idea why it has an 8.5, people are retarded.

I used to be anti-remapping, but after "Feel Good Inc." and now this one results, I'm quite converted.

Nice job!

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Grats man.. no idea why it has an 8.5, people are retarded.

I know man:P, tough it's not my best work. A 9 would be more apropriate:P

Marcotonio wrote:

I used to be anti-remapping, but after "Feel Good Inc." and now this one results, I'm quite converted.

Nice job!

Ty! xD

Added epilepsy warning