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fanzhen0019
BG用炮姐沒事嗎
這曲子好像不是出自炮姐
Source: fortissimo//Akkord:Bsusvier
有人做過rank的你可以參考一下
Topic Starter
Atrue

fanzhen0019 wrote:

BG用炮姐沒事嗎
這曲子好像不是出自炮姐
Source: fortissimo//Akkord:Bsusvier
有人做過rank的你可以參考一下
其实也想过用rank曲bg,不过总感觉不是特别想要再弄那个bg了。。
感谢关于bg的提醒~
Awaken
kiai开始位置弄错了啊
放这里
01:12:113

no kd
Topic Starter
Atrue

Awaken wrote:

kiai开始位置弄错了啊
放这里
01:12:113

no kd
嗯,谢谢~
Kamio Misuzu
[Easy]
转盘好多。。
00:25:103 (3,4,5) - 对一下flow,5可以考虑ctrl+<
00:04:484 (1,2) - 大长滑条有点丑。。
00:16:237 (1) - 一句歌词的开始放一个转盘感觉有点别扭
00:27:577 (1) - NC
01:11:288 (2,3) - 接续有点紧凑了,有可能是kiai想加快一点吧,但是感觉上easy还是尽量在大小白线放。后面同理。
01:45:103 (1,2) - 这后面突然note少了好多,建议中间白线再加个note

[Normal]
00:04:278 (1) - 试着不要叠在下面,一开始这个节奏感觉叠着不舒服
00:06:133 (1) - 去掉NC
00:09:432 (1,2) - 不好读,换成两个滑条试试如何
00:14:381 (1,2,3,4) - 建议重新排列,略别扭。折返滑条最好是往返一下的,往返两下莫名难受,加上遮挡什么的很不舒服
00:37:474 (1,3) - 完全重叠。。。
00:50:670 (1,3) - ^
01:28:608 (2,3) - 和上面一样,不过这里还好。最好还是改一下
01:41:804 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - normal的这个节奏。。放着白线重音不放找红线低音,太难读了。试试改成这样看看http://puu.sh/5yN3m.jpg

[Hard]
01:07:164 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 布局有点难看。。
01:28:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 跳的没什么规则,这种可以参照一下DNA的图
01:34:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 这三个折返滑条没有节奏感啊

http://puu.sh/5yNuf.jpg 三个难度里这个用的太多了。梗比较少,多摸摸图,参照一下已经rank的图会对你作图有所帮助,节奏感很好,难度把握好点就好了。加油~
Topic Starter
Atrue

kanon_sayuri wrote:

[Easy]
转盘好多。。
00:25:103 (3,4,5) - 对一下flow,5可以考虑ctrl+< 特意为之,因为这里差不多有一个强音吧,其他难度在这个地方的flow也都是反的,这里稍微换个方向不会加难度。而且如果ctrl+>的话会出现两头遮挡,这在ez里面会比较难以读图。
00:04:484 (1,2) - 大长滑条有点丑。。 这。。我怕加难度。。 那我拆一下吧,反正难度后面没控制好。。
00:16:237 (1) - 一句歌词的开始放一个转盘感觉有点别扭 好的,我改成了和后边相似处一样的节奏型
00:27:577 (1) - NC 好的
01:11:288 (2,3) - 接续有点紧凑了,有可能是kiai想加快一点吧,但是感觉上easy还是尽量在大小白线放。后面同理。 不好改,既然已经做出来了节奏型也已经固定了,如果要改就是remap,关于这点我还得征求更多人的意见。不过既然没有爆星。。是吧?
01:45:103 (1,2) - 这后面突然note少了好多,建议中间白线再加个note 好的

[Normal]
00:04:278 (1) - 试着不要叠在下面,一开始这个节奏感觉叠着不舒服 如果没有改正意见的话我觉得还是stack比较好些,摊开反而难看了
00:06:133 (1) - 去掉NC ok
00:09:432 (1,2) - 不好读,换成两个滑条试试如何 换滑条的话如果不大改就得挤在一起那样很难看,所以这里先保留,我觉得也不是很好读,不过也不能算是太难读
00:14:381 (1,2,3,4) - 建议重新排列,略别扭。折返滑条最好是往返一下的,往返两下莫名难受,加上遮挡什么的很不舒服 想法改了一下
00:37:474 (1,3) - 完全重叠。。。记得这样的隔了一段时间的滑条完全重叠似乎不是unrankable,如果有明确的指出unrankable的话我会拆梗的
00:50:670 (1,3) - ^ ^
01:28:608 (2,3) - 和上面一样,不过这里还好。最好还是改一下 还好的话我就先不改了,因为如果要改的话后边全部都得动,然后这里又是kiai觉得激烈一些也好
01:41:804 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - normal的这个节奏。。放着白线重音不放找红线低音,太难读了。试试改成这样看看http://puu.sh/5yN3m.jpg
知道这里会被说,我觉得一味走白线太过单调,这里有条件自行创造节奏,如果有其他人也认为这里非改不可的话我会改的
[Hard]
01:07:164 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 布局有点难看。。 god.. 我觉得还可以吧。。还真没预料到这里会被说难看额。。
01:28:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 跳的没什么规则,这种可以参照一下DNA的图 好,这里是我作了回死,我知道肯定有人说不行的,那我把它修正下
01:34:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 这三个折返滑条没有节奏感啊 再等等,这里我也是清楚大概会被说的,不过还不是很想改掉

http://puu.sh/5yNuf.jpg 三个难度里这个用的太多了。 因为想到对称就是这个嘛,又不想弄那些非几何图形,况且视flow情况,distance都有不同的应用,看起来是一个梗其实已经是在多用了(我感觉是这样)
梗比较少,多摸摸图 嗯,已经在疯狂摸图了我觉得再怎么摸的话风格也差不多形成了。。梗的话每个人的定义不同,换句话说这图的每个地方我都精细的考虑过,排列上我是尽量走flow的感觉的
参照一下已经rank的图会对你作图有所帮助,节奏感很好,难度把握好点就好了。加油~ 感谢!关于难度的话确实我做着做着就hold不太住,不过也许在承受范围内?再看看~
Thx for mod!! :) updated
Topic Starter
Atrue
remapping for sv and distance in ez and nm…also adjusting hard
Vita-VVA
[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with purple is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself :) Ignore them if you think they are helpless :)

[Easy]
00:07:783 (5) - maybe a NC(new combo) here

00:14:381 (5) - ^

00:20:979 (5) - ^

00:25:103 (3,4,5) - might a bit difficult for a newbie

00:34:175 (4) - NC

00:47:371 (3) - ^

00:50:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really bad pattern for beginners...Not only cause the double 1/2 snap but also the stock

01:41:804 (1,1) - maybe unrankable in Easy

Actually I prefer this diff as normal....

[Normal]
00:53:969 (7) - NC

01:00:154 (1) - remove NC

01:00:566 (2) - NC

01:28:608 (2,3) - try to suit DS in onder to suit this diff

01:37:474 (1) - maybe with your clap sound not finish

[Hard]
00:14:381 (1,2,3,4) - lightly ugly arrange(meaningless, and I didn't caught the tricks which you are using )

00:34:175 (1,2,3,4) - an obvious strange arrange just like above

00:57:267 (5) - If you tried to make a difference between the shor stream and the slider, try to use a NC or the snap like
01:00:463 (4,5) - If not, fix the 01:00:463 (4,5) - 's snap


01:08:814 (9) - NC

01:08:814 (9) - may be cut a quarter like and 01:10:773 (2) - is really far away from them...

01:36:855 (7) - a strange slider cause not followed neither the rhythm nor the vocal

01:38:092 (3) - move to x176 y192or make a bit longer snap among 01:37:886 (2,3,4) -

01:40:979 (5) - maybe you'd better rearrange them just like move it to x232 y156

01:42:422 - should add a note if you follow the rhythm

01:51:288 (1) - it's better to use a green line the make a higher speed of slider at the last one of the map just like maybe a 1/16 reverse slider

[End]

That's all :)其实我会讲中文
Kamio Misuzu
[Easy]

00:25:103 (3,4,5) - 这里我说的是ctrl+<,不是ctrl+>。。。再看看。

[Normal]

01:41:804 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 仔细听的话确实可以听出来,但是我不认为这是normal里该出现的节奏,准确的说insane出现的可能都不大。normal和easy是面向新手的图,对白线只是学会怎么打图对节奏,创新不是不可以,但是确实不好打,别扭。以上。

我知道都是用心做的,但是有些情况不是用心就能做好。多练练手吧。no kds。
Topic Starter
Atrue

Vita-VVA wrote:

[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with purple is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself :) Ignore them if you think they are helpless :)

[Easy]
00:07:783 (5) - maybe a NC(new combo) here fixed

00:14:381 (5) - ^ fixed

00:20:979 (5) - ^ fixed

00:25:103 (3,4,5) - might a bit difficult for a newbie changed the stack.

00:34:175 (4) - NC fixed

00:47:371 (3) - ^ fixed

00:50:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really bad pattern for beginners...Not only cause the double 1/2 snap but also the stock fixed the stack and 1/2

01:41:804 (1,1) - maybe unrankable in Easy joined them as one spinner.

Actually I prefer this diff as normal....

[Normal]
00:53:969 (7) - NC

01:00:154 (1) - remove NC

01:00:566 (2) - NC NC mods above are all applied

01:28:608 (2,3) - try to suit DS in onder to suit this diff ? 还是说中文吧,这里没看懂你想说啥

01:37:474 (1) - maybe with your clap sound not finish Nope, here is more fit in finish.

[Hard]
00:14:381 (1,2,3,4) - lightly ugly arrange(meaningless, and I didn't caught the tricks which you are using ) later I will give the diff a whole adjust and here will be made prittier.

00:34:175 (1,2,3,4) - an obvious strange arrange just like above ^

00:57:267 (5) - If you tried to make a difference between the shor stream and the slider, try to use a NC or the snap like
01:00:463 (4,5) - If not, fix the 01:00:463 (4,5) - 's snap
Sure, I fixed the rhythm as previous one.

01:08:814 (9) - NC ok

01:08:814 (9) - may be cut a quarter like and 01:10:773 (2) - is really far away from them... sure

01:36:855 (7) - a strange slider cause not followed neither the rhythm nor the vocal ok most of you mentioned that and I will change the beats here in next adjusting.

01:38:092 (3) - move to x176 y192or make a bit longer snap among 01:37:886 (2,3,4) -

01:40:979 (5) - maybe you'd better rearrange them just like move it to x232 y156 ok

01:42:422 - should add a note if you follow the rhythm ok

01:51:288 (1) - it's better to use a green line the make a higher speed of slider at the last one of the map just like maybe a 1/16 reverse slider Nope..just a hard..

[End]

That's all :)其实我会讲中文
手头还有1个上周余留的req,弄完了就先来看你的图,谢谢了
Awaken
给我做个beginner啊 歌好听 曲子也短
Topic Starter
Atrue

Awaken wrote:

给我做个beginner啊 歌好听 曲子也短
ok~ :)
kamisamaaa
mod补完了~基本都是一些小的建议额 可以改可以不改~你自己看吧~
[hard]

  • 00:11:907 (2) - 这个吧00:12:731 (1) - 这个包住感觉比较好看和整洁~ 改的时候记着吧00:11:082 (1) - 这个做成和2对称
    00:17:267 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这些可以好好摆一摆 有意思一点
    比如00:18:298 (1) - 和00:17:267 (4) - 叠起来感觉比较好看 00:17:474 (5,6,7) - 这三联可以吧8开头包住啊 或者间距拉开一点点和8看起来像是对称啊 然后把00:18:298 (1) - 和00:17:474 (5) - 这个叠起来啊 都会更有意思一些额 整体感也会强一些
    00:23:659 这里音很重的 空下来感觉不合适
    00:38:298 (2,3,4) - 整体向右移动一些 和1配合起来对称一点?
    00:38:298 (2,3,4) - 还有00:39:948 (1,2,3) - 是这首歌比较特别的节奏 你可以用大一些的间距 做点特别的梗突出一些 要不然这里和别处都是一样的1.0X完全就把这里掩盖下去了 和别地方感觉不出来不一样
    00:54:587这里虽然没有音 但是感觉加个note很舒服
    01:03:350 (1,2) - 这里为啥是个二连。。01:03:350这里的音感觉还没01:03:144这里的强呢 要是相加不如直接从01:03:247这里来个三联 也舒服一些
    01:07:989 (6,7,8) - 这里和上面一样 建议突出一下 别和旁边一样的间距 另外01:07:989 (6,8) - 这两个没叠好
    01:19:536 (2) - 包住3呗
    01:34:690 (1,2) - 和之前一样
    01:37:577 (1,2) - 这里遮住太多了 打折也觉得不舒服 你再想想别的节奏或者吧这两个距离拉开一些
    01:40:566 (4,6) - 这两个分别用一下ctrl+g? 感觉有意思一些 而且不会太难 如果改了01:47:577 (5,6) - 这两个也一起ctrl+G
    01:44:278 (9,10,1) - 这些和掐面两个都叠到一起看着真心乱
    你在做blanket的时候取消GS 包的就会很好看额 我看你都没怎么包好
    00:27:577 (3,4,5,6) - 这四个做成两个一组的跳

[normal]

  • 00:08:195感觉像这里不应该空拍额 如果真要空 这里的二连和00:09:432 (1,2) - 紧接着这个都是叠在一起的 但是节奏不一样感觉不好
    00:58:092 (3) - 这个滑条感觉不对 白线哪里有vocal的可以你直接放过了
    高潮部分用滑条直接带过去的vocal有点多 感觉有点偷懒额 因为前面都一直追vocal 到了高潮反而空了好多很不合适 这首歌唱的也不快 音多的地方可以用往返滑条 最好别空唱歌
    01:17:474 这里添加一个note比较好
    感觉normal没啥问题0.0

感觉做的很不错啊0.0 起码很多地方摆放比较和曲能表现出曲子的感觉。。比我厉害多了额
给你射个星~ ;)
Topic Starter
Atrue

kamisamaaa wrote:

mod补完了~基本都是一些小的建议额 可以改可以不改~你自己看吧~
[hard]

  • 00:11:907 (2) - 这个吧00:12:731 (1) - 这个包住感觉比较好看和整洁~ 改的时候记着吧00:11:082 (1) - 这个做成和2对称 fixed
    00:17:267 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这些可以好好摆一摆 有意思一点 大概是又有意思点了吧。。这个地方我把8和4的尾巴叠起来了,间距不想做较大改变
    比如00:18:298 (1) - 和00:17:267 (4) - 叠起来感觉比较好看 00:17:474 (5,6,7) - 这三联可以吧8开头包住啊 或者间距拉开一点点和8看起来像是对称啊 然后把00:18:298 (1) - 和00:17:474 (5) - 这个叠起来啊 都会更有意思一些额 整体感也会强一些
    00:23:659 这里音很重的 空下来感觉不合适 嗯,跟的是歌词所以大概大丈夫,vocal这里可是强调连续的呢
    00:38:298 (2,3,4) - 整体向右移动一些 和1配合起来对称一点? 好的,顺便我也把5修了修
    00:38:298 (2,3,4) - 还有00:39:948 (1,2,3) - 是这首歌比较特别的节奏 你可以用大一些的间距 做点特别的梗突出一些 要不然这里和别处都是一样的1.0X完全就把这里掩盖下去了 和别地方感觉不出来不一样 求连贯,不想在这里本来比较弱的地方做大动作,求得是一种带过的感觉~
    00:54:587这里虽然没有音 但是感觉加个note很舒服 有一点空的感觉,我是严格按照vocal来下音的,vocal明显是在空这里嘛。。
    01:03:350 (1,2) - 这里为啥是个二连。。01:03:350这里的音感觉还没01:03:144这里的强呢 要是相加不如直接从01:03:247这里来个三联 也舒服一些 抱歉这里我是跟了那种鼓声,你可以静音音效然后25%听一下,虽然十分不明显,但是我还是觉得二连稍微感觉好些。。
    01:07:989 (6,7,8) - 这里和上面一样 建议突出一下 别和旁边一样的间距 另外01:07:989 (6,8) - 这两个没叠好 叠了,然后这中间我改了节奏,7改成了二连,也增大了78之间的距离
    01:19:536 (2) - 包住3呗
    01:34:690 (1,2) - 和之前一样 还是觉得二连好一点,因为如果三连的话感觉第一个音不明显
    01:37:577 (1,2) - 这里遮住太多了 打折也觉得不舒服 你再想想别的节奏或者吧这两个距离拉开一些 改了1.0间距
    01:40:566 (4,6) - 这两个分别用一下ctrl+g? 感觉有意思一些 而且不会太难 如果改了01:47:577 (5,6) - 这两个也一起ctrl+G 改了别的样式,因为如果ctrl+G就会打乱ds,后边那里实在是想不出来怎么改又不变ds了,所以就没改
    01:44:278 (9,10,1) - 这些和掐面两个都叠到一起看着真心乱 再看看,这里不太想改,如果改了就得大动工,况且堆叠的好的话也不会太乱
    你在做blanket的时候取消GS 包的就会很好看额 我看你都没怎么包好 我在做的时候是取消gs的。。。
    00:27:577 (3,4,5,6) - 这四个做成两个一组的跳 还是不改了,因为如果变两个一组的跳的话我理解得变间距,然而这里本来已经比较乱,如果要变间距会显得更加乱,因此还是pass了

[normal]

  • 00:08:195感觉像这里不应该空拍额 如果真要空 这里的二连和00:09:432 (1,2) - 紧接着这个都是叠在一起的 但是节奏不一样感觉不好 直接把后边的那个红线note移到前边的白线上来了
    00:58:092 (3) - 这个滑条感觉不对 白线哪里有vocal的可以你直接放过了 之前是减难度所以改成这样,不过现在既然提到了那我就改回去
    高潮部分用滑条直接带过去的vocal有点多 感觉有点偷懒额 因为前面都一直追vocal 到了高潮反而空了好多很不合适 这首歌唱的也不快 音多的地方可以用往返滑条 最好别空唱歌 难度已经爆表求不要再加难度,用滑条就是为了减小难度的
    01:17:474 这里添加一个note比较好 真心不能加了,再加马上就4星半了。。
    感觉normal没啥问题0.0

感觉做的很不错啊0.0 起码很多地方摆放比较和曲能表现出曲子的感觉。。比我厉害多了额
Mod好评!其实感觉过奖了,这图还比较渣。。
给你射个星~ ;)
多谢~
dennischan
Hello~
mod for mod~~
nice background by the way~~

00:04:278 (1) - Why is this note here? no music here~~
00:29:948 (7,1,2,3) - Replace with spinner? I think music suggests spinner here and you have no spinner in this diff anyway
(if you don't replace it with spinner at least stop the slider speed change)
00:31:700 (2) - NC?
00:33:762 (7) - delete this note? (and put 00:33:350 (6) - in its place)
01:07:164 (4) - NC?
01:08:814 (9) - NC?
01:13:350 (2) - don't stack this please. It makes people confuse it with triplets such as 01:11:907 (4,5,6) - and 1/4 notes like 01:11:907 (4,5,6) -
01:22:010 (3,4,5,6) - a little hard to read
01:30:051 (3,3,4,5) - hard to read
01:51:700 (1,2,3,4,5) - very hard to read >:(
01:50:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - not needed really. you can keep it if you want, but I think a spinner is enough for this part.
HP -1 (HP drain is much too high. People will die with HR on even with FC) This is a major suggestion. All others are relatively minor.
00:04:277 (1) - same, not needed. (no music here)
00:14:381 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Good job :) (I like triangles~~)
00:30:876 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - WHY NOT FOLLOW VOCAL!! remap please.
I think you should do what you did on the Shore diff. This part is bad because there are awkward breaks
(e.g between these two combos 00:36:855 (1,2,3,1,2) - ) and also it does not have any relation with the music.

Also, this part cause people to easily die with such a low amount of notes and high HP drain.
01:41:804 (1) - This slider is not nice :( make a better wriggle slider or just make a regular one.
01:48:402 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this kind of flow is ok, but I don't like it,
01:50:051 (1) - same, make a better slider or make a regular one.
01:53:350 (7) - replace with a spinner. (please~~~) end the spinner here(01:54:999 - ) or there(01:58:298 - )
00:04:278 (1) - Why is this note here? no music here~~
00:13:556 (3) - move this to stack with head of 00:11:907 (2) -
00:24:690 (4,1) - please try not to stack this~ it makes me confused as its half a beat but stacked (maybe its just me confused~)
00:28:195 (6,7) - also confusing (for me)
01:03:041 (9,1,2) - This is very confusing~
Nice diff by the way~
Found nothing wrong in the other diffs~
Good Luck, and I think you'll get this ranked soon~
Topic Starter
Atrue

dennischan wrote:

Hello~ Hello~~
mod for mod~~
nice background by the way~~ Thank you~


HP -1 (HP drain is much too high. People will die with HR on even with FC) This is a major suggestion. All others are relatively minor.
00:04:277 (1) - same, not needed. (no music here)
00:14:381 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Good job :) (I like triangles~~)
00:30:876 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - WHY NOT FOLLOW VOCAL!! remap please.
I think you should do what you did on the Shore diff. This part is bad because there are awkward breaks
(e.g between these two combos 00:36:855 (1,2,3,1,2) - ) and also it does not have any relation with the music.

Also, this part cause people to easily die with such a low amount of notes and high HP drain.
01:41:804 (1) - This slider is not nice :( make a better wriggle slider or just make a regular one.
01:48:402 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this kind of flow is ok, but I don't like it,
01:50:051 (1) - same, make a better slider or make a regular one.
01:53:350 (7) - replace with a spinner. (please~~~) end the spinner here(01:54:999 - ) or there(01:58:298 - )
In fact I'm gonna remap this diff and just beginning to do that. Anyway thank you for modding and I will take the mod in to the new diff.
00:04:278 (1) - Why is this note here? no music here~~ Hmm.. Maybe you can ignore the hitsound and you will find a drum here.
00:13:556 (3) - move this to stack with head of 00:11:907 (2) - Yes~
00:24:690 (4,1) - please try not to stack this~ it makes me confused as its half a beat but stacked (maybe its just me confused~) fixed
00:28:195 (6,7) - also confusing (for me) Hmm.. I choose not to fix it now.. Maybe ok here.
01:03:041 (9,1,2) - This is very confusing~ Canceled the stack on 9,1
Nice diff by the way~ Thank you~
Found nothing wrong in the other diffs~
Good Luck, and I think you'll get this ranked soon~ Oh~Thank you!
Thanks for modding!
moonlightleaf
歌不错 ,给个星星给你 加油^^/
Topic Starter
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moonlightleaf wrote:

歌不错 ,给个星星给你 加油^^/
谢啦~
Fycho
Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix
[General]
Disable letterbox and widescreen support for all diffs
[Hard]

  • 00:11:907 (2,1) –没对齐
    00:14:381 (1,2,3,4) –这种flow不是很好,排列的时候尽量不要直线=。=01:50:051 (1,1,1,1) –也是,我比较不喜欢这些,哪怕错开也行。我的话我会让00:12:731 (1,2,3,4) –成一个正常的几何形,然后00:14:381 (1,2,3,4) –移动方向一上一下,物件一左一右,看起来也美观flow也好
    00:20:979 (2,3,4,5) –这个形状不是很喜欢,正四边比这好看多了0.0
    00:22:628 (6,1) –这里都拘在右边感觉很挤,建议把00:23:041 (1) –挪开
    00:29:432 (10) –nc非常乱,这里都到10了。。。建议一根大白线NC一次之前好像说过
    00:34:175 (1,2,3,4) –和之前差不多,我建议00:34:999 (3,4) – 旋转一个角度,竖过来,不要2,3是直线flow
    00:52:319 (5,1,2) –挤在一块了=。=
    00:54:793 (5,7) –弧度一样=。=
    00:56:237 (8,1) –间距太小了吧
    00:56:855 (1,2,3,4) –怎么妞妞蛐蛐的
    01:08:814 (1,2,3,4) –hard难度里这种还是首尾相接比较好,你1的尾巴在左边2的头怎么到中间去了,这样是insane的难度了我觉得
    01:14:587 (7,3) –难看的overlap
    01:15:206 (2,3) -^
    01:17:474 (1,2) –看起来总那么不舒服,不是很对称
    01:17:474 (1,3) –乱,overlap
    01:18:298 (3,5) –滑条弧度不要变来变去,太乱
    01:30:670 (7,8,9,10,11) –NC巨长,中间断开
    01:37:577 (1) –有点坑,而且还是hard,坑读图,别和2stack
    01:40:154 (3,4,5,6) –分开啊,首尾叠着看起来有点缩=。=
    01:44:278 (9,10,1) –我不是很喜欢这种梗
    01:46:752 (3,4,5,6) -^
    01:49:226 (5) –加nc?
Topic Starter
Atrue

Fycho wrote:

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix
[General]
Disable letterbox and widescreen support for all diffs
[Hard]

  • 00:11:907 (2,1) –没对齐
    00:14:381 (1,2,3,4) –这种flow不是很好,排列的时候尽量不要直线=。=01:50:051 (1,1,1,1) –也是,我比较不喜欢这些,哪怕错开也行。我的话我会让00:12:731 (1,2,3,4) –成一个正常的几何形,然后00:14:381 (1,2,3,4) –移动方向一上一下,物件一左一右,看起来也美观flow也好
    00:20:979 (2,3,4,5) –这个形状不是很喜欢,正四边比这好看多了0.0
    00:22:628 (6,1) –这里都拘在右边感觉很挤,建议把00:23:041 (1) –挪开
    00:29:432 (10) –nc非常乱,这里都到10了。。。建议一根大白线NC一次之前好像说过
    00:34:175 (1,2,3,4) –和之前差不多,我建议00:34:999 (3,4) – 旋转一个角度,竖过来,不要2,3是直线flow
    00:52:319 (5,1,2) –挤在一块了=。=
    00:54:793 (5,7) –弧度一样=。=
    00:56:237 (8,1) –间距太小了吧
    00:56:855 (1,2,3,4) –怎么妞妞蛐蛐的
    01:08:814 (1,2,3,4) –hard难度里这种还是首尾相接比较好,你1的尾巴在左边2的头怎么到中间去了,这样是insane的难度了我觉得
    01:14:587 (7,3) –难看的overlap
    01:15:206 (2,3) -^
    01:17:474 (1,2) –看起来总那么不舒服,不是很对称
    01:17:474 (1,3) –乱,overlap
    01:18:298 (3,5) –滑条弧度不要变来变去,太乱
    01:30:670 (7,8,9,10,11) –NC巨长,中间断开
    01:37:577 (1) –有点坑,而且还是hard,坑读图,别和2stack
    01:40:154 (3,4,5,6) –分开啊,首尾叠着看起来有点缩=。=
    01:44:278 (9,10,1) –我不是很喜欢这种梗
    01:46:752 (3,4,5,6) -^
    01:49:226 (5) –加nc?
Sorry but a lot of matters of patterns are mentioned and I think it's better to remap for a better arrangement.
Thanks for modding.. Remapping~ :)
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