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Kajiura Yuki - 1 & 0 City

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Lizbeth
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Freideg 13 November 2009 at 11:44:16

Artist: Kajiura Yuki
Title: 1 & 0 City
Source: Tsubasa Chronicle
Tags: Future Soundscape Lissette
BPM: 130
Filesize: 5861kb
Play Time: 02:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,67 stars, 103 notes)
  2. Hard (4,86 stars, 315 notes)
  3. Insane (4,93 stars, 342 notes)
  4. Lissette's Normal (3,76 stars, 172 notes)
Download: Kajiura Yuki - 1 & 0 City
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Hi!
This is another one of TRC OST. 1 & 0 City of Future Soundscape II
Any constructive critics are welcome
plz try it, and leave your comments

Also thanks Lissette for the diff n_n

If you wanna check all maps of the Tsubasa Chronicle OST Project Click Here
Last edited by Lizbeth , edited 21 times in total.
Lissette
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Lissette
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Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
The picture's width should be 1024, not the height. Resize the background please~

Normal~
  1. 01:18:79 (1) - Move 1/4 of a tick forward.
  2. 01:19:71 (1) - ^
  3. 01:32:29 (1) - Suggestion: Move back 1/6 of a tick. (01:32:25)
  4. 01:45:79 (1,2,3) - Suggestion: Maybe these could have the same beat placements as the previous combo?

Hard~
  1. Redo break. It'll shorten.

Insane~
  1. 00:26:46 (1) - Snap to white tick.
Lizbeth
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All fixed, thanks Mafiamaster n_n
minyeob
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minyeob
[Normal]
01:17:52 (3) - Hard to read
01:24:21 (3) - Make this 1/4 beat later
01:41:63 (4) - Frankly speaking, this circle is ugly :o

[Hard],[Insane]
Looks fine to me. But I think something is wrong:; Need other modder's opinion.
Breeze
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Breeze
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Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
[Normal]
00:55:02 (2) - Add a Finish at the end?

[Hard]
Looks good to me~

[Insane]
Fine~

Starr'd
Lizbeth
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Thanks for modding Breeze and animask

Breeze wrote:

hi Lizbeth
I find that each your map had a diff. of Lissette XD
you two are just like twins~
and, your map is DO great
Actually, Lissette is my twin sister n_nU
thanks a lot for the kds star
glad u like the map :)
Breeze
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Breeze
o.o oh, that's great XD
pretty twins~

and good luck to your map :D
tieff
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tieff
Offset: -10~12.

[Lissette's Normal]
00:14:63 (7,8) - Remove whistles.
00:48:33 ~ 01:02:869 - Pretty boring part. You can map it better.
01:44:29 (2,3) - Nazi. Spacing.

[Hard]
00:37:48 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since we have stereo hitsounds...



[Insane]
All good.

Star, good work.
Lizbeth
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thanks for modding tieff

tieff wrote:

[Hard]
00:37:48 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since we have stereo hitsounds...

good idea :D
Mystearica
Mystearica
Just myself again.

[Normal]

I liked it, great. First thing I noticed was the Tsubasa Chronicle logo feather you guys had used, AWESOME.

[Hard]

Again I liked it, though the bpm isn't what I'm good at ;_;

00:35:63 (1,3) - Only thing I did like were the claps on these sliders, suggest removing.

[Insane]

Ouch this is hard, I was careless and failed my first run x_x

Managed to fc with crap accuracy though XD

I like this as well, just a couple suggestions here:

00:20:40 - Add a note here
00:35:63 (1,3) - remove claps


☆
Lizbeth
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thanks Mystearica
all fixed n_n
Ekaru
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Ekaru
Normal: Fine.

Hard: Hard for a hard. 1 slider at the end that had the bottom slightly cut off, otherwise fine.

Insane: No comment.

Star.
antony11
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antony11
I find nothing wrong.
But you can try offset -20 It will be better
Lizbeth
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thanks for modding Ekaru and antony11

n_n
Lesjuh
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Lesjuh
I'm late ;_;

This map is perfectly playable and doesn't have any errors.

Good job Liz and Liss :D
Lizbeth
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lesjuh wrote:

I'm late ;_;

This map is perfectly playable and doesn't have any errors.

Good job Liz and Liss :D
thanks for checking lesjuh :)


also, easy coming soon, i finally dicede to map an easy version n_nU
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WyndII
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WyndII
Easy
So fine~

Lissette's Normal
TOTALLY fine.

Hard
fine

Insane
00:17:86 (5,8) - stack it exactly at the end of this slider 00:16:94 (1) - Zzz
00:24:56 (1,2,3) - not properly stacked
00:48:33 (1,2,3,4,5) - cool~

Star
SteRRuM
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SteRRuM
Hi!
[Timing]
Offset: 7 930.
Resnap all notes on all difficulties.
[Easy]
  1. 01:24:31 (4) - Move end's tick 1 grid to the left.
[Lisette's Normal]
  1. 00:31:474 - Maybe add a note with whistle?.
[Hard]
  1. Fine.
[Insane]
  1. 00:24:54 (1,2,3) - Weird stack,
  2. 01:23:39 (1,2) - Weird stack.
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
A Jazz section? Wow..

All: Too... much... whistles.... the music itself doesn't give too strong of an impact most times, so the whistle really stood out (too much) for me...If you want, play with the volume in different sections a bit
(I'm fine with 01:49:48 to 02:09:78's sections, those sound nice)

Easy-
fine

Lissette-
I like the rhythm the whistles create, but again, it stands out too much... :? ;;
Nazi-
SPOILER
00:28:24 (2) - please remove the whistle sliderslide sound..
01:17:16 (2) - ^
01:41:62 (4) - horizontal flip from 2?

Hard- Whistles again sound nice, but overused in most sections
Nazi-
SPOILER
00:39:32 (5,6) - horizontal flip from 1?

Insane- Just -slightly- overused here
01:04:13 (1) - start this earlier, by 1/2 beat maybe
Lots of no grid snap use >-<
Nazi-
SPOILER
01:58:02 (2) - horizontal flip from 1 (from the last combo)
02:01:48 (9) - remove clap please
02:03:33 (6) - ^ and add whistle~?
02:05:63 (6,7,8) - horizontal flip from 2,3,4 (or just right one tick)
02:09:79 (1,2) - add sliderslide whistle to both or remove from both
02:14:40 (6) - why not just make a hexagon...? and please horizontal and vertical flip the notes around x_x

x_x, I don't know how to comment on the hitsounds in the Saxophone section
Very nice by the way, the songs are hard to map and you two create a lot of fine beat in your maps
mrtn
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couldn't find any problems so bubble.
Alace
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Lizbeth
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thanks for checking Alace
all fixed n_n
bmin11
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bmin11
[Lisette's Normal]
00:28:24 (2) - kill the whistle for the body slider


I guess that's all for me
this map has a nice song, awsome patterns, great hitsounds....... what else do we need? lol
Starred~
Lizbeth
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dkey
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dkey
star~ :)
gdeath
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gdeath
i'm fine with all of them
nice map.
starry*
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Yes_old
:)
Lizbeth
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thanks for the stars satosid, gdeath and Yes.

glad u like it :)
ccbp
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Alace wrote:

<Hard>
01:56:85 (1) - use finish here and change all claps to finish (you did some in insane) It`s sounds better IMO

<insane>
01:56:85 (1) - use finish here and change all claps to finish
To this I've discussed with Alace, I personally think finish should start at 01:57:32 (3) - .
We can not persuade each other, so it's you to make the decision.
Here's my version of finish, you may check it and decide whether to change it or follow Alace's:
Download: Kajiura Yuki - 1 & 0 City (Lizbeth) [0.0].osu

It's absolutely a good map, why do bats all rank those craps rather than having a glimpse of this one?
Lizbeth
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After changing it as you said, and listening several times, i dont think it fits better the way you place the finish, cuz at this spot: 01:56:85 there is a main beat that fits very well with the finish and to follow the sequence i keep it as Alace said. Anyway, i started the finishes like you said around 01:57:32 (make more sense), and placed some wishtle in the prev part.

thanks for the help :)
DJPop
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Here since the beginning
DJPop
Just suggestions :3

~Easy~
02:07:47 (1) - move 1 beat right

~Normal~
00:33:55 (1) - start on white tick
01:40:24 (1,2,3,4) - not symmetric
01:53:16 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:07:70 (1) - start on white tick
02:13:24 (1) - ^

~Hard~
00:13:24 (2) - new combo
00:25:93 (4) - no hitsounds ?
01:23:39 (1,2,3,4) - not symmetric

~Insane~
01:56:85 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - not symmetric
01:58:70 (1,3) - offscreen
02:12:08 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - pattern


+Star
Andrea
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Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

All seems fine.

[Easy]

Fine.

[Lissette's Normal]

00:20:85 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:32:22 (1) - ^

[Hard]

02:02:62 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Insane]

01:04:12 (1) - Never start spinners on blue lines if isn't necessary.
Lizbeth
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Thanks Andre and Djpop.. all fixed n.n
kds given 0=)
eee
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eee
eeemod GO!!!

[Easy]

FAQ wrote:

Spinners too long
The flip side of the coin. Unless there is a good reason to retain the spinners, usually long spinners beyond six seconds are not recommended.
[Lissette]
01:32:22 (2) - I THINK, not sure, at 25% playback, I think this is 1/8 forward. Liz's [Hard] has it on blue as well, soooo, it's either yours or hers.
01:56:85 (1) - finish on beginning?

[Hard]
01:32:22 (2) -See [Lissette]

[Insane]
just fine

These maps are good, you should look into more BAT attention -_-
STAR!!!
Lizbeth
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eee wrote:

eeemod GO!!!

[Easy]

FAQ wrote:

Spinners too long
The flip side of the coin. Unless there is a good reason to retain the spinners, usually long spinners beyond six seconds are not recommended.
Ok.. i shortened the spinner

[Lissette]
01:32:22 (2) - I THINK, not sure, at 25% playback, I think this is 1/8 forward. Liz's [Hard] has it on blue as well, soooo, it's either yours or hers. just confirm with Liss and this was a mistake, fixed.. thanks for noticing
01:56:85 (1) - finish on beginning?

[Hard]
01:32:22 (2) -See [Lissette]

[Insane]
just fine

These maps are good, you should look into more BAT attention -_- thnx.. im trying _-_
STAR!!!
Takuma
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Bubbled.
Lizbeth
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Jarby
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Jarby
Also lovely.
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
Thanks!! n.n
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:P nice
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Lumiere
Bueno Felicidades x2 xD
^w^ ñyaaaa kushito suport here ;3
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