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Kajiura Yuki - 1 & 0 City

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Lizbeth
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Freideg 13 November 2009 at 11:44:16

Artist: Kajiura Yuki
Title: 1 & 0 City
Source: Tsubasa Chronicle
Tags: Future Soundscape Lissette
BPM: 130
Filesize: 5861kb
Play Time: 02:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,67 stars, 103 notes)
  2. Hard (4,86 stars, 315 notes)
  3. Insane (4,93 stars, 342 notes)
  4. Lissette's Normal (3,76 stars, 172 notes)
Download: Kajiura Yuki - 1 & 0 City
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hi!
This is another one of TRC OST. 1 & 0 City of Future Soundscape II
Any constructive critics are welcome
plz try it, and leave your comments

Also thanks Lissette for the diff n_n

If you wanna check all maps of the Tsubasa Chronicle OST Project Click Here
Lissette
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Mafiamaster
The picture's width should be 1024, not the height. Resize the background please~

Normal~
  1. 01:18:79 (1) - Move 1/4 of a tick forward.
  2. 01:19:71 (1) - ^
  3. 01:32:29 (1) - Suggestion: Move back 1/6 of a tick. (01:32:25)
  4. 01:45:79 (1,2,3) - Suggestion: Maybe these could have the same beat placements as the previous combo?

Hard~

  1. Redo break. It'll shorten.

Insane~

  1. 00:26:46 (1) - Snap to white tick.
Topic Starter
Lizbeth
All fixed, thanks Mafiamaster n_n
minyeob
[Normal]
01:17:52 (3) - Hard to read
01:24:21 (3) - Make this 1/4 beat later
01:41:63 (4) - Frankly speaking, this circle is ugly :o

[Hard],[Insane]
Looks fine to me. But I think something is wrong:; Need other modder's opinion.
Breeze
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Sleep Powder
[Normal]
00:55:02 (2) - Add a Finish at the end?

[Hard]
Looks good to me~

[Insane]
Fine~

Starr'd
Topic Starter
Lizbeth
Thanks for modding Breeze and animask

Breeze wrote:

hi Lizbeth
I find that each your map had a diff. of Lissette XD
you two are just like twins~
and, your map is DO great
Actually, Lissette is my twin sister n_nU
thanks a lot for the kds star
glad u like the map :)
Breeze
o.o oh, that's great XD
pretty twins~

and good luck to your map :D
tieff
Offset: -10~12.

[Lissette's Normal]
00:14:63 (7,8) - Remove whistles.
00:48:33 ~ 01:02:869 - Pretty boring part. You can map it better.
01:44:29 (2,3) - Nazi. Spacing.

[Hard]
00:37:48 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since we have stereo hitsounds...



[Insane]
All good.

Star, good work.
Topic Starter
Lizbeth
thanks for modding tieff

tieff wrote:

[Hard]
00:37:48 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since we have stereo hitsounds...

good idea :D
Mystearica
Just myself again.

[Normal]

I liked it, great. First thing I noticed was the Tsubasa Chronicle logo feather you guys had used, AWESOME.

[Hard]

Again I liked it, though the bpm isn't what I'm good at ;_;

00:35:63 (1,3) - Only thing I did like were the claps on these sliders, suggest removing.

[Insane]

Ouch this is hard, I was careless and failed my first run x_x

Managed to fc with crap accuracy though XD

I like this as well, just a couple suggestions here:

00:20:40 - Add a note here
00:35:63 (1,3) - remove claps


Topic Starter
Lizbeth
thanks Mystearica
all fixed n_n
Ekaru
Normal: Fine.

Hard: Hard for a hard. 1 slider at the end that had the bottom slightly cut off, otherwise fine.

Insane: No comment.

Star.
antony11
I find nothing wrong.
But you can try offset -20 It will be better
Topic Starter
Lizbeth
thanks for modding Ekaru and antony11

n_n
Lesjuh
I'm late ;_;

This map is perfectly playable and doesn't have any errors.

Good job Liz and Liss :D
Topic Starter
Lizbeth

lesjuh wrote:

I'm late ;_;

This map is perfectly playable and doesn't have any errors.

Good job Liz and Liss :D
thanks for checking lesjuh :)


also, easy coming soon, i finally dicede to map an easy version n_nU
GbL
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
WyndII
Easy
So fine~

Lissette's Normal
TOTALLY fine.

Hard
fine

Insane
00:17:86 (5,8) - stack it exactly at the end of this slider 00:16:94 (1) - Zzz
00:24:56 (1,2,3) - not properly stacked
00:48:33 (1,2,3,4,5) - cool~

Star
SteRRuM
Hi!
[Timing]
Offset: 7 930.
Resnap all notes on all difficulties.
[Easy]
  1. 01:24:31 (4) - Move end's tick 1 grid to the left.
[Lisette's Normal]
  1. 00:31:474 - Maybe add a note with whistle?.
[Hard]
  1. Fine.
[Insane]
  1. 00:24:54 (1,2,3) - Weird stack,
  2. 01:23:39 (1,2) - Weird stack.
Shinxyn
A Jazz section? Wow..

All: Too... much... whistles.... the music itself doesn't give too strong of an impact most times, so the whistle really stood out (too much) for me...If you want, play with the volume in different sections a bit
(I'm fine with 01:49:48 to 02:09:78's sections, those sound nice)

Easy-
fine

Lissette-
I like the rhythm the whistles create, but again, it stands out too much... :? ;;
Nazi-
SPOILER
00:28:24 (2) - please remove the whistle sliderslide sound..
01:17:16 (2) - ^
01:41:62 (4) - horizontal flip from 2?

Hard-
Whistles again sound nice, but overused in most sections
Nazi-
SPOILER
00:39:32 (5,6) - horizontal flip from 1?

Insane-
Just -slightly- overused here
01:04:13 (1) - start this earlier, by 1/2 beat maybe
Lots of no grid snap use >-<
Nazi-
SPOILER
01:58:02 (2) - horizontal flip from 1 (from the last combo)
02:01:48 (9) - remove clap please
02:03:33 (6) - ^ and add whistle~?
02:05:63 (6,7,8) - horizontal flip from 2,3,4 (or just right one tick)
02:09:79 (1,2) - add sliderslide whistle to both or remove from both
02:14:40 (6) - why not just make a hexagon...? and please horizontal and vertical flip the notes around x_x

x_x, I don't know how to comment on the hitsounds in the Saxophone section
Very nice by the way, the songs are hard to map and you two create a lot of fine beat in your maps
mrtn
couldn't find any problems so bubble.
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