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Yes_old

Joined May 2009

Yes_old 2009-09-19T23:55:17+00:00

hard
00:53:81 (6,8,10) - whistle
00:57:82 (1,2) - whistle
01:04:19 (5,7) - whistle
01:11:98 (7) - clap
01:36:76 (1,3) - whistle
01:59:65 (8,11,13) - ^
02:00:83 (1,3,5,7) - whistle at end of slider
02:08:15 (x) - maybe add a note here?
02:15:94 (1,3,5,7) - whistle at end of slider
02:14:76 (8,11,13) - whistle?
02:27:86 (x) - add note
02:57:95 (1,3,4,5) - whistle

taka's
00:46:50 (4,5,6,7) - whistles instead?
02:00:14 (12,14) - whistles
02:07:69 (8,9,10,11) - whistles? it sounds like too many finishes to me
02:11:70 (10,11) - whistle

normal
00:21:95 (1,2,3,4) - whistles instead?
00:39:41 (1) - clap at end of slider
00:40:83 (4) - clap
01:26:14 (4) - finish?
02:36:23 (1) - too far
02:43:08 (4) - claps on repeats, too
02:47:33 (4) - finish?
02:50:63 (10) - put claps on all parts

waaah hitsound mods x_X i hope i helped a little ,_,
this is such a cute song! you get a star, of course.

Sure

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Topic Starter

Sure 2009-09-20T04:22:09+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

MegaManEXE

710 posts

Here since the beginning

MegaManEXE 2009-09-22T23:46:01+00:00

This is really good for a first map o.o

Nothing stuck out at me, I really like your hitsounds though

Star~

DeadAlready

1,575 posts

Joined August 2008

DeadAlready 2009-09-24T17:02:04+00:00

Really nice 1st map. <3

and the song is cute too.

awesome~ lol

then I have some advices...

[Normal]
01:32:51 (5,6) - and 02:53:70 (5,6) -
Uh...I think maybe don't use 2 notes in 1/4 beat in normal diff even though this bpm is only 127.12. XD
maybe can use a slider will be fine. 0.0

02:59:13 (1) - Wow. super good heart slider. lol ( I really can't make this kind of slider well... o_Q)
but... maybe the slider head and tail can put more clear. XD
( I turned wrong way on this and the same heart slider in hard. XDDDDD)

These are advices, you can decide fix these or not.

it's ok.

oh...and I think offset+30ms will be better for me... :\
I'm not sure because I am not good in timing XD.
You can try it and decide whether you changed the offset or not, it's ok, too. 0.0

finally, it's a very good 1st map at all.

star for you and gogogo <3

Sure

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Sure 2009-09-24T23:47:40+00:00

MegaManEXE wrote:
This is really good for a first map o.o

Nothing stuck out at me, I really like your hitsounds though

Star~

Thanks~

quintitem wrote:
Really nice 1st map. <3

and the song is cute too.

awesome~ lol

then I have some advices...

[Normal]
01:32:51 (5,6) - and 02:53:70 (5,6) -
Uh...I think maybe don't use 2 notes in 1/4 beat in normal diff even though this bpm is only 127.12. XD
maybe can use a slider will be fine. 0.0 // fixed

02:59:13 (1) - Wow. super good heart slider. lol ( I really can't make this kind of slider well... o_Q)
but... maybe the slider head and tail can put more clear. XD // fixed
( I turned wrong way on this and the same heart slider in hard. XDDDDD)

These are advices, you can decide fix these or not. it's ok.

oh...and I think offset+30ms will be better for me... :\ // adjust +10ms. +30ms is too late.
I'm not sure because I am not good in timing XD.
You can try it and decide whether you changed the offset or not, it's ok, too. 0.0

finally, it's a very good 1st map at all.

star for you and gogogo <3

Thanks for your playing, mod and star

Mystearica

Mystearica 2009-10-03T02:33:25+00:00

Set a preview time for all difficulties please.

[Normal]

00:16:77 (1) - Fade out on this spinner? The vocal fades out so I think it'll go well.
00:20:31 - All finish section from here on, though I think you don't have to use all those finishes. Soft whistle is probably fine as the music has a nice bell sound in this part, you can probably do no hitsounds. Alternatively if you really want to keep the finishes, lower their volume a bit.

01:05:50 - Reinsert break

Nothing else I can complain about, cool.

[taka's Hard]

Wow. kioukiou #2.

This is amazing.

00:28:82 - Reinsert break.
01:48:09 - Reinsert this break as well.

[Hard]

Hmm...not much I can complain about, but I didn't like the claps. I think your map will sound better without them, or use soft whistles instead.

00:25:94 - Break needs to be reinserted.
01:48:81 - This break is also off but just by a tiny bit.

Overall, pretty good map. Thanks for mapping Yukari Tamura ^_^

Sure

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Sure 2009-10-03T09:45:18+00:00

Thanks for your mod and star. But, sorry Mystearica.
You didn't read my words. I gave up this map.

Mystearica

Mystearica 2009-10-03T22:45:41+00:00

You should never give up on a map. (Unless the song itself is impossible to time or very very difficulty to map)

Especially since this isn't bad either, and taka put in his effort as well so you really should see this map to the end.

WyndII

777 posts

Joined October 2008

WyndII 2009-10-09T12:38:12+00:00

Ommmggg,
Im so sorry I didn't see this in my modding QQ, Q.Q
Sorrryyyy!!
Ok, mod time. wait what?
Ur going to give up wit this map?

I wont mod this if you're going to give up like
01:26:15 (6) - finish it XD?

Sure

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Sure 2009-10-09T13:33:00+00:00

I'm sorry WyndII.
I totally forgot what I added reply at your modding queue. >_<
It's my fault. Sorry.

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2009-10-19T12:27:08+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Andrea 2011-05-18T14:24:01+00:00

Revived.

S o r d a

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Joined July 2009

S o r d a 2011-05-22T02:02:39+00:00

go go~

swish

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swish 2011-05-22T08:07:42+00:00

revive

Thite

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Thite 2011-05-24T18:51:17+00:00

Sure

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Sure 2011-05-25T01:34:59+00:00

Thanks for star!

S o r d a, swish and Thite ^_^/

Tanmak

896 posts

Joined August 2009

Tanmak 2011-05-27T05:38:30+00:00

rivived...

namazun_old

namazun_old 2011-06-20T13:20:48+00:00

>w</====★

DeadAlready

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Joined August 2008

DeadAlready 2011-06-21T16:17:35+00:00

>w< really memorized me for our first meet(?)
hmmm ok two stars again~ :3
gogo yk~

Sure

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Sure 2011-06-21T16:23:40+00:00

Thanks for star, Tanmak and namazun

That happened almost 2 years ago already. lol
Thanks a lot, quintitem <3

Kenezz

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Kenezz 2011-07-09T05:09:38+00:00

Hola o/
Kenezz's Bakamod
Orz a map Perfect

General

00:20:102 (x) - imo this rhytmical break is unnecesary, since not there are remarkable change in the track furthermore is very short

Normal

02:58:929 (x) - Add a note here?

Hard

01:09:544 (x) - Add a stacked note here?
02:30:727 (x) - ^
02:38:397 (1,2,3,4) - Flip Horizontal?, it improvesthe flow imo

Another perfect map yaay~ Go go rank~
Sorry for the bakamod ;__;
Staaar!

Sure

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Sure 2011-07-09T06:45:07+00:00

Kenezz wrote:
Hola o/
Kenezz's Bakamod
Orz a map Perfect

General
00:20:102 (x) - imo this rhytmical break is unnecesary, since not there are remarkable change in the track furthermore is very short // Extended spinner length instead of remove break.

Normal
02:58:929 (x) - Add a note here? // OK

Hard
01:09:544 (x) - Add a stacked note here? // No. Actually there is 1/6.
02:30:727 (x) - ^
02:38:397 (1,2,3,4) - Flip Horizontal?, it improvesthe flow imo // Nope, previous note's hitburst bothers it.

Another perfect map yaay~ Go go rank~
Sorry for the bakamod ;__;
Staaar!

Thanks for mod!

SagisawaYomi

73 posts

Joined December 2009

SagisawaYomi 2011-07-12T02:53:43+00:00

Sure

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Sure 2011-08-25T11:35:00+00:00

EDIT : OK, it's ready. Guest diff has been cancelled.

~~My message is not too short.~~

OzzyOzrock

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OzzyOzrock 2011-08-27T01:46:13+00:00

[Easy]
Amazing diff!
Just one small thing

01:39:397 (1,2,1,2) - Instead of stacks, maybe this instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137696
Really great lol.
[Normal]
My gosh.

Can't point anything out.
Great work.
[Hard]
Correctly describes how I feel.

Really, this is one of the most well polished, structured, and just prettiest mapsets I've seen in a while.
...
I need to mod mod structure maps...

But yes, amazing job.

Sure

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Sure 2011-08-27T02:11:50+00:00

OzzyOzrock wrote:
[Easy]
Amazing diff!
Just one small thing

01:39:397 (1,2,1,2) - Instead of stacks, maybe this instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137696 // That's it, fixed!
Really great lol.
[Normal]
My gosh.

Can't point anything out.
Great work.
[Hard]
Correctly describes how I feel.

Really, this is one of the most well polished, structured, and just prettiest mapsets I've seen in a while.
...
I need to mod mod structure maps...

But yes, amazing job. // Thank you

Thanks for mod and star!

pieguyn

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pieguyn 2011-08-27T08:03:23+00:00

Easy:

01:07:774 (1) - Remove NC?
02:59:165 (2) - <3

Normal:

02:59:165 (4) - =w=
03:44:476 (4) - (nazi) 1 level 3 grid up?

Hard:

03:00:109 (2) - >w<// though, perhaps silence the end?

nice map and cute song~ =w=

Sure

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Sure 2011-08-27T09:04:15+00:00

pieguy1372 wrote:
Easy:

01:07:774 (1) - Remove NC? // No
02:59:165 (2) - <3 // <3

Normal:

02:59:165 (4) - =w=
03:44:476 (4) - (nazi) 1 level 3 grid up? // Fixed

Hard:

03:00:109 (2) - >w<// though, perhaps silence the end? // Nope

nice map and cute song~ =w=

Thanks for mod

kioukiou

774 posts

Joined June 2008

kioukiou 2011-08-27T09:54:55+00:00

Moeeeee map. <3
I could not find any problem.

Nice map,have a star!

Sure

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Sure 2011-08-27T11:11:46+00:00

Thanks, QQ ojousama!

~~My message is not too short!~~

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2011-09-19T15:51:27+00:00

kioukiou wrote:
Moeeeee map. <3
I could not find any problem.
Nice map,have a star!

this! ^

time to bubble :3

nice first map!

Sure

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Sure 2011-09-19T15:59:54+00:00

Thanks for bubble, xierbaliti

~~My message is not too short.~~

Sakura

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Sakura 2011-09-20T01:01:03+00:00

Well i wouldnt have any problem with ranking this, patternwise, etc is pretty good and everything, but there's 3 things bugging me.

1) Difficulty spread, the biggest thing bugging me is the score spread between all difficulties 650k -> 3m -> 14m
2) Also the fact that the song/map is 4:45 long
3) Easy difficulty being only 3 minutes long.

Please check what you can do about these, sorry if i couldnt help you XD (at least i helped you changing the time the title text appears)

Sure

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Sure 2011-09-20T02:02:03+00:00

1) Yeah, I agree with score spread is not so good. I can't make any other diff due to my inspiration runs out.

In before, I asked quintitem making a guest diff for solve this problem. But he has been busy, it was denied.

2) It isn't too long. I think under 5 mins song is acceptable. Also it's slow song.

3) ~~[Easy] is very easy. It's just for reducing boredom for playing and mapping.~~ OK, let's go till end.

By the way, they are true. However they are not major problems.
I have a similar map that ranked already. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/19912
Anyway thanks for checking, SH.

EDIT : Length of Easy has been extended. And fixed heart slider in Hard.

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2011-09-21T10:39:53+00:00

Draining time is 4:11, it's fine.

and since the Easy diff has been fixed, have your bubble back!

Raging Bull

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Raging Bull 2011-09-21T11:18:36+00:00

ykcarrot wrote:
EDIT : And fixed heart slider in Hard.

That's all I need to know (ノ^_^)ノ彡☆

Sakura

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Sakura 2011-09-22T04:11:57+00:00

Well it's a pretty nice first map, i love the music, and the map's play pretty good and flow nice so i'd love to say this is now

Ranked!

Congratulations!

Sure

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Sure 2011-09-22T04:14:41+00:00

Thanks again xierbaliti, RB and Saku~ra!

Raging Bull

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Raging Bull 2011-09-22T04:18:48+00:00

Congratulations \o/

Very nice first map! I think you will be a very good mapper in the future!

SapphireGhost