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Yamato Nadeshiko - Koi no Tenshi Mai Orite

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Sure
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Sure
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011년 9월 21일 수요일 at 오전 1:11:10

Artist: Yamato Nadeshiko
Title: Koi no Tenshi Mai Orite
Source: Love Hina
Tags: Horie Yui Tamura Yukari Christmas xmas
BPM: 127.12
Filesize: 4977kb
Play Time: 04:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.42 stars, 236 notes)
  2. Hard (4.84 stars, 642 notes)
  3. Normal (2.97 stars, 348 notes)
Download: Yamato Nadeshiko - Koi no Tenshi Mai Orite
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 34th Ranked Beatmap.
From the anime 'Love Hina Christmas Special'.

Thanks for your cooperation!
Last edited by Sure , edited 55 times in total.
taka1235
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taka1235
x_x

Download: Yukari Tamura&Yui Horie - Koi no Tenshi Maiorite (ykcarrot) [taka's Hard].osu
Last edited by taka1235 , edited 5 times in total.
minyeob
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2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
Well, I think speaking Korean is better.
한국어로 하겠습니다.

[Hard]
00:11:09 (1,2,3,4) -> 1 - 2 - 3 시간간격하고 3 - 4의 시간간격이 다른데 간격이 똑같네요 ㅇㅅㅇ
00:16:64 (1) - 스핀마크 시간 맞추기 어렵죠. ㅇㅇ 어렵습니다. 1/4박자(1/4 Beatsnap divisor 상태에서 1칸) 뒤로 1칸 드래그 해주세요. (스핀마크가 하얀색 부분부터 시작되야 해요) 아, 그리고 1/4 만큼 길이를 줄여주는 것도 잊지 마세요(뒤로 당겼으니까)
비트맵 만드실 때 타카님꺼 참고로 하시면 더 좋을 것 같네요.

[taka difficulty]
Taka doesn't know Korean so... English go! The Korean thing is a translation for carrot.
하지만 캐롯님도 뭐가 틀렸는지 대충 아시면 좋을 것 같아서 한글도 써드립니다.

02:03:91 (11) - Combo is too high...... New Combo please
02:03:91 (11) - 콤보 숫자가 너무 높네요 New Combo 눌러주세요
02:08:16 (12) - New combo. Because spacing is changed.
02:08:16 (12) - 간격이 변동됬기 때문에 New Combo를 사용하셔야 합니다.
02:13:82 (8) - New combo? I'm not sure
02:13:82 (8) - New combo 써야 될 듯


근데 타카님 난이도는 타카님이 따로 고치시는 거죠...?

Edit: Starred.
Last edited by minyeob , edited 1 time in total.
naruti
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naruti
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Sure
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Sure

naruti wrote:

argh!!!
i did this hitsounds stuf while you deleted insane and added hard with kai time <_<

i hope you can stil use it
SPOILER
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179364,-100,4,2,0,61,0,0
mod later
Thanks for your star :D
But sorry, I don't wanna use normal hitsound.. :(
- reduce Kiai time.
- increase soft hitsound's volume.
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
Really cool gameplay ^^
And i love the BG *__*

//Normal//
00:42:251(x) - add a note here
00:44:139(6) - Finish hit sound
00:47:207(1,2,3) - too hard for normal. please, take off the (2)
00:50:983(1,2,3) - ^
01:10:335(3,4,5) - take off the (4)

//taka's Hard//
00:53:825(10) - New Combo
00:57:837(8) - ^
01:04:681(7) - New combo?
01:07:749(1,2,3,4) - on the Jump at 01:00:197, u used a combo Section. If you wanna use Combo Section on Jumps, u gotta use on every jump, ok?
01:24:505(6) - New Combo
01:59:904(10) - ^
02:13:828(8) - Take off New combo?
02:15:008(old 5) - New Combo
02:19:256(11) - New Combo
02:21:380(1,2,3,4) - same thing I say at 01:07:749.
02:28:932(1,2,3,4) - ^
02:45:688(6) - New Combo

I'll mod the Hard later ^^

Really cool map, *STAR*
Sure
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Sure

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Really cool gameplay ^^
And i love the BG *__*

//Normal//
00:42:251(x) - add a note here
00:44:139(6) - Finish hit sound
00:47:207(1,2,3) - too hard for normal. please, take off the (2)
00:50:983(1,2,3) - ^
01:10:335(3,4,5) - take off the (4)

//taka's Hard//
00:53:825(10) - New Combo
00:57:837(8) - ^
01:04:681(7) - New combo?
01:07:749(1,2,3,4) - on the Jump at 01:00:197, u used a combo Section. If you wanna use Combo Section on Jumps, u gotta use on every jump, ok?
01:24:505(6) - New Combo
01:59:904(10) - ^
02:13:828(8) - Take off New combo?
02:15:008(old 5) - New Combo
02:19:256(11) - New Combo
02:21:380(1,2,3,4) - same thing I say at 01:07:749.
02:28:932(1,2,3,4) - ^
02:45:688(6) - New Combo

I'll mod the Hard later ^^

Really cool map, *STAR*

[Normal]
00:42:251(x) - add a note here // added
00:44:139(6) - Finish hit sound // add hitsound in whole
00:47:207(1,2,3) - too hard for normal. please, take off the (2)
00:50:983(1,2,3) - ^
01:10:335(3,4,5) - take off the (4)
// changed all triple 1/4 beats to double 2/4 beats.

Thanks for your star! :D
Cyril Scarlet
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Love Hina !!! ~
Sure
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S i R i R u wrote:

Love Hina !!! ~

Yes! Love Hina X-mas Special!! >_<
Thanks for your star ;)
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Yes_old
hard
00:53:81 (6,8,10) - whistle
00:57:82 (1,2) - whistle
01:04:19 (5,7) - whistle
01:11:98 (7) - clap
01:36:76 (1,3) - whistle
01:59:65 (8,11,13) - ^
02:00:83 (1,3,5,7) - whistle at end of slider
02:08:15 (x) - maybe add a note here?
02:15:94 (1,3,5,7) - whistle at end of slider
02:14:76 (8,11,13) - whistle?
02:27:86 (x) - add note
02:57:95 (1,3,4,5) - whistle

taka's
00:46:50 (4,5,6,7) - whistles instead?
02:00:14 (12,14) - whistles
02:07:69 (8,9,10,11) - whistles? it sounds like too many finishes to me
02:11:70 (10,11) - whistle

normal
00:21:95 (1,2,3,4) - whistles instead?
00:39:41 (1) - clap at end of slider
00:40:83 (4) - clap
01:26:14 (4) - finish?
02:36:23 (1) - too far
02:43:08 (4) - claps on repeats, too
02:47:33 (4) - finish?
02:50:63 (10) - put claps on all parts


waaah hitsound mods x_X i hope i helped a little ,_,
this is such a cute song! you get a star, of course.
Sure
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Sure
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
MegaManEXE
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MegaManEXE
This is really good for a first map o.o

Nothing stuck out at me, I really like your hitsounds though

Star~
DeadAlready
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Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
Really nice 1st map. <3

and the song is cute too. :D

awesome~ lol

then I have some advices...

[Normal]
01:32:51 (5,6) - and 02:53:70 (5,6) -
Uh...I think maybe don't use 2 notes in 1/4 beat in normal diff even though this bpm is only 127.12. XD
maybe can use a slider will be fine. 0.0

02:59:13 (1) - Wow. super good heart slider. lol ( I really can't make this kind of slider well... o_Q)
but... maybe the slider head and tail can put more clear. XD
( I turned wrong way on this and the same heart slider in hard. XDDDDD)

These are advices, you can decide fix these or not. :) it's ok. :D

oh...and I think offset+30ms will be better for me... :\
I'm not sure because I am not good in timing XD.
You can try it and decide whether you changed the offset or not, it's ok, too. 0.0


finally, it's a very good 1st map at all. :D

star for you and gogogo <3
Sure
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Sure

MegaManEXE wrote:

This is really good for a first map o.o

Nothing stuck out at me, I really like your hitsounds though

Star~
Thanks~


quintitem wrote:

Really nice 1st map. <3

and the song is cute too. :D

awesome~ lol

then I have some advices...

[Normal]
01:32:51 (5,6) - and 02:53:70 (5,6) -
Uh...I think maybe don't use 2 notes in 1/4 beat in normal diff even though this bpm is only 127.12. XD
maybe can use a slider will be fine. 0.0 // fixed

02:59:13 (1) - Wow. super good heart slider. lol ( I really can't make this kind of slider well... o_Q)
but... maybe the slider head and tail can put more clear. XD // fixed
( I turned wrong way on this and the same heart slider in hard. XDDDDD)

These are advices, you can decide fix these or not. :) it's ok. :D

oh...and I think offset+30ms will be better for me... :\ // adjust +10ms. +30ms is too late.
I'm not sure because I am not good in timing XD.
You can try it and decide whether you changed the offset or not, it's ok, too. 0.0


finally, it's a very good 1st map at all. :D

star for you and gogogo <3
Thanks for your playing, mod and star :D
Mystearica
Mystearica
Set a preview time for all difficulties please.

[Normal]

00:16:77 (1) - Fade out on this spinner? The vocal fades out so I think it'll go well.
00:20:31 - All finish section from here on, though I think you don't have to use all those finishes. Soft whistle is probably fine as the music has a nice bell sound in this part, you can probably do no hitsounds. Alternatively if you really want to keep the finishes, lower their volume a bit.

01:05:50 - Reinsert break

Nothing else I can complain about, cool.

[taka's Hard]

Wow. kioukiou #2.

This is amazing.

00:28:82 - Reinsert break.
01:48:09 - Reinsert this break as well.

[Hard]

Hmm...not much I can complain about, but I didn't like the claps. I think your map will sound better without them, or use soft whistles instead.

00:25:94 - Break needs to be reinserted.
01:48:81 - This break is also off but just by a tiny bit.

Overall, pretty good map. Thanks for mapping Yukari Tamura ^_^
Sure
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Thanks for your mod and star. But, sorry Mystearica.
You didn't read my words. I gave up this map. :(
Mystearica
Mystearica
You should never give up on a map. (Unless the song itself is impossible to time or very very difficulty to map)

Especially since this isn't bad either, and taka put in his effort as well so you really should see this map to the end.
WyndII
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WyndII
Ommmggg,
Im so sorry I didn't see this in my modding QQ, Q.Q
Sorrryyyy!!
Ok, mod time. wait what?
Ur going to give up wit this map?
:x
I wont mod this if you're going to give up like
01:26:15 (6) - finish it XD?
Sure
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Sure
I'm sorry WyndII.
I totally forgot what I added reply at your modding queue. >_<
It's my fault. Sorry.
orioncomet
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orioncomet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Andrea
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Revived.
S o r d a
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S o r d a
go go~
swish
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swish
revive :oops:
Thite
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Thite
:)
Sure
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Sure
Thanks for star! :D
S o r d a, swish and Thite ^_^/
Tanmak
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Tanmak
rivived... :roll: 8-)
namazun_old
namazun_old
>w</====★
DeadAlready
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DeadAlready
>w< really memorized me for our first meet(?)
hmmm ok two stars again~ :3
gogo yk~ :D
Sure
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Thanks for star, Tanmak and namazun :)


That happened almost 2 years ago already. lol
Thanks a lot, quintitem <3
Kenezz
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Kenezz
Hola o/
Kenezz's Bakamod
Orz a map Perfect

General
  1. 00:20:102 (x) - imo this rhytmical break is unnecesary, since not there are remarkable change in the track furthermore is very short
Normal
  1. 02:58:929 (x) - Add a note here?
Hard
  1. 01:09:544 (x) - Add a stacked note here?
  2. 02:30:727 (x) - ^
  3. 02:38:397 (1,2,3,4) - Flip Horizontal?, it improvesthe flow imo
Another perfect map yaay~ Go go rank~
Sorry for the bakamod ;__;
Staaar!
Sure
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Sure

Kenezz wrote:

Hola o/
Kenezz's Bakamod
Orz a map Perfect

General
  1. 00:20:102 (x) - imo this rhytmical break is unnecesary, since not there are remarkable change in the track furthermore is very short // Extended spinner length instead of remove break.


Normal
  1. 02:58:929 (x) - Add a note here? // OK


Hard
  1. 01:09:544 (x) - Add a stacked note here? // No. Actually there is 1/6.
  2. 02:30:727 (x) - ^
  3. 02:38:397 (1,2,3,4) - Flip Horizontal?, it improvesthe flow imo // Nope, previous note's hitburst bothers it.


Another perfect map yaay~ Go go rank~
Sorry for the bakamod ;__;
Staaar!
Thanks for mod! :)
SagisawaYomi
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SagisawaYomi
:D
Sure
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Sure
EDIT : OK, it's ready. Guest diff has been cancelled.

My message is not too short.
OzzyOzrock
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OzzyOzrock
[Easy]
Amazing diff!
Just one small thing

01:39:397 (1,2,1,2) - Instead of stacks, maybe this instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137696
Really great lol.
[Normal]
My gosh.

Can't point anything out.
Great work.
[Hard]
Correctly describes how I feel.

Really, this is one of the most well polished, structured, and just prettiest mapsets I've seen in a while.
...
I need to mod mod structure maps...

But yes, amazing job.
Sure
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Sure

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Easy]
Amazing diff!
Just one small thing

01:39:397 (1,2,1,2) - Instead of stacks, maybe this instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137696 // That's it, fixed!
Really great lol.
[Normal]
My gosh.

Can't point anything out.
Great work.
[Hard]
Correctly describes how I feel.

Really, this is one of the most well polished, structured, and just prettiest mapsets I've seen in a while.
...
I need to mod mod structure maps...

But yes, amazing job. // Thank you :D
Thanks for mod and star! :)
pieguyn
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pieguyn
Easy:

01:07:774 (1) - Remove NC?
02:59:165 (2) - <3

Normal:

02:59:165 (4) - =w=
03:44:476 (4) - (nazi) 1 level 3 grid up?

Hard:

03:00:109 (2) - >w<// though, perhaps silence the end?

nice map and cute song~ =w=
Sure
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Sure

pieguy1372 wrote:

Easy:

01:07:774 (1) - Remove NC? // No
02:59:165 (2) - <3 // <3

Normal:

02:59:165 (4) - =w=
03:44:476 (4) - (nazi) 1 level 3 grid up? // Fixed

Hard:

03:00:109 (2) - >w<// though, perhaps silence the end? // Nope

nice map and cute song~ =w=
Thanks for mod :)
kioukiou
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kioukiou
Moeeeee map. <3
I could not find any problem. :)
Nice map,have a star!
Sure
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Thanks, QQ ojousama! :D

My message is not too short!
xierbaliti
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xierbaliti

kioukiou wrote:

Moeeeee map. <3
I could not find any problem. :)
Nice map,have a star!
this! ^

time to bubble :3

nice first map!
Sure
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Sure
Thanks for bubble, xierbaliti :)

My message is not too short.
Sakura
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Sakura
Well i wouldnt have any problem with ranking this, patternwise, etc is pretty good and everything, but there's 3 things bugging me.

1) Difficulty spread, the biggest thing bugging me is the score spread between all difficulties 650k -> 3m -> 14m
2) Also the fact that the song/map is 4:45 long
3) Easy difficulty being only 3 minutes long.

Please check what you can do about these, sorry if i couldnt help you XD (at least i helped you changing the time the title text appears)
Sure
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Sure
1) Yeah, I agree with score spread is not so good. I can't make any other diff due to my inspiration runs out. :?
In before, I asked quintitem making a guest diff for solve this problem. But he has been busy, it was denied.

2) It isn't too long. I think under 5 mins song is acceptable. Also it's slow song.


3) [Easy] is very easy. It's just for reducing boredom for playing and mapping. OK, let's go till end.


By the way, they are true. However they are not major problems.
I have a similar map that ranked already. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/19912
Anyway thanks for checking, SH. :)


EDIT : Length of Easy has been extended. And fixed heart slider in Hard.
xierbaliti
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xierbaliti
Draining time is 4:11, it's fine.

and since the Easy diff has been fixed, have your bubble back!
Raging Bull
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Raging Bull

ykcarrot wrote:

EDIT : And fixed heart slider in Hard.
That's all I need to know (ノ^_^)ノ 彡☆
Sakura
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Well it's a pretty nice first map, i love the music, and the map's play pretty good and flow nice so i'd love to say this is now

Ranked!

Congratulations!
Sure
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Sure
Thanks again xierbaliti, RB and Saku~ra! :D
Raging Bull
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Raging Bull
Congratulations \o/

Very nice first map! I think you will be a very good mapper in the future!
SapphireGhost
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never mind this post is just me misunderstanding things
Raging Bull
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That was the joke (´・_・`)
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