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Yoko Shimomura - It's a Small World

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Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 18 November, 2013 at 11:18:50 AM

Artist: Yoko Shimomura
Title: It's a Small World
Source: Kingdom Hearts: Birth By Sleep
Tags: ost disney Xinely Chiisana Sekai 小さな世界 キングダム ハーツ バース バイ スリープ
BPM: 128
Filesize: 3067kb
Play Time: 02:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.83 stars, 308 notes)
  2. Xinely's Normal (2.96 stars, 139 notes)
Download: Yoko Shimomura - It's a Small World
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Skin by Lanttu

Hard by me
Normal by Xinely

Thank you guys so much <3
Last edited by Sekai , edited 32 times in total.
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
[Xinely's World]
- Good. Just some minor things
- 00:07:623 (6) - Just my opinion, but the curve doesn't make it look that good. Making it straight would look better IMO.
- 00:26:373 (4) - Similar to above
- 01:15:123 (5) - Similar to above
- 01:23:560 (2,3) - May I suggest this pattern for better flow?
- 01:24:498 (4) - Same comment as the other silders xD
- 01:46:998 (2,3) - Maybe adjust the note here so that the slider leads to it. Like this].

[Sekai's World]
- Lots of unsnapped objects.
- 00:13:491 (3) - I was expecting some sort of feedback at 00:13:717 since the music there is really distinct. Change this 1/1 slider into notes maybe.
- 00:20:991 (4,5) - Not very sure about the pattern of this. It looks a bit awkward. Maybe make it more similar to 01:08:101 (1,2)?
- 00:22:632 (3,4) - A linear flow is boring IMO. Maybe change the pattern to something like this?
- 00:26:851 (3) - Also make this slider curve a bit? Similarly to 00:27:788 (3), 00:28:726 (3) , and 00:29:663 (3).
- 00:33:882 (5,6) - The stack here kills the flow IMO. Space this like you did the other notes in the combo.
- 01:11:851 (1) - Remove new combo here to be consistent.
- 01:29:194 (2,3) - [nazi] Tiny spacing change here.
- 01:56:382 (4,5,1) - If you want to be consistent with your other combo patterns at 01:12:319 (1,2,3), you should new combo at (4), and remove new combo at (1).
- 01:57:319 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Similar to above.

Also that slider ball kind of hurts my eyes because of the many colors. Maybe make it one color instead?
Cancel
956 posts
Joined August 2012
Cancel
Here's a random mod from yours truly.

[General]

610 is the correct offset in my opinion (sorry if i'm wrong)
No kiai? I suggest using a kiai at least once. Place one 01:34:351 - here.
The tag Xinely without capital. Also, your username doesn't have to be in tags, since you are the creator of the map.
Disable Widescreen Support (since there's no storyboard), and Letterbox During Breaks in the tab Design.

[Xinely's World]

Difficulty settings: Good.

00:04:360 (2) - Move the point x252 y340 to x264 y332 and ending point to x328 y320
00:19:360 (1) - Make it a good blanket with 00:18:891 (4) - .
01:59:672 (4) - Move to x376 y344, then move the other following beats with Distance Snap.

Overall: Good difficulty, only minor fixes needed.

[Sekai's World]

Difficulty Settings: Good.

00:03:873 (1) - Make a slider out of it to flow better. Like this.
00:13:257 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't flow good with the song. I suggest changing it.
00:26:851 (3,1,2) - Make a better triangle by moving 00:27:554 (2) - to x296 y172
00:40:444 (2) - Maybe make a good wave out of this?
00:42:788 (3) - Make a good blanket with 00:41:616 (6) - .
00:48:413 (3,4,5,6) - Make the beat like this: 00:48:413 (3,4,5,6,7) - .
01:09:976 (5,6) - Make a good blanket.
01:36:929 (6,7) - Distance Snap correctly!
01:54:507 (4,1) - Again, make a good blanket.
02:15:601 (1) - End spinner here: 02:19:342 - .

Overall: Good diff, again with some minor changes, it'll be good.

Good Luck~

EDIT: Baka NoHitter being all early :o
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks for helpful mod guys :3

Fixed a lot of stuff~ ww
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely

Cancel wrote:

Here's a random mod from yours truly.

[Xinely's World]

Difficulty settings: Good.

00:04:360 (2) - Move the point x252 y340 to x264 y332 and ending point to x328 y320 okay
00:19:360 (1) - Make it a good blanket with 00:18:891 (4) - . how can? i tried make blanket in 00:17:467 (3,1) - so i can't make blanket again in that circle
01:59:672 (4) - Move to x376 y344, then move the other following beats with Distance Snap. fixed

Overall: Good difficulty, only minor fixes needed.

NoHitter wrote:

[Xinely's World]
- Good. Just some minor things
- 00:07:623 (6) - Just my opinion, but the curve doesn't make it look that good. Making it straight would look better IMO. fixed
- 00:26:373 (4) - Similar to above
- 01:15:123 (5) - Similar to above fixed both
- 01:23:560 (2,3) - May I suggest this pattern for better flow? okay
- 01:24:498 (4) - Same comment as the other silders xD lol fixed again xD
- 01:46:998 (2,3) - Maybe adjust the note here so that the slider leads to it. Like this]. okay
Thanks 4 mods all >w<

code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 05-Its-a-Small-World.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 94351
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 34351,49351,56851,94351
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:It's a Small World
TitleUnicode:It’s a Small World
Artist:Yoko Shimomura
ArtistUnicode:下村陽子
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:Xinely's World
Source:Kingdom Hearts: Birth By Sleep
Tags:ost disney chiisana sekai Xinely
BeatmapID:313885
BeatmapSetID:122799

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,49542,55522
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
592,468.75,4,2,1,70,1,0
34342,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
34459,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
56842,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
56959,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
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133717,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
135123,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
136529,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 71,105,169
Combo2 : 203,36,30
Combo3 : 139,168,212
Combo4 : 246,174,198
Combo5 : 169,147,134
SliderBorder : 0,0,0

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Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
updated :3
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
Sekai moe
Losertic
461 posts
Joined May 2012
Losertic
Hello!

From M4M.

Modding

General

  1. Pass.

Xinely's World

  1. 00:11:842 (1) - move (165,127)? / if you fix this, 00:13:248 (2) - move (281,96)
  2. 00:40:435 (4,5) - change this slider&note? ( 00:40:435 ~ 00:40:904 - add slider, 00:41:373 - add note )
    or 00:40:435 ~ 00:40:904 - add slider (one reverse)?
  3. 01:53:560 (2) - check distance!
  4. 02:05:748 (2) - umm.. change this shape?(same slider) 02:07:623 (4) ummm like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1042627
  5. 02:15:123 ~ 02:17:467 - change spinner? - because fade out of this part.

Sekai's World

  1. 00:20:982 (4) - change this rythem??
    ─ 1. 00:20:982 - add note.
    ─ 2. 00:21:217 ~ 00:21:451 - add slider.
  2. 01:08:795 (2) - ^ same imo.
  3. 01:38:795 (2) - ^
  4. I think remove 'finish hitsound' because i like xinely's world sound! (no finish hitsound)


I like hp-bar skin, followcircle skin!

i hope rank this! ^^
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai

Natsu wrote:

Sekai moe
Natsu moe =w=///

Thanks for modding and star Losertic it was helpful :3
Last edited by Sekai , edited 1 time in total.
Momochikun
1,944 posts
Joined October 2012
Momochikun
Eh.. to be honest, the skin color hurt my eyes a bit -w-
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
M4M from your queue

General

- The skin is very disturbing and hard to play with. The red has not much contrast with the BG which is causing confusion. Maybe make the red a little weaker so its more pastel. There are also more colours in the BG than just red, why don't you take one of the others?
- The reverse arrow is also very hard to see. You need to find another alternative wa for this element.
- Consider using slider tick 2 instead of 1. Currently it doesn't look so good having only 1. 2 would look better.
- Skin is almost complete just the spinner is missing, you could add one!

Normal

- You could bring more variety into your difficultie when you use square shaped sliders too instead of only curved!

00:18:873 (4) - A soft finish would fit better at such parts. The drum hitsound doesn't fit to this soft song. The normal finish would emphasize the song better.
00:49:342 (1) - Remove NC, really not needed
01:26:373 - Slider end finish (drum) is very random imo. What does it relate to? Hasn't been in the whole part after the break.
01:35:279 - to 01:45:592 - You could use a few circles instead of all these sliders to bring a bit more variety into this small part.
01:54:029 - Normal whistle? I think this is a mistake
01:49:342 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Using the drum hitsound is a nice idea, but the hitsound were placed not fully correct and a bit random. Try making a rythm instead of somewhere random placement.
02:11:373 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Clap seems to be mistaken here too, remove it?

Apart from the hitsounding it's a very nice difficultie!

Hard

01:11:373 - , 01:51:217 - You changed your combo patterns here from long to short.
- Sometimes your rythm is a little incorrect, for example 01:38:795 (2,3) - . It should be 01:38:795 - Circle, 01:39:029 - Slider start - 01:39:498 - slider end

00:13:365 (2) - , 01:25:787 (4) - , 01:47:349 (7) - , 02:11:490 (4) - This note is one too much, you should delete it. It is not in the melody nor in the BG music.
01:34:107 (6,1) - Spacing inconsistancy 1,66 to 1,5, compared to 01:33:638 (4,5) -
- 01:48:873 (5,1) - Same

Nice done!
Nickelony
402 posts
Joined January 2013
Nickelony
Hello! M4M here!

[General]
- Add some Kiai times!
- A storyboard will be very, very nice!

[Xinely's World]

00:07:623 (6) - NC
00:26:373 (4) - ^
01:18:873 (5) - ^
00:08:092 (1) - Remove NC
00:26:842 (1) - ^
01:19:342 (1) - ^
00:49:342 (1) - No one need this NC!
01:41:842 (1) - Stay on the grid!
01:16:529 (2) - ^

[Sekai's World]

00:13:248 (1,2,3) - This will be better if you will add just 2 circles (NOT 3)
00:10:201 (1) - Remove NC
00:19:342 (1) - ^
00:18:873 (6) - NC
02:15:592 (1) - The end will be better at 02:18:873
01:04:107 - Add a circle

That's all! :)

Pozdro!
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks Guys for your mods :3

Fixed most of them <3
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely

Losertic wrote:

Hello!

From M4M.

Xinely's World

  1. 00:11:842 (1) - move (165,127)? / if you fix this, 00:13:248 (2) - move (281,96) seems better :3
  2. 00:40:435 (4,5) - change this slider&note? ( 00:40:435 ~ 00:40:904 - add slider, 00:41:373 - add note ) wanna variety rhythm here
    or 00:40:435 ~ 00:40:904 - add slider (one reverse)?
  3. 01:53:560 (2) - check distance! ups, fixed
  4. 02:05:748 (2) - umm.. change this shape?(same slider) 02:07:623 (4) ummm like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1042627 already
  5. 02:15:123 ~ 02:17:467 - change spinner? - because fade out of this part. oh nice idea~
i hope rank this! ^^

BounceBabe wrote:

M4M from your queue

Normal

- You could bring more variety into your difficultie when you use square shaped sliders too instead of only curved! i want but this song have so many repetitive music so i just only can make this this and this, oh also i'm not fans of sharped slider actually

00:18:873 (4) - A soft finish would fit better at such parts. The drum hitsound doesn't fit to this soft song. The normal finish would emphasize the song better. not really loud anyway , that's why 00:18:873 (4) - i'm not use finish, same as this too.. drum finish better in my ear xD
00:49:342 (1) - Remove NC, really not needed consistency NC'ed every 2 stanza :P
01:26:373 - Slider end finish (drum) is very random imo. What does it relate to? Hasn't been in the whole part after the break. added soft additions instead due loud music
01:35:279 - to 01:45:592 - You could use a few circles instead of all these sliders to bring a bit more variety into this small part. changed to circle in first slider only, used slider based music
01:54:029 - Normal whistle? I think this is a mistake as i said before, this song too much low for use finish
01:49:342 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Using the drum hitsound is a nice idea, but the hitsound were placed not fully correct and a bit random. Try making a rythm instead of somewhere random placement. actually its have pattern in here, just inconsistency in 01:54:967 - due music louder lol
02:11:373 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Clap seems to be mistaken here too, remove it? aaa, this really fit with music. i prefer use clap instead whistle
Apart from the hitsounding it's a very nice difficultie!

iNickel wrote:

[Xinely's World]

00:07:623 (6) - NC
00:26:373 (4) - ^
01:18:873 (5) - ^
00:08:092 (1) - Remove NC
00:26:842 (1) - ^
01:19:342 (1) - ^
00:49:342 (1) - No one need this NC! not for all due consistency
01:41:842 (1) - Stay on the grid! i don't understand x.x
01:16:529 (2) - ^

Pozdro!
Thanks 4 mods all ~

Update
osu file format v12

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PreviewTime: 94351
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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DistanceSpacing: 1
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Title:It's a Small World
TitleUnicode:It’s a Small World
Artist:Yoko Shimomura
ArtistUnicode:下村陽子
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:Xinely's World
Source:Kingdom Hearts: Birth By Sleep
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Kodora
Kodora
hihi, M4M as promiced

[General]

  1. Your offset is way too early, try 632 - sounds much better for me
  2. You have unused copy of your custom clap named "soft-hitclap-.wav", remove it & full submit
  3. hit100, hit0, hit300 & hit50 mus be 256x256, you should resize them all
[Sekai's World]

*Tickrate 1 sounds much better imo

  1. 00:04:342 (2) - According to your other similiar hitsounds patterns here should be finish instead of hitdrum
  2. 00:05:982 (6) - Finish to tail instead of whistle
  3. 00:07:623 (1) - ^
  4. 00:09:498 (7) - ^
  5. 00:11:373 (1,2) - I personally prefer if you will set finishes here follow music. Remove whistle from 00:11:842 (2) - and add finish instead & remove finish from 00:11:373 (1) - and add whistle if you want
  6. 00:12:310 (3,6) - swap whistle & finish
  7. 00:13:248 (1) - whistle
  8. 00:13:717 (4) - finish
  9. 00:14:185 (6) - swap whistle & finish
  10. 00:16:060 (3) - Would be very nice to add finish at first repeat. Also same goes to all sliders like this one
  11. 00:20:982 (4) - This slider sounds a bit weird. I understand that you want to keep symmetry here, but you missed a strong beat here with it. My suggestion:

    SPOILER


  12. 00:34:342 (1,3) - Re-arrange for better flow?

    SPOILER
  13. 00:37:623 (7) - Please don't let strong beat falling in the end of slider - it feels a bit weird while playing when you have strong beat in music but don't need to hit anything. Maybe change to something like this?

    SPOILER

    I know, it may take huge placement rework but it will emphazire strong beats better.
  14. 00:57:310 (2) - Estetical point, but maybe change to something like this? It will looks less copypasted in this case.

    SPOILER
  15. 01:04:107 (6,1) - why you used sudden such huge jump here? o_O Please Reduse distance to x1.80-2.00 at least please, it plays not so well.
  16. 01:08:795 (2) - Move this slider a bit higher to make end of 01:08:092 (1) - perfectly overlap with sliderbody of (2) Also i personally feel your rhythm too repetitive at this part, try something like this maybe to make it more variable?

    SPOILER
  17. 01:23:092 (5,6) - Same as at 00:20:982 (4)
  18. 01:27:779 (3) - You missed some strong beats here. Try something like this?

    SPOILER
  19. 02:09:967 (1,2) - Same as at 00:20:982 (4)
[Xinely's World]

*Hitsounds looks inconsistent as for me. Also this diff have lack of finishes imo. Considering look at Sekai's diff and add some. Also would be nice to replace hitdrums like 00:03:873 (1) (and similiar) with regular hitnormals + finish - sounds better IMO

  1. 00:24:967 (3) - Maybe change form like this so it will flows better:

    SPOILER
  2. 00:28:717 (3) - same

    SPOILER
  3. 00:33:873 (4,1) - Swap NCs follow music?
  4. 00:57:310 (2,4) - How about make blanket here?
  5. 01:01:529 (3,4) - Aww not perfect blanket with (4)
  6. 01:03:873 (1) - Clap at tail
  7. 01:05:748 (3) - And at beginning here
  8. 01:07:623 (1) - And at tail here
  9. 01:15:123 (5) - At beginning
  10. 01:18:873 (5,1) - swap NCs follow music?
  11. 01:49:342 - 01:56:842 - why suddenly this part used drum sampleset o_o
Good luck!

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/121716 mod this pls ;w;
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks Kodora for your helpful mod :3

Fixed everything in it <3
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
Kodora, about finish. same as i reply in Bounce's mod.. i feel finish too much loud here
about drum it's fit with song imo. also wanna variety hitsound =w=
thanks 4 mod :3

Update
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 94351
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 34351,49351,56851,94351
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:It's a Small World
TitleUnicode:It’s a Small World
Artist:Yoko Shimomura
ArtistUnicode:下村陽子
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:Xinely's World
Source:Kingdom Hearts: Birth By Sleep
Tags:ost disney chiisana sekai Xinely
BeatmapID:313885
BeatmapSetID:122799

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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BeatofIke
4,172 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
That's a nice map you have there.
*runs* o.o
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
updated Xinely's diff and thanks Beat for support =w=/
Kodora
Kodora


/me baka stalker

also kill me correct offset is 622, not 632 x_x
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
orz i just notice it =3=/

Fixed everything now, Thanks for noticing it Kodora www
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,061 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
Yo.

[General]
  1. What's up with those diff names? Can't you be a bit more creative? Xinely's Huge World/ My Small World. Seriously, these diffs are totally different, so create some different names for them
  2. キングダム ハーツ バース バイ スリープ (japanese title) should be in tags, I guess. The game is japanese, after all.
  3. Colour 2 is different between these two diffs. Is it intentional? All others colours are the same. :<
  4. Black border of sliders may fade with the black BG. Try to set another colour. Something like 100,100,100 will work better, try it!
[Xinely's World]
  1. Sometimes it's kinda hard to understand your flow. Here're some examples. You'll find some screenshots with a few pictures and I'll try to explain you why your flow bugs me!
    uguu
    Blue is how the flow actually goes, red is broken flow.
    Broken flow is something that makes players' moves unnatural and strange. It's not an unrankable thing, but it really feels kinda wrong to me. Anyway, just think about it. There's no need to re-arange/change anything if you don't want to!



    As you can see, the move of the cursor here is unnatural and it feels linda unpleasant. Well, at least it feels so for me.



    Same as above.
    Note: I'm telling you once again, it feels so for me. Probably it's just MY opinion. You DON'T HAVE TO change anything unless you AGREE with me and FEEL that it will actually IMPROVE your diff.
  2. 00:15:622 (1) - nazi - usually, such sliders are made to be blanket sliders. So, it looks a bit strange here. Just add one more white dot to make it a bit more interesting. example
  3. 00:21:012 - I feel like you've missed a beat here, please consider adding a circle here to keep consistent and more enjoyable rhythm.
  4. 00:23:122 (1) - nazi - well, it's about yout flow again. Try to make this lsider symmetrical with (3) to make your flow a bit more creative.example
  5. 00:38:590 - whoops, I feel like you've missed something here. Consider adding a custom slider-tick sound here, so that beat won't be ignored!
    Note: 00:42:340 - same as above! the curve on the slider doesn't help you to emphasize the beat at all!
  6. 01:54:059 - I'd use Custom Soft Sampleset + Clap sound here. It fits much better with that bell sound in music.
    Note: you used this bell sound on 01:41:403 - and it was really awesome, so replace those whistles here, too!

    Everything else seems to be good, I didn't really like your flow, but maybe it's just me.
[Hard]
  1. 00:11:637 - I'm begging you, DO NOT use 3/4 sliders unless you're 200% percent sure that it's needed. What about the beat on 00:11:637 - you can't just ignore it! It's louder and more important! Use Slider Tick Rate 2 and pay attention to some slidertick-hitsounding, or use triplets, as you did it on 00:09:293 (5,6,7). Either way is better than the cureent rhythm. :< I mean, you're a great mapper! Why do you ignore some important beats, it made me cry! :<
  2. 00:13:981 (4,5) - it's not a perfect stack and it looks a little bit messy, Try to avoid such overlaps, they're out of your normal style. I know, you can make it much prettier!
  3. 00:16:090 (3) - hardest diff, long 1/1 slider with two repeats. It is really, really unexpected and feels too boring! C'mon, use some of those triplets here! hey'll fit!
    Note: 01:00:622 (3) - same. It'll be too boring for players, imo. :<
  4. 00:35:075 (2) - nazi - the DS looks inconsistent here. feels like some kind of a spacing mistake, try to fix it a bit!
  5. 01:23:122 (5) - missed new combo? Music here needs this NC, also it'll fit with your comboing!
  6. 01:36:012 (4) - Overjumping. You didn't use THAT crazy jumps earlier, this one is out of your pattern and doesn't fit at all!

    Pretty good, except for the things I've mentioned above. :3
Not bad, but it needs a few more mods, I think!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thank you Bakari for your Great Mod <3

Fixed mostly everything =w=/
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo.

[Xinely's World]
  1. Sometimes it's kinda hard to understand your flow. Here're some examples. You'll find some screenshots with a few pictures and I'll try to explain you why your flow bugs me!
    uguu
    Blue is how the flow actually goes, red is broken flow.
    Broken flow is something that makes players' moves unnatural and strange. It's not an unrankable thing, but it really feels kinda wrong to me. Anyway, just think about it. There's no need to re-arange/change anything if you don't want to!



    As you can see, the move of the cursor here is unnatural and it feels linda unpleasant. Well, at least it feels so for me.



    Same as above.
    Note: I'm telling you once again, it feels so for me. Probably it's just MY opinion. You DON'T HAVE TO change anything unless you AGREE with me and FEEL that it will actually IMPROVE your diff. agree actually, fixed as i feel it's weird and need to fixed, thanks bakari~
  2. 00:15:622 (1) - nazi - usually, such sliders are made to be blanket sliders. So, it looks a bit strange here. Just add one more white dot to make it a bit more interesting. example itentional, also not made this for blanket or symmetrical
  3. 00:21:012 - I feel like you've missed a beat here, please consider adding a circle here to keep consistent and more enjoyable rhythm. nice catch, added note
  4. 00:23:122 (1) - nazi - well, it's about yout flow again. Try to make this lsider symmetrical with (3) to make your flow a bit more creative.example changed
  5. 00:38:590 - whoops, I feel like you've missed something here. Consider adding a custom slider-tick sound here, so that beat won't be ignored!
    Note: 00:42:340 - same as above! the curve on the slider doesn't help you to emphasize the beat at all! fixed both
  6. 01:54:059 - I'd use Custom Soft Sampleset + Clap sound here. It fits much better with that bell sound in music.
    Note: you used this bell sound on 01:41:403 - and it was really awesome, so replace those whistles here, too! lol okay

    Everything else seems to be good, I didn't really like your flow, but maybe it's just me.
Thanks Bakari (:

Update
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 94351
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:It's a Small World
TitleUnicode:It’s a Small World
Artist:Yoko Shimomura
ArtistUnicode:下村陽子
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:Xinely's Big World
Source:Kingdom Hearts: Birth By Sleep
Tags:ost disney chiisana sekai Xinely キングダム ハーツ バース バイ スリープ
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BeatmapSetID:122799

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140,300,116403,2,0,L|60:324,1,60,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,324,116872,6,0,L|20:180,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,300,118278,2,0,L|208:260,1,60
244,240,118747,2,0,P|296:216|380:240,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,344,119684,2,0,P|324:368|240:344,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,340,120387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,308,120622,6,0,L|80:192,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,96,121559,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,64,122028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,116,122497,2,0,P|368:92|408:216,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,308,123903,2,0,L|312:328,1,60
268,336,124372,6,0,P|208:348|144:312,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,260,125778,2,0,L|416:200,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,172,126247,2,0,P|400:128|328:116,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,260,127653,2,0,L|312:296,1,60
264,332,128122,6,0,P|212:340|148:316,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,212,129059,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,108,129528,2,0,L|132:36,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,212,130465,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,304,130934,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,288,131403,6,0,L|308:356,2,60,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,264,132340,2,0,L|452:324,2,60,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,144,133278,2,0,L|472:132,2,60,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,156,134215,2,0,L|252:88,2,60,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,135153,12,2,137497,0:0:0:0:
Sekai
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Sekai
updated owo/
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
thanks m4m~

sry,spacing check only.
nice mapset

[Sekai]
spacing check
00:05:778 (5) -
00:06:481 (7) -
00:13:747 (3) -
00:14:215 (5) -
00:22:887 (4) -
00:33:668 (4) - 2grid left
00:33:903 (5,6) - 3grid left
00:35:075 (2) -
00:39:997 (1) -
01:03:434 (3) -
01:09:528 (3) -
01:27:575 (2) -
01:27:809 (3) - x181 y149
01:35:309 (3) -
01:38:122 (1) -
01:39:528 (4) -
01:46:090 (3) - (like:off grid)
01:49:372 (1) -
01:50:075 (2) -
01:54:997 (1) -
01:55:465 (2) -
01:56:403 (1) -
02:04:606 (2) -

[Xinely]
spacing check
00:08:122 (1) -
01:40:934 (4) -
01:48:903 (5) -
01:54:528 (3) -
02:00:622 (1) -
Sekai
6,376 posts
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Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks for modding fbs :3

Fixed most of those <3
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
liangv587
Nice song ,wish it ranked.
I just come to buy some sauce.Byebye
I have a song called Flight of the Bumble Bee,you will like it.
Forgive my poor English
Lolicakey
Lolicakey
Ohai o3o/ winner from my queue.

My mod will be mostly suggestions, I'm not an experienced modder unu.

Sekai:
  1. 01:36:247 (5,6,7) - make a blanket with circle (6)
    SPOILER
  2. 01:42:809 (3) - move the red tick to x:300 y:124
    Very smooth~ I like it o3o
Xinely:
  1. 00:43:747 (4) - I don't think this slider fits well with the rhythm, I tried with this http://puu.sh/54NuV.jpg and sounds better imo.
  2. 01:05:778 (3) - The head of the slider sounds so empty here, I suggest add a clap or whistle there. Same for: 01:07:653 (1) - 01:15:153 (5) -
  3. 01:17:028 (3) - Clap. ^same reason
    Nice diff but I think Hitsounds have to improve a little more.
Good luck o3o)/
Sekai
6,376 posts
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Sekai
Thanks Lolicakes for your mod :3

Fixed everything about my diff!
BounceBabe
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Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
BakaBabe shoots stars for being forgettable, also because it's a nice map n.n/
Sekai
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Sekai
Thank you BB for your stars, and support <3
Darkravens23
61 posts
Joined December 2012
Darkravens23
HEY! :D

:D

I searched Yoko Shimomura and I found new Kingdom Hearts, huuray.
Finally one from Birth by Sleep.
The beatmaps are quiet perfect.

Yeah perfect
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1072863

I would suggest to use the clap hitsound (what is an epic whistle) more, because it sounds better than the normal whistle and it gives a stronger rhythm feeling.

If I find some time, I will make a hitsound list for both diffs and you can pick it, if u should like it. Or u try it by your own. :P

And Lantuu's Skin is also nicer than before :)

Nevertheless take this star for this awesome song :D
Sekai
6,376 posts
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Topic Starter
Sekai
oh..Thanks for your star :3

and about hitsounds i think they're good as they are now ></
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Ello o3o Random mod
[General]
Overall, O think it'd make more sense if you renamed Xinely's Big World to Xinely's Small World, and My Small World to My Big World (Since My Small World is obviously the harder diff o3o)
[Xinely's Big World]
00:43:747 (4) - Try flipping it to this:
Creates a better flow imo.
01:00:622 (1) - Add finish?
01:03:903 (1) - Change clap on the tail to a finish instead, the lap sounds really inconsistent when there's also a clap no the head of 01:04:840 (2) -
01:05:778 (3) - Only remove clap on the tail please, same reason as above.
01:07:653 (1) - ^
01:15:153 (5) - Add clap on the head.
01:25:934 (6) - Remove finish on the tail.
01:39:997 (3) - Remove clap on the tail?
01:53:590 (2) - Remove clap on the tail, try not to overuse this hitsound.

[My Small World]
00:34:372 - 00:49:372 Add Kai?
00:37:653 (4,5,6) - Switch these triplets with 00:37:418 (3) - since it's coming pretty in late with the mini xylophone (?) streams, and for consistency with 00:41:168 (3,4,5,6) - .
01:08:122 (1) - How about adding a reverse on this slider and removing 01:08:825 (2) - instead. (since 01:08:825 (2) - sounds completely off-beat as it doesn't hit a note with any instrument note in the music)
01:18:082 (3) - Move to 01:17:965 and place under 01:17:731 (1,2) - .
01:34:372 - 01:49:372 Add Kai?
02:03:082 (3) - Move to 02:02:965 and place under 02:02:731 (1,2) -

Cute song.
Hope this helps~! ^^
Sekai
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Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks for the helpful mod 10crystalmask01 :3

Fixed most of your suggestions >w<
Gero
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Joined March 2012
Gero
This song <3~

Irc mod here \o3o/

I Don't have the log.
Sekai
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Topic Starter
Sekai
Log
05:30 Sekai-nyan: btw o3o/
05:30 Sekai-nyan: irc mod o3o
05:30 Gero: irc mod? o:
05:31 Sekai-nyan: on my map =3=/
05:31 Gero: which? D:
05:31 *Sekai-nyan is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/313884 Yoko Shimomura - It's a Small World]
05:31 Sekai-nyan: o.o
05:31 Sekai-nyan: i just nc mod :<
05:31 Sekai-nyan: my combos sucks
05:32 Gero: okay
05:32 Gero: o3o
05:33 Sekai-nyan: o3o
05:33 *Gero is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/313884 Yoko Shimomura - It's a Small World [Sekai]]
05:33 Gero: nc mod? 
05:33 Sekai-nyan: yup
05:33 Sekai-nyan: i don't want full mod lol
05:33 Sekai-nyan: it's gonna take a lot of time and i'm tired xD
05:34 Gero:  00:05:778 (1) - NC here 
05:34 Gero: 00:05:778 (5) -  here*
05:34 Sekai-nyan: yup fixed =w=
05:34 Gero: 00:09:528 (7) -  nc here and removes this
05:34 Gero: 00:10:231 (1) - 
05:34 Gero: 00:11:403 -  nc here
05:35 Gero: and romove this 00:12:340 (4) - 
05:35 Sekai-nyan: ok
05:35 Gero: 00:18:903 (6) -  NC here
05:35 Gero: 00:19:372 (1) -  remove
05:35 Gero: 00:21:012 (6) -  NC
05:36 Sekai-nyan: ok
05:36 Sekai-nyan: baka o3o/
05:36 Gero: 00:31:090 (3) -  you forgot to add clap on here  00:31:090 - 
05:36 Gero: xD
05:37 Sekai-nyan: lol
05:37 Sekai-nyan: nice catch
05:37 Gero: 00:43:747 (5) - NC
05:37 Gero: yap xD
05:37 Sekai-nyan: fixed it =w=
05:37 Gero: okay o3o
05:38 Gero: 01:03:903 (5) -  NC here and remove this  01:04:372 (1) - 
05:38 Gero: 01:06:012 (6) -  NC here
05:38 Sekai-nyan: ok 
05:38 Gero: 01:07:887 -  NC here and remove  01:08:122 (1) -  this
05:39 Gero: 01:08:825 (3) -  this slider sounds weird try to another rhythm here please
05:39 Gero: 01:09:059 - you ignore a important beat here baka
05:39 Gero: btw 01:09:528 -  nc here
05:40 Sekai-nyan: wait ;w;
05:40 Gero: okay
05:41 Sekai-nyan: ok fixed it
05:41 Gero: 01:18:903 (7) -  NC here and remove this  01:19:372 (1) , 01:20:778 (5) -  NC here and remove this 01:21:247 
05:41 Gero: 01:22:887 -  NC and remove 01:23:122 
05:42 Gero: 01:24:528 -  NC here , remove this   01:25:231 (1) - 
05:42 Gero: 01:26:403 (6) -  NC 
05:42 Gero: 01:26:872 (1) -  remove
05:43 Sekai-nyan: ok fixed them all xD
05:43 Gero: 01:28:278 -  nc here and remove this 01:28:747 - 
05:43 Sekai-nyan: omg so many lol
05:43 Gero: 01:30:153 (7) -  NC here
05:44 Sekai-nyan: o3o
05:44 Sekai-nyan: ok
05:44 Gero: 01:36:247 (5) -  NC
05:44 Gero: 01:40:231 -  NC
05:45 Gero:  01:43:747 (5) -  NC
05:45 Sekai-nyan: ok fixed them orz
05:46 Gero:  okay I can continue?
05:46 Sekai-nyan: yup lol
05:46 Gero: 01:52:418 (1) -  remove
05:46 Gero: 01:52:653 -  add nc
05:46 Gero: 01:58:282 -  NC 
05:47 Gero: 01:58:747 (1) -  remove
05:47 Gero: 01:59:215 -  NC
05:47 Gero: 01:59:684 -  remove
05:47 Gero: 02:00:153 -  NC
05:47 Gero: 02:03:903 -  NC
05:47 Gero: this is all
05:47 Gero: owo

Thanks for the irc mod Gero <3
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Best children's song <33333 Love this.

Xinely's Normal:

-- Not really sure about the intention of ignoring Claps of the intro.

01:15:153 (5) - Missing hitsound at the head.
01:25:934 (6) - ? The Drum and soft Finish didn't felt nice at the end.
01:39:997 (3) - Increase 1/2?
01:40:934 (4) - Add whistle at the head.

Sekai:

00:24:528 (1) - Reduce 1/4. That fits the song properly.
00:58:278 (1) - ^
01:03:668 (4,2) - Not sure if the flow between 01:04:137 (2,3) is nice. Maybe ctrl+G (4,2) I highlighted?
01:12:340 (1) - (52,264) for better flow?
01:13:512 (2) - (132,256)?
01:24:528 (1) - Ignoring 01:24:762 with the slider doesn't feel nice. Try placing a beat there.
01:36:012 (4) - This jump felt really weird. Try a pattern like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1101043
01:37:887 (4) - Distance.
01:45:153 (1) - Reduce 1/2 and make a reverse? Again the ignored beat at 01:45:387 didn't felt nice.

It's a small world after all, it's a small small world :3
Good luck >w<
Sekai
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Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks for modding Sonnyc :3

it was so helpful and fixed everything on my diff~ <3
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
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jericho2442
Changed a few things and improved the diff name. all good enjoy a bubble o/

log
18:00 *jericho2442 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/313884 Yoko Shimomura - It's a Small World]
18:00 *Sekai-nyan is away: watching ***** o3o/
18:00 jericho2442: ohai
18:09 Sekai-nyan: o.o
18:09 jericho2442: few things i want fixed
18:09 jericho2442: then i wil bubble
18:09 Sekai-nyan: oh Jeri :o
18:09 Sekai-nyan: wow
18:10 jericho2442: bb has pushed me into modding it xD
18:10 Sekai-nyan: lol sure xD
18:10 jericho2442: first things first
18:10 jericho2442: your diff name
18:10 jericho2442: its nonsense
18:10 Sekai-nyan: it's a joke xD
18:10 jericho2442: then fix it ;)
18:10 Sekai-nyan: i wan't gonna use it lol
18:11 jericho2442: 00:14:918 (6,1) - think you made a mistake here
18:11 jericho2442: should be same spacing as the one before it looks like
18:11 Sekai-nyan: oh
18:12 Sekai-nyan: i forgot to fix it lol
18:12 Sekai-nyan: and fix it :o
18:12 jericho2442: 00:32:731 (1,2,3) - bouncebabe is bugging me that this could flow better xDD
18:13 Sekai-nyan: lol should i use 2 notes instead of sliders?
18:13 jericho2442: 00:39:762 (5,1) - liiitle thing like the one before
18:13 jericho2442: she says its the direction of the second slider
18:14 jericho2442: amybe make it point into the direction of the note after it
18:14 jericho2442: ofc changing the spacing where needed
18:14 Sekai-nyan: ok then fixed it
18:17 jericho2442: 01:09:059 (4,1) - i dont understand this jump
18:17 jericho2442: aaaaaand thats everything xD
18:17 Sekai-nyan: lol it follows the new beat on the music
18:18 Sekai-nyan: it plays good i suppose
18:19 jericho2442: kinda think it would flow better without the jump
18:20 jericho2442: well will wait for you to reup to check it again
18:21 Sekai-nyan: ok then fixed it
18:21 jericho2442: relinking
18:21 *jericho2442 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/313884 Yoko Shimomura - It's a Small World [Sekai]]
18:21 Sekai-nyan: submiting now lol
18:21 jericho2442: ahaa
18:21 jericho2442: xD
18:21 Sekai-nyan: and done
18:22 Sekai-nyan: btw lol never mind my away xD
18:22 jericho2442: i understood it xD
18:22 Sekai-nyan: lol i made it for fun xD
18:23 jericho2442: suuuuuure ;)
18:23 Sekai-nyan: i made it for long time lol i never thought it's still there xD
Sekai
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Sekai
Thank you Jeri xD
Aurele
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Aurele
log
12:35 Gabe: cutie sekai-nyan
12:35 *Gabe is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/313884 Yoko Shimomura - It's a Small World [Hard]]
12:36 Sekai-nyan: owo/
12:36 Sekai-nyan: Gabe =w=
12:36 *Sekai-nyan is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/313884 Yoko Shimomura - It's a Small World [Hard]]
12:36 Sekai-nyan: lol
12:36 Gabe: I have some problems with your combos
12:36 Gabe: mostly dislikes
12:36 Sekai-nyan: blame Gero lol
12:36 Sekai-nyan: xD
12:37 Sekai-nyan: he did it lol
12:37 Gabe: 00:03:903 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these combos are perfect, they're following the song but then, on 00:09:528 (1) -  it's a singleobjectcombo, that's bad since it doesn't follow anything
12:37 Gabe: do you agree?
12:37 Sekai-nyan: oh yeah lol 
12:38 Sekai-nyan: i didn't notice it
12:38 Sekai-nyan: fixed it now~
12:40 Sekai-nyan: so that's it? o.o
12:42 Gabe: nono wait LOL
12:42 Sekai-nyan: lol sure 
12:45 Gabe: so, are these combos like that: http://puu.sh/5lcjx.jpg ?
12:46 Sekai-nyan: sure 
12:47 Sekai-nyan: it looked better
12:49 Gabe: 00:35:075 (2) - the spacing of this circle is not consistent with the next objects, I meant.. the spacing with the next previous slider is 1,10x and with the next, 1,05x. if you look further, the spacing is approx. 1.00x
12:49 Gabe: you should keep that consistency
12:50 Sekai-nyan: ok
12:50 Sekai-nyan: makes sense o3o
12:50 Sekai-nyan: so fixed it
12:50 Gabe: 01:03:903 (1) - delete that new combo to make these two circles with the two previous ones
12:50 Gabe: then,
12:50 Gabe: add a new combo on the next slider
12:50 Sekai-nyan: sure~
12:51 Gabe: 01:24:528 (5,6,1,2,3) - have you tried to make a star form here? xD
12:51 Sekai-nyan: lol no
12:51 Sekai-nyan: it was random 
12:52 Gabe: well, can you try to make it shaped like a star? :3
12:52 Gabe: I don't mind actually, that's just a suggestion
12:52 Gabe: lol
12:52 Sekai-nyan: lol but star would make sense then this xD
12:54 Sekai-nyan: done o3o
12:54 Gabe: 01:27:809 (4) - move it to x:181 y:149 to make a better stack with the previous slider
12:55 Gabe: 01:37:184 (3) - you should make a better stack with the previous circle 4 xD
12:55 Sekai-nyan: oh fixed it o.o
12:56 Sekai-nyan: sure lol
12:56 Gabe: perfect~
12:56 Sekai-nyan: nothing on normal?
12:56 Gabe: nope
12:57 Sekai-nyan: sure =w=
12:57 Gabe: you can now update~
12:57 Sekai-nyan: done owo

Ranked!
Sekai
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Sekai
Thank you Gabe for the rank :3
happy623
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happy623
gratz owo
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare
incorrect title
no kds pls

SPOILER
Kodora
Kodora
gratz moe Sekai :3/
Sekai
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Sekai
Thank you guys :3
KSHR
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KSHR
regarding Metadata,

Artist:

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT for help.
also Nihonshiki is preferred when artist etc. are romanized. so it should be Shimomura Youko

Title:
if the correct title is 小さな世界 "Chiisana Sekai", then why you translated it into English for romanized one? follow this rule t/142383


I hope this map will unrank once and rerank soon! ganbare, sekai chan! ;)
dkun
osu! Alumni
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dkun
Unranking due to an incorrect title. I'm willing to keep "Yoko Shimomura" due to consistency issues with all past Kingdom Hearts based maps.

Nothing else will be affected.

KSHR wrote:

Title:
if the correct title is 小さな世界 "Chiisana Sekai", then why you translated it into English for romanized one? follow this rule http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/142383


I hope this map will unrank once and rerank soon! ganbare, sekai chan! ;)
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