UnderminE wrote:

<3

suggestion add psycho pass and path (psycho path) to tags as well, since source has "-" in it

Poke ampzz's queue for the video encoding

Alarido wrote:

Modding on my own because.... you know why ♥ yay!

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[With You]

Testplay

* The name of this diff is so suitable for a collab ... well.. alone mapset is good to :p
♥ Nice and singletappable Insane -- I LOVE SINGLETAPPABNLE INSANES ♥ and seriously! osu! needs more Insanes suitable for singletap ♥ Not SS'ed it because I'm just a retard player. thelewa/Niva could SS it with DT because they are Pro.yeah definitely, I just hate too hard to enjoy insanes(cuz I'm a bad player lol)

01:11:893 (8,1) - Move them together to x:76 y:108, then raise the 2nd node of the slider to x:148 y:68, so it'll unglue from (7) and make a right path to next (2).well getting enough of the complain on this part, so changed~

Nice diff ♥

[Hard]

Testplay

00:05:227 - Add a note?okay, to emphasize the vocal

Nice too ♥

[Normal]

Testplay

00:03:352 (4) - This note feels a lot awkward >< (I got a 100 here ><) How about a 1/2 slider staring from 00:03:143 and ending at 00:03:560 ? So it would fit better to the song imho. welp okay, fixed then. Hope it read better now
00:15:018 (3) - This note feels dubious to me >< (or the sound behind it is so underlying to a Normal player?). will keep this one since easy has this too, and I don't see a very big problemo here
00:50:852 (5) - Ctrl-G ?eh? why? it doesn't change anything lol><

[Easy]

Testplay

♥ No complaints ^^

♥ GOOD LUCK RANKING LOVE ♥

Star!!!thanks for your mod and star Alarido><

Att.

(I need stop wasting time and map my parts >< ) lol work on it then :p

ts8zs wrote:

[WY]
00:02:102 (2) - blanketok
00:29:393 (2) - ^
00:33:560 (4) - ^
and many
01:00:852 (6,7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056728no, keeping the antijump there
[Hard]
00:33:560 (3) - ^
01:03:560 (5) - 2nd point left 1 gird
[Normal]
01:13:352 (3) - blanket
please take blanket seriously,It shows how you take care of this map._.
[Easy]
01:02:102 (1) - ^
I don't see many problem in the other blankets as I think I already used enough curve to make the blanket. If I curved it too much(having CS 5 will make you curve quite big), the flow will become bad and I also use enough curve so that I can use the slider leniency to make jumps more reachable and thus making a better flow. I hope you understand Thanks for the mod though!
EDIT: and thanks for the star! it's very helpful><

And big thanks to Yurun chan for her star spam!! though i really told her not to

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi AnreFM~ From my queue~

[Easy]

00:11:897 (1,2) - NC change?hmm no, the stanza is there already
00:30:439 - whistle?no, I want to keep the whistles on the big white tick only
00:40:439 (5) - NCno? the change of pace isn't really big there
00:45:439 (1,2) - This batterhmm the shape is nice but it's not posiible with the distance and my pattern in the next will be messed up =v=

00:55:439 (1) - delete clap pleaseah no, the beat is audible there really

[Normal]

00:03:147 (4) - NCtoo soon?
00:43:772 (3,4,5) - spacing pleasehmm wasn't a big pronlem ne? 0.99 is 1.0 in a way =v=
00:55:439 - delete clap please^

[Hard]

00:55:439 - delete clap please^

[With You]

00:55:439 - delete clap please^
01:09:606 (3) - ctrl + g?ah no, the jump will be a bit weird in that part

Good Map~ have this~(>^_^)>thanksss ;w;

Good Luck~ah really sorry for the big denial, but thanks for the mod and your star Habi! ^^

Kytoxid wrote:

Hello! Hi!!><

[General]

- Never watched PSYCHO-PASS, but is there a video that would usually be included here? (or did you choose not to include it?)hmm currently, I'm still waiting for someone to encode the video><
- Probably would include Chelly in the tags, as the supercell vocalist for this song. (to separate it from Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari's Nagi Yanagi)ah yeah, I've noticed it for some time, but I always forgot to put her in tags orz Fixed!

[Easy]

00:05:439 (1,2,3) - The 3 might be a bit tough to catch, how about just extending 2 to be twice as long? Then the ticks + repeat would give the same pattern beat pattern as currently.ah is it really hard to catch (3)? As I use them also on various other part like 00:18:772 (1,2,3) - and it seems that it wasn't really that hard to catch for an easy>< And, your suggestion to extend the repeat is really nice, but, as I don't use that many long slider, I don't know a good shape for this, and the distance snap to the next note will really long to rearrange all the patterns back, I really hope you understand><
00:13:772 (2) - Just wanted to say, usually these sliders with 1 tick very close to the tail sound awkward, but here it sounds amazing.yay!>.<
00:51:689 - I would probably put a note here.Ah right, as my current rhythm will be fit with this. And also all my other difficulty ended here before the spin except this one lol==
01:07:522 (4) - The song is a bit busier here than 1,2,3, so I would also probably make this busier instead of just a single slider.As I follow the vocal here, the possible good rhythm to use in easy is a single slider, as circles only will be too hard(ended on blue tick) and a reversed slider will make it 'less' busy><

This is a really good Easy. If there's anything general I would change, some parts go a bit too high on the screen, so some people playing with a skin with a slightly bigger life bar might find the notes a bit covered.Thank you!>< and I've been thinking about that too, but I think there are only a few(like, 1 or 2) that's placed too high, so I hope it's okay><

[Normal]

00:01:481 (1) - Maybe it's just me, but I found this combo a bit hard to follow to start the song. I could play it by reading the approach circles, but not too much by the music.umm as this one's rhythm is the same as easy, I think it will be okay>< I feel that the one that making it confusing is the (3) circle, should I raise the AR by 1 to make it easier to read? ouo
00:15:439 (1) - I would probably map something other than straight 1/2s here. Since this is the first combo of a musical section, I would expect the rest of the section to also follow a rough 1/2 pattern, but it doesn't.ah really? okay, make a change of rhythm a few notes after this to emphasize the vocal more
00:34:606 - Skipping the downbeat here felt a bit awkward, even though you're following the vocals. Maybe add a note?umm as you already knows, this one follows the vocal, it feels good to add a circle here too, but I think the notes will be too dense for a normal as I already used 3/4 beat on the note before this><
00:42:939 (2,3,4,5) - You could probably arrange this into a nice tilted diamond/square with minimal effort. (tail of 2 + 3,4,5)fixed this one~
01:00:022 (3) - This is a slider where the tick doesn't fit so well. Maybe swap it for a note + 1/2 slider, instead of a 3/4 slider?really nice, but I think having a 1/2 slider after a circle here will be a bit too hard to catch since it will land on blue ticks><

This was pretty solid too.thank you!

[Hard]

00:32:106 (1,2) - This jump was a bit unexpected.ah really? I was making this a bit too late and realized that no good patterns will come without making this small jump>< okay, fixed by changing the shape so that spacing will become smaller and hopefully easier to catch
00:56:272 (3,4) - I'd space this out a bit more; it's correct, but stacking in play mode puts 4 a bit closer to 3's tail, which looks a bit weird.ah yeah, I've just read about this too>< Moved more to the right~
00:58:564 (7) - Maybe manually stack this note? (or unstack it) The default stacking looks awkward.okay, unstacked

Good. Spacing was a little inconsistent in some parts, but I think it's readable enough. ah, all the jumps are because of patterns, I hope it's really readable though><

[With You]

00:07:731 (5,1) - Is this minor anti-jump intentional?Ah yeah, I put it to make a jump from 5, and then antijump at the next 1 since the vocal starts a new line to. Uhh I hope it's quite readable><
01:01:689 - I would probably fill this gap, since you don't really have any spaces elsewhere in the kiai bit. (other than 01:15:022, I guess)umm intentional anti-jump too? Since the vocal come to a halt in the note before it, It feels really nice;w; and since all other difficulty has this blank, I think putting a note here will be really surprising>.<
01:08:147 (2) - This was really unexpected. I think a normal-speed slider would be better.ah umm, since I followed the background music and I saw many jumps like these on other ranked songs, I really like this one. And also, a bit more variety will be nicer right? I hope the NC will make it less surprising though><

This was really good too. I was able to play this though on Hidden with minimal difficulties, so it's quite intuitive. For future purposes, I would probably make the non-kiai section a bit less jumpy, to bring out some contrast in the kiai section other than the slight slider speed increase. This is already very good though.yeah, Thank you very much! the intro section has more tricky part more than the chorus, so I can't help but put jumps there orz

Really nice mapset overall. Let me know when you've had a chance to look over my suggestions.Yeah, thank you very much! I noticed some things that are still off from my map by your mod. And I hope my replies are clear enough for you. And really sorry I had to reject a few of your suggestion>< But if there are still things that really bugged you off, pleas tell me~ Thank you very much for taking a look at my map!><

AnreFM wrote:

Kytoxid wrote:

- Never watched PSYCHO-PASS, but is there a video that would usually be included here? (or did you choose not to include it?)hmm currently, I'm still waiting for someone to encode the video><

1. Pretty sure you don't need the extra psycho pass on the tags as the source is already there. And the search engine will still get it even without them on the tags, so psycho pass is redundant ton tags
2. 00:42:106 - Why did you use lower volume here? the vocal clearly getting louder here, so lowering the volume on this section only make the hit objects to be less audible
3. 00:52:106 - Same as the above, but not as bad. The spinner spin will actually fit the music here 30% volume is good, not too loud and not too small

1. 00:05:439 (1,2,3) - Agree with Kytoxid here. A single long slider will make it easier to read rather than a repeat. It's quite easy to rearrange it. You can try something like this
   
   SPOILER

   
   this way you don't need to rearrange the next hit objects, though it's all up to you
2. 00:11:897 (1) - Most of the rhythm before this follow the vocal quite closely so better make this one follow the vocal too

1. 00:03:147 (4,5,6) - Are you following the vocal or the instrument here? If your following vocal, 6 should be remove and 5 should be placed on 00:03:981
2. 00:17:731 (5) - The slider end sounds awkward as there aren't any beat on the timeline, it's sounds better if 5 is a single hit circle
3. 00:27:522 (3) - ^ for this one maybe remove 00:27:106 (2,3) then use the same kind of slider as on 00:13:772 (2). The tick sounds good there
4. 01:06:272 (3,4) - I'm not sure about these 2. Because of the vocal maybe? Anyway I suggest changing them to something like this?
   
   You have to remove 01:07:522 (1) if you follow this as 4 start from 01:06:897 to 01:07:522

1. 00:03:981 (6) - If you're following the vocal, this should be a single slider instead a repeat
2. 00:07:314 (4) - ^
3. 00:12:314 (2) - ^
4. 00:17:939 (6) - I don't hear any beat on the music so maybe you should remove this
5. Using normal sample set (SHIFT+W) works really good on the kiai time. Here try something like this
   
   1. 00:56:897 (5,6) - Use normal sample set on the slider start of both these slider
   2. 00:58:772 (1) - Use it on the slider start
   3. 01:00:231 (4) - Use it on the slider start & repeat
   4. 01:03:564 (5,6) - Same as 00:56:897 (5,6)
   That's the pattern, you can use it on the insane too if you want

captin1 wrote:

quick, take this, it'll help you on your journey

PSYCHO PASS ED 2

whee

captin1 wrote:

\( '. ' )/ \( '. ')/

gogo

1. Sorry but I'm not agree with the timing, your offset sounds late, what i get is -1245 (-16 from yours), and it would be better if you set offset at 2090

1. 00:42:089 (1) - This finish sounds kinda weird, remove it sounds better imo
2. 00:53:756 - Spinner end, you can use 5% volume, so that fit the music more
3. 01:08:756 (1) - I'd suggest remove custom clap here, mixed clap and finish sounds really odd

1. 01:08:756 (1) - The same to <With you> diff
2. 01:12:106 (1) - Slider head, why clap here?

1. 01:22:089 (3) - The hit volume of this one seems too low

1. 01:08:756 (1) - The same issue

Breeze wrote:

[Timing]

1. Sorry but I'm not agree with the timing, your offset sounds late, what i get is -1245 (-16 from yours), and it would be better if you set offset at 2090un, ok I'll change the timing and offset then~ well I thought about having notes before the red line, but I guess it's fine now

[With You]

1. 00:42:089 (1) - This finish sounds kinda weird, remove it sounds better imook fixed
2. 00:53:756 - Spinner end, you can use 5% volume, so that fit the music morefixed throughout the mapset to all difficulties~
3. 01:08:756 (1) - I'd suggest remove custom clap here, mixed clap and finish sounds really oddok

[Hard]

1. 01:08:756 (1) - The same to <With you> difffixed
2. 01:12:106 (1) - Slider head, why clap here?ah woops, fixed

[Normal]

1. 01:22:089 (3) - The hit volume of this one seems too lowah fixed this too, I accidentally set the green line for volume too soon orz

[Easy]

1. 01:08:756 (1) - The same issueok

Call me back when you have replyThanks Breeze!

1. Consider renaming "With You" to "Insane"? I understand we are free to name the difficulties whatever we want, but I do believe having names relating to difficulty is best.

1. 00:02:090 -
   00:42:089 -

YGOkid8 wrote:

whoo, nice map.>//<

General:

1. Consider renaming "With You" to "Insane"? I understand we are free to name the difficulties whatever we want, but I do believe having names relating to difficulty is best.ah about this, since I think 'insane' wouldn't really fit with the song>< It's a calm song therefore I mapped the hardest difficulty not really on insane, but it's more like hard= or something>< So, renaming it to insane will be a bit not fit you know, So I hope you understand orz ><

I can't really hear the hitsounds going on before the kiai sections, specifically in these sections:

1. 00:02:090 -
   00:42:089 -

There's a very tiny volume increase in the music at 00:15:423 - , but I don't think it's enough to warrant a jump from 20% to 35%. My opinion is that you should just have the uninherited section at 40%, then keep increasing by 5% until you reach 00:42:089 - , where you either keep the same volume or drop by 5%.

If you disagree, we can discuss further options more in IRC. This is probably the biggest concern for me regarding the map.ah no, actually I want hitsound to be more audible too www. Okay fixed that

With You:
00:23:548 (4) - Consider moving this lower to the left so that the (3) flows into it better? E.g. to x:140 y:292.fixed
01:01:048 (7,1) - Not a big fan of the anti-jump here, but can't think of a way to change it, so I guess it's okaaaay to keep.phew, I like this one actually, so glad to keep it :'D
01:21:673 (4,5) - Consider using 1.9x spacing here, like you did with (3,4)? E.g. moving (5) to x:348 y:56. Makes the jump at (3,4) not random and gives it some consistency. That and I think it plays nicer this way.fixed

Hard:
00:43:756 (3,4) - In terms of timeline placement, I would move these 1/4 earlier. Rhythmically I feel it suits the music more, so see what you think?
00:47:090 (3,4) - Similar thing here, but you'd have to remove the repeat and add a hitcircle there so it's the same as the previous one.
00:50:423 (3,4) - And same thing here.umm well actually I think my rhythm fits quite better, since the first two 1/2 slider emphasize the calm thud on the background ;w; and also I've asked a few people about it, and they like the current better orz
01:07:714 (1,2) - While the slowdown here worked in "With You" diff, I don't think it works well here with the repeat on the slider. Delete the (1), move (2) back 1/4 earlier, then add a 1/2 slider at 01:08:131 - ? Also adjust the inherited section so only the 1/2 slider at 01:08:131 - gets the slowdown.ah yeah, about this. I think the slow down also doesn't feel good too, since this one DOES follows the vocal, unlike the one in with you diff.>< so I switched the circle with the repeat to emphasize the vocal more
01:15:214 - Add hitcircle here? Can simply stack over the next slider. You've been doing similar things up to this point for the rest of the kiai section, so... yeah.umm, since this one doesn't follows the vocal(adding a circle here will emphasize vocal, yeah), I think by inserting a circle here, it will quite misleading since the sliders after this follows a different rhythm><

Normal:
00:34:798 (4) - While sightreading, I found it more intuitive to start this 1/4 earlier. Though I know you're mapping to vocals, I do think it feels better starting it 1/4 earlier.well, since I don't want to ad too many 1/4 beats on normal(keeping it easier), I'll keep this to follow the rhythm><

Easy:
00:11:881 (1) - Extend length by 1/4, so that it finishes on the last note of the piano phrase thing.uh yeah, kinda hesitated to use this since this will make the shape different with the next slider,but I think rhythm is more important than pattern, so yeah, Fixed this~

And that's all. I do think the diffs. are a bit too similar since you decided to make it a 4 difficulty beatmap, but the spread is still quite good considering that. It's fun to play as well, so only minor complaints here.thanks for the mod YGO! and sorry for the few denials there, I hope you can understand><

1. Checking your timing sections in more detail, I noticed that the timing section at 01:07:506 - has a different volume throughout all the diffs. It has 30% in Easy and Normal, but 50% in Hard and With You.
2. Timing section at 01:22:089 - is also inconsistent throughout your diffs. In one diff. it's not there, where in other diffs. it's at different volumes.
3. While I'm being a stickler for details, timing section at 00:42:089 - is offset to 1ms later in some diffs.
4. 01:12:714 - You've got a random looking drum sampleset inherited section here for this one beat, but it's only in With You diff... intentional?
5. Also in terms of difficulty name, could you at least change the name to Alone? At the very least, "Alone" is an adjective, so it has some kind of describing property, where "With You" doesn't really mean much.

1. Taking another look, I think you should use AR4 for this diff.

Hard diff, you wrote:

YGOkid8 wrote:

01:15:214 - Add hitcircle here? Can simply stack over the next slider. You've been doing similar things up to this point for the rest of the kiai section, so... yeah.umm, since this one doesn't follows the vocal(adding a circle here will emphasize vocal, yeah), I think by inserting a circle here, it will quite misleading since the sliders after this follows a different rhythm><

1. 01:15:214 - The vocals actually start here, rather than where you've got now.
2. There is also a slight increase of pitch from 01:15:214 - to 01:15:423 (1) - . In musical terms, they're a semitone apart.

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:

1. Checking your timing sections in more detail, I noticed that the timing section at 01:07:506 - has a different volume throughout all the diffs. It has 30% in Easy and Normal, but 50% in Hard and With You.oh yeah, fixed this
2. Timing section at 01:22:089 - is also inconsistent throughout your diffs. In one diff. it's not there, where in other diffs. it's at different volumes.Fixed why am I so careless on this omg
3. While I'm being a stickler for details, timing section at 00:42:089 - is offset to 1ms later in some diffs.fixed, and why AImod didn't say anything about this ;w;
4. 01:12:714 - You've got a random looking drum sampleset inherited section here for this one beat, but it's only in With You diff... intentional?ah this one.. well I tried to put at least a hitsound here because the stanza(where the clap is supposed to be at) is covered by a slider, so I can't put a clap there. Did the drum sound weird? Well I changed it to a whistle with a lower volume since this slider is following the vocal afterall, hope it's not too weird at least><
5. Also in terms of difficulty name, could you at least change the name to Alone? At the very least, "Alone" is an adjective, so it has some kind of describing property, where "With You" doesn't really mean much.yes, yes I will change the difficulty name to this \:D/ well actually when I start mapping this I was torn to choose between Alone or With You, but I guess Alone is better afterall huh

Normal:

1. Taking another look, I think you should use AR4 for this diff.okay fixed

01:15:214 - Add hitcircle here? Can simply stack over the next slider. You've been doing similar things up to this point for the rest of the kiai section, so... yeah.umm, since this one doesn't follows the vocal(adding a circle here will emphasize vocal, yeah), I think by inserting a circle here, it will quite misleading since the sliders after this follows a different rhythm><

It may be difficult to hear at the current playback rate, but if you slow down to 50% or 25%, you can hear two things:

1. 01:15:214 - The vocals actually start here, rather than where you've got now.
2. There is also a slight increase of pitch from 01:15:214 - to 01:15:423 (1) - . In musical terms, they're a semitone apart.

And it's for that reason I think a hitcircle added there would be better than now.well, okay then since it sounds nicer this way~ I just hope the antijump can be read there xD

And yeah, that's it for the housekeeping mod.And thanks for your another mod YGO-san!! :'D

YGOkid8 wrote:

i don't think you updated, as i can't see any of the changes going through

Quilt wrote:

EGOIST♥