Quick answer, no.
The spacing emphasise needs improvement.
Object placements are random.
Sliders a bit too fast consider this is a hard difficulty.
And this one just sends the map to graveyard: 00:38:539 (1,2) -
It's fine if your first map isn't going to be ranked.
Most experienced mappers take more time to figure out things slowly.
Be sure to read this
Ranking Criteria here on how to get your maps rankable.
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And if you want someone's feedback about your maps, try going to this subforum next time:
community/forums/60Here, you can find lots of modders - mappers who willingly to give feedbacks about your map, and getting back on track to improve your general knowledge about mapping.
Be sure to follow some rules here and there.
And also read this rule too before heading to that subforum:
Click hereThat's all, and have fun mapping.