[Easy]

00:49:82 (1) - I like more only finish here.
01:35:39 (1) - Why these starts on 1/6 ? o_o

[Lissette's Normal]

01:15:207 & 01:17:258 & 01:19:309 - Remove this 3 break. Is impossible to take break.

[Hard]

01:13:15 (1) - Finish.

Nice map, star.

all fixed, thanks osuplayer111 and animask.

Easy:

00:20:08 (1,2,3) - Lower by 3/4 grids (grid level 3). This is because 3 is way too high, and is half-covered by the HP bar.

Normal:

Fine. Some 1/2s overlap each other slightly when they shouldn't, but it's not a big deal.

Hard:

Rename "Insane". Lower the HP Drain a tad. Otherwise, good.

Good maps mostly, star!

thanks Ekaru, all fixed

Gah I forgot to mod this srysrysry ;___;

Easy:
Perfect~

Lissette's Normal:
01:24:95 (3,1) - The distance between the ending of the first reverse slider and the slider after it must be shorter. Right now it can be a bit confusing.
01:31:36 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe you could make the difference in volume bigger because it's pretty hard to hear the changing volume here

Insane:
01:22:642 - Try to lower the volume from here because the whistles start to sound annoying

Great map

/me hands over a star

thanks for modding lesjuh n_n
kds for ya

lesjuh wrote:

Lissette's Normal:
01:24:95 (3,1) - The distance between the ending of the first reverse slider and the slider after it must be shorter. Right now it can be a bit confusing.
01:31:36 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe you could make the difference in volume bigger because it's pretty hard to hear the changing volume here

You are right!
Fixed

Star.

Nice job~ I found no problems with the map.

Maybe add "Lissette" to the tags in Normal as well? But I guess that won't change anything since her name is in the difficulty already huh. >.>

Well, great map!
Star~

[Easy]
00:28:28 (1) - Whistle.
01:08:28 (4) - New combo.

[Lissette's Normal]
00:17:77 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:36:23 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:04:43 (2) - Whistle.
01:05:46 (5) - ^

[Insane]
Wow... It's pretty cool!
00:31:10 (5,6) - Spacing.
01:32:89 (1,2) - ^

Star.

tieff wrote:

[Easy]
00:28:28 (1) - Whistle.
01:08:28 (4) - New combo.

[Lissette's Normal]
00:17:77 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:36:23 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:04:43 (2) - Whistle.
01:05:46 (5) - ^

[Insane]
Wow... It's pretty cool!
00:31:10 (5,6) - Spacing.
01:32:89 (1,2) - ^

Star.

All fixed

thanks for the stars GbL, Mafiamaster and tieff n_n

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thanks for modding Shinxyn n_n
kds

Good job twins . ~Starry.

thanks for checkin fartownik
cool u like it

Shinxyn wrote:

weee

:/

[All]
A BAT friend of mine (you should know who you are) always told me a BPM cannot have a .01 (or .99 for that matter), or it is VERY RARE to come across one of which has such timing.
I suggest moving the BPM to just 117.00 or you can wait on a second opinion. Ask Larto

[Easy]
I suggest making the endings consistent, Lissette's difficulty ends later (I think) than this one

[Lissette]
see [Easy]

[Insane]
I had fun on this one, the jumps weren't too difficult to read, I nearly got a perfect on the map
Also, See [Easy]

that is all, not much of a mod, but it'll work...

star*

eee wrote:

[All]
A BAT friend of mine (you should know who you are) always told me a BPM cannot have a .01 (or .99 for that matter), or it is VERY RARE to come across one of which has such timing.
I suggest moving the BPM to just 117.00 or you can wait on a second opinion. Ask Larto

thanks, i wont forget n_n

All fixed
thanks for modding

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thanks for cheking mrtn

mrtn wrote:

try offset 7514

about this offset, im not sure, i feel it off

[Insane]

00:08:80 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - You could make these opening finishes gradually louder, or just lower their volumes a tick or two.
01:05:21 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest re-arranging this part. I also don't really like how this sounded x_x

Lower the volume on those spinner a by few ticks.

[Hard]

I liked this difficulty the most. I think the opening finish sounds here are ok. because it's steady unlike the opening on your Insane which was more spread.

01:00:08 (1) - Lower the volume on this spinner.
01:13:16 (1) - Porbably this as well. The bonus sounds really loud over this soft song and your other soft hitsounds.

[Normal]

00:38:03 (1) - Lower volume

00:46:23 (1,2) - Suggest removing the claps on these.
00:48:03 (1) - You could add a fade out here on this spinner.

Ok, for the remaining half you used claps, but in my opinion claps don't really fit this song so you should try to use something else instead, for example:

00:58:03 (1,3) - I think you can use soft whistle instead of clap.
01:00:08 (1,3) - As above.
01:02:13 (1) - Remove clap.

Go through your hitsounds after these. Change if you want to, it's a suggestion.

01:21:23 (1) - Lower volume.

Volume control on the last part was great ^_^

[Easy]

Again I didn't like the claps and think that the spinners could use a reduction in volume/fadeout for the ending spinner.

Star of course.

PS: Ninja comment about the BPM post I saw above. Don't just assume a song cannot have 0.1 or 0.01 bpm, sometimes the timing will sound ok with a whole number BPM for a while but will then be off by a little without the 0.1, it does matter. Though it's true that most of the time the song will be that whole BPM number, but on occasion decimals do come into play.

thanks for all the help Mystearica...

i like kajiurayuki!!!

Insane
00:40:98 (1) - i suggest move down, put in the middle of 00:39:57 (5,2) -
01:09:31 (5) - unexpected jump

Hard
i like this diff best
00:53:93 (1) - 1/4 longer

Normal
fine

Easy
fine

DaRRi MIx wrote:

i like kajiurayuki!!! me too n_n

Insane
00:40:98 (1) - i suggest move down, put in the middle of 00:39:57 (5,2) - fixed
01:09:31 (5) - unexpected jump u r right, fixed

Hard
i like this diff best
00:53:93 (1) - 1/4 longer fixed

Normal
fine

Easy
fine

thanks a lot for checking n_n
cya!

Come on
Ask a BAT to mod this

<Insane>
01:29:57 (6) - New combo??

JUmps in this mapset are cool
good job

star~

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hi!

[Easy]
overall diff:how about decrease one?
00:29:31 (3) - move 1 grid to the right(level 3)~nazi~

[Lissette's Normal]
fine

[Hard]
01:15:21 (2) - align it so that it is a straight line to 1&3

[Insane]
00:32:90 (3) - spacing

nice map.
star for you

gdeath wrote:

hi!

[Easy]
overall diff:how about decrease one?
00:29:31 (3) - move 1 grid to the right(level 3)~nazi~

[Lissette's Normal]
fine

[Hard]
01:15:21 (2) - align it so that it is a straight line to 1&3

[Insane]
00:32:90 (3) - spacing

nice map.
star for you

thanks for modding gdeath n_n
kds!

There's really nothing wrong that I could pick out

so star~

Remember: Most of these are only suggestions. n_n

-[Easy]
Perfect.

-Lissette's Normal
00:41:623 Finish?
01:03:674 Remove whistle
01:11:110 Whistle at the start?
01:39:059 Add also a finish?

-Hard
00:23:931 Whistle
00:24:187 Remove whistle
00:24:700 Remove whistle
00:24:444 Add a whistle
00:24:956 ^
00:25:213 Remove whistle; add a finish instead
00:27:264 Finish?
00:28:546 and 00:28:931 Whistle at the start
00:44:187 (reverse arrow) Whistle?
01:03:674 1 square to the left
01:08:033 Finish at the end?
01:39:059 Add also a whistle?
01:24:700 Finish
01:26:751 Finish

-Insane
00:19:059 Whistle at the start; remove the whistle at the end
00:19:444 Whistle at the start
00:25:726 Remove whistle?
00:44:187 (reverse arrow) Whistle?
01:08:033 Whistle at the end?
01:24:700 Finish
01:26:751 Finish
01:39:059 Add also a whistle?

ok then~

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing seems fine to me

[EASY]

looks good

[LISSETTE'S NORMAL]

no problems

[HARD]

all good

[INSANE]

nothing.

very nice map. i can't fault it. definately rankable in my eyes. good job

star'd

thanks a lot for cheking ignorethis, Armin and Doomsday93

Great job~
I could find anything~
Big star for ya~
☆~

thanks kino77, Liss

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~


[Easy]

00:22:13 (2) - New combo?
00:24:18 (3) - ^
00:49:82 (1,1,1,1) - Double check the notes focused on the center of the grid. They are a bit uneven in the placement.

This difficulty needs a preview point.

Make sure to double check the spacing in this difficultly.

[Lissette's Normal]

01:10:08 (3) - Could move down just a bit (with (4) as well.)
01:13:93 (4,1,2) - Not lined up intentionally?
01:24:18 (2,3) - Double check the spacing on these two notes. Compare to the others, they are too close together.

This difficulty needs a preview point.

Make sure to double check the spacing in this difficultly as well.

[Hard]

This difficulty needs a preview point.

[Insane]

This difficulty needs a preview point.

00:10:72 (1,2,2,4,5) - Not lined up.
00:26:23 (2,3) - Too close together.

The manual spacing kinda shows more on this map. Make sure to double check the spacing and the neatness between the notes and stacks.

Overall:The map seems good so far, though it looks like the grid snap wasn't really used much. Make sure to double check the spacing to see that the notes are neatly placed. Also, double check the timeline to see if you have a note snapped in 1/8. For some reason, editor opens the map with a 1/8 timeline.

thanks for modding whymeman
all fixed.

thanks for starrin', hope is fine now n.n

[Easy]

00:31:036 (5) - Maybe move this slider down a bit, so that the spacing is the same as 3,4, (player goes back down a bit).
00:49:082 (1) - Consider using softer hitsounds for this section.
01:31:011 (1,1) - Spinner section's a bit long, maybe remove the second one or something.

[Lissette's Normal] (you guys do a whole bunch of maps together, right? Cool.)

00:23:016 (4) - Down a grid, to continue with the tradition of slightly seperated 1/2s?
00:26:023 (1) - Start it 1/2 earlier?
00:36:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Space out a bit, for the same reason as above?
00:59:031 (4) - ^
01:01:036 (4) - Maybe rotate this slider 90 degrees counterclockwise about the start point to cover up the next note a bit less.
01:03:067 (3) - Move this a grid left for symmetry.
01:13:093 (4,1,2) - ^
01:23:016 (1,2) - Move these left a bit for slightly seperated 1/2s.
Cool ending.

[Hard]
00:32:090 (3,4) - Move 3 1 right, move 4 2 right.
00:39:057 (5) - Left a grid.
00:55:021 (6) - ^
00:55:021 (6) - Left 2 grids.
01:09:070 (7) - 1 right.
01:18:093 (2) - Seems a bit closer than other 1/4s.
01:22:090 (1) - Up a grid?
01:24:095 (1) - Down a grid?

[Insane]

00:18:067 (5,6,7,8) - Shift these around a bit for symmetry?
00:24:095 (5,6) - 1 right, 1 down?
00:32:039 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing here could be a bit nicer.
00:54:070 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Left 1?
00:56:087 (3,4) - Line up with 2?
01:10:034 (1) - Down 1?

Starred.

~Easy~
Fine.

~Normal~
00:38:003 (1) - move start 1/2 right
00:40:059 (1,2,3,4) - should not stacked
01:21:023 (1) - on red tick

~Hard~
00:10:034 (4) - move up 1 grid
00:11:087 (2) - ^

~Insane~
00:12:039 (3,4) - spacing is wrong
01:35:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not snapped on the grid


+Star

thanks for modding and starrin Kytoxid and DJPop

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

It's ok

[Normal]

It's ok

[Hard]

Nice

[Insane]

It's ok

Starred~

[Hard]

00:15:469 (3) - New combo?

[Insane]

00:15:469 (3) - New combo?

You might turn the overall difficulty a bit down.

Easy & Normal are fine, but I don't like the 2 spinners at the end of Easy. Anyway, the maps are flawless and I like the hitsounds.

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good map .xD

No problem for all difficulty!
STAR!

thanks osu_CN_yaya, Leorda XD

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Stellar map!

This might seem to be like...the most insignificant thing ever, but trust me, it isn't.

Can you please resize the BG so that the height will be 768 or lower? I know, there'll be less to see of sexy Syaoran, but a maximum is a maximum (1024x768). oxo

Bubble ho! >w<

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Thank you so much >w<

I'm saying this needs a -10ms offset change. Somebody please double check me.

Liz Congrats ^o^
no tenía ni idea xD
es que como no estoy jugando pero weno felizidades ;3