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nano - Nevereverland [Taiko]

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LunaticP
148 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
LunaticP
SPOILER

Mintong wrote:

抱歉迟到了 O.O

Black - Normal Suggestion
Pink - You may need to consider
Red - Unrankable stuff

[General]
Artist should be "nano" but not "Nano" . see this
Well, since artist already have nano, you should not put nano to tag again. Delete it. 好吧
There's some note you didn't snapped, check it at AIMOD.
0.0............


[SB]

I did recommend you to cut some Background, because some is too big and you never use it. Example 3.jpg, you just use between the name "Nevereverland" right? Beside, it can reduce the beatmap filesize.
SB还可以改善, 比如做歌词SB还是什么的, 现在单单CG太单调了.
不要吧,太累了

我略看了图 感觉没什么我可调了 所以.....对不起啦 Q_Q
加油 好图
taiko_maniac1811
1,060 posts
Joined December 2010
taiko_maniac1811
Taiko mod as requested by LunaticP :3

Mod
  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:43:485 - add d?
    00:44:068 (6) - if above is done, change this to d?
  2. 00:58:922 (34) - delete? have a little break here is nice
  3. 01:58:046 (31,32,33) - change these to a slider/spinner instead? it's just plays weird here especially (32)
  4. 02:26:735 (23) - move this to 02:26:881 flows better
    02:27:172 (24) - if above is done, move this to 02:27:463 plays better here imo
  5. 02:30:376 - add d?
  6. 03:07:948 (99) - move this to 03:08:093 plays better here
  7. 03:10:278 (103) - move this to 03:10:424 ^
  8. 03:14:647 (112) - move this to 03:14:356 ^
  9. 03:23:676 - add d?
  10. 04:17:123 (67) - move this to 04:17:268 plays better here

    [Nardo's Futsuu]
  11. 00:44:213 (8) - move this to 00:44:068 flows better and easier to read
  12. 01:18:145 (88) - move this to 01:18:437 plays better with the vocals
  13. 01:20:475 (94) - move this to 01:20:767 plays better
  14. 01:59:211 (172) - plays weird here .w. move this to 01:59:065 ? plays better with the vocals
  15. 02:08:531 (193) - ^ move this to 02:08:386 ?
  16. 02:24:551 (233,244) - delete? have a little break here is nice
  17. 02:26:735 (238,239) - delete (238) and move (239) to 02:26:881 flows better with the drums
  18. 02:28:920 - add k?
  19. 03:14:647 (341) - move this to 03:14:501 plays better with the vocals
  20. 03:23:967 (363) - move this to 03:23:822 ^
  21. 04:08:239 (25) - move this to 04:08:093 ^
  22. 04:17:559 (47) - move this to 04:17:414 ^

    [Muzukashii]
  23. The 2nd break on this diff, why don't you follow the drums there? will play better if you'd follow the beat there rather than having a pause for break. It's up to you though :3
  24. And also map some at the last part after kiai .w.
  25. 00:21:830 (61,62) - k d? flows better with the piano imo
  26. 00:58:339 - add d? plays better for the drums
    00:58:776 (86) - if above is done, delete this to simplify the flow
  27. 01:27:611 (324) - delete? not needed here
  28. 01:42:319 - add k for the drums?
  29. 01:42:901 (9) - d?
  30. 02:02:997 (100) - k? flows better
  31. 02:08:531 (131) - delete?
  32. 02:09:696 (136) - D? plays better imo
  33. 02:33:434 (88,89,90) - k d k? plays better for the vocals
  34. 02:34:162 (92) - delete?
  35. 03:15:812 (255) - D?
  36. 03:18:579 (268) - delete?
  37. 03:25:132 (302) - D?
  38. 03:52:511 (60,61) - swap these 2 to k d? plays better
  39. 04:17:559 (171) - delete?
  40. 04:18:725 (176) - D?

    [Oni]
  41. The 2nd break on this diff, put some notes just like i mention in Muzu
  42. And also map some at the last part after kiai .w.
  43. 00:15:630 (42) - delete? not needed here imo
  44. 00:21:830 (62,63) - k d? flows better with the piano imo
  45. 00:40:864 (2) - k? make a "d k d k d" pattern flows nice with the guitar for this part
    00:42:029 (7,9) - if above is done, change these to k
    00:43:485 (16,18) - ^
  46. 00:58:995 (124) - move this to 00:58:704 ? plays better with the drums
  47. 01:26:009 (272) - k?
  48. 01:27:465 (283) - ^
  49. 01:42:319 - add k for the drums?
  50. 01:42:901 (9) - d? or are u following the piano? i prefer d here for the drums though ww
  51. 01:55:133 (71) - delete? have a little break here plays nice imo
  52. 01:58:483 (95) - k? plays better with the vocals
  53. 02:17:560 (24) - k? flows better
  54. 02:22:366 (61,62,63,64) - delete (61) and move (62,63,64) here, and then add a d at 02:22:657 , plays better imo
  55. 02:33:434 (109,110,111,112) - k d k d? flows well with the vocals
  56. 02:34:162 (114) - delete?
  57. 03:07:365 (249) - k? flows better
  58. 03:10:569 (276) - delete? have a little break here plays nice imo
  59. 03:12:899 (292) - k? follows the vocal better
  60. 03:18:579 (337) - delete?
  61. 03:52:511 (65,67) - swap these 2 to k d? plays better
  62. 03:54:258 (75) - k?
  63. 04:00:958 (91) - ^
  64. 04:02:123 (101) - ^
  65. 04:07:511 (140) - ^

That's all from me, hope it helps :3
good luck~
LunaticP
148 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
LunaticP

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Taiko mod as requested by LunaticP :3

Mod
  • [Kantan]
    I don't have any opinion in kantan actually, will try to follow unless very strange
  1. 00:43:485 - add d?
    00:44:068 (6) - if above is done, change this to d?
  2. 00:58:922 (34) - delete? have a little break here is nice
  3. 01:58:046 (31,32,33) - change these to a slider/spinner instead? it's just plays weird here especially (32)
  4. 02:26:735 (23) - move this to 02:26:881 flows better
    02:27:172 (24) - if above is done, move this to 02:27:463 plays better here imo
  5. 02:30:376 - add d?
  6. 03:07:948 (99) - move this to 03:08:093 plays better here
  7. 03:10:278 (103) - move this to 03:10:424 ^
  8. 03:14:647 (112) - move this to 03:14:356 ^
  9. 03:23:676 - add d?
  10. 04:17:123 (67) - move this to 04:17:268 plays better here

    [Muzukashii]
  11. The 2nd break on this diff, why don't you follow the drums there? will play better if you'd follow the beat there rather than having a pause for break. It's up to you though :3 just the feeling
  12. And also map some at the last part after kiai .w. no la I am lazy
  13. 00:21:830 (61,62) - k d? flows better with the piano imo no
  14. 00:58:339 - add d? plays better for the drums ok
    00:58:776 (86) - if above is done, delete this to simplify the flow ok
  15. 01:27:611 (324) - delete? not needed here ok
  16. 01:42:319 - add k for the drums? ok
  17. 01:42:901 (9) - d? no
  18. 02:02:997 (100) - k? flows better ok
  19. 02:08:531 (131) - delete? no
  20. 02:09:696 (136) - D? plays better imo ok
  21. 02:33:434 (88,89,90) - k d k? plays better for the vocals not the vocal la
  22. 02:34:162 (92) - delete? no
  23. 03:15:812 (255) - D? ok
  24. 03:18:579 (268) - delete? no
  25. 03:25:132 (302) - D? ok
  26. 03:52:511 (60,61) - swap these 2 to k d? plays better no
  27. 04:17:559 (171) - delete? no
  28. 04:18:725 (176) - D? ok

    [Oni]
  29. The 2nd break on this diff, put some notes just like i mention in Muzu
  30. And also map some at the last part after kiai .w.
  31. 00:15:630 (42) - delete? not needed here imo ok
  32. 00:21:830 (62,63) - k d? flows better with the piano imo no
  33. 00:40:864 (2) - k? make a "d k d k d" pattern flows nice with the guitar for this part
    00:42:029 (7,9) - if above is done, change these to k
    00:43:485 (16,18) - ^ am just let it be
  34. 00:58:995 (124) - move this to 00:58:704 ? plays better with the drums ok
  35. 01:26:009 (272) - k? ok
  36. 01:27:465 (283) - ^ ok
  37. 01:42:319 - add k for the drums? ok
  38. 01:42:901 (9) - d? or are u following the piano? i prefer d here for the drums though ww no the background
  39. 01:55:133 (71) - delete? have a little break here plays nice imo am will try and hear for other opinion on this
  40. 01:58:483 (95) - k? plays better with the vocals no
  41. 02:17:560 (24) - k? flows better no
  42. 02:22:366 (61,62,63,64) - delete (61) and move (62,63,64) here, and then add a d at 02:22:657 , plays better imo no
  43. 02:33:434 (109,110,111,112) - k d k d? flows well with the vocals no
  44. 02:34:162 (114) - delete? ok
  45. 03:07:365 (249) - k? flows better ok
  46. 03:10:569 (276) - delete? have a little break here plays nice imo same
  47. 03:12:899 (292) - k? follows the vocal better like to follow the ddd thing before so no
  48. 03:18:579 (337) - delete? no
  49. 03:52:511 (65,67) - swap these 2 to k d? plays better no
  50. 03:54:258 (75) - k? ok
  51. 04:00:958 (91) - ^ ok
  52. 04:02:123 (101) - ^ ok
  53. 04:07:511 (140) - ^ no

That's all from me, hope it helps :3
good luck~
Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,008 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Taiko mod as requested by LunaticP :3

Mod


  • [Nardo's Futsuu]
  1. 00:44:213 (8) - move this to 00:44:068 flows better and easier to read fixed
  2. 01:18:145 (88) - move this to 01:18:437 plays better with the vocals fixed
  3. 01:20:475 (94) - move this to 01:20:767 plays better fixed
  4. 01:59:211 (172) - plays weird here .w. move this to 01:59:065 ? plays better with the vocals Good~
  5. 02:08:531 (193) - ^ move this to 02:08:386 ? ^
  6. 02:24:551 (233,244) - delete? have a little break here is nice fixed
  7. 02:26:735 (238,239) - delete (238) and move (239) to 02:26:881 flows better with the drums Nope. Here I want to follow the vocal rather than the drums.
  8. 02:28:920 - add k? fixed
  9. 03:14:647 (341) - move this to 03:14:501 plays better with the vocals fixed
  10. 03:23:967 (363) - move this to 03:23:822 ^ ^
  11. 04:08:239 (25) - move this to 04:08:093 ^ ^
  12. 04:17:559 (47) - move this to 04:17:414 ^ ^

That's all from me, hope it helps :3
good luck~
Thanks for your mod 1811~ :)
JUDYDANNY
1,519 posts
Joined October 2011
JUDYDANNY
Hello~ mappers~~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via My Takio Moding Queue as M4M
I am glad if it becomes helpful. :)
My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D , K is Big Notes .. d,k.
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
[General]
  1. Be same volume sample => Soft or Normal
  2. Want to play… ><
    04:23:967 - ~04:42:462 – add something…;w;
    Futsuu is put notes.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:12:230 (17) – delete , 00:13:030 (17) – move to 00:12:630 (17) –
  2. 00:18:630 (23) - move to 00:19:030 (23) –
  3. 00:19:430 (24) – delete? if you like..
  4. 00:58:922 (34) – delete
  5. 01:08:825 (49) – delete
  6. 01:18:145 (66) -^
  7. 01:22:223 (71) –move to 01:21:932 (71) –and k?
  8. 01:47:561 (11,12,13,14,15,16) – all finish
  9. 03:02:997 (86,87,88,89,90,91) -^
  10. 01:58:774 (32,33) – move 01:58:628 (32) -01:59:211 (33) –
  11. 02:07:803 (50,51,52) -^ ddK 1/1divisor.
  12. 02:26:735 (23,24) – 24 del, 23 move02:26:881 (23) –
  13. 02:35:327 (38,39,40,41,42) – confuse
    02:35:327 (38,39) – move 02:35:619 - , 39 delete
    02:36:347 (39) – move 02:36:201 (39) -
    02:37:366 (41) - move 02:37:075 (41) –
    └――――――――――――――――――
  14. 02:57:172 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) – too hard. 02:58:046 (78,83) - delete
  15. 03:19:598 (116) – move 03:19:890 (116) -
[Nardo’s Futsuu]
  1. 01:47:561 (140,141,142,143,144,145,146) – add finish , 145 delete? want to accent
  2. 03:02:997 (310,311,312,313,314,315,316) -^
  3. 01:54:842 (157) - move01:54:988 (157) - & 01:55:424 (158) – delete?
  4. 03:10:278 (326,327) -^
  5. 04:03:870 (11,12) -^
  6. 02:14:356 (208) – add finish
  7. 04:22:511 (60,61) – k? no drums sounds….
  8. 04:23:384 (63) – delete? make break is more variation.
  9. 04:26:297 (70) – change normal
  10. 04:30:957 (82) -^
  11. 04:35:617 (93) -^
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:39:430 (1) – spin start this points is better.
  2. 00:42:757 (10,11) – k?
  3. 00:48:582 (35) - how about move? 00:48:873 (36) –
  4. 01:01:835 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110) – how about all swap? I think it fits better(caught pitch)...& last 2ndphrase, so want variation something…
  5. 01:59:211 (81) – delete is better fit vocal
  6. 02:08:531 (130) -^
  7. 02:09:696 (134) – D hearing by background sounds pitch
  8. 03:25:132 (302) -^
  9. 04:18:725 (176) -^
  10. 02:51:784 (167) – k ?
  11. 04:09:404 (129) – add finish
  12. 03:25:132 (302) –k or move to 04:13:045 (147) –
[Oni]
  1. 01:01:835 - ~ how about this? Same reason muzu. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1147529
  2. 00:17:230 (48) – k. kept piano and vocal(is little high) pitch
  3. 00:39:430 (1) – spin start this points is better.
  4. 00:58:267 (119) – add d , 00:58:776 (123,124,125,126) – ddk (or d?) k
  5. 02:51:784 (200) –k
  6. 03:52:220 (64) – add k?
That’s all! I thank you for reading it through ;)
Good Luck! :D
LunaticP
148 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
LunaticP
thanks, check later0.0......

SPOILER

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello~ mappers~~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via My Takio Moding Queue as M4M
I am glad if it becomes helpful. :)
My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D , K is Big Notes .. d,k.
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
[General]
  1. Be same volume sample => Soft or Normal
  2. Want to play… ><
    04:23:967 - ~04:42:462 – add something…;w;
    Futsuu is put notes.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:12:230 (17) – delete , 00:13:030 (17) – move to 00:12:630 (17) –
  2. 00:18:630 (23) - move to 00:19:030 (23) –
  3. 00:19:430 (24) – delete? if you like..
  4. 00:58:922 (34) – delete
  5. 01:08:825 (49) – delete
  6. 01:18:145 (66) -^
  7. 01:22:223 (71) –move to 01:21:932 (71) –and k?
  8. 01:47:561 (11,12,13,14,15,16) – all finish
  9. 03:02:997 (86,87,88,89,90,91) -^
  10. 01:58:774 (32,33) – move 01:58:628 (32) -01:59:211 (33) –
  11. 02:07:803 (50,51,52) -^ ddK 1/1divisor.
  12. 02:26:735 (23,24) – 24 del, 23 move02:26:881 (23) –
  13. 02:35:327 (38,39,40,41,42) – confuse
    02:35:327 (38,39) – move 02:35:619 - , 39 delete
    02:36:347 (39) – move 02:36:201 (39) -
    02:37:366 (41) - move 02:37:075 (41) –
    └――――――――――――――――――
  14. 02:57:172 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) – too hard. 02:58:046 (78,83) - delete
  15. 03:19:598 (116) – move 03:19:890 (116) -
[Nardo’s Futsuu]
  1. 01:47:561 (140,141,142,143,144,145,146) – add finish , 145 delete? want to accent
  2. 03:02:997 (310,311,312,313,314,315,316) -^
  3. 01:54:842 (157) - move01:54:988 (157) - & 01:55:424 (158) – delete?
  4. 03:10:278 (326,327) -^
  5. 04:03:870 (11,12) -^
  6. 02:14:356 (208) – add finish
  7. 04:22:511 (60,61) – k? no drums sounds….
  8. 04:23:384 (63) – delete? make break is more variation.
  9. 04:26:297 (70) – change normal
  10. 04:30:957 (82) -^
  11. 04:35:617 (93) -^
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:39:430 (1) – spin start this points is better.
  2. 00:42:757 (10,11) – k?
  3. 00:48:582 (35) - how about move? 00:48:873 (36) –
  4. 01:01:835 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110) – how about all swap? I think it fits better(caught pitch)...& last 2ndphrase, so want variation something…
  5. 01:59:211 (81) – delete is better fit vocal
  6. 02:08:531 (130) -^
  7. 02:09:696 (134) – D hearing by background sounds pitch
  8. 03:25:132 (302) -^
  9. 04:18:725 (176) -^
  10. 02:51:784 (167) – k ?
  11. 04:09:404 (129) – add finish
  12. 03:25:132 (302) –k or move to 04:13:045 (147) –
[Oni]
  1. 01:01:835 - ~ how about this? Same reason muzu. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1147529
  2. 00:17:230 (48) – k. kept piano and vocal(is little high) pitch
  3. 00:39:430 (1) – spin start this points is better.
  4. 00:58:267 (119) – add d , 00:58:776 (123,124,125,126) – ddk (or d?) k
  5. 02:51:784 (200) –k
  6. 03:52:220 (64) – add k?
That’s all! I thank you for reading it through ;)
Good Luck! :D
Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,008 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello~ mappers~~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via My Takio Moding Queue as M4M
I am glad if it becomes helpful. :)
My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D , K is Big Notes .. d,k.
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
[Nardo’s Futsuu]
  1. 01:47:561 (140,141,142,143,144,145,146) – add finish , 145 delete? want to accent nope.
  2. 03:02:997 (310,311,312,313,314,315,316) -^ ^
  3. 01:54:842 (157) - move01:54:988 (157) - & 01:55:424 (158) – delete? um, I think following the drums here is better, no change.
  4. 03:10:278 (326,327) -^ ^
  5. 04:03:870 (11,12) -^ ^
  6. 02:14:356 (208) – add finish fixed
  7. 04:22:511 (60,61) – k? no drums sounds…. fixed
  8. 04:23:384 (63) – delete? make break is more variation. nope, a bit hollow if doing so.
  9. 04:26:297 (70) – change normal no, stressed sound occurs here.
  10. 04:30:957 (82) -^ ^
  11. 04:35:617 (93) -^ ^
That’s all! I thank you for reading it through ;)
Good Luck! :D
Thanks JuDa for the mod~ :3
Kagami Yuki
272 posts
Joined January 2012
Kagami Yuki
Hi there :3
Mod from Kagami ~

d for don
k for kat
D for don finish
K for kat finish
">" for "change to"

[General]
Timing check:no problem.
mapset:no problem.
sv:no problem.
Suggestions:In fact you got not so cool hitsounds.Try to listen to the music then find out where can be set a finish and where can not.Finishers exist where it should be.ofc your map is rankable ,there are no unrankable objects.But I have to notice that you can do better if you make better patterns.

[Oni]
  1. 00:19:830 (56) - d>k
  2. 00:20:230 - add d
  3. 00:20:830 - ^
  4. 00:21:230 (61) - d>k | for the same part after this part.
  5. 00:25:030 (76) - d>k
  6. 00:39:030 (122) - add a finish | for here is a strong hit of piano.
  7. 01:31:105 (311) - remove this finish.
  8. 01:42:901 (10) - k>d | you can feel better here.
  9. 02:23:531 (69) - remove finish here.
  10. 03:29:792 (1) - how about add a finish here ?
Fantastic map =w=b

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:19:830 (56) - d>k | for you use k at pre patterns
  2. 00:39:030 (116) - add finish here.
  3. 00:40:573 (1) - ^
  4. 01:31:105 (239) - remove finish here.
  5. 01:51:056 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - d kd kd ddkd dd K kd dk kdkd ←change to this pattern may let you feel good
  6. 02:42:318 (133,134) - add finish as oni here
  7. 02:44:065 (142) - remove this finish.
  8. 02:44:648 (144) - add finish here.
  9. 02:46:541 (155) - remove finish here.
  10. 03:29:792 (1) - how about add a finish here?
  11. 04:02:414 (90) - It's up to you to remove this finish or not
This diff is harder for normal muzukashii.I recommend you remove more notes to make it easier.

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:08:230 (16) - d>k | for here is a high-pitch
  2. 00:11:230 (23) - ^
  3. 00:59:213 (41) - add a finish here.
  4. 02:42:318 (277) - ^
  5. 04:28:627 (76) - ^
  6. 04:33:287 (87) - ^

[Kantan]
I think this map is good.=w=b

All above.
good luck~
Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,008 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic

- Kagami Yuki - wrote:

Hi there :3
Mod from Kagami ~

d for don
k for kat
D for don finish
K for kat finish
">" for "change to"

[notice][General]
Timing check:no problem.
mapset:no problem.
sv:no problem.
Suggestions:In fact you got not so cool hitsounds.Try to listen to the music then find out where can be set a finish and where can not.Finishers exist where it should be.ofc your map is rankable ,there are no unrankable objects.But I have to notice that you can do better if you make better patterns.

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:08:230 (16) - d>k | for here is a high-pitch I think the note is not high-pitched enough to use k
  2. 00:11:230 (23) - ^ same pitch as 20, no change
  3. 00:59:213 (41) - add a finish here. fixed
  4. 02:42:318 (277) - ^ fixed
  5. 04:28:627 (76) - ^ fixed
  6. 04:33:287 (87) - ^ fixed
All above.
good luck~
Thanks for your mod~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/5ETJF
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening
From Zenx's Mod Queue

Since there's a SB I'll check it first!

@ 00:22:930 to 00:25:830 - The picture to text to picture transition is too solid, since the bg of the text is just black bars and white bars, the transition from realistic picture to simplified picture might be too "harsh"
I suggest using .png to create the text and overlap the first bg and use fade to transition to the next bg
Example of what i mean

@00:49:602 - Transition to the title could be done better with a flash - Fade in a white.jpg file quickly and fade out slowly
@01:50:983 - Same can be done here
@03:06:492 - Same here
@03:58:919 - The scaling in of white.jpg should be replaced with a flash for a better effect

@02:30:594 - Consider desaturating this here, the tag on the bg is a bit unfit for a mostly desaturated SB

@01:47:416 - The inverted picture was appropriately made, however the "jerking" of the image could be done better with some zooming in instead of just movement of the BG - The impact of the "jerking" is too little
@03:02:852 - Same here

@04:42:607 - Might want to fade out with black.jpg at the end here

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Italic = Optional

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems

BPM

No Problems

Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:42:757 (10,11,12,13,14,15) - d,d,d,d,d,d > D, , ,D, , | Consider changing this since the music uses 2 loud drum sounds instead of triplets
00:51:058 (64,65,68) - k,d,d > d,k,k | I feel that this kat pattern is better flowing because the kat at 64 seems to be too quick/sudden in this rhythm
00:54:262 (88,90) - Swap | Since you used a kat at every 2 white lines, this would make the flow better
01:10:864 (188,189) - Swap | Putting a kat at 188 breaks the kat rhythm
01:42:901 (10) - k > d | Putting a kat here after 2 kats is too loud/"hyper" for this quiet section
02:08:822 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - Modify | k,k,d 1/4's are weird in rhythm consider moving the kats
02:16:978 (19,20,21,22) - k,k,d,d > k,d,k,k | Putting a 2 1/4 kats at the front of a rhythm is too sudden considering you did not do it in the first rhythm and the chorus of the song ended
02:25:643 + d | The drum here is missing ( mapping according to music )
03:15:666 (313,314) - d,d > k,k | Since you used 2 1/4 kat patterns before this, ending the rhythm at the same amount of kats is pretty underwhelming, add some kats to increase the "hype"
03:24:987 (384) - d > k | Same here
Rest was mapped well, 04:08:530 (147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157) - This should replace every 03:14:938 (305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315) - Rhythm

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

Add Epilepsy warning for all diff.s
Consider deleting unused SB from your osb file, it creates lag and sometimes errors

Title Check

No Problems

:c tired, not going to mod all diff.s, don't kudosu this if you want X_X, if there's anything that you can't understand about the storyboard please do pm me :3
Totoro le Pacha
241 posts
Joined March 2012
Totoro le Pacha
Ayo, Ima Totoro le Pacha, from Totoro le Pacha's modding queue, so cool, so great, WHY ARE WE HERE ? FOR BITCHES
But just before bitches, mods. Let's begin.

[Kantan]
You should reduce your SV to 1,00. It's to fast here
Oh, and while I think of it. NO BREAKS IN TAIKO DIFFS. ♫ You should map instead.

00:18:630 (24) - Move this note to 00:19:030 and then add a kat here : 00:17:630 , it sounds less weird.
00:40:230 - It's just a Kantan, end your spinner here.
00:42:757 (4,5) - DAFUQ it's hideous and does not follow at all the music. Move them here : 00:42:611 and here : 00:42:903
00:58:631 (34) - Remove the finish
00:58:048 (33) - d
01:47:561 (11,12,13,14,15,16) - You should invert, where there's a finish, you remove it, and when there's not, you add one
01:58:046 (31) - Remove finish
02:25:716 (21) - d
02:26:007 - Add a k
03:02:997 (90,91,92,93,94,95) - The same as before, invert
03:07:948 (99) - Move this here : 03:08:093
03:10:278 (103) - Move this here : 03:10:424
03:14:356 (112) - Move this here : 03:14:210
03:14:501 - Add a d
03:17:851 - Add a k
03:23:676 (131) - Move this here : 03:23:530
03:23:822 - Add a d
04:08:239 (48,49) - Move these two here : 04:08:093 and here 04:08:385
04:09:404 - k
04:09:841 - k
04:11:006 - d
04:12:608 (56,57) - Move these two here : 04:12:462 and here 04:12:754
04:17:268 - Move it here : 04:17:123
04:17:414 - d
04:17:851 - Move it here : 04:17:705

I didn't saw this map was so long.. >__> I'll do just one another diff, just PM me the one you want.
LunaticP
148 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
LunaticP
First, I am new to SB writing and I can only type everything in the .osb file using a notepad
And also, I don't how to draw......


SPOILER

lZenxl wrote:

From Zenx's Mod Queue

Since there's a SB I'll check it first!

@ 00:22:930 to 00:25:830 - The picture to text to picture transition is too solid, since the bg of the text is just black bars and white bars, the transition from realistic picture to simplified picture might be too "harsh"
I suggest using .png to create the text and overlap the first bg and use fade to transition to the next bg
Example of what i mean


@00:49:602 - Transition to the title could be done better with a flash - Fade in a white.jpg file quickly and fade out slowly
@01:50:983 - Same can be done here
@03:06:492 - Same here
@03:58:919 - The scaling in of white.jpg should be replaced with a flash for a better effect

@02:30:594 - Consider desaturating this here, the tag on the bg is a bit unfit for a mostly desaturated SB

@01:47:416 - The inverted picture was appropriately made, however the "jerking" of the image could be done better with some zooming in instead of just movement of the BG - The impact of the "jerking" is too little
@03:02:852 - Same here

@04:42:607 - Might want to fade out with black.jpg at the end here

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Italic = Optional

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems

BPM

No Problems

Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:42:757 (10,11,12,13,14,15) - d,d,d,d,d,d > D, , ,D, , | Consider changing this since the music uses 2 loud drum sounds instead of triplets
00:51:058 (64,65,68) - k,d,d > d,k,k | I feel that this kat pattern is better flowing because the kat at 64 seems to be too quick/sudden in this rhythm
00:54:262 (88,90) - Swap | Since you used a kat at every 2 white lines, this would make the flow better
01:10:864 (188,189) - Swap | Putting a kat at 188 breaks the kat rhythm
01:42:901 (10) - k > d | Putting a kat here after 2 kats is too loud/"hyper" for this quiet section
02:08:822 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - Modify | k,k,d 1/4's are weird in rhythm consider moving the kats
02:16:978 (19,20,21,22) - k,k,d,d > k,d,k,k | Putting a 2 1/4 kats at the front of a rhythm is too sudden considering you did not do it in the first rhythm and the chorus of the song ended
02:25:643 + d | The drum here is missing ( mapping according to music )
03:15:666 (313,314) - d,d > k,k | Since you used 2 1/4 kat patterns before this, ending the rhythm at the same amount of kats is pretty underwhelming, add some kats to increase the "hype"
03:24:987 (384) - d > k | Same here
Rest was mapped well, 04:08:530 (147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157) - This should replace every 03:14:938 (305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315) - Rhythm

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

Add Epilepsy warning for all diff.s
Consider deleting unused SB from your osb file, it creates lag and sometimes errors

Title Check

No Problems

:c tired, not going to mod all diff.s, don't kudosu this if you want X_X, if there's anything that you can't understand about the storyboard please do pm me :3
LunaticP
148 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
LunaticP
for the latest mods, sorry for not responding in detail, but I have checked all the things and all the above mod have changed the map and very useful.

For lZenxl, I really thanks for the storyboard mod and I have try to use them but I am not a good graphic designer.I just make the part very disturbing. If you can show those picture and explain in detail about the flow of your idea about SB I will also consider.

For Totoro le Pacha , really thanks to the kantan mod, to be honest I don't know how to map a kantan. If you can help you can go to check on Nardo's GD. Thanks a lot.
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening

LunaticP wrote:

for the latest mods, sorry for not responding in detail, but I have checked all the things and all the above mod have changed the map and very useful.

For lZenxl, I really thanks for the storyboard mod and I have try to use them but I am not a good graphic designer.I just make the part very disturbing. If you can show those picture and explain in detail about the flow of your idea about SB I will also consider.
Going to show you how to make the flash:

SB/25 is the white.jpg

There are 6 keyframes here ( Time 00:49:747 )
1. Fade = 0
2. Fade = 1
3. Fade = 0
4. Fade = 0
5. Fade = 1
6. Fade = 0

This will create a short flash and then a long flash that fade out slowly

Image here

For the "jerking" at 01:47:416, I was considering you scale it bigger everytime and move it when it "jerks" so that it does not look the same

For the desaturation, if you have photoshop:

Decrease the saturation to -100


For the fade out, you just use a black BG and just fade it in
LunaticP
148 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
LunaticP
I am trying the fading now

For the effect before gogotime, I have tried that already and show to others using live stream. But they report that effect may disturb their gameplay and looks a bit scary....

The black and white effect I just don't understand why to put it here.....?
LunaticP
148 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
LunaticP
may be you try to download the new .osb file to see what I done

http://puu.sh/5HVKX.osb
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening

LunaticP wrote:

I am trying the fading now

For the effect before gogotime, I have tried that already and show to others using live stream. But they report that effect may disturb their gameplay and looks a bit scary....

The black and white effect I just don't understand why to put it here.....?
o_o I guess if you don't want to have the flash there it's okay

The desaturation is beacause most of your BGs at the start are desaturated, I guess you can leave it if you don't want to change it

LunaticP wrote:

may be you try to download the new .osb file to see what I done

http://puu.sh/5HVKX.osb
You might not want to have the scaling while it is not jerking, make it so that the keyframe is like the Movement's keyframe.
Jerry
Global Moderator
1,152 posts
Joined December 2010
Jerry
Taiko mod as requested via in-game chat~


  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:58:922 - this part feels kinda empty, add a don?
  2. 01:01:543 - add a don to accompany the guitar sound in the music?

  3. 01:08:242 and 01:09:407 - delete the notes at these 2 parts then add don at 01:09:116 to make the pattern more consistent?

  4. 01:28:630 - move this note to 01:28:339 so that the pattern is more consistent

  5. 02:00:813 (37) - This part sounds good, but the unbalanced note structure will be too hard for the new players. Try moving this note to 02:00:958 and then also moving 02:01:978 (39) to 02:01:838

  6. 02:07:075 and 02:07:803 - delete these 2 notes and then move 02:08:094 to 02:07:949 so that it's the same with what you did at 01:58:046

  7. 02:35:910 (40,41) - CTRL+G ? k d sounds better for this part

  8. 02:51:784 (68) - Move this to 02:51:929 Try to not follow the vocals for this part because it'll confuse many of the new players with the unbalanced note structure.

  9. 02:51:784 (68) - ^ same for this, move to 02:54:259
  10. 02:57:609 (78) - ^ same, move to 02:57:463
  11. 02:58:046 (79) - change to kat
  12. 02:59:939 (83) - for this as well, move to 02:59:793
  13. 03:00:376 (84) - change to kat
  14. 03:52:802 (23) - delete this so that the pattern is more consistent
  15. 03:56:297 (29) - Finish?


  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:39:030 (1) - end this spinner at 00:40:230 so that it's the same with kantan and it's also easier for the more non-experienced players

  2. 02:27:463 (238) - change this to don, it flows better for this part imo
  3. 03:56:297 (425) - Finish?


  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:22:030 (62) - delete this and then add don at 00:20:630 so that it's the same with what you did on 00:14:030

  2. 00:26:130 - delete this note and then change 00:26:230 to a big DON so that it'll have more impact at the piano note in the music

  3. 01:02:563 (105) - move to 01:02:854 ? I think it flows with the music better
  4. 01:42:901 (10) - the music becomes "heavy" and low here, change this note to don?
  5. 02:12:318 (149) - move to 02:12:463 and then add a don at 02:12:318 to match the music
  6. 03:15:521 (254,255) - change these 2 notes to big dons, the music pitch here is slightly low
  7. 03:56:297 (77) - Finish?
  8. 04:18:433 (173) - big don?


  • [Oni]
  1. 00:26:230 (78) - same as muzukashii diff, change this to a BIG DON and then delete 00:26:130 (77) so that it'll have more impact at the piano note in the music

  2. 00:45:087 (25) - change this note to a don and then delete 00:45:014 (24) because the kkk here sounds too "forced"
  3. 01:16:689 - this note sounds very out of place, delete it?
  4. 01:42:901 (10) - same suggestion from muzukashii diff, change to don?


    Fantastic Oni diff, I like it alot! Great job >w<


That's all from me! Good luck and also here's a star from me ~
LunaticP
148 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
LunaticP
Thanks

SPOILER

Jerry wrote:

Taiko mod as requested via in-game chat~


  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:58:922 - this part feels kinda empty, add a don? too dense
  2. 01:01:543 - add a don to accompany the guitar sound in the music? same

  3. 01:08:242 and 01:09:407 - delete the notes at these 2 parts then add don at 01:09:116 to make the pattern more consistent? ok

  4. 01:28:630 - move this note to 01:28:339 so that the pattern is more consistent ok

  5. 02:00:813 (37) - This part sounds good, but the unbalanced note structure will be too hard for the new players. Try moving this note to 02:00:958 and then also moving 02:01:978 (39) to 02:01:838 I follow the previous part

  6. 02:07:075 and 02:07:803 - delete these 2 notes and then move 02:08:094 to 02:07:949 so that it's the same with what you did at 01:58:046 ok

  7. 02:35:910 (40,41) - CTRL+G ? k d sounds better for this part no

  8. 02:51:784 (68) - Move this to 02:51:929 Try to not follow the vocals for this part because it'll confuse many of the new players with the unbalanced note structure.
    no la
  9. 02:51:784 (68) - ^ same for this, move to 02:54:259
  10. 02:57:609 (78) - ^ same, move to 02:57:463
  11. 02:58:046 (79) - change to kat
  12. 02:59:939 (83) - for this as well, move to 02:59:793
  13. 03:00:376 (84) - change to kat
  14. 03:52:802 (23) - delete this so that the pattern is more consistent
  15. 03:56:297 (29) - Finish?


  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:39:030 (1) - end this spinner at 00:40:230 so that it's the same with kantan and it's also easier for the more non-experienced players

  2. 02:27:463 (238) - change this to don, it flows better for this part imo
  3. 03:56:297 (425) - Finish?


  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:22:030 (62) - delete this and then add don at 00:20:630 so that it's the same with what you did on 00:14:030 ok then I just delete the one before.....

  2. 00:26:130 - delete this note and then change 00:26:230 to a big DON so that it'll have more impact at the piano note in the music
    no
  3. 01:02:563 (105) - move to 01:02:854 ? I think it flows with the music better no
  4. 01:42:901 (10) - the music becomes "heavy" and low here, change this note to don?

    see below
  5. 02:12:318 (149) - move to 02:12:463 and then add a don at 02:12:318 to match the music
    ok
  6. 03:15:521 (254,255) - change these 2 notes to big dons, the music pitch here is slightly low one only
  7. 03:56:297 (77) - Finish?too noisy
  8. 04:18:433 (173) - big don?no


  • [Oni]
  1. 00:26:230 (78) - same as muzukashii diff, change this to a BIG DON and then delete 00:26:130 (77) so that it'll have more impact at the piano note in the music

  2. 00:45:087 (25) - change this note to a don and then delete 00:45:014 (24) because the kkk here sounds too "forced"
  3. 01:16:689 - this note sounds very out of place, delete it?
  4. 01:42:901 (10) - same suggestion from muzukashii diff, change to don?


    Fantastic Oni diff, I like it alot! Great job >w<


That's all from me! Good luck and also here's a star from me ~
Last edited by LunaticP , edited 2 times in total.
LunaticP
148 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
LunaticP

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

01:42:901 (9) - d?

lZenxl wrote:

01:42:901 (10) - k > d | Putting a kat here after 2 kats is too loud/"hyper" for this quiet section

- Kagami Yuki - wrote:

01:42:901 (10) - k>d | you can feel better here.

Jerry wrote:

01:42:901 (10) - the music becomes "heavy" and low here, change this note to don?
Ok fine I surrender.......
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
Joined November 2009
lepidopodus
Well I generally like classic-taste Taiko map, lol. Have a star.
LunaticP
148 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
LunaticP
thanks lepidon
Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,008 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic

Jerry wrote:

Taiko mod as requested via in-game chat~

  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:39:030 (1) - end this spinner at 00:40:230 so that it's the same with kantan and it's also easier for the more non-experienced players fixed
  2. 02:27:463 (238) - change this to don, it flows better for this part imo fixed
  3. 03:56:297 (425) - Finish? fixed

That's all from me! Good luck and also here's a star from me ~
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Update: http://puu.sh/5J8A4
- SB DangYang -
56 posts
Joined March 2012
- SB DangYang -
我做这个MOD的原因你懂的啦。

母猪卡屎（MUZUKASHII 输入法你太调皮了
00:04:530 (11) - 这里和ONI那里一样啊。
00:26:230 (77) - 同上
01:50:764 - 同上
03:06:200 - 同上
03:59:792 - 同上
muzukashii没什么好说的。
这个松难度听起来不好听，不知道是不是我的击打音效的缘故。
oni
难度方面没有问题，HR之后打起来应该很爽。

00:04:530 (11) - 这个建议删掉，在打和听的时候，让我感觉太急促太突然了。
00:17:230 (47) - 这个NOTE左边好像缺少一个音17；030的位置。少了这个音的话，音乐的人声太突出了。
00:26:130 (77) - 也是感觉太突然。其实可以后面多加1个1/4的NOTE啦。
;) 密集的地方就不评论了。
01:50:764 - 这个地方在人声出来的时候，我认为就可以放NOTE了。可以更好地和前面那一段音乐进行过渡。
02:02:852 - 这里我觉得放一个NOTE比较好。因为02:02:706 (130) - 这里这个NOTE太突出了。
03:06:200 - 同01:50:764 -
03:18:288 - 同02:02:852 -
03:59:792 - 同01:50:764 -
04:11:880 - 同02:02:852 -

给大神MOD就像班门弄斧似的。

不过NOTE摆放太杂乱了啊！给我好好放成一堆啊！（这不是重点

其他难度等我以后有空。马上要上课了。

祝愿早日RANK~
Konpaku Sariel
778 posts
Joined October 2010
Konpaku Sariel
i'm so sorry

Oni
00:42:757 (10,11,13,14) - k

00:50:475 (58) - k or 00:50:475 (58,59) - k
00:51:349 (66) - k
00:51:495 (67) - d
00:51:640 (68) - k or 00:51:640 (68,69) - k
00:52:660 (74) - d
00:52:806 (75) - k or 00:52:806 (75,76) - k
00:54:262 (88) - k or 00:54:262 (88,89) - k and 00:54:407 (90) - d
00:55:136 (94) - k or 00:55:136 (94,95) - k
00:57:466 (111) - k or 00:57:466 (111,112) - k and 00:57:611 (113) - d
00:58:339 (119) - k
00:58:485 (120) - d
01:25:718 (270) - d
01:29:357 (295) - d
01:43:484 (11) - k
01:55:861 (77) - k and 01:56:007 (78) - d and 01:56:153 (79) - k
01:56:735 (83) - k and 01:56:881 (84) - d and 01:57:026 (85) - k
01:57:609 (88) - k

02:05:327 (150) - d and 02:05:473 (151) - k
02:06:056 (155) - k and 02:06:201 (156) - d and 02:06:347 (157) - k

02:17:269 (22) - k

03:13:045 (296) - k
LunaticP
148 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
LunaticP
Thanks
Will just mark the one changed in blue

Konpaku Sariel wrote:

i'm so sorry

Oni
00:42:757 (10,11,13,14) - k

00:50:475 (58) - k or 00:50:475 (58,59) - k
00:51:349 (66) - k
00:51:495 (67) - d
00:51:640 (68) - k or 00:51:640 (68,69) - k
00:52:660 (74) - d
00:52:806 (75) - k or 00:52:806 (75,76) - k
00:54:262 (88) - k or 00:54:262 (88,89) - k and 00:54:407 (90) - d
00:55:136 (94) - k or 00:55:136 (94,95) - k
00:57:466 (111) - k or 00:57:466 (111,112) - k and 00:57:611 (113) - d
00:58:339 (119) - k
00:58:485 (120) - d
01:25:718 (270) - d
01:29:357 (295) - d
01:43:484 (11) - k
01:55:861 (77) - k and 01:56:007 (78) - d and 01:56:153 (79) - k
01:56:735 (83) - k and 01:56:881 (84) - d and 01:57:026 (85) - k
01:57:609 (88) - k

02:05:327 (150) - d and 02:05:473 (151) - k
02:06:056 (155) - k and 02:06:201 (156) - d and 02:06:347 (157) - k

02:17:269 (22) - k

03:13:045 (296) - k
TKS
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2014
1,380 posts
Joined July 2011
TKS
[Oni]
  1. 00:42:757 (10) - k. too stronk drum sounds.
    00:43:048 (13) - ^
  2. 00:45:233 (26) - finisher. current pattern is unnatural.
  3. 00:46:980 (34,35) - no finisher.
    and 00:47:563 (38) - finisher.
  4. 00:50:985 (63,64) - del. these are unnecessary. need to create a break for music. please check the other parts.
    like 00:53:315 (78,79) -
    00:55:718 -
    01:23:606 (247,248) -
    01:25:645 (261,262) -
    and many more.
  5. 01:31:251 ~ why empty? lol
  6. 01:52:730 (52,53) - del.
  7. 02:13:046 - add d
  8. 02:22:148 (58) - => 02:22:730 -
  9. 03:08:166 (260,261) - del.
  10. 03:28:482 - add d
  11. 03:56:297 (83) - why no finisher? Muzu has finisher.
  12. 04:01:758 (98,99) - del.
  13. 04:04:744 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129) - i know youre inexperienced player. dat bignotes are not good patterns. these are really hard. and too noisy.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:47:706 (23) - del.
    01:48:580 (27) - ^
    03:03:142 (195) - ^
    03:04:016 (198) - ^
  2. 03:05:035 (203) - no finisher like 01:49:599 (33) -
painful. tired. mapset structure is not good for me.
goodluck.
LunaticP
148 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
LunaticP
Let's wait for BSS to recover

yeah

SPOILER
Love
osu! Alumni
1,267 posts
Joined August 2010
Love
Here's my part of the M4M.

[Oni]
  1. 00:08:230 (20) - Just make this into a normal k, there's nothing to emphisize here.
  2. 00:56:738 (107) - There's a higher pitch here. I found that k suited this better and it's easier to transition into D right after.
  3. 00:59:213 - 01:00:961 - This part right here, slowing down with the drums would make this so much better as it sticks out more than the melody of the violin.
    So it would be better to use D d - d k - d d - d k - d. Removing the note at 00:59:068.
  4. 01:17:708 - I don't know why, but this feels a little empty. Try using a k and tell me if you agree.
  5. 03:16:613 (325) - I think this would be better as a d. Just to keep the flow that you've been using with ddk and kkd, especially when there's a kkd soon after. dkk would be fine if it was all alone for 2/1 like after 03:19:598.
  6. 03:29:792 (1) - D instead? Only a suggestion.
  7. 04:21:491 - 04:21:928 - I feel this part should go d kkk k and then add a k at 04:22:074.
  8. 04:23:385 - 04:23:967 - Why not move the spinner back 1/2 and fill this part up with k k k k D?
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:08:230 (20) - Same as the Oni, there's nothing to emphisize here.
  2. 00:40:573 (1) - D for this, just to start off the new section.
  3. 01:03:291 (109) - d, it's better to start off sections with a D or K like here 01:03:873 (110). This one should be a D.
  4. 01:43:484 (11) - This seems better as a k. I know you're going with the vocal pitch and I think k works better here.
  5. 02:11:589 (143) - Try removing this, just to make this little part slightly easier.
  6. 02:23:240 (46) - I think that if you remove this, it would make it easier to hit the finish since the player might miss after the finish if you have a 1/2 after it. It also sounds a little better.
  7. 02:26:007 (52) - Finish this to start off this section.
  8. 03:29:792 (1) - D as a sugestion again?
  9. 03:39:113 (1) - K to start this out please. It will make it similar to 03:48:433 (41).
  10. 04:05:618 (106) - 04:04:744 (101) - 04:14:064 (150) - 04:14:938 (155) - These finishers make it seem wierd to read at a lower level, maybe just make these normal d's?
  11. 04:23:385 - 04:23:967 - Why not move the spinner back 1/2 and fill this part up with k k k k D?
[Nardo's Futsuu]
  1. 02:04:745 (183,184,185,186,187,188) - Try making this like 01:55:716 (159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166). Just switch the colors around so it goes kkk d kkk d starting from 02:05:036.
  2. 03:20:181 (352,353,354,355,356,357) - Same as above but starting at 03:20:472.
  3. 04:13:773 (37,38,39,40,41,42) - here too but starting at 04:14:064.

[Kantan]
  1. 01:28:921 (82) - Make this a D like you did with the rest of the D's before please.
  2. 01:56:589 (28) - I'd say remove this note to make it easier to play. I feel that having over 3 1/1s in a row will make it a bit too hard.
  3. 02:00:085 (35) - ^
  4. 02:05:910 (46) - ^
  5. 03:12:025 (106) - ^
  6. 03:21:346 (125) - ^
  7. 04:05:617 (42) - ^
  8. 04:14:938 (62) - ^
  9. 04:23:967 - Try adding just a D to this part.
Hope I've helped. Good luck!
Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,008 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic

Love wrote:

Here's my part of the M4M.

[Nardo's Futsuu]
  1. 02:04:745 (183,184,185,186,187,188) - Try making this like 01:55:716 (159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166). Just switch the colors around so it goes kkk d kkk d starting from 02:05:036. Nice idea~ Fixed
  2. 03:20:181 (352,353,354,355,356,357) - Same as above but starting at 03:20:472. ^
  3. 04:13:773 (37,38,39,40,41,42) - here too but starting at 04:14:064. ^
Hope I've helped. Good luck!
Thanks for the mod~ :D

Update: http://puu.sh/6qfXt
Nardoxyribonucleic
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3,008 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic
Here comes a taiko mod as requested.

[Kantan]

01:15:815 (61) d
01:16:106 add d
01:16:398 (62) k
01:28:921 (82) add finish ?
01:59:502 (31) K
01:59:793 (32) remove
02:25:716 (21) K ?
04:08:385 (49) remove finish or just move to 04:08:530

[Muzukashii]

00:42:757 (10,11) k k
00:56:738 (74) k
00:58:631 (85) add finish ?
01:00:670 (94) k ?
01:03:873 (110) D
01:29:503 (230) k ?
02:21:347 (35) D
02:51:784 (166,167) k d
03:52:802 (62,63) d k
04:13:482 add d ?
04:17:414 (165) k ?
04:17:851 (168) K

[Oni]

00:40:573 (1) D
00:58:048 - 00:58:339 kkddk or ddddk ?
01:01:543 (137) D
01:03:000 (150) k
01:03:873 (153) add finish?
02:09:696 (181) D, because of relatively low pitch of vocal
02:21:347 (52) D
02:41:735 (152,153,154) kkd ?
03:25:132 (390) D
03:39:113 (1) add finish
04:18:725 (225) D

Good luck LunaticP~ :D
abrian
154 posts
Joined October 2011
abrian
[Muzukashii]
00:48:728 - d/k
00:48:873 - d/k
02:56:444 - d
02:56:881 - d
04:04:890 - d
04:05:763 - d
04:17:851 - K
04:20:035 - move to 04:20:326

[Oni]
00:40:573 (1) - D

In general I will suggest you to extend the map to the actual end, it sounds better. Maybe just for Oni if you want.
I think this map is ready for rank \o/
Love
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1,267 posts
Joined August 2010
Love
Going to quote my last mod since not everything was applied and I removed the applied/low priority suggestions.

Love wrote:

This color is for additional comments.

[Oni]
  1. 00:08:230 (20) - Just make this into a normal k, there's nothing to emphisize here.
  2. 00:59:213 - 01:00:961 - This part right here, slowing down with the drums would make this so much better as it sticks out more than the melody of the violin.
    So it would be better to use D d - d k - d d - d k - d. Removing the note at 00:59:068.
  3. 01:17:708 - I don't know why, but this feels a little empty. Try using a k and tell me if you agree. This is also for variety so it's not exactly the same.
    04:21:928 (250) - Make this a k for consistency. This is exactly the same as 04:21:346 (245,246).
  4. 04:23:385 - 04:23:967 - Why not move the spinner back 1/2 and fill this part up with k k k k D? This would fit the end of the song more and wouldn't feel really empty
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:08:230 (20) - Same as the Oni, there's nothing to emphisize here. Just make this a k since the piano emphisis could be used just by a k itself and not a K.
    01:03:873 (110) - Change this to a D? This is better fitting for the crash on the drums.
  2. 04:05:618 (106) - 04:04:744 (101) - 04:14:064 (150) - 04:14:938 (155) - These finishers make it seem wierd to read at a lower level, maybe just make these normal d's?
  3. 04:23:385 - 04:23:967 - Why not move the spinner back 1/2 and fill this part up with k k k k D? Same reasoning as the Oni, this feels really empty.
[Kantan]
  1. 01:28:921 (82) - Make this a D like you did with the rest of the D's before please.
  2. 01:56:589 (28) - I'd say remove this note to make it easier to play. I feel that having over 3 1/1s in a row will make it a bit too hard.
  3. 02:00:085 (33) - ^
  4. 02:05:910 (45) - ^
  5. 03:12:025 (106) - ^
  6. 03:21:346 (123) - ^
  7. 04:05:617 (42) - ^
I hope to see a response to everything with a reason, and the Kantan needs a little bit of more work.

The Kantan has a bit of off-beats that could be snapped to 1/1 and could be a little bit easier on some parts. The vocals don't need to be followed. You only really need a base to follow like drum snares, simple beats, etc.
LunaticP
148 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
LunaticP

Love wrote:

Going to quote my last mod since not everything was applied and I removed the applied/low priority suggestions.

Love wrote:

This color is for additional comments.

[Oni]
  1. 00:08:230 (20) - Just make this into a normal k, there's nothing to emphisize here. okay
  2. 00:59:213 - 01:00:961 - This part right here, slowing down with the drums would make this so much better as it sticks out more than the melody of the violin.I just make it to D d - d k - k d d- k, similar idea
    So it would be better to use D d - d k - d d - d k - d. Removing the note at 00:59:068.
  3. 01:17:708 - I don't know why, but this feels a little empty. Try using a k and tell me if you agree. This is also for variety so it's not exactly the same.nevermind I don't have idea on with k or without k, just make a k here to see then
    04:21:928 (250) - Make this a k for consistency. This is exactly the same as 04:21:346 (245,246).okay
  4. 04:23:385 - 04:23:967 - Why not move the spinner back 1/2 and fill this part up with k k k k D?I just want to be consistent with 02:13:191 (1) - and 03:28:627 (1) - so no This would fit the end of the song more and wouldn't feel really empty
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:08:230 (20) - Same as the Oni, there's nothing to emphisize here. Just make this a k since the piano emphisis could be used just by a k itself and not a K.same
    01:03:873 (110) - Change this to a D? This is better fitting for the crash on the drums.after checking all the 4 diff I decide to change to D and all other diff will do the same thing
  2. 04:05:618 (106) - 04:04:744 (101) - 04:14:064 (150) - 04:14:938 (155) - These finishers make it seem wierd to read at a lower level, maybe just make these normal d's?okay
  3. 04:23:385 - 04:23:967 - Why not move the spinner back 1/2 and fill this part up with k k k k D? Same reasoning as the Oni, this feels really empty.[/color]
[Kantan]
  1. 01:28:921 (82) - Make this a D like you did with the rest of the D's before please.okay
  2. 01:56:589 (28) - I'd say remove this note to make it easier to play. I feel that having over 3 1/1s in a row will make it a bit too hard.^
  3. 02:00:085 (33) - ^^
  4. 02:05:910 (45) - ^^
  5. 03:12:025 (106) - ^^
  6. 03:21:346 (123) - ^^
  7. 04:05:617 (42) - ^^
    btw after rechecking this diff I removed other more notes than you stated
I hope to see a response to everything with a reason, and the Kantan needs a little bit of more work.

The Kantan has a bit of off-beats that could be snapped to 1/1 and could be a little bit easier on some parts. The vocals don't need to be followed. You only really need a base to follow like drum snares, simple beats, etc.
wasonz
714 posts
Joined July 2013
wasonz
From my queue Nardo request

Muzukashii
00:09:830 (23) - k
00:12:830 (33) - k
01:27:319 (221) - k
03:49:307 (44) - d

Oni
00:42:757 (10,13) - k
00:44:650 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26) -

:) Nice Oni

Good Luck ~ :)
Mystyk
osu! Alumni
950 posts
Joined June 2011
Mystyk
*gives you a star*

very nice Oni diff, I hope this gets ranked soon! :3
LunaticP
148 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
LunaticP

Mystyk wrote:

*gives you a star*

very nice Oni diff, I hope this gets ranked soon! :3

Thanks

Hope to get it ranked soon.........
qoot8123
1,500 posts
Joined March 2011
qoot8123
:D

[General]
  1. Break time盡量不要出現,而寫那兩段都還沒到達完全不能做的情況,建議那兩段還是做一下
  2. 建議協調一下結尾要下在哪,futsuu不太一樣

[ Kantan]


General
:idea: 有些地方可以不用跟鼓跟得那麼多,盡量把間隔擴大,讓kantan變得比較簡單,舉例來說,00:40:573 - ~ 00:48:728 - 可以改成這樣 ,節奏不但變得比較簡單,另外7和8變成大don的話打起來也不會很無趣,其他段也是有類似的情況
:idea: 感覺有很多節奏很難抓的pattern,舉例來說01:03:873 - ~ 01:13:194 - 雖然節奏都一樣,但是打起來感覺就是很不舒服,建議note要放在最長的那條白線上會比較好(https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1971272) ,01:13:194 (55,56,57,58,59) - 這裡也是(https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1971279)

  1. 00:12:230 (15) - 建議刪掉,感覺會比較順暢一點
  2. 00:17:830 (20) - 這裡沒有很明顯的鋼琴聲,建議刪掉
  3. 00:20:430 (23) - 這個也可以刪掉,跟00:13:430 (16,17) - 做一樣就可以了,因為d 比較沉重,放在安靜的地方會變得很突兀
  4. 00:24:230 (27,28,29,30) - 這裡我建議跟vocal不要跟鋼琴,因為鋼琴的節奏比較複雜,而且kantan也有難度上的限制,所以試試看這個,我覺得會比較好
  5. 00:27:430 (31,32,33,34) - 這裡也可以跟上面做一樣的pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1971238
  6. 00:30:630 (35,36,37,38) - ^
  7. 01:01:252 (38) - 移到01:01:543 - ,感覺比較順暢
kiai部分還可以,但是其他段問題蠻大的,感覺kantan還需要一些mod


[ Nardo's Futsuu]

  1. 150bpm那段盡量把難度改簡單一點點
  2. 01:16:106 (82) - 移到01:15:524 - 然後01:15:815 (81) - 移到01:16:106 - 跟01:17:854 (87,88) - 做對比
  3. 02:47:269 - 這綠線調太小聲了,建議跟第一段一樣
  4. 03:29:792 - ^

[ Muzukashii]

  1. 150bpm那段做簡單一點讓spread變得比較平均
  2. 02:47:269 - 同futsuu,音量調大一點
  3. 03:29:792 - ^
  4. 01:12:903 (153) - 建議把這個大圓改成小的,畢竟這一段比較靜一點點
  5. 01:59:793 (82) - 這裡應該也不需要用到大圓了,雖然鼓的音量感覺差不多,但是打起來感覺有點吵雜
  6. 02:23:531 (47) - 這裡感覺沒有很強烈的鼓聲,建議改成小圓
  7. 04:23:967 - 加個D kantan有可是這裡沒有
  8. 01:03:873 - ~ 01:22:514 - 這段跟oni很相似,建議改簡單一點
  9. 02:26:007 - ~ 02:42:318 - 這一段也是
  10. 03:39:113 - ~ 03:56:297 - ^
  11. 01:40:571 - ~ 01:45:231 - 這裡也跟oni幾乎一模一樣,也是要改簡單一點點


[ Oni]

  1. 04:23:967 - 同muzu
  2. 02:47:269 - 同Muzu
  3. 03:29:792 - ^
kantan還需要一些mod, muzu跟oni有幾段非常相似導致spread有點不平均
多找些人來mod kantan,之後你覺得足夠了再來叫我吧 :)
Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,008 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic

qoot8123 wrote:

:D

[General]
  1. Break time盡量不要出現,而寫那兩段都還沒到達完全不能做的情況,建議那兩段還是做一下
  2. 建議協調一下結尾要下在哪,futsuu不太一樣 LunaticP沒上, 遲些會討論
    Edit: deleted the last 20 seconds of my diff.
[ Nardo's Futsuu]

  1. 150bpm那段盡量把難度改簡單一點點 OK.
  2. 01:16:106 (82) - 移到01:15:524 - 然後01:15:815 (81) - 移到01:16:106 - 跟01:17:854 (87,88) - 做對比 fixed
  3. 02:47:269 - 這綠線調太小聲了,建議跟第一段一樣 fixed
  4. 03:29:792 - ^ ^
kantan還需要一些mod, muzu跟oni有幾段非常相似導致spread有點不平均
多找些人來mod kantan,之後你覺得足夠了再來叫我吧 :)
Thanks for your mod~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/b9MDb.rar
Last edited by Nardoxyribonucleic , edited 1 time in total.
LunaticP
148 posts
Joined May 2013
Topic Starter
LunaticP

qoot8123 wrote:

:D

[General]
  1. Break time盡量不要出現,而寫那兩段都還沒到達完全不能做的情況,建議那兩段還是做一下
  2. 建議協調一下結尾要下在哪,futsuu不太一樣

[ Kantan]


General
:idea: 有些地方可以不用跟鼓跟得那麼多,盡量把間隔擴大,讓kantan變得比較簡單,舉例來說,00:40:573 - ~ 00:48:728 - 可以改成這樣 ,節奏不但變得比較簡單,另外7和8變成大don的話打起來也不會很無趣,其他段也是有類似的情況
:idea: 感覺有很多節奏很難抓的pattern,舉例來說01:03:873 - ~ 01:13:194 - 雖然節奏都一樣,但是打起來感覺就是很不舒服,建議note要放在最長的那條白線上會比較好(https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1971272) ,01:13:194 (55,56,57,58,59) - 這裡也是(https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1971279)

  1. 00:12:230 (15) - 建議刪掉,感覺會比較順暢一點
  2. 00:17:830 (20) - 這裡沒有很明顯的鋼琴聲,建議刪掉
  3. 00:20:430 (23) - 這個也可以刪掉,跟00:13:430 (16,17) - 做一樣就可以了,因為d 比較沉重,放在安靜的地方會變得很突兀
  4. 00:24:230 (27,28,29,30) - 這裡我建議跟vocal不要跟鋼琴,因為鋼琴的節奏比較複雜,而且kantan也有難度上的限制,所以試試看這個,我覺得會比較好
  5. 00:27:430 (31,32,33,34) - 這裡也可以跟上面做一樣的pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1971238
  6. 00:30:630 (35,36,37,38) - ^
  7. 01:01:252 (38) - 移到01:01:543 - ,感覺比較順暢
kiai部分還可以,但是其他段問題蠻大的,感覺kantan還需要一些mod


[ Nardo's Futsuu]

  1. 150bpm那段盡量把難度改簡單一點點
  2. 01:16:106 (82) - 移到01:15:524 - 然後01:15:815 (81) - 移到01:16:106 - 跟01:17:854 (87,88) - 做對比
  3. 02:47:269 - 這綠線調太小聲了,建議跟第一段一樣
  4. 03:29:792 - ^

[ Muzukashii]

  1. 150bpm那段做簡單一點讓spread變得比較平均
  2. 02:47:269 - 同futsuu,音量調大一點
  3. 03:29:792 - ^
  4. 01:12:903 (153) - 建議把這個大圓改成小的,畢竟這一段比較靜一點點
  5. 01:59:793 (82) - 這裡應該也不需要用到大圓了,雖然鼓的音量感覺差不多,但是打起來感覺有點吵雜
  6. 02:23:531 (47) - 這裡感覺沒有很強烈的鼓聲,建議改成小圓
  7. 04:23:967 - 加個D kantan有可是這裡沒有
  8. 01:03:873 - ~ 01:22:514 - 這段跟oni很相似,建議改簡單一點
  9. 02:26:007 - ~ 02:42:318 - 這一段也是
  10. 03:39:113 - ~ 03:56:297 - ^
  11. 01:40:571 - ~ 01:45:231 - 這裡也跟oni幾乎一模一樣,也是要改簡單一點點


[ Oni]

  1. 04:23:967 - 同muzu
  2. 02:47:269 - 同Muzu
  3. 03:29:792 - ^
kantan還需要一些mod, muzu跟oni有幾段非常相似導致spread有點不平均
多找些人來mod kantan,之後你覺得足夠了再來叫我吧 :)
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