From Zenx's Mod Queue
Since there's a SB I'll check it first!
@ 00:22:930 to 00:25:830 - The picture to text to picture transition is too solid, since the bg of the text is just black bars and white bars, the transition from realistic picture to simplified picture might be too "harsh"
I suggest using .png to create the text and overlap the first bg and use fade to transition to the next bg
@00:49:602 - Transition to the title could be done better with a flash - Fade in a white.jpg file quickly and fade out slowly
@01:50:983 - Same can be done here
@03:06:492 - Same here
@03:58:919 - The scaling in of white.jpg should be replaced with a flash for a better effect
@02:30:594 - Consider desaturating this here, the tag on the bg is a bit unfit for a mostly desaturated SB
@01:47:416 - The inverted picture was appropriately made, however the "jerking" of the image could be done better with some zooming in instead of just movement of the BG - The impact of the "jerking" is too little
@03:02:852 - Same here
@04:42:607 - Might want to fade out with black.jpg at the end here
d = Donk = KatD = Big DonK = Big Kat">" = Change toItalic = Optional
Timing CheckOffsetNo Problems
BPMNo Problems
OniHit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes
00:42:757 (10,11,12,13,14,15) - d,d,d,d,d,d > D, , ,D, , | Consider changing this since the music uses 2 loud drum sounds instead of triplets
00:51:058 (64,65,68) - k,d,d > d,k,k | I feel that this kat pattern is better flowing because the kat at 64 seems to be too quick/sudden in this rhythm
00:54:262 (88,90) - Swap | Since you used a kat at every 2 white lines, this would make the flow better
01:10:864 (188,189) - Swap | Putting a kat at 188 breaks the kat rhythm
01:42:901 (10) - k > d | Putting a kat here after 2 kats is too loud/"hyper" for this quiet section
02:08:822 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - Modify | k,k,d 1/4's are weird in rhythm consider moving the kats
02:16:978 (19,20,21,22) - k,k,d,d > k,d,k,k | Putting a 2 1/4 kats at the front of a rhythm is too sudden considering you did not do it in the first rhythm and the chorus of the song ended
02:25:643 + d | The drum here is missing ( mapping according to music )
03:15:666 (313,314) - d,d > k,k | Since you used 2 1/4 kat patterns before this, ending the rhythm at the same amount of kats is pretty underwhelming, add some kats to increase the "hype"
03:24:987 (384) - d > k | Same here
Rest was mapped well, 04:08:530 (147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157) - This should replace every 03:14:938 (305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315) - Rhythm
SV Check
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Kiai Time Check
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General
Ranking Criteria Check
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AiMod
Add Epilepsy warning for all diff.s
Consider deleting unused SB from your osb file, it creates lag and sometimes errors
Title Check
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:c tired, not going to mod all diff.s, don't kudosu this if you want X_X, if there's anything that you can't understand about the storyboard please do pm me :3