Petrarca Ann Erudanto III - Watashi no Housekibako (TV Size)

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Kuria

Fumika wrote:

I can't find better BG, If someone could, please ask me T_T
inb4 stole someone's bg in their map www
maybe i should do some tv size again
Momochikun
Nice
hoLysoup
oh~~ :>
alacat
pika :)
Mikkuri
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Fumika

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

Ranked
Still WIP xD
koreapenguin
Disable widescreen support. It's for widescreen SB only. proof~

in easy, normal, hard

lol nice map ><
ShirohaMyMommy
Romanised Title : Watashi no Houseibako (TV Size) :arrow: Watashi no Housekibako (TV Size)

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Bless
Hi ~ welcome back Fumika >3<
[General]
00:00:232 - remove this red line?
[Easy]
AR +1~2
00:01:822 (2) - change to a slider is better
01:22:086 (1) - hard to read x3x
[Normal]
01:04:802 (2) - shift+W on slider's head
01:19:504 - i prefer add a note at here
01:22:980 (5) - not suggest use a blue line note. it's play weird, even though there has a beat in music :<
[Hard]
looks fine
[Insane]
00:59:835 (3,4,5) - this part is a little weird when i play it x_x , maybe change (3) to a stream is better?
01:12:550 (3,4,5) - ^ same~ and why the hitsound on 01:12:749 - is different with 01:00:033 - lol
nice Insane

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Topic Starter
Fumika

koreapenguin wrote:

Disable widescreen support. It's for widescreen SB only. proof~

in easy, normal, hard

lol nice map ><
Done

Delis wrote:

Romanised Title : Watashi no Houseibako (TV Size) :arrow: Watashi no Housekibako (TV Size)

.w.w.w.w.
Oh, My mistake o.o Thanks !

Bless wrote:

Hi ~ welcome back Fumika >3< :arrow: Tadaima >3<
[General]
00:00:232 - remove this red line? :arrow: Done
[Easy]
AR +1~2 :arrow: It will be too hard ;w;
00:01:822 (2) - change to a slider is better :arrow: I'd prefer circle...
01:22:086 (1) - hard to read x3x :arrow: How o3o ?
[Normal]
01:04:802 (2) - shift+W on slider's head :arrow: ok
01:19:504 - i prefer add a note at here :arrow: ok
01:22:980 (5) - not suggest use a blue line note. it's play weird, even though there has a beat in music :< :arrow: fixed
[Hard]
looks fine
[Insane]
00:59:835 (3,4,5) - this part is a little weird when i play it x_x , maybe change (3) to a stream is better?
01:12:550 (3,4,5) - ^ same~ and why the hitsound on 01:12:749 - is different with 01:00:033 - lol
nice Insane :arrow: Thanks, But ^ These two I will decide it later.

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Thanks !!
Mikkuri
how to mod
20:37 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:28:841 (1) - clap head
20:37 Fumika: ไม่ใช่ยูกินะ
20:37 0OoMickeyoO0: dafuq
20:37 Fumika: ok
20:37 Fumika: 5555
20:37 Fumika: ใย
20:39 0OoMickeyoO0: เจออันเดียว
20:39 0OoMickeyoO0: ขี้เกียจเช็ค normal-hitnormal
20:39 0OoMickeyoO0: ฟังไม่ออก เยอะเกิน
20:40 0OoMickeyoO0: จะแก้ตามปะล่ะ ถ้าเจอ
20:41 Fumika: ก็ต้องดูก่อน
20:41 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:14:338 (3) - แก้เป็น clap
20:41 0OoMickeyoO0: เอ้ย
20:41 0OoMickeyoO0: ใส่ clap + addition soft
20:41 0OoMickeyoO0: เอ้อ
20:45 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:39:967 (1) - เปลี่ยนเป็น clap
20:46 Fumika: addition ?
20:46 0OoMickeyoO0: nope
20:46 Fumika: มันมีเสียง normal ตรงนั้นนะ
20:46 0OoMickeyoO0: just clap
20:46 Fumika: ฟังดีๆ
20:46 0OoMickeyoO0: แล้วแต่
20:46 0OoMickeyoO0: เพราะอันที่รัว
20:46 0OoMickeyoO0: มันไม่มี
20:47 0OoMickeyoO0: เลือกๆ mapper
20:47 0OoMickeyoO0: เรา modder
20:47 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:42:153 (2) - whistle tail
20:47 Fumika: 5
20:47 0OoMickeyoO0: ถ้าจะให้ดี remove whistle (1)
20:47 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:42:550 (3) - remove
20:47 Fumika: อ่าฮะ
20:47 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:42:947 (1) - whistle
20:47 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:43:146 (2) - remove
20:48 0OoMickeyoO0: ใส่ผิดช่อง
20:48 0OoMickeyoO0: ฟังแล้วไม่เพราะ
20:49 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:44:934 (1) - clap head tail
20:49 0OoMickeyoO0: & 00:45:729 (3) - clap tail
20:49 0OoMickeyoO0: *head
20:50 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:52:682 (5) - head เปลี่ยนเป็น clap
20:51 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:54:073 (1) - clap ด้วย
20:51 0OoMickeyoO0: whistle นี่ใส่ตามที่อยากใส่ใช่ปะ
20:51 0OoMickeyoO0: จะได้ไม่ม็อด
20:51 0OoMickeyoO0: เพราะมันไม่มีหลัก
20:53 Fumika: ใส่ตามที่อยาก
20:53 Fumika: =w=
20:55 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:57:848 (6) - remove clap tail
20:55 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:59:239 (1,3,4,5) - ไอท่อนนี้ไม่น่าใส่รัวเลยนะ
20:57 Fumika: เสียงกลอง
20:57 0OoMickeyoO0: กลองมันไม่รัวหมด
20:57 0OoMickeyoO0: ไง
20:57 Fumika: เอาน่า
20:57 0OoMickeyoO0: กลองมันรัวจังหวะ 3 5 1 3
20:57 0OoMickeyoO0: เออๆแล้วแต่
20:58 0OoMickeyoO0: จะพูดยังไงดี
20:58 Fumika: ไม่เคยตีกลอง
20:58 Fumika: อิอิ
20:58 0OoMickeyoO0: เวลาจะม็อดเสียงใน reverse
20:59 0OoMickeyoO0: ที่มี reverse มากกว่า 3 ขึ้นไป
20:59 0OoMickeyoO0: reverse ตัวที่ 1 2 3 ไรงี้ละกัน
20:59 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:59:239 (1) - เปลี่ยนเป็น clap tail
21:01 0OoMickeyoO0: ยากวะ มันมั่วไปหมด
21:01 0OoMickeyoO0: แก้โค้ดให้โอเคมั้ย
21:01 0OoMickeyoO0: เอาแค่ช่วงนั้น
21:01 Fumika: เเก้ยังไงอะ
21:01 0OoMickeyoO0: ใส่ clap, normal-hitnormal ให้ถูก
21:02 Fumika: เอาดิ
21:02 Fumika: แก้เเล้วส่งมาเยย
21:02 0OoMickeyoO0: อัพใหม่แปป
21:02 0OoMickeyoO0: ตอนนี้เละเหมือนกัน 555
21:04 0OoMickeyoO0: http://puu.sh/4XmBW.txt
21:04 0OoMickeyoO0: มี 5 ตัว
21:05 0OoMickeyoO0: เดี๋ยวม็อดต่อ แก้เสร็จละบอก
21:06 0OoMickeyoO0: เดี๋ยวนะ
21:06 0OoMickeyoO0: มันอันเดิมรึป่าววะ
21:06 Fumika: เสจละ
21:07 0OoMickeyoO0: ลืมเซิฟแล้วเปิด notepad
21:08 0OoMickeyoO0: เออว่ะ โทดที
21:08 0OoMickeyoO0: http://puu.sh/4XmKz.txt
21:08 0OoMickeyoO0: อันนี้ๆ
21:12 Fumika: เสจละ
21:13 Fumika: 01:12:451 (2,3) -
21:13 Fumika: นี่อะ
21:13 0OoMickeyoO0: ฟังกลองแปป
21:13 0OoMickeyoO0: แก้ให้เหมือนเลย
21:15 0OoMickeyoO0: ไล่ทีละตัว
21:15 0OoMickeyoO0: หรือจะให้แก้โค้ด ไวกว่า
21:16 Fumika: โค้ด
21:16 0OoMickeyoO0: รับทราบ
21:18 0OoMickeyoO0: http://puu.sh/4Xn7T.txt
21:19 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:06:788 (1) - เปลี่ยนเป็น clap
21:19 Fumika: clap อยู่เเล้วนะ
21:20 0OoMickeyoO0: ดูทางซ้ายบน
21:20 0OoMickeyoO0: เอา normal sampleset + soft additions ออก
21:20 Fumika: เห็น
21:20 Fumika: ลองฟังดีๆมันก็มีเสียง normal ด้วย
21:20 0OoMickeyoO0: อันนี้เถียง
21:21 0OoMickeyoO0: แล้วแต่เหมือนกัน
21:21 0OoMickeyoO0: ใส่โน้ตเพิ่มไปตัวแล้วเอา clap ยัดด้วยดิ 01:09:669 (5) -
21:21 Fumika: vืม
21:21 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:09:669-
21:21 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:09:669
21:21 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:09:669 (-)
21:22 0OoMickeyoO0: จะเปลี่ยนมั้ย
21:23 Fumika: ลองแปป
21:24 Fumika: wม่แก้ละกัน
21:24 0OoMickeyoO0: เพราะขี้เกียจ
21:24 Fumika: มันต้องขยับทั้งชุดเลย
21:24 0OoMickeyoO0: เหมือนกัน
21:24 0OoMickeyoO0: แล้วตรงนี้ก็จะปล่อยว่าง 01:09:570 (4) -
21:24 0OoMickeyoO0: มีแค่ whistle มารองรับ
21:24 Fumika: ไม่หรอก มันไม่มีที่จะวาง
21:25 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:57:848 (6) - remove clap tail
21:25 0OoMickeyoO0: *เอา normal sampleset ออก
21:25 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:01:027 (1) - this too
21:25 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:04:206 (3) - this too
21:25 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:10:563 (1) - this too
21:26 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:13:742 (1) - this too
21:26 Fumika: ใส่ whistle แทนนะ
21:26 0OoMickeyoO0: reported mickey cause of spamming this too
21:26 Fumika: ok
21:26 0OoMickeyoO0: แล้วแต่ whistle ไงก็ได้
21:26 0OoMickeyoO0: DAFUQ
21:26 Fumika: ?
21:27 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:16:921 (1) - this too
21:28 0OoMickeyoO0: 00:58:444 (2) - เปลี่ยน whistle เป็น normal sampleset ดิ
21:28 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:11:159 (3) - นี่ด้วย
21:28 Fumika: done
21:28 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:17:517 (3) - นี่ด้วย
21:30 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:18:709 (2) - ฟังแล้วเหมือนขาด clap tail
21:30 0OoMickeyoO0: จะปล่อยให้มันแหว่งๆหรือยังไง
21:30 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:19:106 (3) - เปลี่ยน whistle เป็น normal sampleset
21:31 0OoMickeyoO0: เอ้ย
21:31 0OoMickeyoO0: เปลี่ยนหาง
21:31 0OoMickeyoO0: จาก drum เป็น normal-sampleset
21:31 Fumika: ยังไงกันแน่
21:31 0OoMickeyoO0: อันล่าง
21:31 0OoMickeyoO0: หลังเอ้ยเสร็จ
21:31 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:19:106 (3) -
21:31 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:18:709 (2) - ไอเนี่ยจะทำยังไงกับมัน
21:32 Fumika: drum clap
21:33 0OoMickeyoO0: DDD
21:33 Fumika: แค่นี้ ?
21:34 0OoMickeyoO0: เส้นเขียวด้วยนะ เสียง clap ไม่ดัง
21:34 0OoMickeyoO0: ใส่เส้นเขียวให้เสียงเหมือนเดิมหลัง drum เสร็จ
21:35 0OoMickeyoO0: suggest: ใส่โน้ตอย่างนี้ทำให้ใส่เสียงได้เยอะกว่า http://puu.sh/4XnKs.jpg
21:37 Fumika: ไม่อะ
21:37 Fumika: follow vocal
21:37 Fumika: D:
21:39 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:21:888 (1) - clap tail
21:39 0OoMickeyoO0: 01:22:484 (1) - clap tail
21:39 0OoMickeyoO0: that's all
21:39 0OoMickeyoO0: kd plss
21:39 Fumika: done
21:39 Fumika: แปะ log ดิ
21:39 0OoMickeyoO0: log eng
21:39 0OoMickeyoO0: lazy wa
Squichu
Hellow, mod from queue. c:

[General]
everything's fine here. :D

[Easy]
  1. 00:01:822 (2) -
    just cause I think it's kinda hard for beginners to switch from white to red ticks and with this it's easier, cause it's only one change. (and it still matches the melody imo)
    if you want to keep the stack I'd suggest
    (moved 00:02:418 (3) a bit), but it'd work better without it I guess. .o.
  2. I don't really know what to saaay, cause it's constantly switching around between red and white ticks and imo it's too confusing, but Idk. x:
    for example: the melody you follow before is to hear at 00:03:610 as well, but the next object is on the next white tick, but ends on the red one again, while the next object is on a white onee, even though it could start on the red before (at 00:04:802)).. it's kinda hard to keep the rhythm constant that way. ><
  3. 00:09:570 (1) -
    doesn't match 100% as well, but cause of the part at 00:09:967 I wouldn't go woth a single slider.
  4. 00:40:365 (1) - rotate by -23° (Selection Centre) to match 00:42:749 (3), you might want to use a different shape for 00:38:378 (3) then, cause it looks too similar otherwise.
  5. 01:20:199 (1) - spinner might be too short for beginners


[Gu's Normal]
Hmmh, this feels more like a Hard diff than a Normal, but since there is an Easy, I guess that's fine.. .o.
Still I think 1,5 DS is too much.. s: It''d work fine with 1,3, just to decrease gaps like 00:17:318 (6,1) a bit.
  1. 00:02:219 (5) nearly forms a square angle with 00:01:226 (3) which doesn't look good with 00:01:822 (4) in between. rotate 5 a bit (~30° by selection)?
  2. 00:19:702 (4,5) - 5 matches 4 nearly perfectly. maybe you should increase Grid Level to place it more accurate (at 84|316 for example).
  3. 00:23:676 (7) - I know this matches with 00:22:881 (5) so either
    which is 00:24:868 (1).
  4. 00:53:676 (1,2) - 2 could be aligned to 1 here as well
  5. 01:01:424 (1) - distance to 01:02:418 (3) is greater in the middle of the slider than at it's ends.
  6. 01:20:199 (1) - same about the spinner as in Easy


[Mochi's Hard]
only can do some niticking here, sorry. but the diff is great. >v<
  1. 00:17:716 (4) - move 2nd anchor point one grid up
    (to match 00:17:318 (3) to this, move the 2nd one of this one grid down.)
  2. 00:22:881 (1,2,3) - 3 looks like it's too far off from the other two.
  3. 00:33:610 (1) - I think it's fine if you don't hide it below the slider, but place it at 180|244 to go with the symmetry of 00:32:616 (1,2,3).
  4. 00:40:961 (2,3) - look nicer if with 00:40:365 (1) and 00:41:358 (4) if you place them at 312|288 and 388|320 imo.
  5. 01:05:000 (3) - rotate by 9° (Selection C.) to match with 01:05:596 (1).
  6. 01:11:954 (1) - align correctly to 01:11:358 (3)?
  7. 01:15:133 (1) - use two anchors for the curved part to get a nicer shape?
  8. 01:19:106 (3) - move 3rd anchor to 279|297


[Insane]
Can't say anything here.
I really like this diff. (It's rare to see not-overmapped Insanes lately x: ..this is really well mapped!)

Sooo, good luck with this, it's a nice mapset! ^__^/
Momochikun

Squirrel wrote:

Hellow, mod from queue. c:

[Mochi's Hard]
only can do some niticking here, sorry. but the diff is great. >v< D:
  1. 00:17:716 (4) - move 2nd anchor point one grid up hm.. k
    (to match 00:17:318 (3) to this, move the 2nd one of this one grid down.)
  2. 00:22:881 (1,2,3) - 3 looks like it's too far off from the other two. i think it's not ;_;
  3. 00:33:610 (1) - I think it's fine if you don't hide it below the slider, but place it at 180|244 to go with the symmetry of 00:32:616 (1,2,3). but.. i want to make that stack jump
  4. 00:40:961 (2,3) - look nicer if with 00:40:365 (1) and 00:41:358 (4) if you place them at 312|288 and 388|320 imo. rearranged this part
  5. 01:05:000 (3) - rotate by 9° (Selection C.) to match with 01:05:596 (1). i use ctrl h j for this.. it's fine..
  6. 01:11:954 (1) - align correctly to 01:11:358 (3)? hm.. nope >.<
  7. 01:15:133 (1) - use two anchors for the curved part to get a nicer shape? i think the shape is fine the way it is o.o
  8. 01:19:106 (3) - move 3rd anchor to 279|297err.. it'll break the symmetrical -w-


Sooo, good luck with this, it's a nice mapset! ^__^/
Thanks for mod
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 53974
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 430,14934,27649,40365,54669
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Watashi no Housekibako (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:私の宝石箱 (TV Size)
Artist:Petrarca Ann Erudanto III
ArtistUnicode:ペトラルカ・アン・エルダント三世
Creator:Fumika
Version:Mochi's Hard
Source:Outbreak Company
Tags:Netsukawa ending Fuchigami Mai アウトブレイク・カンパニー feel Momochikun
BeatmapID:313818
BeatmapSetID:120823

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.56
SliderTickRate:1

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Topic Starter
Fumika

Squirrel wrote:

Hellow, mod from queue. c:

[General]
everything's fine here. :D

[Easy]
  1. 00:01:822 (2) -
    just cause I think it's kinda hard for beginners to switch from white to red ticks and with this it's easier, cause it's only one change. (and it still matches the melody imo)
    if you want to keep the stack I'd suggest
    (moved 00:02:418 (3) a bit), but it'd work better without it I guess. .o. :arrow:It'd be overmap for Easy diff also.
  2. I don't really know what to saaay, cause it's constantly switching around between red and white ticks and imo it's too confusing, but Idk. x:
    for example: the melody you follow before is to hear at 00:03:610 as well, but the next object is on the next white tick, but ends on the red one again, while the next object is on a white onee, even though it could start on the red before (at 00:04:802)).. it's kinda hard to keep the rhythm constant that way. >< :arrow:Easy mannnnnn, don't expect much lol
  3. 00:09:570 (1) -
    doesn't match 100% as well, but cause of the part at 00:09:967 I wouldn't go woth a single slider.
    :arrow:nah...
  4. 00:40:365 (1) - rotate by -23° (Selection Centre) to match 00:42:749 (3), you might want to use a different shape for 00:38:378 (3) then, cause it looks too similar otherwise.
    :arrow:
    rly like my old one D:
  5. 01:20:199 (1) - spinner might be too short for beginners[/color]


[Insane]
Can't say anything here.
I really like this diff. (It's rare to see not-overmapped Insanes lately x: ..this is really well mapped!) :arrow:Thanks !

Sooo, good luck with this, it's a nice mapset! ^__^/
Thanks for modding :3/
RandF
From my queue~

[Easy]
  1. For Easy-diff, I feel SV is a little high
  2. 00:01:822 (2) - how about the slider: 00:01:623~00:01:822
  3. 00:01:822 (2,3) - it is better not to stack
  4. 01:12:351 (2) - I prefer Ctrl+G

[Gu's Normal]
  1. 00:59:835 (4) - unnatural rhythm. how about this?
  2. 01:12:550 (5) - same as above

[Mochi's Hard]
  1. 00:06:391 (1,1) - it is better to increase DS
  2. 00:46:722 (1,3) - this overlap should be avoided

[Insane]
  1. 00:06:391 (1,1) - it is better to increase DS


the use of "soft-hitclap2.wav" is nice! I like it~
~Good Luck~
No_Gu
http://puu.sh/4Z80S.osu
maybe don't change my diff if possible?..
Topic Starter
Fumika

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Easy]
  1. For Easy-diff, I feel SV is a little high :arrow:Its fine though.
  2. 00:01:822 (2) - how about the slider: 00:01:623~00:01:822 :arrow:Still have no idea where to put it lol, but I'd prefer the old one.
  3. 00:01:822 (2,3) - it is better not to stack :arrow:Its fine, cuz next note is slider :/
  4. 01:12:351 (2) - I prefer Ctrl+G :arrow:OK

[Insane]
  1. 00:06:391 (1,1) - it is better to increase DS :arrow:nope, Its fine though cuz I added nc on it.


the use of "soft-hitclap2.wav" is nice! I like it~
~Good Luck~
Thanks for modding :D/
Momochikun

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Mochi's Hard]
  1. 00:06:391 (1,1) - it is better to increase DS It's fine.. there are NC to point out the anti jump..
  2. 00:46:722 (1,3) - this overlap should be avoided eh.. o.o ?



the use of "soft-hitclap2.wav" is nice! I like it~
~Good Luck~
Thanks for mod though ~ :D
Dark Fang
mo no boo

[General]

  1. offset -3 from current state (627)


[Easy]

  1. 00:44:338 (2) - make consistent hitsound from previous as add a Whistle on start of slider
  2. 01:02:219 (4) - why don't you try to add a Whistle on auto Sampleset like 00:55:464 (2) - here end of slider

cool

[Gu's Normal]

  1. 00:00:430 (1) - eh... I think remove this circle is smart choice for this map. because this note is hard readable on start section for Normal diff. players who lack of skills are suddenly click on this circle.
  2. 00:05:795 (5) - 2 grid up on 8 Level gridsize the end point of slider.
  3. 00:40:365 - feel quite empty feeling on this section
  4. 01:08:775 (4) - aah, add a Whistle on start of slider as follow 00:56:060 (4) - this.
  5. 01:15:133 (3) - same as above opinion.
  6. 01:19:504 - you should stuff note or tick on here. this feeling too awkward for reading beat


[Mochi's Hard]

  1. overall, i feel like 'it's light insane' when i play it. because the difficult spread is a little big between Normal and Hard. I think problem is SV. deservedly, SV change is remap. so why don't you reduce beat like 3 hit stream?
  2. 00:59:735 (2,1) - please fix this distance error. or intended it? anyway, not good for both

yeah, good diff. i like it. this map's flow is good for playing. but i want you convinced by my above opinion

[Insane]

  1. hentai HP Drain
  2. 00:49:901 (3,1,1,1) - wat is dat NC's ww. is it for supply HP for some missed players? it's so complicate. why don't you reduce HP Drain instead dat dirty -forgive me- NCs.
  3. 00:58:742 (5) - ah why use 0.5x distance from here
  4. 01:16:722 (1) - this note break the stream flow like previous. why don't you use follow tradition formula dat
    irregula streams? w
Topic Starter
Fumika

Dark Fang wrote:

mo no boo nya nya hoo

[General]

  1. offset -3 from current state (627) :arrow: Sounds great


[Easy]

  1. 00:44:338 (2) - make consistent hitsound from previous as add a Whistle on start of slider :arrow: ok
  2. 01:02:219 (4) - why don't you try to add a Whistle on auto Sampleset like 00:55:464 (2) - here end of slider :arrow: nah, drums there

cool

[Insane]

  1. hentai HP Drain :arrow: Yesh
  2. 00:49:901 (3,1,1,1) - wat is dat NC's ww. is it for supply HP for some missed players? it's so complicate. why don't you reduce HP Drain instead dat dirty -forgive me- NCs. :arrow: for hentai hp drain yep yep
  3. 00:58:742 (5) - ah why use 0.5x distance from here :arrow: fixed
  4. 01:16:722 (1) - this note break the stream flow like previous. why don't you use follow tradition formula dat
    irregula streams? w :arrow: nooooooo its fine, just follow vocal
Thanks 8-)
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