-Kirito wrote:

hi bless :3/

[Easy]
slider tick rate -1 ok

00:00:635 (1) - x:152 y:128 move (senter) ok
00:06:282 (1) - ^ symmetry ok
01:02:046 - circle add? - vocal ok
02:26:046 (3) - sampleset - normal remove nope
02:26:399 - slider add? this nope
03:12:635 (1) - spinner add? - Insane same as nope
clap add plz bless clap sounds not fit x_x

[Normal]
slider tick rate -1 ok

03:12:282 (2) - 1/2 slider change? nope
03:12:635 (1) - spinner add? - Insane same as nope

[Hard]
AR+1 ok

00:11:223 (9) - NC add? ok
00:33:105 (5) - ^ ok
00:56:752 (4) - here change? nope
00:58:517 (1) - ^ ok
01:03:635 (2) - grid 1 down ok
01:12:811 (1) - 01:12:723 - spin start ok
01:14:752 (1) - blanket this better ok
01:15:811 (4) - ^ ok
01:42:635 - circle add? nope
02:03:459 (5) - NC add? ok
02:26:046 (1) - 02:25:252 - spin start nope
03:12:635 (1) - spinner add? - Insane same as nope

[Insane]
00:02:223 (7) - NC add ok
00:05:046 (7) - ^ ok
00:07:693 (6) - ^ ok
00:28:870 (1) - finish add nope
01:01:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - wow..circle stream :O ;D
01:19:693 (9) - NC add? ok
01:33:193 - sampleset normal add? nope
01:33:811 (1) - finish add nope
01:48:988 (5) - NC add? (this jump) ok
02:08:046 (1,2,3) - crtl + g? nope
02:08:752 (1,2,3) - ^ nope
02:12:105 (7) - NC add? ok
02:21:811 (5) - ^ ok
02:49:693 (13) - ^ ok
03:06:370 - here sampleset normal add? nope

Index! xD xD

1. mp3: outro is too long. i suggest to cut it

1. 00:41:576 (3) - how about slider: 00:41:576~00:42:105
2. 01:50:753 (1,2) - avoid overlap
3. 01:56:400 (1,3) - ^

1. 00:23:576 (2,1) - avoid overlap
2. 02:37:693 (1) - start at 02:37:341

1. 01:11:223 (1,2,3) - I prefer to change for reverse slider
2. 01:11:929 (5,6,7) - ^
3. 01:35:223 (6,7) - avoid overlap
4. 02:30:458 (2,3,4,5) - how about stack 02:31:341 (5) - on 02:30:458 (2) - like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   164,164,150458,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   232,84,150635,1,0,1:0:0:0:
   328,44,150811,2,0,P|331:130|267:181,1,175,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   164,164,151341,1,0,1:0:0:0:

5. 02:43:870 (1,2) - not jump
6. 03:09:812 (1,2,3) - I prefer to change for reverse slider
7. 03:10:518 (5,6,7) - ^

1. 00:02:223 (1,4) - avoid overlap
2. 00:03:635 (2,4) - ^
3. 00:48:282 (6,1) - I prefer not to stack
4. 01:26:046 (4,1) - avoid overlap
5. 01:27:282 (3,5) - ^
6. 02:08:046 (1,3) - I prefer Ctrl+G
7. 02:08:752 (1,3) - ^
8. 02:24:105 (5,7) - I prefer stack
9. 03:10:164 (1,3) - I prefer Ctrl+G
10. 03:10:870 (1,3) - ^
11. 03:12:723 (1) - end at 03:14:752

RandomEffect wrote:

Trick or Treat! happy halloween

[General]

1. mp3: outro is too long. i suggest to cut it i mapped more than 80% so i think it's ok

[Easy]

1. 00:41:576 (3) - how about slider: 00:41:576~00:42:105 i change it to 00:41:576~00:42:635 now
2. 01:50:753 (1,2) - avoid overlap ok
3. 01:56:400 (1,3) - ^ ok

[Normal]

1. 00:23:576 (2,1) - avoid overlap i think that's ok
2. 02:37:693 (1) - start at 02:37:341 follow vocal

[Hard]

1. 01:11:223 (1,2,3) - I prefer to change for reverse slider i'll consider it
2. 01:11:929 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
3. 01:35:223 (6,7) - avoid overlap ok
4. 02:30:458 (2,3,4,5) - how about stack 02:31:341 (5) - on 02:30:458 (2) - like this? nice
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   164,164,150458,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   232,84,150635,1,0,1:0:0:0:
   328,44,150811,2,0,P|331:130|267:181,1,175,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   164,164,151341,1,0,1:0:0:0:

5. 02:43:870 (1,2) - not jump why?
6. 03:09:812 (1,2,3) - I prefer to change for reverse slider i'll consider it
7. 03:10:518 (5,6,7) - ^ ^

[Insane]

1. 00:02:223 (1,4) - avoid overlap that's okay
2. 00:03:635 (2,4) - ^ ^
3. 00:48:282 (6,1) - I prefer not to stack nope
4. 01:26:046 (4,1) - avoid overlap that's okay
5. 01:27:282 (3,5) - ^ ^
6. 02:08:046 (1,3) - I prefer Ctrl+G nope
7. 02:08:752 (1,3) - ^ ^
8. 02:24:105 (5,7) - I prefer stack why only this part..? o.o
9. 03:10:164 (1,3) - I prefer Ctrl+G nope
10. 03:10:870 (1,3) - ^ ^
11. 03:12:723 (1) - end at 03:14:752 i think 03:14:943 is better

your map looks measured mapping. so beautiful! thank you
~Good Luck~

1. No tags? maybe you might want to add some like "ending, movie, 劇場版 とある魔術の禁書目録 エンデュミオーンの奇蹟" well you can add more if you want..but up to you
2. Your BG size is wrong, you need 1366x768 or 1024x768
   
   Fixed it for you o3o

   
3. disable the widescreen support since you don't need it in your map, you didn't use wide screen videos or sb..so yeah o3o

1. 00:23:929 (1) - how about moving this slider here x:392 y:124 and then making some blanket with the next slider like this
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:28:870 (1) - whistle was too soft for this part imo, so i suggest you to remove it and switch it with finish instead..sounds much better
3. 00:37:341 (2,3) - you made so many liner sliders >< how about making some curve with these slider?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:42:988 (1) - umm it'll make better blanket imo, if you made this slider curved and moved it to here x:93 y:167 like this
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:09:811 (1) - i don't think you need to add a nc here since it didn't follow anything, not the voice or the music ...so i suggest you to remove it
6. 01:39:458 (1,2) - many liner sliders is a bit boring and having the same rhythm repeated so many times >< so how about changing them like this?
   
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7. 02:06:282 (1) - same as i said here 01:09:811 (1) -
8. 02:44:399 (1,1) - making something like this on easy diff, is kinda hard and i don't suggest you to it, since the it'll be hard for some newbie players so how about making one spinner instead?
9. 03:08:399 (1) - same as i said here 01:09:811 (1) -

1. 00:02:223 (1) - this pattern is a bit confusing atm, so how about making something like this instead?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:07:870 (1,1) - ^
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:23:576 (2,1) - making such overlap on normal is kinda bad imo, so how about moving this slider to here instead x:156 y:276, to avoid such overlap is better o3o
4. 00:26:399 (2) - move the 2nd and last slider points 1 grid up, so it'll make better blanket with the next note
5. 00:57:105 (1,2) - how about changing this pattern to this, so the (1) slider can make nice blanket with other slider o3o
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:07:341 (2) - how about making this curve slider like this so it'll look more prettier and nice
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:51:282 (2) - umm, this kinda patter looks bad to me imo, so how about moving the 2nd slider point to x:292 y:100
8. 02:42:988 (1,1) - same as i said about this on easy diff

1. 02:42:988 (1,1) - how about making some flow here, not just liner sliders =3=/ baka Bless
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:18:282 (3) - ^
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:31:341 (7,3) - these two slider and note are overlapping so, how about stucking to avoid that?
4. 02:43:870 (1,2) - this two notes are a bit confusing to me so, i suggest you don't stuck the (1) on the slider move it somewhere else but don't stuck them to avoid the confusion from some people

1. 00:04:341 (4) - move this note 2 grids down so it'll stuck above the 00:02:929 (4) -
2. 01:40:870 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - wow why so much spacing baka Bless =3= please make the same spacing or do something else but don't things like this, i'm like "wtf" now, and it looks bad yeah =3=

Sekai-nyan wrote:

in-game pm request =w=/ and hi Bless wwww Hi >3</

General:

1. No tags? maybe you might want to add some like "ending, movie, 劇場版 とある魔術の禁書目録 エンデュミオーンの奇蹟" well you can add more if you want..but up to you added :3
2. Your BG size is wrong, you need 1366x768 or 1024x768 thank you~
   
   Fixed it for you o3o

   
3. disable the widescreen support since you don't need it in your map, you didn't use wide screen videos or sb..so yeah o3o okay~

Easy:

1. 00:23:929 (1) - how about moving this slider here x:392 y:124 and then making some blanket with the next slider like this ok
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:28:870 (1) - whistle was too soft for this part imo, so i suggest you to remove it and switch it with finish instead..sounds much better ok
3. 00:37:341 (2,3) - you made so many liner sliders >< how about making some curve with these slider? ok
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:42:988 (1) - umm it'll make better blanket imo, if you made this slider curved and moved it to here x:93 y:167 like this looks nice :3
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:09:811 (1) - i don't think you need to add a nc here since it didn't follow anything, not the voice or the music ...so i suggest you to remove it ok
6. 01:39:458 (1,2) - many liner sliders is a bit boring and having the same rhythm repeated so many times >< so how about changing them like this? ok
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:06:282 (1) - same as i said here 01:09:811 (1) - fixed
8. 02:44:399 (1,1) - making something like this on easy diff, is kinda hard and i don't suggest you to it, since the it'll be hard for some newbie players so how about making one spinner instead? i remove 02:44:399 (1) - the first one now, cause 5s+ spinner is too long =3=
9. 03:08:399 (1) - same as i said here 01:09:811 (1) - fixed

Normal:

1. 00:02:223 (1) - this pattern is a bit confusing atm, so how about making something like this instead? ok
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:07:870 (1,1) - ^ nice :3
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:23:576 (2,1) - making such overlap on normal is kinda bad imo, so how about moving this slider to here instead x:156 y:276, to avoid such overlap is better o3o [color=#0080FF]move 00:23:223 (1,2) - to x:296 y:56 now
4. 00:26:399 (2) - move the 2nd and last slider points 1 grid up, so it'll make better blanket with the next note fixed~
5. 00:57:105 (1,2) - how about changing this pattern to this, so the (1) slider can make nice blanket with other slider o3o nice~
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:07:341 (2) - how about making this curve slider like this so it'll look more prettier and nice ok
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:51:282 (2) - umm, this kinda patter looks bad to me imo, so how about moving the 2nd slider point to x:292 y:100 ok
8. 02:42:988 (1,1) - same as i said about this on easy diff change 02:42:988 (1) spinner to slider now~

Hard:
how about lowering the ar by so it'll make better for your spread and for plays ok
and increase the HP drain by 1 at least it's way too low for the hard diff atm >< ok

1. 02:42:988 (1,1) - how about making some flow here, not just liner sliders =3=/ baka Bless i think this liner slider is fine :3
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:18:282 (3) - ^ ^
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:31:341 (7,3) - these two slider and note are overlapping so, how about stucking to avoid that? fixed~
4. 02:43:870 (1,2) - this two notes are a bit confusing to me so, i suggest you don't stuck the (1) on the slider move it somewhere else but don't stuck them to avoid the confusion from some people hmm~i'll consider this~ keep it for now

Insane:
maybe use AR8 i think atm it's too fast for this song and for your rhythm >< i prefer AR9, i can't read this diff on AR8 at all orz

1. 00:04:341 (4) - move this note 2 grids down so it'll stuck above the 00:02:929 (4) - ok
2. 01:40:870 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - wow why so much spacing baka Bless =3= please make the same spacing or do something else but don't things like this, i'm like "wtf" now, and it looks bad yeah =3= lol yeah, i'll change this part xD

No problem just the spacing on some streams kinda worries me a bit, but still nice insane diff as i can say o3o >3<~♡



That's all i can find owo/ good luck moe Bless <3

lkx_Shore wrote:

12sp啦

Frostmourne wrote:

General
good

Easy
01:36:635 (1) - finish here because you have a similar finish on 00:28:870 (1) -

Normal
Nice Normal !

Hard
AR8 feels better for this diff.
01:40:870 (1,2,3,4) - make them close to each other please because these spacings look like 1/2 but they are actually 1/4

Insane
Amazing Insane

call me back Bless

Frostmourne wrote:

:)

ykcarrot wrote:

(´・∀・`) gogo

Shuiyiming wrote:

Easy
good

Normal: combos are too short. Maybe you like colourful beatmaps, but I think a new combo should begin at where a new music passage start.So you should try to reduce them.
00:51:458 (1,2) - Not symmetrical actually. 00:52:870 (2) - place it at x=204,y=64

02:30:282 (1) - I don't think there should be a new combo.
02:35:929 (1) - No new combo too.
02:51:458 (1) - No new combo.
02:56:752 (1) - No new combo. A different colour will make player think he can take a little break here and miss it. It's belongs to the former music passage.
03:04:164 (1) - No new combo.
03:06:988 (1) - No new combo.

Hard
02:57:105 (1) - x=172,y=60
02:57:282 (2) - x=248,y=108
02:57:458 (3) - x=324,y=60
02:57:635 (4) - x=400,y=108

Insane
Nice!

I love this map as well as the anime. Hope your beatmap will be ranked soon:)

Nymph wrote:

good job :3

Sekai-nyan wrote:

BLESSS! GRATZ >w<

Atrue wrote:

Gratz~

Lanturn wrote:

someone mapped this <3

congrats

-Kirito wrote:

bless gratz...?!

kaitoshinichi wrote:

恭喜rank

ykcarrot wrote:

Congrats in advance xD

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Gratzz!! Bless!!^^