Sekai-nyan wrote:

in-game pm request =w=/ and hi Bless wwww Hi >3</

General:

1. No tags? maybe you might want to add some like "ending, movie, 劇場版 とある魔術の禁書目録 エンデュミオーンの奇蹟" well you can add more if you want..but up to you added :3
2. Your BG size is wrong, you need 1366x768 or 1024x768 thank you~
   
   Fixed it for you o3o

   
3. disable the widescreen support since you don't need it in your map, you didn't use wide screen videos or sb..so yeah o3o okay~

Easy:

1. 00:23:929 (1) - how about moving this slider here x:392 y:124 and then making some blanket with the next slider like this ok
   
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2. 00:28:870 (1) - whistle was too soft for this part imo, so i suggest you to remove it and switch it with finish instead..sounds much better ok
3. 00:37:341 (2,3) - you made so many liner sliders >< how about making some curve with these slider? ok
   
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4. 00:42:988 (1) - umm it'll make better blanket imo, if you made this slider curved and moved it to here x:93 y:167 like this looks nice :3
   
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5. 01:09:811 (1) - i don't think you need to add a nc here since it didn't follow anything, not the voice or the music ...so i suggest you to remove it ok
6. 01:39:458 (1,2) - many liner sliders is a bit boring and having the same rhythm repeated so many times >< so how about changing them like this? ok
   
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7. 02:06:282 (1) - same as i said here 01:09:811 (1) - fixed
8. 02:44:399 (1,1) - making something like this on easy diff, is kinda hard and i don't suggest you to it, since the it'll be hard for some newbie players so how about making one spinner instead? i remove 02:44:399 (1) - the first one now, cause 5s+ spinner is too long =3=
9. 03:08:399 (1) - same as i said here 01:09:811 (1) - fixed

Normal:

1. 00:02:223 (1) - this pattern is a bit confusing atm, so how about making something like this instead? ok
   
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2. 00:07:870 (1,1) - ^ nice :3
   
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3. 00:23:576 (2,1) - making such overlap on normal is kinda bad imo, so how about moving this slider to here instead x:156 y:276, to avoid such overlap is better o3o [color=#0080FF]move 00:23:223 (1,2) - to x:296 y:56 now
4. 00:26:399 (2) - move the 2nd and last slider points 1 grid up, so it'll make better blanket with the next note fixed~
5. 00:57:105 (1,2) - how about changing this pattern to this, so the (1) slider can make nice blanket with other slider o3o nice~
   
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6. 01:07:341 (2) - how about making this curve slider like this so it'll look more prettier and nice ok
   
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7. 01:51:282 (2) - umm, this kinda patter looks bad to me imo, so how about moving the 2nd slider point to x:292 y:100 ok
8. 02:42:988 (1,1) - same as i said about this on easy diff change 02:42:988 (1) spinner to slider now~

Hard:
how about lowering the ar by so it'll make better for your spread and for plays ok
and increase the HP drain by 1 at least it's way too low for the hard diff atm >< ok

1. 02:42:988 (1,1) - how about making some flow here, not just liner sliders =3=/ baka Bless i think this liner slider is fine :3
   
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2. 00:18:282 (3) - ^ ^
   
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3. 00:31:341 (7,3) - these two slider and note are overlapping so, how about stucking to avoid that? fixed~
4. 02:43:870 (1,2) - this two notes are a bit confusing to me so, i suggest you don't stuck the (1) on the slider move it somewhere else but don't stuck them to avoid the confusion from some people hmm~i'll consider this~ keep it for now

Insane:
maybe use AR8 i think atm it's too fast for this song and for your rhythm >< i prefer AR9, i can't read this diff on AR8 at all orz

1. 00:04:341 (4) - move this note 2 grids down so it'll stuck above the 00:02:929 (4) - ok
2. 01:40:870 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - wow why so much spacing baka Bless =3= please make the same spacing or do something else but don't things like this, i'm like "wtf" now, and it looks bad yeah =3= lol yeah, i'll change this part xD

No problem just the spacing on some streams kinda worries me a bit, but still nice insane diff as i can say o3o >3<~♡



That's all i can find owo/ good luck moe Bless <3

lkx_Shore wrote:

12sp啦

Frostmourne wrote:

General
good

Easy
01:36:635 (1) - finish here because you have a similar finish on 00:28:870 (1) -

Normal
Nice Normal !

Hard
AR8 feels better for this diff.
01:40:870 (1,2,3,4) - make them close to each other please because these spacings look like 1/2 but they are actually 1/4

Insane
Amazing Insane

call me back Bless

Frostmourne wrote:

:)

ykcarrot wrote:

(´・∀・`) gogo

Shuiyiming wrote:

Easy
good

Normal: combos are too short. Maybe you like colourful beatmaps, but I think a new combo should begin at where a new music passage start.So you should try to reduce them.
00:51:458 (1,2) - Not symmetrical actually. 00:52:870 (2) - place it at x=204,y=64

02:30:282 (1) - I don't think there should be a new combo.
02:35:929 (1) - No new combo too.
02:51:458 (1) - No new combo.
02:56:752 (1) - No new combo. A different colour will make player think he can take a little break here and miss it. It's belongs to the former music passage.
03:04:164 (1) - No new combo.
03:06:988 (1) - No new combo.

Hard
02:57:105 (1) - x=172,y=60
02:57:282 (2) - x=248,y=108
02:57:458 (3) - x=324,y=60
02:57:635 (4) - x=400,y=108

Insane
Nice!

I love this map as well as the anime. Hope your beatmap will be ranked soon:)

Nymph wrote:

good job :3

Sekai-nyan wrote:

BLESSS! GRATZ >w<

Atrue wrote:

Gratz~

Lanturn wrote:

someone mapped this <3

congrats

-Kirito wrote:

bless gratz...?!

kaitoshinichi wrote:

恭喜rank

ykcarrot wrote:

Congrats in advance xD

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Gratzz!! Bless!!^^