1. Advanced (4,53 stars, 244 notes)
2. Beginner (2,77 stars, 176 notes)
3. Expert (4,97 stars, 393 notes)

Lokamp wrote:

Fa venir voglia di Ridge Racer...

Beginner

[00:29:690] (3) finish alla fine dello slider Nah, è troppo forzato
[00:34:090] (2) clap qui! Spiacente, non voglio clap in questa mappa, mi ci stonano
[00:45:690] (3, 3) finish qui Troppo forzati D:
[01:00:090] (1, 2) un paio di clap qui... ^
[01:06:490] (1, 2) ... e qui!
[01:10:290] (3) qui ci starebbe bene un suono, ma non so quale... ( controlla anche 01:16:690 (3) ) mi ricorda molto i finish di prima, lo so che sembra vuoto, ma lo voglio così D:
[01:51:690] (4, 5) whistle sul 4°, finish sul 5° Aggiunto al 4
[02:28:090] (4) finish alla fine dello slider Perfetto

Expert

[00:30:090] (5) whistle qui! Non l'ho dimenticato, è fatto apposta xD
[00:36:690] (6) ... finish? non ne sono sicuro... Aggiunto al 5
[00:48:090] (1) soft finish qui (x le macchie + esigenti...) Troppo forzato D:
[02:08:690] da qui fino a 02:21:315 , inizia ogni slider senza repeat con un suono (clap o finish: scegli pure!) Già fatto, controlla bene xD

Gran bello storyboarding!

Symbolic wrote:

[Beginner]

00:37:29 (3) - New combo. Ok
01:10:89 (4) - ^ Ok
01:41:29 (2) - ^ why? O.o
01:57:29 (2) - ^ Nah, too any new combos


[Advanced]

00:38:29 (3) - Add whistle on endpoint. Ok
00:40:09 (5) - Whistle at 00:40:892. Ok
01:18:29 (3) - Whistle on endpoint. Ok
01:20:09 (5) - Whistle at 1:20:892. Ok
01:47:29 (1) - Remove new combo. No, it's okay


[Expert]

00:49:49 (2) - New combo. No, i want it that way

Nice map, it fits well with the song
Starred *

mrtn wrote:

try offset 6487 a bit too early, i think

[beginner]
no problems

[advanced]
02:09:69 (1) - remove new combo
02:10:49 (4) - add new combo here
02:11:29 (1) - remove new combo
02:16:09 (1) - ^
02:16:89 (4) - add new combo
02:17:69 (1) - remove new combo I don't like this combination of new comboes... :<
02:36:89 (1) - finish here Whoops, i forgot it xD

[expert]
no problems here

great job on the storyboard, awesome map, starred

Gabi wrote:

Possible offset: 6500 but i personally think it is alright at 6492.

[Beginner]
02:20:89 (1) - im a little worried about this one, such a small slider might be confusing ^^ Well, there's 01:07:29 (1) too, but i think it's not a big deal: the player won't break the combo even if he thinks it's a simple circle (i know he'll get a 100, but hey, players need to learn to read maps :<)
other then that perfect. theres a few combos one could argue over, but i see what you have followed so its all good thanks ^^

[Advanced]
good

[Expert]
here are some suggestions only. you dont have to change anything, the map is pretty solid itself.

00:48:09 (1) - remove new combo Changed (i don't think it's good anymore)
00:57:69 (1) - remove new combo Changed
00:59:29 (1) - remove new combo why? o.o
02:01:69 (11) - new combo Nah, it feels weird, since i didn't use new comboes that way in the whole song

02:08:09 (1) - this pattern/rythm is so epic ^^


star, and good job on SB its really cool

JarJarJacob wrote:

The eccentric usage and lack of usage of sliders is used interestingly well.

Beginner:

02:06:49 - Bad kiai. Yeah, it's weird to have it in the middle of the slider, so ok, removed.

Advanced:

01:58:09 (5) - Move right. Done
02:06:49 - Bad kiai. As "Beginner"

Expert:

02:13:69 (1) - This spinner breaks the flow of the slider streams. I'm not sure what to reccomend in its place. That's the problem >.< I wanted to break the stream but i'm still not sure if the slider is a good thing (seem really forced to clear, i know...)
02:06:49 - Bad kiai. No, i like it here, sorry