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Jin - Outer Science [Taiko]

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-FireThunder-
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-FireThunder-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 30 Mei 2015 at 21:16:01

Artist: Jin
Title: Outer Science
Tags: IA vocaloid3 vocaloid Kagerou Project Shizen no teki-P Mekakucity Records Actors
BPM: 195
Filesize: 5709kb
Play Time: 03:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2,38 stars, 382 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (4,68 stars, 1220 notes)
  3. Kantan (1,6 stars, 244 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (3,04 stars, 827 notes)
  5. Oni (3,91 stars, 1067 notes)
Download: Jin - Outer Science
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st taiko beatmap >.<
For Rank (Maybe Graved orz)
Kantan 100%
Futsuu 100%
Muzukashii 100%
Oni 100%
Inner Oni 100%
Changes mp3, redownload before 27/11/2013 (mp3 picked from tutuhaha beatmap)
Ready to mod ^^

History
2/10/2013 Upload Beatmap
10/22/2013 Add Senritsu Mod
10/27/2013 Fix All Diff Timing & Offset
11/13/2013 Add ychung97 Mod
11/17/2013 Fix Oni timing & add notes
11/27/2013 Change mp3, REDOWNLOAD!!
12/6/2013 Add CoroQuetz Mod
12/8/2013 Add lZenxl Mod
12/9/2013 Graveryarded...
2/10/2015 2 Years For This Map, and graveryarded ;w;
23/8/2015 Revival and add some fix mod & add tags
24/4/2015 Fix Star Diff for ranked
28/4/2015 Add Surono Mods
2/5/2015 Add Backfire Nice Mod
3/5/2015 Add [-MrSergio-] Mod and change image, will added Inner Oni soon
4/5/2015 Change Oni to Inner Oni, add oni diff and pause background
5/5/2015 Add jomnhnk Mod
16/5/2015 Add tasuke912, baraatje123, and Neil Leo Mods
30/5/2015 Add [ R ] Mods
Last edited by -FireThunder- , edited 71 times in total.
Kyouren
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Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Wow! Kagerou Project!

Me runs

Good luck^^
-FireThunder-
306 posts
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Topic Starter
-FireThunder-
Yeah, thx :)
Senritsu
2,197 posts
Joined October 2011
Senritsu
First~
Indo aja yah ww
sementara kumod secara luas dulu, ntar mod aslinya (?) nyusul deh~

[General]
Title : アウターサイエンス
Add tag Mekakucity Records, itu nama albumnya XD
Menurut ini, sourcenya Jin, artistnya IA
BPM : 195,00
Offset : 810
Preview point = 00:59:886

[Kantan]
Pake beat snap divisor 1/1, soalnya red tick ngga direkomendasiin di kantan uwu
resnap notes sama green linenya + hapus beberapa notes. soalnya kebanyakan buat kantan, kaya 00:30:964 (2,6,10) -
kalo aku sih, slidernya kuhapus, soalnya susah buat kantan >3>
masalah bpm diperlambat.. idk dibolein apa ndak di kantan, tapi imo ngga perlu itu~
SVnya 1.00x aja~

[Futsuu]
resnap semua juga
beat snap divisor 1/2~
kalo di sini, red tick dibolein walo ga sering".. cthnya 00:34:656 (12) - pindah aja ke 00:34:502, terus hapus 00:34:348 (11) - ~
ngikutin gitarnya ngga apa imo, juga lebih cocok gitu xD
slider + bpm sama kaya kantan :3

[Muzukashii]
ada green line nyasar di 00:10:076 o3o
resnap
00:32:178 (10) - del, ngikutin vokal yang berenti di sana
00:33:579 (17) - pindah ke 00:33:733
00:34:348 (20) - d?
00:45:117 (59) - k?
00:51:424 (79) - ^
nanti kulanjutin kalo udah disnap~

[Oni]
kebanyakan space kosong.. kalo ngga bisa ngikutin vokalnya, ikutin aja instrumennya :)
diusahain kalo bisa ndak ada break uwu;
tapi jangan sampe overmap~ XD
Oninya kurang stream, kalo bisa pake triplet aja, di awal itu kaya muzukashii banget
and snap~

That's all~
Will recheck after you do them~
Kyouren
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Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Senritsu, kayaknya Nama Vocaloid semua (seperti Hatsune Miku) itu di tag-in
kayaknya Orang Amerika semua bilang kompisisi kayak Jin itu di jadikan artist
dan IA di tag
Senritsu
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Joined October 2011
Senritsu
aku bilang menurut ini > https://osu.ppy.sh/s/37638 sih Jin di source, dan ndk ada yang protes soal itu imo
tapi gw cuma kasi saran sih, gw juga ngga pinter dalem beginian..
map itu gw ambil buat referensi, dan kalo gw salah, ya maaf~ :D
Kyouren
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Kyouren

Senritsu wrote:

aku bilang menurut ini > https://osu.ppy.sh/s/37638 sih Jin di source, dan ndk ada yang protes soal itu imo
tapi gw cuma kasi saran sih, gw juga ngga pinter dalem beginian..
map itu gw ambil buat referensi, dan kalo gw salah, ya maaf~ :D
Wkwkwkwkkk (bikin aku tertawa aja), Itu sih mapnya lama sebelum ada peraturan di ubah nama Vocaloid (seperti Hatsune Miku) menjadi Jin (punya IA)
Senritsu
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Joined October 2011
Senritsu
gawd.. tolong ya maklumin
gw baru dateng mapping berapa minggu, dan sebelumnya gw ga pernah ngurusin ginian
but yeah, baguslah lo tertawa di atas kesalahan orang lain :)
-FireThunder-
306 posts
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Topic Starter
-FireThunder-

Senritsu wrote:

First~
Indo aja yah ww
sementara kumod secara luas dulu, ntar mod aslinya (?) nyusul deh~

[General]
Title : アウターサイエンス
Add tag Mekakucity Records, itu nama albumnya XD
Menurut ini, sourcenya Jin, artistnya IA sorry, tapi gabisa karena sesuai dengan thread ini dan ini nanti dianggap tak menghormati composernya yang membuat lagu dan vocalnya gitu :D
BPM : 195,00
Offset : 810 done
Preview point = 00:59:886 done

[Kantan]
Pake beat snap divisor 1/1, soalnya red tick ngga direkomendasiin di kantan uwu kalo snap divisornya 1/1 banyak yang ga pas dengan lagunya TwT
resnap notes sama green linenya + hapus beberapa notes. soalnya kebanyakan buat kantan, kaya 00:30:964 (2,6,10) -
kalo aku sih, slidernya kuhapus, soalnya susah buat kantan >3>
masalah bpm diperlambat.. idk dibolein apa ndak di kantan, tapi imo ngga perlu itu~
SVnya 1.00x aja~ done

[Futsuu]
resnap semua juga
beat snap divisor 1/2~ done
kalo di sini, red tick dibolein walo ga sering".. cthnya 00:34:656 (12) - pindah aja ke 00:34:502, terus hapus 00:34:348 (11) - ~
ngikutin gitarnya ngga apa imo, juga lebih cocok gitu xD
slider + bpm sama kaya kantan :3 done

[Muzukashii]
ada green line nyasar di 00:10:076 o3o
resnap
00:32:178 (10) - del, ngikutin vokal yang berenti di sana done
00:33:579 (17) - pindah ke 00:33:733 done
00:34:348 (20) - d? done
00:45:117 (59) - k? done
00:51:424 (79) - ^ done
nanti kulanjutin kalo udah disnap~

[Oni]
kebanyakan space kosong.. kalo ngga bisa ngikutin vokalnya, ikutin aja instrumennya :) done, tapi malahan susah kalo ngikutin instrumennya xD
diusahain kalo bisa ndak ada break uwu;
tapi jangan sampe overmap~ XD
Oninya kurang stream, kalo bisa pake triplet aja, di awal itu kaya muzukashii banget
and snap~

That's all~
Will recheck after you do them~
Sip makasih modnya :D
dan snap juga telah diperbaiki
btw buat kantannya slidernya diganti spinner gpp kan?
Kyouren
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Kyouren
Senritsu, Aku juga sama sepertimu
Tertawa karena kamu lucu sekali
Senritsu
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Senritsu
slider diganti spinner bolehlah~
kantan kok 1/1 bisa ga pas? gw coba pas kok..
Kyouren
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Kyouren
Aku dalam pembuatan taiko map atau diff

Biasanya menggunakan 1/1, 1/2, dan 1/4

Menurut aku bagusnya menggunakan snap 1/1 ( karena kantan diff)
-FireThunder-
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Topic Starter
-FireThunder-

Senritsu wrote:

slider diganti spinner bolehlah~
kantan kok 1/1 bisa ga pas? gw coba pas kok..
yaudah saya coba dulu deh remap @__@
Senritsu
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Joined October 2011
Senritsu
offsetnya udah kamu updatekah soalnya di sini masih 0.. uwu;;

nvmnvm. seems bug eue
-FireThunder-
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-FireThunder-
Eh iya hampir lupa .__.
ychung97
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ychung97
and...i feel much shamed when i saw this map
quite well done, really =D
perhaps i will help mod later (say....Tuesday? or tonight? idk)
-FireThunder-
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-FireThunder-

ychung97 wrote:

and...i feel much shamed when i saw this map
quite well done, really =D
perhaps i will help mod later (say....Tuesday? or tonight? idk)
Ok, thanks
but im fix the offset first :3
Edit: I done fix it :3
ychung97
131 posts
Joined December 2012
ychung97
I know I've promised this a long time ago....
Sorry, really sorry

Format
SPOILER
o - don O - big don
x - kat X - big kat
^ - add
# - relatively minor/subjective

Sometimes i might use screenshots
all of my mods are radical personal comment with bias and prejudice
sorry =(

Kantan
SPOILER
nothing to say.......quite good
but you may consider adding more pattern instead of constant 1/4 beats in chorus

Futsuu
SPOILER
01:03:425 (18,19,20) - O X O (#)
01:04:502 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - can be a little harder here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096700 (#)
01:18:656 (55,56,57,58) - x x oo O (#) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096716

02:10:040 (36,37,38) - x o x
02:48:040 (21,22,23,24,25) - o ox o x O http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096719

Muzukashii
SPOILER
00:42:041 (46) - perhaps you would consider delete this? (#)
00:52:271 (83,84) - Please snap this
00:56:886 (99,100,101) - Please snap this

(1st chorus)
01:02:655 (122,123,124,125) - x o o o (#)
01:06:041 (137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144) - o x x o o o o x (#)
01:07:579 (145,146,147,148) - perhaps it would be better to start with x here, e.g. x x x o
01:10:041 (156,157,158,159) - o o x o (#)
01:11:733 (162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169) - o x x o x o o o (#)
01:15:886 - ^x (it would make the map a little bit harder)
01:18:502 (193,194,195,196,197) - arr....this one http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096614 = X X Xo (#)

01:32:194 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - i guess it would be better to make it a 3-6 here, or sth like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096582
01:41:117 (45) - perhaps you would consider delete this? (#)
01:41:810 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - Please snap this, and concerning the pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096637 (#)
01:49:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Please snap this

(2nd chorus)
similar to 1st chorus
02:01:733 (51,52,53,54) - x o o o (#)
02:05:118 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73) - o x x o o o o x (#)
02:06:656 (74,75,76,77) - x x x o (#)
02:10:810 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100) - o x x o x o o o (#)
02:15:118 (112,113,114) - o x o (#)
02:18:733 (127) - Please snap this

02:43:117 (17,18,19) - o o x (small don/kat should be used here for coherence)

(3rd chorus)
similar things.....so i won't copy and paste again, except
02:57:886 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096691 (#)
02:59:425 (91) - you might delete it

no problem except snapping, i am only giving 'feeling' instead of real modding (so you could simply ignore them)
very, very good =D

And i couldn't mod oni.....far beyond my ability
if you still find my radical 'mod' fine perhaps i could go through it and give some even more radical mod =(
-FireThunder-
306 posts
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Topic Starter
-FireThunder-

ychung97 wrote:

I know I've promised this a long time ago....
Sorry, really sorry

Format
SPOILER
o - don O - big don
x - kat X - big kat
^ - add
# - relatively minor/subjective

Sometimes i might use screenshots
all of my mods are radical personal comment with bias and prejudice
sorry =(

Kantan
SPOILER
nothing to say.......quite good
but you may consider adding more pattern instead of constant 1/4 beats in chorus Ok, nothing changed for kantan for now. Im dizzy make a nice chorus in there @__@

Futsuu
SPOILER
01:03:425 (18,19,20) - O X O (#)sorry, i wanna make a something different than other xD
01:04:502 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - can be a little harder here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096700 (#)done
01:18:656 (55,56,57,58) - x x oo O (#) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096716 done, but im change it X X oo X

02:10:040 (36,37,38) - x o x done
02:48:040 (21,22,23,24,25) - o ox o x O http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096719 done

Muzukashii
SPOILER
00:42:041 (46) - perhaps you would consider delete this? (#) done, nice idea xD
00:52:271 (83,84) - Please snap this done
00:56:886 (99,100,101) - Please snap this done

(1st chorus)
01:02:655 (122,123,124,125) - x o o o (#) sorry, im following the singer
01:06:041 (137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144) - o x x o o o o x (#)done
01:07:579 (145,146,147,148) - perhaps it would be better to start with x here, e.g. x x x o done :3
01:10:041 (156,157,158,159) - o o x o (#)done
01:11:733 (162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169) - o x x o x o o o (#)done, but i change it to
01:15:886 - ^x (it would make the map a little bit harder) done
01:18:502 (193,194,195,196,197) - arr....this one http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096614 = X X Xo (#)done :3

01:32:194 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - i guess it would be better to make it a 3-6 here, or sth like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096582 done
01:41:117 (45) - perhaps you would consider delete this? (#) done
01:41:810 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - Please snap this, and concerning the pattern (#)http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096637 done
01:49:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Please snap this done @__@

(2nd chorus)
similar to 1st chorus
02:01:733 (51,52,53,54) - x o o o (#) done :3
02:05:118 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73) - o x x o o o o x (#)done, but im change it to o x x o o x o o
02:06:656 (74,75,76,77) - x x x o (#)done
02:10:810 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100) - o x x o x o o o (#)done, but i change it to o x x o o x o o
02:15:118 (112,113,114) - o x o (#)done
02:18:733 (127) - Please snap this done

02:43:117 (17,18,19) - o o x (small don/kat should be used here for coherence) ok, done. In think O O X is good for hitsound xD

(3rd chorus)
similar things.....so i won't copy and paste again, except
02:57:886 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096691 (#)done
02:59:425 (91) - you might delete it done

no problem except snapping, i am only giving 'feeling' instead of real modding (so you could simply ignore them)
very, very good =D

And i couldn't mod oni.....far beyond my ability
if you still find my radical 'mod' fine perhaps i could go through it and give some even more radical mod =(
Thanks for your mod :D
I quite helped :3
Kyouren
5,658 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Hai lagi

Bisakan mp3nya diubah?

Soalnya agak kecil volumenya

Pakai yang versi Gloria Guard - http://osu.ppy.sh/s/125825 atau tutuhaha - http://osu.ppy.sh/s/122376
-FireThunder-
306 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
-FireThunder-

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Hai lagi

Bisakan mp3nya diubah?

Soalnya agak kecil volumenya

Pakai yang versi Gloria Guard - http://osu.ppy.sh/s/125825 atau tutuhaha - http://osu.ppy.sh/s/122376
Daridulu aku rencana ganti mp3, cuman males remapnya
soalnya durasinya beda @__@

aku 3:30:696 tapi si tutuhaha/gloria guard 3:36:476
walau jeda 1,200 detik-an aku masi susah cari offsetnya

dan terakhir, emang pas buat taiko hehe

EDIT: Ok done! udah dapet offset yang pas :3
mingmichael
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Joined May 2012
mingmichael

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Hai lagi

Bisakan mp3nya diubah?

Soalnya agak kecil volumenya

Pakai yang versi Gloria Guard - http://osu.ppy.sh/s/125825 atau tutuhaha - http://osu.ppy.sh/s/122376
elehh enak bener tinggal make doank ye =_= ngizin dulu sama pemiliknya dan dimasukin ke creator's word buat kasih tau minjem dari siapa. dipikir bisa ngambil2 gitu aja apa? loll

btw, firethunder, modnya sampe beberapa saat lagi yo o/ sorry keundur terus juga orz
dan juga nanti kayaknya IRC mod deh, soalnya gua ga gitu banyak waktu dan masih ada 6mod request belom slese
Coro
2,394 posts
Joined September 2010
Coro
Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[General]
I think you should use uniform volume since it's a bit hard to hear at some points.

[Kantan]
nothing~

[Futsuu]
nothing~

[Muzukashii]
00:40:805 (49) - d?
00:45:344 (70) - move to 00:45:420
01:44:421 (70) - move to 01:44:497

[Oni]
nothing~
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening
Dat bass

From Zenx's Mod Queue

You can ignore some of my mods if it's not fitting for you since some of my mods here will greatly impact your map

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems

BPM

No Problems

Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:30:959 to 00:50:574

"-" represents nothing
In 1/2, the rhythm for one bar goes
(bass) - (snare) - - (bass) (snare) -
Since bass is lower pitched than snare, I suggest you go for a solid ( don - kat - - don kat - ) pattern, this will make that section nice and fitting to the music
- You can add more notes to increase the difficulty to Oni later
- Same goes for the other parts of the song which has this bass snare pattern
- You can just replace don with kat or kat with don if there's an overlap, you do not need to leave the hyphened part blank

I noticed you are following the vocals, I suggest you not to follow them since they are the melody of the song, taiko is for percussion mapping due to the lack of varying hitsounds, try to create a rhythm to fit the melody instead of mapping to it

01:35:959 (42) - Awkward placement of kat - Kat rhythm is weird here
01:38:267 (63) - Same here - Double kat rhythm here is wierd
01:44:036 (111,113) - Swap these, the finish here sounds too early
01:57:266 to 01:58:959 - Map to the reverb bass

I feel that you can map towards the end of the music, since there is still a rhythm going (up to you)

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

Muzu
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:40:344 (46,47,48) - Amazingly fitting, good hit-sounds here
01:09:574 - Add 2 kats here 1/2 spacing
01:13:728 - + kat here
01:39:421 (47,48,49) - Amazingly fitting hit-sounds again

Pretty much the same problem as Oni, some dons should be kat and some kats should be don according to the pitch of the Loudest sound in the music

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

You would need to add more triplets for this to be muzu

Same problems for kantan and futsuu, you will need to modify the hitsounds, addition or removal of notes may not be needed.

Good luck !
Kyouren
5,658 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren

mingmichael wrote:

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Hai lagi

Bisakan mp3nya diubah?

Soalnya agak kecil volumenya

Pakai yang versi Gloria Guard - http://osu.ppy.sh/s/125825 atau tutuhaha - http://osu.ppy.sh/s/122376
elehh enak bener tinggal make doank ye =_= ngizin dulu sama pemiliknya dan dimasukin ke creator's word buat kasih tau minjem dari siapa. dipikir bisa ngambil2 gitu aja apa? loll
Ya tergantung anda^^
Surono
7,196 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
oi ni dicoba mz xD
<(``)
[Kantan]
01:27:882 (46) - ini pindah ke 01:28:036 (46) -
01:28:497 (47) - pindah ke 01:28:651 (47) -

[Futsuu]
00:50:036 (22) - pindah ke 00:49:882 (22) -
01:00:805 (14,15) - k d
01:03:266 (21) - k
01:05:728 (28,29) - dk
01:06:959 (32,33) - kd
01:10:343 (41) - K
01:20:805 (67) - k
01:23:267 (72) - k
01:37:728 (20) - k
01:56:497 (3) - k
02:03:113 (18) - d
02:09:421 (34) - K

[Muzukashii]
Udah apik kwkwkwk

[Oni]
yang diff ini aku test bnyk pattern yg susah xD soalnya BPM cukup tinggi xD
00:19:729 (58) - d
00:23:267 (85) - d
00:24:805 (98,99,100,101,102) - kkddk
00:29:728 (138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148) - k kkddk dkkkd
00:54:036 (309,310,311,312,313) - ddkdk
00:57:882 (331) - k
00:58:190 (332,333,334,335,336,337) - Dd Kk Kk
01:03:652 (365) - d
01:05:266 (374) - k
01:08:959 (397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408) - d k ddd k ddk d k K
01:15:421 (437,438,439,440,441) - kkddk
01:17:575 (454) - d
01:18:497 (462) - d
01:19:882 (472) - k
01:20:497 (475,476,477,478,479) - d k ddk
01:21:574 (481) - k
01:22:190 (485) - k
01:23:266 (492,493,494) - kdk
01:24:036 (496) - k
01:26:497 (512) - k
01:26:959 (514,515,516,517,518,519) - ddk kdk
01:38:651 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78) - kddk dk d kd kkdk
01:47:266 (133,134,135) - ddk
01:52:959 (167,168,169,170,171,172) - d d k ddk
01:55:421 (182) - k
01:56:804 (192) - k
01:57:266 (195,196,197) - sama kek di durasi ini 00:58:190 (332,333,334,335,336,337) -
02:04:343 (233) - k
02:08:651 (262) - d
02:16:651 (312) - d
02:17:574 (320) - d
02:21:420 (344) - d
02:29:420 (4) - k
02:29:882 (9) - k
02:32:805 (32) - d
02:33:574 (38) - d
02:33:882 (41) - d
02:36:497 (64) - d
02:36:959 (67,68,69) - kdk
02:49:266 (146) - d
03:00:575 (225) - remove d
03:06:960 (265) - d
03:07:882 (273) - d
03:09:114 (286) - d
03:09:882 (294) - d
03:10:190 (296,297,298) - ddk
03:11:728 (305,306,307) - ddk

barokah bazokah saya mz~ saya modder cecede wwwww.. semoga membantu~ *kalau bingung, pm atau irc aja~
-FireThunder-
306 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
-FireThunder-

Surono wrote:

oi ni dicoba mz xD Gan saya cwe :P
<(``)
[Kantan]
01:27:882 (46) - ini pindah ke 01:28:036 (46) -
01:28:497 (47) - pindah ke 01:28:651 (47) -
sry harus pertahanin beatmap divisior 1 /1

[Futsuu]
00:50:036 (22) - pindah ke 00:49:882 (22) - Done
01:00:805 (14,15) - k d Done
01:03:266 (21) - k Done
01:05:728 (28,29) - dk Done
01:06:959 (32,33) - kd Done
01:10:343 (41) - K Done
01:20:805 (67) - k Done
01:23:267 (72) - k Done
01:37:728 (20) - k Done
01:56:497 (3) - k Done
02:03:113 (18) - d Done
02:09:421 (34) - K Done

[Muzukashii]
Udah apik kwkwkwk

[Oni]
yang diff ini aku test bnyk pattern yg susah xD soalnya BPM cukup tinggi xD
00:19:729 (58) - d Done
00:23:267 (85) - d Done
00:24:805 (98,99,100,101,102) - kkddk Done
00:29:728 (138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148) - k kkddk dkkkd Done
00:54:036 (309,310,311,312,313) - ddkdk Done
00:57:882 (331) - k Done
00:58:190 (332,333,334,335,336,337) - Dd Kk Kk Done
01:03:652 (365) - d Done
01:05:266 (374) - k Done
01:08:959 (397,398,399,400,401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408) - d k ddd k ddk d k K Done
01:15:421 (437,438,439,440,441) - kkddk Done
01:17:575 (454) - d Done
01:18:497 (462) - d Done
01:19:882 (472) - k Done
01:20:497 (475,476,477,478,479) - d k ddk Done
01:21:574 (481) - k Done
01:22:190 (485) - k Done
01:23:266 (492,493,494) - kdk Done
01:24:036 (496) - k Done
01:26:497 (512) - k Done
01:26:959 (514,515,516,517,518,519) - ddk kdk Done
01:38:651 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78) - kddk dk d kd kkdk Done
01:47:266 (133,134,135) - ddk Done
01:52:959 (167,168,169,170,171,172) - d d k ddk Done
01:55:421 (182) - k Done
01:56:804 (192) - k Done
01:57:266 (195,196,197) - sama kek di durasi ini 00:58:190 (332,333,334,335,336,337) - Done
02:04:343 (233) - k Done
02:08:651 (262) - d Done
02:16:651 (312) - d Done
02:17:574 (320) - d Done
02:21:420 (344) - d Done
02:29:420 (4) - k Done
02:29:882 (9) - k Done
02:32:805 (32) - d Done
02:33:574 (38) - d Done
02:33:882 (41) - d Done
02:36:497 (64) - d Done
02:36:959 (67,68,69) - kdk Done
02:49:266 (146) - d Done
03:00:575 (225) - remove d Done
03:06:960 (265) - d Done
03:07:882 (273) - d Done
03:09:114 (286) - d Done
03:09:882 (294) - d Done
03:10:190 (296,297,298) - ddk Done
03:11:728 (305,306,307) - ddk Done

barokah bazokah saya mz~ saya modder cecede wwwww.. semoga membantu~ *kalau bingung, pm atau irc aja~
cecede gapapa, yang penting teliti itu aku suka xD
nanti lama" pro kok :D
Surono
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Surono
ampun mbk ampun... ternyata seorang wanita~
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-FireThunder-
306 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
-FireThunder-
cocok semua sih .w.
salut btw
Surono
7,196 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
tapi itu masih banyak sih yg susah2~ ya nunggu/cari aja modder yg lain yang bisa ngefeel bpm segini~
kalau bisa tu SVnya duhh deee~ terlalu spontan2.. di ubah manusiawi mbak xD susah bagiku~
eh ga deng, akunya yg males kwkwkw~, tapi ada dikit yg agak bkin jari licin xD

[Oni]
01:57:266 (195,196,197,198,199,200) - ini mbak di fix, malah jadi strim kwkwk~
Kyouren
5,658 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Because i can't mod your map and not have a star, you get a ticket
Free ask me when i close my queue :>
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-FireThunder-
306 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
-FireThunder-
^akhirnya /o/

Surono wrote:

tapi itu masih banyak sih yg susah2~ ya nunggu/cari aja modder yg lain yang bisa ngefeel bpm segini~
kalau bisa tu SVnya duhh deee~ terlalu spontan2.. di ubah manusiawi mbak xD susah bagiku~
eh ga deng, akunya yg males kwkwkw~, tapi ada dikit yg agak bkin jari licin xD

[Oni]
01:57:266 (195,196,197,198,199,200) - ini mbak di fix, malah jadi strim kwkwk~
kata pak juki harus bisa tampil beda 8)
Pemanis (?)
makanya bikin map SVnya greget kek gitu hue
Surono
7,196 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
pattern kdd yg mbak teliti, soalnyah bnyk yg mbelit wwwww
Backfire
3,204 posts
Joined February 2010
Backfire
Oni -
00:25:728 (106,107) - Perhaps ctrl+G? The little snappy sound on 106 works better with kat than don.
00:33:266 - Move this here 00:33:113 - . It is awkward in the position it is at now, it works better if you just use it to follow the drums, not the vocals.
00:42:959 - However in this situation, I would fill it in with a don. It fits the intensity better.
01:05:113 - Kat, then 01:05:113 - ctrl+g on this? the pattern plays a little better like this.
01:10:036 - Make this a 5-plet of your choosing, since it fits the drums you were following earlier in this section
01:39:497 - move this here 01:39:574 - , it's silly as a double, it is better to just make it a 5 plet.
01:53:036 - k?
02:09:190 - Add a don?
02:20:959 - ddkkddkkddk, the combo you have right now is weird and does not fit, either.
02:38:343 - ddkdkdkdd, would be a better combo here, personally.
02:39:805 - move this to here 02:39:882 - , the sound ends here and how you have it originally does not fit.
02:42:421 (104,105) - Remove 02:43:190 (108,110) - remove 02:46:113 - remove 02:47:343 (130,135) - remove. All of these are overmapping in this quite calm part.

Muzu -
00:25:651 - move to 00:25:728 -
00:57:113 - move to 00:57:266 - and 00:57:497 (27,28,29) - to 00:57:574 - I see you were confused as to where to put these, or rather, perhaps it was just a mistake.

Futsuu -
00:44:497 - I think this plays better as a don
00:48:190 - Same here
I don't like the over-use of spinners.
01:13:113 - This might be good as a kat?
01:15:574 - This as well.
01:49:113 - Maybe move this to 01:48:959 - and make it a kat?
02:04:805 - This would give some variety if you'd make it a kat.
02:26:344 (70) - Make this a don like your previous pattern with the same sounds here 02:21:113 -
02:29:266 - Delete :/
02:42:959 - Kat?
03:10:036 - ^

Kantan -
00:48:190 (13) - don? It seems more appropriate.
Same as futsuu, I dont care for the spinners.
01:13:420 - Don? I don't like it as a kat.
02:17:421 (30) - Kat perhaps?
03:12:190 - Maybe don instead of kat

I think the muzu was your best diff, futsuu and oni need some more work. Good luck :)
-FireThunder-
306 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
-FireThunder-

Backfire wrote:

Oni -
00:25:728 (106,107) - Perhaps ctrl+G? The little snappy sound on 106 works better with kat than don. Done. For me, don better than kat o.O
00:33:266 - Move this here 00:33:113 - . It is awkward in the position it is at now, it works better if you just use it to follow the drums, not the vocals. Done
00:42:959 - However in this situation, I would fill it in with a don. It fits the intensity better. Done, but just moved :3
01:05:113 - Kat, then 01:05:113 - ctrl+g on this? the pattern plays a little better like this. Done
01:10:036 - Make this a 5-plet of your choosing, since it fits the drums you were following earlier in this sectionddkdK? it's a make it harder to pass? ._. Oh u mean ddkdk? kay i fix it :3
01:39:497 - move this here 01:39:574 - , it's silly as a double, it is better to just make it a 5 plet. Done
01:53:036 - k? Done
02:09:190 - Add a don? Done
02:20:959 - ddkkddkkddk, the combo you have right now is weird and does not fit, either. Done
02:38:343 - ddkdkdkdd, would be a better combo here, personally. Done
02:39:805 - move this to here 02:39:882 - , the sound ends here and how you have it originally does not fit. Done
02:42:421 (104,105) - Remove 02:43:190 (108,110) - remove 02:46:113 - remove 02:47:343 (130,135) - remove. All of these are overmapping in this quite calm part. Aww Quite better in this xD

Muzu -
00:25:651 - move to 00:25:728 - Done
00:57:113 - move to 00:57:266 - and 00:57:497 (27,28,29) - to 00:57:574 - I see you were confused as to where to put these, or rather, perhaps it was just a mistake.Done ehehehe...

Futsuu -
00:44:497 - I think this plays better as a don Done
00:48:190 - Same here Done
I don't like the over-use of spinners. Done, because in there is spinner and i so dizzy to give a some note :3
01:13:113 - This might be good as a kat? Done
01:15:574 - This as well. Done
01:49:113 - Maybe move this to 01:48:959 - and make it a kat? Done
02:04:805 - This would give some variety if you'd make it a kat. Done
02:26:344 (70) - Make this a don like your previous pattern with the same sounds here 02:21:113 - Done
02:29:266 - Delete :/ Done
02:42:959 - Kat? Done
03:10:036 - ^ Done

Kantan -
00:48:190 (13) - don? It seems more appropriate. Yeah , Bon apetite <3 #slap
Same as futsuu, I dont care for the spinners. Done
01:13:420 - Don? I don't like it as a kat. Done
02:17:421 (30) - Kat perhaps? Done
03:12:190 - Maybe don instead of kat Done

I think the muzu was your best diff, futsuu and oni need some more work. Good luck :)
Yeah nice mod >w<
Seijiro
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Seijiro

Yo~ Here I am for the mod we talked in #modreqs :3

~ Legend ~

  1. Black = Just a suggestion, feel free to refuse
  2. Blue = Highly recommended suggestion. You need a strong reason to refuse this
  3. Red = Unrankable. You MUST fix this
Please reply with:
  1. Green = Fixed
  2. Red = Didn't fix
  3. Orange = Fixed part of the suggestion

[General]
  1. I'm a bit worried about the diff spread :/ You have 1.6 > +0.8 > +0.7 > +1.4. So here's my suggestion: you should change the name of your Oni in Inner Oni and add a new easier Oni to balance your mapset. Seeing your gaps a 3.85~ Oni should suffice this problem
  2. You backroung image is 1000x707. This isn't really a problem, but it would be better to have it of 1024x768 or 1366x768(widerscreen). Since the widescreen resolution was bad imo, I did a 1024x758 resizing of it: http://puu.sh/hywgF/fcf9f74c11.jpg
    (I don't know if it matters for Taiko, but since this was in the general RC I guess it applies for all game modes)

[Oni]
Little note: I'm not that good with taiko yet so I won't be able to point out finicky aspects on the higher diffs like Onis
  1. 00:50:575 (296) - This slider shouldn't start at 00:50:651 - ? Also, I'd like to fix that slow down, since it's a bit too much imo: 00:50:574 - raise this timing section to x0.90 and add another one at 00:51:420 - , x0.75. This way the slow down is more "soft". Actually, you could even remove the first timing section and leave only the second. See what you like the most
  2. 02:02:651 (228) - Maybe turn it into a d?
  3. 02:26:037 (375) - Add a d?
  4. 02:39:343 - I'd add 2 notes at 02:39:343 - and at 02:39:420 - . Maybe a d and a k?
Damn, Backfire didn't leave anything to point out lol *runs*

[Muzukashii]
  1. Your Muzukashii diff is the only one in your mapset having 00:10:036 - 00:10:805 - mapped. Those 1/3 notes are really bad imo. They will just make players to rage on it. I think you should delete those 3 notes
  2. I'd increase the slider velocity for your slow parts by 0.10 because some short parts will just be a bother while playing them because they're too low
  3. 00:50:574 (1,11) - Should these sliders be moved 1/4 later?
  4. 01:33:267 (16,17,18) - This is the only triplet in all your diff xD Maybe remove the second note...

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:59:882 (9,10,11,12,13) - Isn't this part too dense? I'd remove second and fourth note just to keep it more understandable
  2. 02:34:959 (14) - I'd remove this one because you have the previous part less dense than this and it doesn't sounds needed on a Futsuu tbh...
  3. The last part is a bit "off" imo:
    1. 03:11:574 (78) - Move it 1/2 earlier
    2. 03:12:190 (79) - Move it 1/1 earlier
    3. 03:11:728 - Add a d

[Kantan]
[list][*]I couldn't find anything]/list]

Overall this mapset is really good, beside that thing I mentioned in the general section regarding your difficulty spread.
Also, sorry for the short mod which probably won't help much or even at all, but I'm not really good with taiko yet :/

Good luck with your mapset :3
-FireThunder-
306 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
-FireThunder-

[-MrSergio-] wrote:


Yo~ Here I am for the mod we talked in #modreqs :3

~ Legend ~

  1. Black = Just a suggestion, feel free to refuse
  2. Blue = Highly recommended suggestion. You need a strong reason to refuse this
  3. Red = Unrankable. You MUST fix this
Please reply with:
  1. Green = Fixed
  2. Red = Didn't fix
  3. Orange = Fixed part of the suggestion

[General]
  1. I'm a bit worried about the diff spread :/ You have 1.6 > +0.8 > +0.7 > +1.4. So here's my suggestion: you should change the name of your Oni in Inner Oni and add a new easier Oni to balance your mapset. Seeing your gaps a 3.85~ Oni should suffice this problem
    Ok its better than i delete some notes ;w;
  2. You backroung image is 1000x707. This isn't really a problem, but it would be better to have it of 1024x768 or 1366x768(widerscreen). Since the widescreen resolution was bad imo, I did a 1024x758 resizing of it: http://puu.sh/hywgF/fcf9f74c11.jpg
    Better i change the art?
    (I don't know if it matters for Taiko, but since this was in the general RC I guess it applies for all game modes)

[Oni]
Little note: I'm not that good with taiko yet so I won't be able to point out finicky aspects on the higher diffs like Onis
  1. 00:50:575 (296) - This slider shouldn't start at 00:50:651 - ?Done it owob
    Also, I'd like to fix that slow down, since it's a bit too much imo: 00:50:574 - raise this timing section to x0.90 and add another one at 00:51:420 - , x0.75. This way the slow down is more "soft". Actually, you could even remove the first timing section and leave only the second. See what you like the most Sry i cant do it bcause it make it some risk for this "Inner" Oni
  2. 02:02:651 (228) - Maybe turn it into a d?No, no suits the instrument
  3. 02:26:037 (375) - Add a d? no, bcause not lik suits the instrument :<
  4. 02:39:343 - I'd add 2 notes at 02:39:343 - and at 02:39:420 - . Maybe a d and a k?

Whoa nice idea owob

Damn, Backfire didn't leave anything to point out lol *runs*

[Muzukashii]
  1. Your Muzukashii diff is the only one in your mapset having 00:10:036 - 00:10:805 - mapped. Hwahahaha bcause kantan and futsuu its bad if i filled that notes *evil grin
    Those 1/3 notes are really bad imo. They will just make players to rage on it. I think you should delete those 3 notes ]Done it owob
  2. I'd increase the slider velocity for your slow parts by 0.10 because some short parts will just be a bother while playing them because they're too low No, i wanna keep that SV for consistency other map
  3. 00:50:574 (1,11) - Should these sliders be moved 1/4 later?No :>
  4. 01:33:267 (16,17,18) - This is the only triplet in all your diff xD Maybe remove the second note...
I wanna trolling who plays this Muzu not just triplets, but if it do ok i deleted it xD

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:59:882 (9,10,11,12,13) - Isn't this part too dense? I'd remove second and fourth note just to keep it more understandable ]Done
  2. 02:34:959 (14) - I'd remove this one because you have the previous part less dense than this and it doesn't sounds needed on a Futsuu tbh... ]Done
  3. The last part is a bit "off" imo:
    1. 03:11:574 (78) - Move it 1/2 earlier]I move it but just 1/1 because its nice in my ears :3
    2. 03:12:190 (79) - Move it 1/1 earlier Done it owob
    3. 03:11:728 - Add a d Sry i dennied it because for constitentcy all map , it stop in 03:12:190

[Kantan]
[list][*]I couldn't find anything]/list]

Overall this mapset is really good, beside that thing I mentioned in the general section regarding your difficulty spread. Thank you /o/
Also, sorry for the short mod which probably won't help much or even at all, but I'm not really good with taiko yet :/

Good luck with your mapset :3
purple = just commend xD
jomnhnk
276 posts
Joined March 2010
jomnhnk
Hi~ :) Taiko Mod.
[Kantan]
01:04:805 (8) - del
01:12:190 (20) - k
01:14:651 (24) - del
01:21:421 (35) - del
01:23:882 (38) - del
01:25:113 (39) - d
01:27:574 (43) - change d
and
01:28:805 (45) - move to 01:28:651 (45) -
02:03:882 (8) - del
02:10:651 (19) - d
02:11:267 (20) - k
02:13:113 (23) - k?
02:13:728 (24) - del
02:33:421 (9) - k
02:34:036 (10) - d
02:45:113 (9,10,11,12) - ...strange

[Muzukashii]
00:25:728 (81) - K
00:45:266 (70) - add d and 00:45:420 (71) - change k
00:45:728 (72) - d?
00:50:574 (1) - timing 00:50:651 (1) -
00:52:882 (10,11) - Must fix move to 00:52:959 (10,11) -
01:28:497 (163) - del
01:28:651 (164) - D
01:28:959 (1) - del
02:28:805 (1) - K

[Oni]
00:25:421 (91) - d
01:20:036 (412) - add d
01:37:574 (50) - add notes
02:33:728 (35,36,37,38) - ??

Add　5 or more consecutive notes
ex.ddkkd kkddk dkkdk kddkd ddddkkkk ddkkddkk kddkddk.....

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jomnhnk
276 posts
Joined March 2010
jomnhnk
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-FireThunder-
306 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
-FireThunder-

jomnhnk wrote:

Hi~ :) Taiko Mod.
[Kantan]
01:04:805 (8) - del[/color
01:12:190 (20) - k No, i keep this
01:14:651 (24) - del Done /o/
01:21:421 (35) - del No, but i change it to k
01:23:882 (38) - del No, i keep this
01:25:113 (39) - d Done /o/
01:27:574 (43) - change d No, i keep this
and
01:28:805 (45) - move to 01:28:651 (45) - Done
02:03:882 (8) - del Done /o/
02:10:651 (19) - d No, i keep to k
02:11:267 (20) - k No
02:13:113 (23) - k? No suits with song
02:13:728 (24) - del No
02:33:421 (9) - k No
02:34:036 (10) - d No
02:45:113 (9,10,11,12) - ...strange It's not kinda strange for me D:

[Muzukashii]
00:25:728 (81) - K No
00:45:266 (70) - add d and 00:45:420 (71) - change k
00:45:728 (72) - d? No
00:50:574 (1) - timing 00:50:651 (1) - Done
00:52:882 (10,11) - Must fix move to 00:52:959 (10,11) - Done
01:28:497 (163) - del Done
01:28:651 (164) - D No
01:28:959 (1) - del No
02:28:805 (1) - K Done

[Oni]
00:25:421 (91) - d Done
01:20:036 (412) - add d color=#40BF00]Done,but add k [/color]
01:37:574 (50) - add notes No, i will delete it
02:33:728 (35,36,37,38) - ??

Add　5 or more consecutive notes
ex.ddkkd kkddk dkkdk kddkd ddddkkkk ddkkddkk kddkddk..... I avoid uding 5plets because this bpm so fast and made it Inner Oni

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eeezzzeee
979 posts
Joined August 2013
eeezzzeee
Hi, from my modding queue

Only looked at muzu and inner oni because too long 3:00+ :?

LEGEND
BLUE = Suggestions/comments
BLACK = Real problems

FORMAT
Diff Name
Comments

00:00:00 - change - reason
If there is a reason, please read that before trying the changes!
----------------
Total time spent on mod

Final comments

[General]
Imo the default game "soft" hitsounds are terrible, maybe you are using a different skin so you don't hear it. please use a custom sample for that or change it back to "normal"
You should try to gradually change the SV rather than instantly change it so fast. especially when the SV jumps during 1/4 streams like in oni and inner, thats unrankable and very annoying to play. Look at what this map does to transition the SV https://osu.ppy.sh/b/434380&m=1

[Muzukashii]
You can use 1/4 triples in muzu!

HP >= 5 - too harsh for this diff
00:10:959 - 00:21:113 - for this section, try using a k on every other white line. see this example http://puu.sh/hCXh6/41e399ee51.jpg - theres a powerful drum thats being ignored for the melody, but the problem is that the melody is not strong at this section (no vocals yet)
00:11:266 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - change to ddkd dk - really any 4 then 2 pattern with k's on the other white lines works
00:13:728 (16,17,18,19,20,21) - ^
00:16:190 (29,30,31,32,33,34) - ^
00:18:497 (42) - delete - makes this chain shorter and shows its a new verse
00:18:651 (43,44,45,46,47,48) - ^ same as 00:11:266
00:21:113 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - change to ddk kdk ddk kdk - mainly i think the patterns with k in the mdidle sounds bad
00:24:497 (75) - change to k
00:26:036 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93) - ^ same as 00:21:113
00:29:420 (100) - change to k
00:31:728 - add a note here - you can change around the other triples too, I used kddkkdk for this part
00:35:113 (22) - change to small k - theres no finish sound here, if you were using this for the vocal its not nessecary
00:41:574 - add a note here
01:06:190 (62,63,64,65,66,67) - change to dkdkkdk - i think this would be cool to play
01:10:343 - this SV change messes me up
01:28:959 (1) - end on 01:29:728
01:30:805 - add a note here
01:33:421 (17,18) - delete 18, change 17 to k - to break up this long pattern and sound drum at 01:33:420
01:34:190 (22) - change to small k
01:34:651 (24) - change to k
01:40:651 - add a note here
01:44:036 (69) - change to small d
02:15:113 (109,110,111,112,113,114) - change to dkdkkdk
02:29:113 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - change to kdk ddkd - need a k for drum at 02:29:420 the melody is soft here so don't skip drums
02:35:113 (28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35) - change to kddk ddkdk - again skipping drums
02:46:343 - add a note here - its a realy strong beat here
03:06:036 - add a d

[Inner Oni]
Some parts are lacking structure, making it feel like its not following the music. For example,
00:21:421 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105) -
the music is pretty much the same thing repeated a couple of times in this section, but the mapping all over the place lol

Why so many ddkdd? That should only be used when there is music for it. Try replacing those with ddkkd, it sounds better and smoother to play
Also try replacing some kdd with kkd for the same reason as above

00:10:959 - 00:21:113 - see the muzu - try to set up the patterns to use k on every other white line
00:21:266 - add a k
00:23:113 (84,85,86,87) - change to k k d - needs a k on 00:23:266
00:35:113 (179) - change to small k
00:44:959 (252) - ^
01:00:420 - add a k
01:19:959 (476) - delete - theres no sound here
01:22:036 (486,487,488,489,490) - change to ddkkd
01:25:421 (509) - change to k
01:30:805 (6,7,8,9,10) - change to kdkkd
01:34:190 (32) - change to small k
01:44:497 (112) - change to small k
01:46:652 (127,128,129,130,131,132) - change to kdddk d
01:54:036 (176,177,178) - change to d k
01:59:497 - add a k
02:29:266 (3) - move to 02:29:420
02:35:882 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - change to ddk ddddk - i think it sounds cool
02:39:267 (87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94) - change to kkddkdkkd - really doesn't sound right

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Total time spent on mod: 2:30 ~ 2:45

Even though I only modded 2, I played all the diffs and some of the mods can be applied to all of them for consistancy
Some things about the map are really good and then some things I just can't agree with sorry
Anyway, feel free to ask questions in your response why if you don't understand some of the things i put there
That's all. Good luck! :)
tasuke912
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2018
1,347 posts
Joined June 2013
tasuke912
Hi. from my queue. I chose 2 diffs because limit is over. Did you check rules?
[ General]
  1. Resize the BG to 16:9. 1366x707 is unrankble.
[ Kantan]
  1. Change the SV to 1.2. BPM195 is too fast for beginner player.
  2. 00:39:574 -, 2/1 stream is too long. You should make 4/1 for little break.
  3. 01:10:959 Delete. ^
  4. 01:15:266 ^ Cut 2/1 stream.
  5. 02:14:343 -, 02:29:113 -, 02:50:036 -,
[ Futsuu]
  1. Consider to change the SV to 1.2.
  2. 00:59:882 (9,10) Delete. Break is too little in this map.
  3. 01:14:497 Finish is not needed here.
  4. 02:13:266 add d for better consistency.
  5. 03:11:420 (78,79) Are these notes mistake?
Good luck ~
Bara-
11,978 posts
Joined April 2013
Bara-


Decided to mod this map anyways, as I want to mod some taco's

[Inner Oni]

00:11:575 (4,5) - Ctrl G, (4) is higher pitched then (5), making kd work better then dk. Also, the clap sound also fits more
00:14:036 - Add k here, there is a seemingly highpitched sound (a clap) in the music
00:15:574 (29,30,31,32,33) - This feels weird. I have a feeling this should be nudged back 1/2, that fits better with the music; move it to 00:15:420 - (29 should be here then, with the next 4 notes 1/4 after
00:16:497 - Add k here, there is a seemingly highpitched sound (a clap) in the music
00:18:959 - ^^
00:21:421 (70) - The pitch here is very high, I recommend you to make this a k
00:22:036 (75) - ^^
00:23:267 (85) - ^^
00:31:267 (150) - k, the clap sound in the music makes a d feel weird, k feels better to me
00:31:882 (155) - ^^
00:32:498 (160) - ^^
00:33:113 (165) - ^^
Etc... - For most of the 2nd and 4th beat (the one on which you hear a clap) it's better to put a k. That is higher pitched, and to me, the claps also feel higher pitched compared to the rest of the song;
00:35:574 (181) - I have a feeling a Finish would be better. D or K, that;s up to yu, for me, they both fit
00:39:344 (207) - Delete, the music has a strong 1/2 sound; 1/4 feels weird and/or overmapped to me
00:43:113 - Add a d here? There are vocals here, and considering the pitch, d feels better
00:50:651 (297,298) - Perhaps the circle is too fast after a slider (Tbh, I recommend you to never use drumrolls/shakers (especially short ones), a Finish on (297) as a stand alone circle might also work (see it for yourself before you do it))
00:53:113 (307,308) - ^^
00:55:574 (321,322) - ^^
01:01:574 (354,355,356) - Why do these have no finishes, but 01:04:036 (369,370,371) - do?
01:10:036 (408,409,410,411,412) - Wut? Change the SV change to a little later, this looks really messed up, look for yourself. Put it 1/4 later, the green point
01:11:421 (418,419,420) - See 01:01:574 (354,355,356)
01:20:036 (478) - Add a d (or k, what you prefer) here. Having a 4-plet feels really awkward, and makes little sense
01:22:651 (494) - D, there is a strong beat, and A Red big note sounds best here
01:25:113 (510) - ^^
01:27:574 (525) - ^^
01:34:651 (34) - I have a feeling a Finish would be better. D or K, that;s up to yu, for me, they both fit
01:38:651 (66,67,68,69,70,71) - Shouldn't this be a 5-plet + single or 2 triplets? A 4-plet + a doublet feels really weird
01:42:036 - Add a k here, to fit in with the claps
01:49:728 (156,157) - Perhaps the circle is too fast after a slider (Tbh, I recommend you to never use drumrolls/shakers (especially short ones), a Finish on (156) as a stand alone circle might also work (see it for yourself before you do it))
01:52:190 (166,167) - ^^
01:54:652 (182,183) - ^^
01:57:266 (196,197,198,199,200,201,202) - For emphasis, you can give finish to All of these (or only the second one of every doublet)
02:00:652 (216,217,218) - Why does this have no finishes while 02:03:113 (230,231,232) - do?
02:10:497 (278,279,280) - ^^
02:18:651 (332) - It feels rather useless, there is no sound here, and it decreases emphasis for the vocals, which is pretty bad; delete it
02:20:959 (342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352) - Feels a little random, as the music is just fast 1/2 (the strings are 1/6-1/8 (not sure)) I recommend you to make this regular 1/2 for the louder sound
02:25:882 (373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381) - ^^
02:43:729 (112,113,114) - finishers feel weird here. Inconsistency with previous part, and it doesn't make much sense adding Finishers in such calm part
02:47:114 (130,131,132,133) - Looking at pitched, dkdk feels better to me
02:51:113 (155,156,157) - Why doesn this have no finishes while 02:53:574 (170,171,172) - do?
02:56:344 (187,188,189,190,191) - ddk d feels better to me, ddkdk feels slightly overmapped, and the k at the end feels weird to me (lower pitched then the k before it)
03:00:959 (222,223,224) - Why does this have no finishers while 03:03:421 (236,237,238) - do?
03:08:113 (270) - Delete, it feels better when it's gone, otherwise the new part starts in the middle of a stream
03:10:652 (295,296,297,298) - kkdK feels weird, I recommend something like kddD, only the first one is high. The K also feels weird as the tone is low, thus D makes more sense


If you still want to do a M4M, poke me, and I'll mod the rest of the diffs
Edit: Okay, I found out I don't have any other Taiko maps for M4M >.<

Also, please remember what I said about the claps
Try to fix it in Futsuu/Muzu/Oni as well, as it's feels weird otherwise

Good luck!
Last edited by Bara- , edited 1 time in total.
Factorial
691 posts
Joined August 2013
Factorial
Some short mods from my modding queue:
[Kantan]
  1. 03:11:574 (51) - Don
  2. 03:12:190 (52) - Finisher kat
  3. 01:43:574 (7) - Don, because of the finisher kat, makes it readable
  4. 02:56:805 (27,28) - Ctrl+G
  5. 01:02:344 (4,5) - ^
  6. 02:01:421 (4,5) - ^
  7. 00:40:805 (1) - Don
[Futsuu]
  1. 01:12:190 (43) - Kat, because of the high pitch
  2. 02:40:805 (3) - ^
  3. 02:42:036 (6) - Don
  4. 03:11:497 (78) - Don
  5. 03:11:497 (78,79) - Snap to white line
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:30:497 (106) - Replace with don, drumroll here is too short
That's all, other diffs seems fine to me. Good luck on mapping!
-FireThunder-
306 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
-FireThunder-
Because too many i replied for my mod, i wiill comend 1 by 1
thanks everyone helping me on modding my map ^_^
here a star if it's a usefull :3

Ok... here the reply :3
Green = Applied
Red = Not Applied + Strong reason
Purple = Just My comment
eeezzzeee's mod

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

Only looked at muzu and inner oni because too long 3:00+ :? It's ok, i need mod on there /o/
LEGEND
BLUE = Suggestions/comments
BLACK = Real problems

FORMAT
Diff Name
Comments

00:00:00 - change - reason
If there is a reason, please read that before trying the changes!
----------------
Total time spent on mod

Final comments

[General]
Imo the default game "soft" hitsounds are terrible, maybe you are using a different skin so you don't hear it. please use a custom sample for that or change it back to "normal"
You should try to gradually change the SV rather than instantly change it so fast. especially when the SV jumps during 1/4 streams like in oni and inner, thats unrankable and very annoying to play. Look at what this map does to transition the SV https://osu.ppy.sh/b/434380&m=1

[Muzukashii]
You can use 1/4 triples in muzu!

HP >= 5 - too harsh for this diff
00:10:959 - 00:21:113 - for this section, try using a k on every other white line. see this example http://puu.sh/hCXh6/41e399ee51.jpg - theres a powerful drum thats being ignored for the melody, but the problem is that the melody is not strong at this section (no vocals yet)
00:11:266 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - change to ddkd dk - really any 4 then 2 pattern with k's on the other white lines works
00:13:728 (16,17,18,19,20,21) - ^
00:16:190 (29,30,31,32,33,34) - ^
00:18:497 (42) - delete - makes this chain shorter and shows its a new verse Delete, thanks :3
00:18:651 (43,44,45,46,47,48) - ^ same as 00:11:266 same as that, keep this because it's suits for me :3
00:21:113 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - change to ddk kdk ddk kdk - mainly i think the patterns with k in the middle sounds bad Sorry, but i will keep this because in my ear is good, i just changing
00:24:497 (75) - change to k Done
00:26:036 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93) - ^ same as 00:21:113 Ok, but some with my edit :3
00:29:420 (100) - change to k Done
00:31:728 - add a note here - you can change around the other triples too, I used kddkkdk for this part I wanna keep like this, i dont make this diff like oni or inner
00:35:113 (22) - change to small k - theres no finish sound here, if you were using this for the vocal its not nessecary OK
00:41:574 - add a note here I wanna keep like this
01:06:190 (62,63,64,65,66,67) - change to dkdkkdk - i think this would be cool to play Cool, but repeptive :< , i change it dk dkkd
01:10:343 - this SV change messes me up Fixed, sorry for that SV hehe
01:28:959 (1) - end on 01:29:728 Whoaa thanks :3/color]
[color=#00BFFF]01:30:805 - add a note here No, because follow the note eailer[color]
01:33:421 (17,18) - delete 18, change 17 to k - to break up this long pattern and sound drum at 01:33:420
01:34:190 (22) - change to small k Ok owob
01:34:651 (24) - change to k ^
01:40:651 - add a note here No, because follow the note eailer[color]
01:44:036 (69) - change to small d
02:15:113 (109,110,111,112,113,114) - change to dkdkkdk Ok, but i change it dkkddkk
02:29:113 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - change to kdk ddkd - need a k for drum at 02:29:420 the melody is soft here so don't skip drums Sorry no, ofc its no suits with the melody :l
02:35:113 (28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35) - change to kddk ddkdk - again skipping drums Ok, i change it kddk dkkdk
02:46:343 - add a note here - its a realy strong beat here Ok
03:06:036 - add a d ^

[Inner Oni]
Some parts are lacking structure, making it feel like its not following the music. For example,
00:21:421 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105) -
the music is pretty much the same thing repeated a couple of times in this section, but the mapping all over the place lol
Trying QwQ

Why so many ddkdd? That should only be used when there is music for it. Try replacing those with ddkkd, it sounds better and smoother to play
Also try replacing some kdd with kkd for the same reason as above Trying, thanks for suggestion ;w;

00:10:959 - 00:21:113 - see the muzu - try to set up the patterns to use k on every other white line Trying ;w;
00:21:266 - add a k In there i giving a break ._.
00:23:113 (84,85,86,87) - change to k k d - needs a k on 00:23:266 Ok
00:35:113 (179) - change to small k Better d :<
00:44:959 (252) - ^ ^
01:00:420 - add a k Hmm.. let me think it... Maybe not :<
01:19:959 (476) - delete - theres no sound here Whoa u correct xD
01:22:036 (486,487,488,489,490) - change to ddkkd Ok
01:25:421 (509) - change to k Ok
01:30:805 (6,7,8,9,10) - change to kdkkd Ok
01:34:190 (32) - change to small k Better d :<
01:44:497 (112) - change to small k Ok
01:46:652 (127,128,129,130,131,132) - change to kdddk d
01:54:036 (176,177,178) - change to d k
01:59:497 - add a k
02:29:266 (3) - move to 02:29:420
02:35:882 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - change to ddk ddddk - i think it sounds cool
02:39:267 (87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94) - change to kkddkdkkd - really doesn't sound right

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Total time spent on mod: 2:30 ~ 2:45

Even though I only modded 2, I played all the diffs and some of the mods can be applied to all of them for consistancy
Some things about the map are really good and then some things I just can't agree with sorry
Anyway, feel free to ask questions in your response why if you don't understand some of the things i put there
That's all. Good luck! :)

tasuke's mod

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi. from my queue. I chose 2 diffs because limit is over. Did you check rules? Oh sorry ehehe, i just see 3 minutes not 3.12 minutes
[ General]
  1. Resize the BG to 16:9. 1366x707 is unrankble.
What resolution for16:9? I will change it if u say the reso, ok? :3 Ok i druked seeing other modder saying this :l and edit to 1366x707, i update later.
[ Kantan]
  1. Change the SV to 1.2. BPM195 is too fast for beginner playerOk owob
  2. 00:39:574 -, 2/1 stream is too long. You should make 4/1 for little break. [color=#80BF00U mean 00:40:140 delete eh? ok[/color]
  3. 01:10:959 Delete. ^ Ok owob
  4. 01:15:266 ^ Cut 2/1 stream.Btw i not delete that note but i delete 01:15:882
  5. 02:14:343 -, 02:29:113 -, 02:50:036 -,
?

[ Futsuu]
  1. Consider to change the SV to 1.2. Later if another modder say it too ._.
  2. 00:59:882 (9,10) Delete. Break is too little in this map. Ok owob
  3. 01:14:497 Finish is not needed here. Ok owob
  4. 02:13:266 add d for better consistency. No, it's better no adding d
  5. 03:11:420 (78,79) Are these notes mistake?
Hehe.../color]
Good luck ~

bara's mod

baraatje123 wrote:



Decided to mod this map anyways, as I want to mod some taco's

[Inner Oni]

00:11:575 (4,5) - Ctrl G, (4) is higher pitched then (5), making kd work better then dk. Also, the clap sound also fits more
00:14:036 - Add k here, there is a seemingly highpitched sound (a clap) in the music
00:15:574 (29,30,31,32,33) - This feels weird. I have a feeling this should be nudged back 1/2, that fits better with the music; move it to 00:15:420 - (29 should be here then, with the next 4 notes 1/4 after
00:16:497 - Add k here, there is a seemingly highpitched sound (a clap) in the music
00:18:959 - ^^
00:21:421 (70) - The pitch here is very high, I recommend you to make this a k
00:22:036 (75) - ^^
00:23:267 (85) - ^^
00:31:267 (150) - k, the clap sound in the music makes a d feel weird, k feels better to me
00:31:882 (155) - ^^
00:32:498 (160) - ^^
00:33:113 (165) - ^^
Etc... - For most of the 2nd and 4th beat (the one on which you hear a clap) it's better to put a k. That is higher pitched, and to me, the claps also feel higher pitched compared to the rest of the song;
00:35:574 (181) - I have a feeling a Finish would be better. D or K, that;s up to yu, for me, they both fit
00:39:344 (207) - Delete, the music has a strong 1/2 sound; 1/4 feels weird and/or overmapped to me
00:43:113 - Add a d here? There are vocals here, and considering the pitch, d feels better
00:50:651 (297,298) - Perhaps the circle is too fast after a slider (Tbh, I recommend you to never use drumrolls/shakers (especially short ones), a Finish on (297) as a stand alone circle might also work (see it for yourself before you do it))
00:53:113 (307,308) - ^^
00:55:574 (321,322) - ^^
01:01:574 (354,355,356) - Why do these have no finishes, but 01:04:036 (369,370,371) - do?
01:10:036 (408,409,410,411,412) - Wut? Change the SV change to a little later, this looks really messed up, look for yourself. Put it 1/4 later, the green point
01:11:421 (418,419,420) - See 01:01:574 (354,355,356)
01:20:036 (478) - Add a d (or k, what you prefer) here. Having a 4-plet feels really awkward, and makes little sense
01:22:651 (494) - D, there is a strong beat, and A Red big note sounds best here
01:25:113 (510) - ^^
01:27:574 (525) - ^^
01:34:651 (34) - I have a feeling a Finish would be better. D or K, that;s up to yu, for me, they both fit
01:38:651 (66,67,68,69,70,71) - Shouldn't this be a 5-plet + single or 2 triplets? A 4-plet + a doublet feels really weird
01:42:036 - Add a k here, to fit in with the claps
01:49:728 (156,157) - Perhaps the circle is too fast after a slider (Tbh, I recommend you to never use drumrolls/shakers (especially short ones), a Finish on (156) as a stand alone circle might also work (see it for yourself before you do it))
01:52:190 (166,167) - ^^
01:54:652 (182,183) - ^^
01:57:266 (196,197,198,199,200,201,202) - For emphasis, you can give finish to All of these (or only the second one of every doublet)
02:00:652 (216,217,218) - Why does this have no finishes while 02:03:113 (230,231,232) - do?
02:10:497 (278,279,280) - ^^
02:18:651 (332) - It feels rather useless, there is no sound here, and it decreases emphasis for the vocals, which is pretty bad; delete it
02:20:959 (342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352) - Feels a little random, as the music is just fast 1/2 (the strings are 1/6-1/8 (not sure)) I recommend you to make this regular 1/2 for the louder sound
02:25:882 (373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381) - ^^
02:43:729 (112,113,114) - finishers feel weird here. Inconsistency with previous part, and it doesn't make much sense adding Finishers in such calm part
02:47:114 (130,131,132,133) - Looking at pitched, dkdk feels better to me
02:51:113 (155,156,157) - Why doesn this have no finishes while 02:53:574 (170,171,172) - do?
02:56:344 (187,188,189,190,191) - ddk d feels better to me, ddkdk feels slightly overmapped, and the k at the end feels weird to me (lower pitched then the k before it)
03:00:959 (222,223,224) - Why does this have no finishers while 03:03:421 (236,237,238) - do?
03:08:113 (270) - Delete, it feels better when it's gone, otherwise the new part starts in the middle of a stream
03:10:652 (295,296,297,298) - kkdK feels weird, I recommend something like kddD, only the first one is high. The K also feels weird as the tone is low, thus D makes more sense


Too lazy to mod other diffs.
If you still want to do a M4M, poke me, and I'll mod the rest of the diffs If u have map to M4M :3

Also, please remember what I said about the claps
Try to fix it in Futsuu/Muzu/Oni as well, as it's feels weird otherwise Thanks /o/

Good luck!

Neil Leo's mod

Neil Leo wrote:

Some short mods from my modding queue:
[Kantan]
  1. 03:11:574 (51) - Don NOOOO ;w;
  2. 03:12:190 (52) - Finisher kat NOOOO ;w;
  3. 01:43:574 (7) - Don, because of the finisher kat, makes it readable Better, thanks :3
  4. 02:56:805 (27,28) - Ctrl+G Thanks /o/
  5. 01:02:344 (4,5) - ^ Btw im follow the singer here
  6. 02:01:421 (4,5) - ^ ^
  7. 00:40:805 (1) - Don
No, k better than d for that pitch :l
[Futsuu]
  1. 01:12:190 (43) - Kat, because of the high pitch Better, thank you /o/
  2. 02:40:805 (3) - ^ ^
  3. 02:42:036 (6) - Don Sorry i keep this :3
  4. 03:11:497 (78) - Don Ok owob
  5. 03:11:497 (78,79) - Snap to white line
Done :v
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:30:497 (106) - Replace with don, drumroll here is too short
Ok, but i will make this stream :v
That's all, other diffs seems fine to me. Good luck on mapping! Thank You /o/
Last edited by -FireThunder- , edited 1 time in total.
Surono
7,196 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
weleh dah ada inner. padhal aku dah buat ;w; yeah GL this mup~
[R]
1,058 posts
Joined November 2013
[R]
Suggestion

cuma bisa yang muzu doang, agak susah dengerin yang oni mudah"an dilanjutin kalo mampu nanti

[Muzukashi]
00:27:420 - d
00:36:805 - k
00:41:728 - k
00:42:959 - fill d
01:07:420 - k
01:13:266 - k
01:17:882 - k
01:26:805 - k
01:42:036 - fill d
01:44:343 - fill d
01:44:497 - k
01:57:420 - fill d
01:57:882 - fill d
02:18:805 - k
02:29:420 - fill d
02:29:575 - k
-FireThunder-
306 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
-FireThunder-

[R] wrote:

Suggestion

cuma bisa yang muzu doang, agak susah dengerin yang oni mudah"an dilanjutin kalo mampu nanti

[Muzukashi]
00:27:420 - d no
00:36:805 - k ok :3
00:41:728 - k ok
00:42:959 - fill d no
01:07:420 - k ok
01:13:266 - kok
01:17:882 - k ok
01:26:805 - k Tak pikir dulu kalo orang lain bilang yang sama
01:42:036 - fill d no
01:44:343 - fill d ok
01:44:497 - k ok
01:57:420 - fill d no
01:57:882 - fill d no
02:18:805 - k no
02:29:420 - fill d no
02:29:575 - k no
Midnaait
790 posts
Joined April 2012
Midnaait
Hello, from Modding Queue.
d=don k=kat D=Big don K=Big Kat

[General]

Increase all volumes to 100% and set to normal hitsounds, it sounds too quiet for this kind of song.
Most finish sounds doesn't fit in my opinion.
Strange sliders from Muzukashii and above.

[Kantan]

Since all the volumes are 100%, you could remove unnecessary inherited points

00:35:267 (8) - That finish doesn't fit imo, remove
00:40:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - How about d d k k d k d k d d k d? It's the same like 01:39:882 and sounds good
01:20:805 (30,31,32,33,34) - Invert (d k d k d)
01:25:728 (38) - d
01:34:343 (8) - Remove finish
01:38:651 - Add a don here, so it's consistant with 00:39:574
01:44:190 (8) - Remove finish
02:10:036 (17) - Delete
From 02:19:266 to 02:27:266 This is the most quiet part of the map, try making some breaks there
02:38:651 (18) - Delete that note or the spinner in front of it
02:44:497 (8) - Remove finish, this part is very quiet too
02:46:651 (12) - ^
02:49:728 (15) - Move 1/1 to the left
02:54:344 (23) - Remove finish
03:01:728 (35) - k?

[Futsuu]

Not bad, I liked the kiai parts

00:31:574 (3) - k
00:34:651 (10) - k
00:35:267 (11) - d
00:36:497 (14) - k
00:39:267 (20,21,22,23) - How about changing it to this?

00:41:421 (3) - k
00:45:113 (11) - Remove finish
00:46:344 (14) - k
00:52:497 (1,2) - Move them 1/2 to the left?
00:55:574 (5) - Quiet part, don't need a finish here
00:56:805 (1,2,3,4) - How about this?

00:58:190 (4,5,6,7) - k k d k
01:14:190 (45) - k sounds better
01:14:497 (46) - Remove finish
01:19:113 (57,58) - ^
01:20:190 (61) - D
01:34:344 (11) - Remove finish
01:38:344 (21,22,23,24) - Same recommendation as 00:39:267 (20,21,22,23)
01:44:190 (34) - Remove finish
02:03:728 (20) - ^
02:13:574 (43) - ^
02:44:344 (12) - ^
02:46:651 (16) - Delete this and move 02:46:959 (16) - 1/2 to the left
02:54:190 (35) - Remove finish
02:57:421 (43,44,45) - d k d
02:59:882 (50) - Add finish
03:04:036 (59) - Remove finish
03:04:497 - Add a don there
03:07:267 (68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77) - How about this?


[Muzukashii]

Overall is good, this might be a little hard.
Change the slowdowns from x0.75 to x0.90, so it's not too intense. Speaking of slowdowns, the ones inside all the kiai times doesn't make much sense, remove them please.
These sliders are strange for me, It would be better if they are replaced with notes

00:11:266 (3) - d
00:20:959 (55) - Delete
00:25:728 (79) - K
00:30:497 (104) - Delete
00:30:805 (106) - ^
00:30:651 (104) - If you delete those notes I said before, move 1/2 to the left
00:50:651 (1) - Replace that slider with a don
00:53:113 (107) - ^
00:55:575 (117) - ^
01:19:728 (220) - Delete and change 01:19:882 (221) - to K
01:26:959 (251,252) - k k
01:28:190 (256) - Delete
01:44:036 (68) - k
01:49:728 (1) - Replace slider with don
01:52:190 (105) - ^
01:54:651 - ^
02:24:805 (247,248) - Invert
02:27:728 (1) - Replace spinner with some notes?
02:38:190 - How about this?

02:43:728 (17,18,19) - Remove these finishes, this part is quiet
03:11:420 (145) - k
03:11:728 (146,147) - Invert

From here you can detect by yourself wrong finish hitsounds and modify them

[Oni]

Same as Muzukashii about the slowdowns and sliders

00:10:959 (2,3) - K d
00:13:881 (18) - Move 1/2 to the right and delete 00:14:343 (20)
00:16:343 - and 00:16:806 (35) - ^
00:18:805 (48) - and 00:19:267 (50) - ^
00:21:420 (63,64,65,66,67) - k k d d k
00:22:344 (68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - d d k k ddd k
00:25:343 (89) - Delete
00:25:882 (91) - ^
From 00:26:036 to 00:30:651 Try to make it similar as 00:21:113 to 00:25:420
00:48:652 (233) - Delete
00:56:651 (271) - d
00:57:651 (277) - Delete
01:00:959 (290,291,292) - ddk
01:08:266 (331) - Delete
01:11:421 (349,350) - Invert
01:12:805 (356) - k
01:17:728 (385,386,387,388,389) - k d d k d
01:18:652 (392) - k
01:19:959 (402,403) - delete
01:36:805 (43) - ^
01:37:036 (45) - ^
01:37:882 (48) - Move to 01:37:574
02:12:036 (237) - d
02:18:189 (276) - k
02:18:343 - delete
02:18:497 (277) - k
02:18:958 (280) - ^
02:19:266 (281) - d
02:21:036 (289) - delete
02:21:651 (294) - ^
02:27:728 (1) - Replace that spinner with some notes
From 02:29:574 to 02:38:497 Make some breaks and delete some notes
02:43:729 (100,101,102) - Remove finishes
03:11:113 (266) - ^
03:11:421 (267) - k

Sorry about not modding Inner Oni, but most problems I see are common between all the

diffs, hope this mod helps a bit.

Good Luck!
-FireThunder-
306 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
-FireThunder-

Midnaait wrote:

Hello, from Modding Queue.
d=don k=kat D=Big don K=Big Kat

[Generall]
Increase all volumes to 100% and set to normal hitsounds, it sounds too quiet for this kind of song. Hmm... why im change it to Normal, not all its fit on Normal and its Soft. Just Asking :3
Most finish sounds doesn't fit in my opinion.
Strange sliders from Muzukashii and above.

[Kantan]

Since all the volumes are 100%, you could remove unnecessary inherited points

00:35:267 (8) - That finish doesn't fit imo, remove
00:40:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - How about d d k k d k d k d d k d? It's the same like 01:39:882 and sounds good
01:20:805 (30,31,32,33,34) - Invert (d k d k d)
01:25:728 (38) - d
01:34:343 (8) - Remove finish
01:38:651 - Add a don here, so it's consistant with 00:39:574
01:44:190 (8) - Remove finish
02:10:036 (17) - Delete
From 02:19:266 to 02:27:266 This is the most quiet part of the map, try making some breaks there
02:38:651 (18) - Delete that note or the spinner in front of it
02:44:497 (8) - Remove finish, this part is very quiet too
02:46:651 (12) - ^
02:49:728 (15) - Move 1/1 to the left
02:54:344 (23) - Remove finish
03:01:728 (35) - k?

[Futsuu]

Not bad, I liked the kiai parts

00:31:574 (3) - k
00:34:651 (10) - k
00:35:267 (11) - d
00:36:497 (14) - k
00:39:267 (20,21,22,23) - How about changing it to this?

00:41:421 (3) - k
00:45:113 (11) - Remove finish
00:46:344 (14) - k
00:52:497 (1,2) - Move them 1/2 to the left?
00:55:574 (5) - Quiet part, don't need a finish here
00:56:805 (1,2,3,4) - How about this?

00:58:190 (4,5,6,7) - k k d k
01:14:190 (45) - k sounds better
01:14:497 (46) - Remove finish
01:19:113 (57,58) - ^
01:20:190 (61) - D
01:34:344 (11) - Remove finish
01:38:344 (21,22,23,24) - Same recommendation as 00:39:267 (20,21,22,23)
01:44:190 (34) - Remove finish
02:03:728 (20) - ^
02:13:574 (43) - ^
02:44:344 (12) - ^
02:46:651 (16) - Delete this and move 02:46:959 (16) - 1/2 to the left
02:54:190 (35) - Remove finish
02:57:421 (43,44,45) - d k d
02:59:882 (50) - Add finish
03:04:036 (59) - Remove finish
03:04:497 - Add a don there
03:07:267 (68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77) - How about this?


[Muzukashii]

Overall is good, this might be a little hard.
Change the slowdowns from x0.75 to x0.90, so it's not too intense. Speaking of slowdowns, the ones inside all the kiai times doesn't make much sense, remove them please.
These sliders are strange for me, It would be better if they are replaced with notes

00:11:266 (3) - d
00:20:959 (55) - Delete
00:25:728 (79) - K
00:30:497 (104) - Delete
00:30:805 (106) - ^
00:30:651 (104) - If you delete those notes I said before, move 1/2 to the left
00:50:651 (1) - Replace that slider with a don
00:53:113 (107) - ^
00:55:575 (117) - ^
01:19:728 (220) - Delete and change 01:19:882 (221) - to K
01:26:959 (251,252) - k k
01:28:190 (256) - Delete
01:44:036 (68) - k
01:49:728 (1) - Replace slider with don
01:52:190 (105) - ^
01:54:651 - ^
02:24:805 (247,248) - Invert
02:27:728 (1) - Replace spinner with some notes?
02:38:190 - How about this?

02:43:728 (17,18,19) - Remove these finishes, this part is quiet
03:11:420 (145) - k
03:11:728 (146,147) - Invert

From here you can detect by yourself wrong finish hitsounds and modify them Hard to detect it, because for me muzu its nice. But oni above need a fixing more :(

[Oni]

Same as Muzukashii about the slowdowns and sliders

00:10:959 (2,3) - K d
00:13:881 (18) - Move 1/2 to the right and delete 00:14:343 (20)
00:16:343 - and 00:16:806 (35) - ^
00:18:805 (48) - and 00:19:267 (50) - ^
00:21:420 (63,64,65,66,67) - k k d d k
00:22:344 (68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - d d k k ddd k
00:25:343 (89) - Delete
00:25:882 (91) - ^
From 00:26:036 to 00:30:651 Try to make it similar as 00:21:113 to 00:25:420
00:48:652 (233) - Delete
00:56:651 (271) - d
00:57:651 (277) - Delete
01:00:959 (290,291,292) - ddk
01:08:266 (331) - Delete
01:11:421 (349,350) - Invert
01:12:805 (356) - k
01:17:728 (385,386,387,388,389) - k d d k d
01:18:652 (392) - k
01:19:959 (402,403) - delete
01:36:805 (43) - ^
01:37:036 (45) - ^
01:37:882 (48) - Move to 01:37:574
02:12:036 (237) - d
02:18:189 (276) - k
02:18:343 - delete
02:18:497 (277) - k
02:18:958 (280) - ^
02:19:266 (281) - d
02:21:036 (289) - delete
02:21:651 (294) - ^
02:27:728 (1) - Replace that spinner with some notes
From 02:29:574 to 02:38:497 Make some breaks and delete some notes
02:43:729 (100,101,102) - Remove finishes
03:11:113 (266) - ^
03:11:421 (267) - k

Sorry about not modding Inner Oni, but most problems I see are common between all the diffs, hope this mod helps a bit.
Not problem and some its helpfull :D

Good Luck!
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