This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domenica 17 gennaio 2010 at 15.28.54

Artist: Zuntata
Title: Ending Theme
Source: Puzzle Bobble 2 / 2x
Tags: Armin
BPM: 160
Filesize: 4339kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:

1. Vs. Armin the mapper (4,8 stars, 192 notes)
2. Vs. Dreg (4,31 stars, 156 notes)
3. Vs. Mecha Warrior Bubblen (4,92 stars, 254 notes)
4. Vs. Monsta (1,97 stars, 93 notes)

Download: Zuntata - Ending Theme
Download: Zuntata - Ending Theme (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Howdy! Finally, I left behind my laziness and I decided to post my 1st seriouus attempt (A-hem...) of a beatmap!
It's the ending theme of the arcade games Puzzle Bobble 2 / 2x.
Changelog left for the sake of it.

Edit 31/07/09 19.33 : changed Normal mode to vs. Dreg (it's the same!), added more hitsounds and other spacing tips (thanks fuffolo ^.^ )
Edit 01/08/09 11.03 : edits by Breeze (and some minor spacing-replacements...)
Edit 03/08/09 20.05 : added video (Seriously, this time...)
Edit 08/08/09 15.19 : Added Vs. Monsta (Normal)
Edit 08/08/09 16.05 : added a slimmer video ( thanks Card_N'FoRcE ) and some minor changes
Edit 10/08/09 09.47 : edits by Card_N'FoRcE, Breeze and Fartownik (What a trio! :3 )
Edit 13/08/09 19.05 : BPM and spacing modding (Armin, Luxary) , combo sets modding (yeahyeahyeahhh)
Edit 23/08/09 17.30 : other timing edits (Luxary and Armin)
Edit 01/09/09 12.27 : added vs Mecha Warrior Bubblen (Insane) (still incomplete... T.T)
Edit 01/09/09 15.44 : the insane mode is now complete; moved to pending maps, ready to be bat-tested! (help...)
Edit 01/09/09 20:51 : added hitsounds on insane, changed general offset (again... u.u) as inspired by awp, alvisto, EEeee
Edit 03/09/09 1.39 : added various fixes
Edit 14/09/09 17.10 : fixed Normal and Hard modes (Azure_Kyte, Yoshi348, Ultimate), added a "new" background picture on Hard mode
Edit 03/10/09 18.02 : Massive mod action by xxheroxx, Thunderstorm, Matma_Rex, Card_N'FoRcE
Edit 30/10/09 22.20 : some minor fixes...
Edit 01/11/09 18.03 : ... and HUGE ones (thanks Xgor, DJPop, Teara, Derekku Chan)
Edit 08/11/09 18.04 : other useful fixes (Shulin and osuplayer111)
Edit 11/11/09 18.48 : re-re-re-resnapping (phew) and other fixes (Gens, DxS)
Edit 12/11/09 14.32 : Fixed as Takuma's suggestion
Edit 15/11/09 22.22 : added MafiaMaster's suggestions :3
Edit 20/11/09 19.12 : re-re-re-re-resnapping and other fixes (thanks JarJarJacob ^^)
Edit 23/11/09 11:10 : a little change on song's title (LuigiHann)
Edit 25/11/09 16:06 : other fixes (Jono00, Tanmak, ykcarrot)
Edit 27/11/09 21:10 : massive fixes by Sinistro (... spacing is "fine", now? ?.?)
Edit 06/12/09 22:45 : some minor hitsound changes
Edit 16/12/09 15:20 : ...due to my "magnificent" mapping skills, tis map is ready for the grave. Thanks anyways for everyone's help!
Edit 27/12/09 16:04 : keeping alive...
Edit 29/12/09 23.28 : mineyob's fixes (thanks again ^^)
Edit 30/12/09 12.38 : added Armin's mode :3
Edit 03/01/10 15.19: added tmokb93's mode ^^
Edit 05/01/10 11.10: fixed tmokb93's mode (@tmokb93: read my last post, please.)
Edit 06/01/10 16.00: fixed modes's names , as suggested by NoHitter and Matma_Rex
Edit 08/01/10 20.39: added custom hitsounds for Armin's mode.
Edit 13/01/10 15.15: updated tmokb93's mode

00:41:99 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Trova una diversa combinazione di Hit ; New combo dalla 5 in poi
01:40:14 (2,3,4) -Posiziona il 2-3-4 nella stessa fila
01:46:13 (2,3,4) - ^
01:51:38 (2,3) - Imposta il Beat snap divisor ad 1/6 e posiziona il 3 in: 01:51:63 (3) -
01:52:88 (2,3) - Imposta il Beat snap divisor ad 1/6 e posiziona il 3 in: 01:53:13 (3) -


Toglimi una curiosità, non usi il Distance Snap vero?

Grazie x l'aiuto fuffolo
Ebbene si: mi hai sgamato per bene! (non ti si può nascondere nulla...)
L'ultima volta che ho usato il beat snap divisor ho reso la mappa un mezzo pastrocchio, ma se non sbaglio mai, quando imparerò? ^.^

Spend some stars?

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Breeze wrote:

try offset:2276 I agree with you: this could be a BETTER start for players!
there're few note with different distance spacing, it's strongly recommended that you ues same distance spacing(except for the jumps)

00:58:758 (1,2,3) - good patten, but jump too much Fixed
01:43:526 (1) - covered by the front note, it's ugly and vertiginous Fixed
01:44:943 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:12:910 spinner - after a long break, there's only a spinner wait for us, it's disappointed /.\ I want to leave the final spinner here... sorry!

anyway, a good map
I can't wait for your other diff. and it is said more than 2 diff. could be RANKed
when you upload a new diff. please PM me, I'd like to see it again
star for you

Thanks for your cooperation, Breeze! An easier mode will arrive soon...

I strongly recommend that you find someone to check your timing. Seems weird.

Others good, star'd.

BPM: 80
Offset: 3042

Thanks, this one was refreshingly straightforward. That timing section gets you to 2 minutes into the song, there basically is no beat after that.

wooooosh

I can't check timing carefully because i'm not expert in that, but some beats feel not snapped qhen looking at them in the editor (maybe it's just me, though)

- Normal:
00:28:16 (1,2) - devono iniziare sulla tacchetta blu (beat snap divisor 1/4)
00:42:01 (1,2,3) - ^
01:04:13 (5) - sposta due quadretti in alto
01:17:62 (3,4) - li sposterei più in basso (spacing)
01:23:62 (3,4) - ^
01:40:12 (2,3,4,5) - stesso discorso di spacing di sopra (N.B. qui è corretto, per esempio 01:46:50 (3,4,5))

- Hard:
00:28:35 (3,4,1) - direi spacing, ma in fondo si legge bene... vedi tu, insomma xD
00:41:63 (1) - sposta sulla tacchetta blu
01:01:00 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - spacing, questo è poco chiaro, cerca di cambiarlo
01:55:51 (5) - new combo, pls

Here's a "smaller" video, since yours is too big:
http://rapidshare.com/files/265110199/Ending.avi.html

I request timing modding for this map from some one more expert than me, please

a new diff. yeah~ XD

[VS. Monsta(Normal)]
00:33:021 (5) - it be covered and it's better to let the ball go in clockwise
00:39:093 (1,2,3,4,5) - good mode but spacing confused

funny map~
cheer you up XP

[Normal]

[Hard]

Ekhm... there's full of bad snapped 1/8 beats...
Anyways, starry~

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Normal:
00:28:16 (1,2) - devono iniziare sulla tacchetta blu (beat snap divisor 1/4) It was already there! :3
00:42:01 (1,2,3) - ^ This nope... Fixed!
01:04:13 (5) - sposta due quadretti in alto done
01:17:62 (3,4) - li sposterei più in basso (spacing) done
01:23:62 (3,4) - ^ done
01:40:12 (2,3,4,5) - stesso discorso di spacing di sopra (N.B. qui è corretto, per esempio 01:46:50 (3,4,5))

- Hard:
00:28:35 (3,4,1) - direi spacing, ma in fondo si legge bene... vedi tu, insomma xD Maybe I'll check it later...
00:41:63 (1) - sposta sulla tacchetta blu Fix'd
01:01:00 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - spacing, questo è poco chiaro, cerca di cambiarlo [/color]
01:55:51 (5) - new combo, pls done!

Breeze wrote:

[VS. Monsta(Normal)]
00:33:021 (5) - it be covered and it's better to let the ball go in clockwise I'll leave as it is for now...
00:39:093 (1,2,3,4,5) - good mode but spacing confused Beat pattern modify done!

fartownik wrote:

Ekhm... there's full of bad snapped 1/8 beats... THANKS for the observation!

Thanks for your cooperation... kudosu banquet for all!

M4M

Insane:
00:25:38 (3) - Remove, doesn't really fit that part :S
00:50:63 (6) - New combo
00:52:85 (1) - Remove combo
00:54:38 (2) - New combo
00:55:13 (3) - ^
00:55:88 (1) - ^

Normal:
01:07:50 (3) - Move to red tick
01:09:00 (6) - ^
01:42:00 (5) - Spacing, compare to 01:40:12 (2,3), should be the same
01:48:00 (5) - ^
01:49:50 (6) - ^
(Ignore the last 3 if they were intentional)
01:52:50 (5) - New combo

The video is laggy before the start, or is that how it is?

Starr!

Il timing it's horrible u_u
BPM : 160
Andiamo alla questione dimezzamento. I pro sono che dimezzi la velocità degli slider, il DS e i contro sono che dimezzi anche il Beat Snap Divisor D:
Dopo aver raddoppiato il BPM imposta la slider velocity a 0,70 e lo slider tick rate a 1. Sempre su timing vai su Timing Setup Panel e seleziona uno per uno tutti i timing points a destra della schermata (a parte il primo timing point) e premi su "Inherit previous timing settings"
Seleziona l'offset: 24017

esci dalla schermata e fai il resnap di tutte le note (menù Timing in alto> Resnap all notes)
Vai su Song Setup e vai nella mascherina Difficulty. Dimezza l'overall ATTUALE.
Infine controlla tutta la mappa: ci dovrebbero essere alcuni elementi che andrebbero aggiustati (ti aspetta davvero un lavoraccio da fare D:)

Buona fortuna con la mappa D:
Stella.

Di sotto ti metto in allegato una diff dove ho dimezzato tutto. Se vuoi puoi partire da lì a controllare gli hitobjects :3 poi rinominala XD

Download: Zuntata - Ending theme (Lokamp) [Vs. Dreg (Hard)mod].osu

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

I request timing modding for this map from some one more expert than me, please

I'm not expert than you D:

Italian Mod~

BPM: 160
Offset: 12.060

I BPM non devi dimezzarli. Vanno bene così come sono di base per la canzone.
Non ha senso dimezzarli perchè le note cadono velocemente e gli slider corrono troppo.

Ricorda bene:
- Se le note cadono velocemente, diminuisci l'Overall Difficulty (Song Setup > Difficulty).
- Se vuoi rallentare un po gli slider, diminuisci la Slider Velocity (Dal Timing). Non rallenta di molto , ma alla fine non serve, per una hard 1,40 è già poco!

Altri piccoli suggerimenti:
Cancella TUTTE le altre sezioni. E ricordati che se vuoi fare delle timing section dove cambiare gli Hitsound, o aggiungere il Kiai, o qualunque altra cosa che non riguardi direttamente il timing, usa le sezioni verdi! Quelle rosse servono solamente per fare cambi drastici di BPM nel corso della canzone, ovvero, che siano cambi di BPM diversi dalla metà e dal doppio di quello iniziale. (Ricorda: Timing > Timing Panel Setup > Add > Barra la casellina Inherit previous timing settings, dopo di chè puoi modificare tutto ciò che ti serve).

Diminuisci un po' il volume dei Sample Sound, soprattutto nelle sezioni con gli Hitsound Normal. Non esagerare, basta anche solo una tacca in meno.

Penso sia tutto! Purtroppo ti lascio un bel lavoraccio da fare, ovverosia sistemare tutte le note al loro posto e modificare gli slider. (Prima le note erano piazzate in maniera assurda, per farle andare a tempo erano messe a caso XD).


Star~

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Insane:
00:25:38 (3) - Remove, doesn't really fit that part :S I Agree! done
00:50:63 (6) - New combo ì
00:52:85 (1) - Remove combo ì
00:54:38 (2) - New combo ì
00:55:13 (3) - ^ ì
00:55:88 (1) - ^ ... guess?

Normal:
01:07:50 (3) - Move to red tick Not now... spacing would be laggy...
01:09:00 (6) - ^ ì
01:42:00 (5) - Spacing, compare to 01:40:12 (2,3), should be the same Fixed!
01:48:00 (5) - ^ ì
01:49:50 (6) - ^ ì
(Ignore the last 3 if they were intentional)
01:52:50 (5) - New combo Nope, a single color for the beat pattern is enough for now...

The video is laggy before the start, or is that how it is? Already Explained, remember? :3

Thanks for modding!

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This is mostly suggestion though. =P

Timing is VERY OFF in my opinion. Please use awp's offset- 3042. BPM 160 is fine. And use 1/4. After doing all that, your notes should be placed mostly on white and red tick, and they sound alright on those places, so, I think you won't need 1/8.

Feel free to PM me to mod again if you decided to change your offset and beat snap divisor. Even if you doesn't, I will still mod it and star it later, =P.

kk, Just a quicky, I found the map to be quite amusing , , , , only problem was that in Hard and Normal, u didn't resnap any of the notes, resnap them all, make sure u resnap to a 1/6 divisor

Star till i can find the time to mod this <3

Lokamp, i'm only suggesting these modifications. If you do not wish to use them, then dont.

Timing: Ok
Offset: Ok

I noticed that you didnt use distance snap on all the diffs. I changed [Normal] to the way it should be. I hope this is what you're looking for, and remember, distance snap must be used ,, well ,, i think 90~95% of the song.

GL, Ultimate

Download: Zuntata - Ending theme (Lokamp) [Vs. Monsta (Normal)].osu

There u go ^_^, Just as u asked

Star! for u :p

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Wow nice ^^

starred

Green = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Vs. Monsta (Normal)]
00:24:04 (1) - This ends at the white tick - Turn off grid snap to do this
00:25:41 (2) - move back 1/6th and extend 1/6th
00:26:91 (5) - ^
00:41:97 (1,2,3) - Move all these forward to the white ticks
01:02:85 (3) - Extend to the white tick
01:06:41 (1) - Move forward to the white tick
01:09:04 (6) - put this at 01:08:85 and extend it to 1:12:04
01:35:66 (1) - Extend to the white tick
01:40:54 (3) - Shorten to the red tick

[Vs. Dreg (Hard)]
00:58:79 (1,2,3) - move forward 1/6th beat
01:04:54 (5) - ^
01:07:41 (4,5) - ^
01:24:04 (6) - shorten 1/6th beat
01:51:60 (3) - move back 1/6th beat
01:53:10 (3) - ^

[Vs Mecha Warrior Bubblen (Insane)]
No Problems Found

Overall, this is a great song and insane is incredibly fun with its jumpy mapping style. Starr'd

Things I noticed and think can be improved:

Insane:

The intro is quite long and there is alot that can be done with it.

00:31:417 (7,8,9,10,11) The end of 7(slider) and 8(circle) is spaced to far apart.
I suggest moving 8/9/10/11 over to the left slightly.

01:05:917 (3,1) This spacing looks slightly off to me as well. I think these sliders could be cleaned up a bit through this section.

I think that the map could be cleaned up a bit to look a little better without actually changing anything, but this is just my personal opinion. This difficulty flows well and feels right except for a couple of personal spacing opinion.


I love the slider at the end, it fits perfectly with the music!

Great map!

insane
00:43:16 (1) - this is too close, doesn't look like an even pattern with the preceding notes
00:44:85 (x) - i think for this part instead of having 2 notes, you could put a long slider starting here and ending at 00:45:41
01:19:54 (3) - new combo so it isnt confusing
01:27:66 (5) - nazi >_< allign with end of slider please
01:30:04 (1,2) - clap at end of sliders instead of whistle

hard
00:32:85 (10) - spacing
00:54:41 (1) - too close?
01:27:04 (1) - start this slider at 01:26:85 instead


normal
00:24:04 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing is a little fishy
00:33:04 (5) - the timing point starting in the middle sounds a little funny because you can hear the slider sound changing DX
01:18:04 (4) - finish for the end of this

i adore this songgggg

Will mod tomorrow. Right now just one thing: Insane diff lacks "." after "Vs", you may want to fix it.

I didnt hear any issues with the timing/placement of the cirles. For the insane difficulty, i suggest you avoid such a long lead in. You could easily place some circles here n there which make your map alot more interesting. Don't forget people tend to skip the lead in, so you're basically screwing away that nice intro. Also that spinner in the end... kinda surprizing, you know? Try to storyboard something like upcoming text: 'This isnt over yet!' or something more creative <_< for the harder difficulty you could fill up some of that break space in the end.
Other then that, this is the type of BM i'd play after a hard day of work xD the speed of the sliders just match perfectly with the song.
starred

Serious modding time~

[Overall]
- IMO this map should use 1/4 timing divisor, not 1/6. I'll point out all uses of 1/6, anyway, so do not resnap - just go and fix them.
- Lead-ins are kinda long.
- Break and spinner at the end are stupid, IMO.

[Vs. Monsta (Normal)]
Spacing is all messed up. Scan whole map with distance snap turned on and fix every note. Including jumps which you wanted to place - it's your easiest difficulty, so jumps are bad. If grid prevents you from placing notes like they should be, turn it off/switch to level 3 (View -> Grid level).

You can also try Ctrl+Shift+A and clicking "Run", but it wont point out all mistakes, I think.

Non-spacing modding:
00:24:04 (1,2,3,4,5) - uh, this one is all wrong. Place it on timeline like that: , then fix spacing.
00:53:66 (2,3,4) - fix length to make them all 3/4 long. Right now it's 4/6.
00:59:57 (2), 01:01:10 (2), 01:02:60 (2), 01:03:72 (4,5) - place on next white tick.
01:07:04 (2) - place on next blue tick (01:07:073), make it 1/4 long, and add one repeat.
01:21:04 (1) - make it longer (until the whte tick).
01:22:54 (2) - end at blue tick.
01:27:04 (1), 01:28:54 (1) - end at red tick.
01:33:60 (2,3,5,6) - place at red/white ticks.
01:39:04 (1), 01:45:04 (1), 01:49:54 (6), 01:54:04 (1) - end at white tick.
01:51:66 (3), 01:53:16 (7) - place at red tick.
01:55:72 (1) - place spinner at next red tick. Also align its end with red tick.

[Vs. Dreg (Hard)]
- 00:24:04 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - fix it in similar way as Normal.
- Like Normal - change divisor to 1/4, scan the song and make all beats be on white/red or, rarely, blue ticks. I'm not mentioning them all because I'll have to write this post until tomorrow, and finding and fixing them will be easy job.
- Also - spacing.

[Vs Mecha Warrior Bubblen (Insane)]
- As I already said, diff name lacks "." after "Vs".
- And as above - fix 1/6 to 1/4, fix spacing (unless it's meant as jump).
- This diff is kinda stream heavy, eh.


Except divisor problems and spcing, it looks like a nice map. Starred - keep doing great job!

Timing -> Resnap all notes

Normal:

it's ok

Hard:

it's ok

Insane:

00:35:995 (1) = move 1/8 later

nice song, and nice map!!
Is this your first beatmap? wow good joob

starred

Hi there)
There's only suggestions that can be ignored as well
[normal]
00:39:042 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps on normal? i know, it's easy, but...
00:53:292 (1) Mb put it in a line with 2?
01:02:479 (1,2) Sounds too early imo. try to place it 1/6 later to see how it'll sounds
That's all. Really fun map =) * 4 you

Usa la grid lv3 se puoi, grazie
Sono moooolto insicuro riguardo allo snap 1/6, sembra suonare bene ma NON mi convince molto.

- vs. Monsta (Normal):

• .Opinions:
  Jumps a tratti esagerati, se potessi fare qualcosa per "ridurli" sarebbe l'ideale
  Lo spinner isolato alla fine non è granché D:
  .Suggestions:
  00:32:66 (4) - Lo metterei leggermente a destra
  01:03:72 (4) - un pochino a sinistra se puoi pls
  01:28:16 (2) e 01:29:66 (2,3) - spostali più giù, si capiscono meglio
  01:43:54 (1,2,3) - se puoi premi ctrl-H e vedi se per te sono meglio
  .Errors/Mistakes:
  ~0:47:00 - Rimetti la pausa, è sbagliata
  ~1:59:00 - ^
  00:55:91 (5) - nuova combo please, altrimenti correggi un po' lo spacing allontanandolo, così com'è adesso confonde
  01:33:60 (2,3,5,6) - suonano male

- vs. Dreg (Hard):

• .Opinions:
  01:13:47 (1,1,1,1) - mi piace
  .Suggestions:
  01:16:16 (2) - lo preferirei più vicino al 3
  01:22:16 (2) - ^
  01:19:16 (7) - secondo me sta molto meglio sopra all'8
  01:28:16 (2) - UGH, deve stare PROPRIO lì? D: Prova a metterlo sopra al 3 e vedi se ti piace
  .Errors/Mistakes:
  ~0:47:00 - Rimetti la pausa, è sbagliata
  ~1:59:00 - ^
  00:28:35 (3) - troppo lontano dal 2
  00:29:66 (4) - troppo lontano dall'1
  01:29:66 (5) - più giù e simistra

- Vs Mecha Warrior Bubblen (Insane):

• .Suggestions:
  00:38:97 (10) - new combo?
  01:13:54 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Devi PROPRIO? D: metterli staccati in quel modo è davvero cattivo D:
  .Errors/Mistakes:
  00:56:29 (4) - mettilo un po' più lontano
  01:19:54 (3) - se lo vuoi lì, nuova combo per forza
  01:28:04 (6) - ^
  ~1:59:00 - Rimetti la pausa, è sbagliata

Voglio vedere corretti almeno gli errori prima di stellare, richiamami appena correggi ^^

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Whole song is 1/3 snapped.

~Normal~
00:25:41 (2,3,4,5) - resnap
00:33:04 (5) - sounds weird with sliderslide, try using custom hitsounds to solve it
00:45:22 (1) - resnap
00:59:47 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:07:04 (2) - ^
01:08:47 (5,6) - ^
01:33:60 (2,3) - ^
01:35:10 (2,3) -
01:35:66 (1) - start on 01:35:917
01:39:04 (1) - hitfinish on start
01:40:54 (3) - resnap
01:46:54 (3) - ^
01:55:60 (1) - start on 01:55:667, end on 01:58:167
Last spinner - silence it and start on 02:12:979, end on 02:19:542

~Hard~
00:27:97 (1,2,3) - resnap
00:32:85 (10) - ^
00:33:97 (1,2,1,2,3) - ^
00:37:41 (6,7) - too far
00:44:97 (1) - resnap
00:59:85 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:08:54 (5) - move closer to (4)
01:08:85 (1,1,2,1,1,1,1) - resnap
01:55:72 (1) - start on 01:55:667, end on 01:58:167
Last spinner - silence it and start on 02:12:979, end on 02:19:542

~Insane~
00:25:66 (4) - didn't snap to anything
00:26:04 (7) - ^
00:32:04 (9) - ^
00:32:85 (12) - resnap
00:37:35 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - resnap
01:13:91 (4) - new combo
01:14:66 (4) - ^
01:55:66 (1) - start on 01:55:667, end on 01:58:167
Last spinner - silence it and start on 02:12:979, end on 02:19:542


+Star

its fun to play :3
Have a star~

You need to need to add a preview point go in to the timing tab on the top of the editor and set a preview point

Starred

All of this is just my personal suggestions, you don't have to use them.

Great beatmap for a first time/try. I see a lot of potential.

Mod in Irc and here is the rest.

~Star

[Normal]

Either map the break, or remove the spinner at the end.
Weird spacing.

[Hard]

Plays like a normal, and normal feels like a easy =p

Either map the break, or remove the spinner at the end. Its annoying waiting so long just to spin.

Lots of spacing issues. Go though the map and use distance snap.

These are just a few examples

00:24:04 (1,2) - Spacing.
00:29:66 (4,1) - Spacing.
00:40:91 (1,1) - Spacing. (Maybe make the jump a little longer )
00:53:29 (1,1) - Spacing.
01:08:54 (5,1) - Spacing.

01:12:35 (1,2) - space further away, aka, make the jump longer?

[Insane]

No problems. Weird spacing at times, buts that acceptable in a insane ^^

[General]
1/6th spacing doesn't feel right
Map the break or get rid of the spinner at the end

[Normal]
Turn up overall diff
Are you sure you're using distance spacing? There's too many jumps and the spacing is sporadic :X
00:26:47 (3,4) - 1/4th or 1/6th spaced beats like this are too hard for the easiest diff
01:08:85 (6) - Long sliders like this (in all diffs) sound weird when the bgm is quiet and there's just a random long slider with slider ticks making weird noises. Maybe add a spinner or break? o-o;
01:35:66 (1) - Don't place spinners so close to the previous notes.

[Hard]
Turn up overall diff
This diff flows a bit better, but the timing still feels a little weird
00:59:85 (1) - Too far away from the last slider
Same goes for notes/sliders with similar time spacing afterwards
01:13:47 (1,1,1,1) - Kick sliders are too far away from each other

[Insane]
Streamsssss
01:13:54 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Don't spread these out
01:19:54 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
Even though jumps are cool, there should be a standard spacing for maps. At points the spacing was big, and at other parts it was so close that I thought that notes were streams but there was a 1-2 beat space until it x_x

Cute song, but needs some work

don't know why no one noticed this

offset : 12.042 (i snapped on 1/8th)

for the rest

nice mapping

starred

Most of the fixes suggested applied. Thanks for everyone's collaboration! ^^

Why isn't the title capitalized? Should be "Ending Theme" unless you have a good reason why it isn't.

If that's even the song's actual title

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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

BPM: 160,00
Offset: 12.400 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Vs. Monsta (Normal)]

00:25:041 (2) - Extend by 1/6.
01:55:016 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Vs. Dreg (Hard)]

00:31:041 (6) - New combo.
00:37:041 (6) - ^
00:53:029 (1,1,2) - Spacing.
01:07:041 (4,5) - ^
01:14:066 (1,1) - ^
01:58:542 - Remove this break. No notes after that.

[Vs. Mecha Warrior Bubblen (Insane)]

00:42:004 (1,1,1,1) - Why all new combo? Seems weird to the rest of the map.
00:57:004 (6,7,8) - Spacing.
00:58:079 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this jump. But if you like, don't change.
01:01:041 (3,1,2) - Spacing.
01:13:054 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Adjust all the spacing here.
01:24:004 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:49:054 (2,3) - ^
01:54:041 (2) - New combo due to jump.
01:54:079 (3) - New combo.

all fixed so far... Now I hope for a Bat's attention... please...

[General]

1. Please lower the hitvolume, especially for places where the Normal sampleset is used.

[Vs. Monsta (Normal)]

1. You need to resnap all notes!
2. Offset is not the same as the other difficulties. Each time someone suggests a new offset, you need to apply it to all difficulties. Also, please keep awp's offset, osuplayer's is a little early.
3. There still are some spacing "problems", I see. I don't think changing the spacing or adding jumps in a Normal is good. An example would be 00:36:004 (1,2,3,4), and I don't think it can be ranked with these. Did you use distance snap?

[Vs. Dreg (Hard)]

1. I don't think such a low Overall Difficulty fits a Hard difficulty.

01:38:066 (4,1) - Check the spacing...

[Vs. Mecha Warrior Bubblen]

01:27:004 (4,5) - Not properly stacked to the slider's endpoint.

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Yes, most beat placement is fine, but there still are some little problems with the map in general. I'll wait and recheck until you fix this to star, sorry.

Only found that Your insane was not resnapped.

Better fix that.