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antony11
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alvisto
NORMAL
00:42:322 - spacing

HARD
Modding your map is easy, coz it's flawless. Good

INSANE
Good

A nice and very rhythmic map. Star.

You will add background picture later right ? And Kiai timing section will be cool. =P
Topic Starter
antony11

alvisto wrote:

NORMAL
00:42:322 - spacing

HARD
Modding your map is easy, coz it's flawless. Good

INSANE
Good

A nice and very rhythmic map. Star.

You will add background picture later right ? And Kiai timing section will be cool. =P

I can't find a suitable BG.
If someone have suggestion, please tell me.
James2250
awesome map

normal:
looks good (slightly lacking in hitsounds sometimes but its ok)

hard:
00:40:82 (6) - align endpoint up with fading 3?
00:53:56 (8) - slider not allowed (dont have endpoint and start point connected)

insane:
nice

*stars*
Breeze
hi antony11

o.o a Korean song? nice song~
try OFFSET:531, maybe it could be better

[Easy]
So...It can't be easy...fo most people...>_>
00:24:519 (1) - wrong spacing
01:18:117 (2,3,4) - vertiginous, try rearray them
01:21:115 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - at first I think there are sliders...confused to me, but maybe just to me

[Normal]
00:25:643 (4) - new combo (to see these notes more clear)
00:36:138 (1) - wrong spacing

[hard]
00:53:567 (8) - I used to use this style of slider, BUT I HAVE TO tell you, most people DIDN'T like it, we can't tell which side do we should go

[insane]
I can't find anything wrong, great

great map
star for you
Breeze
你要的BG做好了

Topic Starter
antony11
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
minyeob
[Overall]
Pretty good. The problem is, This map needs more "Nazi". Some of objects are ugly.

[Easy]
This is too hard :o
01:21:11 (4,10) - Hard to read

[Normal]
Fine!

[Hard]
00:53:57 (8) - Please don't stack this slider's Starting point/Ending point. This is a combobreaker

[Insane]
00:29:02 (3) - Clap on the end point.
00:29:58 (5) - Clap
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
slider velocity is ridiculously fast
00:43:07 (4) - spacing is too wide
01:02:00 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - remove some of the claps please
01:21:11 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - keep the spacing of the pattern consistant...it shrinks over time >_>
this is pretty hard for an Easy, too many notes imo. ~80% should be on white ticks. Also the spacing is so small it makes it hard to read sometimes


[Normal]
00:50:38 (1) - spacing
01:08:75 (4) - ^


[Hard]
00:40:82 (6) - spacing
00:45:70 (6,7,8) - stacking
00:50:57 (7) - spacing (new combo is typical to indicate jumps)
01:11:74 (1,2,3,4,5) - messy
01:24:68 (1) - remove clap


[Insane]
00:52:82 (2,3,4) - this is very hard to read...it looks like 3 is a slider >_>
00:58:06 (3,7) - spacing (slightly too wide)
01:24:67 (1) - remove clao


not bad, close to being rankable but kinda meh
Topic Starter
antony11
All Fixed~
Thank all of you :D

P.S. Something that I haven't change mean I want to keep it.
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
01:13:99 (4) - try a finish
01:19:99 (4) - ^
01:21:11 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - space like so


01:24:68 (1) - try a finish


[Normal]
01:12:12 (6) - too close to 5


[Hard]
00:24:52 (1) - try a finish
00:29:39 (1,2,3) - try whistles instead
00:36:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hitsounds plz
01:12:49 (5) - finish the end
01:19:99 (1) - finish


[Insane]
00:35:01 (5) - finish
00:36:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hitsounds plz
00:58:81 (7) - finish
01:12:49 (5) - ^
01:16:99 (4) - ^
01:19:71 (4) - too far from 3


also, please don't ask me to remod for a week or two - im in the middle of moving off to college >_>
Topic Starter
antony11
OKOK. Why you always focus on the hit sound and don't told me in first post=.=
Thank for reminding me.

I think the hit sound is OK now, plz check it and don't focus on hit sound anymore~~
blissfulyoshi
Easy:this is way too difficult for an easy
SPOILER
\
normal mod:
01:22:05 (6,7) - make parallel with 4,5

combo mod:
00:15:52 (5,1) - remove 1's new combo add a new combo to 5 (swap new combo)
00:18:52 (5,1) - swap new combo

Normal:
SPOILER
combo mod:
00:38:39 (1,3) - swap new combo

Hard:
SPOILER
normal mod:
00:17:40 (8,9,10) - no jump like the previous occurrence?

Insane:
fine

Besides easy, I liked the other diffs. Star.
tieff
[Easy]
Too fast sliders?
00:30:52 (4) - New combo.
00:30:89 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:08:75 (4,5) - Spacing.

[Normal]
00:18:90 (2) - Clap on start of slider.
00:19:65 (1) - Clap.
00:21:90 (2) - ^
00:22:65 (3) - ^
00:26:77 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:43:07 (1,2,3,4,5) - Place it like here.


[Hard]
00:19:65 (5) - Clap.
00:21:89 (2) - ^
00:22:64 (5) - ^
00:29:39 (1,2) - Spacing beetween this 00:29:39 (1,2) and this 00:29:77 (2,3) different.

[Insane]
All cool.

Star, very cool map.
Alace
offset:542
And some stuffs talked in IRC
Nice map <3
Alace
looks good now
bubble
DaRRi
well mapped
just a few word to say about insane
i think those 1/4 ones in insane are randomly put and don't quite fit here.
i suggest you remap those 1/4 things.

00:29:02 (3,4,5) - i suggest add a circle at 00:29:683 and reshape
00:47:58 (5,6,7) - i suggest the slider 1/2 shortter, move those 2 1/4 note 1/2 backward, and add a circle at 00:48:330 and reshape
00:53:57 (4,5,6) - same to above (shorter, backward, add)
01:06:50 (6,7,8) - add a circle at 01:07:914
01:22:25 (7,8,9) - add circle at 01:19:908


00:57:70 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - your not gonna beautify it? (3,7)upward
Topic Starter
antony11
Thank Darri's Pro suggestions.
It's really difficult for me to understand.
But it surely makes my map better.
Thank^^

Forgive me to pop the bubble~
Alace
Darri you are so pro
DaRRi
o_____o how can i improve my broken english :(
Topic Starter
antony11
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Starrodkirby86
God, stop mapping catchy Asian tunes. :P
Topic Starter
antony11

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

God, stop mapping catchy Asian tunes. :P
HA,actually I don't know what the song is singing but I like it's tune :P

And this song isn't J-pop but K-pop = =
It is a korean song
Lissette
Nice map, i love it *-*
Roddie
Really good song! :)

But why map so short? :(

You could of had something going.
adroxx09
Amo esta cancion me trae muy buenos recuerdos <3
:)
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