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Spy
2,538 posts
Joined November 2011
Spy

jyc-Binggan wrote:

Spy wrote:

Artist:凛
之前是我打錯了。。不好意思。
Title應該是Spring of Dreams才對。

国内看不了油管，十分悲伤
無論如何，開坑加油~ ;)
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Atrue
Hello~
From my modding queue



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
作图风格很有个人色彩，好评！
[Hard]
有些直滑条感觉比较生硬，不利flow，可以掰弯一点
00:21:263 (3) - 这里flow感觉有点生硬
00:31:576 (5,1,2) - 间距控制，这里突然减小的间距会让人有一种不适感
00:33:920 (1,2) - 总感觉这里跳的大了，毕竟比较连贯的音乐
00:40:248 (5,6,7) - 间距控制问题
01:03:568 (6) - 与其放弃后面的白线，不如让蓝线上的滑条延长到白线上，还能覆盖鼓点
01:17:045 (1,2,3) - 感觉可以再跳大点，之前那个相似的地方好像跳的大些。顺带一提，这边已经起来音乐了可以跳的开一点
01:44:232 (1) - 从这一段开始可以适当增加sv
01:56:888 - 这里似乎没有音，空一空也不错
02:18:451 (4,1) - 联系不够，突然反flow
02:50:560 (10) - 似乎可以跳一下
02:55:013 (5,6,7) - 前边string那么漂亮，为什么把note6给弄下来彻底破坏掉flow？


[Dream]
动词大慈动词大慈挺带感的
00:15:170 (1,2,3,4) - 这好坑的间距啊。。
00:15:170 (1) - 这里可以在前边加个二连？
00:18:920 (1,2,3,4) - 和前边间距一样，虽然做到了呼应但是我觉得这种间距完全没有采用的必要啊
00:21:263 (4,5,6) - 4、5之间的间距也比较坑（这里也是00:17:513 (4,5,6) - ）
01:03:451 (1,2,3) - 控制间距，前边和后面的1/4note间距看上去不整齐
01:59:232 (1,2) - 不必减速吧。。
02:02:045 (1,2,3) - flow有一点问题，不顺
02:18:451 (4,1) - stack一下如何？
02:21:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个跳梗。。不科学啊。。1、2之间间距尤其是大了
02:35:560 (8,1) - flow不连贯
02:54:310 (8,1) - 间距太大了



That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.:) .
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

azuretwinight wrote:

Hello~
From my modding queue



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
作图风格很有个人色彩，好评！
[Hard]
有些直滑条感觉比较生硬，不利flow，可以掰弯一点
00:21:263 (3) - 这里flow感觉有点生硬
00:31:576 (5,1,2) - 间距控制，这里突然减小的间距会让人有一种不适感
00:33:920 (1,2) - 总感觉这里跳的大了，毕竟比较连贯的音乐
00:40:248 (5,6,7) - 间距控制问题
01:03:568 (6) - 与其放弃后面的白线，不如让蓝线上的滑条延长到白线上，还能覆盖鼓点
01:17:045 (1,2,3) - 感觉可以再跳大点，之前那个相似的地方好像跳的大些。顺带一提，这边已经起来音乐了可以跳的开一点
01:44:232 (1) - 从这一段开始可以适当增加sv
01:56:888 - 这里似乎没有音，空一空也不错
02:18:451 (4,1) - 联系不够，突然反flow
02:50:560 (10) - 似乎可以跳一下
02:55:013 (5,6,7) - 前边string那么漂亮，为什么把note6给弄下来彻底破坏掉flow？


[Dream]
动词大慈动词大慈挺带感的
00:15:170 (1,2,3,4) - 这好坑的间距啊。。
00:15:170 (1) - 这里可以在前边加个二连？
00:18:920 (1,2,3,4) - 和前边间距一样，虽然做到了呼应但是我觉得这种间距完全没有采用的必要啊
00:21:263 (4,5,6) - 4、5之间的间距也比较坑（这里也是00:17:513 (4,5,6) - ）
01:03:451 (1,2,3) - 控制间距，前边和后面的1/4note间距看上去不整齐
01:59:232 (1,2) - 不必减速吧。。
02:02:045 (1,2,3) - flow有一点问题，不顺
02:18:451 (4,1) - stack一下如何？
02:21:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个跳梗。。不科学啊。。1、2之间间距尤其是大了
02:35:560 (8,1) - flow不连贯
02:54:310 (8,1) - 间距太大了



That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.:) .

fix some~~ thank u very much~~ :)
G S X
88 posts
Joined August 2012
G S X
基本都是些建议
[Hard]
把hard改小圈跟insane差不多了..
02:09:545 (9,10,11,12) - 2连也用这种摆法 单点也用这种摆法 简直巨坑...改成两个1/2滑条吧
02:14:701 (1) - 试试取消蓝线clap放在红线和白线上
[Dream]
00:44:466 (2,2) - ctrl+g可能flow更好一点?
01:06:380 (4) - 应该放在01:06:498才对吧
01:07:670 (1,2,3,4) - 神坑的间距..
01:14:232 (6,7,8,9,10) - 我觉得这样摆节奏不太合拍啊..换成四个红白线上的短滑条感觉会更合适
01:16:927 (10) - 手滑了么 whistle应该是在白线上的吧
01:27:357 (3,4,5) - 试试这样的节奏 http://puu.sh/5dQaR.jpg
01:38:490 (2,3) - 感觉节奏没对准 http://puu.sh/5dP38.jpg 节奏应该是这样的吧
01:45:052 (11,12) - kiai的位置感觉摆错了..不是应该在白线上出来么
break头没必要拽后啊 直接干脆的结束一段多好
02:33:920 (3) - 拉成3/4
音效好赞
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

judgment light wrote:

基本都是些建议
[Hard]
把hard改小圈跟insane差不多了..
02:09:545 (9,10,11,12) - 2连也用这种摆法 单点也用这种摆法 简直巨坑...改成两个1/2滑条吧
02:14:701 (1) - 试试取消蓝线clap放在红线和白线上
[Dream]
00:44:466 (2,2) - ctrl+g可能flow更好一点?
01:06:380 (4) - 应该放在01:06:498才对吧
01:07:670 (1,2,3,4) - 神坑的间距..
01:14:232 (6,7,8,9,10) - 我觉得这样摆节奏不太合拍啊..换成四个红白线上的短滑条感觉会更合适
01:16:927 (10) - 手滑了么 whistle应该是在白线上的吧
01:27:357 (3,4,5) - 试试这样的节奏 http://puu.sh/5dQaR.jpg
01:38:490 (2,3) - 感觉节奏没对准 http://puu.sh/5dP38.jpg 节奏应该是这样的吧
01:45:052 (11,12) - kiai的位置感觉摆错了..不是应该在白线上出来么
break头没必要拽后啊 直接干脆的结束一段多好
02:33:920 (3) - 拉成3/4
音效好赞
感谢，节奏的建议很有用~almost fixed :)
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
音效有时间再说
osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:春の湊に
Artist:Rin
ArtistUnicode:凛
Creator:jyc-Binggan
Version:Ts8zs' Easy
Source:Touhou
Tags:fanzhen0019 Deye nazrin House set of "Undefined Fantastic Object" 〜 Myorenji set クロネコラウンジ 東方Project 東方星蓮船
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kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
kamisamaaa
嘛嘛 我来给mod 虽然我是渣渣。。。就当我在骗KD
总体来说 这首歌本身BPM就不高 节拍也不紧 最高难度很简单但是也有点无聊 感觉很单调 这种图一般需要靠有意思的摆放 一些有趣的梗才行 而且可以多用一些背景急促的鼓点~节奏更丰富一些 因为dream难度像hard。。hard难度倒是很好

[dream]
00:08:373 (4,1) - 这种时间间隔变大了 距离最好别和前面等距额 容易误导
00:00:170 (1,2,3,4) - 这些间距完全可以大一些 摆放的四散一些 不要这么一条直线额
01:21:849 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 像这种从头到尾都是这样的小连打 BPM这么低连打很无聊的额 不如把一些换成三个小滑条 也有更多摆放方式额
02:13:763 (4,1) - 像这里 明明是1/8的连打间隔 可是距离和之前那些1/4拍间距一样。。完全不科学
后面一段做的感觉很好额
00:03:920 (1) - 这个finish有点奇怪
02:13:763 (4,1) - 这两个clap感觉不需要额
音效用的比我好多了。。。我是渣渣
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
锄禾日当午，汗滴禾下土
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
我来mod了


Dream

  1. 00:15:638 (3,4) - 请ctrl+G
  2. 00:18:451 (7) - 最好把第二个转向去掉...
  3. 00:25:482 (4) - ^ 或者反过来。。好违和啊
  4. 00:31:107 (3) - 这里建议放二连
  5. 01:02:357 (2,3,4,5) - 请塞满
  6. 01:08:490 (3,4) - 好像节奏有点不好把握, 可以的话(4)叠起来一点o.o
  7. 01:34:857 (5,6) - 这串放的不好看, 我可以建议短slider+单点吗(
  8. 01:59:232 (1,2) - 弧度太大了
  9. 02:03:451 (5) - 这个滑条尾上clap一下
  10. 02:04:857 (5) - ^
  11. 02:13:412 (1,1,1) - 为什么要蓝线起串 怎么玩
  12. 节奏和排列都不错
Hard

  1. 串子是不是多了点
  2. 而且stack leniency有点低 一堆1/2叠一起的
  3. 00:43:763 (1,1,1) - 没必要都加combo的
  4. 00:41:888 (2) - 放下面点?
  5. 01:04:154 (7) - newcombo
  6. 01:31:341 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - hard难度最好不要这样吧
  7. 01:36:849 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
  8. 02:44:232 (1,1) - 飞得太远
  9. 02:57:826 (10,11) - 天坑
Normal

  1. 颜色不一样233
  2. 00:40:951 (4,5) - 间距不队
  3. 00:44:701 (1,2,3) - 我柑橘这梗不好..
  4. 02:56:185 (2) - 这位置好莫名, 感觉会误导人
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

kamisamaaa wrote:

嘛嘛 我来给mod 虽然我是渣渣。。。就当我在骗KD
总体来说 这首歌本身BPM就不高 节拍也不紧 最高难度很简单但是也有点无聊 感觉很单调 这种图一般需要靠有意思的摆放 一些有趣的梗才行 而且可以多用一些背景急促的鼓点~节奏更丰富一些 因为dream难度像hard。。hard难度倒是很好

[dream]
00:08:373 (4,1) - 这种时间间隔变大了 距离最好别和前面等距额 容易误导
00:00:170 (1,2,3,4) - 这些间距完全可以大一些 摆放的四散一些 不要这么一条直线额
01:21:849 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 像这种从头到尾都是这样的小连打 BPM这么低连打很无聊的额 不如把一些换成三个小滑条 也有更多摆放方式额
02:13:763 (4,1) - 像这里 明明是1/8的连打间隔 可是距离和之前那些1/4拍间距一样。。完全不科学
后面一段做的感觉很好额
00:03:920 (1) - 这个finish有点奇怪
02:13:763 (4,1) - 这两个clap感觉不需要额
音效用的比我好多了。。。我是渣渣
fix some~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

我来mod了


Dream

  1. 00:15:638 (3,4) - 请ctrl+G 改了一下，感觉不好
  2. 00:18:451 (7) - 最好把第二个转向去掉...
  3. 00:25:482 (4) - ^ 或者反过来。。好违和啊 改了一下方向
  4. 00:31:107 (3) - 这里建议放二连
  5. 01:02:357 (2,3,4,5) - 请塞满 没懂。。。
  6. 01:08:490 (3,4) - 好像节奏有点不好把握, 可以的话(4)叠起来一点o.o 重新摆了~
  7. 01:34:857 (5,6) - 这串放的不好看, 我可以建议短slider+单点吗( 我觉得还可以啊
  8. 01:59:232 (1,2) - 弧度太大了 修了一下
  9. 02:03:451 (5) - 这个滑条尾上clap一下 好的
  10. 02:04:857 (5) - ^ 好的
  11. 02:13:412 (1,1,1) - 为什么要蓝线起串 怎么玩 为了凑4个一组，啊哈哈
  12. 节奏和排列都不错
谢谢~
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
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IamKwaN
有時間我會做Easy喔 不過要等所有考試完結才有時間=v=
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

IamKwaN wrote:

有時間我會做Easy喔 不過要等所有考試完結才有時間=v=
那要多久啊
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
12中 行嗎 ._.
如果這段時間你找到人做也可以 ;w;
不用理會我
O k a y u_old
29 posts
Joined March 2013
O k a y u_old
新手渣MOD;w;中文可以嗎

Normal
00:02:982 (5) - 和3平行?
00:09:545 (3,4) - 感覺有點怪..重擺?
01:03:451 (4) - 壓到後面的長白線上?我是不是表達的不清楚...
01:11:420 (1) - 包2?
01:44:232 (1) - 彎的有點怪...
02:07:670 (1) - 改成直的?
02:29:232 (1,2) - 建議不要加速...會嚇到新手
02:39:545 (5) - 改成直的?
02:41:185 (9) - 320|64 ?

Hard
00:17:513 (3) - 包2?
01:48:920 (2) - 跟1一樣弧度?
01:52:670 (3) - 彎的不是很漂亮...看要不要重擺
02:35:795 (1) - 前後弧度不同看要不要改成一樣...懂我在說什麼嗎Orz
沒什麼大問題...Nice difficulty :D

Insane
00:02:279 (2,3,4) - 重疊起來?
00:06:029 (2,3,4) - ^
01:18:451 (5) - 改成直的?

好歌:D祝Rank
woshiguabi
71 posts
Joined November 2012
woshiguabi
我去赚点KD来射
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

woshiguabi wrote:

我去赚点KD来射
怎么这么好 :)
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
Easy diff
osu file format v9

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Artist:Rin
Creator:jyc-Binggan
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Jycool
397 posts
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Topic Starter
Jycool
填坑 :lol:
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
是lkx_Shore不是lkx-shore!!!!!!!
Atrue
osu! Alumni
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Atrue

lkx_Shore wrote:

是lkx_Shore不是lkx-shore!!!!!!!
饼干又做春梦
G S X
88 posts
Joined August 2012
G S X
喜欢原来那个版本多一点 不过音效还是这么屌
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

judgment light wrote:

喜欢原来那个版本多一点 不过音效还是这么屌
原来的感觉太平淡了
Jycool
397 posts
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Topic Starter
Jycool
不要慌，马上回来
lkx_Shore
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lkx_Shore
一个月计时开始，饼干选手能在比赛结果出来前完成他的挑战吗？让我们拭目以待！！！


2014/3/9
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Atrue

lkx_Shore wrote:

一个月计时开始，饼干选手能在比赛结果出来前完成他的挑战吗？让我们拭目以待！！！


2014/3/9
Nobel-chan
43 posts
Joined December 2013
Nobel-chan

lkx_Shore wrote:

一个月计时开始，饼干选手能在比赛结果出来前完成他的挑战吗？让我们拭目以待！！！


2014/3/9
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先预约两个BAT
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Atrue
mod：一圈打包
晚上见
真是逼我edit
edit：Hello~
From your req.

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
aimod里面一堆conflict，找找看，我这可能是bug
good luck
[Easy]
General
真是你的style
02:26:750 - 又瞎一次，短kiai喷泉应该是最好不要这么频繁的
03:00:052 - 喷的位置不对啊。。。应该在note结尾开始喷吧
Beats
00:43:763 (1) - 删了吧，今天嘉文摸美雪的图，ez里面转盘后边拖了3拍才能有note，说是反应不过来，我虽然觉得不至于三拍，可是1拍是短了
Placement
01:21:732 (4,1) - = =我不太喜欢这种重叠，可是改起来大概不容易
02:51:732 (5,1) - 感觉弄得对称些会更好
Hitsound
00:07:670 - 音效再提高一点啊，一点都没有finish的感觉。。哑了
02:06:732 (5) - clap？不理解
[Normal]
General
短kiai喷泉有点多。。
02:00:170 - 不理解，01:45:170 - 都没加短kiai喷泉，这里加啥喷泉啊。。
02:22:787 - 这一小段闪瞎了
Beats
01:24:545 (1) - 建议加note
Placement
00:45:170 (2) - 有点隐蔽，摊开比较好
01:11:420 (1,2) - 挑blanket
01:22:201 (4) - 1.72的间距在normal里啊。。
[Hard]
General
一二三四四
整体感觉偏难了，小规模串出现在hard里面也是有点难
质量不错
02:30:170 - 这个kiai喷泉不建议搞
Hitsound
00:33:451 (6) - 突然减小的音效之谜，至少这个note不要减小音效
00:37:201 (6) - 啊这里又变成了50%= =
00:44:349 - 音量渐增
00:45:170 - 这note音效也是应该弄得大一点
01:22:435 - 不知道你听没听这里8,9的音效，我觉得whistle不带感，类似地方不再重复
01:28:060 - whistle
02:34:271 - ^
[Insane]
General
最炫饼干风
hp或od -1 ，我觉得打着打着随着100的出现然后血条就见底了，第一pc不是谁都能理解你的节奏的
Placement
00:23:607 (5,6,7,8) - 我觉得能摆的更好看些，可以跟9组成个正三角形啥的
00:43:295 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 打着不爽，我后边那个1234跟不太上。。
01:12:943 (4) - 我觉得这里间距略大了，可以稍微减小一点间距，尽量不要note之间留空隙，毕竟都是四分拍
01:19:154 (2,3,4,5,6) - 你看这里间距是先跳了一下，然后从3到4的间距突然就减小，而且这个堆叠我觉得不太理解，不如摆开
02:44:701 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这里突然从4到1有一个拐弯，应该是梗，但是我还是觉得这里不适合这样弄。。不过也是都行
02:51:732 (5) - 这个跳我觉得好莫名=v=，我觉得两个音的音高都是一样我想堆叠。。
Hitsound
00:44:232 - 这里可以加绿线然后做音量渐增
01:14:935 - 这个note可以插绿线然后增加音量，听着反而没有背景音乐音量大了
NCs
00:14:701 (3) - 这个减速建议用nc提醒

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
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sjoy
1,025 posts
Joined April 2012
sjoy
咦还没弃坑，这么久还没RANK还以为早扔了
Rose Quartz_old
5 posts
Joined February 2014
Rose Quartz_old

Atrue wrote:

最炫饼干风
续航成功111
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

Atrue wrote:

mod：一圈打包
晚上见
真是逼我edit
edit：Hello~
From your req.

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
aimod里面一堆conflict，找找看，我这可能是bug
good luck
[Easy]
General
真是你的style
02:26:750 - 又瞎一次，短kiai喷泉应该是最好不要这么频繁的
03:00:052 - 喷的位置不对啊。。。应该在note结尾开始喷吧
Beats
00:43:763 (1) - 删了吧，今天嘉文摸美雪的图，ez里面转盘后边拖了3拍才能有note，说是反应不过来，我虽然觉得不至于三拍，可是1拍是短了
Placement
01:21:732 (4,1) - = =我不太喜欢这种重叠，可是改起来大概不容易
02:51:732 (5,1) - 感觉弄得对称些会更好
Hitsound
00:07:670 - 音效再提高一点啊，一点都没有finish的感觉。。哑了
02:06:732 (5) - clap？不理解
[Normal]
General
短kiai喷泉有点多。。
02:00:170 - 不理解，01:45:170 - 都没加短kiai喷泉，这里加啥喷泉啊。。
02:22:787 - 这一小段闪瞎了
Beats
01:24:545 (1) - 建议加note
Placement
00:45:170 (2) - 有点隐蔽，摊开比较好
01:11:420 (1,2) - 挑blanket
01:22:201 (4) - 1.72的间距在normal里啊。。
[Hard]
General
一二三四四
整体感觉偏难了，小规模串出现在hard里面也是有点难
质量不错
02:30:170 - 这个kiai喷泉不建议搞
Hitsound
00:33:451 (6) - 突然减小的音效之谜，至少这个note不要减小音效
00:37:201 (6) - 啊这里又变成了50%= =
00:44:349 - 音量渐增
00:45:170 - 这note音效也是应该弄得大一点
01:22:435 - 不知道你听没听这里8,9的音效，我觉得whistle不带感，类似地方不再重复
01:28:060 - whistle
02:34:271 - ^
[Insane]
General
最炫饼干风
hp或od -1 ，我觉得打着打着随着100的出现然后血条就见底了，第一pc不是谁都能理解你的节奏的 ok
Placement
00:23:607 (5,6,7,8) - 我觉得能摆的更好看些，可以跟9组成个正三角形啥的 building改
00:43:295 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 打着不爽，我后边那个1234跟不太上。。 先找自己原因
01:12:943 (4) - 我觉得这里间距略大了，可以稍微减小一点间距，尽量不要note之间留空隙，毕竟都是四分拍 这贴的够近了啊
01:19:154 (2,3,4,5,6) - 你看这里间距是先跳了一下，然后从3到4的间距突然就减小，而且这个堆叠我觉得不太理解，不如摆开 ok
02:44:701 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这里突然从4到1有一个拐弯，应该是梗，但是我还是觉得这里不适合这样弄。。不过也是都行 行
02:51:732 (5) - 这个跳我觉得好莫名=v=，我觉得两个音的音高都是一样我想堆叠。。就不堆
Hitsound
00:44:232 - 这里可以加绿线然后做音量渐增 ok
01:14:935 - 这个note可以插绿线然后增加音量，听着反而没有背景音乐音量大了 ok
NCs
00:14:701 (3) - 这个减速建议用nc提醒
提醒了不会打还是不会打

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
thank you for your corporation！
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
liangv587
个人不喜欢喷泉

easy

01:22:670 (1) - 堆在一起不好吧

02:31:107 (2) - 擦边

02:33:920 (1) - 最好分开

02:34:857 (2) - 连续两发，不好吧，而且后面堆在一起了，像这样
这里

02:41:420 (1) - 向上弯

02:52:670 (1) - 不好看

normal

00:02:045 (3,5) - 向两边分

00:07:670 (1) - 往右下些

00:40:951 (4,5) - 往左上一点会顺一点

00:42:357 (1,2) - 1的尾巴2的头往左甩

01:03:451 (4) - 延长1/2，01:04:388 (1) - 后移1/2

02:14:232 (1) - 可以扭一下

insane

02:14:818 - 会被坑，02:14:701 (1) - 变成1/4折返怎样

另外ar+1
Sunao Yoshikawa
Sunao Yoshikawa
General
  • Combo color in Hard is different from other diffs.

Easy

Hitsounds
  • Clear!
Arrangement & Design
  • Clear!

Normal

Hitsounds
  1. 01:00:170 - Add claps from this point to 01:15:170 -
Arrangement & Design
  • Clear!

Hard

Hitsounds
  • Clear!
Arrangement & Design
  • Harder than hard. OD-1 maybe?
  1. 00:29:115 (6) - 1 grid left

Insane

Hitsounds
  1. 01:18:216 (6) - Whistle
  2. 02:03:451 - Clap
  3. 02:14:701 (1) - Clap
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:09:076 (5) - x360 y 84
    00:10:951 (5) - x256 y176 00:10:716 (4) - x352 y176
    00:39:310 (4) - x272 y204
    01:24:779 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 2 grid up(grid lv 4
    01:42:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
    02:59:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - use ctrl+shift+D
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool
SPOILER

Sunao Yoshikawa wrote:

General
  • Combo color in Hard is different from other diffs.

Easy

Hitsounds
  • Clear!
Arrangement & Design
  • Clear!

Normal

Hitsounds
  1. 01:00:170 - Add claps from this point to 01:15:170 -
Arrangement & Design
  • Clear!

Hard

Hitsounds
  • Clear!
Arrangement & Design
  • Harder than hard. OD-1 maybe?
  1. 00:29:115 (6) - 1 grid left

Insane

Hitsounds
  1. 01:18:216 (6) - Whistle
  2. 02:03:451 - Clap
  3. 02:14:701 (1) - Clap
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:09:076 (5) - x360 y 84
    00:10:951 (5) - x256 y176 00:10:716 (4) - x352 y176
    00:39:310 (4) - x272 y204
    01:24:779 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 2 grid up(grid lv 4
    01:42:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
    02:59:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - use ctrl+shift+D
SPOILER

liangv587 wrote:

个人不喜欢喷泉

easy

01:22:670 (1) - 堆在一起不好吧

02:31:107 (2) - 擦边

02:33:920 (1) - 最好分开

02:34:857 (2) - 连续两发，不好吧，而且后面堆在一起了，像这样
这里

02:41:420 (1) - 向上弯

02:52:670 (1) - 不好看

normal

00:02:045 (3,5) - 向两边分

00:07:670 (1) - 往右下些

00:40:951 (4,5) - 往左上一点会顺一点

00:42:357 (1,2) - 1的尾巴2的头往左甩

01:03:451 (4) - 延长1/2，01:04:388 (1) - 后移1/2

02:14:232 (1) - 可以扭一下

insane

02:14:818 - 会被坑，02:14:701 (1) - 变成1/4折返怎样

另外ar+1
almost all fixed ! thx for mod ! :)
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
from q

Insane

  1. 00:25:482 (4) - 略坑，个人建议反向
  2. 00:29:466 (2,1) - stack perfect
  3. 01:17:279 (2,3,4,5) - 这里感觉放的节奏比01:02:357 (2,3,4,5) - 稍微顺手点，你看看要不要统一
  4. 01:35:795 (1,2,3,4) - 这里我只是个人建议啊，摆这么个梗会比较有意思罢了：2叠到1那里，3叠到4那里
  5. 01:45:873 (2,3) - blanket
  6. 01:59:232 (1,2) - 建议还是近一点
  7. 02:03:216 (4) - 284,128
  8. 02:04:271 (3,4) - 稍微分开点
  9. 02:34:857 (5,6,7,8,1) - 581的三角还能再正一点
    梗都是对称的口牙

Hard

  1. 02:24:779 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 正五边形
  2. 02:38:373 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - ^
  3. 02:45:170 (1) - 从这里开始变nc颜色吧？
  4. 这喷泉用的

Normal

  1. 01:33:920 (1,2) - 平行？
  2. 对称流真是没什么好说的

Easy

  1. 00:05:795 (3) - 总觉得箭头overlap有点别扭，还是分开吧
  2. 02:51:732 (5,1) - 这个仔细调一下还是可以做到blanket+symm的
  3. 02:58:295 (3,4) - blanket
    这个easy的红线有点多
你们都太善良了

good luck
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

Hollow Wings wrote:

from q

Insane

  1. 00:25:482 (4) - 略坑，个人建议反向 反向就更坑了啊
  2. 00:29:466 (2,1) - stack perfect ok
  3. 01:17:279 (2,3,4,5) - 这里感觉放的节奏比01:02:357 (2,3,4,5) - 稍微顺手点，你看看要不要统一 还是保持吧
  4. 01:35:795 (1,2,3,4) - 这里我只是个人建议啊，摆这么个梗会比较有意思罢了：2叠到1那里，3叠到4那里 这样有点远
  5. 01:45:873 (2,3) - blanket ok
  6. 01:59:232 (1,2) - 建议还是近一点 ok
  7. 02:03:216 (4) - 284,128 ok
  8. 02:04:271 (3,4) - 稍微分开点 ok
  9. 02:34:857 (5,6,7,8,1) - 581的三角还能再正一点 ok
    梗都是对称的口牙
谢谢mod~ :)
Nobel-chan
43 posts
Joined December 2013
Nobel-chan
Where are the bats :/
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
Easy by lkx_shore
Easy by lkx_Shore!!!!!
Heatherfield
927 posts
Joined March 2010
Heatherfield
出盘疯狂连键 本来想打个ss 结果打了一个多小时被这狗出盘搞疯了 哎我他妈操烂吃皮革
SPOILER
本来以为是v+所以好久没看 原来是萌萌东方购物

no mod for you because i can
Nobel-chan
43 posts
Joined December 2013
Nobel-chan

Heatherfield wrote:

because i can

jyc-Binggan wrote:

am i pro?
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,733 posts
Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
ahh sorry for very lateness..
From my modding queue

General
Since it's Touhou related, Insane can be "Lunatic" in case you want to change :)
also add "ZUN" to the tag as well

Easy
OD3 with AR2 on Easy diff isn't fine if you ask me as the Normal diff has OD2 currently (Normal diff should be OD3)
02:06:732 (5) - change clap to 02:07:201 (6) - instead? it matches with the tail 02:10:482 (4) -
02:30:170 (1) - finish head?

Normal
OD+1 is fine.. the OD2 AR4 now is not a good spread. Also the note density in this diff is quite high, I suggest you use AR5 instead to spread it better with Hard diff as well.

Hard
Too difficult to be the Hard diff.

Insane
Great diff!

the gap between Hard and Normal is too large (Your current Hard diff is an Insane if you ask me) so I can't approve it.
Once you have a proper Hard diff (between your Normal and your current Hard diff), you can ask me to recheck.
Good luck!
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