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Rin - Spring of Dreams

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liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
liangv587
hard
有点难度
01:00:638 (3,4) -
01:15:638 (3,4) -
01:30:638 (3,4) - 变成1/2滑条加note怎样
01:02:045 (1,2,3,4) -
01:17:045 (1,2,3,4) -
01:32:045 (1,2,3,4) - 变成3个2/3滑条试试
02:46:107 (3,4) - 合并成3/4滑条
01:56:888 (5) - 多余的note，可以把01:56:771 (4,5,6) - 合并为一个1/2滑条
02:21:263 (2,3,4,5,6) - 没摆正，强迫症轻微患者

insane
01:46:459 - 为什么要把break拉到这里？
02:04:154 (2,3,4) - 可以拆成两个2连
话说那kiai time怎么回事

只能写这么多了 :o
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

liangv587 wrote:

hard
有点难度
01:00:638 (3,4) -
01:15:638 (3,4) -
01:30:638 (3,4) - 变成1/2滑条加note怎样
01:02:045 (1,2,3,4) -
01:17:045 (1,2,3,4) -
01:32:045 (1,2,3,4) - 变成3个2/3滑条试试
02:46:107 (3,4) - 合并成3/4滑条
01:56:888 (5) - 多余的note，可以把01:56:771 (4,5,6) - 合并为一个1/2滑条
02:21:263 (2,3,4,5,6) - 没摆正，强迫症轻微患者

insane
01:46:459 - 为什么要把break拉到这里？
02:04:154 (2,3,4) - 可以拆成两个2连
话说那kiai time怎么回事

只能写这么多了 :o
fix some. thank you~ :)
Spy
2,538 posts
Joined November 2011
Spy
Artist:凛
之前是我打錯了。。不好意思。
Title應該是Spring of Dreams才對。

Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

Spy wrote:

Artist:凛
之前是我打錯了。。不好意思。
Title應該是Spring of Dreams才對。

国内看不了油管，十分悲伤
Spy
2,538 posts
Joined November 2011
Spy

jyc-Binggan wrote:

Spy wrote:

Artist:凛
之前是我打錯了。。不好意思。
Title應該是Spring of Dreams才對。

国内看不了油管，十分悲伤
無論如何，開坑加油~ ;)
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Atrue
Hello~
From my modding queue



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
作图风格很有个人色彩，好评！
[Hard]
有些直滑条感觉比较生硬，不利flow，可以掰弯一点
00:21:263 (3) - 这里flow感觉有点生硬
00:31:576 (5,1,2) - 间距控制，这里突然减小的间距会让人有一种不适感
00:33:920 (1,2) - 总感觉这里跳的大了，毕竟比较连贯的音乐
00:40:248 (5,6,7) - 间距控制问题
01:03:568 (6) - 与其放弃后面的白线，不如让蓝线上的滑条延长到白线上，还能覆盖鼓点
01:17:045 (1,2,3) - 感觉可以再跳大点，之前那个相似的地方好像跳的大些。顺带一提，这边已经起来音乐了可以跳的开一点
01:44:232 (1) - 从这一段开始可以适当增加sv
01:56:888 - 这里似乎没有音，空一空也不错
02:18:451 (4,1) - 联系不够，突然反flow
02:50:560 (10) - 似乎可以跳一下
02:55:013 (5,6,7) - 前边string那么漂亮，为什么把note6给弄下来彻底破坏掉flow？


[Dream]
动词大慈动词大慈挺带感的
00:15:170 (1,2,3,4) - 这好坑的间距啊。。
00:15:170 (1) - 这里可以在前边加个二连？
00:18:920 (1,2,3,4) - 和前边间距一样，虽然做到了呼应但是我觉得这种间距完全没有采用的必要啊
00:21:263 (4,5,6) - 4、5之间的间距也比较坑（这里也是00:17:513 (4,5,6) - ）
01:03:451 (1,2,3) - 控制间距，前边和后面的1/4note间距看上去不整齐
01:59:232 (1,2) - 不必减速吧。。
02:02:045 (1,2,3) - flow有一点问题，不顺
02:18:451 (4,1) - stack一下如何？
02:21:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个跳梗。。不科学啊。。1、2之间间距尤其是大了
02:35:560 (8,1) - flow不连贯
02:54:310 (8,1) - 间距太大了



That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.:) .
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

azuretwinight wrote:

Hello~
From my modding queue



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
作图风格很有个人色彩，好评！
[Hard]
有些直滑条感觉比较生硬，不利flow，可以掰弯一点
00:21:263 (3) - 这里flow感觉有点生硬
00:31:576 (5,1,2) - 间距控制，这里突然减小的间距会让人有一种不适感
00:33:920 (1,2) - 总感觉这里跳的大了，毕竟比较连贯的音乐
00:40:248 (5,6,7) - 间距控制问题
01:03:568 (6) - 与其放弃后面的白线，不如让蓝线上的滑条延长到白线上，还能覆盖鼓点
01:17:045 (1,2,3) - 感觉可以再跳大点，之前那个相似的地方好像跳的大些。顺带一提，这边已经起来音乐了可以跳的开一点
01:44:232 (1) - 从这一段开始可以适当增加sv
01:56:888 - 这里似乎没有音，空一空也不错
02:18:451 (4,1) - 联系不够，突然反flow
02:50:560 (10) - 似乎可以跳一下
02:55:013 (5,6,7) - 前边string那么漂亮，为什么把note6给弄下来彻底破坏掉flow？


[Dream]
动词大慈动词大慈挺带感的
00:15:170 (1,2,3,4) - 这好坑的间距啊。。
00:15:170 (1) - 这里可以在前边加个二连？
00:18:920 (1,2,3,4) - 和前边间距一样，虽然做到了呼应但是我觉得这种间距完全没有采用的必要啊
00:21:263 (4,5,6) - 4、5之间的间距也比较坑（这里也是00:17:513 (4,5,6) - ）
01:03:451 (1,2,3) - 控制间距，前边和后面的1/4note间距看上去不整齐
01:59:232 (1,2) - 不必减速吧。。
02:02:045 (1,2,3) - flow有一点问题，不顺
02:18:451 (4,1) - stack一下如何？
02:21:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个跳梗。。不科学啊。。1、2之间间距尤其是大了
02:35:560 (8,1) - flow不连贯
02:54:310 (8,1) - 间距太大了



That's my suggestions. Thanks for joining my queue.:) .

fix some~~ thank u very much~~ :)
G S X
88 posts
Joined August 2012
G S X
基本都是些建议
[Hard]
把hard改小圈跟insane差不多了..
02:09:545 (9,10,11,12) - 2连也用这种摆法 单点也用这种摆法 简直巨坑...改成两个1/2滑条吧
02:14:701 (1) - 试试取消蓝线clap放在红线和白线上
[Dream]
00:44:466 (2,2) - ctrl+g可能flow更好一点?
01:06:380 (4) - 应该放在01:06:498才对吧
01:07:670 (1,2,3,4) - 神坑的间距..
01:14:232 (6,7,8,9,10) - 我觉得这样摆节奏不太合拍啊..换成四个红白线上的短滑条感觉会更合适
01:16:927 (10) - 手滑了么 whistle应该是在白线上的吧
01:27:357 (3,4,5) - 试试这样的节奏 http://puu.sh/5dQaR.jpg
01:38:490 (2,3) - 感觉节奏没对准 http://puu.sh/5dP38.jpg 节奏应该是这样的吧
01:45:052 (11,12) - kiai的位置感觉摆错了..不是应该在白线上出来么
break头没必要拽后啊 直接干脆的结束一段多好
02:33:920 (3) - 拉成3/4
音效好赞
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

judgment light wrote:

基本都是些建议
[Hard]
把hard改小圈跟insane差不多了..
02:09:545 (9,10,11,12) - 2连也用这种摆法 单点也用这种摆法 简直巨坑...改成两个1/2滑条吧
02:14:701 (1) - 试试取消蓝线clap放在红线和白线上
[Dream]
00:44:466 (2,2) - ctrl+g可能flow更好一点?
01:06:380 (4) - 应该放在01:06:498才对吧
01:07:670 (1,2,3,4) - 神坑的间距..
01:14:232 (6,7,8,9,10) - 我觉得这样摆节奏不太合拍啊..换成四个红白线上的短滑条感觉会更合适
01:16:927 (10) - 手滑了么 whistle应该是在白线上的吧
01:27:357 (3,4,5) - 试试这样的节奏 http://puu.sh/5dQaR.jpg
01:38:490 (2,3) - 感觉节奏没对准 http://puu.sh/5dP38.jpg 节奏应该是这样的吧
01:45:052 (11,12) - kiai的位置感觉摆错了..不是应该在白线上出来么
break头没必要拽后啊 直接干脆的结束一段多好
02:33:920 (3) - 拉成3/4
音效好赞
感谢，节奏的建议很有用~almost fixed :)
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
音效有时间再说
osu file format v12

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Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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Title:Spring of Dreams
TitleUnicode:春の湊に
Artist:Rin
ArtistUnicode:凛
Creator:jyc-Binggan
Version:Ts8zs' Easy
Source:Touhou
Tags:fanzhen0019 Deye nazrin House set of "Undefined Fantastic Object" 〜 Myorenji set クロネコラウンジ 東方Project 東方星蓮船
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kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
kamisamaaa
嘛嘛 我来给mod 虽然我是渣渣。。。就当我在骗KD
总体来说 这首歌本身BPM就不高 节拍也不紧 最高难度很简单但是也有点无聊 感觉很单调 这种图一般需要靠有意思的摆放 一些有趣的梗才行 而且可以多用一些背景急促的鼓点~节奏更丰富一些 因为dream难度像hard。。hard难度倒是很好

[dream]
00:08:373 (4,1) - 这种时间间隔变大了 距离最好别和前面等距额 容易误导
00:00:170 (1,2,3,4) - 这些间距完全可以大一些 摆放的四散一些 不要这么一条直线额
01:21:849 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 像这种从头到尾都是这样的小连打 BPM这么低连打很无聊的额 不如把一些换成三个小滑条 也有更多摆放方式额
02:13:763 (4,1) - 像这里 明明是1/8的连打间隔 可是距离和之前那些1/4拍间距一样。。完全不科学
后面一段做的感觉很好额
00:03:920 (1) - 这个finish有点奇怪
02:13:763 (4,1) - 这两个clap感觉不需要额
音效用的比我好多了。。。我是渣渣
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
锄禾日当午，汗滴禾下土
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
我来mod了


Dream

  1. 00:15:638 (3,4) - 请ctrl+G
  2. 00:18:451 (7) - 最好把第二个转向去掉...
  3. 00:25:482 (4) - ^ 或者反过来。。好违和啊
  4. 00:31:107 (3) - 这里建议放二连
  5. 01:02:357 (2,3,4,5) - 请塞满
  6. 01:08:490 (3,4) - 好像节奏有点不好把握, 可以的话(4)叠起来一点o.o
  7. 01:34:857 (5,6) - 这串放的不好看, 我可以建议短slider+单点吗(
  8. 01:59:232 (1,2) - 弧度太大了
  9. 02:03:451 (5) - 这个滑条尾上clap一下
  10. 02:04:857 (5) - ^
  11. 02:13:412 (1,1,1) - 为什么要蓝线起串 怎么玩
  12. 节奏和排列都不错
Hard

  1. 串子是不是多了点
  2. 而且stack leniency有点低 一堆1/2叠一起的
  3. 00:43:763 (1,1,1) - 没必要都加combo的
  4. 00:41:888 (2) - 放下面点?
  5. 01:04:154 (7) - newcombo
  6. 01:31:341 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - hard难度最好不要这样吧
  7. 01:36:849 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
  8. 02:44:232 (1,1) - 飞得太远
  9. 02:57:826 (10,11) - 天坑
Normal

  1. 颜色不一样233
  2. 00:40:951 (4,5) - 间距不队
  3. 00:44:701 (1,2,3) - 我柑橘这梗不好..
  4. 02:56:185 (2) - 这位置好莫名, 感觉会误导人
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

kamisamaaa wrote:

嘛嘛 我来给mod 虽然我是渣渣。。。就当我在骗KD
总体来说 这首歌本身BPM就不高 节拍也不紧 最高难度很简单但是也有点无聊 感觉很单调 这种图一般需要靠有意思的摆放 一些有趣的梗才行 而且可以多用一些背景急促的鼓点~节奏更丰富一些 因为dream难度像hard。。hard难度倒是很好

[dream]
00:08:373 (4,1) - 这种时间间隔变大了 距离最好别和前面等距额 容易误导
00:00:170 (1,2,3,4) - 这些间距完全可以大一些 摆放的四散一些 不要这么一条直线额
01:21:849 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 像这种从头到尾都是这样的小连打 BPM这么低连打很无聊的额 不如把一些换成三个小滑条 也有更多摆放方式额
02:13:763 (4,1) - 像这里 明明是1/8的连打间隔 可是距离和之前那些1/4拍间距一样。。完全不科学
后面一段做的感觉很好额
00:03:920 (1) - 这个finish有点奇怪
02:13:763 (4,1) - 这两个clap感觉不需要额
音效用的比我好多了。。。我是渣渣
fix some~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

我来mod了


Dream

  1. 00:15:638 (3,4) - 请ctrl+G 改了一下，感觉不好
  2. 00:18:451 (7) - 最好把第二个转向去掉...
  3. 00:25:482 (4) - ^ 或者反过来。。好违和啊 改了一下方向
  4. 00:31:107 (3) - 这里建议放二连
  5. 01:02:357 (2,3,4,5) - 请塞满 没懂。。。
  6. 01:08:490 (3,4) - 好像节奏有点不好把握, 可以的话(4)叠起来一点o.o 重新摆了~
  7. 01:34:857 (5,6) - 这串放的不好看, 我可以建议短slider+单点吗( 我觉得还可以啊
  8. 01:59:232 (1,2) - 弧度太大了 修了一下
  9. 02:03:451 (5) - 这个滑条尾上clap一下 好的
  10. 02:04:857 (5) - ^ 好的
  11. 02:13:412 (1,1,1) - 为什么要蓝线起串 怎么玩 为了凑4个一组，啊哈哈
  12. 节奏和排列都不错
谢谢~
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
有時間我會做Easy喔 不過要等所有考試完結才有時間=v=
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

IamKwaN wrote:

有時間我會做Easy喔 不過要等所有考試完結才有時間=v=
那要多久啊
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
12中 行嗎 ._.
如果這段時間你找到人做也可以 ;w;
不用理會我
O k a y u_old
29 posts
Joined March 2013
O k a y u_old
新手渣MOD;w;中文可以嗎

Normal
00:02:982 (5) - 和3平行?
00:09:545 (3,4) - 感覺有點怪..重擺?
01:03:451 (4) - 壓到後面的長白線上?我是不是表達的不清楚...
01:11:420 (1) - 包2?
01:44:232 (1) - 彎的有點怪...
02:07:670 (1) - 改成直的?
02:29:232 (1,2) - 建議不要加速...會嚇到新手
02:39:545 (5) - 改成直的?
02:41:185 (9) - 320|64 ?

Hard
00:17:513 (3) - 包2?
01:48:920 (2) - 跟1一樣弧度?
01:52:670 (3) - 彎的不是很漂亮...看要不要重擺
02:35:795 (1) - 前後弧度不同看要不要改成一樣...懂我在說什麼嗎Orz
沒什麼大問題...Nice difficulty :D

Insane
00:02:279 (2,3,4) - 重疊起來?
00:06:029 (2,3,4) - ^
01:18:451 (5) - 改成直的?

好歌:D祝Rank
woshiguabi
71 posts
Joined November 2012
woshiguabi
我去赚点KD来射
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

woshiguabi wrote:

我去赚点KD来射
怎么这么好 :)
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
Easy diff
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88,288,165170,6,0,B|120:256|108:208,1,79.9999999999999,4|0
36,164,166107,2,0,B|104:116,1,79.9999999999999
188,136,167045,2,0,B|248:160|300:112,1,120
312,72,167982,2,0,B|336:148,1,79.9999999999999
424,168,168920,6,0,B|392:224|420:288,1,120
452,308,169857,2,0,B|384:296|340:340,1,120
296,348,170795,1,0
212,324,171263,1,0
160,252,171732,2,0,B|128:220|84:232,1,79.9999999999999
100,320,172670,6,0,B|132:160,1,160
148,76,174076,1,0
212,136,174545,2,0,B|276:152|328:104,1,120
340,68,175482,1,0
404,128,175951,1,0
464,192,176420,5,4
320,292,177357,1,4
300,116,178295,2,0,B|344:136|356:172,1,79.9999999999999,4|0
276,204,179232,2,0,B|120:176,1,160,0|4
Jycool
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Topic Starter
Jycool
填坑 :lol:
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
是lkx_Shore不是lkx-shore!!!!!!!
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Atrue

lkx_Shore wrote:

是lkx_Shore不是lkx-shore!!!!!!!
饼干又做春梦
G S X
88 posts
Joined August 2012
G S X
喜欢原来那个版本多一点 不过音效还是这么屌
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

judgment light wrote:

喜欢原来那个版本多一点 不过音效还是这么屌
原来的感觉太平淡了
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool
不要慌，马上回来
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
一个月计时开始，饼干选手能在比赛结果出来前完成他的挑战吗？让我们拭目以待！！！


2014/3/9
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Atrue

lkx_Shore wrote:

一个月计时开始，饼干选手能在比赛结果出来前完成他的挑战吗？让我们拭目以待！！！


2014/3/9
Nobel-chan
43 posts
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Nobel-chan

lkx_Shore wrote:

一个月计时开始，饼干选手能在比赛结果出来前完成他的挑战吗？让我们拭目以待！！！


2014/3/9
Fav'd
先预约两个BAT
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Atrue
mod：一圈打包
晚上见
真是逼我edit
edit：Hello~
From your req.

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
aimod里面一堆conflict，找找看，我这可能是bug
good luck
[Easy]
General
真是你的style
02:26:750 - 又瞎一次，短kiai喷泉应该是最好不要这么频繁的
03:00:052 - 喷的位置不对啊。。。应该在note结尾开始喷吧
Beats
00:43:763 (1) - 删了吧，今天嘉文摸美雪的图，ez里面转盘后边拖了3拍才能有note，说是反应不过来，我虽然觉得不至于三拍，可是1拍是短了
Placement
01:21:732 (4,1) - = =我不太喜欢这种重叠，可是改起来大概不容易
02:51:732 (5,1) - 感觉弄得对称些会更好
Hitsound
00:07:670 - 音效再提高一点啊，一点都没有finish的感觉。。哑了
02:06:732 (5) - clap？不理解
[Normal]
General
短kiai喷泉有点多。。
02:00:170 - 不理解，01:45:170 - 都没加短kiai喷泉，这里加啥喷泉啊。。
02:22:787 - 这一小段闪瞎了
Beats
01:24:545 (1) - 建议加note
Placement
00:45:170 (2) - 有点隐蔽，摊开比较好
01:11:420 (1,2) - 挑blanket
01:22:201 (4) - 1.72的间距在normal里啊。。
[Hard]
General
一二三四四
整体感觉偏难了，小规模串出现在hard里面也是有点难
质量不错
02:30:170 - 这个kiai喷泉不建议搞
Hitsound
00:33:451 (6) - 突然减小的音效之谜，至少这个note不要减小音效
00:37:201 (6) - 啊这里又变成了50%= =
00:44:349 - 音量渐增
00:45:170 - 这note音效也是应该弄得大一点
01:22:435 - 不知道你听没听这里8,9的音效，我觉得whistle不带感，类似地方不再重复
01:28:060 - whistle
02:34:271 - ^
[Insane]
General
最炫饼干风
hp或od -1 ，我觉得打着打着随着100的出现然后血条就见底了，第一pc不是谁都能理解你的节奏的
Placement
00:23:607 (5,6,7,8) - 我觉得能摆的更好看些，可以跟9组成个正三角形啥的
00:43:295 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 打着不爽，我后边那个1234跟不太上。。
01:12:943 (4) - 我觉得这里间距略大了，可以稍微减小一点间距，尽量不要note之间留空隙，毕竟都是四分拍
01:19:154 (2,3,4,5,6) - 你看这里间距是先跳了一下，然后从3到4的间距突然就减小，而且这个堆叠我觉得不太理解，不如摆开
02:44:701 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这里突然从4到1有一个拐弯，应该是梗，但是我还是觉得这里不适合这样弄。。不过也是都行
02:51:732 (5) - 这个跳我觉得好莫名=v=，我觉得两个音的音高都是一样我想堆叠。。
Hitsound
00:44:232 - 这里可以加绿线然后做音量渐增
01:14:935 - 这个note可以插绿线然后增加音量，听着反而没有背景音乐音量大了
NCs
00:14:701 (3) - 这个减速建议用nc提醒

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
Last edited by Atrue , edited 1 time in total.
sjoy
1,025 posts
Joined April 2012
sjoy
咦还没弃坑，这么久还没RANK还以为早扔了
Rose Quartz_old
5 posts
Joined February 2014
Rose Quartz_old

Atrue wrote:

最炫饼干风
续航成功111
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

Atrue wrote:

mod：一圈打包
晚上见
真是逼我edit
edit：Hello~
From your req.

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
aimod里面一堆conflict，找找看，我这可能是bug
good luck
[Easy]
General
真是你的style
02:26:750 - 又瞎一次，短kiai喷泉应该是最好不要这么频繁的
03:00:052 - 喷的位置不对啊。。。应该在note结尾开始喷吧
Beats
00:43:763 (1) - 删了吧，今天嘉文摸美雪的图，ez里面转盘后边拖了3拍才能有note，说是反应不过来，我虽然觉得不至于三拍，可是1拍是短了
Placement
01:21:732 (4,1) - = =我不太喜欢这种重叠，可是改起来大概不容易
02:51:732 (5,1) - 感觉弄得对称些会更好
Hitsound
00:07:670 - 音效再提高一点啊，一点都没有finish的感觉。。哑了
02:06:732 (5) - clap？不理解
[Normal]
General
短kiai喷泉有点多。。
02:00:170 - 不理解，01:45:170 - 都没加短kiai喷泉，这里加啥喷泉啊。。
02:22:787 - 这一小段闪瞎了
Beats
01:24:545 (1) - 建议加note
Placement
00:45:170 (2) - 有点隐蔽，摊开比较好
01:11:420 (1,2) - 挑blanket
01:22:201 (4) - 1.72的间距在normal里啊。。
[Hard]
General
一二三四四
整体感觉偏难了，小规模串出现在hard里面也是有点难
质量不错
02:30:170 - 这个kiai喷泉不建议搞
Hitsound
00:33:451 (6) - 突然减小的音效之谜，至少这个note不要减小音效
00:37:201 (6) - 啊这里又变成了50%= =
00:44:349 - 音量渐增
00:45:170 - 这note音效也是应该弄得大一点
01:22:435 - 不知道你听没听这里8,9的音效，我觉得whistle不带感，类似地方不再重复
01:28:060 - whistle
02:34:271 - ^
[Insane]
General
最炫饼干风
hp或od -1 ，我觉得打着打着随着100的出现然后血条就见底了，第一pc不是谁都能理解你的节奏的 ok
Placement
00:23:607 (5,6,7,8) - 我觉得能摆的更好看些，可以跟9组成个正三角形啥的 building改
00:43:295 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 打着不爽，我后边那个1234跟不太上。。 先找自己原因
01:12:943 (4) - 我觉得这里间距略大了，可以稍微减小一点间距，尽量不要note之间留空隙，毕竟都是四分拍 这贴的够近了啊
01:19:154 (2,3,4,5,6) - 你看这里间距是先跳了一下，然后从3到4的间距突然就减小，而且这个堆叠我觉得不太理解，不如摆开 ok
02:44:701 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这里突然从4到1有一个拐弯，应该是梗，但是我还是觉得这里不适合这样弄。。不过也是都行 行
02:51:732 (5) - 这个跳我觉得好莫名=v=，我觉得两个音的音高都是一样我想堆叠。。就不堆
Hitsound
00:44:232 - 这里可以加绿线然后做音量渐增 ok
01:14:935 - 这个note可以插绿线然后增加音量，听着反而没有背景音乐音量大了 ok
NCs
00:14:701 (3) - 这个减速建议用nc提醒
提醒了不会打还是不会打

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
thank you for your corporation！
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
liangv587
个人不喜欢喷泉

easy

01:22:670 (1) - 堆在一起不好吧

02:31:107 (2) - 擦边

02:33:920 (1) - 最好分开

02:34:857 (2) - 连续两发，不好吧，而且后面堆在一起了，像这样
这里

02:41:420 (1) - 向上弯

02:52:670 (1) - 不好看

normal

00:02:045 (3,5) - 向两边分

00:07:670 (1) - 往右下些

00:40:951 (4,5) - 往左上一点会顺一点

00:42:357 (1,2) - 1的尾巴2的头往左甩

01:03:451 (4) - 延长1/2，01:04:388 (1) - 后移1/2

02:14:232 (1) - 可以扭一下

insane

02:14:818 - 会被坑，02:14:701 (1) - 变成1/4折返怎样

另外ar+1
Sunao Yoshikawa
Sunao Yoshikawa
General
  • Combo color in Hard is different from other diffs.

Easy

Hitsounds
  • Clear!
Arrangement & Design
  • Clear!

Normal

Hitsounds
  1. 01:00:170 - Add claps from this point to 01:15:170 -
Arrangement & Design
  • Clear!

Hard

Hitsounds
  • Clear!
Arrangement & Design
  • Harder than hard. OD-1 maybe?
  1. 00:29:115 (6) - 1 grid left

Insane

Hitsounds
  1. 01:18:216 (6) - Whistle
  2. 02:03:451 - Clap
  3. 02:14:701 (1) - Clap
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:09:076 (5) - x360 y 84
    00:10:951 (5) - x256 y176 00:10:716 (4) - x352 y176
    00:39:310 (4) - x272 y204
    01:24:779 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 2 grid up(grid lv 4
    01:42:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
    02:59:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - use ctrl+shift+D
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool
SPOILER

Sunao Yoshikawa wrote:

General
  • Combo color in Hard is different from other diffs.

Easy

Hitsounds
  • Clear!
Arrangement & Design
  • Clear!

Normal

Hitsounds
  1. 01:00:170 - Add claps from this point to 01:15:170 -
Arrangement & Design
  • Clear!

Hard

Hitsounds
  • Clear!
Arrangement & Design
  • Harder than hard. OD-1 maybe?
  1. 00:29:115 (6) - 1 grid left

Insane

Hitsounds
  1. 01:18:216 (6) - Whistle
  2. 02:03:451 - Clap
  3. 02:14:701 (1) - Clap
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:09:076 (5) - x360 y 84
    00:10:951 (5) - x256 y176 00:10:716 (4) - x352 y176
    00:39:310 (4) - x272 y204
    01:24:779 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 2 grid up(grid lv 4
    01:42:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
    02:59:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - use ctrl+shift+D
SPOILER

liangv587 wrote:

个人不喜欢喷泉

easy

01:22:670 (1) - 堆在一起不好吧

02:31:107 (2) - 擦边

02:33:920 (1) - 最好分开

02:34:857 (2) - 连续两发，不好吧，而且后面堆在一起了，像这样
这里

02:41:420 (1) - 向上弯

02:52:670 (1) - 不好看

normal

00:02:045 (3,5) - 向两边分

00:07:670 (1) - 往右下些

00:40:951 (4,5) - 往左上一点会顺一点

00:42:357 (1,2) - 1的尾巴2的头往左甩

01:03:451 (4) - 延长1/2，01:04:388 (1) - 后移1/2

02:14:232 (1) - 可以扭一下

insane

02:14:818 - 会被坑，02:14:701 (1) - 变成1/4折返怎样

另外ar+1
almost all fixed ! thx for mod ! :)
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
from q

Insane

  1. 00:25:482 (4) - 略坑，个人建议反向
  2. 00:29:466 (2,1) - stack perfect
  3. 01:17:279 (2,3,4,5) - 这里感觉放的节奏比01:02:357 (2,3,4,5) - 稍微顺手点，你看看要不要统一
  4. 01:35:795 (1,2,3,4) - 这里我只是个人建议啊，摆这么个梗会比较有意思罢了：2叠到1那里，3叠到4那里
  5. 01:45:873 (2,3) - blanket
  6. 01:59:232 (1,2) - 建议还是近一点
  7. 02:03:216 (4) - 284,128
  8. 02:04:271 (3,4) - 稍微分开点
  9. 02:34:857 (5,6,7,8,1) - 581的三角还能再正一点
    梗都是对称的口牙

Hard

  1. 02:24:779 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 正五边形
  2. 02:38:373 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - ^
  3. 02:45:170 (1) - 从这里开始变nc颜色吧？
  4. 这喷泉用的

Normal

  1. 01:33:920 (1,2) - 平行？
  2. 对称流真是没什么好说的

Easy

  1. 00:05:795 (3) - 总觉得箭头overlap有点别扭，还是分开吧
  2. 02:51:732 (5,1) - 这个仔细调一下还是可以做到blanket+symm的
  3. 02:58:295 (3,4) - blanket
    这个easy的红线有点多
你们都太善良了

good luck
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Jycool

Hollow Wings wrote:

from q

Insane

  1. 00:25:482 (4) - 略坑，个人建议反向 反向就更坑了啊
  2. 00:29:466 (2,1) - stack perfect ok
  3. 01:17:279 (2,3,4,5) - 这里感觉放的节奏比01:02:357 (2,3,4,5) - 稍微顺手点，你看看要不要统一 还是保持吧
  4. 01:35:795 (1,2,3,4) - 这里我只是个人建议啊，摆这么个梗会比较有意思罢了：2叠到1那里，3叠到4那里 这样有点远
  5. 01:45:873 (2,3) - blanket ok
  6. 01:59:232 (1,2) - 建议还是近一点 ok
  7. 02:03:216 (4) - 284,128 ok
  8. 02:04:271 (3,4) - 稍微分开点 ok
  9. 02:34:857 (5,6,7,8,1) - 581的三角还能再正一点 ok
    梗都是对称的口牙
谢谢mod~ :)
Nobel-chan
43 posts
Joined December 2013
Nobel-chan
Where are the bats :/
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