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Haru - Lunatic Princess (Instrumental)

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tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
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tieff
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 30 июля 2009 г. at 22:55:02

Artist: Haru
Title: Lunatic Princess (Instrumental)
Source: Touhou
Tags: Techno Touhou Instrumental Viotex
BPM: 82
Filesize: 5758kb
Play Time: 01:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,96 stars, 322 notes)
  2. Normal (4,7 stars, 221 notes)
Download: Haru - Lunatic Princess (Instrumental)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Beatmap #13.
For the Viotex Project.
Last edited by tieff , edited 7 times in total.
cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
cyanberryio
Alright, returning the favor, because you've modded all my maps. Or the three completed ones. ^.^ (I'll get to more of your maps tomorrow maybe. :D)

[General]
Cool skin. Like it. But maybe make the slider track the color of the hitcircleoverlay?
Maybe make a translucent/semi-transparent reverse arrow?

[Normal]
01:28:90 - I know you probably spent some time on this, it doesn't fit IMO.
01:32:92 (3,4) - Align with 2?
And that spinner at the end? If it end silent it might as well end at the white tick, IMO

[Hard]
All except that volume increasing thing, again, an opinion.

Star'd
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
1,179 posts
Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
Wow, that was fast, anyways, the glossy skin doesn't match the song OR background... (just my opinion though)
I'm fine with the timing

Normal- This is like... a Normal+ if not an easy Hard diff... (might need an easier diff then... this is easy enough for me though...)
Nazi-
00:32:92 (4) - down+right one tick
00:53:22 (7,8) - would you care to align these? (up a tick)
00:59:08 (7,8) - ^ (grid snap off, right a bit)
01:10:79 (6,7) - ^ (left a tick)
01:15:72 (5,6,7) - ^ (down a tick)
01:39:14 (2) - ^ (have end align with start of 1)

Hard-
Nazi-
00:38:96 (6) - new combo for a different(ish) pace
00:47:28 (3) - add whistle to this note to bring out the sound for your own beats here?
00:50:30 (1) - new combo to see this better?
00:53:04 (7,8) - down a tick, out of pure nazi (and light difference of spacing)
00:56:88 (10) - new combo (cuz combo getting getting high)
01:01:82 (10,14) - errr new combo one of these?
01:07:31 (7) - align please? (grid snap off) (and move rest of combo with it too)
01:08:22 (11) - new combo for... new pace?
01:19:02 (8) - ^
01:21:21 (3) - left a tick (align with 1)
01:26:15 (10) - new combo since combo's getting high again
01:42:43 (7) - new combo for new pace~
01:50:48 (7) - left a tick!~ (straighten line)
01:53:22 (4) - right a tick (since the combo looks like a curve and this part is a straight line xD)
01:53:53 (6) - down a tick to make this curve better looking


No hitsound problems~ it sounds nice
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
tieff
All fixed. <3
mrtn
osu! Alumni
1,065 posts
Joined March 2008
mrtn
[normal]
01:04:02 (6) - new combo
01:12:80 (7) - ^
01:15:72 (5) - ^
01:18:65 (5) - ^
01:47:92 (5) - ^
01:50:85 (5) - ^

[hard]
00:27:61 (10) - new combo
00:29:99 (5) - ^


good job as always, starred
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
Can not find any problem.

So i just shoot a star here. ;)
ignorethis
osu! Alumni
1,885 posts
Joined August 2008
ignorethis
<Normal>
Reduce overall by 1.

<Hard>
No problem.

star'd. Don't give me kd xD
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Timing]

Fine.

[Normal]

01:46:64 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to read for a normal.

[Hard]

01:36:58 (1,2,3,4) - This is insane, not hard.

Love it. Star <3
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
Hard:
01:23:77 (3) - Reverse selection?

That really is all I could complain about! XD
Another nice fun tieff map, hehe. I'll be starring this for now.
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
tieff
Wow, only 1 thing.

Fixed. <3
Z-Ramm
46 posts
Joined December 2008
Z-Ramm
Everything looks great, have a star.
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
Here's your bubble~!
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed Modding go!

Osz. File Check (Done)

SPOILER
Video: No
Custom Skin: Yes
[Current] Size: 5.60 Mb / 10.00 MB
Source: Yes
Tags: Yes

[Normal] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 82.0000 / 24,876 ms (Sounds right so far)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 4 / 2.30
Distance Snap Average: x1.1
[Current] Objects: 221 ( 145 Circles / 75 Sliders / 1 Spinner )
[Current] Max Combo: 340
[Current] Max Score: 1,882,660
[Current] Star Rating: 4.70 (That is NOT normal....)
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.6
[Current] Circle Size: Lv. 2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.6

-No noticeable errors-

Notes: ....... This is [Normal]? 4.70 doesn't sound normal at all. Especially how the map plays. You should reall consider making an [Easy] difficulty or something... :| .

[Hard] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 82.0000 / 24,876 ms (Sounds right so far)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 2.30
Distance Snap Average: x1.1
[Current] Objects: 322 ( 230 Circles / 92 Sliders / No Spinner )
[Current] Max Combo: 435
[Current] Max Score: 4,171,770
[Current] Star Rating: 4.96
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.6
[Current] Circle Size: Lv. 2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.6

Misc. Error Note: There is no spinners on this difficulty. At least add 1 spinner in otherwise, it would be pointless to compete against the ranks with the scores set to stone.

00:58:35 (6) - Looks slightly uneven under the slider.
01:36:94 (2) - Bottomed out of the window.
01:39:87 (1) - Very close to bottoming out...

Notes: Few errors on this difficultly though it should be called [Insane] or [Lunatic] because hard wouldn't be this intense.

Overall: ...... Honestly, the difficulty names are misleading to me. a 4.70 star rating on [Normal] is crazy. At least make an easier difficultly or something because there's really going to be some complaints about this later on. And make sure to add the spinner for [Hard] as well. I'll drop my star in then...
Last edited by whymeman , edited 2 times in total.
Lissette
osu! Alumni
1,496 posts
Joined July 2008
Lissette
Very cool map!!

Star :)
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
I am here to return a favour to ya. =P

NORMAL
00:32:193 - Let slider ends at the next blue tick, 00:32:376 ?
00:55:790 - Imho, let the slider start at the eralier white tick, end at red tick, then add a note at 00:56:705. It sounds better to me
01:29:266 - 01:37:680 - I like this part, well done
Otherwise, it's good, I like the custom sounds

HARD
01:10:607 (2) - Align this properly with slider 3. =P
Very good, flawless.

01:29:266 - 01:37:680 - THIS PART is too awesome. Consider adding Kiai to the last 4 beats ?

Star ! Good Luck
fuffolo
139 posts
Joined January 2009
fuffolo
Hard:

00:41:33 (5) - New combo
00:44:81 (6) - ^
00:55:24 (6) - ^
01:19:38 (4) - ^


Lovely! Starred :)
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
tieff

fuffolo wrote:

Hard:

00:41:33 (5) - New combo I don't want interrupt this
00:44:81 (6) - ^ International.
00:55:24 (6) - ^ International.
01:19:38 (4) - ^ International.


Lovely! Starred :)
Kudosu for work.
mosluv
748 posts
Joined December 2008
mosluv
Sorry I couldn't mod it earlier. Anyways, I didn't find anything wrong ;o!

<3!
tieff
Featured Artist
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Joined March 2009
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tieff
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
mtmcl
mtmcl
Oh no! I accidentally ranked your map!
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
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tieff
Trolls and haters attacked. x_x
Mogsy
osu! Alumni
3,450 posts
Here since the beginning
Mogsy
This was ranked while I was modding it. .-. Here's something that was brought to my attention while I was, though (and reminded about this morning):

Hard:
-00:29:63 (4) - Illegal spacing.
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
SPOILER
Test, will delete. Actually, I can't delete it, upon closer inspection. Derp.
Alace
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2008
Alace
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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