1. Insane (4,93 stars, 431 notes)
2. Normal (4,25 stars, 338 notes)

mrtn wrote:

[normal]
00:43:02 - maybe remove this slider and put a note at 00:43:24. or make a slider from 00:42:80 until 00:43:24. I think it sounds better that way.
01:11:47 (9,1) - it's not allowed to overlap a note and spinner
01:12:69 - reinsert break
01:53:82 (9,1) - it's not allowed to overlap a note and spinner
02:37:50 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - normally i don't nazi but this looks a bit weird, maybe align them properly?

[hard]
01:12:69 - reinsert break
01:42:58 (?) - note here?
01:51:62 (5,6,7,8) - i don't like these jumps Is insane map, not hard.
01:55:04 - reinsert break
02:36:18 (11,12,13,1) - this is very confusing. Move the (1) further away

Another things fixed!

good job as always, starred

animask wrote:

[Normal]
00:34:41 (5) - Whistle here?
01:46:98 (1) - No clap here
02:15:22 (1) - ^
02:29:34 (1) - ^ maybe try a different hitsound?

[Insane]
I don't really like the claps on the guys vocals....
01:02:43 (x) - Add a note here?

I like the hitsounds~

alvisto wrote:

Normal
0:50:959 (slider) - Change the timing section to soft, zero volume, or else there would be a strange "click" sound there. (Or you purposely wanted that sound? =P )
1:40:151 (8) - You could make it look prettier. Align 8 in a straight line with 3 and 6.
1:47:430 (slider) - Same, weird click sound.
2:15:665 (slider) - Same
2:29:783 (slider) - same

Insane
0:11:915 (7) - since you start the combo with claps, I think it sound better if you put clap here too. =D
0:28:349 (2) - The clap here seems weird. Ok, ignore this, I know why you put clap there. =D
1:47:009 (slider) - since at early parts you always do a 3 beats and then lead it in into a slider, why this part only 2 beats ?
1:47:430 (slider) - weird click sound again
2:15:720 - click sound
2:49:305 - This sounds weird. move 1/4 earlier ?

This map is good. The music is addictive ! =P Starred.

tieff wrote:

Totaly awesome song and map!

[Normal]
00:05:29 (2,3,4) - Hard to read for normal. But it's ok, I think.
01:03:09 (7) - Up a bit for better looking.
01:30:44 (3) - Super nazi. Spacing.

[Insane]
00:12:35 (3) - Left a bit for better looking.

You're awesome! Star!

Takuma wrote:

Insane:
00:13:90 (1) - A little too wide of a jump imo. Please tone it down a bit.
01:51:62 (5,6,7,8) - ^ omg
02:12:46 (2,3,4,5) - Move these closer to (1).
02:33:31 (1,1) - Big jump again.. @__@ Not to mention these are x2's!

That is all~

Mogsworth wrote:

Sorry, popping the bubble. ): Fix and I'll rebubble.

Normal:
-00:35:29 (9) - Vertically flip this slider so the arc fits better with the pitch change.
-00:46:54 (10) - This feels like it has too many repeats. It feels like it goes on for 1/2 too long.
*-01:12:35 (1) - For some reason, I feel like a standard Finish would sound TERRIFIC here.
*-01:54:70 (1) - ^
-02:13:23 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:13:68 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.

Insane:
-00:28:23 (1) - Clap goes here.
-00:28:34 (2) - Remove the Clap.
-00:28:68 (4) - Place a Clap on the first point.
-00:29:34 (6) - Clap goes here.
-00:38:93 (9,10) - This is awkward, thanks to 9. Change it.
-00:46:54 (13) - This feels like it goes on for 1/2 too long.
-01:38:60 (1) - Add a Clap.
-01:38:71 (2) - Remove the Clap.
-01:39:04 (4) - Add a Clap.
-01:39:15 (5) - Remove the Clap.
-01:39:48 (7) - Add a Clap.
-01:39:59 (8) - Remove the Clap.
-01:39:93 (10) - Add a Clap.
*-01:54:04 (1) - I feel like a standard Finish would fit well here.
-02:12:13 (1,2,3,4,5) - This flows awkwardly, mostly due to everything but 1. Fix this.
-02:45:44 (5,6) - This feels awkward, too. I blame 6.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
this really strikes me as begging for soft sampleset
00:40:37 (1,2,1,1,2,1) - why the random new combos?
00:50:51 (1,1) - too hard for a normal
note that in general this map is too fast paced for a lowest diff
01:38:82 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - again, too hard to follow for a lowest diff
01:46:98 (1,1) - ^
01:48:97 (5,6,7,8,9) - you have several of these misleading patterns...fine for Hard, not fine below there
02:40:37 (1,2,3,4) - ^


[Insane]
00:02:65 (3) - *twitch*
again, soft sampleset'd be nice
00:47:65 (3) - couldja move this up so i can at least see part of the 3?
00:53:38 (7,8) - this kinda bugs me
01:02:43 (7) - Dx almost entirely hidden
02:49:30 (4,1) - WOW thats a huge and rather distracting change in volume...maybe make it a bit closer

popping...

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
looks okay now


[Insane]
01:37:50 (5) - not the most symmetrical thing ive ever seen ;o Fixed.
02:34:41 (1,2,3) - any particular reason 1 is offset slightly from 2,3? Mmh? Anyway i don't want change...

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