[Oni]
good luck.
- 00:02:543 (5) - k. because only hear high pitch sounds. and can emphasize this 00:02:925 (6)
00:04:836 (11) - ^
00:07:129 (19) - ^ - 00:23:371 (82,83) - kk. ddkkddkkkkd is so natural streams. and this notes ( 00:23:562 (84) ) have stronk bass sound. isolated d is good.
- 00:45:441 - add k. why empty?
and 00:45:249 (172) - del this d. - 01:00:058 (237,238) - kk.
- 01:13:148 - add k. snare drum is here.
and 01:13:243 (293) - d. - 01:22:033 - ddkdk is better for me.
- 01:31:205 - why triplets? it is a awesome streams sound. you can make streams. e.g. => http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1040217
- 01:34:645 (408,409) - d
and 01:35:409 (410) - k. fit the vocal. - 01:35:791 ~ 01:36:938 - what are these? please tell me why you make this patterns. please try to kdkdkkd (devisor:1/2)
- 01:40:759 (430) - d. fit the bass drum.
- 01:41:332 (435) - why d ? please use k
01:41:428 - add k
and 01:41:523 (437) - d. fit the bass drum. - 01:48:211 (472) - k. good sound for me.Overall : Oni have many reasonable patterns. thereby the some irrational patterns stand out.
and why second KIAI have many empty than first? i think that's basically reverse...
you should attach importance to the overall flow of diff.
good luck.