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[Oni]
  1. 00:02:543 (5) - k. because only hear high pitch sounds. and can emphasize this 00:02:925 (6)
    00:04:836 (11) - ^
    00:07:129 (19) - ^
  2. 00:23:371 (82,83) - kk. ddkkddkkkkd is so natural streams. and this notes ( 00:23:562 (84) ) have stronk bass sound. isolated d is good.
  3. 00:45:441 - add k. why empty?
    and 00:45:249 (172) - del this d.
  4. 01:00:058 (237,238) - kk.
  5. 01:13:148 - add k. snare drum is here.
    and 01:13:243 (293) - d.
  6. 01:22:033 - ddkdk is better for me.
  7. 01:31:205 - why triplets? it is a awesome streams sound. you can make streams. e.g. => http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1040217
  8. 01:34:645 (408,409) - d
    and 01:35:409 (410) - k. fit the vocal.
  9. 01:35:791 ~ 01:36:938 - what are these? please tell me why you make this patterns. please try to kdkdkkd (devisor:1/2)
  10. 01:40:759 (430) - d. fit the bass drum.
  11. 01:41:332 (435) - why d ? please use k
    01:41:428 - add k
    and 01:41:523 (437) - d. fit the bass drum.
  12. 01:48:211 (472) - k. good sound for me.
    Overall : Oni have many reasonable patterns. thereby the some irrational patterns stand out.
    and why second KIAI have many empty than first? i think that's basically reverse...
    you should attach importance to the overall flow of diff.
i'll come again if have free time.
good luck.
Topic Starter
Senritsu

TKSalt wrote:

[Oni]
  1. 00:02:543 (5) - k. because only hear high pitch sounds. and can emphasize this 00:02:925 (6)
    00:04:836 (11) - ^
    00:07:129 (19) - ^
  2. 00:23:371 (82,83) - kk. ddkkddkkkkd is so natural streams. and this notes ( 00:23:562 (84) ) have stronk bass sound. isolated d is good.
  3. 00:45:441 - add k. why empty? added k at 00:45:632
    and 00:45:249 (172) - del this d. why? i like this way better. and if i delete that, it would be weird pattern imo
  4. 01:00:058 (237,238) - kk.
  5. 01:13:148 - add k. snare drum is here.
    and 01:13:243 (293) - d.
  6. 01:22:033 - ddkdk is better for me. i'd prefer this because the main drum starts 01:22:224, making dddd is more comfortable
  7. 01:31:205 - why triplets? it is a awesome streams sound. you can make streams. e.g. => http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1040217
  8. 01:34:645 (408,409) - d
    and 01:35:409 (410) - k. fit the vocal.
  9. 01:35:791 ~ 01:36:938 - what are these? please tell me why you make this patterns. please try to kdkdkkd (devisor:1/2) i was trying to following the instrument, but putting streams there won't do better and people protest at it, so i make it that way, and i'm still stuck. Thanks for the suggestion!
  10. 01:40:759 (430) - d. fit the bass drum.
  11. 01:41:332 (435) - why d ? please use k
    01:41:428 - add k
    and 01:41:523 (437) - d. fit the bass drum.
  12. 01:48:211 (472) - k. good sound for me.
    Overall : Oni have many reasonable patterns. thereby the some irrational patterns stand out.
    and why second KIAI have many empty than first? i think that's basically reverse...
    you should attach importance to the overall flow of diff.i will try to improve this! thanks for your advice!
i'll come again if have free time.
good luck.
thanks for mod!
mod without reply means fixed~
10nya


Yo~
Request from my PM
feel free to not kd if this mod didn't help you :3/

[Oni]
  1. 00:48:402 (187)- : k ? To make variety ( d d d a bit boring to me )
  2. 00:50:887 (196)- : prefer d here
  3. 01:09:995 - : I heard music here, add d ?
  4. 01:10:090 - : add d as well ?
  5. 01:30:632 - : add d ? music still continue here
  6. 01:32:925 (401,402)- : how about make kkd here ?
Surprisingly good map from you ehe :3
mantab senriyaoi<3

good luck :*
Topic Starter
Senritsu

10nya wrote:



Yo~
Request from my PM
feel free to not kd if this mod didn't help you :3/

[Oni]
  1. 00:48:402 (187)- : k ? To make variety ( d d d a bit boring to me ) done
  2. 00:50:887 (196)- : prefer d here ^
  3. 01:09:995 - : I heard music here, add d ? i'm following the vocal.. and ddd twice will make it boring
  4. 01:10:090 - : add d as well ? uhm.. it sounds weird for me..
  5. 01:30:632 - : add d ? music still continue here nice thing! done
  6. 01:32:925 (401,402)- : how about make kkd here ? make it ddk instead kkd~
Surprisingly good map from you ehe :3 ehe xD but it still needs more improvement uwu;;
mantab senriyaoi<3 aww maacih nyaroge <3

good luck :*
thanks for mod! ><
qoot8123
hi~
taiko mod via M4M~
Here we go~:3


Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion

[General]
  1. none
[ Kantan]
SPOILER
  1. SV change to 1.20 ,1.40 is a bit fast for new player
  2. 00:12:479 (5) - you put note here but 00:21:651 - ,00:49:167 - ,00:58:339 - didn't, so i suggest you remove this note
  3. 00:30:441 (28) - add finish? make this part more powerful
  4. 00:39:613 (39) - ^
  5. 01:07:129 (73) - ^
  6. 01:16:301 (82) - ^
  7. 01:30:441 - and 01:31:969 - add k,because 01:23:180 (90,91,92,93,94,95) - you make O O OO OO pattern,so i think you should make the similar pattern here
  8. 01:38:848 - ^
  9. 01:54:899 - ^
  10. 02:00:632 - ^
  11. 02:04:071 - ^
  12. 01:41:523 (112) - add finish?to make more powerful

Comment
Pretty decent Kantan,but I think you should some finish on this diff, make more powerful ,more vitality. :)


[ Futsuu]
SPOILER
  1. 00:10:377 - ,00:13:052 - can put note,due to this song's bpm is not so fast, and you can make dd or kk on futsuu
  2. 00:19:549 - ,00:22:224 - ^
  3. 00:47:065 - ,00:49:740 - ^
  4. 00:56:237 - ,00:58:912 - ^
  5. 00:30:441 (35) - same as kantan
  6. 01:00:250 (86) - remove finish?00:23:562 (24) - don't have finish
  7. 01:32:352 (140) - add finish to make more powerful as 01:23:180 (124) -
  8. 01:41:523 (156) - and 01:43:816 (160) - add finish as Kantan

Comment
Same as Kantan,you need to add some finish especially kiai time. And the diff spread between Kantan seems to close,you can put simple 1/2 notes like dd kk dk kd to make this diff harder

[ Muzukashii]
SPOILER
  1. 00:26:428 - add note to follow vocal if you do so please remove this 00:26:046 (62,63,64) -
  2. 00:31:396 - add note as 00:28:912 (74,75) -
  3. 01:23:180 - ~02:04:453 - try to add some notes ,this part is so empty

Comment
This diff's spread between Futsuu and Oni is unbalance ,try to add notes on kiai time as i said on Futsuu .General speaking,i think muzu need more work

[ Oni]
SPOILER
  1. 00:13:816 (41) - remove this note?i think this note may lose the vocal's power 00:13:624 (40) -
  2. 00:22:606 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) - this steam is occurred too suddenly,try to remove 00:22:893 (77,79) -
  3. 00:59:294 (230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240) - ^
  4. 00:45:631 (175) - remove this note, here didn't have any obvious drum sound
  5. 01:22:702 (335) - remove this note,to strengthen the drum's stress
  6. 01:41:046 (434) - ^
  7. 01:24:230 - add note as 01:22:988 (338,339,340) -
  8. 01:25:664 (355) - remove this note as 01:25:664 (355) -

Comment
Some stream is a bit hard that make the the diff spread between muzu is to high,try to reduce some stream .And


That's all~
Gook Luck for Rank~ :)
Topic Starter
Senritsu

qoot8123 wrote:

hi~
taiko mod via M4M~
Here we go~:3


Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion

[General]
  1. none
[ Kantan]
SPOILER
  1. SV change to 1.20 ,1.40 is a bit fast for new player
  2. 00:12:479 (5) - you put note here but 00:21:651 - ,00:49:167 - ,00:58:339 - didn't, so i suggest you remove this note
  3. 00:30:441 (28) - add finish? make this part more powerful
  4. 00:39:613 (39) - ^
  5. 01:07:129 (73) - ^
  6. 01:16:301 (82) - ^
  7. 01:30:441 - and 01:31:969 - add k,because 01:23:180 (90,91,92,93,94,95) - you make O O OO OO pattern,so i think you should make the similar pattern here
  8. 01:38:848 - ^
  9. 01:54:899 - ^
  10. 02:00:632 - ^
  11. 02:04:071 - ^
  12. 01:41:523 (112) - add finish?to make more powerful

Comment
Pretty decent Kantan,but I think you should some finish on this diff, make more powerful ,more vitality. :)


[ Futsuu]
SPOILER
  1. 00:10:377 - ,00:13:052 - can put note,due to this song's bpm is not so fast, and you can make dd or kk on futsuu
  2. 00:19:549 - ,00:22:224 - ^
  3. 00:47:065 - ,00:49:740 - ^
  4. 00:56:237 - ,00:58:912 - ^
  5. 00:30:441 (35) - same as kantan
  6. 01:00:250 (86) - remove finish?00:23:562 (24) - don't have finish instead of deleting, i added finish at 00:23:562 (24) -
  7. 01:32:352 (140) - add finish to make more powerful as 01:23:180 (124) -
  8. 01:41:523 (156) - and 01:43:816 (160) - add finish as Kantan

Comment
Same as Kantan,you need to add some finish especially kiai time. And the diff spread between Kantan seems to close,you can put simple 1/2 notes like dd kk dk kd to make this diff harder

[ Muzukashii]
SPOILER
  1. 00:26:428 - add note to follow vocal if you do so please remove this 00:26:046 (62,63,64) -
  2. 00:31:396 - add note as 00:28:912 (74,75) -
  3. 01:23:180 - ~02:04:453 - try to add some notes ,this part is so empty

Comment
This diff's spread between Futsuu and Oni is unbalance ,try to add notes on kiai time as i said on Futsuu .General speaking,i think muzu need more work

[ Oni]
SPOILER
  1. 00:13:816 (41) - remove this note?i think this note may lose the vocal's power 00:13:624 (40) -
  2. 00:22:606 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) - this steam is occurred too suddenly,try to remove 00:22:893 (77,79) -
  3. 00:59:294 (230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240) - ^
  4. 00:45:631 (175) - remove this note, here didn't have any obvious drum sound i changed to k, because if i remove it, sounds weird for me..
  5. 01:22:702 (335) - remove this note,to strengthen the drum's stress
  6. 01:41:046 (434) - ^
  7. 01:24:230 - add note as 01:22:988 (338,339,340) -
  8. 01:25:664 (355) - remove this note as 01:25:664 (355) -

Comment
Some stream is a bit hard that make the the diff spread between muzu is to high,try to reduce some stream .And


That's all~
Gook Luck for Rank~ :)
ugh.. changed many things! thank you so much qoot~! ><
Cihyaa
hi from PM

a,,haha ww

really really sorry;;

[Oni]
  1. 00:14:963 (43,44) - change d d
  2. 00:18:786 (59,60) - change k d
  3. 00:25:377 (86) - rem
  4. 00:32:543 (118) - change d
  5. 00:34:645 (125,126,127) - change k d d
  6. 01:04:740 (259) - rem
  7. 02:01:301 (530) - → 02:01:492
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:40:568 add d
  2. 01:26:237 (253) - rem (?
  3. 01:39:613 (298) - → 01:39:995
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:45:154 add k
[Kantan]

  • well,,, i think this diff so easy
  1. 00:14:390 (7) - change d
    00:21:269 (17) - change d
    00:23:562 (20) - change d
Topic Starter
Senritsu

Cihyaa wrote:

hi from PM

a,,haha ww

really really sorry;; np~ www

[Oni]
  1. 00:14:963 (43,44) - change d d following the vocal so, no
  2. 00:18:786 (59,60) - change k d ^
  3. 00:25:377 (86) - rem changed the pattern there~
  4. 00:32:543 (118) - change d done~
  5. 00:34:645 (125,126,127) - change k d d changed to k d k
  6. 01:04:740 (259) - rem done
  7. 02:01:301 (530) - → 02:01:492 sounds weird for me.. no change~
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:40:568 add d done
  2. 01:26:237 (253) - rem (? hmm.. okay
  3. 01:39:613 (298) - → 01:39:995 mm.. no, i'm following the instrument there..
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:45:154 add k done
[Kantan]

  • well,,, i think this diff so easy because this is kantan? www
  1. 00:14:390 (7) - change d changed
    00:21:269 (17) - change d changed
    00:23:562 (20) - change d changed~
thanks for mod.. and star! ><
Stefan
Hey, coming for the M4M! First time I try to mod with TKSalt's Modding site:

General

Looks fine.

Kantan

00:30:441 (27,29) - I am not sure if this is beginner-friendly. It actually could also be d but it's up to you.
00:39:230 (37,38) - d D is bad here. It would work if you use k D
00:48:020 (49) - d, sounds better (like 00:49:931 (51,52) )
01:07:129 (72) - The same thing I have said about 00:30:441 (27,29).
01:16:301 (81) - ^

=> Kiai looks great, even so I think it could (that means not it would be better) made a bit easier since you have on 01:31:969 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108) used many Two-Notes Combos. It feels okay to play but not sure at all.

Futsuu

00:16:683 (15,16) - Maybe kdd? It fits wonderful imo
01:14:008 (126) - Either change this to k or to D. K fits nowhere except for 00:23:562 (31).
01:25:855 (148) - d because the voice is a bit deeper as usual.
01:26:428 - Add k? It fits with the two following circles really good.
01:39:230 (172) - Make this to d, it cause a much better emphasizing on 01:40:377 (173).
01:41:523 (174) - Why the K? D: Make this as k and put also on 01:41:906 k.
01:44:963 (180) - d?
02:09:613 - Maybe k? It's up to you if you find it too hard or unnecessary. I think it fits with the Beat you've put also k on 02:07:511 (224).

=> Kiai looks random in this Diff, the non-Kiai Parts are nice.

Muzukashii

00:05:791 (12,13,14,15) - (14) looks misplaced imo. Maybe you can change this pattern to kd kdd, that sounds good and fits to the upcoming beats.
00:31:778 (86,87) - Move both to the following white Ticks. Change (86) to d and it will sounds much better on the white tick. (87) would follow the Voice on 00:32:352.
00:40:950 (117) - The circle is unneeded, delete?
00:59:867 (170,171,172) - Personally I think the Triplet is unneeded. I suggest to keep the first k, the rest should be deleted.
01:39:613 (298) - I'd perfer not to press here any button because of the voice, delete it?
02:11:332 (398,399,400,401,402) - I find it doesn't fits so well like 02:04:453 (380,381,382,383,384,385). Try to repeat this pattern.

=> Nice Muzukashii, just delete the unneeded Circles I've pointed out.

Oni

00:45:249 (170) - I don't really get this Stream, it plays way better without this circle.
00:45:918 - Add a circle here, sounds awkward with that little break here. orz
01:15:154 (300) - Personally I find the Drumroll weirdly placed. Well, that's my opinion..
01:39:613 (415) - Same as Muzukashii.
02:00:345 (523) - Same as 00:45:249 (170).

=> Oni is nice! Calm but funny to play. :)
hibarirailwayz
via my M4M queue

[Kantan]
  1. 01:28:912 (96,97) - I comparing here 01:24:326 (90) and 01:24:708 - , you should remove 01:29:294 - . These are same pattern.
  2. 01:31:969 (101) - if you use only the voice, you should remove it. Because This note follow the drum sound.
  3. I want more Unity of rhythm in kiai time, because If it is not, I can't catch the beat and the song.
[Normal]
  1. 00:52:988 (85) - You follow the drum sound but in former and latter you completely use the voice and the drum sound is not too big. I suggest removing it.
  2. 01:31:969 - ^
  3. IMO, its not clear you use the voice or the drum.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:32:543 (88) - k. In this part, you use the digital high pitch sound, and and compared the former notes, This sound is same, and done latter, this is high pitch.
    If you want to say you use drum sound, you should fix the catching beat of this part, IMO.
  2. 01:43:243 (308) - remove. You follow voice in this part, so It's not good suddenly use the drum sound.
  3. 02:10:950 (397) - d. In this part you only use k in strong sound such as=02:07:511 - ,02:09:613 - ,02:12:097 -
[Oni]
  1. 00:05:218 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - This part is dense as the beginning of this song, and this part of sound is not loud. suggestion="ddkdddk→d kdd k"
  2. 02:09:995 - add d? you catch the different instrument comparing former in here=02:09:422 (563,564,565). If you completely do so, you should change.
Thanks M4M~
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Senritsu
wtf i have wrote so long reason and it closed by accident asdf ==
and sorry for late response eue;

Stefan wrote:

Hey, coming for the M4M! First time I try to mod with TKSalt's Modding site:

General

Looks fine.

Kantan

00:30:441 (27,29) - I am not sure if this is beginner-friendly. It actually could also be d but it's up to you. changed
00:39:230 (37,38) - d D is bad here. It would work if you use k D done too
00:48:020 (49) - d, sounds better (like 00:49:931 (51,52) ) too
01:07:129 (72) - The same thing I have said about 00:30:441 (27,29). ^
01:16:301 (81) - ^ ^

=> Kiai looks great, even so I think it could (that means not it would be better) made a bit easier since you have on 01:31:969 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108) used many Two-Notes Combos. It feels okay to play but not sure at all. removed (104) and changed a little bit there

Futsuu

00:16:683 (15,16) - Maybe kdd? It fits wonderful imo changed to ddk instead of kdd
01:14:008 (126) - Either change this to k or to D. K fits nowhere except for 00:23:562 (31). changed to D
01:25:855 (148) - d because the voice is a bit deeper as usual. done, while changing the pattern too
01:26:428 - Add k? It fits with the two following circles really good. ^
01:39:230 (172) - Make this to d, it cause a much better emphasizing on 01:40:377 (173). done
01:41:523 (174) - Why the K? D: Make this as k and put also on 01:41:906 k. done~
01:44:963 (180) - d? donee
02:09:613 - Maybe k? It's up to you if you find it too hard or unnecessary. I think it fits with the Beat you've put also k on 02:07:511 (224). done~

=> Kiai looks random in this Diff, the non-Kiai Parts are nice. i was feeling random when i map this diff lols

Muzukashii

00:05:791 (12,13,14,15) - (14) looks misplaced imo. Maybe you can change this pattern to kd kdd, that sounds good and fits to the upcoming beats. okay done~
00:31:778 (86,87) - Move both to the following white Ticks. Change (86) to d and it will sounds much better on the white tick. (87) would follow the Voice on 00:32:352. ooh~ changed too~
00:40:950 (117) - The circle is unneeded, delete? ^
00:59:867 (170,171,172) - Personally I think the Triplet is unneeded. I suggest to keep the first k, the rest should be deleted. ^
01:39:613 (298) - I'd perfer not to press here any button because of the voice, delete it? ^
02:11:332 (398,399,400,401,402) - I find it doesn't fits so well like 02:04:453 (380,381,382,383,384,385). Try to repeat this pattern. ~

=> Nice Muzukashii, just delete the unneeded Circles I've pointed out.

Oni

00:45:249 (170) - I don't really get this Stream, it plays way better without this circle. done~
00:45:918 - Add a circle here, sounds awkward with that little break here. orz ^
01:15:154 (300) - Personally I find the Drumroll weirdly placed. Well, that's my opinion.. ah yes.. forgot to delete it earlier.. changed the drumroll to ddd~
01:39:613 (415) - Same as Muzukashii. hmm. ok though. i felt really weird with that little empty space there..
02:00:345 (523) - Same as 00:45:249 (170). done~

=> Oni is nice! Calm but funny to play. :)

hibarirailwayz wrote:

via my M4M queue

[Kantan]
  1. 01:28:912 (96,97) - I comparing here 01:24:326 (90) and 01:24:708 - , you should remove 01:29:294 - . These are same pattern. done~
  2. 01:31:969 (101) - if you use only the voice, you should remove it. Because This note follow the drum sound. ^
  3. I want more Unity of rhythm in kiai time, because If it is not, I can't catch the beat and the song.
[Normal]
  1. 00:52:988 (85) - You follow the drum sound but in former and latter you completely use the voice and the drum sound is not too big. I suggest removing it.
  2. 01:31:969 - ^
  3. IMO, its not clear you use the voice or the drum.i'm following both. because, there is a part, when i can follow the drum, and can't follow the vocal. and the reverse
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:32:543 (88) - k. In this part, you use the digital high pitch sound, and and compared the former notes, This sound is same, and done latter, this is high pitch.
    If you want to say you use drum sound, you should fix the catching beat of this part, IMO. changed hmm.. hope this is what do you mean eue
  2. 01:43:243 (308) - remove. You follow voice in this part, so It's not good suddenly use the drum sound. done~
  3. 02:10:950 (397) - d. In this part you only use k in strong sound such as=02:07:511 - ,02:09:613 - ,02:12:097 - instead of changing it, i removed it lols
[Oni]
  1. 00:05:218 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - This part is dense as the beginning of this song, and this part of sound is not loud. suggestion="ddkdddk→d kdd k" changed o3ob
  2. 02:09:995 - add d? you catch the different instrument comparing former in here=02:09:422 (563,564,565). If you completely do so, you should change. hmm.. okay
Thanks M4M~
Good luck!
thanks for mod~! ></
Evening
From Zenx' Mod Queue!

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Just in case you don't know what's invert | All d > k, k > d, D > K, K > D|

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems

BPM

No Problems

Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

From observation, I can see you are mapping towards the click sound at the start
00:11:332 (28) - k > d | Therefore, there shouldn't be a kat here
00:14:199 (39) - ^
00:23:180 (74,75,76,77,78) - Invert | the pitch is ascending, I suggest dons then kats
00:40:950 (152) - k > d | Might want to have a contrast between vocals and the extra note here, mapping vocals to kats and others to dons
00:57:957 (219) - d > k | Contrast between vocal and other notes, use kat for the vocal "ji" here
01:05:600 (261) - d > k | Same here
01:29:103 (367) - k > d | Same reason

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

Muzukashii
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:16:109 (37,38,39) - k,k,d > k,k,k | This pattern is too hard for muzu, consider changing it to a one-sounded triplet
00:19:740 (49) - d > k | Vocal "ka" is high pitched, use a kat
00:26:428 (65,66) - Swap | The first vocal is higher-pitched, use kat ( can't determine the lyrics :c )
01:02:160 (166,167,168) - Ctrl + G | High pitched vocal on 166, consider using kat there
01:39:230 (284) - d > K or k | Vocal "me" is high-pitched and drags on for quite a bit, might want to use K or k
01:49:740 (314) - k > d | No vocal here, use a don

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Futsuu
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00:13:243 (9) - k > d | Vocal is low-pitched here
00:26:428 - + k | Low pitched vocal here, use a kat due to difficulty

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guhehehe i don't want to mod kantan :3 No problems found though
Topic Starter
Senritsu

lZenxl wrote:

From Zenx' Mod Queue!

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Just in case you don't know what's invert | All d > k, k > d, D > K, K > D|

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Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

From observation, I can see you are mapping towards the click sound at the start
00:11:332 (28) - k > d | Therefore, there shouldn't be a kat here i'm following the music owo
00:14:199 (39) - ^ done~
00:23:180 (74,75,76,77,78) - Invert | the pitch is ascending, I suggest dons then kats okay done
00:40:950 (152) - k > d | Might want to have a contrast between vocals and the extra note here, mapping vocals to kats and others to dons no? the vocal still hanging there o.o
00:57:957 (219) - d > k | Contrast between vocal and other notes, use kat for the vocal "ji" here err no. the pitch between 219 and 220 is high. i'd prefer d k there
01:05:600 (261) - d > k | Same here variation. i'm folowing the drum at the first there, then the second the vocal, like what you suggest here
01:29:103 (367) - k > d | Same reason removed, because sounds weird. w

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Muzukashii
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:16:109 (37,38,39) - k,k,d > k,k,k | This pattern is too hard for muzu, consider changing it to a one-sounded triplet oh yes haha xD done~
00:19:740 (49) - d > k | Vocal "ka" is high pitched, use a kat it's not a big difference, and the drum seems to be heard, so no change here
00:26:428 (65,66) - Swap | The first vocal is higher-pitched, use kat ( can't determine the lyrics :c ) okay
01:02:160 (166,167,168) - Ctrl + G | High pitched vocal on 166, consider using kat there no Dx 166 and 167 are same, and they're lower than 168
01:39:230 (284) - d > K or k | Vocal "me" is high-pitched and drags on for quite a bit, might want to use K or k changed to k~
01:49:740 (314) - k > d | No vocal here, use a don done~

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00:13:243 (9) - k > d | Vocal is low-pitched here done~
00:26:428 - + k | Low pitched vocal here, use a kat due to difficulty uhm. okay

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guhehehe i don't want to mod kantan :3 No problems found though oh you >3<
thanks for mod~!
Jerry
M4M~ :3

  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:12:097 (4) - the "ka" in the vocals is high pitched, change this to kat?
  2. 00:24:708 (21) - the pitch drops here, change to don?
  3. 01:31:205 (99) - ^ same with above, change to don?
  4. 01:39:230 (109) - ^, don?
  5. 01:51:842 (124) - ^, don?
  6. 01:56:428 (128,129) - k d for these two? It fits this part of the music better imo

  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:44:199 (68) - change this to don so that it's the same with what you did at 00:48:785 (78,79) ?
  2. 00:46:492 (73) - the vocals are high pitched here, change to kat?
  3. 01:17:638 (132) - delete? I don't see you adding it on the other patterns such as the one at 01:21:269
  4. 01:20:887 - change to don, same with what you did at 00:48:785 (78,79)

  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:12:097 (26,27) - change to k d so that it's the same with what you did at 00:09:422 (20,21) ?

    I really like this muzu, great job! >w<

  • [Oni]
  1. 00:10:377 (25) - how about a kat on this note? it has a higher pitch than the (26) note in the vocals o3o

  2. 00:28:912 (102,103) - don for these two? the "to" and "no" in the vocals has a lower pitch than the "wa" vocal at 00:29:294 so I think it'll be better to put it as d d k :3

  3. 00:38:084 (138,139,140) - almost the same reason as above ^ with the low pitch and high pitch vocals , change this to d k d ?

  4. 00:47:256 (174) - vocal slightly high pitched, change to kat?
  5. 00:56:428 (208) - ^ same for this, change to kat?
  6. 00:58:721 (214) - change this to don? Because in the music, this part sounds exactly the same as 00:58:530

  7. 01:41:046 (410) - I think deleting this will make this part flow better because currently, a dkkkkkd stream right after a kkkkd stream sounds too "forced" in my opinion ><

  8. 01:52:702 and 01:52:988 - the pitch rises slightly in the music at these 2 parts, change to kat?


That's all from me :3
Good luck for rank and here's a star from me ~
Topic Starter
Senritsu

Jerry wrote:

M4M~ :3

  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:12:097 (4) - the "ka" in the vocals is high pitched, change this to kat? no change, sounds weird to me. and, there's a higher pitch there at 00:12:479, but i didn't add k, because there will be too many to add and makes it too many 1/1 here
  2. 00:24:708 (21) - the pitch drops here, change to don? it sounds same ;w;
  3. 01:31:205 (99) - ^ same with above, change to don? changed~
  4. 01:39:230 (109) - ^, don? okay changed..
  5. 01:51:842 (124) - ^, don? done~
  6. 01:56:428 (128,129) - k d for these two? It fits this part of the music better imo b-but the vocal is louder.. >3> and d k then d is just like a swing~ XDD

  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:44:199 (68) - change this to don so that it's the same with what you did at 00:48:785 (78,79) ? done~
  2. 00:46:492 (73) - the vocals are high pitched here, change to kat? okay. because 73 is same with 74, swapped all from 74, 75, and 76, 77
  3. 01:17:638 (132) - delete? I don't see you adding it on the other patterns such as the one at 01:21:269 oh yes. my bad ><; done~
  4. 01:20:887 - change to don, same with what you did at 00:48:785 (78,79) done too~

  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:12:097 (26,27) - change to k d so that it's the same with what you did at 00:09:422 (20,21) ? but the pitch sounds perfectly fit with d k uwu

    I really like this muzu, great job! >w< oh you >w<

  • [Oni]
  1. 00:10:377 (25) - how about a kat on this note? it has a higher pitch than the (26) note in the vocals o3o lol changed to d k, to make this following the music XD

  2. 00:28:912 (102,103) - don for these two? the "to" and "no" in the vocals has a lower pitch than the "wa" vocal at 00:29:294 so I think it'll be better to put it as d d k :3 done :3

  3. 00:38:084 (138,139,140) - almost the same reason as above ^ with the low pitch and high pitch vocals , change this to d k d ? ^

  4. 00:47:256 (174) - vocal slightly high pitched, change to kat? sounds pretty same for me, no change ><
  5. 00:56:428 (208) - ^ same for this, change to kat? ^
  6. 00:58:721 (214) - change this to don? Because in the music, this part sounds exactly the same as 00:58:530 done~

  7. 01:41:046 (410) - I think deleting this will make this part flow better because currently, a dkkkkkd stream right after a kkkkd stream sounds too "forced" in my opinion >< hmm.. okay

  8. 01:52:702 and 01:52:988 - the pitch rises slightly in the music at these 2 parts, change to kat? i indicated this part as a descending pitch, getting lower and lower, so no change


That's all from me :3
Good luck for rank and here's a star from me ~
thanks for mod and star ><
Coro
Taiko mod~
All are suggestion unless in red.

[Futsuu]
01:39:230 (173) - k? the pitch goes up

[Muzukashii]
01:23:371 (233) - I think del, it might be hard for muzu players to hit this note right after a triplet and a finish
01:32:543 (261) - ^

[Oni]
01:09:230 (261) - k?

good luck for rank~
Topic Starter
Senritsu
Changed all except both at Muzukashii, deleted the triplet, so it sounds d d D not ddd D again, because it sounds really weird if i delete the finish, and as the mark of the beginning of the kiai =w=;;
Thanks for the mod~
DenoisoGoiso
.A.)
mungkin gak ada problem yg ditemukan :3/
pro map >.< like senri /no


keep good job moe senri o/
Topic Starter
Senritsu
jahat amat lu-- /nggak
thanks <3 ><)/
ReySHeL
hi Senritsu :)
really nice map!!
it was fun to play with DT ;)
rank plz! xD
Groumiezi


wat

D:

moga ranked ;D
Topic Starter
Senritsu
ikr lol
sistem star rank yang baru emang ngaco >3>
thanks grou, and reyshel too _(:3
Teru21
okay i'm here to mod *A*)/ indonesia de ii ka XD cause I'm stupid *RUNS* nvm ;; its easier to mod in my own language but I may use english sometime nvmnvm ;;

I'm not modding futsuu or kantan ;; not mah interest lel ;; nvmnvm .///w///. lets go *A*)9

[Muzu]
00:02:543 (5,6,15,16) - (5,15) buat jadi d , supaya nda mbosenin karna pattern dari awal sampe timing tertentu (d kd k ; k d)^4 ;; it'll be great if you use system euhm a - b - a - b ;; *A*)/ kayak mau buat pantun gitu lohh owo;; so yeah ;; (d kd k ; d ; d kd k ; k ; d)^2 XD I'M SO MATHE TODAY, okay. I suggest you to get d d first instead of k d , ya karna d itu punya feeling yang lebih berat dan dan ;;; itu ;; biasa d juga di pake di heavy beat ;; jadi akan lebih baik jika anda menggunakan d terlebih dahulu.
00:09:039 (x,x,20) - add notes here ;; ini kedengeran ada suara hunyuu ;; jadi ga gitu bosen sih ;; probably (k,k,d)
00:09:804 (21) - ini mestinya k ;; soalnya bgm nya ga ada suara drum ;; dan vocalnya hngg too light ahue
00:12:097 - AAAAAAAAAAA ;; k kdkkd k ;; better ;; ngikutin vocal , ngikutin drum ;; alasan heavy beat nya ga d juga sama ^
00:14:390 (33) - ini yang mestinya d. karna dia heavy beat, plus bagus kalo di sinkron dengan yang bagian depan
00:14:963 (34,35,36,37) - this should be ddkk ;; atau dkkd atau dkkk ;; terserah deh , yang penting depannya d. tapi gw saranin yag ddkk
00:16:109 (39,40,41) - and this suppose to be kdd. karna not nya kan "mi-re-do" apapun itu ;; pokoknya suaranya turun
00:18:402 (46,47,48,49) - this should be kkdd same reason as above
00:21:269 (54,55,56,57) - sama , sama yang depan.
00:23:180 (59,60,61,62,63,64) - lebih ke d d D ;kd d ke gw. kenapa D? karna ada instrumen yang baru , main di part ini. jadi di kasih tekanan dikit XD , terus yang kd d , itu karna tekanan drum nya keras banget ;; suatu kesalahan besar kalo kamu pake kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk ;;; ;w;)/ give da map a bang *A*)/////
00:25:473 (65,66) - apalagi ini ;; aduh senritsu =3= k d ;; karna vocale nya .w.)/ dan karna drumnya juga =A=
00:31:205 (82,83,84) - kdk ;; ikutin drum
00:33:116 - add note disini, terasa kosong ;; karna sebelumnya rada ngikutin vocale juga
00:34:645 (91,92,93) - kind of kdd disini ;; sama ikutin drum ;; pokoknya last not harus d deh
00:36:555 (98) - I prefer you to delete this and add notes at 00:36:460 - "d" and 00:36:746 - "k" ;; 00:36:173 - ofc ini juga d
mungkin ^ ini rada susah ;; jadi 00:39:230 (108,109,110) - ini (109) nya buang deh ;; lalu 00:39:995 - ini buat jadi k ;; YOU CAN DELETE THIS TOO 00:40:568 (112) - I'm happie if you do so wwww
00:41:141 - and add a d here XD
00:44:963 (125,126,127) - actually i'd prefer this dkd ;; tapi mungkin dkd agak susah ;; nvm , just splurting my opinion here
00:49:931 (141) - you may want to add a D here ;; karna ada suara BAMMM gimana gitu ya disana.. ato maybe K ;; I don't see a single K here ;; prefer D sih ;; tapi terserah senritsu ;; also 00:50:313 (142) - ini buang aja. ga gitu penting sih kalo di tambah bignotes tadi ;; biar ke distract dan kerasa gitu feel nya. dan kalo bisa 00:49:740 (140) - dipindah 1/2 beat lebih awal aja. :3 ofc it'll be d I guess
00:54:899 - ga buat triplet disini?
00:55:664 - sama kayak atas. heavy beat ;;

selebih nya le rasa masalah heavy beat senritsu =3= ;; perhatiin drum yang beratnya dimana. okay? gw loncat langsung ke reff

01:22:415 (232,x,233,234,235) - kdkdD ;; di chat waktu itu le teru juga bilang kan? di ramein aja waktu reff. XD
01:23:944 - add k here .A.)/ penuhin penuhin ;;
01:24:708 (241) - should be d ;;
01:25:090 - add k, sama kayak atas.

oh.. reffrain penuhin pls. karna mood/feeling nya beda. jadi supaya kerasa ;; kalo ga terlalu monotone. also triplet2 di buang gih .A.)/ ;; biar ga gitu susah. :3 cuma buat beat 1/1 dan 1/2 aja ya :3

Oni coming soon .w.)/
Topic Starter
Senritsu
Teru : karena saya lupa update, dan karena laptop mati.. reply hilang semua.
luckily, gw sempet SS replynya gg

and i still can't either update the beatmap or uploading the .osz of them. my internet sucks.
Teru21

Senritsu wrote:

Teru : karena saya lupa update, dan karena laptop mati.. reply hilang semua.
luckily, gw sempet SS replynya gg

and i still can't either update the beatmap or uploading the .osz of them. my internet sucks.
The Major problem is actually at the heavy beat.. karna suara drumnya itu keluar banget. jadi suara drumnya itu majorly harus di ikutin + vocal mungkin ngebuat dari dkd <---suara drum jadi kdk <----- suara vocal.
imo sih gitu aja.. le udah ga mau ikut campur lagi D: ntar di bilang ngerusak style mapping orang
Topic Starter
Senritsu
i know.. but kalo imma following the mod sama aja kaya remapping dong..
=w=;;;
alacat
hi! :) from here https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/190019/

[Kantan]
  1. 00:17:447 (11) - This note doesn't need here in my opinion. I think you made to follow the vocal at this part. So you should consider removing it here.
  2. 00:24:708 (21) - I feel "k" is better for playing here.
  3. 00:39:230 (37,38) - as you can listen this part, they have same sound. So Please use same sound dd or kk. it would fit well with this kind of music.
  4. 01:33:116 (101) - move to here ? 01:32:734 -
  5. 02:04:453 (139,140,141,142) - This "d" part is a little boring. i hope you remake another pattern like this "dkdk" . It would be fun for playing.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:14:963 (12) - I have a sense of discomfort with this part 00:14:390 (11,12,13,14) - . Because you use all "k". How about useing "d" here ? 00:14:963 (12) -
  2. 00:23:562 (31,32,33,34) - ^ Same.
  3. 00:51:078 (87,88,89,90) - ^
  4. 01:32:352 (170,171,172,173,174,175) - I prefer to use 3 + 3 at this part like this
  5. 01:52:988 (210,211,212,213,214,215) - I feel this part is a bit hard for bigenner. Please reduce 1/2 rhythm >< So try to make this rhythm
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:43:434 - i feel empty here, it is better to use 1/1 rhythm for playing also i can hear sound of a bass drum. so consider adding a note here.
[Oni]
  1. 00:23:084 - Please check this sound. you followed same sound at here 00:22:988 (70,71,72,73,74,75) - . So i recommend you to add a note here.
  2. 00:43:434 - Same as Muzukashii diff.
ahhh nothing to say T.T Good luck ~ !
Topic Starter
Senritsu

alacat wrote:

hi! :) from here https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/190019/

[Kantan]
  1. 00:17:447 (11) - This note doesn't need here in my opinion. I think you made to follow the vocal at this part. So you should consider removing it here. well, the drum is pretty heavy there.. leaving it empty like that would probably make a lot of empty space
  2. 00:24:708 (21) - I feel "k" is better for playing here. it's k already.. o.o lol
  3. 00:39:230 (37,38) - as you can listen this part, they have same sound. So Please use same sound dd or kk. it would fit well with this kind of music. my bad. changed to dd
  4. 01:33:116 (101) - move to here ? 01:32:734 - done~
  5. 02:04:453 (139,140,141,142) - This "d" part is a little boring. i hope you remake another pattern like this "dkdk" . It would be fun for playing. changed to "ddkk" to empashize the pattern and as well to emphasize with the vocal~
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:14:963 (12) - I have a sense of discomfort with this part 00:14:390 (11,12,13,14) - . Because you use all "k". How about useing "d" here ? 00:14:963 (12) - haha ok~
  2. 00:23:562 (31,32,33,34) - ^ Same. ^
  3. 00:51:078 (87,88,89,90) - ^ ^
  4. 01:32:352 (170,171,172,173,174,175) - I prefer to use 3 + 3 at this part like this changed to other pattern x)
  5. 01:52:988 (210,211,212,213,214,215) - I feel this part is a bit hard for bigenner. Please reduce 1/2 rhythm >< So try to make this rhythm whoa nice~ thanks xD
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:43:434 - i feel empty here, it is better to use 1/1 rhythm for playing also i can hear sound of a bass drum. so consider adding a note here. added k~
[Oni]
  1. 00:23:084 - Please check this sound. you followed same sound at here 00:22:988 (70,71,72,73,74,75) - . So i recommend you to add a note here. actually before, i've added a circle here. but then, some modder protest about it. (i forgot why, but some asked me to del it lol) i will be waiting for other modder about this.
  2. 00:43:434 - Same as Muzukashii diff. okay~
ahhh nothing to say T.T Good luck ~ !
thanks for mod alacat~~
ts8zs
From long long ago
oni
00:20:504 (60) - k
00:32:543 (112) - k
00:48:020 (175) - k
muzu
00:20:504 (52) - k
01:24:899 (241) - del
01:39:230 - slider or spinner?
Topic Starter
Senritsu

ts8zs wrote:

From long long ago
oni
00:20:504 (60) - k no change
00:32:543 (112) - k ok~
00:48:020 (175) - k no change. following the vocal ><
muzu
00:20:504 (52) - k no change, bcs i'm following the vocal from high to low..
01:24:899 (241) - del done
01:39:230 - slider or spinner? added slider~
thankyou for mod~ XD
MMzz
I just have a few rhythm suggestions for Oni! This map is really good and deserves a bubble. (You got so many mods @_@ )

General:
There are a few unsnapped notes through all the difficulties.
00:53:562 (194) - In Oni, unsnapped by 1ms.
00:18:977 (21) - In Futsuu, unsnapped by 1ms.
01:25:856 (92) - In Kantan, unsnapped by 1ms.


Oni:
01:35:600 - Starting here we can link the two patterns and make pattern with awesome flow. First add a kat to this current point and at 01:35:695. Then change 01:35:791 (391) - to a don. Then swap these two notes 01:35:982 (394,395) - . Here is a picture if the text sounds confusing: This new pattern has great flow and follows the song really well.

01:38:657 (406) - We are gonna do the same thing here mostly, with adding notes and intertwining patterns. First make the current note a k. Then add a don at 01:39:039. After that, add dons here 01:39:422 and here 01:39:517 and a kat at 01:39:613 to make ddk. Finally, add dons at 01:39:804 and 01:40:186 to finish the new pattern. Again here is a picture if you get confused:

01:42:479 (421) - This will be a smaller one. Change this current note to kat because of the drumline. Then starting here 01:42:861 make a kkd pattern by putting a kat at the current tick and another at 01:42:957. Then a don at 01:43:052. Here is the picture:

01:49:740 - Add a don here to keep the rhythm in tact between the 1/4 streams.

01:53:944 (488,489) - Swap these two notes. The current pattern doesn't have much value to the rhythm of the song. Feels really weird to play. Optionally you can add some 1/4 into it to. Like so:

01:55:281 (494) - Lastly, change this to a don. It simply feels more natural to start this section with a don after the previous pattern.


Really good for your first map. Call me back for a bubble when you are ready.
Topic Starter
Senritsu
because searching for both mods and bats are fun.. :'D/
applied all~ thanks! XD
MMzz
Bubbled!
Love
Discussing something real quick before ranking.
10nya
go
Love
K, fixed a little sv bug that really didn't do anything at all.



Really nice mapset, and grats on your first rank :D
Topic Starter
Senritsu
thank you <3 xDDD
delayed 2 days bcs internet lol

Edit
Hinsvar : if connection loves me :'D/
Hinsvar
Congrats \o/

Get moar ranked maps pls
JUDYDANNY
finally ranked. Gratz! :)
Nwolf
wooooo gz : D
alacat
yay!
Akemi_Homura
gratz~! :)
qoot8123
Gratz! :)
mingmichael
finalllyyyyyyyyyyy akhirnyaaaaaaaa
SENRITSU SELAMAT~ :D
Stefan
Nice, congrats!
Topic Starter
Senritsu
Thankyou guys www
Yaaayy :'D// Finally ranked gg
Like a very early birthday present from osu! ww
toara_fict
Gratz♥
Asagi Mutsuki
remember modding this a long way back ago lol
gratz \o\
Cihyaa
gratz :)
Dainesl
The very first map I modded is finally ranked congrats! ;w;
Nwolf

cdhsausageboy wrote:

remember modding this a long way back ago lol
gratz \o\
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