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School Food Punishment - in bloom [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Shilkey
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 23 november 2013 at 00:05:21

Artist: School Food Punishment
Title: in bloom
Tags: sfp Liiraye reyshel Prog-Roid
BPM: 165
Filesize: 5412kb
Play Time: 03:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab Normal (3,31 stars, 221 notes)
  2. Hard (4,95 stars, 486 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 684 notes)
  4. ReySHeL's Muzu (4,71 stars, 768 notes)
  5. ReySHeL's Oni (4,83 stars, 1022 notes)
Download: School Food Punishment - in bloom
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal is collab with Liiraye
ReySHeL
hi~
offset 300 is better >w<
good luck!
Topic Starter
Shilkey

ReySHeL wrote:

hi~
offset 300 is better >w<
good luck!
Thanks
listless
1. disable countdown
2. 02:19:940 (1) -
fix that to 1/3 snap
adjust slider length
Topic Starter
Shilkey

listless wrote:

1. disable countdown
2. 02:19:940 (1) -
fix that to 1/3 snap
adjust slider length

fixed
Gyuunyu
Hallo!

Here is my mod

General : Nothing

Insane

00:29:350 (1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/4eETt.jpg - just rotate 90° clockwise twice and reverse the section after that place it on the beginning of 00:28:623
00:30:078 (3,4) - Try this ? http://puu.sh/4eF1X.jpg
00:35:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sounds better if you could add claps on the white and red lines
00:37:532 (3) - put this note at x444 y96
00:37:714 (4) - put this x360 y320 and the tail at x264 y348 as same form
00:42:078 (5,1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/4eELw.jpg sounds alot better then having constant 1/4
00:54:078 (1) - pull the red box alitle upwards ? http://puu.sh/4eFAG.jpg

01:11:576 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - these parts feels alitle akward. try giving them more jump feeling by just give them more distance to eachother ex: http://puu.sh/4f5Y6.jpg

01:12:077 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - i really liked the streams but i wasn't a big fan at the last note. try this ? http://puu.sh/4eGlr.jpg
01:31:940 (1,2,3) - Finish on the beginning ( feels more dynamic )
01:40:987 (3,4) - same as with ( 00:42:078 (5,1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/4eELw.jpg sounds alot better then having constant 1/4 )
01:43:576 (1) - midle at x224 y288. End tail at x176 y304
01:51:940 (5,1,2) - you should copy the sliders at 00:53:758 (5,1) -
02:02:304 (1,2) - add a note betwen those two ?
02:13:394 (4,5) - add finish on both ( you can hear the cymbal sound on that part )
02:24:304 - lower the volume to 20% ?
02:30:122 (1) - volume at 30%
02:30:849 (1) - volume at 35%
02:31:576 (1) - volume at 45%
02:32:304 (1) - volume at 55%
02:33:031 (1) - volume at 70%
03:14:485 - volume at 5%

hmm I noticed that you don't have clap sounds added on most of you streams. I suggest you do add some clap sounds to them, and if you do, add them on white and reds ( or you could ignore it all most of these are sugestions anyways )

Hard

00:04:576 (1) - step i down to the white line.
00:25:394 (5,6) - the second slider looks weird. try this ? http://puu.sh/4f7ho.jpg
00:26:485 (8) - make this one more rounder ?
00:33:576 - put a circle here. And push the spinner 1 notch
00:35:213 - volume 5%
01:14:849 (6) - i don't think it sounds good there. try to put circle there insted http://puu.sh/4f7Fn.jpg
02:18:485 (5) - make it like this ? http://puu.sh/4f7Qe.jpg
02:42:485 (3) - make it like this ? http://puu.sh/4f7WV.jpg
02:43:394 (6) - copy paste (3) and reverse section

Hope it helped!

Good luck with your map~

I think i've done a ton of misspellings.. w/e
Topic Starter
Shilkey

Gyuunyu wrote:

Hallo!

Here is my mod

General : Nothing

Insane

00:29:350 (1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/4eETt.jpg - just rotate 90° clockwise twice and reverse the section after that place it on the beginning of 00:28:623 nah
00:30:078 (3,4) - Try this ? http://puu.sh/4eF1X.jpg no
00:35:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sounds better if you could add claps on the white and red lines added claps on (1,2,3,4) instead.
00:37:532 (3) - put this note at x444 y96 okay
00:37:714 (4) - put this x360 y320 and the tail at x264 y348 as same form no
00:42:078 (5,1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/4eELw.jpg sounds alot better then having constant 1/4 no
00:54:078 (1) - pull the red box alitle upwards ? http://puu.sh/4eFAG.jpg okay

01:11:576 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - these parts feels alitle akward. try giving them more jump feeling by just give them more distance to eachother ex: http://puu.sh/4f5Y6.jpg I slowed down the velocity causing them to be closer together. I really think this part is better without jumps.

01:12:077 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - i really liked the streams but i wasn't a big fan at the last note. try this ? http://puu.sh/4eGlr.jpg no
01:31:940 (1,2,3) - Finish on the beginning ( feels more dynamic ) They already have finishes. (2) doesn't need one because I'm following what the drummer did.
01:40:987 (3,4) - same as with ( 00:42:078 (5,1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/4eELw.jpg sounds alot better then having constant 1/4 ) no
01:43:576 (1) - midle at x224 y288. End tail at x176 y304 okay
01:51:940 (5,1,2) - you should copy the sliders at 00:53:758 (5,1) - I'm going for a different rythm on this part. Repeating it would be boring.
02:02:304 (1,2) - add a note betwen those two ? no
02:13:394 (4,5) - add finish on both ( you can hear the cymbal sound on that part ) No, only (3) has the proper cymbal. (4 and 5) are being covered by that.
02:24:304 - lower the volume to 20% ? okay
02:30:122 (1) - volume at 30% okay
02:30:849 (1) - volume at 35% okay
02:31:576 (1) - volume at 45% okay
02:32:304 (1) - volume at 55% okay
02:33:031 (1) - volume at 70% okay
03:14:485 - volume at 5% no

hmm I noticed that you don't have clap sounds added on most of you streams. I suggest you do add some clap sounds to them, and if you do, add them on white and reds ( or you could ignore it all most of these are sugestions anyways ) I'll do what I can.

Hard

00:04:576 (1) - step i down to the white line. okay
00:25:394 (5,6) - the second slider looks weird. try this ? http://puu.sh/4f7ho.jpg okay
00:26:485 (8) - make this one more rounder ? okay
00:33:576 - put a circle here. And push the spinner 1 notch okay
00:35:213 - volume 5% no
01:14:849 (6) - i don't think it sounds good there. try to put circle there insted http://puu.sh/4f7Fn.jpg okay
02:18:485 (5) - make it like this ? http://puu.sh/4f7Qe.jpg okay
02:42:485 (3) - make it like this ? http://puu.sh/4f7WV.jpg okay
02:43:394 (6) - copy paste (3) and reverse section okay

Hope it helped!

Good luck with your map~

I think i've done a ton of misspellings.. w/e
thanks!
Narunya
hello, heres my modding

General:
Sound Quality sounds quite off, perhaps 128 kb? could you get one with better quality?

Hard:

01:16:849 (6) - confusing part not sure what can be done
01:21:031 (5) - please extend slider doesn't match
01:31:213 (1) - doesn't match sound, should be back n forth slider instead
01:37:031 (8) - extend for greater rythm in song i guess

01:53:576 (5,6) - feels quite empty here, maybe you should put something inbetween to keep rythm?
01:56:667 (4) - move back 1/4 to match ZJUUUUUUUN sound sond makes.
02:30:122 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - add a stream please, this looks dull and very confusing with hidden or just on nervous run.
Topic Starter
Shilkey

Narunya wrote:

hello, heres my modding

General:
Sound Quality sounds quite off, perhaps 128 kb? could you get one with better quality?

Hard:

01:16:849 (6) - confusing part not sure what can be done okay
01:21:031 (5) - please extend slider doesn't match okay
01:31:213 (1) - doesn't match sound, should be back n forth slider instead I think it's good the way it is
01:37:031 (8) - extend for greater rythm in song i guess no

01:53:576 (5,6) - feels quite empty here, maybe you should put something inbetween to keep rythm? no
01:56:667 (4) - move back 1/4 to match ZJUUUUUUUN sound sond makes. okay
02:30:122 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - add a stream please, this looks dull and very confusing with hidden or just on nervous run.no
thanks!
ashcraft_old
Collab Normal:
02:19:883 (1) - I would remove the second spinner and extend the first one to where the second one ended. Personally I think there should be only one spinner because having two back to back has always aggravated me.

Other than that good map! I enjoyed it overall
Xytox
[General]
The offset is off by about 35ms. Change offset to 264. Change it before using this mod since the time links are based of offset 264.

[Collab Normal]

00:47:576 (3,1,2,3,4) - This part feels a little bit awkward. I thought something like this felt better.



01:35:900 (3) - I really don't think you should have sliders like these that start on red lines in normals. It would feel and play much better if you placed a note where the slider starts, and then shortened down the slider to the next white downbeat after instead.



01:58:264 (1) - You should extend this spinner to here 02:00:991


[Hard]

00:08:809 - Add a note?
00:15:173 (4) - I'd suggest using 1.4x spacing on this one and then turning it about 5 degrees to make it look more pretty.
00:33:536 (3) - Maybe move this one to around x:428 y:348
00:35:718 - Maybe add a note here? Since she starts singing before the drum roll, it might confuse the player.
00:48:809 (2,3) - I'd either increase the spacing a little bit, or move them around to keep the previous slider from overlapping these two.
00:56:627 (4,1,2) - These three does not have the same spacing between each other.
01:33:536 - The stream - or I guess return sliders in this case - should start here.
01:39:900 (4,5) - I'd turn these around about -15 degrees and then move number 5 a little bit to align number 5 with the first note of the triangle that comes after.
01:43:536 (1) - Again, I'd turn this one as well to align it with the next note.
01:48:991 (4) - This one looks a bit weird. Maybe copy the slider before it and have that go down instead?
01:52:991 (3) - I'd turn this -5 degrees to align it more to number 4.
01:58:082 (2) - I think you should decrease spacing to 1.0x on this one.
02:26:082 (1) - -5 degrees again to align with next note?
02:40:991 (5) - Turn ths one about -15 degrees to make this pattern more circle like?

I don't know if the diff is done, but if it is, you should map it all the way until the end like the insane. :>

[Insane]

00:00:264 - 50% audio?
00:11:900 - 65% audio?
00:26:445 (1) - Finish?
00:38:082 (1) - Finish?
00:49:718 (1) - Finish?
01:25:718 (6) - Finish?
01:36:264 (1) - Finish?
01:47:900 (1) - Finish?
I'll admit I might enjoy finish too much for my own good. My suggestions will probably make it sound too much.

00:35:718 - Same as Hard.
00:38:627 (4) - When mapping sliders to the beat of the song (as in, not to the lyrics or any other funny or weird noises), they usually feel and play much better if they start on white lines. If you change one you should probably change all the other ones as well.
01:25:718 (6) - I'd suggest shortening down this slider and adding a note on the white downbeat. When I tried this map I had the urge to click something there. If you change one you should probably change all the other ones as well.

I don't know, there wasn't much I could say about the insane. It's very well spread out and looks nice.

There you have your mod, woohoo! \:>/
Topic Starter
Shilkey

theregkid wrote:

Collab Normal:
02:19:883 (1) - I would remove the second spinner and extend the first one to where the second one ended. Personally I think there should be only one spinner because having two back to back has always aggravated me.

Other than that good map! I enjoyed it overall
I think it's fine the way it is.

Thanks
Topic Starter
Shilkey

Xytox wrote:

[General]
The offset is off by about 35ms. Change offset to 264. Change it before using this mod since the time links are based of offset 264. that's the old mp3

[Collab Normal]

00:47:576 (3,1,2,3,4) - This part feels a little bit awkward. I thought something like this felt better. okay



01:35:900 (3) - I really don't think you should have sliders like these that start on red lines in normals. It would feel and play much better if you placed a note where the slider starts, and then shortened down the slider to the next white downbeat after instead. nah



01:58:264 (1) - You should extend this spinner to here 02:00:991 okay


[Hard]

00:08:809 - Add a note? no
00:15:173 (4) - I'd suggest using 1.4x spacing on this one and then turning it about 5 degrees to make it look more pretty. okay
00:33:536 (3) - Maybe move this one to around x:428 y:348 okay
00:35:718 - Maybe add a note here? Since she starts singing before the drum roll, it might confuse the player. no
00:48:809 (2,3) - I'd either increase the spacing a little bit, or move them around to keep the previous slider from overlapping these two. okay
00:56:627 (4,1,2) - These three does not have the same spacing between each other. okay
01:33:536 - The stream - or I guess return sliders in this case - should start here. You are correct but this is not an insane so I'd rather not have that many reverse sliders
01:39:900 (4,5) - I'd turn these around about -15 degrees and then move number 5 a little bit to align number 5 with the first note of the triangle that comes after. okay
01:43:536 (1) - Again, I'd turn this one as well to align it with the next note. okay
01:48:991 (4) - This one looks a bit weird. Maybe copy the slider before it and have that go down instead? okay
01:52:991 (3) - I'd turn this -5 degrees to align it more to number 4. okay
01:58:082 (2) - I think you should decrease spacing to 1.0x on this one. okay
02:26:082 (1) - -5 degrees again to align with next note? okay
02:40:991 (5) - Turn ths one about -15 degrees to make this pattern more circle like? okay

I don't know if the diff is done, but if it is, you should map it all the way until the end like the insane. :>

[Insane]

00:00:264 - 50% audio?no
00:11:900 - 65% audio? no
00:26:445 (1) - Finish? no
00:38:082 (1) - Finish? no
00:49:718 (1) - Finish? no
01:25:718 (6) - Finish?no
01:36:264 (1) - Finish?no
01:47:900 (1) - Finish?no
I'll admit I might enjoy finish too much for my own good. My suggestions will probably make it sound too much.

00:35:718 - Same as Hard. no
00:38:627 (4) - When mapping sliders to the beat of the song (as in, not to the lyrics or any other funny or weird noises), they usually feel and play much better if they start on white lines. If you change one you should probably change all the other ones as well. no
01:25:718 (6) - I'd suggest shortening down this slider and adding a note on the white downbeat. When I tried this map I had the urge to click something there. If you change one you should probably change all the other ones as well. no

I don't know, there wasn't much I could say about the insane. It's very well spread out and looks nice.

There you have your mod, woohoo! \:>/
thanks for the mod!!
Fushimi Rio
From queue

[General]
Breaktime should be same in same mapper's diffs. Hard and Insane has different breaktime at02:24:304 - .
Also, lengths need to be same in all diffs.

[Normal]
00:43:213 (2,3,4) - feel a little strange. maybe shorten 00:43:213 (2) - to 00:43:576 - and move 00:43:940 (3) - to00:43:758 - ?
00:56:849 (1) - start at the white line is better

01:11:576 (1,3) - sliders stacking looks bad
01:23:394 (1) - spinner should have nc
01:39:576 (3) - spacing. I suggest moving 01:37:758 (1,2) -

02:19:940 (1,1) - I'm not sure if it is ok in normal
02:24:304 (1) - from here to kiai, use soft hitsound is better

[Hard]
HP+1

00:19:940 (5,7) - looks strange
00:23:576 (7) - nc here?
00:32:304 (1) - reverse 1 time is enough, also, add a note at 00:33:213 -

01:19:940 (1,2,3,4) - don't stack them, and add a note at01:20:576 -
01:51:213 (2,3) - move 3 to x278 y291
02:27:213 (1,2) - move the 2nd grid to x158 y99
02:30:122 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - noisy...

[Insane]
00:21:576 (5,6) - ctrl+g
00:30:485 (4) - move 2nd grid to x312 y234
00:32:485 (2) - stack to 3 may be better
00:58:485 (1,2) - ctrl+g
01:33:849 (4) - delete this note and move01:33:576 (1,2,3) - away
01:41:394 (4,5) - ctrl+g

Insane is pretty good. Good luck.
Topic Starter
Shilkey

Eggache0 wrote:

From queue

[General]
Breaktime should be same in same mapper's diffs. Hard and Insane has different breaktime at02:24:304 - .
Also, lengths need to be same in all diffs. Fixed

[Normal]
00:43:213 (2,3,4) - feel a little strange. maybe shorten 00:43:213 (2) - to 00:43:576 - and move 00:43:940 (3) - to00:43:758 - ? ok
00:56:849 (1) - start at the white line is better ok

01:11:576 (1,3) - sliders stacking looks bad fixed
01:23:394 (1) - spinner should have nc why?
01:39:576 (3) - spacing. I suggest moving 01:37:758 (1,2) - ok

02:19:940 (1,1) - I'm not sure if it is ok in normal I think it's ok for for normal
02:24:304 (1) - from here to kiai, use soft hitsound is better I used soft until 02:30:485 (1) - instead

[Hard]
HP+1 ok

00:19:940 (5,7) - looks strange fixed
00:23:576 (7) - nc here? ok
00:32:304 (1) - reverse 1 time is enough, also, add a note at 00:33:213 - no

01:19:940 (1,2,3,4) - don't stack them, and add a note at01:20:576 - Fixed
01:51:213 (2,3) - move 3 to x278 y291 okay
02:27:213 (1,2) - move the 2nd grid to x158 y99 no
02:30:122 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - noisy... fixed

[Insane]
00:21:576 (5,6) - ctrl+g Sure
00:30:485 (4) - move 2nd grid to x312 y234 no
00:32:485 (2) - stack to 3 may be better no
00:58:485 (1,2) - ctrl+g no
01:33:849 (4) - delete this note and move01:33:576 (1,2,3) - away Sorry, this is a long stream
01:41:394 (4,5) - ctrl+g okay

Insane is pretty good. Good luck.
thanks for the mod!!
haha5957
All the mods are based on my pure feelings if they aren't bolded, so feel free to ignore them all
[General]
kk nice mapset

[normal]
00:42:485 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/4pdwY.jpg
00:48:304 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/4pdzl.jpg
00:52:667 (3,4,1,2) - the shape isnt quite pretty i think, especially how (3) (the L slider) and 2 (big circle slider) overlaps



[hard]
00:11:940 (1) - ~ 00:16:394 (1) - http://puu.sh/4pdjL.jpg matches much better to the music
00:38:122 (1) - delete next circle and extend this to 1/1 (or just repeat the first one)
00:49:758 (1,2) - ^ same rhythm. even if you don't decide to fix this at least add clap on begining of 00:50:122 (2) -
00:45:940 (1) - spinner felt kinda random for me.. maybe just map with circle/sliders?

[Insane]
01:12:121 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I suggest to put sliders on end of stream or begining of stream on these patterns.. this kinda feels random for me


good luck~
Topic Starter
Shilkey

haha5957 wrote:

All the mods are based on my pure feelings if they aren't bolded, so feel free to ignore them all
[General]
kk nice mapset

[normal]
00:42:485 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/4pdwY.jpg okay
00:48:304 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/4pdzl.jpg okay
00:52:667 (3,4,1,2) - the shape isnt quite pretty i think, especially how (3) (the L slider) and 2 (big circle slider) overlaps okay



[hard]
00:11:940 (1) - ~ 00:16:394 (1) - http://puu.sh/4pdjL.jpg matches much better to the music okay
00:38:122 (1) - delete next circle and extend this to 1/1 (or just repeat the first one) okay
00:49:758 (1,2) - ^ same rhythm. even if you don't decide to fix this at least add clap on begining of 00:50:122 (2) - okay
00:45:940 (1) - spinner felt kinda random for me.. maybe just map with circle/sliders? okay

[Insane]
01:12:121 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I suggest to put sliders on end of stream or begining of stream on these patterns.. this kinda feels random for me no


good luck~
thanks for the mod!
Tear
Random from #modreqs

[General]
  1. I can't mod Taiko, so standard only
  2. AiMod: Tags and countdown in Taiko diffs don't match (letterbox is probably fine?)
[Collab Normal]
  1. 01:23:394 (1) - AiMod: Spinner needs a NC
  2. That OD is pretty low for a normal, +1?
  3. 00:44:485 (4,1) - Blanket this better? Doesn't look nice when playing
  4. 00:35:940 (1,2) - Confusing timing in the song, maybe make this a slider
[Hard]
  1. A bit too much 1/4 rhythm but decent diff
  2. 02:25:030 (2) - AiMod: Unsnapped slider end
  3. 02:19:940 (1,1) - Confusing, I'd make the slider one repeat longer and remove the circle
[Insane]
  1. Not much rhythmical variation in some parts here either .-. Should be fine though
  2. 00:03:940 (4) - Why not bend this slider the other way? it'll oppose the previous and next slider better
  3. 00:34:485 (3) - Rotate a little for perfect symmetry
  4. 02:30:122 (1,1,1,1) - Directions are slightly off .-. Why not just copypaste one slider so they're all identical
Topic Starter
Shilkey

Tear wrote:

Random from #modreqs

[General]
  1. I can't mod Taiko, so standard only
  2. AiMod: Tags and countdown in Taiko diffs don't match (letterbox is probably fine?)
[Collab Normal]
  1. 01:23:394 (1) - AiMod: Spinner needs a NC done
  2. That OD is pretty low for a normal, +1? done
  3. 00:44:485 (4,1) - Blanket this better? Doesn't look nice when playing done
  4. 00:35:940 (1,2) - Confusing timing in the song, maybe make this a sliderI dont agree, I think it fits as it is
[Hard]
  1. A bit too much 1/4 rhythm but decent diff
  2. 02:25:030 (2) - AiMod: Unsnapped slider end fixed
  3. 02:19:940 (1,1) - Confusing, I'd make the slider one repeat longer and remove the circle I dont think this part is confusing
[Insane]
  1. Not much rhythmical variation in some parts here either .-. Should be fine though
  2. 00:03:940 (4) - Why not bend this slider the other way? it'll oppose the previous and next slider better no
  3. 00:34:485 (3) - Rotate a little for perfect symmetry done
  4. 02:30:122 (1,1,1,1) - Directions are slightly off .-. Why not just copypaste one slider so they're all identical done
thanks for the mod
Backstep
Hi Shilkey.

Yay you win in this round, and for my rules i'll mod only 2 difficulties. :3

Insane

00:00:667 (2) - Whistle start slider.(Use these whistles to fit piano rhythm.)
00:01:213 (4) - Whistle.
00:01:758 (1) - Whistle start slider.
00:02:122 (2) - Whistle end slider.
00:02:849 (5) - Whistle.
00:03:031 (6) - Remove whistle.
00:03:213 (1) - Whistle end slider.
00:03:940 (4) - Whistle start slider.
00:04:304 (5) - Whistle end slider.
00:04:667 (1) - ^
00:05:394 (3) - ^
00:05:758 (4) - Remove whistle.
00:06:485 (2) - Whistle.
00:07:030 (4) - ^
00:07:576 (1) - Whistle start slider.
00:07:940 (2) - Whistle end slider.
00:08:304 (3) - ^
00:08:849 (4) - Remove whistle.
00:09:031 (1) - Whistle end slider.
00:09:758 (3) - Whistle.
00:10:304 (6) - ^
00:11:940 (1) - Whistle end slider.
00:12:667 (3) - ^
00:13:394 (1) - Whistle start slider and remove whistle end slider.
00:13:940 (3) - Whistle start slider.
00:14:485 (4) - Whistle.
00:14:667 (5) - Remove whistle.
00:14:849 (1) - Whistle end slider.
00:15:576 (3) - Whistle.
00:15:940 (5) - Whistle end slider.
00:16:485 (2) - Remove whistle.
00:16:667 (3) - Whistle start slider.
00:17:031 (4) - Whistle end slider.
00:17:394 (5) - Remove whistle.
00:18:122 (3) - Whistle.
00:18:485 (5) - Whistle end slider.
00:19:213 (1) - Whistle.
00:19:576 (3) - Whistle repeat slider.
00:20:304 (5) - Whistle start slider and remove whistle end slider.
00:20:849 (2) - Whistle.
00:21:394 (4) - ^
00:39:213 (5,2) - move this note to cover 00:38:304 (2) I think it's look better.
00:59:576 (6) - Move to x:420, y:332 to make more triangle symmetrical shape :3
01:43:031 (4,5,6) - Switch note like this? (4) instead (6), (5) instead (4) and (6) instead (5) to make a bit jump x3
01:49:031 (5) - It can cover with 01:47:576 (5)

Hard

*you can make like Insane diff suggestion about piano rhythm other than i think fine.
00:54:122 (1) - Move (1) to cover 00:55:213 (4) repeat slider.
02:24:304 (4) - Whistle.
02:25:758 (4) - Whistle.
02:27:213 (1) - Whistle start slider.
02:28:667 (5) - Whistle.

Good Luck :3
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