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Noriyuki Iwadare - Elise Deauxnim - Simple Melody
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Topic Starter
Hmmmmm, I agree with some things with you, but not with another... You say some notes clashes with music but I don't think so, or maybe it's that I have a bad rhythm (?) But thank you for modding my map, I changed a lot of things ^^
Huh...a slider tick of 1 or 2 works alot better for Rhythmic diff. Also I'm getting a BPM close to 136 or 135. ~_~ pretty close though!
BPM 136
Offset 815
[ I could be right lol ]
Resnap the notes after that on 1/4 beat divisor
[Simple]
00:19:78 (2,3) - White Ticks
00:52:43 (1) - Remove 1 repeat
00:53:75 (1) - Place on where the end of the slider used to be
00:57:28 (1) - Clap?
01:04:34 (1) - End on white tick
01:13:60 (3,1) - This part feels weird
01:20:22 (1) - Start and end on white ticks
[Rhythmic]
Resnap with the new BPM and offset and make changes to the timing and note placement.
Offset 815
[ I could be right lol ]
Resnap the notes after that on 1/4 beat divisor
[Simple]
00:19:78 (2,3) - White Ticks
00:52:43 (1) - Remove 1 repeat
00:53:75 (1) - Place on where the end of the slider used to be
00:57:28 (1) - Clap?
01:04:34 (1) - End on white tick
01:13:60 (3,1) - This part feels weird
01:20:22 (1) - Start and end on white ticks
[Rhythmic]
Resnap with the new BPM and offset and make changes to the timing and note placement.
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*starred
BPM/offset changes actually sort of fix most of the things in original post that really bug me...
Anyway, things:
[Simple]
[Rhythmic]
1:30 [red 1, 2, orange 1-3] - If you really want to keep the pyramid shape, at least make the pyramid narrower. Please?
2:27 [orange 5, red 1] - the jump from 5 to 1 is egregiously cruel. (Is it even possible to get 300 on both?
)
BPM/offset changes actually sort of fix most of the things in original post that really bug me...
Anyway, things:
[Simple]
1:03 [orange 1-4] - IMO, that section should be made easier; it's too hard for an Easy map.animask wrote:
01:04:34 (1) - End on white tick
[Rhythmic]
1:30 [red 1, 2, orange 1-3] - If you really want to keep the pyramid shape, at least make the pyramid narrower. Please?
2:27 [orange 5, red 1] - the jump from 5 to 1 is egregiously cruel. (Is it even possible to get 300 on both?
)Wow, timing's a huge mess...
Don't hate me for this~
I got offset 1680....
Then resnap the whole map on 1/2 beats >_< (except the streams on Rhythmic)
With the right bpm (which is it), most beats tend to stay on 1/2 beats
Since its not really snapped or timed well as it is... I'll just give comments per difficulty
Hitsound audio's a bit too high, too
Simple- I think the slider's too fast for this map..
00:52:35 (1,1) - thats illegal, don't have beats with timing touching each other (hopefully it'll fix after you change offset and resnap again
01:14:74 (1) - I know it sounds right, but it's not really fit for "simple"
Rhythmic- Add more Lead-In time please
lots of notes make no sense at all... hopefully that will be fixed when this is timed right
01:21:96 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - Claps spam is bad, please make this sound better or remove claps >_<
02:27:64 (5,1) - they're too close together
Please fix timing and recheck everything...
This still needs a quite a bit of work, I honestly don't think its ready for Pending
Don't hate me for this~
I got offset 1680....
Then resnap the whole map on 1/2 beats >_< (except the streams on Rhythmic)
With the right bpm (which is it), most beats tend to stay on 1/2 beats
Since its not really snapped or timed well as it is... I'll just give comments per difficulty
Hitsound audio's a bit too high, too
Simple- I think the slider's too fast for this map..
00:52:35 (1,1) - thats illegal, don't have beats with timing touching each other (hopefully it'll fix after you change offset and resnap again
01:14:74 (1) - I know it sounds right, but it's not really fit for "simple"
Rhythmic- Add more Lead-In time please
lots of notes make no sense at all... hopefully that will be fixed when this is timed right
01:21:96 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - Claps spam is bad, please make this sound better or remove claps >_<
02:27:64 (5,1) - they're too close together
Please fix timing and recheck everything...
This still needs a quite a bit of work, I honestly don't think its ready for Pending
Offset 806. Then snap all notes to 1/2 Beat Snap Divisor.
Then make sure all sliders come to the right ticks on 1/2 or 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor.
I'll mod later~ Star for now.
Then make sure all sliders come to the right ticks on 1/2 or 1/4 Beat Snap Divisor.
I'll mod later~ Star for now.
turn the volume down to 50%...
for the rest i can only say u got a unique mapping style..i like it
starred
for the rest i can only say u got a unique mapping style..i like it
starred
You forgot resnap notes?
[Simple]
00:10:51 (5,1) - Spacing.
00:14:92 (1,2,3) - ^
00:25:95 (3,4) - ^
00:49:33 (1,1) - ^
[Rhytmic]
00:08:23 (6,7,8) - I disagree.
00:13:89 (5) - ^
00:16:24 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
00:43:09 (1,2,3) - I desagree.
01:04:33 (1) - Finish.
01:06:98 (2) - Finish on start.
01:16:90 (6,7) - Spacing.
01:17:57 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why you change spacing?
01:43:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Emm... Fix it. Confusing + spacing.
01:59:48 (6,7) - Spacing.
Star.
[Simple]
00:10:51 (5,1) - Spacing.
00:14:92 (1,2,3) - ^
00:25:95 (3,4) - ^
00:49:33 (1,1) - ^
[Rhytmic]
00:08:23 (6,7,8) - I disagree.
00:13:89 (5) - ^
00:16:24 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
00:43:09 (1,2,3) - I desagree.
01:04:33 (1) - Finish.
01:06:98 (2) - Finish on start.
01:16:90 (6,7) - Spacing.
01:17:57 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why you change spacing?
01:43:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Emm... Fix it. Confusing + spacing.
01:59:48 (6,7) - Spacing.
Star.
Topic Starter
Nop, I resnapped all notes, but I had to change to 1/4 in some streams
Hope you like it now ^^
Hope you like it now ^^
At first, when I saw Noriyuki Iwadare's music being mapped, my intention was to come here for a random mod, but then I realized it's your map. =D So, I will return a favour to ya.... EDIT : Oh, I just realized I mod your another map before, never mind then, I will random mod any phoenix related map. XD
SIMPLE
00:09:188 (2,3,4) - Spacing. It looks fine to me, but to beginners, they might think that, oh, I need to hit 2,3,4 slower. So, fix this ?
RHYTHMIC
00:04:335 - Remove clap. If you listen to the background music carefully,and if you wanna match this to earlier blue 1,2,3,4,5, where you map clap to the highest background music note, this clap shouldn't be here
00:04:776 - Clap
00:05:217 - Finish at the start of slider
00:06:982 - Remove clap
00:07:423 - Add clap
00:58:158 - Align this properly if you wanna stack it with 1
01:20:107 - 01:23:085 - OBJECTION ! This part is really REALLY WEIRD. Plus, you forgot to resnap them. =P
01:28:048 (5,6,7) - forgot to resnap ? Besides, this sounds weird too.
01:50:548 - Resnap
I will give ya a star first ! And hope you can fix those snapping problems.
P.S. : You do like slow song very much !
SIMPLE
00:09:188 (2,3,4) - Spacing. It looks fine to me, but to beginners, they might think that, oh, I need to hit 2,3,4 slower. So, fix this ?
RHYTHMIC
00:04:335 - Remove clap. If you listen to the background music carefully,and if you wanna match this to earlier blue 1,2,3,4,5, where you map clap to the highest background music note, this clap shouldn't be here
00:04:776 - Clap
00:05:217 - Finish at the start of slider
00:06:982 - Remove clap
00:07:423 - Add clap
00:58:158 - Align this properly if you wanna stack it with 1
01:20:107 - 01:23:085 - OBJECTION ! This part is really REALLY WEIRD. Plus, you forgot to resnap them. =P
01:28:048 (5,6,7) - forgot to resnap ? Besides, this sounds weird too.
01:50:548 - Resnap
I will give ya a star first ! And hope you can fix those snapping problems.
P.S. : You do like slow song very much !
kk, here's my mod post, most of the things I'm gonna are suggestions if they have a ? in it, but I'm pretty sure all that I'm gonna say isn't gonna be bugged on by other mods, unless they wanna be picky, mainly if they have a ? u don't have to listen to them
Simple
00:12:71 (1) - remove new combo?
01:18:01 (2,3,4) - fixed this, 2 isn't snapped to 1, if u snap 2 to 1, make sure you do the rest, okay
Rhythmic
00:01:24 (1) - remove new wonbo(combo)?
00:08:74 (8,9) - add a new combo to one of these, idk it would look cool?
00:31:026 - fix break
00:44:04 (1) - remove new wombo
00:45:14 (5,6,7) - just fix this pattern, I think ur snapping at 0.8x, just check it out, and fix it
00:46:24 (1,2) - make sure u align this to the previous pattern like it is now, after u fix ^
00:50:21 (4) - add a new combo here, or fix the spacing, if ur gonna fix spacing, I think 1,2,3 are snapped at 1.4x
00:59:92 (1) - I LOVE THIS PATTERN
01:04:33 (1,2,3) - ^ well maybe not 2, also make 2 start on top of the endpoint of 1, do the same to 3
01:16:24 (3) - new combo
01:18:89 (6) - same here ^
01:59:92 (7) - new combo
02:00:80 (10) - new combo
great map, looking forward to this getting ranked
Simple
00:12:71 (1) - remove new combo?
01:18:01 (2,3,4) - fixed this, 2 isn't snapped to 1, if u snap 2 to 1, make sure you do the rest, okay
Rhythmic
00:01:24 (1) - remove new wonbo(combo)?
00:08:74 (8,9) - add a new combo to one of these, idk it would look cool
?00:31:026 - fix break
00:44:04 (1) - remove new wombo
00:45:14 (5,6,7) - just fix this pattern, I think ur snapping at 0.8x, just check it out, and fix it
00:46:24 (1,2) - make sure u align this to the previous pattern like it is now, after u fix ^
00:50:21 (4) - add a new combo here, or fix the spacing, if ur gonna fix spacing, I think 1,2,3 are snapped at 1.4x
00:59:92 (1) - I LOVE THIS PATTERN
01:04:33 (1,2,3) - ^ well maybe not 2
, also make 2 start on top of the endpoint of 1, do the same to 301:16:24 (3) - new combo
01:18:89 (6) - same here ^
01:59:92 (7) - new combo
02:00:80 (10) - new combo
great map, looking forward to this getting rankedAhh...
[Simple]:
00:12:71 (2) - New combo?
00:45:80 (3) - Nazi: Move 1 down on Grid Level 2.
01:19:33 (4) - Nazi: Move 1 down on Grid Level 2.
[Rhythmic]:
00:57:27 (1) - Feels incomplete here...
01:23:30 (4) - Suggestion: Clap?
01:32:12 (3) - New combo?
01:33:01 (5) - New combo?
01:36:10 (4) - New combo?
02:16:68 (5) - New combo?
The way you mapped it is good for this song, apparently. I can't think of anything else...>A<
I'm tired, pretty much. Set a nice preview point? ^^
[Simple]:
00:12:71 (2) - New combo?
00:45:80 (3) - Nazi: Move 1 down on Grid Level 2.
01:19:33 (4) - Nazi: Move 1 down on Grid Level 2.
[Rhythmic]:
00:57:27 (1) - Feels incomplete here...
01:23:30 (4) - Suggestion: Clap?
01:32:12 (3) - New combo?
01:33:01 (5) - New combo?
01:36:10 (4) - New combo?
02:16:68 (5) - New combo?
The way you mapped it is good for this song, apparently. I can't think of anything else...>A<
I'm tired, pretty much. Set a nice preview point? ^^
OVERALL
This song is in 3/4 stanza. Change in timing tab.
SIMPLE
00:57:27 (1) - Change this spinner in a slider
RHYTHMIC
00:10:95 (1) - Change this spiner into a slider at the start, until the white tick in the middle. Place a beat on the end.
00:59:92 (1) - Make the red point a white point, and the slider is prettier and ends on a better place
Try this for the following part:
1) 01:04:33 (1,1) - Move this 1 Lvl 3 grid Left (along with the preceding combo)
2) 01:06:98 (1) - Flip this vertically (Ctrl + J)
3) 01:06:98 (1) - Move one Lvl 3 grid Left
4) 01:09:62 (1) - Move one Lvl 3 grid Left
you'll get a really nice spiral like in IMAGE1
Copy this spiral and place it here:
02:18:45 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - Replace with spiral pattern for consistency.
This song is in 3/4 stanza. Change in timing tab.
SIMPLE
00:57:27 (1) - Change this spinner in a slider
RHYTHMIC
00:10:95 (1) - Change this spiner into a slider at the start, until the white tick in the middle. Place a beat on the end.
00:59:92 (1) - Make the red point a white point, and the slider is prettier and ends on a better place
Try this for the following part:
1) 01:04:33 (1,1) - Move this 1 Lvl 3 grid Left (along with the preceding combo)
2) 01:06:98 (1) - Flip this vertically (Ctrl + J)
3) 01:06:98 (1) - Move one Lvl 3 grid Left
4) 01:09:62 (1) - Move one Lvl 3 grid Left
you'll get a really nice spiral like in IMAGE1
Copy this spiral and place it here:
02:18:45 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - Replace with spiral pattern for consistency.
Simple:
looks fine
Rhythmic:
Great map. Star.
looks fine
Rhythmic:
SPOILER
normal mod:
01:33:89 (2) - space further, it felt weird to switch to such small spacing after a jump
Combo mod:
01:18:89 (4) - new combo?
01:33:89 (2) - space further, it felt weird to switch to such small spacing after a jump
Combo mod:
01:18:89 (4) - new combo?
Great map. Star.
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Simple:
No problems
01:03:563 - (2,4) Those circles don't fit at all.... delete them!
01:38:747 - (1) Make this slider 1/2 longer.
02:14:923 - (3) This slider sounds much better if you delete the reverse arrow and then make the slider as long as before.
This is a pretty good map, so a star for you
*star*
No problems
01:03:563 - (2,4) Those circles don't fit at all.... delete them!
01:38:747 - (1) Make this slider 1/2 longer.
02:14:923 - (3) This slider sounds much better if you delete the reverse arrow and then make the slider as long as before.
This is a pretty good map, so a star for you
*star*
[Simple]
00:52:42 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Rhythmic]
00:00:58 (1) - Make this a 1/8 reverse slider from 00:00:585 to 00:00:750, let it bounce back 2 times.
00:12:71 (3) - New combo.
01:06:76 (x) - Add a note here.
01:09:40 (x) - ^
01:16:24 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:18:01 (1) - ^
01:42:27 (3) - New combo.
01:43:60 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:44:92 (4) - New combo.
01:59:48 (6) - Clap here.
02:01:24 (3) - Clap here.
02:20:88 (x) - Add a note here.
02:23:53 (x) - ^
02:28:82 (1) - Make this a 1/8 reverse slider from 00:00:585 to 00:00:750, let it bounce back 2 times.
Good song, good map
Star *
00:52:42 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Rhythmic]
00:00:58 (1) - Make this a 1/8 reverse slider from 00:00:585 to 00:00:750, let it bounce back 2 times.
00:12:71 (3) - New combo.
01:06:76 (x) - Add a note here.
01:09:40 (x) - ^
01:16:24 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:18:01 (1) - ^
01:42:27 (3) - New combo.
01:43:60 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:44:92 (4) - New combo.
01:59:48 (6) - Clap here.
02:01:24 (3) - Clap here.
02:20:88 (x) - Add a note here.
02:23:53 (x) - ^
02:28:82 (1) - Make this a 1/8 reverse slider from 00:00:585 to 00:00:750, let it bounce back 2 times.
Good song, good map
Star *
[Simple]
00:52:42 (2) - clap the middle
a bit spinner-heavy, maybe try to map a couple of those spinners...
[Rhythmic]
00:17:57 (1) - hidden
00:45:80 (8) - try a finish instead
00:46:24 (1,2) - remove claps
01:04:33 (1,1,1) - Dx making your players go from a standstill to zooomjump is NOT nice...at least move your red 1 so it isnt under the blue 1
01:09:62 (1) - hidden under the orange 1 (and move the green 1 too please)
02:06:10 (1) - hidden
02:15:36 (4) - spacing
02:18:46 (1,1,1,1,1) - same as previous set of these
also why the new timing section? this should be an inherit section (timing -> timing setup panel -> inherit previous section)
02:26:40 (2,1,2) - i know a new combo normally shows new spacing, but if the spacing is identical it is always expected that the interval is also identical...
02:28:82 (1) - finish the end
Also work on your hitsounds...they should be spread out fairly evenly and used in such a way that they either create a pattern or highlight the high points of the song, and you have them in streams atm...
00:52:42 (2) - clap the middle
a bit spinner-heavy, maybe try to map a couple of those spinners...
[Rhythmic]
00:17:57 (1) - hidden
00:45:80 (8) - try a finish instead
00:46:24 (1,2) - remove claps
01:04:33 (1,1,1) - Dx making your players go from a standstill to zooomjump is NOT nice...at least move your red 1 so it isnt under the blue 1
01:09:62 (1) - hidden under the orange 1 (and move the green 1 too please)
02:06:10 (1) - hidden
02:15:36 (4) - spacing
02:18:46 (1,1,1,1,1) - same as previous set of these
also why the new timing section? this should be an inherit section (timing -> timing setup panel -> inherit previous section)
02:26:40 (2,1,2) - i know a new combo normally shows new spacing, but if the spacing is identical it is always expected that the interval is also identical...
02:28:82 (1) - finish the end
Also work on your hitsounds...they should be spread out fairly evenly and used in such a way that they either create a pattern or highlight the high points of the song, and you have them in streams atm...
offset +10-15 works better for me, change if you think is better.
Other than that I found nothing wrong.
Other than that I found nothing wrong.
Simple
00:57:27 (1) - Make this symmetrical?
Rhythmic
00:49:33 (1,2,3) - The spacing change caught me off guard here, if you could find a more intuitive way to change the spacing that'd be great.
00:57:27 (1) - Remove new combo
02:03:44 (4) - The slider doesn't flow onto the next note well, could you either make 4 point downwards or move the next combo above? You could probably do this for other parts of the map as well.
That's all, *'d
00:57:27 (1) - Make this symmetrical?
Rhythmic
00:49:33 (1,2,3) - The spacing change caught me off guard here, if you could find a more intuitive way to change the spacing that'd be great.
00:57:27 (1) - Remove new combo
02:03:44 (4) - The slider doesn't flow onto the next note well, could you either make 4 point downwards or move the next combo above? You could probably do this for other parts of the map as well.
That's all, *'d
Topic Starter
Thx for modding 0_o ^^0_o wrote:
Simple
00:57:27 (1) - Make this symmetrical?
Rhythmic
00:49:33 (1,2,3) - The spacing change caught me off guard here, if you could find a more intuitive way to change the spacing that'd be great.
00:57:27 (1) - Remove new combo
02:03:44 (4) - The slider doesn't flow onto the next note well, could you either make 4 point downwards or move the next combo above? You could probably do this for other parts of the map as well.
That's all, *'d
Rhythmic:
I really don't like the jumps in this.. consider toning them down. The ones I want toned down especially is 02:26:83 (1,2,3,4,5). Honestly, they don't fit to me.
One other thing - the claps feel out of place most of the time. Please try to use hitsounds that actually follow the music itself. Eh, other than that, this map is fine! Have a star.
I really don't like the jumps in this.. consider toning them down. The ones I want toned down especially is 02:26:83 (1,2,3,4,5). Honestly, they don't fit to me.
One other thing - the claps feel out of place most of the time. Please try to use hitsounds that actually follow the music itself. Eh, other than that, this map is fine! Have a star.
Topic Starter
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Topic Starter
Ok, I fixed all you said 
Thanks for modding Larto!!
Thanks for modding Larto!!
Please don't say you are bubbled.
Change offset to 801. Set audio preview at 01:04:33.
Rhythmic:
00:11:83 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:51:53 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Inconsistent with the rest of this map's spacing for no good reason.
01:03:44 (2) - Again, inconsistent.
01:25:94 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:26:83 (4) - New combo.
01:30:35 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Inconsistent blah blah blah.
01:45:80 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:51:09 (3) - New combo.
01:51:09 (3,4,5,6,7) - Inconsistent. Same thing from here onwards.
02:26:83 (1) - Remove new combo.
Rhythmic:
00:11:83 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:51:53 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Inconsistent with the rest of this map's spacing for no good reason.
01:03:44 (2) - Again, inconsistent.
01:25:94 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:26:83 (4) - New combo.
01:30:35 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Inconsistent blah blah blah.
01:45:80 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:51:09 (3) - New combo.
01:51:09 (3,4,5,6,7) - Inconsistent. Same thing from here onwards.
02:26:83 (1) - Remove new combo.
Topic Starter
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JarJar explained to me why he wanted that offset there. Grhhh, it's probably the best solution.