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sakuzyo - Erlung [OsuMania|Osu]

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Topic Starter
HanzeR
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, December 08, 2013 at 2:33:13 PM

Artist: sakuzyo
Title: Erlung
Tags: l'aventale diverse system bms of fighters c84
BPM: 140
Filesize: 4759kb
Play Time: 01:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another - 7Key (5 stars, 1234 notes)
  2. Beginner - 7Key (2.01 stars, 408 notes)
  3. Hard (4.78 stars, 284 notes)
  4. Hyper - 7Key (3.79 stars, 792 notes)
  5. Insane (5 stars, 382 notes)
  6. Normal (2.79 stars, 126 notes)
Download: sakuzyo - Erlung
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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yaay
All diffs finished and ready 8/23
Apex_old
Normal:
00:29:111: 1st and 2nd slider looks bad, make it more smooth like this:

00:29:968: ^
00:56:540: maybe make the slider like this?:

00:58:254: slider not completely straight/oblique

Also I moved the 5th circle at 00:59:111 down a grid, so the 4th slider is pointing at it.
01:00:613: Moved the end of the 2nd slider from 340,316 to 328,328 so it's more smooth

01:11:111: Slider is not straight:

01:17:111: Second half of slider after the red point is too straight compared to the first half, make it something like this:

01:17:968: ^
01:36:825: Did you do that on purpose, because it looks weird:


Hard:
00:01:682: Slider is unbalanced. You should move the middle point.

00:05:111: ^
00:02:111: A slider that short doesn't need a three points. Even if it had a 3rd point it wouldn't be visble. Delete the redundant middle point

00:02:968: ^
00:03:825: ^
00:04:682: ^
00:05:540: ^
00:06:397: ^
00:03:397: Make the curve more obvious


Re-edited SB and pictures link: http://puu.sh/49u9U.rar (bg and script is inside. When you want to use them just drag the, to the "Songs" folder and replace them with these)

If you have any problem please contact me through PM.

P.S.: Add an Easy diffculty
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Apex wrote:

Normal:
00:29:111: 1st and 2nd slider looks bad, make it more smooth like this:

00:29:968: ^
00:56:540: maybe make the slider like this?:

00:58:254: slider not completely straight/oblique

Also I moved the 5th circle at 00:59:111 down a grid, so the 4th slider is pointing at it.
01:00:613: Moved the end of the 2nd slider from 340,316 to 328,328 so it's more smooth

01:11:111: Slider is not straight:

01:17:111: Second half of slider after the red point is too straight compared to the first half, make it something like this:

01:17:968: ^
01:36:825: Did you do that on purpose, because it looks weird:


Hard:
00:01:682: Slider is unbalanced. You should move the middle point.

00:05:111: ^
00:02:111: A slider that short doesn't need a three points. Even if it had a 3rd point it wouldn't be visble. Delete the redundant middle point

00:02:968: ^
00:03:825: ^
00:04:682: ^
00:05:540: ^
00:06:397: ^
00:03:397: Make the curve more obvious


Re-edited SB and pictures link: http://puu.sh/49u9U.rar (bg and script is inside. When you want to use them just drag the, to the "Songs" folder and replace them with these)

If you have any problem please contact me through PM.

P.S.: Add an Easy diffculty
Thank you so much!! got everything working just right now, thanks!@!
-kevincela-
sakuzyo <3
Topic Starter
HanzeR

-kevincela- wrote:

sakuzyo <3
<333333333
YunoFanatic
hanzer why u no invite me mania D:

Hanzer Support! even he didnt invite me

mod mania only stfu

[Beginner]

00:03:397 until 00:04:682 ctrl + h so beginners will not be bored because again and again pattern
00:23:432 this slider umm too short consider starting the slider in 00:23:325 then end it in 00:23:540
00:30:290 this slider again start in 00:30182 and end it on 00:397 should sound great

[Hyper]

00:14:540 consider making this a slider which starts in 00:14:540 and end in 00:14:647 much easier
00:16:575 delete? there's no sound either
00:32:968 delete one of them one note is enough i think because it didnt even enhance the notes sound
01:24:075 delete you already have a note on 01:24:182 which doubles it

[Another]

00:02:968 doesnt fit with the music shorten it to 00:03:182 and maybe you can add note in here 00:03:397 sounds good imo
00:04:682 this one to shorten it in the red tick
00:06:611 maybe this one to ^
00:47:111 delete note D: to balance the pattern
01:08:218 ive got enough of this always getting me break in here :( delete the note or the slider deleting one of them is good
01:45:825 until 01:49:682 you got 10 pattern of this so ive divided it in 2 so use ctrl h or j in here to get a new pattern

done hanzer support!
17VA
Beginner

Loctav wrote:

'sup, my beloved mania community.
Easy difficulties[/b] should be aimed to players, who have never touched this game EVER BEFORE, so placing 1/2 and even 1/4 in them is ridiculous and will fear away all newcomers to share our love to this game mode.
00:21:825 (21825|4,21932|3,22040|2) - delete

00:25:468 (25468|0,25575|1,25682|2,25790|3,25897|4,26004|5,26111|6) -
00:32:325 (32325|0,32432|1,32540|2,32647|3,32754|4,32861|5,32968|6) -
00:42:075 (42075|0,42182|1,42290|2,42397|3,42504|4,42611|5,42718|6,42825|5,42932|4,43040|3,43147|2,43254|3) -
hmm... overmapping? is not associate at beginner diffs. suggest change the easier patterns.

01:02:968 (62968|3,63075|4,63182|5,63290|4) -
01:13:254 (73254|5,73361|4,73468|3,73575|2) -
01:16:254 (76254|6,76254|0,76361|1,76468|2,76575|3,76682|6,76790|5,76897|4,77004|3) -
suggest change "drum stream"
example : http://puu.sh/4axvm.png


00:21:825 (21825|4,22040|2) -

Another

Suggest delete 00:48:718 (48718|6,48718|0) - and http://puu.sh/4axeJ.png

sound not exists :P
Topic Starter
HanzeR

17VA wrote:

Beginner

Loctav wrote:

'sup, my beloved mania community.
Easy difficulties[/b] should be aimed to players, who have never touched this game EVER BEFORE, so placing 1/2 and even 1/4 in them is ridiculous and will fear away all newcomers to share our love to this game mode.
00:21:825 (21825|4,21932|3,22040|2) - delete ok

00:25:468 (25468|0,25575|1,25682|2,25790|3,25897|4,26004|5,26111|6) -
00:32:325 (32325|0,32432|1,32540|2,32647|3,32754|4,32861|5,32968|6) -
00:42:075 (42075|0,42182|1,42290|2,42397|3,42504|4,42611|5,42718|6,42825|5,42932|4,43040|3,43147|2,43254|3) -
hmm... overmapping? is not associate at beginner diffs. suggest change the easier patterns. i think these are ok,,, its following the violin and not hard to read and diff is only 2 stars with them in

01:02:968 (62968|3,63075|4,63182|5,63290|4) -
01:13:254 (73254|5,73361|4,73468|3,73575|2) -
01:16:254 (76254|6,76254|0,76361|1,76468|2,76575|3,76682|6,76790|5,76897|4,77004|3) -
suggest change "drum stream"
example : http://puu.sh/4axvm.png ok


00:21:825 (21825|4,22040|2) -

Another

Suggest delete 00:48:718 (48718|6,48718|0) - and http://puu.sh/4axeJ.png
i hear it here ><
sound not exists :P
Thanks you so much!!<3
Topic Starter
HanzeR

YunoFanatic wrote:

hanzer why u no invite me mania D:

Hanzer Support! even he didnt invite me omg sorrrry /.\ i didnt wanted to take guest diffs for this mapset ><><><

mod mania only stfu

[Beginner]

00:03:397 until 00:04:682 ctrl + h so beginners will not be bored because again and again pattern ok
00:23:432 this slider umm too short consider starting the slider in 00:23:325 then end it in 00:23:540 fits violin here
00:30:290 this slider again start in 00:30182 and end it on 00:397 should sound great

[Hyper]

00:14:540 consider making this a slider which starts in 00:14:540 and end in 00:14:647 much easier i like this D:
00:16:575 delete? there's no sound either i think it fits here
00:32:968 delete one of them one note is enough i think because it didnt even enhance the notes sound fixed
01:24:075 delete you already have a note on 01:24:182 which doubles it fixed

[Another]

00:02:968 doesnt fit with the music shorten it to 00:03:182 and maybe you can add note in here 00:03:397 sounds good imo
00:04:682 this one to shorten it in the red tick
00:06:611 maybe this one to ^ following guitar for these
00:47:111 delete note D: to balance the pattern ok
01:08:218 ive got enough of this always getting me break in here :( delete the note or the slider deleting one of them is good fixed!!
01:45:825 until 01:49:682 you got 10 pattern of this so ive divided it in 2 so use ctrl h or j in here to get a new pattern changed a little differently :D

done hanzer support!
Thank youyyyy!!!! <33333333
Apex_old
Easy:
Add claps in 00:15:397 to 00:48:825
00:06:397: slider needs to point at circle.(move to 416,88)

00:08:111: ^ (move to 308,272)

00:16:147: you should move the 2nd circle at the space somewhere between the 1st and the 3rd slider for flow.

00:23:111: ^

00:26:432: Personal opinion: That circle is almost but not below the end of the slider looks weird


Hard:
Often in Hard, 1/4 beats does not appear very often. There are too many 1/4 beats in
00:15:397 - 00:22:468
00:42:003 - 00:43:147
01:38:540 - 01:41:111. Tune down the difficulty.
Again, add claps in 00:15:397 to 00:48:825
00:44:111: Turn down the end of the 2nd slider a bit so it connects with the 3rd slider.

01:27:397: Make that slider's turn more dramatic, or change the red points in to white points, because that undrastic straight slider look uncomfortable.

01:32:968: Move that slider down because such a drastic turn between the 1st white slider and the previous 6th purple slider of the mouse is bad flow:


Insane:

There are too many "2-circles-are-at-1/4beat-so-their-at-the-same-place-formation"(someone please help me find the name of this technique) stuffs in -00:01:682 - 00:11:968.
00:29:540: The slider looks weird when the transition between a curve and a straight line is so abrupt
-GN
much <3 and much like
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Apex wrote:

Easy:
Add claps in 00:15:397 to 00:48:825 fixed
00:06:397: slider needs to point at circle.(move to 416,88)

00:08:111: ^ (move to 308,272)

00:16:147: you should move the 2nd circle at the space somewhere between the 1st and the 3rd slider for flow.

00:23:111: ^

00:26:432: Personal opinion: That circle is almost but not below the end of the slider looks weird

fixed all
Hard:
Often in Hard, 1/4 beats does not appear very often. There are too many 1/4 beats in
00:15:397 - 00:22:468
00:42:003 - 00:43:147
01:38:540 - 01:41:111. Tune down the difficulty. I think these are fine, as it is a low bpm map i think anyone should be able to play it well, and there are too many 1/4 rhythms in this song to not map them and still make sense
Again, add claps in 00:15:397 to 00:48:825
00:44:111: Turn down the end of the 2nd slider a bit so it connects with the 3rd slider.

01:27:397: Make that slider's turn more dramatic, or change the red points in to white points, because that undrastic straight slider look uncomfortable.

01:32:968: Move that slider down because such a drastic turn between the 1st white slider and the previous 6th purple slider of the mouse is bad flow:

fixed all^
Insane:

There are too many "2-circles-are-at-1/4beat-so-their-at-the-same-place-formation"(someone please help me find the name of this technique) stuffs in -00:01:682 - 00:11:968. i think this is fine to just follow the guitar for this part
00:29:540: The slider looks weird when the transition between a curve and a straight line is so abrupt
fixed
Thanks so much for all your help <3333
Topic Starter
HanzeR

-GN wrote:

much <3 and much like
:> <3
Maiz94
Guess, I'll be modding around. I'll edit this post after I finished modding.

Here's my mod.

[General]
  1. All metadata settings are okay for me. \:D/
  2. OD in Beginner should be 7.
  3. HP and OD in Hyper both should be 7.
  4. OD in Another should be 7.
[Beginner]
  1. 00:02:432 (2432|0) - Make a hold note from 00:02:432 - to 00:02:754 -.
  2. 00:05:861 (5861|1) - Make a hold note from 00:05:861 - to 00:06:182 -.
  3. 00:09:290 (9290|0) - Make a hold note from 00:09:290 - to 00:09:611 -.
  4. 00:12:718 (12718|1) - Make a hold note from 00:12:718 - to 00:13:040 -.
  5. 00:14:754 (14754|3) - Make a hold note from 00:14:754 - to 00:15:397 -.
  6. 00:22:254 (22254|0,22682|0) - Move both notes to 4th.
  7. 00:24:182 (24182|3) - Shorten the hold end to 00:24:290 -.
  8. 00:31:040 (31040|3) - Shorten the hold end to 00:31:147 -.
  9. 00:33:611 (33611|4) - Move to 7th.
  10. 00:34:040 (34040|2) - Move to 1st.
  11. 00:34:254 (34254|0) - Move to 2nd.
  12. 00:36:611 (36611|0) - Move to 3rd.
  13. 00:46:040 (46040|2) - Move to 1st.
  14. 01:06:397 (66397|5) - Move to 7th.
  15. 01:06:611 (66611|3) - Move to 5th.
  16. 01:16:682 (76682|4,76790|2,76897|4,77004|2) - Flip horizontally these notes.
  17. 01:19:254 (79254|0) - Move to 3rd.
  18. 01:22:254 (82254|3) - Move to 2nd.
  19. 01:22:897 (82897|4) - Move to 6th.
  20. 01:27:397 (87397|0) - Move to 4th.
  21. 01:29:325 (89325|3,89540|2,89754|1) - Move these notes to the left by 1 column.
  22. 01:29:968 (89968|4,89968|3,90397|3,90397|2) - Flip horizontally these notes.
  23. 01:30:825 (90825|2) - Move to 4th.
  24. 01:32:968 (92968|0) - Move to 3rd.
  25. 01:35:968 (95968|3) - Move to 2nd.
  26. 01:36:611 (96611|4) - Move to 6th.
  27. 01:51:397 (111397|3) - Move to 7th.
  28. 01:55:682 (115682|5,116540|4) - Move both notes to the left by 1 column.
[Hyper]
  1. 00:14:540 (14540|4,14647|4) - Move both notes to 6th.
  2. 00:14:754 (14754|2) - Move to 2nd.
  3. 00:22:040 (22040|3) - Remove.
  4. 00:22:147 (22147|4) - Move to 4th.
  5. 00:24:182 (24182|3) - Shorten the hold end to 00:24:290 -.
  6. 00:31:040 (31040|3) - Shorten the hold end to 00:31:147 -.
  7. 00:35:325 (35325|3) - Remove.
  8. 00:35:432 - Add a note at 4th.
  9. 00:35:540 (35540|4) - Remove.
  10. 00:36:611 (36611|0) - Move to 3rd and 00:36:825 (36825|2) - Move to 1st.
  11. 00:52:254 (52254|2,52361|1,52468|2,52575|1) - Flip vertically these notes.
  12. 00:55:361 (55361|3,55575|3) - Move both notes to 6th.
  13. 00:55:682 (55682|0,55897|0) - Move both notes to 3rd.
  14. 00:56:540 (56540|0,56648|2,56755|0,56862|2) - Flip vertically these notes.
  15. 00:56:969 (56969|1,57076|3,57183|1,57290|3) - ^
  16. 00:57:398 (57398|2,57505|4,57612|2,57719|4) - ^
  17. 00:57:826 (57826|3,57933|5,58040|3,58148|5) - ^
  18. 01:05:968 (65968|6) - Move to 1st.
  19. 01:06:182 - Add a note at 7th.
  20. 01:06:397 (66397|5) - Move to 7th.
  21. 01:06:611 (66611|3) - Move to 5th and 01:07:254 (67254|6,67254|4) - Move both notes to the left by 3 columns.
  22. 01:06:825 (66825|0) - Move to 7th.
  23. 01:19:040 (79040|2) - Move to 2nd.
  24. 01:19:254 (79254|0) - Move to 3rd and 01:19:468 (79468|2) - move to 1st.
  25. 01:19:683 (79683|0) - Move to 3rd.
  26. 01:19:897 (79897|2) - Move to 1st.
  27. 01:22:254 (82254|3) - Move to 2nd and 01:22:682 (82682|1) - move to 4th.
  28. 01:22:897 (82897|4) - Move to 6th.
  29. 01:26:968 (86968|1,86968|3) - Move both notes to the right by 1 column.
  30. 01:27:182 (87182|2,87182|4) - Move both notes to the left by 1 column.
  31. 01:32:754 (92754|2) - Move to 2nd.
  32. 01:32:968 (92968|0) - Move to 3rd and 01:33:182 (93182|2) - move to 1st.
  33. 01:33:397 (93397|0) - Move to 3rd.
  34. 01:33:611 (93611|2) - Move to 1st.
  35. 01:35:968 (95968|3) - Move to 2nd and 01:36:397 (96397|1) - move to 4th.
  36. 01:36:611 (96611|4) - Move to 6th.
  37. 01:39:182 (99182|3) - Move to 2nd.
  38. 01:39:290 (99290|2) - Move to 6th.
  39. 01:39:397 (99397|3) - Move to 1st.
  40. 01:39:504 (99504|5) - Move to 7th.
  41. 01:39:611 (99611|1) - Move to 4th.
  42. 01:39:718 (99718|6) - Move to 1st.
  43. 01:39:825 (99825|0) - Move to 7th.
  44. 01:51:397 - Add a note at 7th.
  45. 01:53:111 (113111|5) - Move to 5th.
  46. 01:53:540 (113540|4) - Move to 6th.
  47. 01:53:968 (113968|3) - Move to 7th.
  48. 01:54:397 (114397|4) - Move to 6th.
[Another]
  1. 00:24:182 (24182|2) - Shorten the hold end to 00:24:290 -.
  2. 00:31:040 (31040|4) - Shorten the hold end to 00:31:147 -.
  3. 00:35:968 (35968|4) - Extend the hold end to 00:36:611 -.
  4. 00:38:540 (38540|6) - Extend the hold end to 00:38:861 -.
  5. 00:45:718 (45718|4) - Shorten the hold end to 00:45:932 -.
  6. 00:47:325 (47325|5) - Move to 7th.
  7. 00:47:968 (47968|2) - Move to 1st.
  8. 00:47:968 (47968|4) - Move to 7th.
  9. 00:52:147 (52147|4) - Move to 3rd.
  10. 00:52:361 (52361|2,52468|2,52575|2) - Move to 4th.
  11. 00:52:790 (52790|4,52897|4,53004|4) - ^
  12. 01:11:432 (71432|4) - Shorten the hold end to 01:11:647 -.
  13. 01:13:682 - Add a note at 4th.
  14. 01:15:611 (75611|2) - Move to 1st.
  15. 01:15:611 (75611|4) - Move to 7th.
  16. 01:15:932 (75932|0) - Move to 2nd.
  17. 01:15:932 (75932|6) - Move to 6th.
  18. 01:38:968 - Add a note at 4th.
  19. 01:39:825 - ^
  20. 01:40:254 - ^
  21. 01:40:682 - ^
  22. 01:42:397 (102397|2,102504|3,102611|2,102718|5,102825|1) - Flip horizontally these notes.
  23. 01:44:111 (104111|2,104218|3,104325|2,104432|5,104540|1) - ^
  24. 01:45:825 (105825|2,105932|3,106040|2,106147|5,106254|1) - ^
  25. 01:47:540 (107540|2,107647|3,107754|2,107861|5,107968|1) - ^
  26. 01:49:254 (109254|2,109361|3,109468|2,109575|5,109682|1) - ^
  27. 01:50:325 - Add a note at 7th.
  28. 01:50:432 - Add a note at 4th.
  29. 01:54:397 (114397|4) - Move to 4th.
  30. 01:54:504 (114504|5) - Move to 5th.
  31. 01:54:611 (114611|4) - Move to 6th.
  32. 01:54:718 (114718|5) - Move to 5th.
  33. 01:54:825 - Add a note at 3rd.
  34. 01:55:682 - Add a note at 4th.
  35. 01:56:540 - ^
  36. 01:57:397 - ^
  37. 01:58:254 - Add a note at 5th.
  38. 01:59:968 - Add a note at 4th.
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
HanzeR

ishimaru94 wrote:

Guess, I'll be modding around. I'll edit this post after I finished modding.

Here's my mod.

[General]
  1. All metadata settings are okay for me. \:D/
  2. OD in Beginner should be 7.
  3. HP and OD in Hyper both should be 7.
  4. OD in Another should be 7.
fix all
[Beginner]
  1. 00:02:432 (2432|0) - Make a hold note from 00:02:432 - to 00:02:754 -.
  2. 00:05:861 (5861|1) - Make a hold note from 00:05:861 - to 00:06:182 -.
  3. 00:09:290 (9290|0) - Make a hold note from 00:09:290 - to 00:09:611 -.
  4. 00:12:718 (12718|1) - Make a hold note from 00:12:718 - to 00:13:040 -.
  5. 00:14:754 (14754|3) - Make a hold note from 00:14:754 - to 00:15:397 -.
  6. 00:22:254 (22254|0,22682|0) - Move both notes to 4th.
  7. 00:24:182 (24182|3) - Shorten the hold end to 00:24:290 -.
  8. 00:31:040 (31040|3) - Shorten the hold end to 00:31:147 -.
  9. 00:33:611 (33611|4) - Move to 7th.
  10. 00:34:040 (34040|2) - Move to 1st.
  11. 00:34:254 (34254|0) - Move to 2nd.
  12. 00:36:611 (36611|0) - Move to 3rd.
  13. 00:46:040 (46040|2) - Move to 1st.
  14. 01:06:397 (66397|5) - Move to 7th.
  15. 01:06:611 (66611|3) - Move to 5th.
  16. 01:16:682 (76682|4,76790|2,76897|4,77004|2) - Flip horizontally these notes.
  17. 01:19:254 (79254|0) - Move to 3rd.
  18. 01:22:254 (82254|3) - Move to 2nd.
  19. 01:22:897 (82897|4) - Move to 6th.
  20. 01:27:397 (87397|0) - Move to 4th.
  21. 01:29:325 (89325|3,89540|2,89754|1) - Move these notes to the left by 1 column.
  22. 01:29:968 (89968|4,89968|3,90397|3,90397|2) - Flip horizontally these notes.
  23. 01:30:825 (90825|2) - Move to 4th.
  24. 01:32:968 (92968|0) - Move to 3rd.
  25. 01:35:968 (95968|3) - Move to 2nd.
  26. 01:36:611 (96611|4) - Move to 6th.
  27. 01:51:397 (111397|3) - Move to 7th.
  28. 01:55:682 (115682|5,116540|4) - Move both notes to the left by 1 column. done all
[Hyper]
  1. 00:14:540 (14540|4,14647|4) - Move both notes to 6th.
  2. 00:14:754 (14754|2) - Move to 2nd.
  3. 00:22:040 (22040|3) - Remove.
  4. 00:22:147 (22147|4) - Move to 4th.
  5. 00:24:182 (24182|3) - Shorten the hold end to 00:24:290 -.
  6. 00:31:040 (31040|3) - Shorten the hold end to 00:31:147 -.
  7. 00:35:325 (35325|3) - Remove.
  8. 00:35:432 - Add a note at 4th.
  9. 00:35:540 (35540|4) - Remove.
  10. 00:36:611 (36611|0) - Move to 3rd and 00:36:825 (36825|2) - Move to 1st.
  11. 00:52:254 (52254|2,52361|1,52468|2,52575|1) - Flip vertically these notes.
  12. 00:55:361 (55361|3,55575|3) - Move both notes to 6th.
  13. 00:55:682 (55682|0,55897|0) - Move both notes to 3rd.
  14. 00:56:540 (56540|0,56648|2,56755|0,56862|2) - Flip vertically these notes.
  15. 00:56:969 (56969|1,57076|3,57183|1,57290|3) - ^
  16. 00:57:398 (57398|2,57505|4,57612|2,57719|4) - ^
  17. 00:57:826 (57826|3,57933|5,58040|3,58148|5) - ^
  18. 01:05:968 (65968|6) - Move to 1st.
  19. 01:06:182 - Add a note at 7th.
  20. 01:06:397 (66397|5) - Move to 7th.
  21. 01:06:611 (66611|3) - Move to 5th and 01:07:254 (67254|6,67254|4) - Move both notes to the left by 3 columns.
  22. 01:06:825 (66825|0) - Move to 7th.
  23. 01:19:040 (79040|2) - Move to 2nd.
  24. 01:19:254 (79254|0) - Move to 3rd and 01:19:468 (79468|2) - move to 1st.
  25. 01:19:683 (79683|0) - Move to 3rd.
  26. 01:19:897 (79897|2) - Move to 1st.
  27. 01:22:254 (82254|3) - Move to 2nd and 01:22:682 (82682|1) - move to 4th.
  28. 01:22:897 (82897|4) - Move to 6th.
  29. 01:26:968 (86968|1,86968|3) - Move both notes to the right by 1 column.
  30. 01:27:182 (87182|2,87182|4) - Move both notes to the left by 1 column.
  31. 01:32:754 (92754|2) - Move to 2nd.
  32. 01:32:968 (92968|0) - Move to 3rd and 01:33:182 (93182|2) - move to 1st.
  33. 01:33:397 (93397|0) - Move to 3rd.
  34. 01:33:611 (93611|2) - Move to 1st.
  35. 01:35:968 (95968|3) - Move to 2nd and 01:36:397 (96397|1) - move to 4th.
  36. 01:36:611 (96611|4) - Move to 6th.
  37. 01:39:182 (99182|3) - Move to 2nd.
  38. 01:39:290 (99290|2) - Move to 6th.
  39. 01:39:397 (99397|3) - Move to 1st.
  40. 01:39:504 (99504|5) - Move to 7th.
  41. 01:39:611 (99611|1) - Move to 4th.
  42. 01:39:718 (99718|6) - Move to 1st.
  43. 01:39:825 (99825|0) - Move to 7th.
  44. 01:51:397 - Add a note at 7th.
  45. 01:53:111 (113111|5) - Move to 5th.
  46. 01:53:540 (113540|4) - Move to 6th.
  47. 01:53:968 (113968|3) - Move to 7th.
  48. 01:54:397 (114397|4) - Move to 6th.fixed everything
[Another]
  1. 00:24:182 (24182|2) - Shorten the hold end to 00:24:290 -.
  2. 00:31:040 (31040|4) - Shorten the hold end to 00:31:147 -.
  3. 00:35:968 (35968|4) - Extend the hold end to 00:36:611 -.
  4. 00:38:540 (38540|6) - Extend the hold end to 00:38:861 -.
  5. 00:45:718 (45718|4) - Shorten the hold end to 00:45:932 -.
  6. 00:47:325 (47325|5) - Move to 7th.
  7. 00:47:968 (47968|2) - Move to 1st.
  8. 00:47:968 (47968|4) - Move to 7th.
  9. 00:52:147 (52147|4) - Move to 3rd.
  10. 00:52:361 (52361|2,52468|2,52575|2) - Move to 4th.
  11. 00:52:790 (52790|4,52897|4,53004|4) - ^
  12. 01:11:432 (71432|4) - Shorten the hold end to 01:11:647 -.
  13. 01:13:682 - Add a note at 4th.
  14. 01:15:611 (75611|2) - Move to 1st.
  15. 01:15:611 (75611|4) - Move to 7th.
  16. 01:15:932 (75932|0) - Move to 2nd.
  17. 01:15:932 (75932|6) - Move to 6th.
  18. 01:38:968 - Add a note at 4th.
  19. 01:39:825 - ^
  20. 01:40:254 - ^
  21. 01:40:682 - ^
  22. 01:42:397 (102397|2,102504|3,102611|2,102718|5,102825|1) - Flip horizontally these notes.
  23. 01:44:111 (104111|2,104218|3,104325|2,104432|5,104540|1) - ^
  24. 01:45:825 (105825|2,105932|3,106040|2,106147|5,106254|1) - ^
  25. 01:47:540 (107540|2,107647|3,107754|2,107861|5,107968|1) - ^
  26. 01:49:254 (109254|2,109361|3,109468|2,109575|5,109682|1) - ^
  27. 01:50:325 - Add a note at 7th.
  28. 01:50:432 - Add a note at 4th.
  29. 01:54:397 (114397|4) - Move to 4th.
  30. 01:54:504 (114504|5) - Move to 5th.
  31. 01:54:611 (114611|4) - Move to 6th.
  32. 01:54:718 (114718|5) - Move to 5th.
  33. 01:54:825 - Add a note at 3rd.
  34. 01:55:682 - Add a note at 4th.
  35. 01:56:540 - ^
  36. 01:57:397 - ^
  37. 01:58:254 - Add a note at 5th.
  38. 01:59:968 - Add a note at 4th. adding a note on spacebar breaks storyboard skipping D:
    fixed all otherwise^
Good luck :)
Thank you so much for the mod!! made so many changes :D
[Shi-Ra]
Hi, there are mods for your mania-diffs ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
Beginner
Inside :3
I see that you following BMS style, so I recommend you to change the name of Beginner's diff to Normal according to IIDX level spread.

00:07:254 (7254|2) - move this note to 6th column according to the sound, music here and in the next part goes in different ways, don't be afraid of placing it before LN in this column after it, it'll be comfortable to play for novice

00:10:254 (10254|0,10469|2,10683|4) - I suggest you to move these notes to 1st>3rd>5th columns to make difference between your patterns here by changing columns and saving space between the notes here

00:25:790 (25790|3,26111|6) - delete these notes, there are no suitable sounds for them, listen to the music carefully and don't overmap the diff for novices

00:26:004 (26004|5) - move this note to 6th column if you've followed my previous suggestion to save pattern balance here

From 00:32:218 to 00:32:968 - same issues, there's missed note and two notes which have no suitable sound, check it with lower playback and re-movel this part / for example

00:51:397 (51397|0) - move this note to 3rd column, it's more suitable with your pattern here, don't be afraid of leaving 0 column empty it's ok for this diff

01:02:968 (62968|3) - move to 1st column, I recommend you to make alternation here before LN in 3rd column, this pattern more suitable here

01:24:075 (84075|1) and 01:25:790 (85790|1) - delete these notes, there are no suitable sounds for them, you can re-arrange pattern after doing that or don't, it'll be good anyway

01:31:682 (91682|6) - this LN should ends here 01:32:540 according to it's sound, check it

01:37:790 (97790|1) - same problem, there's no suitable sound, so delete this note too

Hyper
Inside :3
00:14:647 (14647|5) - move this note to another column (4th I suggest) or delete it, there's no suitable sounds to place two notes in same column and make jack

00:25:468 - same suggestion like in previous diff, there's no need to overmap this part for Hyper diff, just follow the song and place all of these notes accordingly to the suitable sounds for them, re-model same parts, which includes this problem too

00:40:254 (40254|6) - delete this note, there's no suitable sound for it, check it with lower playback, it's good ending with LN in centre column too

00:42:932 (42932|2) - move to 1st column, it's better here rather than jack coz it follows music and going with your pattern here correctly

00:51:718 (51718|1) - move it to 2nd column then move this note 00:52:147 (52147|4) - to 3rd column, it's more comfortable to play this pattern here rather than simple trills

01:06:182 (66182|6) - move to 3rd column, it's more suitable with next going chord here

01:15:182 - I suggest you to add at least one more note to 3rd column here to accent sound which goes there

01:27:718 - add here one more note to 4th column according to the beat, double beat hoes there

01:32:441 - add one more note here to 1st column according to the sound and perform triplet note

01:37:789 (97789|2) - move to another column or else delete this, there's no suitable sound for this note

01:59:985 - add one more note here to 3rd column to perform good ending for this diff

Another
Inside :3
00:14:325 (14325|4,14432|4) - I suggest you to move these notes to 2nd column and make jacks in this way for that part

00:18:075 - add here one more note to 2nd column to make pattern stronger here according to the music and play level

00:21:504 (21504|4) - move this note to 2nd column too, here it more suitable with your previous and next going patterns and it also saves hand balance here

00:25:682 (25682|3) - move to 2nd column again and continue your left handed stair pattern here, it's good transition for your next going stair stream too

00:32:647 (32647|6) - move to 5th column to perform here triplet note correctly according to the sound, there's no identical sounds for placing jack

01:02:968 - for this part I recommend you to use this pattern, it's harder and you can follow beat and violin (or same) sound which goes here

01:05:432 (65432|3,65647|3) - move these notes to 1st column, don't leave it empty here, it's bad for your patterns, make some difference

01:15:201 - add here notes to 0 and 6th columns to accent this part according to the sound

01:35:325 (95325|1) - move this note to 5th column, it's more comfortable to catch it here and it'll not ruin your pattern, so don't be afraid of it

Finally add one more note here 01:59:968 to make strong finish according to play level of this diff.

Awesome patterns, shootin' star \o/
Good luck :3/
Topic Starter
HanzeR

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hi, there are mods for your mania-diffs ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
Beginner
Inside :3
I see that you following BMS style, so I recommend you to change the name of Beginner's diff to Normal according to IIDX level spread. I would, but the standard diff has to be named normal xD

00:07:254 (7254|2) - move this note to 6th column according to the sound, music here and in the next part goes in different ways, don't be afraid of placing it before LN in this column after it, it'll be comfortable to play for novice ok

00:10:254 (10254|0,10469|2,10683|4) - I suggest you to move these notes to 1st>3rd>5th columns to make difference between your patterns here by changing columns and saving space between the notes here ok

00:25:790 (25790|3,26111|6) - delete these notes, there are no suitable sounds for them, listen to the music carefully and don't overmap the diff for novices i hear a note on the first one but i deleted the second one

00:26:004 (26004|5) - move this note to 6th column if you've followed my previous suggestion to save pattern balance here
ok
From 00:32:218 to 00:32:968 - same issues, there's missed note and two notes which have no suitable sound, check it with lower playback and re-movel this part / for example^

00:51:397 (51397|0) - move this note to 3rd column, it's more suitable with your pattern here, don't be afraid of leaving 0 column empty it's ok for this diff
ok
01:02:968 (62968|3) - move to 1st column, I recommend you to make alternation here before LN in 3rd column, this pattern more suitable here
ok
01:24:075 (84075|1) and 01:25:790 (85790|1) - delete these notes, there are no suitable sounds for them, you can re-arrange pattern after doing that or don't, it'll be good anyway^

01:31:682 (91682|6) - this LN should ends here 01:32:540 according to it's sound, check it
fixed
01:37:790 (97790|1) - same problem, there's no suitable sound, so delete this note too^

Hyper
Inside :3
00:14:647 (14647|5) - move this note to another column (4th I suggest) or delete it, there's no suitable sounds to place two notes in same column and make jack

00:25:468 - same suggestion like in previous diff, there's no need to overmap this part for Hyper diff, just follow the song and place all of these notes accordingly to the suitable sounds for them, re-model same parts, which includes this problem too ^

00:40:254 (40254|6) - delete this note, there's no suitable sound for it, check it with lower playback, it's good ending with LN in centre column too
fixed
00:42:932 (42932|2) - move to 1st column, it's better here rather than jack coz it follows music and going with your pattern here correctly

00:51:718 (51718|1) - move it to 2nd column then move this note 00:52:147 (52147|4) - to 3rd column, it's more comfortable to play this pattern here rather than simple trills
ok
01:06:182 (66182|6) - move to 3rd column, it's more suitable with next going chord here
ok
01:15:182 - I suggest you to add at least one more note to 3rd column here to accent sound which goes there
ok
01:27:718 - add here one more note to 4th column according to the beat, double beat hoes there
ok
01:32:441 - add one more note here to 1st column according to the sound and perform triplet note
ok
01:37:789 (97789|2) - move to another column or else delete this, there's no suitable sound for this note

01:59:985 - add one more note here to 3rd column to perform good ending for this diff i cant add a note on 3 because hitting spacebar at the end of the song skips to score screen lol, so i added it at 4 instead

Another
Inside :3
00:14:325 (14325|4,14432|4) - I suggest you to move these notes to 2nd column and make jacks in this way for that part
ok
00:18:075 - add here one more note to 2nd column to make pattern stronger here according to the music and play level
ok
00:21:504 (21504|4) - move this note to 2nd column too, here it more suitable with your previous and next going patterns and it also saves hand balance here ok

00:25:682 (25682|3) - move to 2nd column again and continue your left handed stair pattern here, it's good transition for your next going stair stream too
ok
00:32:647 (32647|6) - move to 5th column to perform here triplet note correctly according to the sound, there's no identical sounds for placing jack
i hear the violin repeating a note here :x
01:02:968 - for this part I recommend you to use this pattern, it's harder and you can follow beat and violin (or same) sound which goes here
looks neat! ill try it!
01:05:432 (65432|3,65647|3) - move these notes to 1st column, don't leave it empty here, it's bad for your patterns, make some difference
ok
01:15:201 - add here notes to 0 and 6th columns to accent this part according to the sound
ok
01:35:325 (95325|1) - move this note to 5th column, it's more comfortable to catch it here and it'll not ruin your pattern, so don't be afraid of it
ok
Finally add one more note here 01:59:968 to make strong finish according to play level of this diff.ok

Awesome patterns, shootin' star \o/
Good luck :3/
Wow thank you so much for mod and star! I'm honored :) Thankyou!!
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