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Flask

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Flask 2014-02-27T15:38:04+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
oh you

[Easy]
00:04:739 (2) - doesn't straight slider look better? lol k, also make this slider parallel with 00:05:816 (3) - o3o

nice blankets
[Normal]
00:02:224 (4) - hmmmmmm need whistle on tail of this slider? nice catch o/
[Hard]
00:04:739 (6) - what about adding NC here for jump pattern and emphasis?
00:30:427 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - current pattern plays a bit boring imo, maybe you can try other patterns instead of this nice -w-/
you can try this if you want
20,212,30427,5,0,0:0:0:0:
92,232,30607,1,8,1:0:0:0:
108,304,30786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,304,31146,5,2,0:0:0:0:
92,232,31325,1,8,1:0:0:0:
152,188,31505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,188,31864,5,0,0:0:0:0:
92,232,32044,1,8,1:0:0:0:
20,212,32224,2,0,L|52:364,1,150
124,372,32763,1,8,1:0:0:0:
211,277,32942,2,0,P|212:314|196:348,1,75
164,224,33301,1,0,1:0:0:0:
177,206,33391,1,0,1:0:0:0:
189,190,33481,6,0,P|189:142|253:82,1,134.999995880127,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:36:176 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ do something like what you do at ^
00:57:912 (6) - same NC suggsetion with 00:04:739 (6) - here kk
01:06:894 (5) - this jump seems too sudden and plays little bit uncomfortable comparing with previous patterns, i prefer to curve it more or decrease DS k
01:12:643 (4) - ^ k
[Insane]
you'd better increase volumes on sliderticks by 10%, those are little bit louder than other hitsounds You mean increase or reduce? Anyway I choose to reduce them because in my opinion they're louder than others lolol
00:37:613 (5,1) - swap NC for consistency k
00:58:092 (1) - this is a kind of nazi mod lol, how about stacking this note under 00:57:194 (1) - this one? well.. since both notes have same combo color, it would be better if those are stacked each other lol sure lol
01:08:331 (3) - i think you forgot to add NC here yep. Also do this to 01:14:080 (1) - o3o
01:10:128 (3) - how about adding soft finish here? yea clap will be changed to soft as well but adding finish seems more important because there aren't much differences between normal and soft clap k~
01:14:080 (3) - same with 01:08:331 (3) - this, if those are intentional, try adding NC on them for indicating SV changes like you did in other similar parts

[Skystar's insane ]
same suggestion about diff name with Regou's diff yea ofc
00:52:792 - consider adding a note here, there is a strong beat which needs a note to have better feeling, or changing the rhythm like this fits nicely as well use a 1/4 slider instead
01:15:337 (1) - curving this slider to upward plays better imo (and making blanket would be great too) I luv this <3
example
01:27:014 (1) - try moving this note to leftside, current placement plays a bit uncomfortable beacuse of 01:26:295 (1,1,1,1) - this pattern imo k

call me back for recheck, maybe i'll give a std icon after it lel

Fix skystar's diff for her since she can't use computer
change video offset to 826ms

~~Now waiting for hotdog o/~~

HelloSCV wrote:
[Regou's Insane]
i think some of the patterns are a bit hard for Insane, consider changing it to Extra k
00:57:194 (2) - missed clap on head of the slider? I think he was planning to leave a break to emphasize the whistles around there, just like what I've done in my diffs
01:21:086 (6,7,1) - since this triplet seems like 1/2 beat pattern, perhaps most of players may feel confuse because of this, adding NC 01:21:086 (6) - here or decreasing DS of the triplet can be solution Add that new combo

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2014-03-01T02:29:12+00:00

recheck, no kds of course!

[Hard]

00:36:176 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i can't see any differences with previous patter o_o

[Insane]

i meant "Decrease" those volumes orz sorry for typo

[Skystar's Extra]

00:18:032 - unsnapped green line i don't think it was purposed

[Regou's Extra]

01:21:086 (6) - i think you missed to add NC here

Flask

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Flask 2014-03-01T08:07:42+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
recheck, no kds of course!

[Hard]
00:36:176 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i can't see any differences with previous patter o_o I hate bugs
[Insane]
i meant "Decrease" those volumes orz sorry for typo Done :V
[Skystar's Extra]
00:18:032 - unsnapped green line i don't think it was purposed k

[Regou's Extra]
01:21:086 (6) - i think you missed to add NC here k

:O

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2014-03-01T08:14:35+00:00

here's Standard icon~

Ulysses

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Ulysses 2014-03-21T15:36:40+00:00

又rank神圖

Skystar

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Skystar 2014-03-29T10:31:47+00:00

graveyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaard

OnosakiHito

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OnosakiHito 2014-04-06T16:17:20+00:00

Requested Taiko Mod through PM.

[

mint's Muzukashii]

SPOILER

00:18:032~00:21:984 - I know you don't like sliders that much, but I would recommend the pattern down below. Current pattern you have doesn't seem to emphasize its part well enough. You placed some big dons, but I believe it is not enough. That's why having D ... D ... D ... K (S-S-S-S-S-S) might fit better here. It follows the vocal in a pretty good way, especially the slider in finisher modus. A spinner wouldn't fit here if you ask me. I know that people got somehow used to short spinners, but normaly we should use sliders for short moments, while spinners are those which are used for long stretched notes E.g. at the end: 01:27:014 ).

00:27:194 (21) - How about moving this note to 00:27:373 ? Can't explain at this point exactly why I suggest it, but it feels good in the pattern concept you have if you ask me.
00:29:888 (x) - Considering your kat constellation up to 00:57:553, you should add here a kat too to keep it consistent.
01:03:481 - Just another suggestions for thi spattern, which you might like:

{
01:02:224 - K
01:07:972 - K
01:13:721 - K
01:10:846 - K and 01:10:487 - D so it connects 01:09:589 and 01:11:206 ?
01:19:469 - K
} Hm, I think the reason is clear. I also think in this way the Muzukashii becomes pretty interesting. The finishers are clearly connected together and emphasize the kiai.
{
01:24:499 - k k D x k
01:25:577 - D x D x D kkk k (spinner)
} How about this constellation? Not a must, just a suggestion of mine. I know at 01:24:858 is no real sound for a finisher, but pattern wise it would sound and play good. It's up to you.

[

Kanto's Oni]

SPOILER

General

00:18:032 - I think you should rise the volumen a bit. The song is reall loud here, so it wouldn't be bad to rise it a bit as well. Note is barely audioable.
00:18:571 - ^
-> You could also try to put from 00:16:595 at every note one timeline which has +0.2 audio volume. That would be also nice.
Not important, but you might want to change hitsound N:1 to Normal lol

Notes

00:43:810 (227) - - Suggesting following one pattern, because mapping on 3/4 doesn't fit here well. It comes out of the sudden, but also doesn't refer to anything in the song:

00:49:739 - This one fits here better. Pattern technically.
01:20:816 (493) - Well, actually the vocal is still following the 1/2 scheme. But when adding a don at 01:20:906, it fits better. Try it?
01:24:140 - This finisher stands totally alone here. Rather recommending to remove it since you have none at 01:22:703, 01:23:421 and 01:25:577.
01:25:577 - how about this or something similar? I find it important to change from don to kat at 01:26:116 due to the vocal.

01:27:194 (1) - Expand spinner to 01:29:888 ?

[

mint's Inner Oni]

SPOILER

01:21:984 (567,568,569,570,571,572,573,574,575) - I doubt this fits really well to the vocal. Also it's the only odd pattern here if I'm not wrong, which is really odd. Try this one: d kkddkkd or something like that?
01:24:140 - Same as in the Oni. This finisher stands totally alone here. Rather recommending to remove it since you have none at 01:22:703, 01:23:421 and 01:25:577.
01:25:577 - Have this as end ?

Maps are so far pretty nice. There are many 1/4 you used, but I see a system behind it. Doesn't sound bad, so I'm okay with it.
But remember following:

Next time, think twice about it if you go for a

set because, either I might just pop the bubble or unrank it. lol
You have to start to think about the spread, nvm if you collab with someone or not. This could have been easily a

set. Yet, we have one easy diff and two which are pretty hard but overall similar in mapping.

Good job anyway. Recall me afterwards.

Skystar

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Skystar 2014-04-06T16:21:01+00:00

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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mintong89

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mintong89 2014-04-07T00:20:33+00:00

OnosakiHito wrote:
Requested Taiko Mod through PM.

[ mint's Muzukashii]
SPOILER
00:18:032~00:21:984 - I know you don't like sliders that much, but I would recommend the pattern down below. Current pattern you have doesn't seem to emphasize its part well enough. You placed some big dons, but I believe it is not enough. That's why having D ... D ... D ... K (S-S-S-S-S-S) might fit better here. It follows the vocal in a pretty good way, especially the slider in finisher modus. A spinner wouldn't fit here if you ask me. I know that people got somehow used to short spinners, but normaly we should use sliders for short moments, while spinners are those which are used for long stretched notes E.g. at the end: 01:27:014 ). k

00:27:194 (21) - How about moving this note to 00:27:373 ? Can't explain at this point exactly why I suggest it, but it feels good in the pattern concept you have if you ask me. k
00:29:888 (x) - Considering your kat constellation up to 00:57:553, you should add here a kat too to keep it consistent. k
01:03:481 - Just another suggestions for thi spattern, which you might like:

{
01:02:224 - K
01:07:972 - K
01:13:721 - K
01:10:846 - K and 01:10:487 - D so it connects 01:09:589 and 01:11:206 ?
01:19:469 - K
} Hm, I think the reason is clear. I also think in this way the Muzukashii becomes pretty interesting. The finishers are clearly connected together and emphasize the kiai.
{
01:24:499 - k k D x k
01:25:577 - D x D x D kkk k (spinner)
} How about this constellation? Not a must, just a suggestion of mine. I know at 01:24:858 is no real sound for a finisher, but pattern wise it would sound and play good. It's up to you.

[ mint's Inner Oni]
SPOILER
01:21:984 (567,568,569,570,571,572,573,574,575) - I doubt this fits really well to the vocal. Also it's the only odd pattern here if I'm not wrong, which is really odd. Try this one: d kkddkkd or something like that? fix on my way
01:24:140 - Same as in the Oni. This finisher stands totally alone here. Rather recommending to remove it since you have none at 01:22:703, 01:23:421 and 01:25:577. k
01:25:577 - Have this as end ? k

Maps are so far pretty nice. There are many 1/4 you used, but I see a system behind it. Doesn't sound bad, so I'm okay with it.
But remember following:

Next time, think twice about it if you go for a set because, either I might just pop the bubble or unrank it. lol
You have to start to think about the spread, nvm if you collab with someone or not. This could have been easily a set. Yet, we have one easy diff and two which are pretty hard but overall similar in mapping.

Good job anyway. Recall me afterwards.

Thanks for mod~!

http://puu.sh/7YTGS.zip

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OnosakiHito 2014-04-08T14:29:59+00:00

Recheck and aaaaah, my bad but I found some more things. Sometimes I need a second check before I'm sure about some parts in a map. Well, recall me afterwards and we are ready!

Kanto's Oni

General: I've noticed before that the SV is somehow slow, but didn't checked it. Now I saw that you are using 1.30 SV. I recommend you 1.40 SV because the patterns are pretty dense and long + you are using finishers between many patterns which makes it a little bit look like cluster-patterns. Personally I also feel it's a little slow for such a strong song.

00:15:158 (40) - Finisher to emphasize the stretched sound in the background?
00:17:763 (54,56) - You could delete those notes to emphasize the clap at 00:17:673 and change note (55) to don for consistency with upcoming d D patterns. 00:18:032 (57) - Can be changed to finisher as well.
- 00:16:595 - Timeline volumen: 50%
- 00:17:313 - Timeline volumen: 60%

So transition to to 70% at 00:18:032 fits better.
- 00:18:751 and 00:19:469 can be deleted since you have 70% at 00:18:032 already.
00:58:990 (326) - Hm. Thinking about it, I'm not sure about the slider. It's pretty close to the upcoming note. What do you think about having d x k instead? Just suggestion.
01:18:751 - Better have at 01:19:469 a finisher since you did it before as well. Current finisher stands alone since there is none at 01:19:110 which represents the vocal.

mint's Inner Oni

Oh, forgot to ask if you are sure about the acceleraiting SV in the kiai? Not sure if it is really needed here.

Flask

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Flask 2014-04-08T15:16:17+00:00

@Ono:

[kanto's oni]
00:58:990 (326) - he said this is on purpose bcz it was something before the kiai and he just did something different

others all fixed, mintong removes the sv changes during the kiai too

OnosakiHito

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OnosakiHito 2014-04-08T16:37:13+00:00

Alright. Taiko difficulties are in my opinion okay for rank now. So I think I can bubble this.

@BAT who rank: Check out the audio-leadin. Just to be sure.

osu-icon: p/2904041
Bubbled

Good luck!

Skystar

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Skystar 2014-04-08T16:41:48+00:00

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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Flask

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Flask 2014-04-08T16:43:08+00:00

Thanks ono =w=~

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mintong89 2014-04-09T02:04:42+00:00

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Skystar

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Skystar 2014-04-11T08:47:27+00:00

/me bites ono

EmingK

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EmingK 2014-04-17T02:55:51+00:00

恭喜rank

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Selisi 2014-04-17T10:18:38+00:00

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Azure

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Azure 2014-04-18T11:47:25+00:00

FFFFF快rank啊我的OP2就連你這惹 (

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2014-04-19T09:28:51+00:00

Wow, finally seeing a beatmap of this song being bubbled (and soon ranked huehue)

Good luck!

Kinomi

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Kinomi 2014-04-29T09:45:29+00:00

艹，还不rank

Regou

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Regou 2014-05-07T14:41:59+00:00

Tsukuyomi wrote:
艹，还不rank

-kevincela-

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-kevincela- 2014-05-12T15:13:43+00:00

will mod this soon >3<

Flask

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Flask 2014-05-12T22:30:04+00:00

\:D/

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2014-05-13T17:24:26+00:00

Gogo rank ~ !! o3o >w<

KSHR

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KSHR 2014-05-14T06:49:01+00:00

To -kevincela- and Flask: Don't forget this as well!

TKS wrote:
add "VVV" to the tags. VVV is an abbreviated word of Valvrave. http://puu.sh/8GbO9.png
also, add "Inoue Akio" if you added "Asakura Daisuke".
Asakura Daisuke is a composer. Inoue Akio is a lyric writer.
you must change the title to "Preserved Roses -アニメバージョン- " , "Preserved Roses -Anime Version-"
http://www.sonymusic.co.jp/artist/tmr-m ... /ESCL-4049

EDIT: Just pasted what TKS wrote, so this post doesn't warrant a kudosu.

Flask

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Flask 2014-05-15T11:41:41+00:00

Yeah thanks KSHR for that, I'll add those tags and change the title when kevin comes

-kevincela-

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-kevincela- 2014-05-20T18:20:04+00:00

[Easy]

00:01:864 (2) - Imo a whistle would just go perfectly here, considering how well it goes with the synth in the background, and also after seeing all your whistles usage you should definitely try it here
00:16:236 - What would you think about adding a note? The map feels quite strange without the note emphatizing the vocals there... Not really a big thing, but it goes on really well and I also think it makes a pretty good transition with the next pattern. See if you like it
00:57:912 (2) - As 00:04:739 (2) - , I would totally suggest you to add a whistle at the beginning of this slider, also to follow better all the synth. Considering that you have used all these whistles in the other part, why don't you use it here as well? Otherwise you could just remove the whistle at the beginning from 00:04:739 (2) - !
01:03:840 (3) - This is more a personal thing, so feel free to reject: what would you think about using instead of a simple 3/2 slider a pattern consisting of a 1/2 slider and some 1/1 notes? It totally follows both the vocals and the instruments, and I really don't think it is that hard to play for an Easy diff. Here's an example:

Remember to do this to the other patterns as well if you fix!

[Normal]

00:28:092 (1,2,3,4) - The current pattern is placed in a really high spot, and it's currently covering the HP bar. You should really move this pattern a bit down there... With some tweaks, you should be able to do it correctly without any big problems! If you're having any troubles with doing that, here's what I have done:
SPOILER
```
220,156,28092,6,0,P|236:108|212:40,1,120,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,16,28631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,52,28990,2,0,L|20:36,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,144,29709,2,0,P|52:200|64:268,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,336,30427,6,0,P|92:356|68:360,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
00:32:224 (4) - You should totally reverse the curve of this slider, as it follows the curve of the previous one really well, making an overall pretty good pattern to play there! It's not a great thing, but imo it could be quite good here, so here's what I have done
00:39:230 (1,2) - The New Combos between these 2 sliders should get "reversed", and by that I mean you should place that New Combo on 00:39:589 (2) - instead of 00:39:230 (1) - to follow the new vocal phrase (which sounds pretty cool!)
00:56:116 (5) - I didn't really like how this is placed so far... While in the other patterns it worked quite well, in this case I expected it to go downwards, seeing how all the patterns there are going downwards. You could also have this slider's curve reversed to make a quite nice dropoff with the next pattern! Here's what I have done: see if you like it!
SPOILER
```
336,136,56116,2,0,P|341:185|318:258,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,328,56834,6,0,L|436:360,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,312,57194,2,0,L|484:311,2,60,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,216,57912,2,0,L|487:183,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```

I am really sorry for being late, these weeks i'm being really busier than expected so you'll have to eventually wait for some days for all the mod. For now here's a part of it. I hope I've been helpful for now :3

Flask

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Flask 2014-05-21T10:36:51+00:00

so I'll just fix the point you've pointed out in current mod for now

-kevincela- wrote:
[Easy]

00:01:864 (2) - Imo a whistle would just go perfectly here, considering how well it goes with the synth in the background, and also after seeing all your whistles usage you should definitely try it here nice, added!
00:16:236 - What would you think about adding a note? The map feels quite strange without the note emphatizing the vocals there... Not really a big thing, but it goes on really well and I also think it makes a pretty good transition with the next pattern. See if you like it Actually imo, the music goes much quieter, so I don't
00:57:912 (2) - As 00:04:739 (2) - , I would totally suggest you to add a whistle at the beginning of this slider, also to follow better all the synth. Considering that you have used all these whistles in the other part, why don't you use it here as well? Otherwise you could just remove the whistle at the beginning from 00:04:739 (2) - ! I'd choose to add whistle at here!
01:03:840 (3) - This is more a personal thing, so feel free to reject: what would you think about using instead of a simple 3/2 slider a pattern consisting of a 1/2 slider and some 1/1 notes? It totally follows both the vocals and the instruments, and I really don't think it is that hard to play for an Easy diff. Here's an example:

Remember to do this to the other patterns as well if you fix! That's kind of a great idea, I like it, but I don't really agree that the rhythm won't be hard for playing though.. sorry but I'd reject it ;_;
[Normal]
00:28:092 (1,2,3,4) - The current pattern is placed in a really high spot, and it's currently covering the HP bar. You should really move this pattern a bit down there... With some tweaks, you should be able to do it correctly without any big problems! If you're having any troubles with doing that, here's what I have done: Done! (Sorry I didn't use your code for some reason, but I replace them by myself)
SPOILER
220,156,28092,6,0,P|236:108|212:40,1,120,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,16,28631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,52,28990,2,0,L|20:36,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,144,29709,2,0,P|52:200|64:268,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,336,30427,6,0,P|92:356|68:360,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:32:224 (4) - You should totally reverse the curve of this slider, as it follows the curve of the previous one really well, making an overall pretty good pattern to play there! It's not a great thing, but imo it could be quite good here, so here's what I have done Changed \o\
00:39:230 (1,2) - The New Combos between these 2 sliders should get "reversed", and by that I mean you should place that New Combo on 00:39:589 (2) - instead of 00:39:230 (1) - to follow the new vocal phrase (which sounds pretty cool!) oops my mistake, done
00:56:116 (5) - I didn't really like how this is placed so far... While in the other patterns it worked quite well, in this case I expected it to go downwards, seeing how all the patterns there are going downwards. You could also have this slider's curve reversed to make a quite nice dropoff with the next pattern! Here's what I have done: see if you like it! That's nice (again) k due to the same reason I can use your godlike code so I do something by myself o3oo
SPOILER
336,136,56116,2,0,P|341:185|318:258,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,328,56834,6,0,L|436:360,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,312,57194,2,0,L|484:311,2,60,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,216,57912,2,0,L|487:183,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
I am really sorry for being late, these weeks i'm being really busier than expected so you'll have to eventually wait for some days for all the mod. For now here's a part of it. I hope I've been helpful for now :3

Thanks kevin! Now wait for the other part of the mod huehue
Btw I've uploaded some new hitsounds that skystar told me to do so (cuz I missed it when I got the diff). Please redownload for them (and my changes!)

..And I'll add tags at my next update. ;_; Totally forget it

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,796 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2014-05-27T17:25:39+00:00

[Hard]

00:31:146 (1,2,3) - What would you think about making a jump here or at least making the spacing higher? I can see here how the singer's chords are more strong here, so emphatizing them with a gradual spacing change would totally fit well and also make a pretty good pattern to play! If you do this, remember that the same applies for 00:36:894 (1,2,3) - !
00:53:062 (2) - Seeing where the other 2 sliders are heading on, I would totally make this slider go upwards instead of downwards, maybe by also placing it at places like x:256 y:252, as it makes a really fun jump to play that really flows well with these other 2 sliders, so even if it isn't such a great thing I would recommend you to do it :3 Here's an example of what I mean: http://puu.sh/8ZmLF.jpg
00:56:295 (4) - x:204 y:228? Using a linear pattern with these sliders doesen't work that well, and I would prefer a triangular pattern to follow the sliders' oval flow there :p
00:57:912 (6) - A New Combo should be added here, considering that you have previously used it, and also it fits pretty good since it follows well the synth there
01:08:331 (4) - , 01:14:080 (4) - and 01:19:828 (4) - should probably have New Combos too, seeing that only the 3/4 slider should be in the combo and the next slider instead should be in a new Combo pattern

[Insane]

00:11:026 (2) - At the current place this slider really doesen't work that well, it feels too much for this calm part and also it doesen't really follow right any of the instruments being played there. I would totally suggest you to just replace this 1/4 slider with a note, since I believe a simple note would do the job better at the moment!
00:23:242 (4) - What about stacking this on the top of 00:22:703 (2) - ? It feels ok at the moment but it is a bit strange to play, considering that you mostly aren't doing these kind of overlapped notes, at least in this map!
00:56:834 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - While I'm okay with 00:57:733 (1,1) - I don't think the New Combo spam works properly here... I really can't hear any instrument which truly resembles this New Combo usage and they really do feel overused, so I'd suggest you to at least remove part of them
01:02:134 (1,2) - and 01:07:882 (1,2) -'s jumps are REALLY exhagerated seeing how you've mapped the map for now (they are even bigger than the Extra's one!) and really break the flow because of that incredibly big spacing. I would really suggest you to somewhat reduce these jumps there, because at the moment they are really big and don't fit well there :\

[Regou's Extra]

00:03:122 (2,3) - What would you think about making the spacing higher here, comparted to the 1/8 pattern? It isn't a big thing, but distinguishing the 1/4 pattern from the 1/8 one can work really good as the SV is quite higher than the spacing and it isn't all really easily recognizable, it would also make the pattern a bit more clear, like here :p
00:51:894 (3) - In this case instead I would see better to just remove this note, as I can't really hear anything that needs to be emphatized here, and it would make the 1/8 pattern quite better to play with just a 1/2 gap :p
01:01:864 (3,1,2,1) - Here I would use instead a pattern a bit reversed seeing 01:01:146 (1,2) - 's flow with 01:01:864 (3) - reversed and the same goes for the next slider. It isn't a really big thing, though I believe it would use a really great oval flow there to play which would make the pattern really smooth and nice! Here's what I have done: see if you like it!
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[Skystar's Extra]

00:17:224 (1) - This is one of the cases where I believe that even if this note doesen't follow anything it works really good to start the pattern in another pace. I like it!
01:19:828 (1) - Just a little thing there, but what would you think about using a 1/2 slider there instead of a simple note? It is ok at the moment, but using just a note after all your patterns feels really almost as a break rhythm-wise, therefore I would see pretty good a 1/2 slider there instead

ù

Call me back when you're done and sorry for the delay!

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,466 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

Flask 2014-05-28T11:59:35+00:00

again kevin

-kevincela- wrote:
[Hard]

00:31:146 (1,2,3) - What would you think about making a jump here or at least making the spacing higher? I can see here how the singer's chords are more strong here, so emphatizing them with a gradual spacing change would totally fit well and also make a pretty good pattern to play! If you do this, remember that the same applies for 00:36:894 (1,2,3) - ! Seriously I don't think I'll do this because...eh, it feels so weird if you played something same but the spacing of that doesn't supposed be same. At least to me, so I'd refuse this ;_;
00:53:062 (2) - Seeing where the other 2 sliders are heading on, I would totally make this slider go upwards instead of downwards, maybe by also placing it at places like x:256 y:252, as it makes a really fun jump to play that really flows well with these other 2 sliders, so even if it isn't such a great thing I would recommend you to do it :3 Here's an example of what I mean: http://puu.sh/8ZmLF.jpg nice!
00:56:295 (4) - x:204 y:228? Using a linear pattern with these sliders doesen't work that well, and I would prefer a triangular pattern to follow the sliders' oval flow there :p okay, but I'd do it by spacing you know (x:204, y:228 doesn't follow that)
00:57:912 (6) - A New Combo should be added here, considering that you have previously used it, and also it fits pretty good since it follows well the synth there Absolutely right!
01:08:331 (4) - , 01:14:080 (4) - and 01:19:828 (4) - should probably have New Combos too, seeing that only the 3/4 slider should be in the combo and the next slider instead should be in a new Combo pattern k
[Insane]

00:11:026 (2) - At the current place this slider really doesen't work that well, it feels too much for this calm part and also it doesen't really follow right any of the instruments being played there. I would totally suggest you to just replace this 1/4 slider with a note, since I believe a simple note would do the job better at the moment! okay o3oo
00:23:242 (4) - What about stacking this on the top of 00:22:703 (2) - ? It feels ok at the moment but it is a bit strange to play, considering that you mostly aren't doing these kind of overlapped notes, at least in this map! 00:10:667 (1,2) - :p. Well I'd keep this.
00:56:834 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - While I'm okay with 00:57:733 (1,1) - I don't think the New Combo spam works properly here... I really can't hear any instrument which truly resembles this New Combo usage and they really do feel overused, so I'd suggest you to at least remove part of them I separate the note that was added whistle and the note wasn't, will that work to you?
01:02:134 (1,2) - and 01:07:882 (1,2) -'s jumps are REALLY exhagerated seeing how you've mapped the map for now (they are even bigger than the Extra's one!) and really break the flow because of that incredibly big spacing. I would really suggest you to somewhat reduce these jumps there, because at the moment they are really big and don't fit well there :\ k

now waiting for the guest~
I feel sorry about clicking "give a kd" on your second post ;_;

Regou

1,927 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2014-05-28T13:28:33+00:00

-kevincela- wrote:
[Regou's Extra]
00:03:122 (2,3) - What would you think about making the spacing higher here, comparted to the 1/8 pattern? It isn't a big thing, but distinguishing the 1/4 pattern from the 1/8 one can work really good as the SV is quite higher than the spacing and it isn't all really easily recognizable, it would also make the pattern a bit more clear, like here :p okay~
00:51:894 (3) - In this case instead I would see better to just remove this note, as I can't really hear anything that needs to be emphatized here, and it would make the 1/8 pattern quite better to play with just a 1/2 gap :p ssure~
01:01:864 (3,1,2,1) - Here I would use instead a pattern a bit reversed seeing 01:01:146 (1,2) - 's flow with 01:01:864 (3) - reversed and the same goes for the next slider. It isn't a really big thing, though I believe it would use a really great oval flow there to play which would make the pattern really smooth and nice! Here's what I have done: see if you like it! ohhhh thats good
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Call me back when you're done and sorry for the delay!

Thanks!
puush sucks I'd put my update here

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-kevincela- wrote:
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00:17:224 (1) - This is one of the cases where I believe that even if this note doesen't follow anything it works really good to start the pattern in another pace. I like it! Thanks! This was literally something how the song told me to do when I first time listened to the song. At the time, I've been already cognizant of that making a pattern like that is exactly what I should have to do by my feelings towards the song. Kind of glad that you liked this, it really encourages me!
01:19:828 (1) - Just a little thing there, but what would you think about using a 1/2 slider there instead of a simple note? It is ok at the moment, but using just a note after all your patterns feels really almost as a break rhythm-wise, therefore I would see pretty good a 1/2 slider there instead Well, pretty much as you said, this was actually supposed to be a break. I dunno but I did this intuitively, I talked with Flask about this just now and he also agreed with me on that (since I'd like to know if it's only me or not) x.x sorry for rejecting this xD

-kevincela-

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-kevincela- 2014-05-31T16:03:08+00:00

I am having some troubles with redownloading the map (it imports as a corrupt beatmap)... orz
Try to reupload and call me again, everything else should be okay :3

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

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Flask 2014-06-01T10:29:34+00:00

~~I've submitted like 19859058902 times and seems it's still not getting work. I'll try it tomorrow when I went to somewhere else ;_;.~~DONE.

-kevincela-

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-kevincela- 2014-06-05T17:51:24+00:00

Just a couple of things in the normal diff:

00:56:834 (1,2) - this is a bit too much for a normal... it will be quite difficult for a newbie to recognize that stack >_< you should at least space them a bit out to make them play intuitively
01:03:840 (4) - you missed a finish at the beginning of this slider which you have also used on the other sliders, so remember to add it there as well!

also remember to add a whistle to 00:04:739 (1) - in the hard diff

Call me back after these fixes and I'll rank (finally

)

Flask

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Flask 2014-06-06T11:05:14+00:00

Okay, all fixed!

Skystar

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