1. Hard (4.81 stars, 188 notes)
2. illuminist's Easy (2.07 stars, 93 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 337 notes)
4. Normal (4.29 stars, 128 notes)

blissfulyoshi wrote:

You are going to need an easier difficulty to get this ranked.

Hard:
00:12:96 (3,4) - make 3 the a slider that extends to where 4 starts and make the end of 4 a beat and a new combo
00:14:72 (3,1) - swap new combo
00:16:14 (3) - new combo
00:26:37 (1) - align with 3?
00:28:49 (7) - align with 1?
00:52:84 (7,1) - swap new combo
00:54:25 (5,1) - " "
01:12:08 (6,7,8,9) - center these between 1,2,3,4,5
01:13:31 (13,14) - center these between 10,11,12
01:23:64 (1) - start a quarter note later

Insane:
00:14:37 (4) - it looks ugly for this note to be partially covered by 2 but not completely, please move it somewhere else
00:14:90 (2,5) - having strange overlaps like this don't look that good
00:40:67 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this soft whistle spam is annoying
00:45:52 (8) - align with 10
01:17:20 (1,2) - y is there a jump in spacing here?
01:17:37 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - please make this more circular so it is easier to read
01:20:02 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - don't put so many claps

Tag 2: (please don;t use white or gray combo colors in tag maps, they are annoying)
(only a quick look over, sry)
00:13:31 (1,2,3,4) - stack the endings better
00:24:08 (3,4) - spacing jump?
01:24:08 (1,1) - illegal spinners (auto must score at least 2k bonus)

Nice map. Star.

pete2528 wrote:

ติดตามผลงานครับ กดมันส์มากมาย

tieff wrote:

Cool map.

[Normal]
00:28:14 (1) - End this spinner here 00:28:847?
00:50:72 (1) - End this spinner here 00:51:435?
01:02:72 (x) - Add note with finish?
01:23:20 (1) - Finish?

[Hard]
01:02:72 (x) - Add note with finish?
01:12:78 (10) - New combo, maybe.
01:23:20 (1) - Finish?

[Insane]
Great work!
00:12:96 (7) - Finish?
00:14:02 (3) - Finish on end.
00:15:78 (7) - Finish.
00:18:61 (7) - ^
00:20:02 (7) - ^
00:21:43 (7) - ^
00:57:08 (x) - Same as normal and hard. Add note with finish?

Star, of course.

azuki wrote:

little mod

[Insane]
00:40:670 - (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) i dont like this clap spam :3 not match
00:45:435 - (7,8,9,10,11) This different spacing maybe can confuse.

cool map.star~

[ALL]
Please make music track from 1 to 2 seconds.

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Starred. Interesting map~

EEeee wrote:

Normal
00:40:494 - fix break here < fixed

Hard
00:10:49 (7) - add New combo
00:35:72 (7) - add New combo, well I would add one here
00:52:49 (5) - add New combo
00:52:84 (1) - remove new combo
00:53:55 (3) - add new combo
00:54:25 (1) -
00:54:61 (7) - add new combo
00:54:96 (1) - remove newbo
ู^Fixed

Intense
00:26:37 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - add a new combo somewhere, maybe at 11
and Damn, this diff looks good, and intense, I mean its really well done for me/really hard < Fixed

TAG2
I think this is ok, I don't really know how to mess with a TAG map


well great map, Intense looks awesome ^______^

Symbolic wrote:

[Normal]

Please louder sound over the whole difficulty.

00:09:08 (7) - New combo here.
00:09:61 (1) - Remove new combo here.
00:26:02 (8) - New combo here.
00:26:72 (1) - Remove new combo here.
00:57:08 (4) - New combo here.
01:16:84 (8) - ^
01:17:55 (1) - Remove new combo here.
01:19:67 (7) - New combo.
01:20:37 (1) - Remove new combo.


[Hard]

Please louder sound over the whole difficulty.

00:35:02 (x) - Add a note here.
01:16:84 (8) - New combo.
01:17:37 (1) - Remove new combo.


[Insane]

Please louder sound over the whole difficulty.
Map is not rankable without a spinner in it. See suggestions below for 1 suggestion where you could put a spinner.

00:02:81 (x) - Add a note here.
00:02:99 (x) - ^
00:03:17 (X) - ^
00:45:43 (7,8,9,10,11) - Space these the same as the rest of the 1/4's.
00:48:61 (TIMING SECTION) - Kiai Time doesn't fit here imo.
01:23:90 (3) You could delete this note and start a spinner from here till 01:23:90 in place of the note.


[TAG2]

Please louder sound over the whole difficulty.
Respace this map, on one moment you used 0,8x spacing and on another moment you used 0,7x. The spacing just a mess.

00:48:61 (TIMING SECTION) - Remove Kiai Time, It doesn't fit.
00:51:43 (TIMING SECTION) - ^
00:56:20 (TIMING SECTION) - ^
01:14:37 (TIMING SECTION) - ^


Cool map
Starred 8

Kharl wrote:

A quality map indeed. Only one suggestion for you before I can bubble this map. < ok thx

- Normal -
00:51:78 (1) - Move it 1/2 beat backward < Fixed

//Background and Video events
0,0,"heart-of-witch.jpg"
Video,-705,"HeartOfWitchBga.avi"

Kharl wrote:

link สำหรับ BGA ครับ
http://www.4shared.com/file/117605274/60bc1fdc/HeartOfWitchBga.html

วิธีใส่ BGA ให้เปิดไฟล์ .osu ของเพลงนี้ทั้งสี่ไฟล์ใน Notepad หาบรรทัดที่เขียนว่า //Background and Video events

แล้วก๊อบข้างล่างนี้ไปแปะครับ

//Background and Video events
0,0,"heart-of-witch.jpg"
Video,-705,"HeartOfWitchBga.avi"

mrtn wrote:

try offset 601 < It's good offset fixed

[normal]
00:29:20 - reinsert break
00:40:49 - reinsert break
01:03:08 - ^
01:13:31 (1) - spinner is a bit on the short side even though it's technically allowed. < All fixed

[hard]
00:29:20 - reinsert break
00:40:49 - reinsert break < All fixed

[insane]
no problems =)

[TAG2]
00:04:31 (1) - remove new combo < Fixed

starred =) < Thx XD

Gabi wrote:

i thought this Tag2 was really really cool. however it bothered me that some streams look really stupid, and lots of grid problems.
Tag2 ทำได้ค่อนข้างดี แต่ถึงกระนั้นก็มีสิ่งน่าขัดใจตรงบางทิศทาง(การใหลของโน้ทมั้ง)ดูเหมือนจะติ้งต้อง(งี่เง่า) และปัญหาของระยะโน้ท(grid เข้าใจแบบนี้นะ)

[Tag2]
00:01:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - space this out equally เพิ่มช่องว่างให้เท่ากัน(see 1,2,3 are further apart then 4,5,6,7)
00:01:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - เพิ่มช่องว่างให้เท้ากัน(ดู 1,2,3 ไกลกว่า 4,5,6,7)

00:33:77 (7,8,9) - move closer to (6)
00:33:77 (7,8,9) - ขยับมาใกล้ๆ (6)

00:48:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - this was a rather annoying stream to follow, make it tighter and easier (in my oppinion. but you dont have to do it)
00:48:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - ทิศทางโน้ทน่าขัดใจในการเล่นกดในทิศทางนั้น ทำให้เป็นกลุ่ม(กระชับ) และง่ายๆ (เป็นความคิดเห็น แต่คุรไม่ต้องทำก็ได้)

01:05:71 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not equally spaced (2,3,4 are tighter then 5,6,7,8)
01:05:71 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ไม่ใช่ระยะ (2,3,4 กล่มนี้แน่นกว่ากลุ่ม 5,6,7,8)

01:14:36 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - like i previously mentioned, make it prettier
01:14:36 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) -เหมือนๆที่กล่าวมาจัดให้สวยงาม

01:20:18 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - เหมือนๆที่กล่าวมาจัดให้สวยงาม


ill come back to mod insane after
เดียวมาดูระดับ insane ให้

EDIT: [Insane]

im not gonna nazi mod to much. since this is your first beatmap, i will give you a tip. things like this 00:14:71 (1,2,3) should be corrected. it looks right but heres the thing, 1 and 2 are 1 grid spaced away from each other, while 2 and 3 are 3 grids spaced from each other. make sure the whole combo is spaced the exact same grid distans from each other. you have a couple of these "errors" in your beatmap set, i suggest going through all of them
ฉันไม่ได้ไปหา nazi mod ประจำเท่าใหร ตั้งแต่คุณทำเพลงนี้เพลงแรก ฉันจะให้สิ่งเล็กๆ(ลูกเล่น) คือ ตรง 00:14:71 (1,2,3) ควรจะทำให้ถูกต้อง ลักษณะดูเหมือนจะถูกแต่ระยะ ของ 1 และ 2 ห่าง 1 ต่างจากตัวอื่นๆ เช่นเดียวกับโน้ท 2 และ 3 ห่าง 3 ช่อง ชึ่งเป็นข้อผิดพลาด ในการจัดชุดโน้ทเพลง ฉันแนะนำให้แก้ไขสิ่งเหล่านั้น

00:02:71 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - space closer to each other. (8,9,10,15 are off)
00:02:71 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - ระยะใกล้กันนิด (8,9,10,15 จบครับ)

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
00:00:60 (1) - ...belzeir? < คือหยั่งหว่า?
fix your breaks
แก้จุดพัก


[Hard]
00:03:42 (1) - use belzeir curves if you want to make a curve, not linear เข้าใจว่าให้ใช้ฟังชั้นเส้นโค้งในการทำทางโค้ง
01:12:77 (1) - inherit sections used for sampleset changes should happen a tick before you intend them to take effect to account for early clicking การรับช่วงเป็นสิ่งพื้นๆที่เกิดขึ้นได้ในการกด ก่อนที่คุณจะตั้งใจทำมันของผลกระทบในการกดเร็วๆ อืม น่าจะแปลว่า ถ้าจะตั้งใจเล่นโน้ทกระโดดที่ค่อนข้างกระชากไกลๆ ควรวางโน้ทให้ดีๆ
fix your breaks
แก้จุดหยุด



[Insane]
00:02:71 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - uhhh your spacing is really weird here due to grid snap rounding. maybe try turning grid snap off for a bit and repositioning this stream? ระยะห่างกว้างจัง ใช้ grid เพื่อความเหมาะสม บางทีลองย้าย(ปรับ) Grid snap off (ปรับลดกระมั้ง)สักนิด และปรับตำแหน่งใหม่ดูใหม?
00:41:54 (13) - really hidden เหมือนถูกซ้อน มองไม่เห็น


[Tag2]
01:05:54 (1,2) - move the new combo to 2; that way the two claps are both in the same person like before.
ย้ายคอมโบใหม่ไป 2 ที่ตรงนั้นใส่เสียงตบมือ เหมือนอันเดิม

Gabi wrote:

i thought this Tag2 was really really cool. however it bothered me that some streams look really stupid, and lots of grid problems.

[Tag2]
00:01:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - space this out equally (see 1,2,3 are further apart then 4,5,6,7)< Fixed
00:33:77 (7,8,9) - move closer to (6) < Fixed
00:48:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - this was a rather annoying stream to follow, make it tighter and easier (in my oppinion. but you dont have to do it) < i don't know, how to fix, sry
01:05:71 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not equally spaced (2,3,4 are tighter then 5,6,7,8) < Fixed
01:14:36 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - like i previously mentioned, make it prettier
01:20:18 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - ^ < All fixed


ill come back to mod insane after

EDIT: [Insane]

im not gonna nazi mod to much. since this is your first beatmap, i will give you a tip. things like this 00:14:71 (1,2,3) should be corrected. it looks right but heres the thing, 1 and 2 are 1 grid spaced away from each other, while 2 and 3 are 3 grids spaced from each other. make sure the whole combo is spaced the exact same grid distans from each other. you have a couple of these "errors" in your beatmap set, i suggest going through all of them < Thx

00:02:71 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - space closer to each other. (8,9,10,15 are off)< Fixed

animask wrote:

[Normal]
00:09:07 (1) - Add a finish here?
00:11:54 (6) - ^ at end of slider
all fixed

[Hard]
00:12:95 (3) - Add finish here at end of slider - fixed
00:14:71 (1) - Add finish here - fixed
00:16:13 (1) - ^ disagree
00:34:83 (3) - Spacing looks off a bit - fixed

[Insane]
00:12:95 (7) - Spacing is a bit off - fixed
00:19:48 (4) - ^ - fixed
Remove Timing Section at the end. - removed (Why i add time section orz..)