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[Easy]
01:19:429 - 피니쉬 해제
01:21:084 - 피니쉬
01:21:911 - ^

[Normal]
00:07:429 - 클랩
00:07:842 - 클랩
00:19:015 - 피니쉬
00:38:463 - 클랩
00:46:325 - 피니쉬
00:56:256 (3) - 리턴 한번더
그리고 클랩
01:02:049 - 피니쉬 해제
01:03:704 - 피니쉬
01:04:118 - 피니쉬
01:21:911 - 피니쉬

[Hard]
00:06:601 - 박자 이렇게 http://puu.sh/3WLjc.jpg
00:07:429 - 피니쉬
00:07:842 - 피니쉬
00:11:567 - 여기부터 박자 http://puu.sh/3WLoT.jpg
00:19:015 - 피니쉬
00:19:842 (1) - 스피너 끝을 여기로 00:21:394 -
00:24:394 - 이 박자 지워요
00:29:360 - 피니쉬
00:35:567 - 여기부터 1/2 5박
00:42:187 - 피니쉬
00:51:601 - 여기랑 00:51:911 - 클랩 어떨까요
붕탁에 많이 나오는 클랩인디 별로 안어울리려나
00:57:704 (6) - 클랩
01:21:911 - 피니쉬

Topic Starter
[ Zzz ]

L i a wrote:

적습니다
[Easy]
01:19:429 - 피니쉬 해제
01:21:084 - 피니쉬
01:21:911 - ^

( 위 피니시 헤제와 피니쉬가 있으신데 저거 하나만 하제하고 하나만 넣기 조금 그래서 .. 그냥 둘다 넣을꺠요 .. 그리고 3번째꺼는 거절할꺠요 .. 먼가 별로 ... )

[Normal]
00:07:429 - 클랩 ( no... )
00:07:842 - 클랩 ( 이건 수정했어요 .. 위에꺼랑 이거랑 둘다 클렙나오면 뭔가 이상해서 이것만 수정할꺠요!! )
00:19:015 - 피니쉬( ok )
00:38:463 - 클랩 ( ok )
00:46:325 - 피니쉬 ( 되어있네요 'ㅂ'!! )
00:56:256 (3) - 리턴 한번더 ( 음.. 제가 슬라 3개까진 좋아해도 리턴 4개는 싫어해서말이죠.. 이건 고집부리고싶네요 ㅠㅠ... )
그리고 클랩
01:02:049 - 피니쉬 해제 ok
01:03:704 - 피니쉬 no
01:04:118 - 피니쉬 no
01:21:911 - 피니쉬 ok

[Hard]
00:06:601 - 박자 이렇게 http://puu.sh/3WLjc.jpg
00:07:429 - 피니쉬
00:07:842 - 피니쉬
00:11:567 - 여기부터 박자 http://puu.sh/3WLoT.jpg
00:19:015 - 피니쉬
00:19:842 (1) - 스피너 끝을 여기로 00:21:394 -
00:24:394 - 이 박자 지워요
00:29:360 - 피니쉬
00:35:567 - 여기부터 1/2 5박
00:42:187 - 피니쉬
00:51:601 - 여기랑 00:51:911 - 클랩 어떨까요
붕탁에 많이 나오는 클랩인디 별로 안어울리려나
00:57:704 (6) - 클랩
01:21:911 - 피니쉬

감사합니다 리아님~ 힛사는 대부분 고쳣구요 .. 제 스타일과 난이도에 조금 어긋나는거같아서 .. 박자가 조금 맘에들기도 히자만.. 그냥 이대로갈꺠요 .. 'ㅂ' 좋은 모딩 감사합니다~ + 스타 감사합니다!!
Beige
M4M

[General]

전체적으로 쉬운맵이네요 ㅎㅎ...

그리고 Grid Snap 몇 개 사용 안하신것 같은데 사용하는게 더 쉬우실 수도 있어요.

[Easy]

00:31:429 (3) - 이 슬라이더를 00:09:911 (3) - 이 슬라이더를 이용하면 좋을 것 같습니다. (대칭도 맞고)

00:34:739 (3,1,2) - 위와 같은 의견인데요. 00:09:911 (3) - 이 슬라이더를 이용해서 맞춰주면 좋을 것 같습니다.

00:43:015 (1) - 이 슬라이더를 사용하시면 더 잘 포함 되요.
Slider
292,28,43015,6,0,P|292:96|348:152,2,140,6|2|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:46:325 (1) - Ctrl + H ^

01:14:463 (1,2) - 01:11:153 (1) - << 이 슬라이더 사용하시면 좋을 것 같습니다.

[Normal]

00:11:980 - 이건 제안인데요. Tick을 히트사운드 나게 하시면 좋을 것 같아요.

00:14:049 (4) - ^

00:18:187 (5) - ^

00:45:498 (4) - ^

00:57:911 (1) - 이거 전 노트하고 가까우니까 00:55:842 (2) - 를 00:54:187 (3) - 와 스택해주시고 (x:304 y:104로 옮기시라는 뜻) 00:57:498 (4) - x:436 y:140 에 노트 추가해주세요, 그리고 Clap 넣어주시는거 잊지 마시고요.

00:57:911 (1) - Tick을 히트사운드 나게 하시면 좋을 것 같아요.

01:14:463 (1) - ^

[Hard]

00:25:636 (7,1) - Hard 이고 AR도 느려서 이런 거리는 유저들을 햇갈리게 할 수 있습니다. x1.0이 아니더라도 조금만 떨어트려주세요.

01:02:877 (4) - 01:02:463 (3) - 하고 포함시켜주시는게 좋을 것 같은데...

굳bb

제가 좋아하는 매핑스타일이에요 ㅋ

이 정도면 랭크도 금방 되실 것 같습니다~

GL~
ss7356
Easy

이지는 제가 잘못봅니다.. 패스!

Normal
00:04:532 2와 겹치게 콤보 1개정도 넣는게 좋을거 같아요
00:19:429 "
00:26:049 "
00:57:498 "
01:12:808 전체적으로 구석에 있는것 같은데 뭐라 설명하기 애매하네요..

Hard

00:18:187(5,6) 중앙을 기준으로 같은거리에 떨어져있는게 나을거 같아요
00:23:153(1) 좌표144,164
00:25:636(7) 좌표 88,208
00:26:049(7) 콤보 추가
00:28:190(5) 좌표64,16 으로
00:35:980 3단타로 하는게 어떨까요?
00:47:980(3) 흠.. 모양이 조금 단조로운거 같아요
00:49:222 콤보 한개 추가하는게 나을듯해요
01:17:773(2) 좌표 80,0


참고로 그... 제목이 eternel reality 인데 Enternel Reality 로 바꾸는게 나을거 같아요

그리고 파랑색은 제안이고 빨강은 굳이 받아들이지 않아도 되는것들이고요
"는 위랑 같은거다. 라고 표현한거에요
사운드나 박자는 좋은데 패턴이 좀 단순하네요..
제가 모딩초짜여서 여기까지만 할께요 랭맵되세요~
Startrick
.
Topic Starter
[ Zzz ]

W h i t e wrote:

M4M

[notice][General]

전체적으로 쉬운맵이네요 ㅎㅎ... ( 네 제가 쉬운맵을 좋아해서요!! )

그리고 Grid Snap 몇 개 사용 안하신것 같은데 사용하는게 더 쉬우실 수도 있어요. ( 만약 하드라면 그건 일부러 한거에요!! )

[Easy]

00:31:429 (3) - 이 슬라이더를 00:09:911 (3) - 이 슬라이더를 이용하면 좋을 것 같습니다. (대칭도 맞고) ( ok )

00:34:739 (3,1,2) - 위와 같은 의견인데요. 00:09:911 (3) - 이 슬라이더를 이용해서 맞춰주면 좋을 것 같습니다. ( ok )

00:43:015 (1) - 이 슬라이더를 사용하시면 더 잘 포함 되요. ( 음.. 코드로 주면.. 저는 잘 몰라서 .. 어떻게 할수가없네요 ..... 는 무시 ... )
Slider
292,28,43015,6,0,P|292:96|348:152,2,140,6|2|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:46:325 (1) - Ctrl + H ^ ( no... 대신 다르게 했어요!! )

01:14:463 (1,2) - 01:11:153 (1) - << 이 슬라이더 사용하시면 좋을 것 같습니다. ( ok )

[Normal]

00:11:980 - 이건 제안인데요. Tick을 히트사운드 나게 하시면 좋을 것 같아요. ( no...이대로도 충분할것 같아요!! )

00:14:049 (4) - ^

00:18:187 (5) - ^

00:45:498 (4) - ^ all no .....

00:57:911 (1) - 이거 전 노트하고 가까우니까 00:55:842 (2) - 를 00:54:187 (3) - 와 스택해주시고 (x:304 y:104로 옮기시라는 뜻) 00:57:498 (4) - x:436 y:140 에 노트 추가해주세요, 그리고 Clap 넣어주시는거 잊지 마시고요. ( no... )

00:57:911 (1) - Tick을 히트사운드 나게 하시면 좋을 것 같아요.

01:14:463 (1) - ^ ( 둘다 no ... sorry..... )

[Hard]

00:25:636 (7,1) - Hard 이고 AR도 느려서 이런 거리는 유저들을 햇갈리게 할 수 있습니다. x1.0이 아니더라도 조금만 떨어트려주세요. ( 일단..이건 생각좀 해보고 .. 다른사람도 이런다면 고치던지 해볼꺠요!! )

01:02:877 (4) - 01:02:463 (3) - 하고 포함시켜주시는게 좋을 것 같은데... ( 는 이것도 거절 ... 는 포함시켜달라는 음.. 이해를 못하겟어요 ...ㅁㄴ... )

굳bb ( 님맵도 굳굳!!! )

제가 좋아하는 매핑스타일이에요 ㅋ ( 감사합니다 ~ )

이 정도면 랭크도 금방 되실 것 같습니다~ ( 최대한 노력해볼꺠요!! 뱃..............................ㅁㄴㅇㄹ )

GL~
아무튼 모딩 감사합니다~
Topic Starter
[ Zzz ]

ss7356 wrote:

Easy

이지는 제가 잘못봅니다.. 패스!

Normal
00:04:532 2와 겹치게 콤보 1개정도 넣는게 좋을거 같아요 ( no... )
00:19:429 " ( no... )
00:26:049 " ( no... )
00:57:498 " ( no... )
01:12:808 전체적으로 구석에 있는것 같은데 뭐라 설명하기 애매하네요.. ( 하하 괜찮아보여요 저는 'ㅂ'.!! )

Hard

00:18:187(5,6) 중앙을 기준으로 같은거리에 떨어져있는게 나을거 같아요[/color
00:23:153(1) 좌표144,164
00:25:636(7) 좌표 88,208 ( 위와 이거 no... 저런거 하나 하나 맟추면 다 맟춰야되서 말이죠 .. )
00:26:049(7) 콤보 추가 ( 왠지 그전이 더 좋은듯하네요 )
00:28:190(5) 좌표64,16 으로 ( no... )
00:35:980 3단타로 하는게 어떨까요? ( 3연타보다는 5연타가 좋을것같네요 .. 하지만..난이도 밸런스를 위해서 .. no... )
00:47:980(3) 흠.. 모양이 조금 단조로운거 같아요 ( 제 모든난이도는요 하기 쉽게 만들기 위해서 단조롭고 뭐 별로 볼꺠없어요 .. 'ㅂ' .. ) 재미가 없고 그냥 보기만을 위해 만드는맵.. 'ㅂ' .. ) 그래서 단조로운건 어쩔수없어요 ㅇㅂㅇ ㅠㅠ... )
00:49:222 콤보 한개 추가하는게 나을듯해요 ( no... 보컬 따라가는 주의라서요 .. )
01:17:773(2) 좌표 80,0 ( no... )


참고로 그... 제목이 eternel reality 인데 Enternel Reality 로 바꾸는게 나을거 같아요 ( 일단 또 이런지적 오면 생각해볼꺠요 )

그리고 파랑색은 제안이고 빨강은 굳이 받아들이지 않아도 되는것들이고요
"는 위랑 같은거다. 라고 표현한거에요
사운드나 박자는 좋은데 패턴이 좀 단순하네요..
제가 모딩초짜여서 여기까지만 할께요 랭맵되세요~
모딩 감사합니다~ 꼭 두번쨰 랭맵 만들도록 해볼꺠요!!
Topic Starter
[ Zzz ]

Startrick wrote:

M4M~

[Easy]
00:06:601 (1) - 제 개인적인 생각이지만 여기 뉴 콤보 빼도 낫지 않을까요...? 뉴 콤보가 많은거 같아서... ( ok )
00:26:463 (1) - 여기도 뉴 콤보 빼도 될 꺼 같은데... ( ok )

[Normal]
00:09:084 (2) - 이거 1 그리드 왼쪽으로 옮기시는건 어때요?... 어차피 디스턴스 0.02 차이인데... ( ok )
00:11:567 (1,2,3,4) - 1 그리드 왼쪽? ( ok )

[Hard]
00:49:429 (5) - 뉴 콤보...? ( no... 대신 00:49:636 (1) - 이쪽을 뉴콤보했어요!! )

엄청 잘 만드셨는데 저 같은게 해도 되는지 모르겠네요 ㅠㅠ ( 모딩은 아무나 해도되요 !! 제 약점 잘잡으셧네요!! 하하 ...
아니 애초에 별로 한 게 없는 듯...
하하...

아무튼 모딩 감사합니다~
-Neipezi
this irc modding
21:12 [ Zzz ]: 모딩..
21:12 [ Zzz ]: 오늘가능?
21:12 [ Zzz ]: 앙대면
21:12 [ Zzz ]: 내일이나 모래라도
21:12 -Neipezi: rksmd
21:12 -Neipezi: 가능
21:12 [ Zzz ]: 아 지금 가능?
21:13 -Neipezi: ㅇㅇㅇㅇ
21:13 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅋ
21:13 [ Zzz ]: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/109256
21:14 -Neipezi: 쿨아
21:14 -Neipezi: 버즈 투지만들래?
21:14 [ Zzz ]: ?
21:14 [ Zzz ]: 음..
21:14 [ Zzz ]: 일단
21:14 [ Zzz ]: 보고
21:14 -Neipezi: 싫으면 됬고
21:14 [ Zzz ]: 맵좀
21:14 [ Zzz ]: 진행되면
21:14 [ Zzz ]: 만들어봄
21:14 [ Zzz ]: 일단
21:14 [ Zzz ]: 링크좀
21:15 -Neipezi: 아직 노래 없단다..
21:15 [ Zzz ]: 아 글쿤
21:15 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅋㅇㅋ~ 그럼 나중에
21:15 -Neipezi: ㅇㅇ
21:20 -Neipezi: 대칭 보소
21:20 [ Zzz ]: 훗
21:20 [ Zzz ]: 지림
21:20 [ Zzz ]: 본격 안드레아 ㄷㄷ..
21:21 -Neipezi: 00:35:980 - 서클 추가해야할듯
21:21 -Neipezi: 하드
21:21 [ Zzz ]: 음..
21:21 -Neipezi: 약간 뭔가 이상
21:21 [ Zzz ]: irc 말고
21:21 [ Zzz ]: 포스트로 ..
21:21 -Neipezi: irc받어 그냥
21:21 -Neipezi: 귀찮다..
21:21 [ Zzz ]: 알겟음 ..
21:21 -Neipezi: 휘슬 안썼냐
21:21 [ Zzz ]: ?
21:21 -Neipezi: 북소리나네
21:21 [ Zzz ]: 씀
21:21 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅇ
21:22 [ Zzz ]: 아니면
21:22 [ Zzz ]: 힛사
21:22 [ Zzz ]: 추천점..
21:22 -Neipezi: 01:10:325 (5,6) -
21:22 -Neipezi: 이거
21:22 -Neipezi: 6번 서클 크랩 지우고 휘슬
21:22 -Neipezi: 크랩 타탁 이거 안좋다
21:24 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅋ
21:24 -Neipezi: 00:47:153 (2,3) - 너무 직선 슬라 쓰지말고 곡선좀..
21:25 [ Zzz ]: 직선이 조흠!!
21:25 -Neipezi: 니 맘대로 ;;
21:25 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅇ
21:25 -Neipezi: 뭐 볼것도 없어..
21:25 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅇ ㄳ~
21:26 [ Zzz ]: 하나는 수정했음
21:26 [ Zzz ]: 클렙 > 휘슬
21:26 -Neipezi: 잊
21:27 [ Zzz ]: ?
21:27 -Neipezi: 야 북소리
21:27 *-Neipezi is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/194022 Chocolate Chip Cookies - Ashita no Kioku]
21:27 [ Zzz ]: ?
21:27 -Neipezi: 여기서 가져가
21:27 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅋ
21:27 -Neipezi: 북소리안들려
21:27 [ Zzz ]: 휘슬에
21:27 [ Zzz ]: 갔다 넣으면됨?
21:27 -Neipezi: 어
21:27 -Neipezi: 내꺼 피니쉬에 있으니까 가져가
21:28 -Neipezi: 00:00:394 (1) - 스핀 00:00:187 (1) - 부터
21:29 -Neipezi: 00:52:118 (1) - 슬라 00:51:911 (1) - 부터
21:29 -Neipezi: 좀 이상한가 ㅋㅋ;
21:30 -Neipezi: 더이상 볼게 없다..gg;
21:31 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅋㅇㅋ
21:31 -Neipezi: 쿠도스 받을 게시물이 아닌데
21:34 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅂㅇ..
21:36 [ Zzz ]: 와
21:36 [ Zzz ]: 키리토가 누구죠
21:36 [ Zzz ]: ㄷㄷ
21:36 [ Zzz ]: 님은 아니구요
21:36 [ Zzz ]: 후훗!
21:36 [ Zzz ]: 님은 네이퍼지일뿐임!
21:36 [ Zzz ]: ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
21:37 -Neipezi: 뭔 드립임
쿠도스 받기 싫구만..
Ushiro T
안녕하세여~~
초보라 전문적인건 잘 못봐서 제너럴은 패스ㅎㅎ

Easy

00:36:394 (4) - NC
00:38:049 (5) - 머리에 클랩추가
00:39:704 (1) - 마지막에 피니쉬추가
00:42:187 (2) - 클랩추가

으으 키아이때 사운드가 뭔가허전해서 클랩넣어보려니까 박자가엄슴


Normal

슬라이더 틱에 클랩으로썻던 사운드 넣어보면 어떨까요. 일정한 박자로 클랩소리나다가 긴슬라이더나올땐 그게 없어져서 뭔가 위화감이..
예를들어 00:11:567 (1,4) - 이거 두개

00:08:256 (1) - 요기붙어있는 초록선을 앞에 00:07:842 (4) - 로 옮겨주세염


Hard

00:04:946 (5) - NC
00:18:187 (5) - NC
00:36:808 (2) - 클랩추가
00:38:463 (5) - 클랩추가
00:40:118 (2) - 클랩추가
00:41:360 (4) - 리버스부분에 클랩추가
00:49:636 (1) - 머리에 피니쉬 꼬리에 클랩추가
00:50:256 (2) - 세박자 전부 클랩추가
00:51:084 (3) - 클랩추가



잘만드셔서 배치같은건 못건드리겠네염..
MineC24
Modding~~

Easy
Not found problem :D

Normal
<- add NC

00:10:739 (4) - x:324 y:276 (기존의 위치에서 조금 오른쪽으로 당겨야 다음에 나오는 슬라와 균형이 더 잘 맞을 것 같아요)
01:21:498 (2) - 슬라 리버스로 하기보다는 노트 3개 or 슬라 + 노트 로 하는게 좋을 것 같아요 (아무래도 노래의 마지막이다보니 이렇게 연출하는게 좋을 것 같아요)

Hard
<- fix this

00:38:463 (5) - 이 노트를 조금 이동시켜서 00:36:808 (2,4,5) - 이 세게가 정삼각형 모양을 띄도록 하면 좋을 것 같아요
(x:260 y:264 이렇게 하면 후에 나오는 슬라랑 디스턴스도 맞아서 좋다고 생각해요. 모양 만들기를 좋아하는 잉여의 생각이니 무시해도됨 :D )
00:49:636 (1) - 슬라의 끝부분 포인트를 x:128 y:156 으로
00:50:256 (2) - ^ (00:49:636 (1)의 슬라를 고쳤다면, 이것도 같이)
01:03:498 - 노트를 넣는게 좋을 것 같아요
01:21:084 (1,2) - 00:18:187 (5,6) - 이 슬라처럼 디스턴스를 멀리 해놓는 패턴이 좋을 거라고 생각합니다... (굳이 고칠 필요는 없어요)

굿럭 :)
(빨리 랭크 될듯 :D )
Topic Starter
[ Zzz ]

enlxodutls wrote:

안녕하세여~~
초보라 전문적인건 잘 못봐서 제너럴은 패스ㅎㅎ

Easy

00:36:394 (4) - NC ( ㅇㅋ )
00:38:049 (5) - 머리에 클랩추가 ( 별로 이거 클렙추가하면 다른것도 추가해야되서 .. 하나만 추가하기는 애매하네요.. ㄴㄴ... )
00:39:704 (1) - 마지막에 피니쉬추가 ( 이것도 ㄴㄴ.. )
00:42:187 (2) - 클랩추가 ( ㄴㄴ ... )

으으 키아이때 사운드가 뭔가허전해서 클랩넣어보려니까 박자가엄슴 ( ㅠㅠ... )


Normal

슬라이더 틱에 클랩으로썻던 사운드 넣어보면 어떨까요. 일정한 박자로 클랩소리나다가 긴슬라이더나올땐 그게 없어져서 뭔가 위화감이..
예를들어 00:11:567 (1,4) - 이거 두개 ( 일단은 ㅇㅋ... 나중에 보고 결정할깨요 )

00:08:256 (1) - 요기붙어있는 초록선을 앞에 00:07:842 (4) - 로 옮겨주세염 ( ㄴㄴ.. 그전이 더 좋은거 같아요 .. )


Hard

00:04:946 (5) - NC ( ㅇㅋ )
00:18:187 (5) - NC ( ㅇㅋ )
00:36:808 (2) - 클랩추가( 이거랑 아래 2개는 비슷하지만 다르게했어요 )
00:38:463 (5) - 클랩추가
00:40:118 (2) - 클랩추가
00:41:360 (4) - 리버스부분에 클랩추가 ( 여기서부터 아래 모두 거절 ... )
00:49:636 (1) - 머리에 피니쉬 꼬리에 클랩추가
00:50:256 (2) - 세박자 전부 클랩추가
00:51:084 (3) - 클랩추가



잘만드셔서 배치같은건 못건드리겠네염.. ( 감사합니다~ )
Topic Starter
[ Zzz ]

MineC24 wrote:

Modding~~

Easy
Not found problem :D

Normal
<- add NC

00:10:739 (4) - x:324 y:276 (기존의 위치에서 조금 오른쪽으로 당겨야 다음에 나오는 슬라와 균형이 더 잘 맞을 것 같아요)
01:21:498 (2) - 슬라 리버스로 하기보다는 노트 3개 or 슬라 + 노트 로 하는게 좋을 것 같아요 (아무래도 노래의 마지막이다보니 이렇게 연출하는게 좋을 것 같아요)

Hard
<- fix this

00:38:463 (5) - 이 노트를 조금 이동시켜서 00:36:808 (2,4,5) - 이 세게가 정삼각형 모양을 띄도록 하면 좋을 것 같아요
(x:260 y:264 이렇게 하면 후에 나오는 슬라랑 디스턴스도 맞아서 좋다고 생각해요. 모양 만들기를 좋아하는 잉여의 생각이니 무시해도됨 :D )
00:49:636 (1) - 슬라의 끝부분 포인트를 x:128 y:156 으로
00:50:256 (2) - ^ (00:49:636 (1)의 슬라를 고쳤다면, 이것도 같이)
01:03:498 - 노트를 넣는게 좋을 것 같아요
01:21:084 (1,2) - 00:18:187 (5,6) - 이 슬라처럼 디스턴스를 멀리 해놓는 패턴이 좋을 거라고 생각합니다... (굳이 고칠 필요는 없어요)

굿럭 :)
(빨리 랭크 될듯 :D )저도 빨리 랭크되고싶네요!!
감사합니다~ Ai 모드 전부 수정했구요 하드 거의다 수정했어요!! ~
Sunny Holic
[General]
인센 난이도 넣는것도 괜찮을것 같네영.

[Hard]
00:06:601 (3,4) - 이부분을 3을 복붙해서 이런식으로 만들어 보심이? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/926599
00:14:877 (1,3) - 직선슬라이더가 너무 자주 나오면 좀 단조로울 수 있으니. 여기도 역시 1번 복붙해서 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/926602 이렇게?

[Normal&Easy]
배치가 규칙적이라 건의 드릴만한게 없네용.
Topic Starter
[ Zzz ]

Sunny Holic wrote:

[General]
인센 난이도 넣는것도 괜찮을것 같네영. ( 고민하고있는데 먼가 인센넣으면 퀄이 달라서 'ㅂ' .. 일단은 그냥 이리갈려구요 )

[Hard]
00:06:601 (3,4) - 이부분을 3을 복붙해서 이런식으로 만들어 보심이? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/926599 ( 음 저한태는 별로 좋은생각은 아닌거같아요 .. )
00:14:877 (1,3) - 직선슬라이더가 너무 자주 나오면 좀 단조로울 수 있으니. 여기도 역시 1번 복붙해서 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/926602 이렇게? ( 생각해볼꺠요 .. 근데 되도록 저런건 직선슬라로 넣고싶은게 'ㅂ' )

[Normal&Easy]
배치가 규칙적이라 건의 드릴만한게 없네용.
소중한 모딩 감사합니다~
Topic Starter
[ Zzz ]
.. 사람들이 인세인 인세인 하길래.. 결국 인세인을 넣기로 함 'ㅂ' !!
Unsfamiliar
Hiiii trying for m4m :)

Hard
  1. 00:36:394 (1,3) - Blanket.
  2. 00:38:877 (6,1) - ^
  3. 01:24:394 - I think you should increase the volume. Leave it as the same volume you used for kiai time perhaps. You already have a finish on the spinner end, it sounds much better if you let it ring out.

SC's Insane
  1. 00:07:325 (7) - I think this note is unnecessary. Sounds just as good, if not better, as just two 1/2 notes.
  2. 00:19:842 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I suggest you try using a gradual increase in volume for the whistles in this section. Use a volume increment of, say 10% or something, at regular sections of the stream. Start low and end with the volume it's on now. Sounds cool :)
  3. 01:03:498 (1,2,3,4) - This part sounds strange with the two double 1/4 notes. Consider somethinging like this:
    1. Ok, first remove both (3) and (4).
    2. Add a new slider at 01:03:704 and using 1/6 timing use a double reverse and end the slider here 01:03:911. Yeah I know 1/6 is weird, but try it. I think it fits.
    3. 01:04:015 - Add a note here as the new start to the following stream.
    4. So something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/934433
    5. I guess doing this makes things unnecessarily complicated, even though the music actually plays like that. Your call :oops:
  4. 01:24:394 - Umm increase volume for iinherited timing point?

Normal
  1. Nice :) Just same issue with final inherited timing point.

Easy
  • Also nice!

That's all from me. I couldn't really find any major problems with this map set. Good job and good luck! :D
HabiHolic
제 모딩큐에서 왔습니다~

인센 난이도에만 비디오가 적용이 안되어 있습니다 적용바랍니다

[Easy]

이지가 정말 많이 쉬워보이네요 응용한 리듬도 넣어보시는걸 추천

딱히 지적할 사항은 없네요

[Normal]

이 난이도가 흔히 볼수있는 이지스타일이네요..

00:31:429 (3) - 제안인데 뉴콤보?
00:57:498 - 여기 비어있으니 무지무지 어색;; 노트 추가
01:21:084 (5) - 뉴콤보


시간이 없어서 이지 노멀만 합니다
하드 인센은 오후에 해드리죠
[Aumoa]

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Hiiii trying for m4m :)

SC's Insane
  1. 00:07:325 (7) - I think this note is unnecessary. Sounds just as good, if not better, as just two 1/2 notes.
  2. 00:19:842 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I suggest you try using a gradual increase in volume for the whistles in this section. Use a volume increment of, say 10% or something, at regular sections of the stream. Start low and end with the volume it's on now. Sounds cool :)
  3. 01:03:498 (1,2,3,4) - This part sounds strange with the two double 1/4 notes. Consider somethinging like this:
    1. Ok, first remove both (3) and (4).
    2. Add a new slider at 01:03:704 and using 1/6 timing use a double reverse and end the slider here 01:03:911. Yeah I know 1/6 is weird, but try it. I think it fits.
    3. 01:04:015 - Add a note here as the new start to the following stream.
    4. So something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/934433
    5. I guess doing this makes things unnecessarily complicated, even though the music actually plays like that. Your call :oops:
  4. 01:24:394 - Umm increase volume for iinherited timing point?

That's all from me. I couldn't really find any major problems with this map set. Good job and good luck! :D
The pattern is so difficult. So change this pattern to all stream at due to the request of mapper
LQA20Ans
인센만 모딩해봅니다.

[Insane]

-00:02:049 (2) - 완전히 언스냅보단 약간 겹치는게 리딩이 쉬울것 같습니다.(는 제가 허접이라 orz...)

-00:12:807 (2) - 언스냅이라고 AIBAT님이 말씀하셨습니다.

-00:20:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 휘슬 사운드는 좀 애매하네요... 그냥 안쓰시는게 더 좋을것 같습니다.

-00:36:394 - 여기서부터 키아이 타임 전까지 커스텀 클랩 쓰시는게 좋아보이네요.

-00:36:394 (1,2) - 뒤에 3,4번이랑 리듬 동일하게 해주세요.

-00:38:670 (2,3) - 디스턴스가 여기만 많이 멀어보이는감이 있네요... 좀더 가깝게 두셨으면 하는 바램이...

-힛사 제안입니다
00:49:636 (6) - 양끝에 피니쉬 추가, 시작지점에 힛사운드 크기 60 or 70
00:50:049 (7) - 끝에 피니쉬 추가
00:50:567 (2,5,7) - 피니쉬 추가

-01:23:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 여기 1/8슬라로 처리하는게 더 노래에 잘맞지 않나 싶네요.
Graphite Edge
Hi [ Zzz ]

My m4m

*Must by

**Suggestion

[hard]
*Lots of sliders, need more notes if possible D:

[Insane]
00:32:877 (4) *Move to x: 36 y: 324
00:35:360 (2) - **Move to x: 216 y: 244
00:47:153 (5) - **Move to x: 136 y: 324
00:47:360 (6) - **Move to x: 208 y: 268
And also 00:23:153 (1) - to 00:25:429 (5) - **Mod to add dificulty and improve:

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: eternal reality.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51291
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:eternal reality (TV size)
TitleUnicode:eternal reality (TV size)
Artist:fripSide
ArtistUnicode:fripSide
Creator:[ Zzz ]
Version:SC's Insane
Source:Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S
Tags:opening 2
BeatmapID:290715
BeatmapSetID:109256

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Alarido
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VII (Mappers with Ranked Maps)

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
Too many maps on same song.... Well, let's go!

[General]
Add to the Tags: "a certain scientific mikoto misaka" and possibly some stuff more (:

[Easy]
♥ Nice

[Normal]
00:47:980 (2) - Snap to grid at y:88
00:48:394 - Add a note here (x:176 y:88). If you do this, move 00:48:808 (4) by 1 grid right to fix spacing.
00:57:498 Add a note here for spacing and flow issues too
* Also noticed some patterns repeating at same place. It's good because it makes the map easier to newbies, but it can also bore (a bit) some people too.

[Hard]
♥ Nice hard ♥ I liked it too ~.~

[SC's Insane]
♥ Nice diff too (:
* Noticed some "unstacks" like 00:33:084 (1,2) that could be easily converted to nice placements like http://puu.sh/46wmX.jpg -- but it's up to you, and I find the unstacks are nice too (:

That's it. Aaaand deserves a Star (:

Rank it soon!!!!!

Att.
KonataN
hey there
m4m
all just opinions

put offset to "-20" because the red timing point shouldnt be after any objects (easy, normal)

[SC's Insane]
00:07:636 (8) - nc?
00:58:636 (3,4) - i'd recommend making it a full reverse slider/full stream because that one circle kinda interrupts the evennes of the mapping before
01:03:291 (8) - maybe already here nc?
01:14:049 (1,2,3,4) - after all these nicely spread streams a stacked one? :c i'd love to see it spread^^
nicely done!

[Hard]
if you get any other patterns in your mind except 2 slider blanket try using them. it really has to many repetitions. as a first step, try arranging new patterns where the combo changes (e.g: 00:14:463 (5,1) - ) at such a pattern, and where they overlap (eg: 00:10:325 (6,7) - )
also 00:08:256 (1,2) - these ones appear to many times, too.
00:49:636 (1,2) - some minor adjustments that they look better around (5) would be nice

[Normal]
same about your frequently used patterns like in [Hard]

not much to do wrong in a normal~ didnt find anything except the pattern thingie

[Easy]
again at some point, these repetetive patterns..


~yes i know that if i just tell "change it" isnt helpful, but i stand to the fact that i make bad mods xD~
AnreFM
heyy, mod from me

[Easy]
00:00:394 (1) - Spin is too short for beginners to grasp (+- 1 sec only) I suggest changing this to a circle only
00:13:222 (3) - Change to a 1/1 slider repeat. Fit with vocal
00:42:187 (4,1,2,3) - From here, the play only revolve here and make it too boring even for easy, move them

[Normal]
00:06:601 (3) - Not sure about this, but wouldn't this make an antijump here in normal? spacing is 1.0
00:11:567 (1) - I don't think that soft sliderslide at the end of the slider is necessary nor really fit
00:57:911 (1) - ^
01:14:463 (1) - ^
01:21:084 (5) - NC
Too many similar rhythm that would be boring
Use more patterns and straight long sliders mostly doesn't fit and can be curved for better play

[Hard]
the gap between the normal and hard is too big, consider reducing
No major problem here, but what fails is the too many repeating rhythm that is too much for a short map, try to use more patterns and rhythms
00:34:739 (4) - This kind is not really fun to play, i suggest changing it to something else rather than making it curvy
00:47:980 (3) - ^

[SC's]
00:08:980 (4) - Will be better if it is a triplet rather than two circles
00:28:946 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - Why straight streams?
00:35:567 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This too, will be be better if it is a bit more curvy


that's it, GL
Topic Starter
[ Zzz ]

HabiHolic wrote:

제 모딩큐에서 왔습니다~

인센 난이도에만 비디오가 적용이 안되어 있습니다 적용바랍니다

[Easy]

이지가 정말 많이 쉬워보이네요 응용한 리듬도 넣어보시는걸 추천

딱히 지적할 사항은 없네요

[Normal]

이 난이도가 흔히 볼수있는 이지스타일이네요..

00:31:429 (3) - 제안인데 뉴콤보? ( no.. )
00:57:498 - 여기 비어있으니 무지무지 어색;; 노트 추가 ( ok!! 너무 많이 지적이 와서 ㄷㄷㄷㄷㄷ................. )
01:21:084 (5) - 뉴콤보 ( 이것도 ok )


시간이 없어서 이지 노멀만 합니다
하드 인센은 오후에 해드리죠
Topic Starter
[ Zzz ]

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Hiiii trying for m4m :)

Hard
  1. 00:36:394 (1,3) - Blanket. ( no... )
  2. 00:38:877 (6,1) - ^ ( no... )
  3. 01:24:394 - I think you should increase the volume. Leave it as the same volume you used for kiai time perhaps. You already have a finish on the spinner end, it sounds much better if you let it ring out.
( ok!! )

That's all from me. I couldn't really find any major problems with this map set. Good job and good luck! :D
Thanks~ Unsfamiliar
Topic Starter
[ Zzz ]

Alarido wrote:

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VII (Mappers with Ranked Maps)

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
Too many maps on same song.... Well, let's go!

[General]
Add to the Tags: "a certain scientific mikoto misaka" and possibly some stuff more (:

[Easy]
♥ Nice ( Thanks!! ^_^ )

[Normal]
00:47:980 (2) - Snap to grid at y:88 ( ok! Good Gap!! )
00:48:394 - Add a note here (x:176 y:88) ( no... ). If you do this, move 00:48:808 (4) by 1 grid right to fix spacing. ( no... )
00:57:498 Add a note here for spacing and flow issues too ( Changed differently )
* Also noticed some patterns repeating at same place. It's good because it makes the map easier to newbies, but it can also bore (a bit) some people too. ( T_T... )

[Hard]
♥ Nice hard ♥ I liked it too ~.~ ( Thanks!! ^_^ )

[SC's Insane]
♥ Nice diff too (:
* Noticed some "unstacks" like 00:33:084 (1,2) that could be easily converted to nice placements like http://puu.sh/46wmX.jpg -- but it's up to you, and I find the unstacks are nice too (:

That's it. Aaaand deserves a Star ( Oh!!! Thanks!! Alarido!! Star Thanks!! ;) )

Rank it soon!!!!! ( I want to rank!! )

Att.
Topic Starter
[ Zzz ]

KonataN wrote:

hey there
m4m
all just opinions

put offset to "-20" because the red timing point shouldnt be after any objects (easy, normal)

[SC's Insane]
00:07:636 (8) - nc?
00:58:636 (3,4) - i'd recommend making it a full reverse slider/full stream because that one circle kinda interrupts the evennes of the mapping before
01:03:291 (8) - maybe already here nc?
01:14:049 (1,2,3,4) - after all these nicely spread streams a stacked one? :c i'd love to see it spread^^
nicely done!

[Hard]
if you get any other patterns in your mind except 2 slider blanket try using them. it really has to many repetitions. as a first step, try arranging new patterns where the combo changes (e.g: 00:14:463 (5,1) - ) at such a pattern, and where they overlap (eg: 00:10:325 (6,7) - )
also 00:08:256 (1,2) - these ones appear to many times, too.
00:49:636 (1,2) - some minor adjustments that they look better around (5) would be nice

[Normal]
same about your frequently used patterns like in [Hard]

not much to do wrong in a normal~ didnt find anything except the pattern thingie

[Easy]
again at some point, these repetetive patterns..


~yes i know that if i just tell "change it" isnt helpful, but i stand to the fact that i make bad mods xD~
Sorry...I do not change ...
Topic Starter
[ Zzz ]

AnreFM wrote:

heyy, mod from me

[Easy]
00:00:394 (1) - Spin is too short for beginners to grasp (+- 1 sec only) I suggest changing this to a circle only
00:13:222 (3) - Change to a 1/1 slider repeat. Fit with vocal
00:42:187 (4,1,2,3) - From here, the play only revolve here and make it too boring even for easy, move them

[Normal]
00:06:601 (3) - Not sure about this, but wouldn't this make an antijump here in normal? spacing is 1.0
00:11:567 (1) - I don't think that soft sliderslide at the end of the slider is necessary nor really fit
00:57:911 (1) - ^
01:14:463 (1) - ^
01:21:084 (5) - NC
Too many similar rhythm that would be boring
Use more patterns and straight long sliders mostly doesn't fit and can be curved for better play

[Hard]
the gap between the normal and hard is too big, consider reducing
No major problem here, but what fails is the too many repeating rhythm that is too much for a short map, try to use more patterns and rhythms
00:34:739 (4) - This kind is not really fun to play, i suggest changing it to something else rather than making it curvy
00:47:980 (3) - ^

[SC's]
00:08:980 (4) - Will be better if it is a triplet rather than two circles
00:28:946 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - Why straight streams?
00:35:567 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This too, will be be better if it is a bit more curvy


that's it, GL
Thanks..AnreFM
GugUCorn
m4m

[Normal]

  1. 00:07:842 (4) - 클랩 제거
  2. 00:11:980,00:12:394 - 필요없는 타이밍 포인트같아요. "탕"하는 소리를 넣고싶으면 하드에 있는 모딩에서 처럼 soft-slidertick2으로해서 S:C2하면 괜찮을듯 싶네요^^
  3. 00:13:222 (3) - 뉴콤보?
  4. 00:56:256 (3) - 뉴콤보
  5. 01:01:222 (1) - Ctrl+G
  6. 01:04:946 (2) - ^
[Hard]

  1. 이런 부분에 클랩 넣는 게 나을 것 같아요. 00:36:808 (2),00:38:463 (5),00:40:118 (2),.....
  2. 00:41:360 (4) - 가운데 슬라이더 포인트를 (112,260)
  3. 00:46:325 (1) - 요놈은 이렇게 잘 감싸주세용
    476,144,46325,6,0,P|476:64|452:36,2,120,6|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 00:51:291 (1) - 애로우에 클랩 넣지말고, 클랩 히트사운드 복사해서 슬라이더틱으로 하나 만들어서 그걸로 처리해주세요
  5. 00:57:704 (6) - 음..클랩 어색?

[SC]

  1. 00:21:601 (1) - 00:21:704 이 때 스핀 시작
  2. 00:28:946 (1) - 이때부턴 볼륨 올리는게 나을것같아요
  3. 00:28:946 (1,5) - 그리고 피니쉬
  4. 00:52:532 (5) - 마지막 부분 클랩 지워주세요
  5. 00:54:394 (1) - 일부러 그랬었군요 위에꺼 지우지 말아주세요^^(전 개인적으로는 저부분 어색하다고 생각해요)
  6. 01:03:704 (5) - 뉴콤보?
이지는 잡을 것이 없어 보이네요^^
Topic Starter
[ Zzz ]

TaMul wrote:

m4m

[Normal]

  1. 00:07:842 (4) - 클랩 제거
  2. 00:11:980,00:12:394 - 필요없는 타이밍 포인트같아요. "탕"하는 소리를 넣고싶으면 하드에 있는 모딩에서 처럼 soft-slidertick2으로해서 S:C2하면 괜찮을듯 싶네요^^
  3. 00:13:222 (3) - 뉴콤보?
  4. 00:56:256 (3) - 뉴콤보
  5. 01:01:222 (1) - Ctrl+G
  6. 01:04:946 (2) - ^
[Hard]

  1. 이런 부분에 클랩 넣는 게 나을 것 같아요. 00:36:808 (2),00:38:463 (5),00:40:118 (2),.....
  2. 00:41:360 (4) - 가운데 슬라이더 포인트를 (112,260)
  3. 00:46:325 (1) - 요놈은 이렇게 잘 감싸주세용
    476,144,46325,6,0,P|476:64|452:36,2,120,6|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 00:51:291 (1) - 애로우에 클랩 넣지말고, 클랩 히트사운드 복사해서 슬라이더틱으로 하나 만들어서 그걸로 처리해주세요
  5. 00:57:704 (6) - 음..클랩 어색?

[SC]

  1. 00:21:601 (1) - 00:21:704 이 때 스핀 시작
  2. 00:28:946 (1) - 이때부턴 볼륨 올리는게 나을것같아요
  3. 00:28:946 (1,5) - 그리고 피니쉬
  4. 00:52:532 (5) - 마지막 부분 클랩 지워주세요
  5. 00:54:394 (1) - 일부러 그랬었군요 위에꺼 지우지 말아주세요^^(전 개인적으로는 저부분 어색하다고 생각해요)
  6. 01:03:704 (5) - 뉴콤보?
이지는 잡을 것이 없어 보이네요^^
Thanks!! 힛사 뉴콤보 리버스 제안 고쳣어요! 'ㅂ'!!.
Abe Nana
헬로우

모딩따위 1년만이네요
[General]

http://puu.sh/49xMI.png 콤보컬러를 변경해주세요. 빨강 - > 빨강으로 이어지는 같은 콤보컬러는 싫어염

[Easy]

01:16:532 - clap. 노말과 하드에는 있는 박자입니다.

[Normal]

00:18:187 (5) - NC
01:04:118 (5,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/945203 점수로 리버스 애로우를 가리면 안됩니다. 인세인이라면 저정돈 모르겟지만 노말이니까 조금도 용납안될겁니다.


[Hard]

nope

[SC's Insane]

01:24:394 (1) - NC? 취향입니다



별로 없는거같네요 빈약해서 죄송
Lari
Hi [Zzz]
[Easy]
SPOILER
00:03:291 (2) - 박수소리 추가
00:04:946 (3) - ^
00:06:601 (4) - ^
00:07:429 (5) - ^

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:36:808 (2) - 휘슬 제거
00:38:463 (5) - ^
Andrea
~Easy~
  1. 00:23:153 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
~Normal~
  1. 00:18:187 (5) - There should be a NC here due to the new stanza and music change.
  2. 00:24:601 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
  3. 00:52:118 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
  4. 01:04:946 (2) - This slider repeat is somehow hidden by the previous circle, move it somewhere else.
  5. 01:21:084 (1) - Add a finish on this circle, it feels like you're missing it.
~Hard~
  1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
  1. 00:49:429 (5,1) - New combo should go on (5) and not on next note, since the new section actually begins there.
SC's Insane
  1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
  1. 00:21:498 (9) - This circle doesn't seem to follow anything, I'd remove it and let the spinner start here instead.
  2. 00:25:636 (6,1) - The stack here could be improved if you disable the grid snap.
  3. 01:22:739 (4) - I'd add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
Awesome map and song, call me back for a recheck!
Topic Starter
[ Zzz ]

Andrea wrote:

~Easy~
  1. 00:23:153 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. ( NC ok!! )
~Normal~
  1. 00:18:187 (5) - There should be a NC here due to the new stanza and music change. ( ok!
  2. 00:24:601 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. ok!
  3. 00:52:118 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. ok! )
  4. 01:04:946 (2) - This slider repeat is somehow hidden by the previous circle, move it somewhere else. ( ok! Complete the Move )
  5. 01:21:084 (1) - Add a finish on this circle, it feels like you're missing it. ( ok! add a finish )
~Hard~
  1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings. ( umm..... ok!! )
  1. 00:49:429 (5,1) - New combo should go on (5) and not on next note, since the new section actually begins there. ( ok! new combo!! )
~SC's Insane~
  1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
    1. 00:21:498 (9) - This circle doesn't seem to follow anything, I'd remove it and let the spinner start here instead.
    2. 00:25:636 (6,1) - The stack here could be improved if you disable the grid snap.
    3. 01:22:739 (4) - I'd add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
Awesome map and song, call me back for a recheck!
[Aumoa]

Andrea wrote:

SC's Insane
  1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
  1. 00:21:498 (9) - This circle doesn't seem to follow anything, I'd remove it and let the spinner start here instead.
  2. 00:25:636 (6,1) - The stack here could be improved if you disable the grid snap.
  3. 01:22:739 (4) - I'd add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
all OK!

I think this modding is perfect. Thanks for modding and evaluation.
Oyatsu
Go! GO! :D
Topic Starter
[ Zzz ]

Oyatsu wrote:

Go! GO! :D

oh!!!

Thanks!! Oyatsu
Andrea
After a small recheck in IRC this is finally ready to go.

Bubbled~
Topic Starter
[ Zzz ]

Andrea wrote:

After a small recheck in IRC this is finally ready to go.

Bubbled~

Thanks!! Andrea~
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