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Toraboruta-P - Kokoro [Taiko]

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Niko-nyan
1,990 posts
Joined June 2011
Niko-nyan
note : please redownload before 16 August 3:00 (GMT+0)
Kim Jin Seok
369 posts
Joined December 2008
Kim Jin Seok
1/6관련 모딩은 채팅에서 해드렸고 아래는 패턴모딩입니다.

어디까지나 권장이니 너무 신경쓰지 않으셔도 됩니다~

[Oni]

03:46:809 (18) - 삭제
03:46:916 (19) - 캇
03:47:773 (24) - 캇

03:39:416 ~ 03:41:130 - ->
taiko_maniac1811
1,060 posts
Joined December 2010
taiko_maniac1811
Taiko mod as requested by Sariel :3

MOD
  • [Kantan]
  1. 01:34:274 (1,2,3) - delete? simplify the flow
  2. 01:42:411 (14) - ^
  3. 03:33:844 (24) - ^
  4. 03:39:844 (36,38) - ^
  5. 03:43:273 (44) - ^
  6. 03:44:987 (48) - ^
  7. 03:47:559 (54) - ^
  8. 03:50:130 (60,62) - ^
  9. 03:53:559 (68,70) - ^
  10. 03:56:987 (6,8) - ^
  11. 04:00:416 (14) - ^

    [Futsuu]
  12. 01:35:131 (1,2,4) - delete these? make them more simpler, current pattern is quite hard
  13. 02:11:125 (32) - delete? have some little breaks here should be nice
  14. 02:12:840 (36) - ^
  15. 02:14:554 (40) - ^
  16. 02:20:768 (60,62) - ^
  17. 02:23:340 (70) - ^
  18. 02:27:625 (15,17) - ^
  19. 02:30:197 (25) - ^
  20. 02:35:125 (18) - ^
  21. 03:32:773 (21) - ^
  22. 04:05:987 (15) - ^

    [Muzukashii]
  23. 00:21:739 (51,55) - delete these 2, too long stream for a muzukashii, simplify them a little
  24. 01:03:417 (1) - d?
  25. 01:34:703 (5) - k? kkkkd is abit too harsh here
  26. 01:35:560 (11) - d? same as above reason
  27. 02:11:340 (32,34) - delete? simplify the flow a bit and plays nice
    02:13:483 (42) - ^
    02:14:768 (48,49) - ^
    02:16:911 (58) - ^
  28. 03:14:237 (4) - k? make it be an easier pattern coz kdk is pretty advance for a muzukashii
    03:15:094 (9) - ^
    03:15:052 (14) - ^
  29. 03:16:380 (17) - delete this to simplify the pattern
  30. 03:16:594 (19) - k? flows better
  31. 03:33:416 (31) - ^
  32. 04:06:309 (56) - delete this to simplify the stream

    [Oni]
  33. 00:21:417 (44,45) - dd? not suitable for kk here
    00:22:167 (51) - if above is done, change this to k? plays better imo
  34. 00:49:810 - add k? follows the violin better
  35. 01:08:024 (8) - k?
  36. 02:41:022 (1) - move this spinner to 02:41:129 start better here for the vocals
  37. 03:13:702 (12) - d? plays better with the drums
  38. 03:40:809 (23,24,25,26) - kkkd? plays better with the drums

That's all from me :3
good luck~
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening
d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems

BPM

No Problems

Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

04:06:845 (32) - d > D | For a stronger finish

Can't find any problems except the last note x_x

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

Object isn't snapped! 01:39:408
Object isn't snapped! 03:12:961
Object isn't snapped! 03:13:175
Object isn't snapped! 03:13:282
Object isn't snapped! 03:13:389
Object isn't snapped! 03:13:497

Uninherited timing points (Red Lines) conflict with All diff.s

Title Check

No Problems

Muzu
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

01:39:411 (16,28) - d,D > k,K | High pitched vocal
01:53:125 (16) - ^
02:57:213 (34,36) - Swap | The violin pitch is going lower, use kats at the start and dons at the end
03:18:630 (29,30,31,32) - Ctrl + G | Use kats on red lines to create an upbeat feeling to the rhythm
03:37:702 (1) - d > k | This is to fit with the kats here 03:38:130 (3,5,7,9,11)

Smooth kat patterns overall, fitting use of kats and dons
A very nicely mapped Muzu in my opinion

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

00:08:562 (1) - Not snapped!
03:14:126 (3) - ^
Uninherited timing points conflict with Oni diff.

Title Check

No Problems

Futsuu

AiMod

Object isn't snapped! 00:08:562
Object isn't snapped! 01:35:989

Kantan

AiMod

Object isn't snapped! 03:13:705
Two timing points at the same time. 02:03:411
DarkDunskin
1,875 posts
Joined April 2009
DarkDunskin
Hello here's my Mod~
Achtung Baby!

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
"->" = Change to

Dont be surprised your map is really long so my mod post will become really long too ^^"

[Oni]
SPOILER
    1. 00:18:844 (29) - D -> d
    2. 00:20:558 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,1) - I think kdddkddkkkddkdd D would be better
    3. 00:28:701 (9,10,11,12,13) - kdddd -> kdd D
    4. 00:31:272 (3) - D -> d
    5. 00:34:272 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,1) - Try this: D kkddk kkddkkd D
    6. 00:39:629 (22) - Delete Note, it would fit better to the vocals.
    7. 00:42:522 (38) - Delete Note.
    8. 00:49:058 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - Change to ddkkd D
    9. 00:53:343 (2) - Delete Note, like above.
    10. 00:59:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Change to D ddkdddkdddkdkdk
    11. 01:02:987 (24,25,26,27,1) - Change to kkd D
    12. 01:09:629 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - Change to kkddk D
    13. 01:16:487 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22) - Change to ddkkd D
    14. 01:23:344 (57,58,59,60,61,62,1) - Change to dkkkd D
    15. 01:28:915 (1) - Make the Spinner longer. Let it end at 01:33:843 -
    16. 01:34:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) - You need to make this more simple. Try to not use 1/6 notes here. I am not sure myself what to map here but I would suggest something like this: ddkdddkdddkdd D d D
    17. 01:42:844 (1) - d -> D
    18. 01:47:987 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,1) - Change to D ddkdddkkddkkd D
    19. 01:56:558 (1) - d -> D
    20. 02:01:272 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,1,2,3,4,5) - Change to kdk D ddkdddkdddkdk D kdd
    21. 02:09:200 (33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,1) - Change to ddkkddk d D
    22. 02:16:272 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - Change to kkddkkd D
    23. d -> D
    24. 02:37:915 (43) - Let the Slider start at 02:37:915 - and end at 02:38:986 - . Add a D at 02:37:700 - and delete 02:37:594 (42) - Look here
    25. 02:41:343 (1) - Let the Spinner Start at 02:41:343 - and end at 02:42:629 - . Add D at 02:41:129 - and at 02:42:843 -
    26. 03:12:634 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Change to ddkkkkkkk D
    27. 03:19:706 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - Change to kkddkkd D
    28. 03:25:706 (11,12) - Delete (12) change (11) from k -> D
    29. 03:27:206 (24,25,26) - Change to d D
    30. 03:33:420 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - Change to kkddkdd D
    31. 03:39:420 (10,11) - Delete (11), Change (10) from d -> D
    32. 03:40:920 (23,24,25) - Change to d D
    33. 03:40:920 (23,24,25) - d -> D
    34. 03:53:134 (11,12,13) - Chante to D k
    35. 03:54:742 (23,24) - Delete (23) Change (24) to D
    36. 03:58:277 (1) - D -> d
    37. 04:05:134 (20) - d -> D
    38. 04:06:634 (30,31,32) - Change to k D
    You definitly need to work hard on your streams. Right now they dont seem to be well structured. Think of easier Patterns like ddkkddkk or ddkdddkdddk.
    If you do that and apply those Big Notes I mentioned, this Oni should get much better~

[Muzukashii]
SPOILER
    1. Set HP-Drain to 5
    2. 00:18:843 (40) - D -> d
    3. 00:21:950 (52) - Delete Note
    4. 00:22:272 (53) - d -> D
    5. 00:23:236 (58) - Delete Note
    6. 00:26:665 (14) - Delete Note
    7. 00:30:093 (30) - Delete Note
    8. 00:33:522 (14) - Delete Note
    9. 00:34:272 (16,17,18) - ddd -> D d
    10. 00:35:236 (22) - Delete Note
    11. 00:35:986 (1) - d -> D
    12. 00:42:522 (28) - Delete Note
    13. 00:59:986 (41) - d -> D
    14. 01:02:879 (57) - Delete Note
    15. 01:03:200 (58,59,1) - ddk -> d D
    16. 01:06:415 (11) - D -> d
    17. 01:10:272 (25) - k -> D
    18. 01:17:129 (1) - k -> D
    19. 01:23:986 (25) - k -> D
    20. 01:34:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This may be a little too hard. Better remove and replace with a Slider from 01:34:272 - to 01:35:772 -
    21. 01:35:986 (1) - d -> D
    22. 01:38:986 (15) - D -> d
    23. 01:45:843 (40) - D -> d
    24. 01:49:700 (1) - d -> D
    25. 01:52:700 (15) - D -> d
    26. 02:03:415 (46) - k -> D
    27. 02:06:843 (14) - D -> d
    28. 02:20:557 (14) - D -> d
    29. 02:27:414 (42) - D -> d
    30. 02:34:272 (16) - d -> D
    31. 02:51:440 (19) - D -> d
    32. 03:20:242 (37) - Delete Note
    33. 03:23:992 (18) - D -> d
    34. 03:28:384 (7) - Move Note to 03:28:492 -
    35. 03:39:420 (9) - k -> D
    36. 03:40:920 (15,16,17) - ddd -> d D
    37. 03:53:134 (25) - k -> D
    38. 04:05:134 (49) - d -> D
    39. 04:06:313 (56) - Delete Note
    Muzukashii is okay so far.

[Futsuu]
SPOILER
    1. Set HP-Drain to 5
    2. 00:34:272 (16) - d -> D
    3. 00:49:700 (1) - d -> D
    4. 00:59:986 (24) - d -> D
    5. 01:03:415 (36) - k -> D
    6. 01:10:272 (12) - k -> D
    7. 01:17:129 (8) - k -> D
    8. 01:23:986 (1) - k -> D
    9. 01:27:200 (12,13,14,15,16,17) - Why not dK dk dK?
    10. 01:35:986 (3) - d -> D
    11. 01:47:986 - Add D
    12. 01:49:700 (1) - Add D
    13. 02:03:415 (22) - k -> D
    14. 02:10:272 (31) - d -> D
    15. 02:17:129 (44) - d -> D
    16. 02:34:271 (14) - d -> D
    17. 02:58:297 (1) - d -> D
    18. 03:27:420 (1) - d -> D
    19. 03:39:420 (21) - k -> D
    20. 03:53:134 (6) - k -> D
    21. 04:05:134 (11) - d -> D

[Kantan]
SPOILER
    1. Set HP-Drain to 4
    2. Please Check AI-Mod. There are many unsnapped Objects!
    3. 00:34:272 (37) - d -> D
    4. 00:35:987 (41) - d -> D
    5. 00:57:629 (23) - Move to 00:57:415 -
    6. 00:59:987 (27) - d -> D
    7. 01:03:415 (33) - d -> D
    8. 01:10:272 (45) - d -> D
    9. 01:17:129 (58) - k -> D
    10. 01:23:987 (70) - k-> D
    11. 01:35:987 (1) - d -> D
    12. 01:49:699 (25) - k -> D
    13. 02:01:700 (45) - k -> D
    14. 02:10:273 (57) - d -> D
    15. 02:17:129 (70) - d -> D
    16. 02:23:987 (81) - d -> D
    17. 02:30:844 (92) - d -> D
    18. 02:34:272 (97) - d -> D
    19. 02:58:297 (33) - d -> D
    20. 03:25:706 (93) - k -> K
    21. 03:27:420 (94) - d -> D
    22. 03:39:420 (121) - d -> D
    23. 03:53:134 (152) - d -> D
    24. 04:01:706 (17) - d -> D
    25. 04:05:134 (24) - d -> D
    Definitly fix those unsnapped Notes!

So that's it~
Now go and work hard on your Map!
Get more mods and go for rank!
Good luck :3
Chiswell
169 posts
Joined January 2011
Chiswell
oni
00:28:701 (9,10,11,12,13) - 이부분을 kdddd 말고 kd(dddd) 같이 1/6으로 바꾸는게 곡에도 맞고 더나을거같음
00:31:272 (3) - 큰노트 지우는게... 너무 어색한데들어가있다 큰노트 지우고 앞부분을 ddk으로 바꾸는것도 괜찮아보임
00:42:415 (38,39,40,41,42) - 이부분도 kkddd말고 kk(dddd)으로 바꾸는게 더곡에맞을듯
00:56:344 (19,20,1) - 이부분도 1/6
02:37:272 (39,40,41,42,43) - 서클 kkdd뒤에 바로 슬라이더가붙어있는데 이렇게하는건 별로좋지않아보임...일단 치기도 짜증나고ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ kkdd에서 마지막 동을 지워서 kkd 슬라 이렇게하는걸 추천
03:12:634 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 좀 단조로워보인다 ddkkddkkkkk 으로만바꿔도 좀덜단조로울듯 저거말고 딴패턴을 넣어도 좋음 근데 난 이기차는 동으로끝내고 d k ddk 이렇게 이어지는게 더 자연스러울거같음
Konpaku Sariel
778 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Konpaku Sariel

wzxxzw wrote:

oni
00:28:701 (9,10,11,12,13) - 이부분을 kdddd 말고 kd(dddd) 같이 1/6으로 바꾸는게 곡에도 맞고 더나을거같음
00:31:272 (3) - 큰노트 지우는게... 너무 어색한데들어가있다 큰노트 지우고 앞부분을 ddk으로 바꾸는것도 괜찮아보임
00:42:415 (38,39,40,41,42) - 이부분도 kkddd말고 kk(dddd)으로 바꾸는게 더곡에맞을듯
00:56:344 (19,20,1) - 이부분도 1/6
02:37:272 (39,40,41,42,43) - 서클 kkdd뒤에 바로 슬라이더가붙어있는데 이렇게하는건 별로좋지않아보임...일단 치기도 짜증나고ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ kkdd에서 마지막 동을 지워서 kkd 슬라 이렇게하는걸 추천
03:12:634 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 좀 단조로워보인다 ddkkddkkkkk 으로만바꿔도 좀덜단조로울듯 저거말고 딴패턴을 넣어도 좋음 근데 난 이기차는 동으로끝내고 d k ddk 이렇게 이어지는게 더 자연스러울거같음
어떻게 내가 원하는 모딩을 이렇게 잘 해줄수가 있지ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
Konpaku Sariel
778 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Konpaku Sariel

wzxxzw wrote:

oni
00:28:701 (9,10,11,12,13) - 이부분을 kdddd 말고 kd(dddd) 같이 1/6으로 바꾸는게 곡에도 맞고 더나을거같음
00:31:272 (3) - 큰노트 지우는게... 너무 어색한데들어가있다 큰노트 지우고 앞부분을 ddk으로 바꾸는것도 괜찮아보임
00:42:415 (38,39,40,41,42) - 이부분도 kkddd말고 kk(dddd)으로 바꾸는게 더곡에맞을듯
00:56:344 (19,20,1) - 이부분도 1/6
02:37:272 (39,40,41,42,43) - 서클 kkdd뒤에 바로 슬라이더가붙어있는데 이렇게하는건 별로좋지않아보임...일단 치기도 짜증나고ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ kkdd에서 마지막 동을 지워서 kkd 슬라 이렇게하는걸 추천
03:12:634 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 좀 단조로워보인다 ddkkddkkkkk 으로만바꿔도 좀덜단조로울듯 저거말고 딴패턴을 넣어도 좋음 근데 난 이기차는 동으로끝내고 d k ddk 이렇게 이어지는게 더 자연스러울거같음
정말 어떻게 내가 고민하고있던 부분을 딱 집어줄수가 있지 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 진짜로 고맙다
tetsutaro
3,863 posts
Joined February 2008
tetsutaro


[Peripheral]
:idea: Japanese metadata: トラボルタP and ココロ
:!: 02:44:577~ - Response is too light to provide self-correcting feedback (you can't hear for yourself what you did wrong)

[Notechart]
<Kantan> Perceived rating: 3★ Kantan
<Futsuu> Perceived rating: 7★ Futsuu = 4★ Muzukashii
<Muzukashii> Perceived rating: 6★ Muzukashii = 5★ Oni
<Oni> Perceived rating: 8★ Oni

:idea: Basically flawlessly fitting to the music. Especially <Oni> where there are places I cannot see the stream but I can play some half of it smoothly on.
:!: Only problem is the difficulty scheme, with <Futsuu> shot through the ceiling of Futsuu and landing to the area of Muzukashii.
:idea: Suggested renaming to make more sensible difficulty scheme:
<Futsuu> :arrow: Muzukashii; <Muzukashii> :arrow: Oni; <Oni> :arrow: Ura Oni
Then map a more "normal" Futsuu to fill the gap.
Good reference would be Dream Tide and Hikyou Sentai Urotander

Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Kagamine Rin in tags not source
Bye
31 posts
Joined May 2010
Bye
01:34:053 ~ 01:34:803 ddddkkkk → ddkkddkk
1/6 (dddkkk) 나오기 전에 ddkkddkk 로 바꾸니까 뭔가 더 자연스러운 느낌

02:01:482 ~ 02:03:838 kdkkkkddddddddddkkddkkkdd → kdkkddkkdkkkddkkdkdkddkkd 동만 계속 있는게 단조로워서 바꿔봤어


03:26:129 ~ 03:27:415 kkkkkkkkkkkkd → ddkkddddkkkkd 위에와 같은 이유


그냥 내가 생각하기에 자연스러운걸로 바꾼거니까 굳이 적용 안해두 돼 :D
Akiyama Mizuki
2,710 posts
Joined March 2009
Akiyama Mizuki
으으으으으ㅡㅡㅇ으

Boredom
SPOILER
00:34:695 (34) - k
02:51:435 (17) - ^
02:56:149 (28) - d
04:00:415 (13) - k
04:00:844 (14) - d

Relaxedness
SPOILER
00:34:696 (56) - k
01:01:696 (53) - ^
01:38:338 (7) - d...?
01:39:410 (9) - ^
01:40:910 (13) - 필요없어 보이는 노트임
02:30:410 (113) - k
03:10:292 (61) - K
03:53:129 (162) - ^
04:05:129 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - 이 부분이 Cheeriness랑 같네요.. 그래도 하위 난이도인데요

Cheeriness
SPOILER
00:29:017 (1) - 뭐요? http://puu.sh/9euR3/3a223ef843.jpg
00:49:481 (71,72) - k
01:01:695 (113) - ^
01:05:553 (126,127) - k d
01:14:338 (24) - K
01:38:981 (12) - 여기에 K를 두기보다는 01:39:409 (13) - 이 노트에 두는게 나을듯
02:34:267 (14) - D는 부적절한듯
04:00:415 (33) - k

Agitation
SPOILER
00:21:838 (51,52) - d
00:29:017 (26) - k
01:41:017 - 노트 추가요
02:16:910 (58) - d
03:17:558 (98,99) - 03:17:451 - 로 옮기기요
04:05:987 (52,53,54,55,56,57) - 단조로움을 피하기 위해 kkddk d

Fearness
SPOILER
00:49:053 (228,229,230,231,232,233,234) - dddkkkd
01:34:053 (1,2) - 음악이 나오지도 않는 부분에 노트가 있네요
01:53:767 (138,139,140) - k k 아니면 kkk
02:01:267 (188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212) - kdkkkkddkdddkkddkkddkkkdd 패턴이 단조로워 좀 고쳐봤어요
03:25:701 (173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - kkkkkkkkddkdkdkkd ㅍㅌㅇ ㄷㅈㄹㅇㅅ ㅈ ㄱㅊㅂㅇㅇ

랭크시키세요 /o/ \o\ \o/
Konpaku Sariel
778 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Konpaku Sariel
고음을 표현하고 싶은데 그럴려고하니까 너무 단조롭고 고치자고 하니 고음이 안사는거같고..
ㅠㅠ
mliencheng
460 posts
Joined November 2010
mliencheng
Bordom
00:41:981 d
01:03:410 K


Relaxedness
00:25:481 k
00:35:338 k
00:56:338 k
01:42:410 k
01:55:695 d
02:53:149 d


Cheeriness
01:01:053 k
03:00:006 d
03:20:344 k


Agitation
01:17:981 k
01:21:517 k
01:24:838 k
03:38:987 d
03:39:201 d
03:39:415 k


Fearness
00:21:945 k
00:28:803 k

Good map, not much to mod :)
Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,008 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic
Hi Konpaku Sariel, here comes a taiko mod as requested by you in my queue (M4M request).

  • [Boredom]

    Change slider velocity to 1.2 ? It is recommended to use SV=1.2 in Kantan.
  1. 00:18:839 (13,14) - swap notes to follow the vocal ? This could make the pattern less repetitive.
  2. 00:20:553 (15) - k if you change ^
  3. 00:32:553 (31,32) - k d , again for the vocal.
  4. 00:41:981 (45,46) - d k , ^
  5. 00:46:267 (6) - k , as the vocal pitch increases.
  6. 00:56:124 (21) - k , same as 00:42:410 (46) -
  7. 01:28:053 (66,67) - D D or D K would fit the vocal and the instrument better.
  8. 01:34:267 - add k and 01:35:124 - add d ? It seems to be lacking notes there.
  9. 01:47:981 (18) - maybe you can add finish for the stressed sound there.
  10. 02:36:839 (93,94) - k d would follow the vocal nicely.
  11. 03:20:987 (80,81) - d k if you want to follow the vocal there.
  12. 03:40:272 (115,116) - k d , ^
  13. 03:53:987 (142) - k , as the vocal pitch is high.
  • [Relaxedness]

    In order to be grammatically correct, rename this diff as "Relaxation" if you want?
  1. 00:18:839 (16) - k , same as Boredom
  2. 00:24:838 (29) - k for the high-pitched vocal ?
  3. 00:32:553 (50) - ^
  4. 00:47:553 (13,14,15) - d k k would match the vocal better imo.
  5. 00:48:624 (17,18) - change to k k if you change ^
  6. 01:28:053 (115,116) - same as Boredom
  7. 01:34:267 - add k and 01:35:124 - add d ? same as Boredom
  8. 01:47:981 (28) - same as Boredom
  9. 03:21:415 (86) - k for the high-pitched vocal ?
  10. 03:33:844 (114) - In order to be consistent to the previous 03:32:987 (111,112) - , change this to k
  11. 03:47:558 (148) - ^
  12. 03:54:415 (165) - k could fit the rhythm better imo.
  • [Cheeriness]

    Rename this diff as "Cheerfulness" if you want?
  1. 00:18:838 (37) - k , same as Boredom
  2. 00:24:838 (56) - k , same as Relaxedness
  3. 00:32:553 (12) - ^
  4. 01:14:338 (24) - D , as the vocal has a lower pitch than 01:13:695 (23,25) -
  5. 01:28:053 (13,14) - D D , following the vocal.
  6. 02:13:695 (33) - k for the high-pitched violin ?
  7. 03:39:415 (25) - add finish for the stressed sound ?
  8. 03:54:415 (8) - k , as it has a higher vocal pitch than 03:53:129 (5) -
  • [Agitation]
  1. 00:18:838 (40) - k , same as Boredom
  2. 00:24:838 (5,6) - kk could follow the vocal in a way better.
  3. 00:32:553 (9) - k for the high-pitched vocal.
  4. 00:35:553 (25,26) - k k to make a greater contrast to the previous dons.
  5. 00:55:267 (41,42) - k d could fit the rhythm well imo.
  6. 01:05:553 (8) - k would match the drop in vocal pitch better.
  7. 01:08:981 (19) - ^
  8. 01:19:267 (8) - ^
  9. 01:22:695 (19) - ^
  10. 01:24:624 (27) - k , in order to make the pattern consistent to 01:10:910 (28) -
  11. 02:13:695 (43) - k for the high-pitched violin ?
  12. 02:58:292 (39) - D , as dull sound occurs here.
  13. 03:39:415 (9) - same as Cheeriness
  • [Fearness]

    Rename this diff as "Fear" if you want?
  1. 02:13:695 (271) - k , same as Agitation
  2. 02:34:267 (374) - add finish for the stressed sound ?
  3. 02:47:149 (9) - k for the relatively high-pitched vocal ?
  4. 02:57:328 (35) - d could be better imo.
  5. 03:35:237 (241) - move to 03:35:451 - to fit the drum beats.
  6. 03:47:987 (329) - I think you missed a finish here ?
  7. 03:48:951 (335) - move to 03:49:165 - to fit the drum beats.
  8. 04:05:129 (439) - add finish
That's all and good luck~ :D
4_4
61 posts
Joined October 2011
4_4
데에에에에에에에에에에에엥에ㅔ에ㅔ엥에ㅔ에에에에엥에ㅔ에에에에에에에에에ㅔㅇ에ㅔㅇ에에에

...쨌든
모딩은 오프셋 수정 전으로 했어
추천 오프셋 - 8575

Agitation
00:26:445 - 같은 패턴이 반복되다보니 조금 단조로워. 여기에 캇을 넣고
00:26:660 (14) - 얘를 지워도 괜찮을거 같아
00:33:303 - 여기도 동일하게. 단, 00:33:517 (15) 얘는 지우지 말고
00:35:553 (26,27) - k k
01:10:910 (28) - d
01:14:124 (40,41) - 음높낮이가 내려가니까 Ctrl+G
01:38:552 (14) - d 왜냐면 전체적 리듬인 k d k d 에 맞추기 위해
02:23:124 (24,26,27,28) - d kdd
02:36:624 (27,28,29,30) - 이거 뭐 어떻게 했으면 좋겠는데...
02:46:292 (7) - d
02:53:149 (23) - d
03:20:022 - d
03:30:308 - 여기에 k를 넣던지 해서 단조로움을 없애줬으면
03:38:129 (3,7) - d로 바꿔서 단조로움 제거
03:40:701 (12) - k
04:00:415 (28) - d

으으.. 역시 모딩 초심자라 힘드네 쩝
Konpaku Sariel
778 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Konpaku Sariel

BamgoeSN wrote:

데에에에에에에에에에에에엥에ㅔ에ㅔ엥에ㅔ에에에에엥에ㅔ에에에에에에에에에ㅔㅇ에ㅔㅇ에에에

...쨌든
모딩은 오프셋 수정 전으로 했어
추천 오프셋 - 8575

Agitation
00:26:445 - 같은 패턴이 반복되다보니 조금 단조로워. 여기에 캇을 넣고
00:26:660 (14) - 얘를 지워도 괜찮을거 같아
00:33:303 - 여기도 동일하게. 단, 00:33:517 (15) 얘는 지우지 말고
00:35:553 (26,27) - k k
01:10:910 (28) - d
01:14:124 (40,41) - 음높낮이가 내려가니까 Ctrl+G
01:38:552 (14) - d 왜냐면 전체적 리듬인 k d k d 에 맞추기 위해
02:23:124 (24,26,27,28) - d kdd
02:36:624 (27,28,29,30) - 이거 뭐 어떻게 했으면 좋겠는데...
02:46:292 (7) - d
02:53:149 (23) - d
03:20:022 - d
03:30:308 - 여기에 k를 넣던지 해서 단조로움을 없애줬으면
03:38:129 (3,7) - d로 바꿔서 단조로움 제거
03:40:701 (12) - k
04:00:415 (28) - d

으으.. 역시 모딩 초심자라 힘드네 쩝
내가 딱히 떠오르는패턴이 없어서 나머지는 거의다 드럼음따라가거나 대충만들었는데 참 고생스럽네 ㅠ나중에 싹다 갈아엎을까
Snowy Heart
127 posts
Joined August 2012
Snowy Heart
M4M
d=small red
D=big Red
k=small blue
K=big Blue

Boredom
00:38:124 - add d?
00:56:553 (22) - k?
01:26:124 (63,64) - d k?
01:46:267 (17,18) - I think not good,You can keep the sider and to 01:47:981 -
02:01:695 (40,41) - ^
02:44:578 (1) - to03:10:292 (61) - I think you should need a break for giving the new player to have a rest because this diff is Kantan
03:23:987 (86) - k ?

Relaxation
00:32:553 (50) - D
00:47:553 (13) - delete I think this note not fix the music
01:41:553 (16) - k
01:46:267 (27) - I have a question,why this diff use slider and Boredom use a note and a silder?A note and a slider is difficult
02:19:267 (94) - add d?
03:22:272 (88) - k
03:34:272 (116) - K
03:47:987 (150) - ^

Cheerfulness
00:29:017 (1) - No, It's unrankable ,you shounld't dDd you can use ddD or ddd
00:35:338 (22,23,24,25) - k d k d
01:12:838 (21) - k
03:17:129 (17) - k
03:20:987 (2) - k
03:22:058 (6,7,8) - kkd

Agitation
00:13:053 (18,19,20) - k d k
00:16:481 (31,32,33) - ^
01:34:267 (1) - why you put a note here ,no sound!
02:17:766 (4) - d

Fear is difficult for me ,Sorry
My map :https://osu.ppy.sh/s/156738
Thanks you!
Mxllxww
1 post
Joined October 2011
Mxllxww
Fear

00:43:267 (194) - ~ 00:46:053 (211) -
이쪽부분이랑 많이 비슷한
00:56:982 (275) - ~ 00:59:767 (292) -
이부분이랑 패턴을 비슷하게

01:07:696 (348,349,350,351) - 동 캇동캇

01:09:088 (357) - 캇 추가

01:16:910 (405,406) - 첫번째건 동 두번째건 지우고

01:10:160 (365) - 지우고
01:10:267 (366) -
01:17:124 (406) - 둘이 큰캇

01:17:982 (410,411,412,413) - 동 캇동캇

01:23:874 (446,447) - 첫번째거 지우고 뒤에거 큰캇

02:10:267 (251) - ~ 02:13:481 (270) -
동 캇캇동 캇 패턴으로

02:58:292 (42) - 큰동

03:57:415 (392,393,394,395,396,397,398) - ㄷㅋㅋㅋㄷㄷㅋ

꽤 괜찮네염 ㅋ
karterfreak
osu! Alumni
724 posts
Joined August 2011
karterfreak
[General]

Timing appears to be incorrect as it is. I'm not sure why you used three non-inherited timing sections when the song is the same BPM throughout the entire song.

Timing should look like this for ALL difficulties:

Make sure to resnap all the notes after doing this, and to resnap your 1/6 notes afterwards.

[Boredom through Agitation]

I didn't see anything notable minus the offset / timing, which is pointed out in General.

[Fear]

01:34:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - There's a few things I'd change here.

- Delete 13 and snap 14 to the blue tick at 01:35:253. The 1/6 only goes to 01:35:146.
- Make 01:34:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Emphasize the start of the drums being louder by making 3 a kat. To avoid the pattern becoming too monotonous I'd suggest changing 1 through 8 to be ddkdddkd.

The changes above make the pattern look like this

- You could change 12 to be a don to have 1/6 dddd, but honestly works as you have it right now as well.

02:57:217 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - You should probably keep this the same way you have it in the Difficulty 'Agitation' for consistency between difficulties (Every other difficulty has a don at 02:57:217 (34) and a kat at 02:57:432 (36)) , just with the extra note at 02:58:075 (41).
Decipher
617 posts
Joined December 2010
Decipher
Add TravoltaP to tags, sometimes people romanized his name that way

dont kd
PatZar
3,079 posts
Joined March 2013
PatZar
Hi!

[Fearness]
01:07:058 (344) - kat
01:07:272 (345,346,347) - ctrl + g | it's should be good imo
01:52:915 (133,134) - ctrl+ g?
01:59:237 (175,176) - ctrl + g?
02:46:071 - don
02:48:000 - don
02:53:143 - don
02:54:857 (28) - don and unsnapped
03:26:236 - 03:26:771 - don
03:34:271 - kat

[Agitationess]
00:09:200 (4) - kat | be consistent here
02:46:284 (7,8) - ctrl + g
02:47:570 (10) - don
02:51:856 (20,21) - ctrl +g

[Cheerfulness]
00:08:986 (2,3) - ctrl + g? | it's better for me . imo

boredom and Relaxation are damn good futsuu and kantan!
Good luck~!
Konpaku Sariel
778 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Konpaku Sariel
@Tasha
[Timing appears to be incorrect as it is. I'm not sure why you used three non-inherited timing sections when the song is the same BPM throughout the entire song.]

-because sounds are appeared slowly in the part

i have measured many songs of which bpm is changed dynamically

if i'm novice, probably i tapped that way
but now when i beating time, i play the song veryvery many times to check whether it's correct or not
Konpaku Sariel
778 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Konpaku Sariel

bbj0920 wrote:

으으으으으ㅡㅡㅇ으

Boredom
SPOILER
00:34:695 (34) - k
02:51:435 (17) - ^
02:56:149 (28) - d
04:00:415 (13) - k
04:00:844 (14) - d

Relaxedness
SPOILER
00:34:696 (56) - k
01:01:696 (53) - ^
01:38:338 (7) - d...?
01:39:410 (9) - ^
01:40:910 (13) - 필요없어 보이는 노트임
02:30:410 (113) - k
03:10:292 (61) - K
03:53:129 (162) - ^
04:05:129 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - 이 부분이 Cheeriness랑 같네요.. 그래도 하위 난이도인데요

Cheeriness
SPOILER
00:29:017 (1) - 뭐요? http://puu.sh/9euR3/3a223ef843.jpg
00:49:481 (71,72) - k
01:01:695 (113) - ^
01:05:553 (126,127) - k d
01:14:338 (24) - K
01:38:981 (12) - 여기에 K를 두기보다는 01:39:409 (13) - 이 노트에 두는게 나을듯
02:34:267 (14) - D는 부적절한듯
04:00:415 (33) - k

Agitation
SPOILER
00:21:838 (51,52) - d
00:29:017 (26) - k
01:41:017 - 노트 추가요
02:16:910 (58) - d
03:17:558 (98,99) - 03:17:451 - 로 옮기기요
04:05:987 (52,53,54,55,56,57) - 단조로움을 피하기 위해 kkddk d

Fearness
SPOILER
00:49:053 (228,229,230,231,232,233,234) - dddkkkd
01:34:053 (1,2) - 음악이 나오지도 않는 부분에 노트가 있네요
01:53:767 (138,139,140) - k k 아니면 kkk
02:01:267 (188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212) - kdkkkkddkdddkkddkkddkkkdd 패턴이 단조로워 좀 고쳐봤어요
03:25:701 (173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - kkkkkkkkddkdkdkkd ㅍㅌㅇ ㄷㅈㄹㅇㅅ ㅈ ㄱㅊㅂㅇㅇ

랭크시키세요 /o/ \o\ \o/
[01:34:053 (1,2) - 음악이 나오지도 않는 부분에 노트가 있네요]

-잘 들어보시면 아주 작게 드럼소리 나옵니다
Racoon-
581 posts
Joined January 2013
Racoon-
안녕하십니까
제가 옆에 아무것도 안 써놓은것은 제가 듣기 좋은 기준으로 써놓은거에요.
꼭 반영해달라는건 아니니까 킁... ㅠ

[General]
Song Setup 가셔서 Widescreen Support 꺼주세요
Tags 넣으실때 ,가 아니라 스페이스바로 구분되요 Vocaloid Kagamine Rin TravoltaP 이렇게 바꿔주세요
아마 뱃이 모딩 올 때 난이도 명으로 태클 올 수 있으니 주의 하세요. (그렇다고요... 네..)
Boredom
00:53:128 (16) - k? - 음이 올라감
03:06:855 (31) - d? - 음이 내려감
Relaxation
00:34:700 (56,59) - k? - ddk kdk 이렇게 두는게 전 듣기 좋아보이네요.
03:25:701 (98) - 여기 뒤에 스핀이나 슬라를 둬서 보컬이 늘어지는걸 연출시키는거도 좋을것 같습니다.
Cheerfulness
00:47:129 (128) -
전 이런박자가 좋을것 같군요.
01:16:700 (32) - d? - 캇이 나을 수도 있지만, 앞에서 쓰신 것과 무즈카시라는 난이도의 특성상 동 3연타가 좋을것 같아요.
01:20:558 (44) - d? - 보컬이며 뒤에 반주음이며 앞 뒤 음과 비교했을때 내려가는 추세입니다.
01:23:986 (1) - D? - ^
03:17:128 (17) - k?
03:39:843 (26,27,28) - Finish? - 강조해보는거도 좋겠군요!
03:53:557 (6,7,8) - ^

오니난이도부턴 제 소관이 아닙니다 ㅠㅠㅠ
오니부터는 매퍼 취향을 좀 많이 타는 부분도 있고하여... 저같은 찌끄레기가 할만한 난이도가 아니라..
개인적인 견해를 말씀 드리자면 Fear 난이도는 이너오니로 취급되는 난이도 같으니
브픔이 느리므로 SV를 1.6으로 올리고 간간히 변속을 주는거도 재밌을것 같습니다.

이제 뱃잡는 일만 남았네요..
힘내세요!!
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
[General]
  1. I would say the diff names are rather questionable as they didn't really have ascending order indicating the read difficulties.
  2. offset: 8574 and then remove all other red sections

[Fear]
  1. Be aware of the excessive use of triplets. Many of them do not fit the music well. Please check the whole diff thoroughly to ensure all the triplets go well.
  2. 00:21:630 (59,60) - change these to kat in order to fit the drum sound there?
  3. 00:28:916 (103,104,105) - Would be nice if you change these to kat as it fits the pitch and drum there.
  4. 00:40:915 (179,180,181,182) - The rhythm is weird. I really don't suggest using 2-plets here in which the place doesn't have real instruments/vocal to support it.
  5. 00:42:629 (190,191,192,193) - unnecessary 1/6
  6. 00:45:201 (205,206,207,208) - Same as 0:40:915-
  7. 00:49:058 (228,229,230,231,232,233,234) - If you want to follow the music, you should extend the stream to 00:49:915 - and change 00:49:594 (233) - to kat
  8. 00:56:344 (271,272,273,274) - ..
  9. 01:34:058 (1,2,3) - there is no real instrument to support these.
  10. 01:44:665 (77,78) - dk sounds better.
  11. 01:49:701 (113) - don?
  12. 02:30:415 (351,352,353) - kkd?
  13. 02:37:701 (395,396,397,398,399,400) - Why using slider there? I don't think it really makes sense, and especially when in Taiko mode, rarely do we use slider-note-slider-note pattern.
  14. 03:13:700 (92) - don to fit the drum? You may change this to big don if you want.
  15. Please check the stream in the second kiai time. Many of them don't fit the music.

Frankly speaking, this diff needs more work.
Konpaku Sariel
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kanpakyin wrote:

[General]
  1. I would say the diff names are rather questionable as they didn't really have ascending order indicating the read difficulties.
  2. offset: 8574 and then remove all other red sections

[Fear]
  1. Be aware of the excessive use of triplets. Many of them do not fit the music well. Please check the whole diff thoroughly to ensure all the triplets go well.
  2. 00:21:630 (59,60) - change these to kat in order to fit the drum sound there?
    -players must be confused to process stream
  3. 00:28:916 (103,104,105) - Would be nice if you change these to kat as it fits the pitch and drum there.
    -i'm not following drum sound
    just i borrowed rhythm haha
  4. 00:40:915 (179,180,181,182) - The rhythm is weird. I really don't suggest using 2-plets here in which the place doesn't have real instruments/vocal to support it.
    -fixed
  5. 00:42:629 (190,191,192,193) - unnecessary 1/6
    -why? there is 1/6 drum sound
  6. 00:45:201 (205,206,207,208) - Same as 0:40:915-
    -fixed
  7. 00:49:058 (228,229,230,231,232,233,234) - If you want to follow the music, you should extend the stream to 00:49:915 - and change 00:49:594 (233) - to kat
    -fixed
  8. 00:56:344 (271,272,273,274) - ..
  9. 01:34:058 (1,2,3) - there is no real instrument to support these.
    -no. there is small drum sound
  10. 01:44:665 (77,78) - dk sounds better.
    -fixed
  11. 01:49:701 (113) - don?
  12. 02:30:415 (351,352,353) - kkd?
  13. 02:37:701 (395,396,397,398,399,400) - Why using slider there? I don't think it really makes sense, and especially when in Taiko mode, rarely do we use slider-note-slider-note pattern.
  14. 03:13:700 (92) - don to fit the drum? You may change this to big don if you want.
  15. Please check the stream in the second kiai time. Many of them don't fit the music.

Frankly speaking, this diff needs more work.
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Konpaku Sariel
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@Kanpakyin
refer to this movie
http://youtu.be/pmQJststENI

it contain the reason why i add red time line

i hope you can understand
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