1. Bakari's Easy (1,3 stars, 39 notes)
2. Hard (2,78 stars, 83 notes)
3. Insane (3,56 stars, 105 notes)
4. Normal (2,03 stars, 53 notes)

MillhioreF wrote:

Modding because ShadowSoul made me.

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[General]
Sup with every diff having different combocolors? I don't think that's rankable (and it also looks pretty sloppy)
None of your sliders are symmetrical, which I don't care about for the most part but some other people might. Just FYI.

[Normal]
Soft sampleset in this diff only? (in the song setup panel)
00:04:584 (3,4) - This sounds pretty bad. Either do some hitsound shenanigans to make the end of (3) quiet, or just extend it and get rid of (4).
00:23:227 (3,3) - I don't really like these in a Normal, but that's my opinion. Probably fine.
00:26:013 (1,2,3,4) - The rest of the map is a Normal+, and then you have this part which is easier than the Easy. What.

[Hard]
00:15:727 (1) - A 1/2 gap between spinner end and hitting a note this far out is a bit too much for a Hard IMO.
00:26:013 (1) - ^
00:31:156 (1,2,3) - Sounds weird, I'd recommend moving everything forward 1/2 and axing (3).

[Insane]
No countdown in this diff for some reason (there's one in every other diff)
00:03:727 (1) - Despite what I said earlier, this slider is centered, so it looks plain ugly being non-symmetrical. Move the middle point up to (256,59).
00:11:656 - You have this constant 1/2 flow going on, but you break it here for some reason?
00:11:870 (1) - Same as 00:03:727 (1)
00:12:727 (3,4) - It'd be cool if this was aligned with 00:14:656 (1,2) and just X-flipped.
00:31:156 (1,2,3,4,5) - Is this star supposed to be all ugly and off-center? Use the polygon tool to make a perfect pentagon, then switch around the points to make a perfect star.

Fixed most things, thanks <3

DELiS wrote:

all suggestions

[General]

1. remove the letterbox check to all diffs

[Normal]

00:04:584 (3) - remove center point
00:25:584 - add circle?
00:27:727 (3) - move center point to x:256 y:32

[Hard]

00:02:013 (1) -

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00:17:013 (3) - whistle
00:17:870 (3) - ^

[Insane]

00:04:584 - rhythm suggest

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gl~

Fixed everything.

ryuu wrote:

hi :3
shadow's req :о

[General]

from aibat

Inconsistency in combo colours:
- [Hard] :
Combo1 : 12,250,5
Combo2 : 228,107,27
Combo3 : 247,235,9

- [Insane] :
Combo1 : 177,177,177
Combo2 : 228,107,27
Combo3 : 2,162,6
Combo4 : 0,0,255

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 12,250,5
Combo2 : 228,107,27
Combo3 : 247,235,9

Inconsistency in Countdown:
- [Bakari's Easy] : 1
- [Hard] : 1
- [Insane] : 0
- [Normal] : 1

Tags
- Consider adding "Bakari" to all of your tags

remove zelda ocarina from tags?



[Normal]

00:10:156 (4) - move a little bit further
00:17:441 (4) - m?

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2nd point - x:169 y:94, 3rd - x:199, y:177
and u can copy this here 00:16:584 (3) -
00:23:441 (1) - lift up 2nd point slightly higher
00:26:013 (1) - are u sure u want to change the rhythm at the end? :о

lol
everything else is fine for me

good luck ~

Fixed some stuff Thanks <3

MillhioreF wrote:

Modding because ShadowSoul made me.

[General]
Sup with every diff having different combocolors? I don't think that's rankable (and it also looks pretty sloppy)
None of your sliders are symmetrical, which I don't care about for the most part but some other people might. Just FYI.

[Bakari's Easy]
Seems a bit hard for an Easy...song is short, so I decided to make this diff a bit harder than typical [Easy] :3
00:18:299 (4) - I don't really like this note, it's not mapped to anything solid in the music. I'd recommend making (3) a circle and have (4) be a long slider. did something similar
00:27:299 (3) - Sounds nice, but I don't think it fits the music. In Easy difficulties especially, you really don't want to overmap, no matter how good it sounds. it's weird because I can hear beats there. Anyway, if anyone else says the same - I change this pattern!

ryuu wrote:

hi :3 yo

[Bakari's Easy]

00:07:156 (2) - может второй узелок подвинешь влево/право? потому что сейчас ну как-то .. не очень смотрится. для меня да
00:11:013 (4) - подвинь ближе к пред. слайдеру. слишком заметно, что там расстояние большое угу
00:17:441 (3,4) - вот эти два слайдера меня очень смущают. может сделать как-нибудь так? (дальше подвинуть немного придётся) пришлось их вообще убрать, предыдущий моддер посоветовал кое-что получше

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00:20:870 (4) - подними повыше второй узелок нет. тут за счет такого направления строится флоу :<
00:24:299 (3,4) - что это за расстояние? о_о D:
00:29:441 (1) - 3й узелок на х:336, у:288 ~

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Koji Kondo - Lost Woods.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2526
PreviewTime: 2013
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 8871,15728,26014,32442
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Lost Woods
TitleUnicode:Lost Woods
Artist:Koji Kondo
ArtistUnicode:Koji Kondo
Creator:ShadowSoul
Version:Bakari's Easy
Source:Zelda Ocarina Of Time
Tags:-Bakari-
BeatmapID:281584
BeatmapSetID:107427

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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1. According to wikipedia, the correct source is "The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time"
2. Adjust the Audio Lead-In 2500
3. Add "Nintendo 64" in tags?
4. In all diff, use this soft-sliderslider because the slider body sounds loud in this song

• - 00:21:727 (4) - Add a whistle in the end of the slider? Sounds good.
  - 00:24:727 (4) - Same ^
  - 00:29:013 (5) - Whistle

• -- This difficulty is hard for being a Normal in my opinion, you should reduce the Star Rating a little
  - 00:06:941 (3) - This note is hard to normal players, my suggestion is remove this note
  - 00:18:941 (5,6,7) - Wow, so many notes, I'd suggest remove the note (7) to reduce this pattern
  - 00:22:370 (6) - Same ^
  - 00:23:227 (3) - Unstack this note like you did it here in 00:24:084?

• - 00:12:941 (1) - This clap is inconsistency with your hitsound pattern, remove it
  - 00:32:870 (x) - Add a spinner here like the others diffs?

• - 00:07:799 (3) - According with your combo pattern, in this slider needs a new combo
  - 00:32:870 (x) - Add a spinner here like the others diffs?

MillhioreF wrote:

Modding because ShadowSoul made me.

1. Add Nintendo to tags since it's game for Nintendo
2. A bit strange that your own diffs have different lenght - drain time in your Normal is 2 sec longer than other diffs and Easy is even longer x.x. Try to keep it consistent - remove last spinner in Normal or either map outro in other diffs

1. 00:01:370 (8) - I did not find this slowdown readable on the first attempt, so try to make it more intuitive - something like x0.75 should works better
3. 00:03:727 (1) - Remove whistle from reverse and add to tail
4. 00:04:584 (3) - Add whistle to tail too keep consistensy
5. 00:06:941 (1) - Ctrl+G flows better
6. 00:26:870 (3) - New combo because jump and follow your pattern
7. 00:27:727 (5) - ^

1. 00:07:799 (4,5) - Sliders like this, what starts at red ticks called offbeat sliders and this is thing what should be avoided in most of cases. Try to force them starts on a white ticks - here is my suggestion: replace 00:07:156 (2) - with two circles, then remove 00:07:584 (3) - and start next 2 sliders at white ticks:
   
   
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2. 00:12:299 (6) - Something like this will flows better:
   
   
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3. 00:14:227 (4) - Clap on tail for consistensy, or remove clap from 00:12:941 (1) -
4. 00:17:013 (3,1) - Please keep consistent spacing, such "readability challenges" aren't works good on a Hard diffs, especially with this AR
5. 00:21:513 (1,2,3) - Only one triplet in a whole map? Ypu never did something like this before in a whole diff. Replace with short 1/4 reverse-slider for consistensy.
6. 00:24:941 (3,4) - Same problem with offbeat sliders.

1. 00:02:013 (1,2) - Kinda tricky for beginners - replacement with short 1/2 reverse-slider should works better i think
2. 00:02:870 (3,4) - ^
3. 00:05:441 (1,2) - Again problem with offbeat slider
4. 00:17:441 (4) - move third anchorpoint to x185 y164 to achieve perfect blanket with 00:18:513 (5) -
5. 00:20:013 (2,3) - Tiny spacing issue, up to you to fix that tho
6. 00:23:227 (3,3) - Kinda tricky, also it makes whole section works as 1/2 spam. Try to remove these notes, should be better for Normal diff
7. 00:24:299 (4) - Multiple-reverse sliders are annoying even in easiest diffs especially with this SV, try to replace it with two 1/1 sliders
8. 00:32:870 (1) - End spinner same as on Easy, also try to silence it.

1. 00:08:870 (1,2,3) - Flows bad, try something like this:
   
   
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2. 00:24:727 (4) - whistle to beginning & tail
3. 00:26:013 (1) - Whistle to tail
4. 00:27:299 (3) - Remove whistle from reverse & add to tail
5. 00:28:156 (4) - Whistle to tail
6. 00:32:870 (1) - Silence spinner

Lissette wrote:

Rawr~

[General]
Source should be: The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time (Source)
Also you can add to tags nintendo.
It would be could if all difficulties have the same volume on the hitsounds, right now Insane is 20% and the rest has mostly 50% in volume, try to make it even. Also I personally think that with 50% sliderslides sounds too loud.
I still don't like how soft clap sounds on this. Only soft whistles would work for me like in Bakari's Easy

[Bakari's Easy]
00:00:299 (1) - Is weird to place a spinner here, makes next combo kinda confusing, because the combo should start here 00:02:013 - (where the spinners end)
00:32:870 (1) - Last spinner sounds a bit awkward because the song is starting to fade out there. Maybe you should start it in the same point you started it on Hard/Insane and make some changes there.

[Normal]
00:03:727 (1) - This is a big jump for normal considering the spacing in general you used on this diff
00:06:299 (1) - Don't see the need of the new combo here
00:16:370 (2) - Remove note, like you did on this combo 00:19:156 (1,2,3) - (sounds better)
00:30:299 (4) - Shorten 1/2 beat and add note at 00:30:941 -
00:32:441 (1) - Whistle fits better that note~ (I suggest the same to other diffs)
00:32:870 (1) - Last spinner sounds a bit awkward because the song is starting to fade out there. Maybe you should start it in the same point you started it on Hard/Insane and make some changes there.

[Hard/Insane (IRC mod)]

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03:33 *Lissette is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/281523 Koji Kondo - Lost Woods [Insane]]
03:33 Lissette: Insane:~
03:33 Lissette: oh the np said that...
03:33 Lissette: anyways
03:33 ShadowSoul: haha
03:33 ShadowSoul: xD
03:34 Lissette: 00:01:370 (8) - That slow down threw me off really bad
03:34 ShadowSoul: rather use a reverse?
03:34 ShadowSoul: or would a nc do it aswell
03:35 Lissette: I dont think a NC would help, tbh
03:35 Lissette: normal speed, with a reverse
03:36 ShadowSoul: no
03:36 Lissette: or just the same slider with normal speed
03:36 ShadowSoul: this sounds ugly
03:36 ShadowSoul: yea
03:36 ShadowSoul: exactly
03:36 Lissette: or
03:36 Lissette: a note
03:37 ShadowSoul: http://puu.sh/7lZUj.jpg
03:37 ShadowSoul: shud be ok I guess
03:37 Lissette: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1394615
03:37 ShadowSoul: Yea
03:37 Lissette: Yeah, that work
03:37 ShadowSoul: that's a good idea
03:37 ShadowSoul: Taking the circles
03:38 Lissette: ok
03:38 Lissette: stacked
03:39 ShadowSoul: yea
03:39 ShadowSoul: wait what do u mean
03:39 ShadowSoul: lol
03:39 Lissette: 00:01:370 (8,9) - stacked
03:39 ShadowSoul: yea
03:39 Lissette: like the thing I sent you
03:39 Lissette: ok
03:39 ShadowSoul: ye
03:40 Lissette: Lower the volume to the sliderslide @.@
03:40 Lissette: or silence it
03:40 ShadowSoul: how 2 do dat
03:41 Lissette: with a custom sound
03:41 Lissette: get a silenced file
03:41 Lissette: Get it from one of my maps, I almost always since sliderslide
03:43 ShadowSoul: got it
03:43 ShadowSoul: from my collab hah
03:43 Lissette: ok
03:45 Lissette: mmm
03:45 Lissette: I dont like the soft clap T_T
03:45 ShadowSoul: I do
03:45 Lissette: ok >.>
03:46 ShadowSoul: funfact
03:46 ShadowSoul: there is no clap in my folder
03:46 ShadowSoul: :D
03:46 Lissette: So? ><
03:47 ShadowSoul: idk haha
03:47 Lissette: baka
03:47 Lissette: 00:05:441 (1) - how about if you put this horizontally in the center, so keep some kind of symmetry?
03:48 ShadowSoul: like?
03:51 Lissette: oh, sorry
03:51 Lissette: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1394632
03:52 ShadowSoul: oka
03:52 ShadowSoul: y
03:57 Lissette: Same slider velocity on Hard as Insane ><
03:57 Lissette: At the beggining felt like the same map
03:58 Lissette: I think same spacing too ><
03:58 ShadowSoul: Ain't gonna change it tho
03:58 Lissette: Why not?
03:59 ShadowSoul: Cuz I like the map on this way
03:59 ShadowSoul: Might be the same SV, but still a huge difference to the Insane
04:00 Lissette: Well, is not the same map, but feels the same if we talk about difficulty
04:00 Lissette: Insane has a bit more jumps
04:00 Lissette: I think thats the only difference
04:00 ShadowSoul: This one got actually no "Jumps"
04:01 Lissette: Ok then
04:02 Lissette: Is my opinion
04:02 Lissette: 00:02:013 (1,2,3,4) - would look better if this is centerd
04:02 Lissette: 00:17:227 (4) - remove note?
04:03 ShadowSoul: somebody told me this ^
04:03 ShadowSoul: Not that you pointed it out aswell
04:03 ShadowSoul: Yea, gonna do it
04:03 ShadowSoul: Now*
04:04 Lissette: haha ok
04:04 Lissette: nothing else on this diff
04:04 Lissette: but I gotta go now
04:04 Lissette: will get to the other diff tomorrow

1. Add Saria's Song to tags?
2. You should add a spinner in Easy and Normal. It's a fairly short song, so there are probably going to be a bunch of SS's. Having a spinner will at least give some diversity in the scoreboard.
3. I'm not quite sure I get how you placed your whistles all the time, so I'm not looking too much into that.

1. Overall I feel like this diff needs more 1/1 rhythms or breaks in the 1/2. The main melody is there, but I don't always feel like I'm playing that melody, but rather just clicking 1/2 all the time. For example, something like http://puu.sh/9Bhcv.jpg for 00:05:441 - . Though it's not something unrankable in your map, do consider trying to do something like that, for a bit more variety, etc.
2. 00:05:870 (2,1) - Swap whistles.
3. 00:06:941 (1,2) - Consider swapping the order of these, so the note comes first. This way the sliderhead will land on 00:07:156 - , which is a stronger beat than the current red tick.
4. 00:08:656 (5) - Try removing this note. It gives a nice emphasis on the melody repeating.
5. 00:11:441 (5,1) - Yeah, it's these kinds of breaks in rhythm that I think would make the map feel better playing overall =3=
6. 00:15:513 (3) - Same as 00:08:656 (5), I'd consider removing it.
7. 00:14:656 (1) - Remove NC?
8. 00:17:763 (2) - Imo, remove this, as the main melody thingie (musical terms are hard) goes 3 times, so using two sliders for each of them would be nice and consistent, and then kick in the triples from 00:18:084 -, when the main melody isn't playing.
9. 00:20:013 (3,4) - Reverse the order of these so (4) comes first? I just generally think the flow is a bit nicer from (2,4) rather than (2,3) as it is currently. Will need some remapping.
10. 00:23:013 - Find some hitsound for this and similar? Gives a nice effect for the last portion of the song.
11. 00:24:941 (1,2,3,4,5) - Seeing as your map is fairly symmetrical already, consider http://puu.sh/9BibT.jpg ?
12. Also, if you did the above, try ctrl+h on 00:24:299 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5).
13. 00:31:156 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try whistles only on (2,3,4)?

1. 00:00:299 (1,2) - Too many whistles imo; makes the section sound too busy. Try removing the whistles from sliderends?
2. 00:08:656 (6) - Well, same as insane, I'd rather remove this note. If anything, remvoe the whistle here.
3. 00:12:299 - Consider something like http://puu.sh/9BiLf.jpg ? Gives some variety, and you don't get that 00:12:299 (6) - slider skipping the beat at 00:12:513 - .
4. 00:17:013 (3,1) - These feel too close to each other. It's not really a problem playing or anything, but just generally looks and feels too close, considering the spacing between 00:16:156 (3,1) - . You should spread it out a bit more imo.
5. 00:32:013 (3) - Same as in Insane, remove the whistle here.

1. 00:18:513 (4,5,6) - Make a straight line?
2. 00:23:227 (3) - 00:24:084 (3) - I'd remove these. It's quite a long section of 1/2's, which could be a bit much for a Normal. Pauses in the rhythm there would also make this part more consistent with 00:15:727 (1,2) - .
3. 00:29:441 - As I said in [General], I think this should have a spinner. Consider adding one here, to be consistent with the harder diffs: http://puu.sh/9BjpR.jpg .

1. 00:02:013 (1) - Whistle?
2. 00:03:727 (4) - Fix spacing
3. 00:24:299 (3) - Why the sudden increase in spacing? There's not really a need for this, so you should keep things simple.
4. 00:26:013 (1,2,3,4,5) - Generally a lack of hitsounds/whistles imo.
5. 00:29:441 - As with in Normal. I think you should have a spinner here: http://puu.sh/9BjLB.jpg , or like in Normal.

CXu wrote:

[General]

1. Add Saria's Song to tags?
2. You should add a spinner in Easy and Normal. It's a fairly short song, so there are probably going to be a bunch of SS's. Having a spinner will atleast give some diversity in the scoreboard.
3. I'm not quite sure I get how you placed your whistles all the time, so I'm not looking too much into that.

[Insane]

1. Overall I feel like this diff needs more 1/1 rhythms or breaks in the 1/2. The main melody is there, but I don't always feel like I'm playing that melody, but rather just clicking 1/2 all the time. For example, something like http://puu.sh/9Bhcv.jpg for 00:05:441 - . Though it's not something unrankable in your map, do consider trying to do something like that, for a bit more variety, etc.
2. 00:05:870 (2,1) - Swap whistles.
3. 00:06:941 (1,2) - Consider swapping the order of these, so the note comes first. This way the sliderhead will land on 00:07:156 - , which is a stronger beat than the current red tick.
4. 00:08:656 (5) - Try removing this note. It gives a nice emphasis on the melody repeating.
5. 00:11:441 (5,1) - Yeah, it's these kinds of breaks in rhythm that I think would make the map feel better playing overall =3=
6. 00:15:513 (3) - Same as 00:08:656 (5), I'd consider removing it.
7. 00:14:656 (1) - Remove NC?
8. 00:17:763 (2) - Imo, remove this, as the main melody thingie (musical terms are hard) goes 3 times, so using two sliders for each of them would be nice and consistent, and then kick in the triples from 00:18:084 -, when the main melody isn't playing.
9. 00:20:013 (3,4) - Reverse the order of these so (4) comes first? I just generally think the flow is a bit nicer from (2,4) rather than (2,3) as it is currently. Will need some remapping.
10. 00:23:013 - Find some hitsound for this and similar? Gives a nice effect for the last portion of the song.
11. 00:24:941 (1,2,3,4,5) - Seeing as your map is fairly symmetrical already, consider http://puu.sh/9BibT.jpg ?
12. Also, if you did the above, try ctrl+h on 00:24:299 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5).
13. 00:31:156 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try whistles only on (2,3,4)?

[Hard]

1. 00:00:299 (1,2) - Too many whistles imo; makes the section sound too busy. Try removing the whistles from sliderends?
2. 00:08:656 (6) - Well, same as insane, I'd rather remove this note. If anything, remvoe the whistle here.
3. 00:12:299 - Consider something like http://puu.sh/9BiLf.jpg ? Gives some variety, and you don't get that 00:12:299 (6) - slider skipping the beat at 00:12:513 - .
4. 00:17:013 (3,1) - These feel too close to each other. It's not really a problem playing or anything, but just generally looks and feels too close, considering the spacing between 00:16:156 (3,1) - . You should spread it out a bit more imo.
5. 00:32:013 (3) - Same as in Insane, remove the whistle here.

[Normal]

1. 00:18:513 (4,5,6) - Make a straight line?
2. 00:23:227 (3) - 00:24:084 (3) - I'd remove these. It's quite a long section of 1/2's, which could be a bit much for a Normal. Pauses in the rhythm there would also make this part more consistent with 00:15:727 (1,2) - .
3. 00:29:441 - As I said in [General], I think this should have a spinner. Consider adding one here, to be consistent with the harder diffs: http://puu.sh/9BjpR.jpg .

[Bakari's Easy]

1. 00:02:013 (1) - Whistle?
2. 00:03:727 (4) - Fix spacing
3. 00:24:299 (3) - Why the sudden increase in spacing? There's not really a need for this, so you should keep things simple.
4. 00:26:013 (1,2,3,4,5) - Generally a lack of hitsounds/whistles imo.
5. 00:29:441 - As with in Normal. I think you should have a spinner here: http://puu.sh/9BjLB.jpg , or like in Normal.

Edit: Dat ninja. I'll leave the bubble there for now as these are suggestions for the most part.

1. 00:24:299 (3) - Place this at 256;192, then move 00:26:013 (1,2,3,4,5) - so that (1)'s endpoint is stacked: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1734172 , and fix the blanket between 00:24:727 (4) - and 00:26:013 (1) -. Just makes things look neater.

1. 00:32:013 (1) - Remove whistle? Makes the whistle on (2) give more impact on the higher pitched note.

1. 00:32:013 (5) - Same reason as Normal, remove whistle.

CXu wrote:

Recheck, no kds.

[Bakari's Easy]

1. 00:24:299 (3) - Place this at 256;192, then move 00:26:013 (1,2,3,4,5) - so that (1)'s endpoint is stacked: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1734172 , and fix the blanket between 00:24:727 (4) - and 00:26:013 (1) -. Just makes things look neater.

Looks good for me, changed

[Normal]

1. 00:32:013 (1) - Remove whistle? Makes the whistle on (2) give more impact on the higher pitched note.

Yea, forgot about this one, mb

[Insane]

1. 00:32:013 (5) - Same reason as Normal, remove whistle.

^

Poke me when you're done.