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Perfume - Laser Beam [Taiko|Osu]

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Raging Bull
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Raging Bull
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 18 October, 2013 at 06:32:55

Artist: Perfume
Title: Laser Beam
Tags: kosiga Tari Breeze hs714 Mixagji JPN Kashiyuka a~chan a-chan nocchi Yuka Kashino Ayaka Nishiwaki Ayano Omoto
BPM: 135
Filesize: 8684kb
Play Time: 03:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. 714's Taiko Muzukashii (4.39 stars, 597 notes)
  2. 714's Taiko Oni (4.72 stars, 1075 notes)
  3. Insane (4.99 stars, 589 notes)
  4. kosiga's Hard (4.82 stars, 482 notes)
  5. Mixagji (5 stars, 692 notes)
  6. Normal (4.14 stars, 268 notes)
  7. Tari's Easy (2.62 stars, 236 notes)
Download: Perfume - Laser Beam
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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SB by Breeze (God)
Mixagji by Mixagji
Hard by kosiga
Easy by Tari
Taiko Oni/Muzu by hs714
osu! needs more Perfume!
Featured for storyboard showcase on 19 October 2013! Less than 24 hour from rank. orzorz
Last edited by Raging Bull , edited 83 times in total.
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter
nice song and map \:D/
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
All images are taken from pixiv
絵師さま：
pepo
春順＠勉強なう
まる
U10
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
http://puu.sh/3T5aO/d50c8dd4af.osb
changed a bit SB code
kosiga
1,548 posts
Joined May 2011
kosiga
:33

http://puu.sh/3UeMH.osu

good luck ;)
OutRain
6 posts
Joined May 2010
OutRain
perfume!!
waxman
467 posts
Joined February 2012
waxman
wow!! @_@
nice map!

[Insane]

01:23:673 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - NC
02:10:562 (6) - x:108 y:300 (a suggestion)
02:41:895 (1,2) - I think bad timing? u should change from 1/8 to 1/6 thank you :D


I think this map will be ranked soon :D

Good Luck!
Aurele
osu! Alumni
7,408 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
Hello♥
02:36:562 - This part is so creep, LOL..

Tari's Easy

Flows/Emplacements of the objects
To make sure there's no random jumps, has great flows, do not have random objects placed on the timeline that doesn't fit with the song;
  1. 00:07:229 (1) - If you click on this slider, you can see that the spacing is inconsistent with the previous and next objects. In order to keep the same consistency, move the slider (2) closer to the slider (1) and make sure the spacing is also the same with the next objects.
  2. 00:11:673 (2,3,4,5) - These objects are really inconsistent, that can be a bit obvious while playing. It won't be affecting the player ifself but, aesthetically, it will. I really suggest you to make it consistent.
  3. 00:22:784 (2) - Inconsistent spacing.
  4. 00:44:117 (3) - Inconsistent spacing.
  5. 01:10:340 (1) - Inconsistent spacing.
  6. 01:25:006 (4) - This circle's spacing is barely inconsistent. If you really want to make all your spacing consistent, then I would suggest you to move it a bit closer to the next circle. If not, then it's not a big deal.
  7. 01:52:117 (3) - This slider's form is a big awkward, to be honest. Most the sliders are well proportioned, which means that the first part is identical to the second part/making a perfect angle. If you understand a bit, right now, the slider is not looking proportioned nor making an angle. With the red node, stack it with the middle's slider-tick to make it looking like this: (You can do better!)
    Example
  8. 01:55:229 (2,4) - Okay.. this is looking a bit weird. If you can look closely, both circle and slider's end are not properly stacked, which is looking a bit weird. Disable the Grid Snap and then, move the circle (2) in a way that it will stack with the end of the slider (4).
  9. 02:00:562 (3) - By highlighting this circle, we can see that the blanket is not perfectly made and you could manage to shape it better. (Example 1) and then, by reshaping it: (Example 2). This is only a suggestion, you can deny it if you want, there is no problem. But still, if you do it, make sure to keep a nice spacing consistent after it :3
  10. 02:05:451 (2) - *This is very, very nazi* If you click on this circle, you can see that the spacing has a difference of 0.01x and by reversing the emplacement of the circle (1) by doing CTRL+H, we can see that it isn't stacking the circle (3).
  11. 02:05:451 (2) - Can you tell me there's a jump here? It's totally not appropriated for Easy difficulties. I am highly suggesting you to make the spacing smaller.
  12. 02:11:229 (5) - Maybe you could try to make a better blanket with your previous slider. Either your circle is wrongly placed or either your slider is wrongly formed. Not a big deal indeed, but it would be great to make it looking better.
  13. 02:21:451 (4) - Why the sudden jump again? ): Like said previously, it isn't appropriated for an Easy difficulty. It would be better if you make your spacing consistent instead.
  14. 02:45:451 (4,5) - I'd suggest you to make a better blanketing.
  15. 02:52:117 (2) - *Naziii* Inconsistent spacing
  16. 03:05:006 (1) - Inconsistent spacing
  17. 03:25:451 (1) - This can be counted as unrankable. It's pretty hard to see the form of the slider, it could be confusing for many players, mostly begginers. I highly suggest you to reshape this slider.
Hitsounds
In case there's inconsistencies with your hitsounds, useless hitsounds. I may also suggest you some things to make your hitsounds better;
  1. 02:18:340 - Have you forgot to add a clap here? It sounds a bit empty + it's breaking your clap consistency. I think it was just a mistake, if not, add one to ensure the consistency of your previous hitsounds.
New combos
New combos are one of the things I think it's important for a beatmap. Combos shouldn't be overused, have too much objects in a combo and should fit with the song;
  1. 02:31:229 (1) - Not sure if there should have a new combo here o:
  2. 03:06:784 (1) - Like the previous point

Very nice diff. Of course, I've pointed a lot of stuff but, most of them are really nazi and nitpicking. I was trying to help you in every way even if it's something little.

I will be back, do not kudo please.
Raging Bull
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Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Raging Bull

waxman wrote:

wow!! @_@
nice map!

[Insane]

01:23:673 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - NC I like the comobo color there ;w;
02:10:562 (6) - x:108 y:300 (a suggestion) I wanted a jump here
02:41:895 (1,2) - I think bad timing? u should change from 1/8 to 1/6 thank you :D ww thank you!


I think this map will be ranked soon :D

Good Luck!
waxman
467 posts
Joined February 2012
waxman
I LOVE Perfume　♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Japanese songs OP all day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


SHOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT♥♥

★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★

★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Breeze requested me this map.

[General]
Enable "Epilepsy Warning" because 02:41:895 to 02:43:673 , it flashes so quick.
In the tags, write the names who created an GD and SB.

[SB]
A fade in for "kashiyuka" to 00:00:006 to 00:00:118 ?

[Tari's Easy]
Disable widescreen support since it's the only one enable.
02:21:451 (4) - It's kind of far to 02:20:562 (3) so, it can be somewhere at x:256 y:104.

[Normal]
02:29:451 (1) - Put this note into red? Because the background appear red.
02:33:006 (1) - Blue?

[Hard]
00:16:562 (1,2) - Make them parallel to 00:17:007 (3,4) ? Copy and paste 00:17:007 (3,4) .
01:03:895 (6) - Maybe don't stack with 01:02:784 (5) . Move it somewhere at x:200 y:32.

[Insane]
01:08:117 - Add a note?
01:09:006 - ^

Sorry if my suggestions aren't good. Good Luck and star!
Tari
osu! Alumni
1,671 posts
Joined July 2012
Tari
@Gabe: fixed all except the new combo, that will break my consistency

and sheela, the spacing issues has been around fixed by Gabe's mod, but thank you anyway.

You can find my updated diff here
Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco


Hello! From the QAT queue.

[General]
• Add "A~chan" "Kashiyuka" and "Nocchi" in the Tags. Those are the names of the 3 singers. You should also add "Tari".

[Insane]
00:03:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pentagon is crooked. Can you make it a bit more neat? It looks bad while playing. Moving the 00:04:117 (3) - to the right and downwards a bit should be enough to fix it. Btw if you want a perfect pentagon you might also use the feature "Compose>Create Polygon Circles". You might set the number of circles on 5 notes, create the pentagon, and then adjust it to place the 2-circles streams.
00:23:895 (6) - Can you stack it on the 00:24:117 (7) - ? Looks better and it's also consistent with these other stacks 00:22:117 (2,3) - 00:23:006 (4,5) -
00:27:895 (10) - Stack it on the 00:26:784 (5) - . I think it plays better. And also, new combo.
00:41:451 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:55:229 (5) - New combo.
00:59:673 (9,10,11,12) - Mhmh, I don't like the flow of this. I'd prefer you to stretch this slider 00:59:673 (9) - until the blue tick and then to remove this note 01:00:229 (11) - . Of course you'll have to adjust the distance too. Here's an an explanatory pic:
SPOILER
01:07:451 - Mhmh, why don't you add a note here? I love the way you mapped this part (like these 01:04:117 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ), that's why I'd suggest you to add a note there, just to keep up the rhythm and the flow :) Here's a pic with the position I'd suggest:
SPOILER
01:20:340 (4) - New combo.
01:23:673 (5) - ^
01:35:229 (6) - ^
01:49:229 (6,7) - I wouldn't stack these. I'd suggest you to move the slider elsewhere, just to be consistent with previous notes and slider and to maintain the flow.
01:52:117 (5,6) - Mhmh. You might map this part in a better way. I'd suggest you to delete this note 01:53:451 (8) - ; to move this slider a 1/2 later ; to add a note here 01:52:673 - . Here are some pics:
SPOILER
01:59:895 (6) - New combo.
02:17:006 (5,6,7,8,9) - This pentagon is crooked. You can fix it easily by moving the 02:17:006 (5) - down of 3/4 grids and 1 to the left.
02:21:895 (4) - Move it a bit to the right. Just to be in the axis of the center of these sliders 02:20:562 (1,2,3) - .

[Hard]
00:55:229 (5) - New combo?
01:05:451 (4,5,1) - They are too close to 01:05:006 (3) - . Move them a bit far away.
01:14:784 (1) - Stack it with the 01:13:895 (2) - ?
01:38:784 (1,1,1,1) - I don't know if the other modders will allow this.
01:52:117 (5) - New combo?
01:56:117 (6) - Move it a bit far away from the 01:55:673 (5) - . Just a bit.
03:11:673 (1) - Remove new combo and add it on this 03:12:117 (3) - .
03:25:451 (1,1,1,1) - Same of what I said before.

[Normal]
• Mhmh, I think you should select the Custom Hitsound 1 Soft (S:C1) on the red timing line. In the Hard and Insane you couldn't hear the sliderslide, whilst in this diff you can (Only in the first part though).
01:07:673 (5) - Why don't you make a semi-circle instead? Like this one:
looks better imo

[Tari's Easy]
• Same thing of what I said for the Normal, about the hitsounding.
00:29:895 - I think you should add a note for consistency with the upcoming notes and sliders.
00:57:451 - ^
01:17:006 (4) - Can you shape it in a better way? Just rearrange some of the sliderpoints and it'll be fine.
01:44:562 - Same suggestion of the ones before. Add a note here for consistency.
01:58:784 - ^
02:02:340 - ^
02:40:117 (1) - Make it finish on 02:42:784 - There's way too little time between the spinner-end and the upcoming notes. Fix it.
02:59:229 - Same suggestion of the ones before. Note here please.
03:25:451 (1) - Mhmh... Can you just rearrange the sliderpoints so that the start and the end don't meet? Please.
- Nice diff, the only thing I didn't understand were those parts in which you didn't place the hitcircle. You can blatantly feel the beat on those parts, so I think you should add the notes I suggested you to add.

Storyboard
DON'T KILL THE POLAR BEAR PLSSSSSSSSSSSSS

Nice map :3

Perfume <3

P.S.: Contact me via PM when you update this mod and I'll give another testplay to the Insane.
Last edited by Kecco , edited 1 time in total.
Raging Bull
2,785 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Raging Bull

sheela901 wrote:

Breeze requested me this map.

[General]
Enable "Epilepsy Warning" because 02:41:895 to 02:43:673 , it flashes so quick. Added but not updated yet.
In the tags, write the names who created an GD and SB. Added

[SB]
A fade in for "kashiyuka" to 00:00:006 to 00:00:118 ?

[Tari's Easy]
Disable widescreen support since it's the only one enable.
02:21:451 (4) - It's kind of far to 02:20:562 (3) so, it can be somewhere at x:256 y:104.

[Normal]
02:29:451 (1) - Put this note into red? Because the background appear red. I don't know. Colors changes really fast in background anyways.
02:33:006 (1) - Blue? ^

[Hard]
00:16:562 (1,2) - Make them parallel to 00:17:007 (3,4) ? Copy and paste 00:17:007 (3,4) .
01:03:895 (6) - Maybe don't stack with 01:02:784 (5) . Move it somewhere at x:200 y:32.

[Insane]
01:08:117 - Add a note? Kinda wanted a slow down into chorus so a little big gap after notes.

01:09:006 - ^ Same ;w;

Sorry if my suggestions aren't good. Good Luck and star!
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
Hi~ ;3

[General]

●Song Setup > Design > Please turn off the "Enable countdown"
Does not work :p

●Song Setup > Audio > Lead-in 2000 ⇒ 2500 change?
I think start of the song is too early..

●Add "soft-sliderslide2" and "soft-sliderslide3"
soft-sliderslide has added, you should add. And, I like sliderslide of silence xD

●Hard diff name : change to kosiga's Hard?

●Please look at this. I don't know this, but there is a problem? http://puu.sh/48PF1.jpg

[Tari's Easy]

●00:03:673 (3) - Middle point x:244 y:280 and End point x:320 y:268 for perfect blanket. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/943549
●00:13:451 (5) - spacing. spacing is incorrect. You should fix it.
●00:22:784 (2) - ^
●01:23:673 (3) - ^
●01:44:562 (x) - Add circle? I think unsatisfactory. If you add, will have no problem. And, here only is not added, I feel strange.
●01:58:784 (x) - ^
●02:08:117 (1) - Move to x:108 y:236. I prefer this. Appearance is beautiful.
●02:21:451 (4) - spacing. spacing is incorrect. You should fix it.
●02:59:229 (x) - Add circle? I think unsatisfactory. If you add, will have no problem. And, here only is not added, I feel strange.
●03:05:895 (2) - spacing. spacing is incorrect. You should fix it.

[Normal]

●AR+1? Recently, AR5 is increasing. And, the same as the Easy diff would be strange.
●00:19:673 (4) - Spacing is different why? I think you should probably align the spacing.
●00:32:117 (1) - ^
●00:33:895 (4) - ^
●00:50:562 (2) - ^
●00:59:673 (6) - ^
●01:07:673 (5) - whistle ⇒ finish (end)? will fit a song~
●01:43:229 (1) - Spacing is different why? I think you should probably align the spacing.
●02:04:562 (5) - Same as 01:07:673.
●02:15:229 (1,2) - spacing is different why? I think you should probably align the spacing.
●02:30:340 (2,3) - spacing is different why? I think you should probably align the spacing.
●02:56:117 (3) - ^

[Hard]

●00:00:118 (1,2,3,4) - （１）と（４）の始点部分が近いというかなんか見た目があまりよろしくないので、http://puu.sh/48PpI.jpg　このような感じにすると見た目が良くなると思います。
●01:09:451 (3) - 音量を抑えているのはわかるのですが、ちょっと小さすぎるかなーっと思います。普通にここは60%でも問題ないと思います。ただ、私の耳があまりよろしくないので、実際にこれくらいでもいいかもしれません。その辺はお任せします。
●02:06:340 (3) - ^

[Insaneee]

●00:06:229 (3) - firmly stacked 00:04:673 (6,7).
●00:16:117 (5) - Add new combo? keep the consistency.
●00:17:895 (1) - firmly stacked 00:16:784 (6).
●00:41:451 (1) - Remove new combo? I think unnecessary.
●01:09:451 (3) - Same as Normal diff.
●02:06:340 (5) - extend to 02:06:784. will fit a song~

good mapset and song <3

good luck ;)
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
ZLOdeuka-
Hello :)

nyaa~ very cute map!

OMG http://puu.sh/492uq.jpg Why did you kill a bear? I felt sad :(

[Tari's Easy]

00:13:006 (4,5) - spacing. look 00:12:562 (3,4) - here another distance

00:21:451 (1,2) - ^ check out all these places. I think it's bad for the Easy

01:44:562 (x) - add note

01:48:117 (2) - ^

01:56:562 (4) - Grid Snap off and align the end of the slider with 01:55:229 (2)

01:58:784 (2) - add note. I do not like this kind of breakage of music. If that sounds better please correct it everywhere

02:40:117 (1,1) - between the spinner and the slider should be longer. spinner finished here 02:42:784

02:59:229 (2) - then you need to add a combo. because on in such places they have

03:26:784 (1) - replace it http://puu.sh/4933Z.jpg or change the shape of the slider

[Normal]

00:41:006 (1) - may be better to replace the slider

01:37:895 (1) - ^

01:11:229 (1) - finish here 01:11:673 and 01:11:895 add circle

02:08:117 (1) - ^

02:40:117 (1) - finish here 02:42:784

03:25:673 (4) - new combo

[Hard]

00:00:784 (4) - x:304 y:192

02:21:895 (6) - new combo

<3

[Insane]

00:23:229 (5,6,7) - do the same distance

01:23:673 (5) - new combo

01:52:117 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/493Rs.jpg sounds better

SB gives your map originality <3

Good luck!
Raging Bull
2,785 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Raging Bull

Kecco wrote:



Hello! From the QAT queue.

[General]
• Add "A~chan" "Kashiyuka" and "Nocchi" in the Tags. Those are the names of the 3 singers. You should also add "Tari".Done

[Insane]
00:03:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pentagon is crooked. Can you make it a bit more neat? It looks bad while playing. Moving the 00:04:117 (3) - to the right and downwards a bit should be enough to fix it. Btw if you want a perfect pentagon you might also use the feature "Compose>Create Polygon Circles". You might set the number of circles on 5 notes, create the pentagon, and then adjust it to place the 2-circles streams. HAHAHAHA what? When did that exist. Okay. Hahaha. I fixed by moving 3 down and right.
00:23:895 (6) - Can you stack it on the 00:24:117 (7) - ? Looks better and it's also consistent with these other stacks 00:22:117 (2,3) - 00:23:006 (4,5) - Well to me, the other stacks felt fitting because they didn't seem to have "motion" when they sing I guess. This one here felt like they had motion so I thought stack didn't fit.
00:27:895 (10) - Stack it on the 00:26:784 (5) - . I think it plays better. And also, new combo. Hmm, I stack 10 on 5, 11 on 6 and 12 on 4. I think I understood what you wanted. The movement from 10 to 11 would have become weird if I didn't adjust imo. Also I prefer to NC on new stanza instead. :s
00:41:451 (1) - Remove new combo. How'd that happen haha. Removed.
00:55:229 (5) - New combo. I tend to NC on new stanza.
00:59:673 (9,10,11,12) - Mhmh, I don't like the flow of this. I'd prefer you to stretch this slider 00:59:673 (9) - until the blue tick and then to remove this note 01:00:229 (11) - . Of course you'll have to adjust the distance too. Here's an an explanatory pic:
SPOILER
Ohh I really like it. Thanks.
01:07:451 - Mhmh, why don't you add a note here? I love the way you mapped this part (like these 01:04:117 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ), that's why I'd suggest you to add a note there, just to keep up the rhythm and the flow :) Here's a pic with the position I'd suggest:
SPOILER
There's no vocal here, buttttt if someone suggest again I'll add it. Someone else already mentioned they like it too.
01:20:340 (4) - New combo. Sorry, not really my style ;w;
01:23:673 (5) - ^ same orz
01:35:229 (6) - ^ same
01:49:229 (6,7) - I wouldn't stack these. I'd suggest you to move the slider elsewhere, just to be consistent with previous notes and slider and to maintain the flow. Okay then.
01:52:117 (5,6) - Mhmh. You might map this part in a better way. I'd suggest you to delete this note 01:53:451 (8) - ; to move this slider a 1/2 later ; to add a note here 01:52:673 - . Here are some pics:
SPOILER
Done!
01:59:895 (6) - New combo. orz
02:17:006 (5,6,7,8,9) - This pentagon is crooked. You can fix it easily by moving the 02:17:006 (5) - down of 3/4 grids and 1 to the left. moved
02:21:895 (4) - Move it a bit to the right. Just to be in the axis of the center of these sliders 02:20:562 (1,2,3) - . okay

[Hard]
00:55:229 (5) - New combo?
01:05:451 (4,5,1) - They are too close to 01:05:006 (3) - . Move them a bit far away.
01:14:784 (1) - Stack it with the 01:13:895 (2) - ?
01:38:784 (1,1,1,1) - I don't know if the other modders will allow this.
01:52:117 (5) - New combo?
01:56:117 (6) - Move it a bit far away from the 01:55:673 (5) - . Just a bit.
03:11:673 (1) - Remove new combo and add it on this 03:12:117 (3) - .
03:25:451 (1,1,1,1) - Same of what I said before.

[Normal]
• Mhmh, I think you should select the Custom Hitsound 1 Soft (S:C1) on the red timing line. In the Hard and Insane you couldn't hear the sliderslide, whilst in this diff you can (Only in the first part though).
01:07:673 (5) - Why don't you make a semi-circle instead? Like this one:
looks better imo
Well I kinda wanted a wave slider. Adjusted it to make it look bit nicer.

[Tari's Easy]
• Same thing of what I said for the Normal, about the hitsounding.
00:29:895 - I think you should add a note for consistency with the upcoming notes and sliders.
00:57:451 - ^
01:17:006 (4) - Can you shape it in a better way? Just rearrange some of the sliderpoints and it'll be fine.
01:44:562 - Same suggestion of the ones before. Add a note here for consistency.
01:58:784 - ^
02:02:340 - ^
02:40:117 (1) - Make it finish on 02:42:784 - There's way too little time between the spinner-end and the upcoming notes. Fix it.
02:59:229 - Same suggestion of the ones before. Note here please.
03:25:451 (1) - Mhmh... Can you just rearrange the sliderpoints so that the start and the end don't meet? Please.
- Nice diff, the only thing I didn't understand were those parts in which you didn't place the hitcircle. You can blatantly feel the beat on those parts, so I think you should add the notes I suggested you to add.

Storyboard
DON'T KILL THE POLAR BEAR PLSSSSSSSSSSSSS

Nice map :3

Perfume <3

P.S.: Contact me via PM when you update this mod and I'll give another testplay to the Insane.
Raging Bull
2,785 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Raging Bull
Gamu Gamu Gamu

-Gamu- wrote:

Hi~ ;3

[General]

●Song Setup > Design > Please turn off the "Enable countdown"
Does not work :p okay

●Song Setup > Audio > Lead-in 2000 ⇒ 2500 change?
I think start of the song is too early.. okay

●Add "soft-sliderslide2" and "soft-sliderslide3"
soft-sliderslide has added, you should add. And, I like sliderslide of silence xD hmm okay

●Hard diff name : change to kosiga's Hard? ohh forgot ;w;

●Please look at this. I don't know this, but there is a problem? http://puu.sh/48PF1.jpg i will ask breeze!

[Tari's Easy]

●00:03:673 (3) - Middle point x:244 y:280 and End point x:320 y:268 for perfect blanket. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/943549
●00:13:451 (5) - spacing. spacing is incorrect. You should fix it.
●00:22:784 (2) - ^
●01:23:673 (3) - ^
●01:44:562 (x) - Add circle? I think unsatisfactory. If you add, will have no problem. And, here only is not added, I feel strange.
●01:58:784 (x) - ^
●02:08:117 (1) - Move to x:108 y:236. I prefer this. Appearance is beautiful.
●02:21:451 (4) - spacing. spacing is incorrect. You should fix it.
●02:59:229 (x) - Add circle? I think unsatisfactory. If you add, will have no problem. And, here only is not added, I feel strange.
●03:05:895 (2) - spacing. spacing is incorrect. You should fix it.

[Normal]

●AR+1? Recently, AR5 is increasing. And, the same as the Easy diff would be strange. okay
●00:19:673 (4) - Spacing is different why? I think you should probably align the spacing. Really I think it's very hard to even notice for beginners imo. I'll change if people still don't like.
●00:32:117 (1) - ^ Imo I don't think beginners can tell difference here too.
●00:33:895 (4) - ^ okay this one is fix.
●00:50:562 (2) - ^ fix
●00:59:673 (6) - ^ fix
●01:07:673 (5) - whistle ⇒ finish (end)? will fit a song~ okay 30% finish
●01:43:229 (1) - Spacing is different why? I think you should probably align the spacing. fix
●02:04:562 (5) - Same as 01:07:673. done 30% finish too
●02:15:229 (1,2) - spacing is different why? I think you should probably align the spacing. don't see problem..but fix
●02:30:340 (2,3) - spacing is different why? I think you should probably align the spacing. okay this is big problem. fixed.
●02:56:117 (3) - ^ slider speed change here. Spacing is normal really.
[Hard]

●00:00:118 (1,2,3,4) - （１）と（４）の始点部分が近いというかなんか見た目があまりよろしくないので、http://puu.sh/48PpI.jpg　このような感じにすると見た目が良くなると思います。
●01:09:451 (3) - 音量を抑えているのはわかるのですが、ちょっと小さすぎるかなーっと思います。普通にここは60%でも問題ないと思います。ただ、私の耳があまりよろしくないので、実際にこれくらいでもいいかもしれません。その辺はお任せします。
●02:06:340 (3) - ^

[Insaneee]

●00:06:229 (3) - firmly stacked 00:04:673 (6,7). okay
●00:16:117 (5) - Add new combo? keep the consistency. Well the beginning NC pattern is different ;w; I like NC every 2 stanza.
●00:17:895 (1) - firmly stacked 00:16:784 (6). okay
●00:41:451 (1) - Remove new combo? I think unnecessary. I think it's okay. It is different part of song here.
●01:09:451 (3) - Same as Normal diff. I think finish too loud, but I'll do finish 30%
●02:06:340 (5) - extend to 02:06:784. will fit a song~ hmm okay.

good mapset and song <3

good luck ;)
ZLOdeuka-

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

Hello :)

nyaa~ very cute map!

OMG http://puu.sh/492uq.jpg Why did you kill a bear? I felt sad :( Breeze is God. He can do what he wants.

[Tari's Easy]

00:13:006 (4,5) - spacing. look 00:12:562 (3,4) - here another distance

00:21:451 (1,2) - ^ check out all these places. I think it's bad for the Easy

01:44:562 (x) - add note

01:48:117 (2) - ^

01:56:562 (4) - Grid Snap off and align the end of the slider with 01:55:229 (2)

01:58:784 (2) - add note. I do not like this kind of breakage of music. If that sounds better please correct it everywhere

02:40:117 (1,1) - between the spinner and the slider should be longer. spinner finished here 02:42:784

02:59:229 (2) - then you need to add a combo. because on in such places they have

03:26:784 (1) - replace it http://puu.sh/4933Z.jpg or change the shape of the slider

[Normal]

00:41:006 (1) - may be better to replace the slider hmm, I kinda wanted spinner to have variety in score and also felt nice to have a spinner here.

01:37:895 (1) - ^ same

01:11:229 (1) - finish here 01:11:673 and 01:11:895 add circle I kinda like current way better. I thought adding 1/2 notes at this part might be hard since I mapped lots of 1/2 but they are sliders.

02:08:117 (1) - ^ same orz

02:40:117 (1) - finish here 02:42:784 ohh..mistake x_x fix

03:25:673 (4) - new combo I think having same combo here is good imo.

[Hard]

00:00:784 (4) - x:304 y:192

02:21:895 (6) - new combo

<3 kosiga best mapper!!

[Insane]

00:23:229 (5,6,7) - do the same distance fixed

01:23:673 (5) - new combo orz I like my current NC pattern

01:52:117 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/493Rs.jpg sounds better already fix from other maps.

SB gives your map originality <3

Good luck!
Last edited by Raging Bull , edited 5 times in total.
kosiga
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kosiga
SPOILER

sheela901 wrote:

[Hard]
00:16:562 (1,2) - Make them parallel to 00:17:007 (3,4) ? Copy and paste 00:17:007 (3,4) . already uses a copy. but it is a little different styles :P
01:03:895 (6) - Maybe don't stack with 01:02:784 (5) . Move it somewhere at x:200 y:32. move to x204,y8

Kecco wrote:

[Hard]
00:55:229 (5) - New combo? maybe no need. It has a pattern with 01:52:117 (5)
01:05:451 (4,5,1) - They are too close to 01:05:006 (3) - . Move them a bit far away. almost follow DS here. :?
01:14:784 (1) - Stack it with the 01:13:895 (2) - ? sorry, no change.
01:38:784 (1,1,1,1) - I don't know if the other modders will allow this. just stack. so It will not be a problem
01:52:117 (5) - New combo? maybe no need. It has a pattern with 00:55:229 (5)
01:56:117 (6) - Move it a bit far away from the 01:55:673 (5) - . Just a bit. same as 01:05:451 (4,5,1)
03:11:673 (1) - Remove new combo and add it on this 03:12:117 (3) - . same pattern as 00:42:340 (1,2,3) -
03:25:451 (1,1,1,1) - Same of what I said before. same

-Gamu- wrote:

[Hard]
●00:00:118 (1,2,3,4) - （１）と（４）の始点部分が近いというかなんか見た目があまりよろしくないので、http://puu.sh/48PpI.jpg　このような感じにすると見た目が良くなると思います。 changed~
●01:09:451 (3) - 音量を抑えているのはわかるのですが、ちょっと小さすぎるかなーっと思います。普通にここは60%でも問題ないと思います。ただ、私の耳があまりよろしくないので、実際にこれくらいでもいいかもしれません。その辺はお任せします。 少し調整しました。
●02:06:340 (3) - ^ ^

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

[Hard]
00:00:784 (4) - x:304 y:192 It break the square form
02:21:895 (6) - new combo maybe no need =.=
<3 <33

Thank you~ :)

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pw384
2,287 posts
Joined January 2012
pw384
hiiiiiii RB >_< here's my poor mod


This mod is generated by 384's modification coder.

mod info:
Black: Suggestions.
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.


SB is really nice. :D

[Tair's Easy]

* 01:14:784 (1) - Ctrl+G?

* 01:15:673 (2,4) - The blanket can be better

* 01:44:562 - Add a note? It may follow both the vocal and the drum.

* 02:07:229 (1) - the slider may need recreated bcz it doesn't make a good blanket with 02:08:117 (1) -


[Normal]

* 01:59:229 (3) - remove the clap at the slider's end?

* 02:35:895 - Add a note? maybe fun to play


[Hard]

* 00:41:006 (1,2,3,4,5) - (nazi) the star can be better.

* 03:24:562 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^


[Insane]

* 00:03:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The star is a bit crooked. It can be better! :D

* 01:07:673 (1,2,3) - (nazi) make a equilateral triangle?

* 03:07:454 (5) - object is not snapped!

* 03:26:117 (6) - (nazi) move to x=340,y=68?
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