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Pirates of the Sea - Wolves of the Sea

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Mashley
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 08 July 2009 at 08:31:11

Artist: Pirates of the Sea
Title: Wolves of the Sea
Tags: eurovision europe latvia
BPM: 145
Filesize: 3693kb
Play Time: 01:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Captain (4.57 stars, 169 notes)
  2. Pirate (3.7 stars, 120 notes)
  3. Stowaway (1.2 stars, 68 notes)
Download: Pirates of the Sea - Wolves of the Sea
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Latvian Pirates for LuigiHann's Talk Like a Pirate Day pack.

YARR!!
Shinde
Doesn't look too bad. Out of mod steam atm, so I'll probably edit this later or post again.

All I can say at the moment is since there are so many sliders, there isn't as much to mod. Just take a look at all your sliders and ask yourself if you could shape them better. There a few I saw that I thought could be improved shape-wise, but this is a fairly small detail so.

Star'd.

Edit:

Loser
00:35:25 (1) - Nazi. Align endpoint with start a bit better? Then align with 2. The slider at 00:56:35 is like perfect, I think you could copy paste it actually. Right endpoint needs down like 2 pixels and it's perfectly aligned.
00:45:18 (1) - ^ Nazi. This one was really close to perfect too, lol.
01:06:69 - ^ Also Nazi
00:49:32 (2) - I think you should move this off of (3)
00:51:80 (1,2) - You could round these a big more and get a circle thing going with them.
01:08:35 (1) - Touch this up a little, it droops slightly on the left.
Also, what's up with (2) after it? Used linear instead of Bezier and it looks rather out of place.
01:11:66 (2) - Meh, I dunno. Same for following slider. I guess it's ok.
01:23:25 (1,2) - You know you could totally turn this into a heart right? Lol. xdd Do ittt. It fits the lyrics too.

Pirate
00:17:04 (2) - Dunno about the shape. It's fine I think, but I think the shape could be improved somehow. Can you think of any neat shapes for this one?
00:25:32 (5) - Align. Should be down one and right either 3 or 4.
00:55:11 (2) - Reshape maybe? Hmm.
01:06:69 til either 01:10:83 or 01:13:32 - The slider gets rather lower on the screen here. Move this entire section up by.. 1? 2?
You could also flatten the slider or something.
01:18:01 (1,2,3,4,5) -Realign. It looks a little smooshed.
01:34:01 (2) - End point could be stacked a little more cleanly.

Captain
00:23:94 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Uhh.. Align's a little wierd but I dunno.
00:27:80 (3) - Needs moar curve imho. Doesn't curve like (1) does. Endpoint is in a good spot, I'd bring the start up a bit so it curves more.
00:30:41 (2,3) - I'd bring (2) up a bit so it's in the middle of (1), I think it looks better. Then 3 has to go up a bit obviously.
00:36:48 (1,2,3) - I like these, lol.
00:45:58 (1/3) - naziEndpoint doesn't stack quite right.
00:48:49 (1,2,3) - These are supposed to be ever so slightly slanted right? Same 2 seconds later, and once on Pirate difficulty I believe.
00:51:59 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Like this part too. Dx
01:23:45 (1,2) - Off by one pixel at endpoints if you want to be nazi about it. Same like 2 seconds later. Almost didn't mention this since it's nearly unnoticeable but meh.
01:34:01 (3) - This is a little off from 1. Also not grid snap'd atm.

Hope that wasn't too nazi for you. :o A thought occurs though. I think you could fit one of those neat crossbones Larto did in 'You Are A Pirate' on his hardest difficulty, somewhere into your map. Might be worth taking a look at, could be neat. Needs a Pirate spinner imho. xdd
arien666
Seems good.
But... it confuses me :(
I think there are something to fix.

Anyway...
I'll star this map!
blissfulyoshi
Offset:499

Stowaway:
get rid of the last inherited timing section

pirate:
00:49:32 (3) - continue the line created by 2
01:23:87 (2) - put on the y-axis
01:24:90 (1) - make a vertical reflection of 01:23:25 (1)
get rid of the last inherited timing section

captain:
00:28:35 (4) - align with the ending of 3
00:50:14 (1) - align with 2
01:18:01 (1,2,3) - make 2 centered between 1 and 3

get rid of the last inherited timing section

Nice beatmap. Star.
LuigiHann
Made some comments via irc regarding the slider art at the beginning, and the stacking throughout Pirate difficulty. I think it's a good map, plays pretty smoothly.
mrtn
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Jarby
All:

01:00:08() - Cut kiai time off here.
01:19:53 (1) - 1/1 forward.

Pirate:

00:24:18 (3) - lolspacing.

Captain:

01:33:18 (1,2,3,4,5) - Center me.
Pasonia
18:13 <Pasonia> : your Stowaway is fine but, like Xgor's, suffers from the same "boring" syndrom
18:14 <Pasonia> : though I don't think newbies mind
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18:14 <Pasonia> : waaaaaaaaa
18:14 <Pasonia> : what the hell ASH!
18:14 <Pasonia> : 00:13:74 (1,2) - this is too Pirate-y!
18:14 <Pasonia> : what the hell is with this jump!

18:14 <Agent_Spin_Here> : which diff
18:15 <Pasonia> : Pirate
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18:19 <Pasonia> : ugh
18:19 <Pasonia> : you have to be more alert about jumps like that
18:19 <Pasonia> : it's very challenging
18:19 <Pasonia> : but if it overshoots reason
18:19 <Pasonia> : then it's no fun

18:19 <Pasonia> : 00:13:74 (1,2) @ Pirate
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18:20 <Pasonia> : i mean
18:20 <Pasonia> : I'm modding this way because this is your second-hardest diff
18:20 <Pasonia> : not your hardest
18:20 <Pasonia> : therefore it has to maintain some sort of balance between being very easy and very hard
18:20 <Pasonia> : 00:23:67 (2,3) - is also a prime example, a good example of a bad example.
18:21 <Agent_Spin_Here> : D:
18:21 <Agent_Spin_Here> : I like those notes
18:21 <Agent_Spin_Here> : but you're right
18:22 <Pasonia> : i mean
18:22 <Pasonia> : well
18:22 <Pasonia> : too challenging = player goes "wtf isn't this supposed to be just a little bit harder?"
18:22 <Pasonia> : but that's my opinion
18:23 <Pasonia> : I will say till the day I die about Shotgun Symphony
18:23 <Pasonia> : but none of the BATs will have it
18:23 <Pasonia> : so yea
18:23 <Pasonia> : anyway back on Pirate

18:23 <Pasonia> : 00:40:22 (3) - I don't like how this 3 is positioned
18:24 <Pasonia> : not being personal but, while your first and second sliders have a large spacing
18:24 <Pasonia> : this one is just slightly moving away
18:24 <Pasonia> : therefore giving the false impression of a 1/4th or 1/8th, even
18:25 <Pasonia> : on second thoughts
18:25 <Pasonia> : sorry about it but it could have been a personally-charged comment
18:25 <Pasonia> : so you're free to change or leave it as is
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18:26 <Pasonia> : 01:40:63 (3,4) - the tilt on this one intentional?
18:26 <Agent_Spin_Here> : yes
18:26 <Pasonia> : okay I'll leave it alone
18:27 <Pasonia> : your situation - almost a duplica of Xgor's
18:27 <Pasonia> : all songs utilise less than 75% of the whole song
18:27 <Pasonia> : therefore
18:27 <Pasonia> : please shorten the mp3 if possible
18:27 <Pasonia> : to reduce the size
18:27 <Pasonia> : but take it this way
18:27 <Pasonia> : your situation is less extreme than Xgor's
18:27 <Pasonia> : at any rate
18:28 <Pasonia> : for Xgor he WILL have to cut >50% so it's mandatory
18:28 <Agent_Spin_Here> : I think I'll leave it
18:28 <Agent_Spin_Here> : it's not too big
18:28 <Pasonia> : for you, it's optional, and you just voiced your opinion so I will honor that
Zerostarry
I dont want to write a hugeass wall of shit so im gonna say this:

[All difficulties]
Listen through at 50% playback, adjust the notes that are off lyrics, move them to 1/6 or out of 1/6.
Zerostarry
[Pirate]
00:15:91 (3) - 1/6
00:20:91 (3) - ^
00:21:80 (1) - Red tick
00:22:56 (3) - 1/6
00:23:67 (2) - End 1/6 later
Yuukari-Banteki
[Stowaway]
looks good


[Pirate]
a bit whistle heavy in the last chorus but good enough


[Captain]
cool, bubbled
Zerostarry
nice
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