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Kinomi
Sorry again :o

Normal hitsound sounds not very good

I have played this PSP game before TV anime,really good game,it has excellent story,but foolish choices,the choices are always paronomasia but not reasoning.....

Easy
00:14:099 (2) - strange clap,remove it
00:42:693 (1) - from here,volume is a bit big,and makes hitsound sounds noisy.
00:12:224 (4,1) - better blanket pls
00:57:693 (1,2,3) - ^
01:20:661 (1) - I think this spinner is unnecessary,end at 01:20:193 is ok,it makes a feeling of sudden stop,players will be release from the Grade referees,and maybe the next will come soon? :)

Normal
same suggestions as easy.
other things are fine imo

Hard
claps in kiai is not awesome,try drum hitsound?I think drum hit-normal and finish is good for this song,drum clap is a bit noisy,you can use custom hit clap.
I notice that in hard and insane,there are some unnecessary spacing changes
00:38:474 (9) - like this,fix them
00:52:068 (1) - for example,1 have a random spacing..
make it like this
1's head and 3's end,2's head and 3's head,if they have the same spacing,they will look ordered

Despair
00:23:709 (7) - some parts like this,maybe spacing between 7 and 6 smaller ,7 and 8 bigger is better.because 8 has a stress,so do a jump here will be better,when there is a stress,you can make a jump to show it.
for example,in your hard 00:53:943 (1,2) - you do a jump,2 has a stress,it is good

01:16:443 why not try more interesting rhythm?
like this

00:49:489 (5,6) - a confusing jump imo,maybe smaller spacing is better

00:53:943 just an example,if you feel hard to change it,don't change,x_x because it will break your Original map

00:15:505 ^
maybe 2 kick slider + 1 note more interesting?
like this
00:17:849 you miss lots of parts which can be more interesting like this.
maybe it can be this

new combo above just to show the rhythm more clearly

a bit boring imo..too many similar patterns
the diff itself doesn't have big problems,but boring...

try more different rhythm and patterns,it can become interesting

a poor mod ;w; haven't do modding things for a long time.
thzz
Hi~ from M4M request from my queue

[General]
  1. Your mp3's volume is so low. You should try to turn up the volume.
[Easy]
  1. 00:07:068 (1) - You can make better blanket I think.
  2. 00:08:943 (1) - move to rightup a little?
  3. 00:14:099 (2) - Why you put clap here? I recommend to remove this.
  4. 00:28:161 (3,1) - How about to make regular triangle?
  5. 00:46:443 (1) - I don't like a flow like drawing straight line. I suggest like this.
  6. 01:08:943 (1) - You should make better blanket here imo.
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:521 (5) - add whistle at 00:12:224 -
  2. 00:18:318 (4) - add whistle on the tale.
  3. 00:20:193 (1) - add finish at 00:20:193 - ?
  4. 00:37:771 (5) - Flow from 00:37:068 (4) - is bad I feel. I prefer if this slider is like this.
  5. 00:40:818 (3) - move to (416,76)
[Hard]
  1. 00:53:943 (1) - make better blanket with 00:53:474 (4) -
  2. 01:19:724 (7) - add clap instead of 01:19:958 (8) - ?
[Insane]
  1. 00:05:193 (1) - add finish at 00:05:193 -
  2. 00:05:193 (1) - add whistle at 00:05:661 -
  3. 00:11:169 (5) - add whistle on the head ?
  4. 00:19:725 (5) - add finish on the tale instead of the head.
  5. 00:26:990 (5) - add whistle at 00:27:224 -
That's it. Good luck ;)
Autumn
Hi~
From my queue
[General]
The mp3 is not that good in quality..
Set kiai volume to 35-45% sounds better
U may silence the sliderslide using an empty sliderslide.wav

[Easy]
00:14:099 (2) - Whistle is better imo

[Normal]
00:12:224 - Whistle?
00:18:786 - ^

[Hard]
Fine

[Despair]
You could try more 3/4 and jumps in this diff..For example
Change 00:53:005 (6,7) into this:
00:48:669 (3) -
00:56:521 (7) - NC

That's all I could find...nice map in all but I think U'd better change the mp3 :D
[ Zzz ]
Hi~ AnreFM

[Easy]

HP -1 OD - 1 AR - 1

Ai Mod Check

00:07:068 (1) - No NC

[Normal]

HP + 1 OD + 1

Ai Mod Check

[Hard]

Ai Mod Check

01:10:114 (3) - Ctrl + G

01:14:099 (4) - Ctrl + G

[Despair]

Ai Mod Check

t/147483 My Map!!
RikiH_
Hi, m4m!

Black=Suggestion
Blue=Should fix
Red=Must fix/Unrankable

General

Well, your mp3's volume is really really low in comparison to the other ranked maps... I highly suggest to find another mps with higher volume, this also because the song is quite intense and a low volume ruins it...

Another thing: it's just a little detail but can you edit the BG and delete this? It's really annoying to see...

The offset is totally wrong... Try to use 5165 (-28)! Maybe it's not perfect but it's much better imo... And don't forget to resnap all notes and green lines after the offset change! My mod is done after the offset change anyway

Easy

00:00:243 (1) - This spinner should start in 00:00:008 - and end in 00:04:227
00:12:196 (4,1) - You can curve better the second slider in order to have a much better blanket!
00:12:665 (1) - Whistle in the end? It feels a bit emply without it
00:28:602 (1,2) - This blanket can be really better
00:38:446 (4,1) - ^ Curve the slider a bit more!
00:45:946 (4,1) - ^
00:57:665 (1,2) - ^

Ok I won't go on, just go through the map and correct all wrong/bad blankets, they are really ugly to see and they make your map ugly :|

01:08:915 (1) - Finish in the beginning?

Normal

00:00:243 (1) - The same as Easy about this spinner
00:20:165 (1) - Finish in the beginning
00:44:540 (3) - Maybe you can curve this slider a bit better in order to have a better blanket
01:11:727 (4,1,2) - You can improve these blankets too

Hard

00:00:243 (1) - The same about the spinner
00:26:478 (2,3) - Blanket them better
00:31:180 (7,1) - ^

The main problem here are the blankets... Go through the map and fix them please :<

From this moment on: 00:35:165 - The claps.
Well, in my opinion they sound bad... They are supposed to be on every 2nd and 4th white tick, and not in other places, so I think you have to remove them and put them on every 2nd and 4th tick. I mean, here 00:35:633 here 00:36:571 here 00:37:508 here 00:38:446 here 00:39:383 here 00:40:321 here 00:41:258 and so on! They will sound much better... You should put claps in another way only if they follow the song but this is not the case imo...

Despair

Same suggestion as Hard diff about the claps
ALso, fix all bad blankets

00:11:727 (6,7) - Improve the blanket... Anyways I think the slider should end 1/4 earlier, it follows better the vocals. If you shorten it, remove the whistle from the end
00:19:696 (5) - Finish in the end
00:27:196 (5) - Whislte in this point, you forgot it
00:46:180 (5) - Move to 92|308 for spacing
00:25:790 (1,2,3) - Move this to 292|320 because during playing this pattern overlaps the previous slide because of the stack leniency!

_____________

Nothing else, you really have to fix the blankets... Anyways congratulations because actually your map is good, I hope it gets ranked soon ;)
Topic Starter
AnreFM
Replies because it is VERY rude to not do it orz

mochii

Momochikun wrote:

Hai ~
as requested :roll:




Ngga nyangka ada yg ngemap lagu ini.. awalnya aku kira lagu ini unmappable o_owdw saya ngedengernya pas aja, jdi bsa deh ngemap heuheu

[Insane]
00:00:036 (1) - Spinner not snapped, cek AiModlol fixed
00:10:818 (3) - Klo ngikut rhytm sebelumnya harusnya disini ada finish~fix
00:26:990 (5) - Mending satu kali aja reverse nya.. truss add note disini 00:27:693
fixedd

[Hard]
00:32:614 (3) - Ctrl +J ?iya deh, fixed
00:36:833 (1) - Pecah rhytm ini slider.. mending di pisahin jadi 2 1/2 slider
did some change

[Normal]
00:11:755 (6,1) - Bingung ini spacingnya.. org psti ngira ini reverse slider bakal 2xoke, rhythm changed
00:16:443 (1) - Ctrl J ?yaa
00:55:818 (3,4) - Blanket kurang pas
rapiin orz

Easy udh ok keknya..yay!

Don't KD this post~lol no why not zzz
GL ^^makasih modnya :)

baldrace

baldrace wrote:

Sorry again :o

Normal hitsound sounds not very goodguess have to look at some cs then

I have played this PSP game before TV anime,really good game,it has excellent story,but foolish choices,the choices are always paronomasia but not reasoning..... lol yeah but it's still a great game tho right? :)

Easy
00:14:099 (2) - strange clap,remove itdone
00:42:693 (1) - from here,volume is a bit big,and makes hitsound sounds noisy.
00:12:224 (4,1) - better blanket pls
00:57:693 (1,2,3) - ^
01:20:661 (1) - I think this spinner is unnecessary,end at 01:20:193 is ok,it makes a feeling of sudden stop,players will be release from the Grade referees,and maybe the next will come soon? :)

Normal
same suggestions as easy.
other things are fine imo

Hard
claps in kiai is not awesome,try drum hitsound?I think drum hit-normal and finish is good for this song,drum clap is a bit noisy,you can use custom hit clap.
I notice that in hard and insane,there are some unnecessary spacing changes
00:38:474 (9) - like this,fix them
00:52:068 (1) - for example,1 have a random spacing..
make it like this
1's head and 3's end,2's head and 3's head,if they have the same spacing,they will look ordered

Despair
00:23:709 (7) - some parts like this,maybe spacing between 7 and 6 smaller ,7 and 8 bigger is better.because 8 has a stress,so do a jump here will be better,when there is a stress,you can make a jump to show it.
for example,in your hard 00:53:943 (1,2) - you do a jump,2 has a stress,it is good

01:16:443 why not try more interesting rhythm?
like this

00:49:489 (5,6) - a confusing jump imo,maybe smaller spacing is better

00:53:943 just an example,if you feel hard to change it,don't change,x_x because it will break your Original map

00:15:505 ^
maybe 2 kick slider + 1 note more interesting?
like this
00:17:849 you miss lots of parts which can be more interesting like this.
maybe it can be this

new combo above just to show the rhythm more clearly

a bit boring imo..too many similar patterns
the diff itself doesn't have big problems,but boring...

try more different rhythm and patterns,it can become interesting

a poor mod ;w; haven't do modding things for a long time.

Cah-m

Cah-m wrote:

Hi~ from M4M request from my queue

[General]
  1. Your mp3's volume is so low. You should try to turn up the volume.better now
[Easy]
  1. 00:07:068 (1) - You can make better blanket I think.yeah done
  2. 00:08:943 (1) - move to rightup a little?done
  3. 00:14:099 (2) - Why you put clap here? I recommend to remove this.fix
  4. 00:28:161 (3,1) - How about to make regular triangle?
    yeah
  5. 00:46:443 (1) - I don't like a flow like drawing straight line. I suggest like this.
    okay
  6. 01:08:943 (1) - You should make better blanket here imo.
done

[Normal]
  1. 00:11:521 (5) - add whistle at 00:12:224 -
  2. 00:18:318 (4) - add whistle on the tale.
  3. 00:20:193 (1) - add finish at 00:20:193 - ?
  4. 00:37:771 (5) - Flow from 00:37:068 (4) - is bad I feel. I prefer if this slider is like this.
  5. 00:40:818 (3) - move to (416,76)
fix all thanks :)

[Hard]
  1. 00:53:943 (1) - make better blanket with 00:53:474 (4) - ok i guess :o
  2. 01:19:724 (7) - add clap instead of 01:19:958 (8) - ?add on both
[Insane]
  1. 00:05:193 (1) - add finish at 00:05:193 -
  2. 00:05:193 (1) - add whistle at 00:05:661 -
  3. 00:11:169 (5) - add whistle on the head ?
  4. 00:19:725 (5) - add finish on the tale instead of the head.
  5. 00:26:990 (5) - add whistle at 00:27:224 - fix all thanks :)
That's it. Good luck ;)thanks again for mods :D

autumn

Autumn wrote:

Hi~
From my queue
[General]
The mp3 is not that good in quality..
Set kiai volume to 35-45% sounds better
U may silence the sliderslide using an empty sliderslide.wav

[Easy]
00:14:099 (2) - Whistle is better imofix

[Normal]
00:12:224 - Whistle?
00:18:786 - ^all fixed

[Hard]
Fine

[Despair]
You could try more 3/4 and jumps in this diff..For example
Change 00:53:005 (6,7) into this:
00:48:669 (3) - umm kinda refraining on another pattern here orz
00:56:521 (7) - NCok

That's all I could find...nice map in all but I think U'd better change the mp3 :Dthanks and thank you for mods :D

zzz

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ AnreFM

[Easy]

HP -1 OD - 1 AR - 1

Ai Mod Check

00:07:068 (1) - No NC

[Normal]

HP + 1 OD + 1

Ai Mod Check

[Hard]

Ai Mod Check

01:10:114 (3) - Ctrl + G

01:14:099 (4) - Ctrl + G

[Despair]

Ai Mod Check

t/147483 My Map!!
umm you do know that i can and do open the AImod myself right? umm so what's the point of showing it to me again?-__- and for that, i think all of it is fine and all ranked maps almost have all of it on them :| anyway, thanks for modding~

RikiH_

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi, m4m!

Black=Suggestion
Blue=Should fix
Red=Must fix/Unrankable

General

Well, your mp3's volume is really really low in comparison to the other ranked maps... I highly suggest to find another mps with higher volume, this also because the song is quite intense and a low volume ruins it...

Another thing: it's just a little detail but can you edit the BG and delete this? It's really annoying to see...fix lol

The offset is totally wrong... Try to use 5165 (-28)! Maybe it's not perfect but it's much better imo... And don't forget to resnap all notes and green lines after the offset change! My mod is done after the offset change anyway

Easy

00:00:243 (1) - This spinner should start in 00:00:008 - and end in 00:04:227
00:12:196 (4,1) - You can curve better the second slider in order to have a much better blanket!
00:12:665 (1) - Whistle in the end? It feels a bit emply without it
00:28:602 (1,2) - This blanket can be really better
00:38:446 (4,1) - ^ Curve the slider a bit more!
00:45:946 (4,1) - ^
00:57:665 (1,2) - ^

Ok I won't go on, just go through the map and correct all wrong/bad blankets, they are really ugly to see and they make your map ugly :|

01:08:915 (1) - Finish in the beginning?

Normal

00:00:243 (1) - The same as Easy about this spinner
00:20:165 (1) - Finish in the beginning
00:44:540 (3) - Maybe you can curve this slider a bit better in order to have a better blanket
01:11:727 (4,1,2) - You can improve these blankets too

Hard

00:00:243 (1) - The same about the spinner
00:26:478 (2,3) - Blanket them better
00:31:180 (7,1) - ^

The main problem here are the blankets... Go through the map and fix them please :<

From this moment on: 00:35:165 - The claps.
Well, in my opinion they sound bad... They are supposed to be on every 2nd and 4th white tick, and not in other places, so I think you have to remove them and put them on every 2nd and 4th tick. I mean, here 00:35:633 here 00:36:571 here 00:37:508 here 00:38:446 here 00:39:383 here 00:40:321 here 00:41:258 and so on! They will sound much better... You should put claps in another way only if they follow the song but this is not the case imo...

Despair

Same suggestion as Hard diff about the claps
ALso, fix all bad blankets

00:11:727 (6,7) - Improve the blanket... Anyways I think the slider should end 1/4 earlier, it follows better the vocals. If you shorten it, remove the whistle from the end
00:19:696 (5) - Finish in the end
00:27:196 (5) - Whislte in this point, you forgot it
00:46:180 (5) - Move to 92|308 for spacing
00:25:790 (1,2,3) - Move this to 292|320 because during playing this pattern overlaps the previous slide because of the stack leniency!umm yeah, fixed all of it, really. And the claps too, hope it's better now :D

_____________

Nothing else, you really have to fix the blankets... Anyways congratulations because actually your map is good, I hope it gets ranked soon ;)thank you very much for your mod and thanks again, I hope it get ranked too~ :)

lol that's tiring, but thanks again everyone :) :)
anyway, if someone can encode a better video, I'd be very happy ;)
Aaaand, more modders~ :D
- Miomio Chii -
Hi, here is my mod. From Queue's m4m.
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
  1. add " Danganronpa: Trigger Happy Havoc " in tags ? ➩ .
  2. Add " ダンガンロンパ 希望の学園と絶望の高校生 " in tags ? ➩
  3. Add " 小高 和剛 西田 惠美 Marchitect JasMace Tribeco 高田 雅史 " in tags ? ➩
    YouTube (0:56 - 0:57)
-------------------------------------------------
-Easy-
  1. Vol : too softly
  2. you can try to put some hitsounds
  3. 00:35:392 (1,3) - symmetry?
  4. 00:49:923 (3) - remove finish
  5. 01:18:517 (3) - NC ?
  6. 01:20:509 (1) - end 01:22:735 - here ?
-------------------------------------------------
-Normal-
  1. Vol : too softly
  2. 00:49:923 (4) - remove finish ?
  3. 01:04:923 (3) - same as ^
  4. 01:05:392 (1) - add finish for the front ?
-------------------------------------------------
-Hard-
  1. Vol : too softly
  2. 00:07:267 (1) - add whistle/clap ?
  3. 00:07:501 (2) - remove whistle from the end ?
  4. 00:34:454 (1) - add whistle for the end ?
  5. 01:20:392 (9) - NC ?
  6. 00:49:454 (5) - remove finish ?
  7. 01:05:392 (1) - add finish for the front ?
-------------------------------------------------
-Despair-
  1. Vol : too softly
  2. 00:14:767 (1) - add finish ?
  3. 00:16:642 (1) - add finish for the front ?
  4. 00:26:720 (4) - remove whistle from the end ?
  5. 00:27:188 (5) - add whistle for the end ?
  6. 01:04:923 (7) - add whistle for the front ?
-------------------------------------------------
End of this mod.
Good luck to you ! ;)
Asphyxia
Hi! (: Mod from my modding queue!

Please respond to my suggestions, thanks!

Red = Unrankable

Blue = Highly recommended

Black (aka normal) = Just a suggestion

General thoughts: You should raise the volume on every part by ~10%, I nearly can hear the hitsounds and also get your timing checked!

Easy
01:20:509 (1,1) - Please don't do this because it is an easy diff, I suggest you start your first spinner 01:20:626 - Here and end it 01:22:735 - here! Your second spinner could start 01:22:970 - and end 01:24:142 -
Otherwise nice diff~

Normal
00:12:892 (1) - 's end 1 grid down maybe?
00:37:267 (4) - Add more curve.
Nothing more, nice diff (:

Hard
00:11:017 (5) - 's end few grid up?
01:20:509 (1) - Why didn't you do the 2 spinners here like in easy, normal and hard+?
Nothing else, nice diff (:

Despair
-1 HP, please.
01:18:048 (6) - NC because velo change.

Sorry for that noob mod and GL with the mapset (:
Shiranai
Hi from my queue :)

[General]
Tags: "Spike Chunsoft" Jas Mace Marchitect The 49ers Tribeca, why you capitalized every first font? and why not to remove the quotation mark on "Spike Chunsoft"

[Easy]
00:12:892 (1) - Ctrl+J and move to x: 188 y:152
00:18:517 (4,5) - Why no copy paste like this one? 00:14:767 (3,4) - That one neater imo, if you do that Ctrl+H and move to x:56 y:300
00:20:392 (1) - If you follow the mod above, Move this slider to x:88 y:64
00:21:329 (2) - If you follow the mod above, Move this circle to x:136 y:152
00:21:798 (3) - If you follow the mod above, Move this circle to x:92 y:240
01:20:392 (1) - Delete this circle
01:20:626 (1) - This spinner should be on 01:20:392 - With an end in 01:24:142 -
01:22:970 - Delete this spinner

[Normal]
It's better to use 1/4 beat snap divisior instead of 1/2 imo
Rise you SV? It's no different with Easy diff SV, or you can lower the easy diff SV below 1.00
01:20:392 (1) - Spinner end should be in 01:24:142 -
01:23:204 (1) - Delete this spinner

[Hard]
01:20:392 (1) - Delete this circle
01:20:626 (1) - This spinner should be on 01:20:392 - With an end in 01:24:142 -

[Despair]
Why Despair instead of Insane?
01:18:048 (6) - Delete this slider and I rather to use this pattern It sound better imo
01:19:805 (8) - Delete this circle
01:20:392 (1) - Delete this circle
01:20:626 (1) - This spinner should be on 01:20:392 - With an end in 01:24:142 -
01:22:970 - Delete this spinner

--
That's all
Good luck :)
Haganeproductio
Good luck! Hopefully you'll get this approved and rated! I'll give a little mod sometime (maybe) if needed C: Keep up the good work! For DR!
Myckose
Why not changing the difficulty names from Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane to Merciful/Gentle/Malicious/Despair :3 ?
Topic Starter
AnreFM
Repreprepreplies

Mio

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

Hi, here is my mod. From Queue's m4m.
-------------------------------------------------
-General-
  1. add " Danganronpa: Trigger Happy Havoc " in tags ? ➩ .
  2. Add " ダンガンロンパ 希望の学園と絶望の高校生 " in tags ? ➩
  3. Add " 小高 和剛 西田 惠美 Marchitect JasMace Tribeco 高田 雅史 " in tags ? ➩
    YouTube (0:56 - 0:57)
-------------------------------------------------
-Easy-
  1. Vol : too softly
  2. you can try to put some hitsounds
  3. 00:35:392 (1,3) - symmetry?
  4. 00:49:923 (3) - remove finish
  5. 01:18:517 (3) - NC ?
  6. 01:20:509 (1) - end 01:22:735 - here ?
-------------------------------------------------
-Normal-
  1. Vol : too softly
  2. 00:49:923 (4) - remove finish ?
  3. 01:04:923 (3) - same as ^
  4. 01:05:392 (1) - add finish for the front ?
-------------------------------------------------
-Hard-
  1. Vol : too softly
  2. 00:07:267 (1) - add whistle/clap ?
  3. 00:07:501 (2) - remove whistle from the end ?
  4. 00:34:454 (1) - add whistle for the end ?
  5. 01:20:392 (9) - NC ?
  6. 00:49:454 (5) - remove finish ?
  7. 01:05:392 (1) - add finish for the front ?
-------------------------------------------------
-Despair-
  1. Vol : too softly
  2. 00:14:767 (1) - add finish ?
  3. 00:16:642 (1) - add finish for the front ?
  4. 00:26:720 (4) - remove whistle from the end ?
  5. 00:27:188 (5) - add whistle for the end ?
  6. 01:04:923 (7) - add whistle for the front ?
-------------------------------------------------
End of this mod.
Good luck to you ! ;)

asphyxia

Asphyxia wrote:

Hi! (: Mod from my modding queue!

Please respond to my suggestions, thanks!

Red = Unrankable

Blue = Highly recommended

Black (aka normal) = Just a suggestion

General thoughts: You should raise the volume on every part by ~10%, I nearly can hear the hitsounds and also get your timing checked!

[box=Easy]01:20:509 (1,1) - Please don't do this because it is an easy diff, I suggest you start your first spinner 01:20:626 - Here and end it 01:22:735 - here! Your second spinner could start 01:22:970 - and end 01:24:142 -
Otherwise nice diff~

[box=asphyxia][Normal]00:12:892 (1) - 's end 1 grid down maybe?
00:37:267 (4) - Add more curve.
Nothing more, nice diff (:

[Hard]00:11:017 (5) - 's end few grid up?
01:20:509 (1) - Why didn't you do the 2 spinners here like in easy, normal and hard+?
Nothing else, nice diff (:

[Despair]-1 HP, please.
01:18:048 (6) - NC because velo change

Sorry for that noob mod and GL with the mapset (:
thanks all fixed too :D

Mako

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hi from my queue :)

[General]
Tags: "Spike Chunsoft" Jas Mace Marchitect The 49ers Tribeca, why you capitalized every first font? and why not to remove the quotation mark on "Spike Chunsoft"

[Easy]
00:12:892 (1) - Ctrl+J and move to x: 188 y:152
00:18:517 (4,5) - Why no copy paste like this one? 00:14:767 (3,4) - That one neater imo, if you do that Ctrl+H and move to x:56 y:300no i like this one better orz
00:20:392 (1) - If you follow the mod above, Move this slider to x:88 y:64
00:21:329 (2) - If you follow the mod above, Move this circle to x:136 y:152
00:21:798 (3) - If you follow the mod above, Move this circle to x:92 y:240
01:20:392 (1) - Delete this circle
01:20:626 (1) - This spinner should be on 01:20:392 - With an end in 01:24:142 -
01:22:970 - Delete this spinner

[Normal]
It's better to use 1/4 beat snap divisior instead of 1/2 imo
Rise you SV? It's no different with Easy diff SV, or you can lower the easy diff SV below 1.00
01:20:392 (1) - Spinner end should be in 01:24:142 -
01:23:204 (1) - Delete this spinner

[Hard]
01:20:392 (1) - Delete this circle
01:20:626 (1) - This spinner should be on 01:20:392 - With an end in 01:24:142 -

[Despair]
Why Despair instead of Insane?because it's not insane:3
01:18:048 (6) - Delete this slider and I rather to use this pattern It sound better imo
01:19:805 (8) - Delete this circle
01:20:392 (1) - Delete this circleno i will keep the slider pattern
01:20:626 (1) - This spinner should be on 01:20:392 - With an end in 01:24:142 -
01:22:970 - Delete this spinner

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That's all
Good luck :)thanks :) changed all otherwise stated~

Haganeproductio

Haganeproductio wrote:

Good luck! Hopefully you'll get this approved and rated! I'll give a little mod sometime (maybe) if needed C: Keep up the good work! For DR!
Thanks :) i will work harder to get this ranked :D your mod will exactly be necessary and helpful too ;)

Myckose

Myckose wrote:

Why not changing the difficulty names from Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane to Merciful/Gentle/Malicious/Despair :3 ?
will consider that, thank you for the suggestion :D

that was helpful, thanks all :)
Anyway, sorry for late reply and all, school projects and whatnot keep getting in the way orz
Okay then! more mods~ and maybe a BAT is already necessary here lol
Rukaru
marked on my to-do list. :)
Rukaru
hi there~

[General]fine

[Easy]
  1. 00:51:329 (2) - add finish on the slider end. for consistency with 00:35:392 (1,3)
  2. 00:54:142 (1) - finish on slider head? vokalnya terasa agak keras disini.
  3. 01:09:142 (1) - ^

[Normal]
  1. 00:56:954 (4) - coba ubah jadi 1/2 slider + circle. sepertinya lebih cocok

[Hard]
  1. 00:07:501 (2,3) - pindah gan. 3 di 00:07:501 , 2 di 00:07:735.
  2. 00:19:220 (2,3) - coba jadikan 1/4 slider. seperti ini
    SPOILER
    [img]puu.sh/4feDj.jpg[/img]
  3. 00:22:267 (1,2,3,4) - seperti ini mungkin?
  4. 00:23:907 - tambahkan circle disini?
  5. 00:34:454 (1) - why NC?
  6. 01:18:517 (4,5,6,7) - seperti ini?

[Despair]
  1. 00:11:837 - tambahkan circle.
  2. 00:18:752 (1) - hmm...remove ini trus buat stream sampai 00:19:102.
  3. 00:42:774 - tambahkan circle?
  4. 01:04:220 (4) - ubah jadi seperti ini?
  5. 01:18:048 (6) - seperti ini?
    hmm....ini di kiai time nya kok lebih gampang dari sebelum kiai?

[]
wah...maaf ya, cuma itu saja yang bisa saya bantu.
semoga mod saya bermanfaat untuk anda. :)

btw, bueeh....btw. lol @dadongBLELENG
map ini bagus, cuma di [Despair] ada masalah sedikit yaitu di kiai time nya. relatif lebih gampang daripada bagian bukan kiai time. tolong di review lagi ya~

good luck!
pieguyn
hi ~

[General]
offset -233 to avoid notes behind red line ...233 wow
timing seems really early, offset +10 at least IMO

[Easy]
00:06:329 (2) - missing whistle on end 0.0
00:30:235 (2) - x:384 y:356 better blanket & spacing
00:31:642 (1) - http://puu.sh/4gdyL.jpg better blanket

[Normal]
00:27:892 (5,1) - swap NCs for downbeat
01:11:954 (4,1,2,3) - I suggest to rework this pattern cause spacing is off 01:11:954 (4,1) - 01:13:829 (2,3) - . IMO keep similar shape but make blanket would be good ~

[Hard]
00:07:501 (2) - touches HP bar
00:27:188 (3) - 1 grid right for better blanket imo, don't forget to fix spacing
00:28:829 (2,3) - imo, remove whistle on (2) and add on end of (3) seems better
00:32:813 (3,4) - swap whistles seems make more sense, more consistent too

[Despair]
really not sure I get claps in kiai. IMO just put clap on 2nd and 4th beat would work better, ofc it's up to you
00:14:767 (1) - why not continue finishes here 0.0
00:16:642 (1) - ^
00:24:611 (3,4) - swap clap? can't find another instance like this in this part
00:33:517 (2) - http://puu.sh/4gfsY.jpg better blanket?
128,324,33517,2,0,P|132:244|196:204,1,149.999990463257,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:37:970 (6) - add clap like in hard
00:41:720 (6) - same as 00:37:970 (6) -
00:52:267 (5) - clap on end
00:56:251 (6,1) - swap claps seems more consistent?
01:01:642 (6,1) - swap NCs for downbeat
01:07:267 (6) - clap on end

seems pretty good map tho I don't get these claps > <
hope it helps ~ good luck :D
yurunneram
Whee~ thx for your mod :3

EASY

00:55:548 (3) - Not completely Vertically symmetrical with 1. Shift 3 to x364 y116

NORMAL

00:41:017 (3) - Head snapped inaccurately

01:12:892 (1) - ^

01:14:767 (3) - ^

HARD

00:23:438 (4) - End at 00:23:790 for the sake of accuracy? :o since it's slider end it shouldn't be a problem

00:34:454 (1) - Why NC?

00:46:173 (4) - Add clap

00:47:579 (1) - Umm... snapping's a bit weird...

Love the singer's voice ^^ Sry for late mod didn't have time yesterday

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
Topic Starter
AnreFM
rerererereplies

kak adi

raheta_adi wrote:

hi there~

[General]fine

[Easy]
  1. 00:51:329 (2) - add finish on the slider end. for consistency with 00:35:392 (1,3)sure
  2. 00:54:142 (1) - finish on slider head? vokalnya terasa agak keras disini.oke
  3. 01:09:142 (1) - ^^

[Normal]
  1. 00:56:954 (4) - coba ubah jadi 1/2 slider + circle. sepertinya lebih cocok
ok

[Hard]
  1. 00:07:501 (2,3) - pindah gan. 3 di 00:07:501 , 2 di 00:07:735.oiya, gak sadar :o
  2. 00:19:220 (2,3) - coba jadikan 1/4 slider. seperti ini
    SPOILER
    [img]puu.sh/4feDj.jpg[/img]
    no, keeping rhythm
  3. 00:22:267 (1,2,3,4) - seperti ini mungkin?
  4. 00:23:907 - tambahkan circle disini?noo ^
  5. 00:34:454 (1) - why NC?SV changee
  6. 01:18:517 (4,5,6,7) - seperti ini?

[Despair]
  1. 00:11:837 - tambahkan circle.
  2. 00:18:752 (1) - hmm...remove ini trus buat stream sampai 00:19:102.gak, gak prlu stream :o
  3. 00:42:774 - tambahkan circle?gak ,rhythm consistency
  4. 01:04:220 (4) - ubah jadi seperti ini?
  5. 01:18:048 (6) - seperti ini?
    hmm....ini di kiai time nya kok lebih gampang dari sebelum kiai?

[]
wah...maaf ya, cuma itu saja yang bisa saya bantu.
semoga mod saya bermanfaat untuk anda. :)

btw, bueeh....btw. lol @dadongBLELENG
map ini bagus, cuma di [Despair] ada masalah sedikit yaitu di kiai time nya. relatif lebih gampang daripada bagian bukan kiai time. tolong di review lagi ya~

good luck!makasi kak, all suggestion are to be considered :D :D

pppieguy~

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi ~

[General]
offset -233 to avoid notes behind red line ...233 wow
timing seems really early, offset +10 at least IMO

[Easy]
00:06:329 (2) - missing whistle on end 0.0
00:30:235 (2) - x:384 y:356 better blanket & spacing
00:31:642 (1) - http://puu.sh/4gdyL.jpg better blanket

[Normal]
00:27:892 (5,1) - swap NCs for downbeat
01:11:954 (4,1,2,3) - I suggest to rework this pattern cause spacing is off 01:11:954 (4,1) - 01:13:829 (2,3) - . IMO keep similar shape but make blanket would be good ~ yah, have a little rework here, thanks :D

[Hard]
00:07:501 (2) - touches HP bar
00:27:188 (3) - 1 grid right for better blanket imo, don't forget to fix spacing
00:28:829 (2,3) - imo, remove whistle on (2) and add on end of (3) seems better
00:32:813 (3,4) - swap whistles seems make more sense, more consistent too

[Despair]
really not sure I get claps in kiai. IMO just put clap on 2nd and 4th beat would work better, ofc it's up to you
00:14:767 (1) - why not continue finishes here 0.0
00:16:642 (1) - ^
00:24:611 (3,4) - swap clap? can't find another instance like this in this part
00:33:517 (2) - http://puu.sh/4gfsY.jpg better blanket?
128,324,33517,2,0,P|132:244|196:204,1,149.999990463257,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:37:970 (6) - add clap like in hard
00:41:720 (6) - same as 00:37:970 (6) -
00:52:267 (5) - clap on end
00:56:251 (6,1) - swap claps seems more consistent?
01:01:642 (6,1) - swap NCs for downbeat
01:07:267 (6) - clap on end

seems pretty good map tho I don't get these claps > <
hope it helps ~ good luck :DAll fixed, thanks again pieguy :D

yurunneram

yurunneram wrote:

Whee~ thx for your mod :3

EASY

00:55:548 (3) - Not completely Vertically symmetrical with 1. Shift 3 to x364 y116

NORMAL

00:41:017 (3) - Head snapped inaccurately

01:12:892 (1) - ^

01:14:767 (3) - ^

HARD

00:23:438 (4) - End at 00:23:790 for the sake of accuracy? :o since it's slider end it shouldn't be a problem

00:34:454 (1) - Why NC?

00:46:173 (4) - Add clap

00:47:579 (1) - Umm... snapping's a bit weird...

Love the singer's voice ^^ Sry for late mod didn't have time yesterdayit's okay lol

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~all fixee, thanks for star!! :D

thanks again everyone!! :) :)
MMzz
[Despair]
00:11:027 (3) - The combo should start here. It makes more sense with the vocal line and downbeat of the song.
00:23:918 (7) - Spacing between this note and the next is off.
00:24:152 (1) - (Head) This beat feels empty without a hitsound, consider adding a normal hit maybe?
00:34:464 (1) - The jump to this note is very sudden and unpredictable from the 1/4 notes, it would be best to reverse this, or make the 1/4 notes a 1/4 slider so it is easier to understand the placement.

[Hard]
How come in this difficulty the combos in the kiai are short (every other measure) unlike the insane where the combos are long (every 4 measures) You should aim for some consistency in the combos.

Other diffs are fine. Nice mapset, very polished.

You should try and get this bubbled, it doesn't need to be modded more.
Topic Starter
AnreFM

MMzz wrote:

[Despair]
00:11:027 (3) - The combo should start here. It makes more sense with the vocal line and downbeat of the song.yeah
00:23:918 (7) - Spacing between this note and the next is off.oops changed to 1.2 to consistent
00:24:152 (1) - (Head) This beat feels empty without a hitsound, consider adding a normal hit maybe?ok
00:34:464 (1) - The jump to this note is very sudden and unpredictable from the 1/4 notes, it would be best to reverse this, or make the 1/4 notes a 1/4 slider so it is easier to understand the placement.yeah o.o reversed it

[Hard]
How come in this difficulty the combos in the kiai are short (every other measure) unlike the insane where the combos are long (every 4 measures) You should aim for some consistency in the combos.yeah i want to avoid long combos hence making it like that, change a few though><

Other diffs are fine. Nice mapset, very polished.thanks :)

You should try and get this bubbled, it doesn't need to be modded more.yeah hope it is enough>.<
Thanks for the mod :)
RandF
From my queue~

Your map is almost good!
My suggetion is a few ;)
[Easy]
  1. 00:37:277 (3) - remove finish
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:777 (3) - one more reverse?
[Despair]
  1. 00:21:105 (3,4,5) - it is better to place straight
give you star ~☆

~Good Luck~
NoHitter
[Normal]
- 00:11:730 (5) - I don't recommend adding a 1/2 slider with more than one repeat like that considering this diff is more of an easier Normal. Maybe do this instead?
- 00:47:120 () - Add a note here? There's a rhythm here (not the lyrics though) and Easy has a hitobject at this part.

[Hard]
- 00:06:105 (2,3) - The stack here kind of kills the flow. Space it out normally?
- 00:34:464 (1) - The NC here is unneeded IMO. The slow-down isn't that sudden and you have ticks to read them.
- 01:01:886 (1) - If you want to add a spinner here, start at 01:02:120 to complement the length of the "ver" in "Ne-ver". Add a note here instead.
- Regarding your hitsounding in the kiai times, I find that the claps in the red ticks aren't that well sounding. For every measure, starting from the downbeat (long white line): Remove the claps on the second and third red ticks, and add a clap on the second and fourth white ticks. You can keep the other clap on the last red tick. The hitsounds would sound better! (Alternatively just add a clap on all red ticks. It doesn't sound as good as the other I suggested, but it sound make it sound better)

[Despair]
- The flow of the triples doesn't seem to be that good. Let's see what we can improve on.
- Same comment on the hitsounding in Hard.
- 00:05:402 (1,2) - The curved slider followed by a straight slider looks very unaesthetic IMO. I suggest something like a mirrored slider instead: http://puu.sh/4iM5q.jpg
- 00:07:512 (2,3,4) - For triples leading into sliders like this, it flows much better if the notes will lead into the direction of the slider: http://puu.sh/4iM8g.jpg
- 00:09:855 (4) - Here, I recommend mirroring the slider at 00:09:152 (1) then blanketing it with 00:10:559 (6) better. Better aesthetics overall: http://puu.sh/4iMaC.jpg
- 00:11:378 (3) - Maybe follow the vocals here instead? http://puu.sh/4iMbO.jpg
- 00:19:582 (3,4) - Continue with the direction of the slider here for better flow: http://puu.sh/4iMcS.jpg
- 00:20:637 (1,2,3) - Can I suggest this pattern? Looks better aesthetically IMO: http://puu.sh/4iMeD.jpg
- 00:21:457 (4) - Make this straight for better flow: http://puu.sh/4iLYc.jpg
- 00:28:137 (1,2,3) - Note: sliders and notes like this (unlike 00:19:582 (3,4)) are fine because the notes completely blanket the hitobject before them.
- 00:34:464 (1) - Same as Hard
- 00:48:761 (2,3,4) - Similar to 00:19:582 (3,4) .
- 00:49:698 (6,7,8) - Same as above.
- 00:56:730 (1,2,3) - Blanket these more properly.
- 01:18:995 (1) - New combo here?
- 01:17:355 (2,3,5,6,2,3,4) - These sliders would play better as stacked notes IMO.

That's all.
Neiji Razuiya
hi form my queue~

i only mod 1 diff cause look like hard to mod and first time mod the high priority .__.
i only can mod short.maybe bad :o
so i give you star~

[Despair]

00:37:980 (6) - remove NC o.o
UnderminE
Let's see, map is already good.

[Easy]
00:41:027 - normal whistle as slider slide
00:49:464 (2) - whistle
00:54:152 - normal whistle as slider slide
01:09:152 - normal whistle as slider slide

[Normal]
AR: 5 because map totally feels the same as Easy diff
OD: 4
HP: 4

00:10:089 - whistle
00:11:964 - whistle
00:17:589 - whistle
00:32:589 - whistle
00:41:027 - normal whistle as slider slide
00:49:464 - whistle
00:54:152 - normal whistle
00:57:198 - whistle
00:58:839 - whistle
01:00:714 - whistle
01:04:464 - whistle
01:06:339 - whistle
01:09:152 - normal whistle

[Hard]
Almost same hitsound suggestions in Normal

[insane]
Same hitsound suggestions in Normal, plus:
01:17:355 - whistle
01:17:823 - whistle
01:18:292 - whistle
01:18:761 - whistle
01:19:230 - whistle
01:19:698 - whistle
01:18:292 (1) - NC
01:19:230 - NC

Sorry for shitty mod, map is good already good luck <3
Topic Starter
AnreFM

NoHitter wrote:

[Normal]
- 00:11:730 (5) - I don't recommend adding a 1/2 slider with more than one repeat like that considering this diff is more of an easier Normal. Maybe do this instead?yeah i was too focused on following the lyric and screwed this part orz
- 00:47:120 () - Add a note here? There's a rhythm here (not the lyrics though) and Easy has a hitobject at this part.lol yeah i don't know why i forget this part since all other diffs has them

[Hard]
- 00:06:105 (2,3) - The stack here kind of kills the flow. Space it out normally?okay, i just realized that it is weird to start the song o.o
- 00:34:464 (1) - The NC here is unneeded IMO. The slow-down isn't that sudden and you have ticks to read them.okay then
- 01:01:886 (1) - If you want to add a spinner here, start at 01:02:120 to complement the length of the "ver" in "Ne-ver". Add a note here instead.okay, feels better now
- Regarding your hitsounding in the kiai times, I find that the claps in the red ticks aren't that well sounding. For every measure, starting from the downbeat (long white line): Remove the claps on the second and third red ticks, and add a clap on the second and fourth white ticks. You can keep the other clap on the last red tick. The hitsounds would sound better! (Alternatively just add a clap on all red ticks. It doesn't sound as good as the other I suggested, but it sound make it sound better)i was thinking that for this song, it was better to use second and fourth red tick. appaeently not ;.; changed all, really big thanks for this~ :)

[Despair]
- The flow of the triples doesn't seem to be that good. Let's see what we can improve on.
- Same comment on the hitsounding in Hard.
- 00:05:402 (1,2) - The curved slider followed by a straight slider looks very unaesthetic IMO. I suggest something like a mirrored slider instead: http://puu.sh/4iM5q.jpgokay. i was trying something different here but i guess it is not good then orz
- 00:07:512 (2,3,4) - For triples leading into sliders like this, it flows much better if the notes will lead into the direction of the slider: http://puu.sh/4iM8g.jpg i was thinking to blanket 00:07:277 (1) - with the circles since it looked better, but i guess this follow the rhythm better then
- 00:09:855 (4) - Here, I recommend mirroring the slider at 00:09:152 (1) then blanketing it with 00:10:559 (6) better. Better aesthetics overall: http://puu.sh/4iMaC.jpgoh okay, i wonder why did i curve that since it doesn't blanket anything xo
- 00:11:378 (3) - Maybe follow the vocals here instead? http://puu.sh/4iMbO.jpgokay, plays better now
- 00:19:582 (3,4) - Continue with the direction of the slider here for better flow: http://puu.sh/4iMcS.jpgokay, was trying to blanket though orz
- 00:20:637 (1,2,3) - Can I suggest this pattern? Looks better aesthetically IMO: http://puu.sh/4iMeD.jpgyeah
- 00:21:457 (4) - Make this straight for better flow: http://puu.sh/4iLYc.jpglol okay, seems like blanketing with circles is not a good idea then orz
- 00:28:137 (1,2,3) - Note: sliders and notes like this (unlike 00:19:582 (3,4)) are fine because the notes completely blanket the hitobject before them. oh i see, then it is okay if it completely blanket the object before them without too much tweak then :D
- 00:34:464 (1) - Same as Hard
- 00:48:761 (2,3,4) - Similar to 00:19:582 (3,4) .
- 00:49:698 (6,7,8) - Same as above.lol fixed
- 00:56:730 (1,2,3) - Blanket these more properly.done
- 01:18:995 (1) - New combo here?yeah, i didn't even see the combo is getting that long o.o
- 01:17:355 (2,3,5,6,2,3,4) - These sliders would play better as stacked notes IMO.umm doesn't really get what do you mean here, but i changed this part to a stack pattern :o

That's all.
thank you very much NoHitter!! :D :D

omg thank you NoHitter for responding to my call :)
Also thank you RandomEffect and Neiji Razuiya for mod and star :D
NoHitter

AnreFM wrote:

omg thank you NoHitter for responding to my call :)
What can I say xD. You have great writing skills.

Bubbled!
Topic Starter
AnreFM
aaaaaa~ thank you very much NoHitter!! <3 ovob

soo, currently trying to get better video encoder;.;
and maybe another bg since this one is too mainstream ouo

and btw undermine, thank you very much for your mod!!(realized it late orz)
applied a few on verse because i think adding more on kiai feels too much :o
lol it's not shitty at all, thanks!! :D
Alarido
Thanks NoHitter (:


Congratz Anreeee~

(Just a bit more, just a bit more ♥ :)
Neiji Razuiya
get ranked dude~
Mesme
oh plz ranked it!!!
ampzz
Ugh... sorry for being late since my main PC as well as the internet acted up on me so I a few issues to deal with; if you still want this HQ video you can find it here.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/wnp79jfbw8s8y ... %20vid.avi

Code required:
Video,30,"Danganronpa OP vid.avi"

Specifications


  1. Dimensions: 800 x 448 (width x height)
  2. File extension: AVI
  3. CRF used: 23
  4. File size: 17.9MB
  5. Frame rate: 24 FPS
  6. Bit rate: 1700+ kbps
Sample screens:

The raw source file I was using (the best I could find) didn't really like me as much as I wanted it to.
Even including this 'large' file size for the video the entire .osz compresses to under the required limitation of 24MB.
Topic Starter
AnreFM
Update :
Change Video and BG, please redownload owo/
NoHitter
Rebubble
MMzz
Since I'm back in the BAT I will rank this.

RANKED!
Alarido
RAAAANKEEEEOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUU ^.^

CONGRATZ ANREEEE~

very blessing ;3 Thanks to MMzz and NoHitter toooo ^^
Cloudchaser
I thought it was a JB's song lol... also congratulations :3
Natsu
congratz fun map i cant spin orz x_x
Bunny
congrats!! been waiting for this song to get ranked ^_^
Topic Starter
AnreFM
i was thinking of looking for another BAT when i suddenly saw this..

Thank you very much for the Rank MMzz, I take it this is your first rank after becoming a BAT again OvO
and also thank you everyone who helped; NoHitter for the bubble and rebubble, and ampzz for the HQ video, and MMzz for the rank too, and of course every modder who i can't mention(It's in the credit though lol)^^

Well, this is my first ranked map, and without guest diff. too, I can't be happier OuO
Thank you everyone for your support!! I won't make it to this point without you all! :')



Thanks again everyone!! :D
Rukaru
oh yeah~ grats for rank! :D
Kinomi
gratz
happy623
gratz for 1st rank!! 8-)
ampzz
For your first beatmap this is a really nice set; congratulations on the rank Anre! d-(^.^)o.
Flask
Personally think that the source should be Danganronpa: Kibou no Gakuen to Zetsubou no Koukousei The Animation (Because the full name of this anime is ダンガンロンパ 希望の学園と絶望の高校生), or at least they should be in tags.

Well, I know this beatmap for a long time, and it's kinda cool and clean for your first beatmap. Congratulations o3o~
jyu
congratz!!
YTYuyu
oh wow i never thought a Dangan Ronpa song would get ranked o.o

congratz on your 1st rank ;)
Topic Starter
AnreFM
Thank you everyone OwO/

I'm glad that you took your time to congratulate me here, I hope my map is worth all your time :oops:
Nokeru
I want to say congrats too, because I love DR, I love the song... And I would like to play it if my laptop weren't broken T_T
But grats <33~
Neiji Razuiya
congrat to you :)
yurunneram
great job ^^ gratz~
[Aoi Sena]
proo XD beatmap :D
Leomessii_old
damn :(
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