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Topic Starter
DarkKanaki
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 15 January 2015 at 16:22:00

Artist: NICO Touches the Walls
Title: Niwaka Ame Nimo Makezu (TV Size)
Source: Naruto Shippuden
Tags: Opening 13
BPM: 186
Filesize: 9416kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.59 stars, 196 notes)
  2. Insane (3.41 stars, 245 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2.05 stars, 261 notes)
  4. Normal (1.88 stars, 101 notes)
  5. Oni (3.42 stars, 457 notes)
Download: NICO Touches the Walls - Niwaka Ame Nimo Makezu (TV Size)
Download: NICO Touches the Walls - Niwaka Ame Nimo Makezu (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Naruto Shippuden opening #13 music and video!
Hope you enjoy this beatmap!
ricki122
Finally someone who did a great job with this awesome Naruto Opening! I just loved it! Hope it will be ranked soon!
I think this is the best version so far on osu!
Topic Starter
DarkKanaki

ricki122 wrote:

Finally someone who did a great job with this awesome Naruto Opening! I just loved it! Hope it will be ranked soon!
I think this is the best version so far on osu!
WOW! Thanks man, means a lot since this is my second beatmap! :D
Hopefully this gets ranked and enjoy the song! ^^
molander
This is pretty good ;P
Mizukashii
PLease Let this in the Approve
Topic Starter
DarkKanaki
Thanks to all the people who have gave my song a fav. Also thanks to all you people for saying nice things about my song! ^^
This is my second song and it's great to hear all these things!
Again, thanks for all the support! :)
neji2400
This song really deserves to be ranked bro, nice job.
Nukedboom
I like this song so I'll hand you some modding and advice :)

[General]
  1. You have to have at least 2 taiko difficulties in a map with a taiko difficulty, an easy one and a hard one.
  2. Set a preview point (preferably at the start of the chorus) in all difficulties.
  3. A lot of your map is badly or weirdly spaced, hold alt and turn your distance spacing to 1.0 and move you objects around. You can see which ones are badly spaced and other errors with aimod (http://puu.sh/6NWNy.jpg). I suggest fixing those.
  4. Try to use more interesting patterns and mapping techniques to make your map more fun and flow better, I think there's a list of them on the forums or wiki somewhere.

[Normal]
  1. 00:35:614 (3) - Sounds odd, try placing it here:
  2. 01:06:580 (4) - Isn't snapped.
    00:28:194 - Feels empty here, add a note.
[Hard]
  1. 00:55:129 (3) - End isn't snapped.
[Insane]

  • 00:30:936 - Add a note here.
Sorry the mods for individual difficulties weren't that big because if I covered the spacing they would have been huge.
I like your map, but it needs some work to get ranked. You should go hunting for some more mods too to get this ranked. Hope I helped and good luck! :D
Topic Starter
DarkKanaki

Nukedboom wrote:

I like this song so I'll hand you some modding and advice :)

[General]
  1. You have to have at least 2 taiko difficulties in a map with a taiko difficulty, an easy one and a hard one.
  2. Set a preview point (preferably at the start of the chorus) in all difficulties.
  3. A lot of your map is badly or weirdly spaced, hold alt and turn your distance spacing to 1.0 and move you objects around. You can see which ones are badly spaced and other errors with aimod (http://puu.sh/6NWNy.jpg). I suggest fixing those.
  4. Try to use more interesting patterns and mapping techniques to make your map more fun and flow better, I think there's a list of them on the forums or wiki somewhere.

[Normal]
  1. 00:35:614 (3) - Sounds odd, try placing it here:
  2. 01:06:580 (4) - Isn't snapped.
    00:28:194 - Feels empty here, add a note.
[Hard]
  1. 00:55:129 (3) - End isn't snapped.
[Insane]

  • 00:30:936 - Add a note here.
Sorry the mods for individual difficulties weren't that big because if I covered the spacing they would have been huge.
I like your map, but it needs some work to get ranked. You should go hunting for some more mods too to get this ranked. Hope I helped and good luck! :D
Thanks for the help and advice. Made all of the changes you said, but a few things still come up on the AiMod thing. I'm new to this, so I never knew that existed. I'm still new to beat mapping so it's all coming to me pretty slowly. Again, thanks for the help.
KantoKun
sorry for not ask you before ;w;...

i use your mp3 to mapping my map haha
NICO Touches The Walls - Niwaka Ame Nimo Makezu (TV size)

if you don't want submit me to use your mp3 , pm pls
Topic Starter
DarkKanaki

KantoKun wrote:

sorry for not ask you before ;w;...

i use your mp3 to mapping my map haha
NICO Touches The Walls - Niwaka Ame Nimo Makezu (TV size)

if you don't want submit me to use your mp3 , pm pls
No, it's completely fine, it's only an MP3! You could get that anywhere! XD
Go ahead and submit, I don't mind.
Gizoki Umizu
WOW this map should really be ranked the timing is awesome! Please add the video http://www.mediafire.com/download/uvhbu ... o+OP13.avi I took out the Audio , and made it 7mb . If you don't mind I edited this map and put the video and it looks epic~
Topic Starter
DarkKanaki

Gizoki Umizu wrote:

WOW this map should really be ranked the timing is awesome! Please add the video http://www.mediafire.com/download/uvhbu ... o+OP13.avi I took out the Audio , and made it 7mb . If you don't mind I edited this map and put the video and it looks epic~
Thanks! I don't really know how to make the video any smaller... Thanks for that though, I updated it. I hope it gets ranked... Anyways, thanks again for the video! :D
Nukedboom

DarkKanaki wrote:

Gizoki Umizu wrote:

WOW this map should really be ranked the timing is awesome! Please add the video http://www.mediafire.com/download/uvhbu ... o+OP13.avi I took out the Audio , and made it 7mb . If you don't mind I edited this map and put the video and it looks epic~
Thanks! I don't really know how to make the video any smaller... Thanks for that though, I updated it. I hope it gets ranked... Anyways, thanks again for the video! :D
Heya once again, I keep a pretty close eye on this map hehe. Anyways, try reading through this: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/How_to_Get_Your_Map_Ranked
I think you might find it helpful! :D
Topic Starter
DarkKanaki

Nukedboom wrote:

Heya once again, I keep a pretty close eye on this map hehe. Anyways, try reading through this: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/How_to_Get_Your_Map_Ranked
I think you might find it helpful! :D
Thanks for the link. I kind of know about this already though, but thanks for giving me a more clear understanding.
P o M u T a
#modreqs!

[General]
not need tag 'Naruto Shippuden' because already put sourse.
^ 'NICO Touches the Walls Niwaka Ame Nimo Makezu TV size' not need. so, already put artist and title name.

[Normal]
00:14:485 (2) - try this rhythm? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1437130
00:30:291 (4) - add finish slider end. symbals part.
00:31:743 (2) - ^ same reason.
00:34:485 (1) - add finish slider head.
00:41:904 x) - add circle. follow vocal.
00:42:227 (2) - add finish.
01:18:840 (2) - 3grid down. overlaps here.
01:20:130 (1) - add finish slider end.
01:24:162 (2) - 7 or 8 grid up. overlasp here again.

[Hard]
00:00:936 (3) - add finish.
00:06:098 (4) - add finish.
00:08:678 (1) - add finish slider head.
00:09:807 (3) - overlaps here. seems bad.
00:20:291 - this is hard diff. so, this empty part really lazy imo. try mapping.
01:02:872 (4) - add finish.
01:26:582 (1,1) - remove NC both.
01:28:033 (1,1) - ^

[Insane]
HP+1. bit low.
00:08:678 (5,7) - add finish slider head.
00:25:130 (5) - perfect stack (3) better imo.
00:31:743 (2) - ctrl+G?

good luck!
Topic Starter
DarkKanaki

P o M u T a wrote:

#modreqs!

[General]
not need tag 'Naruto Shippuden' because already put sourse.
^ 'NICO Touches the Walls Niwaka Ame Nimo Makezu TV size' not need. so, already put artist and title name.

[Normal]
00:14:485 (2) - try this rhythm? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1437130
00:30:291 (4) - add finish slider end. symbals part.
00:31:743 (2) - ^ same reason.
00:34:485 (1) - add finish slider head.
00:41:904 x) - add circle. follow vocal.
00:42:227 (2) - add finish.
01:18:840 (2) - 3grid down. overlaps here.
01:20:130 (1) - add finish slider end.
01:24:162 (2) - 7 or 8 grid up. overlasp here again.

[Hard]
00:00:936 (3) - add finish.
00:06:098 (4) - add finish.
00:08:678 (1) - add finish slider head.
00:09:807 (3) - overlaps here. seems bad.
00:20:291 - this is hard diff. so, this empty part really lazy imo. try mapping.
01:02:872 (4) - add finish.
01:26:582 (1,1) - remove NC both.
01:28:033 (1,1) - ^

[Insane]
HP+1. bit low.
00:08:678 (5,7) - add finish slider head.
00:25:130 (5) - perfect stack (3) better imo.
00:31:743 (2) - ctrl+G?

good luck!
Changes made, thank you for the mod! Kudosu given.
Ujimatsu Chiya
Random #Modreqs



[General]
  1. Map need Easy diff (1~3stars diff)
  2. Taiko's diff name change, please / Easy > Muzukashii , Hard > Oni
  3. song's tittle change ' ~Tv Size~ ' > (TV Size)
[Normal]
  1. HP4 , CS3, AR5 , OD4 << change
  2. The empty space in front too long. I think that you can put enough.
  3. cheak he position of the object and DS
  4. 00:11:582 (2) - end time > 00:12:227
  5. 00:14:969 (3,1) - The empty space between the long
  6. 00:17:388 - Add circle
  7. 00:19:646 (2,3) - change silder
  8. 00:24:807 (2,3) - ^
  9. 00:32:872 - Add circle or short silder
  10. 00:39:323 (6) - delet it and start spinner this
  11. 00:42:227 (3,4,5,6) - Can be enough to put the slider.
  12. 00:47:065 - add circle or start this part.
  13. 00:47:388 (1,2,3,4) - Can be enough to put the slider.
  14. 00:51:904 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about this? http://puu.sh/8Ic1X.jpg
  15. 00:54:807 - start this
  16. 00:55:775 (2,3) - change slider
  17. 00:57:711 (1,2,3) - how about this? http://puu.sh/8IciS.jpg
  18. 01:02:711 (4) - change spinner
  19. 01:05:453 (2,3,4,5) - change one silder 2 circle or 2 silder
  20. 01:10:291 (1,2) - Difficulty without being awkward.
  21. 01:15:936 (3,1) - The space between long. Seems to be able to put enough object.
[Hard]
  1. HP5 , CS4 , AR6~7 , OD 5~6
  2. cheak he position of the object and DS
  3. I feel a lot of hard circles.
[Insane]
  1. HP6~7 , CS4 , AR 8~9 , OD 6~8
  2. cheak he position of the object and DS


GL :)
Topic Starter
DarkKanaki

K i b i y a - wrote:

Random #Modreqs



[General]
  1. Map need Easy diff (1~3stars diff)
  2. Taiko's diff name change, please / Easy > Muzukashii , Hard > Oni
  3. song's tittle change ' ~Tv Size~ ' > (TV Size)
[Normal]
  1. HP4 , CS3, AR5 , OD4 << change
  2. The empty space in front too long. I think that you can put enough.
  3. cheak he position of the object and DS
  4. 00:11:582 (2) - end time > 00:12:227
  5. 00:14:969 (3,1) - The empty space between the long
  6. 00:17:388 - Add circle
  7. 00:19:646 (2,3) - change silder
  8. 00:24:807 (2,3) - ^
  9. 00:32:872 - Add circle or short silder
  10. 00:39:323 (6) - delet it and start spinner this
  11. 00:42:227 (3,4,5,6) - Can be enough to put the slider.
  12. 00:47:065 - add circle or start this part.
  13. 00:47:388 (1,2,3,4) - Can be enough to put the slider.
  14. 00:51:904 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about this? http://puu.sh/8Ic1X.jpg
  15. 00:54:807 - start this
  16. 00:55:775 (2,3) - change slider
  17. 00:57:711 (1,2,3) - how about this? http://puu.sh/8IciS.jpg
  18. 01:02:711 (4) - change spinner
  19. 01:05:453 (2,3,4,5) - change one silder 2 circle or 2 silder
  20. 01:10:291 (1,2) - Difficulty without being awkward.
  21. 01:15:936 (3,1) - The space between long. Seems to be able to put enough object.
[Hard]
  1. HP5 , CS4 , AR6~7 , OD 5~6
  2. cheak he position of the object and DS
  3. I feel a lot of hard circles.
[Insane]
  1. HP6~7 , CS4 , AR 8~9 , OD 6~8
  2. cheak he position of the object and DS


GL :)
"1~3stars" I can't seem to get it any more down! O.O
Everything else I've done! The DS in hard and insane is kind of intentional though, but i'll change it if more modders want me to.
Thanks for your mod! ^^
Kudosu given.
ChicagoTed
wow rip gr8 map
[ Nyx ]
Subtle Mod for you good sir. ^_^

Note: The things I put down are only suggestions. You may pick and choose whatever you want to change or change nothing at all.

[Insane]

IMO this insane doesn't feel insane enough. My reasoning behind this is because there are a lot of empty spaces. Spaces that could be filled with lovely notes XD Also the note placement can be improved in some places (you'll see where when you read down) Don't be afraid to spread out the notes a little bit.

00:15:130 to 00:16:098 - add some notes in here, it feels really empty. You could put notes that match the guitar for example.
00:26:098 (8,9,10,11,12) - These 5 notes can be placed better. Spread out this stair case pattern.
00:27:065 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above, fix the spacing so it flows better to note 6
01:18:356 (4) - Change this to a slider
01:18:678 - Place a note here

Other than those things above, the only other problems are those empty spaces. The notes that have 2 or more ticks in between them, you could add a connecting note in the middle or change it to a slider. Here's an example just in case you don't get it.

Just like the second last 2 things i said up there^

01:19:646 (4) - Change that to a slider
01:19:969 - place a note here

Or this

00:20:453 - place a note here
00:20:130 (7) - or change this to a slider that ends here 00:20:453

Whichever works best for, if you decide to change it.

Anyways that's the only difficulty I can really mod right now. I wish you the best of luck in getting your map ranked :D
Topic Starter
DarkKanaki

Z3R0Xx wrote:

Subtle Mod for you good sir. ^_^

Note: The things I put down are only suggestions. You may pick and choose whatever you want to change or change nothing at all.

[Insane]

IMO this insane doesn't feel insane enough. My reasoning behind this is because there are a lot of empty spaces. Spaces that could be filled with lovely notes XD Also the note placement can be improved in some places (you'll see where when you read down) Don't be afraid to spread out the notes a little bit.

00:15:130 to 00:16:098 - add some notes in here, it feels really empty. You could put notes that match the guitar for example.
00:26:098 (8,9,10,11,12) - These 5 notes can be placed better. Spread out this stair case pattern.
00:27:065 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above, fix the spacing so it flows better to note 6
01:18:356 (4) - Change this to a slider
01:18:678 - Place a note here

Other than those things above, the only other problems are those empty spaces. The notes that have 2 or more ticks in between them, you could add a connecting note in the middle or change it to a slider. Here's an example just in case you don't get it.

Just like the second last 2 things i said up there^

01:19:646 (4) - Change that to a slider
01:19:969 - place a note here

Or this

00:20:453 - place a note here
00:20:130 (7) - or change this to a slider that ends here 00:20:453

Whichever works best for, if you decide to change it.

Anyways that's the only difficulty I can really mod right now. I wish you the best of luck in getting your map ranked :D
All done and thanks for your mod.
I've made some changes and added a few notes.
Kudosu given.
[ OxyDian ]
NORMAL

00:15:211 - why not try to map this part
00:17:549 (3) - slider out of time foul from here 00:17:388 -
try to map all these parts 00:20:291 - 00:25:533 - 00:46:420 - 00:54:162 -
00:22:872 (3) - slider out of time

HARD

00:07:227 - you could add three notes here here
00:15:130 - Map this part
00:39:646 - instead of the spin you could put some nice notes here
01:03:194 - Map this part
01:16:259 - Map this part
01:28:033 - add a spin here and eliminate other notes

INSANE

00:47:549 - you could add a slider like thishttp://puu.sh/9VvAs/3d3d9b092c.jpg

01:20:936 (5) - This could change with the notes

01:27:549 - add spin here

Good map!! ;) is my first mod :)
Topic Starter
DarkKanaki

[ OxyDian ] wrote:

NORMAL - (Add anything to normal and it says it's a hard for some reason! O.O)

00:15:211 - why not try to map this part
00:17:549 (3) - slider out of time foul from here 00:17:388 -
try to map all these parts 00:20:291 - 00:25:533 - 00:46:420 - 00:54:162 -
00:22:872 (3) - slider out of time


HARD

00:07:227 - you could add three notes here here - (Done.)
00:15:130 - Map this part - (Done.)
00:39:646 - instead of the spin you could put some nice notes here - (I think it's quite nice with a spin, I can see your point though.)
01:03:194 - Map this part - (Done.)
01:16:259 - Map this part - (Done.)
01:28:033 - add a spin here and eliminate other notes - (Done.)

INSANE

00:47:549 - you could add a slider like this http://puu.sh/9VvAs/3d3d9b092c.jpg * - (Done.)

01:20:936 (5) - This could change with the notes - (Added more sliders, thanks for pointing it out.)

01:27:549 - add spin here - (Done.)

Good map!! ;) is my first mod :) - (I don't think it's quite as good as my latest map, but thank you!)
Thank you for your mod!
Kudosu given.
Julie
from #modreqs

[Muzukashi]
00:39:646 (113,114,115,116) - do the same for oni, it shouldn't be hard, in fact, it should be easier for matching the song o.o
00:43:517 (123,124,125) and 00:53:840 (157,158,159) and 01:00:291 (179,180,181) - um you might want to change them to ddd or kkk, I see those on new muzukashii but still, is mostly on oni xD

[Oni]
00:03:517 (13) - finish
00:08:678 (37) - ^
00:20:775 (98,99,100,101) - dkdk or kdkd
00:32:227 (160) - remove finish
00:32:872 (162) - ^
00:33:840 (167) - ^
00:34:162 (169) - ^
00:34:807 (172) - ^
00:35:130 (173) - ^
00:35:453 (174) - ^
00:36:098 (178) - ^
00:36:420 (180) - ^
00:36:743 (182) - ^
^ The is way to much finish that doesn't really play well :S
00:32:388 - add a note
00:34:969 - add a note, is losing the beat, you made it match the vocal before, so you should do the same here
00:36:904 (183) - delete
00:41:582 (203) - remove finish, too loud
00:50:130 (248,249,250) - should be 5 note stream here O.O, my suggestion : ddkkd
00:50:453 (250) - ^ if you did above, remove finish
00:51:098 (254,255,256) - should be a 5 note stream
01:04:888 (333) - delete
01:04:807 (332) - ^ if you did above, add finish
01:05:453 (340) - can't add finish on stream >,<
01:09:243 - add a note here
01:26:420 (443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455) - keep thos note the same o.o, don't add triple in it xD

Good luck ^^
Topic Starter
DarkKanaki

Julie wrote:

from #modreqs

[Muzukashi]
00:39:646 (113,114,115,116) - do the same for oni, it shouldn't be hard, in fact, it should be easier for matching the song o.o
00:43:517 (123,124,125) and 00:53:840 (157,158,159) and 01:00:291 (179,180,181) - um you might want to change them to ddd or kkk, I see those on new muzukashii but still, is mostly on oni xD

[Oni]
00:03:517 (13) - finish
00:08:678 (37) - ^
00:20:775 (98,99,100,101) - dkdk or kdkd
00:32:227 (160) - remove finish
00:32:872 (162) - ^
00:33:840 (167) - ^
00:34:162 (169) - ^
00:34:807 (172) - ^
00:35:130 (173) - ^
00:35:453 (174) - ^
00:36:098 (178) - ^
00:36:420 (180) - ^
00:36:743 (182) - ^
^ The is way to much finish that doesn't really play well :S
00:32:388 - add a note
00:34:969 - add a note, is losing the beat, you made it match the vocal before, so you should do the same here
00:36:904 (183) - delete
00:41:582 (203) - remove finish, too loud
00:50:130 (248,249,250) - should be 5 note stream here O.O, my suggestion : ddkkd
00:50:453 (250) - ^ if you did above, remove finish
00:51:098 (254,255,256) - should be a 5 note stream
01:04:888 (333) - delete
01:04:807 (332) - ^ if you did above, add finish
01:05:453 (340) - can't add finish on stream >,<
01:09:243 - add a note here
01:26:420 (443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455) - keep thos note the same o.o, don't add triple in it xD

Good luck ^^
I've made all changes!
Thank you for modding the Taiko! It really needed help! XD
Kudosu given.
welsan_old
:)
welsan_old

DarkKanaki wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 07 July 2014 at 21:41:32

Artist: NICO Touches the Walls
Title: Niwaka Ame Nimo Makezu (TV Size)
Source: Naruto Shippuden
Tags: Opening 13
BPM: 186
Filesize: 9416kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.59 stars, 196 notes)
  2. Insane (3.41 stars, 245 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2.05 stars, 261 notes)
  4. Normal (1.88 stars, 101 notes)
  5. Oni (3.42 stars, 457 notes)
Download: NICO Touches the Walls - Niwaka Ame Nimo Makezu (TV Size)
Download: NICO Touches the Walls - Niwaka Ame Nimo Makezu (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Naruto Shippuden opening #13 music and video!
Hope you enjoy this beatmap!
welsan_old
:)

molander wrote:

This is pretty good ;P
welsan_old

welsan wrote:

:)

molander wrote:

This is pretty good ;P
welsan_old

welsan wrote:

:)
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