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Liverne - Beloved Tomboyish Girl
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Topic Starter
ok please~lukewarmholiday wrote:
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Mind if I make an altered+extended version of my maps difficulty? :V
SB Finished
I have send files to ignorethis
please waiting for his uploading.
I have send files to ignorethis
please waiting for his uploading.
Yay FC ^^
star this map
star this map
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00:34:18 (3) - not cool, 1/4 forward
01:45:97 (1) - place somewhere else
01:51:22 (9) - new combo
01:59:79 (1,2) - beautify them
03:12:75 (5) - remove
03:24:86 (6,7) - make a long slider
03:27:00 (2) - why jump here?
03:31:72 (7,8) - change to slider - note
03:52:72 (1) - ugly
03:52:72 (1,1) - why jump
03:53:36 (1,2,3,4) - bad readability
04:02:36 (13,1) - why jump
06:19:08 (5) - 1/4 longer
01:45:97 (1) - place somewhere else
01:51:22 (9) - new combo
01:59:79 (1,2) - beautify them
03:12:75 (5) - remove
03:24:86 (6,7) - make a long slider
03:27:00 (2) - why jump here?
03:31:72 (7,8) - change to slider - note
03:52:72 (1) - ugly
03:52:72 (1,1) - why jump
03:53:36 (1,2,3,4) - bad readability
04:02:36 (13,1) - why jump
06:19:08 (5) - 1/4 longer
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Topic Starter
Cyclone wrote:
Song title is Beloved Tomboyish Girl (i don't care what it is in Japanese, we already have a ranked version of this song, let's keep it consistant please)
You might have known that changing names after uploading is very hard, and I don't see why should I use a English name for consistant. So unless another person asks me about the same problem, let's keep this name.
and the source makes no sense whatsoever. What the hell is Cradle? The source is supposed to say what anime/game/etc. the song has come from. If you were going for the album name, that would also be incorrect in this case(you have the correct name in the damn SB anyways)
ok fixed.
cool song.
suggestion only one thing.
06:30:866 (1) - why new combo? when i played, i was confused very much.
maybe new combo is 06:31:295 better.
awesome map.star!
suggestion only one thing.
06:30:866 (1) - why new combo? when i played, i was confused very much.
maybe new combo is 06:31:295 better.
awesome map.star!
cool job
the only thing bugging me is the clap sound
softclap doesn`t fit the song IMO
v2b`s part sounds the best
but it is too evil to ask you guys add many green lines
i think 4 solutions
A:use normalhit to replace soft clap
B:find another clap sound sample
C:get rid of claps use more softwhistles or finishs
D:ignore my post lol
I will do B for you guys
CJ`s part:i think clap is ok maybe lower the volume a bit
Lizbeth`s:plz don`t use claps in this part (too loud) you can also try to reduce the volume of soft-finish
V2b`s: perfect
animask:you oveused claps (even you lower the volume)
IGN`s:i like the part without softclap anyway your pattens sound very good
Happy30`s::pattens are good
Lissette:sounds good
Spacing is just fine
this map is totally playable
Forgve my lazy+nazi
the only thing bugging me is the clap sound
softclap doesn`t fit the song IMO
v2b`s part sounds the best
but it is too evil to ask you guys add many green lines
i think 4 solutions
A:use normalhit to replace soft clap
B:find another clap sound sample
C:get rid of claps use more softwhistles or finishs
D:ignore my post lol
I will do B for you guys
CJ`s part:i think clap is ok maybe lower the volume a bit
Lizbeth`s:plz don`t use claps in this part (too loud) you can also try to reduce the volume of soft-finish
V2b`s: perfect
animask:you oveused claps (even you lower the volume)
IGN`s:i like the part without softclap anyway your pattens sound very good
Happy30`s::pattens are good
Lissette:sounds good
Spacing is just fine
this map is totally playable
Forgve my lazy+nazi
Changing the name of the song is simple. Simply go to the song info, change it, then full upload. That's it.
Is looking good, nice SB 
03:31:72 (7,8) - change to slider - note
not changing this? i think will make more sense
not changing this? i think will make more sense
Topic Starter
I've got bad internet connection and full uploading is of great trouble. That's a good reason.Cyclone wrote:
Changing the name of the song is simple. Simply go to the song info, change it, then full upload. That's it.
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No, that's a really bad reason. By that logic, you should never be uploading anything. Ever. Try again.ignorethis wrote:
I've got bad internet connection and full uploading is of great trouble. That's a good reason.Cyclone wrote:
Changing the name of the song is simple. Simply go to the song info, change it, then full upload. That's it.
Topic Starter
ok cyclone you win i will change the name someday
btw it will be some time before i get my hand on this map again. school began. sorry guys.
btw it will be some time before i get my hand on this map again. school began. sorry guys.
I can't DL this map.
please upload again.
please upload again.
fun 
nice map =w=
Add everyone who mapped a part of the marathon in the tags.
Its important~
Also add lead in time
Its important~
Also add lead in time
nice work with SB Crazy Jay
I already starred, but I want to thank you guys that this didn't turn out insane or unplayabe (which seems to be a problem on several collab maps 
).
Maybe I should not have refused to join...
).Maybe I should not have refused to join...
In simpler terms...add all names of the people who were part of the making of the marathon beatmap.animask wrote:
Add everyone who mapped a part of the marathon in the tags.
Its important~
Also add lead in time
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Ah ! Liverne ~~~ collab map ☆
nice map and good song >v<
I'm really like this map ~
nice map and good song >v<
I'm really like this map ~
awesome map
00:39:033 (9) - i think it sounds better without the whistle on the slider
00:41:015 (3) - clap?
01:05:036 (5) - move to 01:05:015?
03:33:000 (1) - lower volume for this part?
04:30:022 (3) - one tick down
06:19:093 (3) - left one tick
06:21:043 (3) - ^
06:24:000 (3) - right one tick
for source, it wouldn't be Touhou because this isnt the original song from the game.
add touhou to tages instead. and maybe cirno. Dx
this is an awesome map!!!
00:41:015 (3) - clap?
01:05:036 (5) - move to 01:05:015?
03:33:000 (1) - lower volume for this part?
04:30:022 (3) - one tick down
06:19:093 (3) - left one tick
06:21:043 (3) - ^
06:24:000 (3) - right one tick
for source, it wouldn't be Touhou because this isnt the original song from the game.
add touhou to tages instead. and maybe cirno. Dx
this is an awesome map!!!
Hi =D
[Marathon]
01:19:722(5):Unsnapped
03:43:722(2):Unsnapped
Star~
[Marathon]
01:19:722(5):Unsnapped
03:43:722(2):Unsnapped
Star~
poooo
00:37:724 (1,2) - a bit hard to read . 拉出来好一些
01:18:652 (8,9) - too close
set a preview point .
其他没什么。nice
EDIT:bubble No.1
00:37:724 (1,2) - a bit hard to read . 拉出来好一些
01:18:652 (8,9) - too close
set a preview point .
其他没什么。nice
EDIT:bubble No.1
Ummm shouldn't this be moved to Pendling 
Love this song :]
[Overall]
Why there are 3 .osb files on the folder? Delete the 2 wrong .osb and full submit.
[Difficulties]
[Marathon]
00:26:045 (x) - Unuseful break. Remove.
01:26:259 (x) - ^
03:29:581 (1) - Remove new combo.
06:19:723 (1,2,3) - This little stream spacing is a bit weird to look on play mode, adjust it please.
06:21:223 (1,2,3) - ^
06:23:795 (1,2,3) - ^
06:30:652 (4,5,1) - ^
06:34:295 (1,2,3) - ^
Fix and i'll bubble again. Very nice.
EDIT: Much better now. Let's try with this map again. Bubble #1
Why there are 3 .osb files on the folder? Delete the 2 wrong .osb and full submit.
[Difficulties]
[Marathon]
00:26:045 (x) - Unuseful break. Remove.
01:26:259 (x) - ^
03:29:581 (1) - Remove new combo.
06:19:723 (1,2,3) - This little stream spacing is a bit weird to look on play mode, adjust it please.
06:21:223 (1,2,3) - ^
06:23:795 (1,2,3) - ^
06:30:652 (4,5,1) - ^
06:34:295 (1,2,3) - ^
Fix and i'll bubble again. Very nice.
EDIT: Much better now. Let's try with this map again. Bubble #1
Well that was pretty fun to play despite how bad I am with stacks, plus it's my favorite touhou theme, also good job on the storyboard.
Very promising, here's a star.
Very promising, here's a star.
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Yeah. Add this and you can have my bubble as well. (kd Gabi, not me)Gabi wrote:
just a tip so this doesn't get unranked later, the source should be touhou
Rebub.
Just for the sake of appearances, the t in "touhou" should probably be capitalized.
- Why is the BG a black image?
- in the SB sb/th2.jpg should be in the background, not foreground. It's covering the combo fire now
- in the SB sb/th2.jpg should be in the background, not foreground. It's covering the combo fire now
Nah i don't know if this makes sense but, please remove Liverne on the tags since it's already the artist.
Decide/Fix above non-map stuffs then I will approve this.
Topic Starter
updated for tag, source and happy30's advice. (Black BG not fixed sorry)
(*^^)/｡･:*:･ﾟ'★,｡･:*:･ﾟ'☆ Congratulations!!