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Liverne - Beloved Tomboyish Girl

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ignorethis
osu! Alumni
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Topic Starter
ignorethis
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年3月29日 at 12:08:33

Artist: Liverne
Title: Beloved Tomboyish Girl
Source: Touhou
Tags: Cirno Crazy Jay v2b happy30 Lissette Lizbeth animask baka
BPM: 140
Filesize: 10530kb
Play Time: 06:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Marathon (4.74 stars, 1101 notes)
Download: Liverne - Beloved Tomboyish Girl
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Finished. To BAT: If you want to bubble this map please manually move it to pending.

Many thanks to Crazy Jay's awesome SBing!

[note]Thumbnail of this map is wrong.
RemmyX25 Edit:Thumbnail should be fixed, redownload the osz for the correct background and osb fixes.

A full description could be found here.

viewtopic.php?f=53&t=14360&p=147873#p147873

00:00:000 - 00:27:652 Already mapped by myself.
00:27:652 - 01:25:938 Claimed by Crazy Jay, finished
01:25:938 - 02:17:366 Claimed by Lizbeth, finished
02:17:366 - 03:22:509 Claimed by v2b, finished.
03:22:509 - 04:17:366 Claimed by animask, finished
04:17:366 - 05:15:652 Mapped by myself.
05:15:652 - 06:13:938 Claimed by happy30, finished
06:13:938 - 06:55:111 Claimed by Lissette, finished.
Last edited by ignorethis , edited 26 times in total.
Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
finished~
here :)

Download: Kurenainagi Tabibito - Otenba Koi Musume (ignorethis) [Marathon].osu
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Kurenainagi Tabibito - Otenba Koi Musume (ignorethis) [animasks part].osu
Lissette
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Joined July 2008
Lissette
Finished, tell me if you want me to change something.... ^^

Cya!

Download: Kurenainagi Tabibito - Otenba Koi Musume (ignorethis) [Lissette].osu
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
done :)
hope u like it n_n

Download: Kurenainagi Tabibito - Otenba Koi Musume (ignorethis) [Lizbeth].osu
lukewarmholiday
2,148 posts
Joined June 2008
lukewarmholiday
MP3 isnt in the latest submission.

you need to do a full resubmit.
v2b
504 posts
Joined October 2008
v2b
A_A

Download: Liverne - Otenba Koi Musume (ignorethis) [Marathon].osu
niedz
719 posts
Joined May 2008
niedz
A_A
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
nice work.

star for you.
Jeffro
680 posts
Joined October 2008
Jeffro
00:10:50 (1,2) - I don't this big slider overlap.
00:33:65 (2,3) - Transition between these 2 notes seem weird.
01:27:22 (1,2,3) - Soft whistle doesn't fit in here imo.
02:14:58 (7) - Make this slider a little longer ^^
03:22:72 (1,2) - These claps sound awkward in some way.
03:53:58 (3) - A note here could sound good? :)
04:02:58 (1,2,3,4) - I can't hear them hitsounds ;o Many people really dislike that and could throw them off. (And that happening in a marathon isn't a good idea XD)
04:15:65 (11,12) - ^
04:30:22 (3) - Remove whistle.
05:19:93 (3) - Don't like the claps on this slider in comparising to the song.
06:03:86 (2,3,4,5) - I feel like there's something missing here. Maybe a note or different hitsound on 4.
06:18:22 (3,4,5) - This sounds too good here imo. It sounds like spam in a silent part of the song.


Beautifull map. Starred!
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
some hitsounds on my part

05:15:65 (1) - Clap on end of the slider
05:17:36 (1) - add whistle on repeat
05:17:36 (1) - Clap on end of the slider
05:19:93 (3) - Clap on repeat & end of slider
05:20:79 (1) - On the start of this slider, change the clap to finish
05:20:79 (1) - Clap on end, remove whistle
05:22:08 (5) - clap here
05:23:79 (3) - ^
05:25:50 (9) - Clap on start of this slider
05:25:93 (1) - remove clap
05:36:86 (4) - remove clap on end
05:37:50 (5) - add clap
05:45:54 (6) - remove this note
05:46:29 (8) - 1/4 later
05:46:40 (9) - remove this note
06:04:08 (4) - remove finish
06:06:22 (2) - finish on start, remove whistle
06:07:08 (4) - remove finish
lukewarmholiday
2,148 posts
Joined June 2008
lukewarmholiday
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
SB Making >w< please wait
ignorethis
osu! Alumni
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Topic Starter
ignorethis

lukewarmholiday wrote:

(¯◡◡¯·)b

Mind if I make an altered+extended version of my maps difficulty? :V
ok please~
Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
SB Finished
I have send files to ignorethis
please waiting for his uploading.
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
Yay FC ^^

star this map
Dangaard
osu! Alumni
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Dangaard
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
DaRRi
267 posts
Joined January 2009
DaRRi
00:34:18 (3) - not cool, 1/4 forward

01:45:97 (1) - place somewhere else
01:51:22 (9) - new combo
01:59:79 (1,2) - beautify them

03:12:75 (5) - remove

03:24:86 (6,7) - make a long slider
03:27:00 (2) - why jump here?
03:31:72 (7,8) - change to slider - note
03:52:72 (1) - ugly
03:52:72 (1,1) - why jump
03:53:36 (1,2,3,4) - bad readability
04:02:36 (13,1) - why jump

06:19:08 (5) - 1/4 longer
Cyclone
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Cyclone
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
ignorethis
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Topic Starter
ignorethis

Cyclone wrote:

Song title is Beloved Tomboyish Girl (i don't care what it is in Japanese, we already have a ranked version of this song, let's keep it consistant please)

You might have known that changing names after uploading is very hard, and I don't see why should I use a English name for consistant. So unless another person asks me about the same problem, let's keep this name.

and the source makes no sense whatsoever. What the hell is Cradle? The source is supposed to say what anime/game/etc. the song has come from. If you were going for the album name, that would also be incorrect in this case(you have the correct name in the damn SB anyways)


ok fixed.
azuki
351 posts
Joined January 2009
azuki
cool song.
suggestion only one thing.

06:30:866 (1) - why new combo? when i played, i was confused very much.
maybe new combo is 06:31:295 better.

awesome map.star!
Alace
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2008
Alace
cool job
the only thing bugging me is the clap sound
softclap doesn`t fit the song IMO
v2b`s part sounds the best
but it is too evil to ask you guys add many green lines

i think 4 solutions
A:use normalhit to replace soft clap
B:find another clap sound sample
C:get rid of claps use more softwhistles or finishs
D:ignore my post lol
I will do B for you guys

CJ`s part:i think clap is ok maybe lower the volume a bit
Lizbeth`s:plz don`t use claps in this part (too loud) you can also try to reduce the volume of soft-finish
V2b`s: perfect
animask:you oveused claps (even you lower the volume)
IGN`s:i like the part without softclap anyway your pattens sound very good
Happy30`s::pattens are good
Lissette:sounds good

Spacing is just fine
this map is totally playable

Forgve my lazy+nazi
Cyclone
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Cyclone
Changing the name of the song is simple. Simply go to the song info, change it, then full upload. That's it.
Lissette
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Lissette
Is looking good, nice SB :)
DaRRi
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Joined January 2009
DaRRi
03:31:72 (7,8) - change to slider - note
not changing this? i think will make more sense
ignorethis
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ignorethis

Cyclone wrote:

Changing the name of the song is simple. Simply go to the song info, change it, then full upload. That's it.
I've got bad internet connection and full uploading is of great trouble. That's a good reason.
lukewarmholiday
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lukewarmholiday
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Cyclone
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Cyclone

ignorethis wrote:

Cyclone wrote:

Changing the name of the song is simple. Simply go to the song info, change it, then full upload. That's it.
I've got bad internet connection and full uploading is of great trouble. That's a good reason.
No, that's a really bad reason. By that logic, you should never be uploading anything. Ever. Try again.
ignorethis
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ignorethis
ok cyclone you win i will change the name someday

btw it will be some time before i get my hand on this map again. school began. sorry guys.
Sure
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Joined February 2009
Sure
I can't DL this map.
please upload again.
Gabi
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Joined December 2008
Gabi
fun :D
dkey
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Joined June 2009
dkey
nice map =w=
Sleep Powder
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Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
Add everyone who mapped a part of the marathon in the tags.
Its important~
Also add lead in time
ACC
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Joined March 2009
ACC
无条件应援⑨
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
nice work with SB Crazy Jay :)
Dangaard
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Dangaard
I already starred, but I want to thank you guys that this didn't turn out insane or unplayabe (which seems to be a problem on several collab maps :roll: ).
Maybe I should not have refused to join...
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
Awesome collab!
I feel bad for Dangaard though :P
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder

animask wrote:

Add everyone who mapped a part of the marathon in the tags.
Its important~
Also add lead in time
In simpler terms...add all names of the people who were part of the making of the marathon beatmap.
AngelHoney
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Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
Ah ! Liverne ~~~ collab map ☆

nice map and good song >v<

I'm really like this map ~
tsuka
1,499 posts
Joined May 2009
tsuka
awesome map :D
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Yes_old
00:39:033 (9) - i think it sounds better without the whistle on the slider
00:41:015 (3) - clap?
01:05:036 (5) - move to 01:05:015?
03:33:000 (1) - lower volume for this part?
04:30:022 (3) - one tick down
06:19:093 (3) - left one tick
06:21:043 (3) - ^
06:24:000 (3) - right one tick

for source, it wouldn't be Touhou because this isnt the original song from the game.
add touhou to tages instead. and maybe cirno. Dx

this is an awesome map!!!
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Yuji Tokaji
Hi =D

[Marathon]

01:19:722(5):Unsnapped
03:43:722(2):Unsnapped

Star~
taNa
312 posts
Joined January 2009
taNa
awesome
yaya
osu! Alumni
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yaya
poooo
00:37:724 (1,2) - a bit hard to read . 拉出来好一些
01:18:652 (8,9) - too close
set a preview point .

其他没什么。nice
EDIT:bubble No.1
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
Ummm shouldn't this be moved to Pendling :?
MegaManEXE
710 posts
Here since the beginning
MegaManEXE
Love this song :]
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Overall]

Why there are 3 .osb files on the folder? Delete the 2 wrong .osb and full submit.

[Difficulties]

[Marathon]

00:26:045 (x) - Unuseful break. Remove.
01:26:259 (x) - ^
03:29:581 (1) - Remove new combo.
06:19:723 (1,2,3) - This little stream spacing is a bit weird to look on play mode, adjust it please.
06:21:223 (1,2,3) - ^
06:23:795 (1,2,3) - ^
06:30:652 (4,5,1) - ^
06:34:295 (1,2,3) - ^

Fix and i'll bubble again. Very nice.

EDIT: Much better now. Let's try with this map again. Bubble #1
JamesLeao
366 posts
Joined October 2008
JamesLeao
it's the best cirno's theme song <3
Glass
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Joined January 2010
Glass
Well that was pretty fun to play despite how bad I am with stacks, plus it's my favorite touhou theme, also good job on the storyboard.

Very promising, here's a star.
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