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rust45
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Ryuukun
looks good so far.
Some timing issues but not so big problems.
I fixed them for you.

fixed some hard to time sections on the song
fixed the offset
fixed the bpm (no decimals ;) )

00:29:66 (1,2,3,4) - spacing problems.
00:23:59 (7,8) - i'd put stack those two with 00:23:42 (6)


and you will need more difficultys.

Starr'd anyway

Download: Richard Stone - Animaniacs Intro (rust45) [Hard].osu
blissfulyoshi
BPM: 177
Offset: 2239

Try to up the volume of the song itself, it is very low in my opinion

Hard:
00:03:79 (2) - stack under the green 1 (looks better that way)
00:14:38 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this stack is boring
00:19:75 (1) - align with green 9
00:24:09 (2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read
00:38:30 (6) - I don't like how you see the repeat sign last second because of the 300s

I don't like your huge amount of stacks, but this is your map.

Star.
Starrodkirby86
One thing I highly recommend...Up the hitsound volume a bit...perhaps by 1 to 2 ticks.

Download: Richard Stone - Animaniacs Intro (rust45) [Kirby's Normal].osu

And here you go~
tieff
Nice map.

[Kirby's Normal]
00:15:44 (5,1) - Spacing?
00:42:84 (3) - Hitsound.
00:44:23 (3) - ^

[Hard]
00:14:40 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Confusing, imo.
00:23:94 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:29:92 (2,3) - Replace with slider.
00:30:44 (4) - Delete.
01:02:52 (1,2,3) - Spacing?
01:03:65 (1) - Note shoud be here 01:03:74. I think.

[Insane]
00:30:35 (4,5) - Delete.
01:03:65 (1) - See normal.

Star.
Topic Starter
rust45

tieff wrote:

Nice map.

[Kirby's Normal]
00:15:44 (5,1) - Spacing?
00:42:84 (3) - Hitsound.
00:44:23 (3) - ^

[Hard]
00:14:40 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Confusing, imo.
00:23:94 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:29:92 (2,3) - Replace with slider.
00:30:44 (4) - Delete.
01:02:52 (1,2,3) - Spacing?
01:03:65 (1) - Note shoud be here 01:03:74. I think.

[Insane]
00:30:35 (4,5) - Delete.
01:03:65 (1) - See normal.

Star.
The Kirby spacing problem will have to be fixed by Kirby himself because I don't know how to change it without messing up his design. I'll tell him.

I'll get to the rest and fix.
Starrodkirby86
I'm believing that should be all right since there's a New combo right there. If you can't notice the ring gap, then uh oh. :P
It's not like many beginners totally follow a Distance Snap set method, that's a more skilled thing to do.
Topic Starter
rust45

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

I'm believing that should be all right since there's a New combo right there. If you can't notice the ring gap, then uh oh. :P
It's not like many beginners totally follow a Distance Snap set method, that's a more skilled thing to do.
Well that is pretty good logic. Alright, I guess we can keep it like that the way it is for now.
Symbolic
[Kirby's Normal]

00:02:26 (1,2,3) - Isn't spaced right.
00:05:04 (1,2,3) - ^
00:07:81 (5,6) - Move these 2 notes down 1 level 3 grid.
00:08:85 (1,2) - Isn't spaced right.
00:10:24 (1,2,3) - ^
00:17:18 (1) Stack this on the slider-end of (5) or it isn't spaced right.
00:19:95 (1,2,3) - Not spaced right.
00:22:72 (1) - ^
00:27:93 (1) - ^
00:32:44 (1) - ^
00:39:37 (1) - ^
00:50:12 (1) - Little jump on purpose or accidental? If it's accidental re-space it.


[Hard]

00:23:94 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is messed up, you might change it.
00:38:33 (6) - Invisible slider. Change it.
00:42:84 (4) - ^
00:58:79 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is quite confusing. You could change it if you feel like it :p.


[Insane]

00:05:73 (1) - Not spaced right.
00:36:42 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - So.. Con...fu.. sing... Change it.
00:39:89 (4) - Invisible slider. Change it.


Awesome song and map! Except for Insane, I didn't really like the small circles and big spacing :oops:

Here's your star *
blissfulyoshi
Felt like nazing. (remember these are only suggestions)

Normal:
nothing

Hard:
00:18:04 (5) - align the end better with the next note
00:36:42 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move 1 grid down(3) to center this on the origin

Insane:
00:02:96 (3) - make a vertical reflection of 1
00:06:77 (4) - stack better on the end of 3
00:10:41 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2?
00:21:34 (4) - the repeat sign is invisible until the last few moments, please change this
00:22:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make a straight line?
00:37:12 (5) - make the same distance from 4 that 2 is
00:39:89 (4) - invisible repeat and align better with the end of 2
00:42:84 (5) - make this slider have a slope the same as the 1,2,3 line
00:46:48 (2) - make similar to 1
00:54:63 (3) - maybe a new combo to make it more readable
Starrodkirby86
Symbolic, I assume you use Level 3 Grid or something. The map used Distance Snap to a nice degree, but on Level 1. It would actually work on those levels, believe me. :P

I did some fixes.

Download: Richard Stone - Animaniacs Intro (rust45) [Kirby's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
rust45
I finally added your fixed diff, I would've done it sooner but I've been sick. But at least I'm starting to feel better.
0_o
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cyanberryio
[Kirby's Normal]
Can't find anything much...

Hard
00:29:92 (2,3) - These feel off. Like 3 should be pushed 1/4 back. It's actually like that in Insane.
00:30:359 - Feels like something should belong here.

Insane
00:27:064 - So empty here. :\ Add something here maybe? And other blank spots like this? More continuous=more fun IMO.
00:37:98 (4,5,6,7,8) - This got me the first time around. :( But it's Insane.

StarForU
Topic Starter
rust45

0_o wrote:

Kirby
~

Hard
00:42:67 (3,4) - The overlap here is a little messy/confusing Not sure if it's better but I changed it
00:58:79 (1,2,3,4,5) - erg I realllly don't like these patterns, they don't flow well and they're just plain mean :P You could probably just add a beat in the blank spot to make it 6 straight notes Stacked 5 under 4, the six notes didn't sound right to me

Insane
00:15:44 (1,2,3,4) - 0_o. Really confusing If someone else complains I'll do something about it
00:54:98 (3) - The repeat is covered by a previous hitburst Fixed
00:58:79 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as Hard Kept the same, after all, it is insane

Also keep in mind you don't have to map strictly to the lyrics, there are lots of places where you can add beats to go with the music. After all it's called a beatmap, not a lyricmap ;) I kinda disagree with you here, most of the time when listening to a song with words, you note out the lyrics, so, it makes sense to me to mostly follow the lyrics.

not bad though, *

Alex0686 wrote:

[Kirby's Normal]
Can't find anything much...

Hard
00:29:92 (2,3) - These feel off. Like 3 should be pushed 1/4 back. It's actually like that in Insane. Fixed
00:30:359 - Feels like something should belong here. Added a note

Insane
00:27:064 - So empty here. :\ Add something here maybe? And other blank spots like this? More continuous=more fun IMO. Added notes in a bunch of blank areas, but beware, your suggestion was the spawn of 1/4 streams
00:37:98 (4,5,6,7,8) - This got me the first time around. :( But it's Insane. No change, due to what you said at the end

StarForU
arien666
I liked this show lol
But it's history :(
I wanna see this show again!!!!! Ahh!!!!
[Seems crazy lol]

Anyway...
Note seems good...
Listen other's suggestions and this map will be better :)

Star >▽<
The 8th star!(Except bubble)
Pasonia
19:03 <Pasonia> : rust45: 00:29:66 (1,2,3,4) @ Hard
19:04 <Pasonia> : these 4 have equal spacing on map, but nonequal spacing on timeline

19:04 <Pasonia> : correct this because this is considered an in-combo jump
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19:05 <Pasonia> : 00:29:66 (1,2,3) @ Insane
19:05 <Pasonia> : inconsistent with Hard, inconsistent spacing
19:05 <Pasonia> : correct this
19:05 <Pasonia> : I suggest the 3 1/3 or non-1/4 notes be corrected
19:06 <Pasonia> : or as a new combo

19:07 <Pasonia> : 00:54:55 (2,1) - this is weird
19:07 <Pasonia> : I can't tell if it's 1/4 or faster
19:07 <Pasonia> : get a second opinion on this
Xgor
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Yuukari-Banteki
[Kirby]
00:09:55 (2) - try a clap instead
00:10:59 (2,3) - remove clap from 2 and whistle from 3
00:15:44 (5) - overusing hitsounds
00:18:56 (5) - ^
as a general rule its about as common to require a 1/8 tick in a 1/4 snapped song as it is to have two hitsounds on the same note sound good ^_^
00:29:66 (1) - whistle?
00:52:20 (7) - remove whistle


[Hard]
00:29:66 (1) - move out from under 5
00:58:79 (1) - try putting these in the soft sampleset


[Insane]
00:13:36 (1) - claps in here somewhere
00:27:23 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:29:92 (2,3) - do me a favor and dont map the first two notes of a triplet and not the third like that? its major wtf
00:35:56 (1) - do something with this (ask me if you want my suggestion)
00:51:51 (6) - center between 4,5
00:52:12 (1,2,3,4) - move 1/4 earlier or later
00:54:98 (3) - clap the white ticks
00:58:79 (1) - try soft sampleset
Topic Starter
rust45
Alright, fixed the stuff. And Xgor, your video was really fuzzy, so I didn't use it.
Yuukari-Banteki
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vytalibus
Popping bubble.

[Hard]
00:29:66 (1,2,3,4) - This and the same timing and notes on [Insane] follow different beats. Personally, I find the one here much more convincing.
00:49:08 (4) - Random jump... ?

EDIT: Rebubbled.
RemmyX25
Kirby's Normal-
00:15:44 (5,1) - The distance feels a tad weird here. Too close, imo.

Hard:
00:29:66 (1,2,3,4) - Played this, it feels wierd tbh. You can barely what beat these are to be hit on, and the only judge is the approach circle.


Well, it's kinda alright after a few plays. Same for Insane. You can keep it if you want, just saying it felt weird.
Starrodkirby86
:P

(Post was used here to repair bubble)

Download: Richard Stone - Animaniacs Intro (rust45) [Kirby's Normal].osu
RemmyX25
We're Animanie-, totally insany, have a bubble-any, ANIMANIACS! Those are the facts!
Topic Starter
rust45
For some reason it didn't upload Kirby's updated diff the first time so it needs to be rebubbled now.
Larto
Insaney:
Turn the Overall difficulty up by one tick, it plays better that way. The HP Drain is a bit low too, but you don't need to change that.
00:07:81 (1) - 1 Level 3 grid to the right? Nothing big, just telling you.


Hard:
Hmm, isn't the HPDrain a bit low for a Hard? You don't need to change that if you don't wanna

Normal:
00:58:79 (1,2,3) - Is there a reason those three notes are not in soft sample? They are in the other difficulties.

That's all

EDIT: Rebubbled.
foulcoon
You know theres honestly nothing wrong with the mapping, but I did get a B like every playthrough of hard and insane. The offset off, or I'm really tired tonight. I think it needs an offset of around 2,279

I won't pop the bubble, but the next mod should be aware of the timing issue before ranking/popping or whatever. Have a star.
LuigiHann
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foulcoon
Song is a mess and its really obvious if you slow it down. I really wasn't thinking straight when I gave that last offset. Heres a better one that's actually on the right beat (shame on you mods who bubbled it with the other offset ;( )

Offset: 1,963

This offset kind of balances the vocals and the back beat and allows some room for error. You could probably make up for the bad timing by lowering the overall difficulty a bit, but there's really no easy solution to the timing problem this map has.
awp

foulcoon wrote:

I think it needs an offset of around 2,279
I got 2281. So lol.

I didn't check the rest of all of the maps yet but based on the rest of the feedback in the thread it's good. Kirby's normal felt like a very appropriate map for the song.
alan_629_6
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mrtn
[kirby's normal]
fine to me

[hard]
no probs here

[insaney]
fine to me

bubbled
RemmyX25
I'll leave the bubble, but im still a tad shaky about the offset.
kingcobra52
I got 2,271 for the offset. Use whichever one feels best to you tho. The vocals are inconsistent so it probably won't be possible to get it exact with 1 bpm.

How come there's no vid of the intro with the map? :\

Hard

00:30:10 (3) - (Optional) I know it goes with the music, but tbh, I was expecting this 1/4 later. You don't have to change it, just pointing it out.

*star*
Topic Starter
rust45

kingcobra52 wrote:

How come there's no vid of the intro with the map? :\
Because I couldn't find one and the only one offered to me of decent quality was 20 megabytes.

Also, sorry it took so long for me to respond, I was on vacation when you modded it.
kingcobra52
Alright. *rebubbles*
deepsea
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